Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Update - 3 ~ A Full Fledged Plan​

Ab tak...

Brijesh (zorr se) : Ab khade khade intezaar kya kar rahe ho? Aage badho aur apne Dada jii ko tohfa do.

Manorath : Aao Veer!

Aur apne Dada jii ki sahuliyat se Veer aage badhte hue apne Dada jii ko gift dene jaane laga.

Ab aage...

Veer ke Dada jii, Manorath uss par kayi hadd tak bharosa karte the. Kyuki jitni bhi shikaayat wo sunte aa rahe the, unhone aaj tak Veer ko kabhi apni aankho se koi galat kaam karte nahi dekha tha. Aur aaj ye pehli baar nahi tha jab Pranjal ke muh se unhone Veer ki ghatna ke baare me suna tha.

Ye toh saalo se chala aa raha tha. Koi na koi aake Manorath ke saamne Veer ke karmo ki shikaayat karta tha aur Veer keval sar jhukae khada rehta tha. Veer virodh kiya karta tha par uske paas apni baat ko sahi saabit karne ka koi proof nahi rehta tha. Aur isliye ab usne virodh karna bhi chorr diya tha.

Aaj bhi kuch aisa hi tha. Veer ke paas koi saboot nahi tha apni begunaahi saabit karne ka. Aur kya kehta woh? Kon uski baato ka yakeen karta?

Pichle kayi saalo se jo image uski ghar me bani hui thi, uske chalte toh koi uss par reham bhi nahi khaata tha.

Jab Veer apne haatho me wo flower vase lete hue aage badha tabhi achaanak se pata nahi kya hua uska perr fisla aur wo buri tarah saamne ki orr jaa gira.

*Crash*

Flower vase uske haatho se chhuth kar gol ghumte hue ek tezz shor karte hue neeche jaa gira aur ek hi jhatke me wo sundar sa vase dherr saare tukdo me bikhar gaya.

"Aaaaaaaaaaa," Waha baithi mahilae aur ladkiyo ke muh se kuch aisi hi hairaani bhari awaaz nikli.

Aur fir ek shaanti sii chhaa gayi.

Sab ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Sabhi Veer ko aise dekh rahe the jese maano usne kisi ka khoon kar diya ho.

Dekhe bhi kyu na, akhir wo flower vase itna keemti jo tha. Manorath ko shuru se hi paudhe aur flower vases ka boht shauk tha, yahi kaaran tha ki unke ghar me ek alag se garden bhi tha.

Iss waqt Veer ki haalat kharab thi. Usne khud apne Dada jii ke liye ek flower vase chunn ke rakha hua tha jisse wo baad me unhe dene waala tha. Iss vase ke saamne uska vase toh kuch bhi nahi tha. Par ab kya? Ab toh wo vase uske haatho toot chuka tha.

Bas! Brijesh jo apna gussa pehle hi badi mushqil se control kiye hue tha wo uth khada hua aur chillaaya.

Brijesh : Haram khor! Tujhe pata hai wo tohfa kitna mehnga tha?

Apne Dad ki garajti awaaz sunn ek baar fir wo sihar utha. Brijesh usse aag babula hoke khaa jaane wali nazro se ghur raha tha.

Manorath : Brijeesshhhh!!!

Brijesh : Papa jii... Aap... Aap jaante hai ye tohfa kitne ka tha? Ye flower vase 3 lakh ka tha. Mene khud import karwaya tha China se isse aapke liye... Aur iss bewakoof ne...

Vase ki keemat sunte hi waha khade logo ko jese ek bada jhatka laga. 3 lakh unn sabke saamne yu barbaad hoke bikhar ke jo pade hue the.

Sabse zyaada haalat toh Veer ki kharaab thi. Uski samajh nahi aa raha tha wo kare kya.

Brijesh se ab raha na gaya, wo wese hi kayi saalo se Veer se pareshaan tha. Veer uski harr umeedo par paani ferr deta tha.

Veer ki taraf tezz kadmo ke saath jaate hue wo usse ek zorrdaar thappad maarne hi wala tha ki...

Manorath : Brijeessshhh!!

Brijesh : Par Papa jii...

Manorath : Aaj mera janmdin hai. Aur mere janmdin ke din tum aisa suluk karoge toh matlab hi kya. Jo hua usse ek galti maan ke aage badho. Vase kitna hi mehnga kyu na ho, wo toh ab toot chuka hai. Ab uske peeche rone ka koi fayda nahi. Rahi baat paiso ki toh iske paise mein de dunga.

Brijesh : Ye aap kesi baatein kar rahe ho Papa jii? Aapka janmdin hai. Mein bhala aap se paise kyu lunga?

Manorath ki baat sunn Brijesh ne apne haath rok liye par uska gussa abhi tak kam nahi hua tha.

Pranjal : Dada jii, mene Veer se kaha tha baahar hi ki apne shoes utaar de kyuki baarish se geele ho chuke hai. Par Veer ne meri suni hi nahi. Bola ki maids toh ghar me lagi hi hai, wo kis kaam aaengi?

Aur uski baat sunn sabhi ki nazre Veer ke perro par gayi jo geele jute pehna hua tha aur farsh ko ganda kar raha tha.

Aur ye dekh Brijesh aur krodhit ho gaya. Tabhi Veer ki stepmom Shweta uth khadi huyi.

Shweta : Veer din ba din laaparwaah hota jaa raha hai.

Pranjal : Veer! Apne jute utaaro, idhar aao ye sleepers pehn lo aur ab galti ho gayi toh ho gayi. Ye dekho bhagwaan ka prasaad rakha hua hai. Dada jii ko ye prasaad do aur unse maafi maang lo.

Pranjal usse haath pakad ke uske jute utarwaata hai aur usse wahi Dada jii ke paas rakhi ek sleepers ko pehna deta hai. Pranjal ne wahi table pe rakhe hue dahi shakkar jo ki bhagwaan ko chadhaaya gaya tha usse katori me laake Veer ko thama diya.

Pranjal : Jao Veer! Dada jii ko prasaad do aur maafi maango.

Veer bechaara itna seham gaya tha aaj ki ghatnao se. Aaj uski zindagi ka sabse manhoos aur bura din tha.

Veer ne prasaad ki katori haath me thaami aur wo aage badha hi tha ki firse uska perr na jaane kese fisla aur prasaad ki katori uske haath se chhatak kar seedhe uske Dada jii ki orr jaa giri.

Aur saara ka saara prasaad uske Dada jii ke kapdo par jaa gira.

Bas! Brijesh ka jo gussa abhi apni limit par tha, wo cross ho gaya. Wo aage badha aur...

*Chataak* *Chataak* *Chataak*

Thappado ki jhadi laga dii aur Veer ke gaalo par raseed raseed ke maarte gaya.

Thappado ki goonj se Kavya sehamte hue sab kuch dekh rahi thi. Usse waqai Veer pe taras aa raha tha. Arohi bhi bauhe sikodti hui saamne ho rahe drashya ko dekh rahi thi.

Wahi Pranjal aur Vivek khushi se fule nahi sama rahe the.

Vivek (khuspusaate hue) : Yahi hai wo grand show... Haha!

Ragini : Ohhh! Toh tum iski baat kar rahe the. Par... Par ye kuch zyaada nahi ho gaya?

Vivek : Hmph! Zyaada kaha ye toh abhi bhi kam hai.

Ragini : Aur ye idea kis ka tha?

Vivek (smiles) : Chote ka...

Ragini (hairaani me) : Pranjal ka??? Devar jii kuch zyaada hi chatur ho rahe hai aaj kal...

Idhar thappado se Veer ke gaal laal ho chale the.

Brijesh (gusse me) : Tu jaanta hai aaj tune kya kiya hai? Haram khor!!! Wo prasaad hamaare kul ki devi ka tha. Aur tune usse zameen pe gira diya? Aur wo bhi Papa jii ke upar? Naye kapde bhi kharaab kar diye tune unke... 3 lakh ke tohfe ka chuna laga diya... Roz roz tere haath se kuch na kuch gadbad hoti hi hai. Beta nahi panauti hai tu... Mein kehta hu nikal jaa... Nikal jaa issi waqt ghar se... Aur ahinda se iss ghar me qadam bhi mat rakhna...

Aur Brijesh usko haatho se pakad ke ghaseet ke baahar le gaya aur zorr se dhakka dete hue usse darwaaze ke baahar fek diya.

Ghar me maujood sabhi log darwaaze ki orr tezz kadmo ke saath aae siwae Manorath ke...

Aaj tak Devi ke prasaad ka aisa apmaan unke kul me kisi ne bhi nahi kiya tha. Manorath khud abhi iss waqt atyant dukh aur gusse me tha. Issi kaaran usne Brijesh ko bhi iss baar nahi toka.

Aur wo wahi baitha hua chup chaap apne hi mann me Devi se shama maangne laga.

Brijesh : Nikal jaa! Nikal jaa iss ghar se... Aaj se tera aur mera koi sambandh nahi. Marr gaya aaj se tu mere liye... Mera koi beta nahi hai. Khabardaar yadi tune iss ghar me dubaara kadam bhi rakha toh...

Veer kaapte hue sab kuch apni aankho se dekh raha tha, ye pal bhar me kya se kya ho gaya. Aaj kyu uske saath ye sab hua?

Veer ki sauteli Maa, Shweta saamne ke nazaare ko badi hi khushi se dekh rahi thi. Uski mann ki muraad poori jo ho gayi thi. Ab uski beti hi jaydaad ki maalkin banegi. Yahi sochte hue wo apni beti ki orr mudi toh dekha ki uski beti, Bhumika ke chehre par koi expression nahi the. Aur ye jaan kar Shweta ko khushi hui. Ki uski beti ke mann me bhi Veer ke prati koi bhaav nahi hai.

Veer ke aasu uski aankho se lagataar bahe jaa rahe the. Par wo kuch nahi bola.

Wo chup chaap utha aur baahar ki orr chal diya. Usne apne jeb me se gaadi ki chaavi nikaali aur wo gaadi on karne hi waala tha ki peeche se Brijesh ki awaaz aayi.

Brijesh : Ye gaadi teri nahi hai...

Aur Veer chaavi ko gaadi me lage hi chorr kar ghar se baahar nikal aaya.

Usne ek jhalak peeche mud ke dekha. Shweta aur Bhumika usse bina koi bhaav ke dekh rahi thi. Brijesh ki aankho me bhayaanak gussa nazar aa raha tha. Wahi uske Karunesh chacha bhi usse bina koi bhaav ke dekh rahe the.

Uski Sumitra chachi thoda chintit zaroor prateet ho rahi thi.

Vivek aur Pranjal ke chehro par halki khushi nazar aa rahi thi. Ragini aur Arohi bauhe sikode jese kisi soch me doobi hui thi. Jab uski nazar Kavya par gayi toh Kavya ne sehamte hue sar jhuka liya.

Bas! Uske baad Veer palat ke ghar se dur jaane laga. Ghar ke security guards bhi Veer ko jaata hua dekh rahe the.

Achanak baadal garje aur baarish firse shuru ho gayi.

Par Veer na ruka. Aur kuch hi palo me wo apne gharwaalo ki nazro se ojhal ho chuka tha.

Iss waqt Veer ko baarish acchi lag rahi thi. Usse apni lag rahi thi. Jab Ajay se maar khaate waqt wo ghar laut raha tha tab bhi baarish ne uska saath diya tha. Aur abhi jaha uske ghar waalo ne usse ghar se nikaal ke usse akela chhorr diya tab bhi baarish uska saath de rahi thi.

Uske saath saath mausam bhi yu ro raha tha. Veer bina koi awaaz kiye rote rote bas chalta jaa raha tha.

Usne apne seene par latka pendant apne haatho me thaam liya. Ek bada hi pyaara sa pendant tha, ekdum alag type ka.

Usse bheenchte hue Veer ke aasu aur tezzi se behne lage. Ye woh pendant tha jo uski asli Maa ne usse pehnaaya tha.

Veer ko apni asli Maa ke baare me kuch bhi nahi pata tha. Bas itna pata tha ki uss Maa ne usse janm diya hai. Jab bhi wo Brijesh se apni Maa ke baare me puchta tha toh Brijesh bas ek hi baat bolta~ "Naam mat lo uss kameeni aurat ka..."

Uski Maa ka naam tha Bhawana. Veer ke janm ke ek saal baad hi dono ke beech talaak ho gaya aur Bhawana ghar se chali gayi thi.

Kaha gayi woh, kis haal me hogi abhi, zinda bhi hai ya nahi uski Maa usse kuch nahi pata tha. Yaha tak ki uski Maa ka naam bhi uske Dada jii ne usse bataya tha. Na hi uss aurat ko lekar ghar me charcha hoti thi na hi koi uske baare me koi topic chedhta tha.

Veer ko toh ye bhi nahi pata tha ki uski Maa kesi dikhti thi. Koi bhi photo album nahi tha, uski Maa se judi koi bhi cheez nahi thi ghar me.

Baarish ke kaaran sadko par abhi gaadiya bhi kam chalti hui nazar aa rahi thi. Usse nahi pata tha wo kaha jaa raha hai. Jab tak uske perr chal rahe the wo bas chalta jaa raha tha. Usse apni sagi Maa ki yaad aane lagi. Yadi wo yaha hoti abhi toh uski Maa uske saath kesa vyavhaar karti? Kya usse pyaar deti? Ya fir Brijesh ki hi tarah wo bhi...!?

Paani se bheega hua Veer main road par aa chuka tha, abhi wo mudne hi waala tha ki ekdum se ek car mod se aayi aur Veer ne palat ke car ko dekha.

Par tab tak boht derr ho chuki thi.

Car ka agla hissa uski pasli se takraaya aur thokar hote hi wo zorr se jaate hue dur gir pada.

"Ohhhh! Noooo...." Car me baithe ek aadmi ke muh se nikla.

Car ko jhatka lagte hi peeche baithi ek ladki forun hi aage ki seat se jaa bhidi, "Aaaahhhh!"

Aadmi : Madam aap theek toh hai na?

Ladki (sar malte hue) : Haa! Mein... Mein thik hu.

Fir jese hi uss ladki ne saamne dekha toh uski maano saasein hi atak gayi. Saamne ek ladka zameen par dala hua tha aur usse samajhne me derr na lagi ki abhi abhi uski car kis se takraayi thi.

Wo ladka waha baarish me car se bhid ke pada bheeg raha tha.

Ladki (ghabraate hue) : Ye... Ye....

Aadmi : Inn sab ka samay nahi hai Madam. Hume jald hi nikalna hoga.

Aur itna bol wo aadmi forun hi gaadi aage badhaane lagta hai.

Ladki (chillaate hue) : Ye kya bol rahe ho aap? Nahi... Hum aise usse chorr kar nahi jaa sakte...

Aadmi : Madam! Baat ko samajhiye... Iss waqt humaara yaha se nikalna boht zaroori hai.

Aur usne car ke accelerator par perr rakh car aage badha dii.

Ladki peeche mud window se uss ladke ko dekh rahi thi, uska nichla honth daato tale zorr se daba hua tha ki maano khoon hi nikal aae. Aankho me halke aasu bhi aa chuke the.

"I'm sorry..." Usne mann me kaha.

Aur wo car palak jhapakte hi logo ki nazro se ojhal ho gayi.

Idhar accident dekh aas paas ke jo bhi log dukaan ke neeche baarish se bachne ke liye khade hue the wo daudte hue aae aur Veer ko uthaane lage.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
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Awesome story nice update

 

[Noori]

Wesy aik BAAT pochni thi jab veer kavya aur arohi ko bacha raha tha tab golu NY help ki bad me pichey se phir attack hua TB wo defend nahi Ker Saka apny ap ko Lekin us waqt tk veer NY martial arts skills bhi purchase Ker li thi na aur active thi?
Ya us ko upgrade kerna baqi tha?

 

[BIZMAN]

waiting for hot session by suman to her MAALiK in this situation of sadness and revenge

 

[kingkhankar]

Date kesa gaya hoga se kya matlab?
Date went perfect!

Sun ke accha laga... Isliye itna perfect update diya.

 

[FallenAngel]

Veer ab wo Veer nahi rahega...
This is the point where he will show his badassery. He will be rash too, sometimes too aggressive and in a bit emotionally unstable mode too. People close to him will heal him and gradually he will be a combo of both badass and emotionally strong.

Waiting for your next update bro

 

[Silent lover]

Update - 36 ~ Despair and Love

[This update contains some gore scenes. Beware!]​

Ab tak...

Ladkhadaate hue Veer bina kuch kahe aage badha aur button dabaayi toh darwaaza khul gaya.

Par...

Andar aate hi usse ek behad hi bhaiyankar darr ki anubhooti hui. Jese maano uski maut aane waali ho. Usse nahi pata tha ki agla padaav uske liye kya kuch laane waala tha. Kya wo waqai Golu ko bacha paega!?

Ab aage...

"Haaah haaah haaaahhhhh..."

[Master! Calm down! Saas araam araam se lijiye. Aap jitna zorr zorr se saas lenge, utna hi panic karenge aur fir behosh ho sakte ho aap.]

Lift se nikalne ke baad Veer ki haalat sahi toh kahi se bhi nahi thi. Fluothane ka concentration bhale hi kam tha. Par shareer ke andar jaate hi uske kuch na kuch side effects toh hone hi the.

Pari ki baat maan jab usne apni aniyantrit saaso ko control kiya toh kuch pal baad usse thoda sahi mehsoos hua.

Wo already ek naye kamre me aa chuka tha. Ye kamra andar se harr jagah safed rang se puta hua tha. Kamra kehna galat hoga. Balki ek behad bada hall type ka tha. Par...

Par ek hi baat thi jo boht hi zyaada ajeeb sii lag rahi thi iss waqt. Yaha tak ki Veer khud confusion me khada hua tha.

Wo ye ki...

Upar ceiling se dherr saari rassiyaa latak rahi thi. Matlab itni zyaada tadaad thi unki ki aisa lag raha tha maano rassiya nahi balki jangal me ped se latak rahi bel ho.

Aur harr ek rassi, dusri rassi se baraabar ke gap me lagi hui thi. Saath hi saath upar ceiling me chaukor khand bane hue the jinke beecho beech ek ek rassiya lagi hui thi.

'Ye sab... kya hai!?'

[Dusri paheli master! Shayad inni rassiyo se aapko kuch karna hai!?]

Aur Pari ke bol jese sahi saabit ho gaye.

Kyuki uske baad hi Aatish ki awaaz intercom se ek baar fir aayi aur Veer ke kaano me padi,

"Ab tum soch rahe hoge ki bhala ye sab kya hai? Kya bala hai ye!? Toh bataata hu... Ye saari jo rassiya dekh rahe ho, inme se kuch aisi hai jinhe kheechne se kuch nahi hoga. Par inhi me se kuch aisi hai, jinhe kheechne par kuch na kuch hoga. Ab tumhe inhi saari rassiyo me se ek rassi aisi dhundni hai jisse kheechne se wo waha diwaar me laga case khul jaaye."

Aatish ki baat sunn Veer ki nazar bagal me gayi jaha deewaar par ek kaale colour ka case laga hua tha.

"Uske khulte hi tumhe firse ek badi sii wahi gol laal button milegi, jisse daba kar tumhara iss kamre ka lock khul jaega. Simple hai. Hai na!? Toh fir shuru ho jaayo."

Aatish iss waqt jidhar bhi baitha hua tha, wo cameras se Veer ko dekh paa raha tha. Aur iss waqt uski awaaz sunn ke hi ye pata lagaaya jaa sakta tha ki wo kitna khush tha.

[Master!]

'Hmm?'

[Mujhe kuch gadbad lag rahi hai. Lift me gas leakage tha. Par yaha toh sab kuch normal lag raha hai. Aur mein nahi maanti ki ye itna simple hai.]

'Tumne thik kaha Pari... Par mujhe pata hai mujhe kya karna hai.'

[Hmm?]

'Check!!!!'

Veer ne ek ek kar ke ceiling par lagi unn chaukor khando ke beech, harr ek rassi ko check kiya. Aur ye karne ke baad jo results usse mile, usse jaankar hi uska dimaag hil gaya.

Kuch khando ke upar aisi aisi cheeze dali hui thi ki unke baare me sawaal uthna swabhaavik tha.

Kuch khando ke upar badi badi dherr saari eete dali hui thi. Kuch ke upar lohe ki rods. Toh wahi kuch me tezaab dala hua tha.

Jese hi Veer ko inn cheezo ke baare me pata chala uska badan sihar utha, ye soch ke ki yadi uske paas aaj ye Check function na hota aur yadi usne inme se kisi bhi ek rassi ko kheencha hota toh uska kya hota?

Maut!

Yahi jawaab tha bas.

Rassi kheechte hi upar ka chaukor khand palatne ke liye banaaya gaya tha. Zaahir sii baat thi, ki jese hi chaukor palatata, upar rakha jo bhi samaan hota wo seedha aake neeche maujood vyakti par girta.

Aaj Veer teen cheezo se bach gaya tha. Eete, rods aur savse khatarnak cheez ~ Tezaab.

Soch ke hi Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye the...

Tezaab jesi cheez ban hoti hai aur aam aadmi ke paas toh bilkul hi nahi rehti. Na jaane Aatish ne kaha se mangwaaya hoga. Par ye bhi baat thi...

Ki Aatish bhi koi aam aadmi thodi tha.

Aatish bhale hi khush tha abhi. Par iss round me baazi Veer ne maar lii thi.

Apne Check function ke kaaran usne sab kuch pehle hi pata laga liya tha.

Ab keval Veer ko acting karni thi.

Usne aage badh pehli rassi kheechi, aur ceiling ka wo chaukor hissa palat gaya.

Par...

Andar se kuch na nikla.

Aise hi usne kuch rassiya kheenchi jinme se kuch khaali thi toh kuch me eete neeche giri par unke girne se pehle hi Veer peeche hatt gaya. Kyuki usse pehle hi pata tha ki unn sab me kya tha.

Tezaab waali ek bhi rassi Veer ne nahi kheechi. Ye boht risky tha aur Veer risk nahi lena chaahta tha.

Veer ne inn rassiyo ko isliye kheecha tha taaki Aatish ko koi shaq na ho. Yadi wo pehli hi baar me sahi rassi chun leta toh ye suspicious maamla bann jaata. Bas Isliye usne dhong kiya aur aise hi kuch ek do rassiya kheechne laga.

Ant me usne wahi rassi kheechi jiske chalte wo kala case side me khula aur andar ek laal button usse nazar aayi.

Button dabaate hi darwaaza khul gaya aur room se baahar nikal usse dusri lift bhi nazar aa gayi.

Jiske zariye wo second floor par pohuch gaya.

'That was too easy... Golu... Chinta mat karna... Mein aa raha hu... Bas thodi derr aur...'

Veer iss samay thoda asmanjas me bhi tha. Kyuki kuch derr pehle jo Aatish itna zorr zorr se thahaake le raha tha, wo ekdum se shaant sa pad gaya tha.

'Shayad usse nahi laga tha ki mein uska dusra round clear kar paunga itni easily.'

[Haha~ Usse kya pata ki aap akele nahi ho. Ye Pari bhi aapke saath hai.]

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Jab Veer second floor par pohucha. Toh intercom se firse Aatish ki awaaz aayi,

"Maan'na padega Veer. Waqai! Tumhari kismat ke kya kehne. Par pata hai!?... Mein tumhaari issi kismat ko sabak sikhaunga abhi. Bas dekhte jao. Uss Ragini ko jese mene toda tha... Wese hi tumhe todunga Veeeeerrr.... Tumhara jab wo darra hua chehra dekhunga naaaa... Jisme ek pal bhi jaan na bachi hooo.... Jisne jeene ki iccha chorr dii hooo... Wahi... Bas wahi dekhna chaahta hu mein... Aaahhh! Tabhi... Tabhi mujhe chenn milega..."

Uski awaaz achanak hi itni badh gayi ki intercom se sound frequency zyaada hone ke kaaran Veer ko apne kaano me haath lagaana pad gaya.

Next room me enter karte hi...

Usse apne perr pe ek ajeeb sa sensation hua.

Par iske pehle ki wo nazre neeche kar dekh paata...

Achaanak hi wo itni speed me khichta chala gaya ki uski kuch samajh me hi nahi aaya. Uska perr, rassi ke ek phande me phass chuka tha. Aur wo rassi jese kisi pulling machine se bandhi hui thi. Ki Veer ka perr jese hi usme aaya aur machine ne usse kheenchna shuru kar diya.

Iss waqt Veer hawa me ulta latka hua tha. Uska ek perr rassi me bandha hua tha aur wo daaye baaye jhul raha tha. Aur uske neeche...

Paani ka boht bada tank rakha hua tha.

"Daaaaaamnnnn ittttt!!!"

Aatish : Veeeeeerrrr!! Ab tumhe pata chalega ki kya hota hai mujhse ulajhna.

Next second hi...

Achanak hi wo rassi neeche aayi aur...

*Splaaaaaashhhhh*

Veer ko poora ka poora uss paani se bhare tank me dubo dii.

"Blurrrrghhhhhh...grrrhhhh" Paani ke bulbule Veer ke muh se chooth rahe the aur wo kisi machli ki tarah chhatpata raha tha, jab wo paani ke baahar aa jaati hai.

[Master!!!? Hold your breath. Paani andar mat lijiye.]

Kamar tak Veer andar hi tha aur fir rassi upar hui aur Veer paani ke baahar nikal aaya. Wo tezz tezz haaf raha tha, khaas raha tha, theek se saas lene ki koshish kar raha tha.

Uska poora shareer kamar se le kar sarr tak paani se geela ho chuka tha.

Aatish : Veer! Mein chaahta toh tumhe kab ka khatam kar sakta tha. Par bhala... Usme maza hi kaha? Jo maza torture karne me hai. Wo maza kisi cheez me nahi. Hahahaha~

Na jaane kitni hi baar Veer ko yu paani me duboya gaya hoga. Par Veer...

Kuch nahi bola...

Uski aankho me bas krodh ke bhaav the. Ekdum laal aankhein jo badla lene ke liye tadap rahi thi.

Wo taiyaar tha. Chaahe jitna bhi torture kyu na kar liya jaaye usse. Ek na ek din wo iss Aatish ko apne khud ke haatho se saza dega. Usne ye nirnay kar liya tha.

Par achanak hi jis baat ki Veer ko bilkul bhi umeeed nahi thi wo hua uske saath.

Achanak hi usse neeche kiya gaya.

Ab wo aisi position par tha ki wo apna ek haath neeche container par tika sakta tha.

Aur issi ka istemaal kar usne apne jeb se knife nikaali aur khud ko upar kar jitne cuts rassi me maar sakta tha utne maare...

Nateeja...

Wo kuch palo me hi free tha.

"Jao... Tum mere test pass hue Veer. Jao... Intezaar kiska hai? Wo laal button dabao aur darwaaza khol lift me jao. Third floor pe hi tumhara dost hai Veer. Jao..."

Bhale hi Aatish ke shabd positive the. Par the toh Aatish ke muh se nikle shabd...

Itni asaani se kese vishwaash kar leta Veer!?

Usne savdhaani barat'te hue wo button dabaayi, jiske chalte darwaaza khul gaya.

Aur Lift ka istemaal kar wo third floor pe bhi pohuch gaya. Koi bhi takleef ya koi bhi trap nahi mila usse.

Sab kuch ekdum shaant tha. Kahi koi gadbad nazar nahi usse.

Ab bas iss darwaaze ke khulte hi usse Golu nazar aa jaega.

Ek aas liye... Veer apne mann me hi khush hone laga. Bhale hi uski jaan inn traps me jaate jaate bachi thi. Par...

Par aaj wo unn traps ko paar kar Golu ke paas pohuch chuka tha.

Aur Golu ko jald se jald churraane ke liye jese hi Veer ne gate khol ke saamne ka nazaara dekha...

Toh...

Wo apne aap apne ghutno par aa gira...

Saamne ka nazaara dekh uski rooh kaanp gayi.

"N-No...!"

Usne apne kaanpte hue hontho se budbudaaya...

Akhir aisa kya tha jo usse nazar aa gaya tha! Raaste me toh usse koi gadbadi mehsoos nahi hui thi. Fir aisa kya tha...!?

Par saamne ka nazaara hi aisa tha ki Veer ne apni zindagi me iss se zyaada khaufnaak drishya nahi dekha tha.

Uski nazre ek hi jagah par tiki hui thi. Wo jese apni palke jhapakna bhul gaya tha. Bhaiyankar khaufnaak, darrawna aur rooh hila dene waala manzar maujood tha uske saamne.

Kyuki...

Saamne...

Ek sheeshe ka bada sa aquarium tha. Aur andar usme ek magar terr raha tha.

Par... Baat sirf yahi nahi thi.

Jis paani me wo terr raha tha...

Wo...

Ekdum laal hota jaa raha tha. Aur...

Veer ne dekha ki...

Magar ke hi paas me...

Kuch paani me terr raha tha.

Aur wo dekh Veer ki nazre darr ke maare felti chali gayi.

Kyuki...

Wo kuch aur nahi... Balki... Ek insaan ka haath tha.

Jiski twacha ke chithde udd paani me hi terr rahe the aur bhayanak laal rang paani me ghulta jaa raha tha. Wo kya tha... Iss baat ka andaaza lagaana bilkul bhi mushqil nahi tha.

Khoon!

Insaan ka khoon...

"Noooo... Nooooo...."

Uska badan boht tezz kampan maar raha tha.

Harr ek ang darr ke maare hil raha tha. Aur uske badan me harr jagah roye khade ho chuke the. Aisa khaufnaak nazaara pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha Veer ne apni life me.

Aur jese ek awaaz ne uska darr saatve aasmaan par pohucha diya...

*Ding*

['Mission : Get to Golu as fast as possible and save him.' has been failed.]

[Mission Fail Penalty : 100 points Deduction.]

[90 points have been deducted. 10 remaining.]

Ye jhatka jese kam tha tha jab agle hi pal Aatish ki baat sunn Veer ka darr yakeen me badal gaya,

"Hahahahaha~ Sahi soch rahe ho Veeeeeerrrr... Ekdum sahi... Yahi hai tumhara Golu... Arre yahi hai... Jo ab nahi raha hahahaha~ Dekh rahe ho? Laal rang ... Aaahh! Adhbhut! Apni shaqal dekho Veer... Yahi... Yahi toh mein dekhna chaahta tha.."

Veer ki aankho se aasu apne aap nikal rahe the. Wo jese kisi sadme me jaa chuka tha par sabse bada sadma jese usse abhi lagna baaki tha.

"Veeeeeerrrrr!!! Hahahahaha~ Tumhe pata hai? Tumne hi usse maara hai Veer... Tumne... Mene nahi... Tumne apne hi dost ka qatl kar diya Veeeerrr... Haan tumne hi..."

Veer : !!?

Aatish : Mene kaha tha na Veer... Mein tumhari kismat ko bhi sabak sikhaunga... Aur tumhe bhi andar se todunga ... Tumhe pata hai Veer...!? Wo dekho... Tank me tumhe teen gate dikh rahe hai!?

Aatish ki excited sii awaaz sunn Veer ki lifeless sii nazre apne aap hi tank ke uss hisse par chali gayi...

Aur waqai...

Waha usse teen bade gates nazar aaye jo tank ke hi andar maujood the.

Aatish : Wo saare gates band the Veer... Wo saare band the. Aur tumhara dost ek taraf tha aur gates ke uss taraf mera paaltu Magarmacch 'Clutch'.

Veer : ???

Aatish : Tumne apne dost ki jaan leli Veer. Jab jab tum uss Laal button ko daba rahe the... Tab tab yaha tank me maujood andar ke ye gates khul rahe the. Tumhe laga tha... Ki tum apne dost ko bacha rahe ho... Par Veeeeeerrrr... Tum unhi haatho se apne dost ko maut ke muh me dhakel rahe the. Tum apni khud ki jaan bachaane ke liye, uss laal button ko jab jab daba ke aage badh rahe the. Tab tab tumhe nahi pata tha... Ki tum apne dost ko maarte jaa rahe the Veeeeerrrrr... Hahahahaha~ Haan! Yahiiii.... Yahiii chehra mujhe dekhna tha Veeeerrrr....

Maano jese ek bomb sa foota Veer ke sarr aur uski saari sochne samajhne ki shakti gaayab ho gayi ye sunn ne ke baad...

Veer : ....

Aatish : Dekhoooo.... Dekhooo Veeeerrrr! Kese... Kese tumhare dost ke shareer ke tukde paani me terr rahe hai. Kese chithde udaa ke rakh diya mere paaltu magar ne... Khooon hi khooon hai Veerrrr... Aur ye sab... Tumne apne haatho se kiya Veeer... Tumne... Hahahaha~ Tumne hi apne dost ko maar diya... Mene toh kuch na kiya Veer. Tumne hi uski jaan leli...

Veer ka dimaag jese kaam karna band kar chuka tha. Uska haal iss waqt shabdo me bataane laayak nahi tha. Uska chehra safed pad gaya tha. Aankhein aisi jese maano unme jaan hi nahi thi. Ab na toh usse kuch sunaayi de raha tha aur na hi kuch feel ho raha tha.

Jis Golu ne uski do baar jaan bachaayi thi. Aaj ussi Golu ki jaan Veer ne apne haatho se leli. Bhala kese nikal paata wo iss glaani se? Inn feelings ke liye glaani bhi ek chota shabd tha.

Veer yaha ye soch raha tha ki... Wo apne pehle mitr, Golu ko bacha raha tha. Wo ye soch raha tha ki harr pal wo usse bachaane me kaamyaab ho raha hai. Par... Par aisa bilkul bhi na tha.

Wo toh ulta apne ussi dost ko maar raha tha. Aisi dardnaak maut insaan kabhi kisi ko na de. Jo manzar Veer ne dekha tha. Wo bataane me bhi kaho uske raungte khade ho jaaye. Fir wo toh khud experience kar raha tha. Na jaane wo iss waqt kinn bhaavo se guzar raha tha. Ye shock itna bada tha ki bechari Pari bhi ekdum shaant pad chuki thi. Usse bilkul bhi aisi umeed nahi thi.

Toh wo sab neeche gubbaare!? Kisi ke maut ke jashn ke liye the!? Veer ne buttons check nahi kii thi. Kyuki unn buttons ko dabaane se darwaaza khul jaa raha tha. Par usse kya pata tha...

Ki jin buttons ko wo daba raha tha wo saath hi saath tank me maujood gates se bhi connected thi. Akhir sahi hi toh kaha tha Aatish ne. Ek prakaar se Veer hi toh Golu ka hatyaara tha?

Aatish : Ab hamaare mehmaan ki bhi khaatir daari kari jaaye...

Veer ghutno ke bal baithe saamne abhi tak tank me ho rahi halchal ko dekh raha tha. Wo insaan ki taang jiske maans ke na jaane kitne tukde paani me idhar se udhar ho rahe the, wo haath...

Ye wahi haath tha... Jo Golu ne usse dosti ke liye aage badhaaya tha!?

Kuch bhaag aise the... Jo pehchaan me tak nahi aa rahe the.

Poora tank... Lahu luhaan ho chuka tha ekdum.

Aur ye sab dekh... Achanak hi Veer ko ubkaayi sii aayi... Aur uske muh se ulti behna shuru ho gayi.

Par jese Aatish ko ye manzoor nahi tha. Kyuki agle hi pal, Veer ke ird gird 8 se 10 log ikhatta ho gaye aur fir...

Usse itna maara gaya ki adhmari haalat me chorr diya.

Veer toh pehle hi sadme me jaa chuka tha. Usne ek baar bhi apne aap ko defend karne ki koshish na kii. Saare hamle wo tab tak sehta gaya jab tak ki wo behosh na ho gaya.

Ek dost mila tha usse...

Aur Veer ne apne hi haatho se uski hi jaan leli.

Aadmi 1 : Bhau! Ye behosh ho gaya hai. Kya karna hai? Isse maar de?

Aatish : Na Na Na Na! Maar denge toh maza hi kya? Wese ab mera kaam iss se nahi hai. Wo toh bas kuch dino se Jalsa me koi manoranjan nahi hua tha. Aur Veer ki badkismati thi ki wo mere plan ke beech me aa gaya. Nateeja... Saamne hai. Maut se acchi saza hoti hai logo ko tadpa ke unhe zinda rakhna.

Aadmi 1 : Bhau fir?

Aatish : Aksar hum bas yahi dhaarna leke chalte hai ki... Kuch log bure hote hai kuch log acche... Kyu hai na?

Aadmi 2 : J-Jii bhau!

Aatish : Veer ki nazro me mein bura tha kyuki mein uske raaste me aaya. Par yahi baat mein bhi toh keh sakta hu? Meri nazar me Veer bura tha kyuki wo merer raaste me aaya!? Insaan bura ya accha nahi hota kabhi bhi samjhe?

Aadmi 1 : Samjhe Bhau!

Aatish : Harr aadmi apni paristhiti ke hisaab se act karta hai. Ab harr aadmi ke apne apne tareeqe ho sakte hai. Veer ki kismat kharaab thi, jo wo mere raaste ke beech aaya. Ab na keval mene uski kismat ka sach usse bata diya balki usse andar se poora tod diya hai. Zindagi bhar ab wo glaani ki Zindagi jiyega... Hamesha uske mann me yahi rahega ki wahi apne dost ka hatyaara hai. Jao ab... Isse iske ghar ke baahar hi fek aao... Ab ye kisi laayak nahi raha. Aur ab hamaara raasta saaf hai.

Itna bol Aatish camera control room se baahar nikal gaya...

Par... Uska chehre par bade hi gusse ke bhaav the. Aur asantushti ke bhi.

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Poora ek din guzar chuka tha iss ghatna ke baad.

Shaam ka waqt tha aur mand mand hawaaein chal rahi thi.

Nidhi ke ghar iss waqt Nidhi Juhi ke sang baith usse padhaane me lagi hui thi.

Toh wahi Shreya aaj shaam ka evening snack bana rahi thi.

"Ye meri cooking itni buri kyu hai? Aarghh! Kya likha hai?? Vegetables ko kaat ke saute karo?? Hmm! Lo bhai daal diye vegetables..."

Aaj usne josh josh me Juhi ko bol diya tha ki wo aaj noodles banaegi... Aur bas... Shaam hote hi Juhi uske peeche pad gayi. Ab bola hai toh karna toh tha hi kaam...

Isliye mohatarma lagi hui thi, sabhi ke liye Noodles banaane me.

Aur baahar baithi Nidhi Juhi ko pyaar se samjhaate hue padha rahi thi.

Tabhi Achanak hi uska phone baj utha...

Jab Nidhi ne caller name dekha toh wo wahi sthir sii pad gayi aur screen pe naam dekh wo bas wahi dekhti reh gayi.

'Veer!?'

Veer ka call aa raha tha.

'Iss waqt!? Aakhir ab kese usse meri yaad aa gayi? Uss din mandir me toh... Yu naraaz hoke chala gaya tha? Kabhi mujhse baat nahi karta... Fir kyu? Halaki Diwali par usne hi mujhe message kiya tha... Fir bhi...'

Ant me wo call utha leti hai.

Nidhi : Ab kese yaad aa gayi tumhe Veer apni iss madam kii?

Par dusri taraf se koi awaaz na aayi...

Nidhi : ???

Voice : Umm... Wo... Actually... Mein Veer bhaiya ki choti behan bol rahi Ma'am. I'm Kavya.

Nidhi : Aahhh!?

Kavya : J-Jii!

Nidhi (blushes) : Ohh no no! K-Kavya? Haan! Veer ne mujhe bataya tha beta aapke baare me. K-Kaho na? Kya baat ho gayi?

Kavya : Baat boht hi serious hai Ma'am.

Nidhi (frowns) : Kya hua?

Kavya : Mujhe aapse kuch puchna hai? Kya aap aur Veer bhaiya ke beech accha relationship hai?

Nidhi (blushes) : Ehhhhh?? W-Whaat??

Kavya : Hmm! I mean... Ek accha relationship hai na aap dono ke beech?

Nidhi : Y-Ye!? Tum kya puch rahi ho...!?

Tabhi Kavya ki ruwaasi sii awaaz Nidhi ke kaano me padi,

Kavya : Darasal... Kal bhaiya kahi gaye the raat me... Aur... Kal raat me wo... Itni buri haalat me ghar ke baahar mile the. Harr jagah *sniff* chot hi chot thi... Yaha sabhi *sniff* itna pareshan hai... Doctor ko bhi dikhaaya... Wo toh medicine deke chale gaye. Par... Par bhaiya kisi se baat hi nahi kar rahe hai. *sniff* Na jaane kya ho gaya hai unhe. Bas apne room me sarr jhukaaye baithe huye hai. Na khaana khaa rahe aur na kuch... *sniff*

Nidhi : H-Huh???

Kavya : Mene aapko isliye phone kiya hai, kyuki Veer bhaiya ko jab ghar se nikaala gaya tha tab wo aapke hi saath ruke huye the. Toh mujhe laga aapke aur unke beech aachhi khaasi understanding hogi. Shayad aapki baat maan jaaye wo? *sniff* Isliye mene aapko call kiya hai. K-Kya aap yaha aa sakti hai? Please? I-I beg you...

Jab poori baat ka Nidhi ko pata chala toh na jaane kyu par usse ekdum se bechaini sii hone lagi.

Ghabraahat bhi.

Nidhi : M-Mein abhi aati hu.

Aur usne bina koi samay waste kiye, seedha Veer ke ghar ki orr prasthaan kiya.

Juhi ko wo Shreya ki hi nigraani me chorr aayi.

Aur jese hi Veer ke ghar pohuch wo Veer ke kamre me daakhil hui.

Veer ki haalat dekh uski rooh kaanp gayi. Darwaaze ki dehleez pe hi uske kadam tham gaye. Aur ek atyant hi peeda aur ajeeb sa dard uske dil me hua Veer ko uss haalat me dekh.

Nidhi : V-Veeeer!??

Veer : ??

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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
update bro Pasand aaye toh like kardiyo re.

 

[Sukhi Choudhry]

Waiting for the next update

 

[Sweetwords]

App ki story ny majboor kiya k main yahan account banao or is baat ka atraf kron k yeh meri ajj tk ki most favorite story hai or app ki story ku next update ka intazar krta hon

 

[Naina]

Guys! Ek aur announcement mein karna chaahta tha kal hi but bhul gaya tha
So, abhi kar raha hu. Ye story toh chal hi rahi hai. Kherr! Jab bhi ye finish hoegi, next story fantasy Prefix par based aaegi. Naam abhi disclose nahi karunga. But it will be related to powers and all. A Whole different world.
Toh uss story me kuch iss story ke easter eggs dekhne ko milenge. (Boht aage ki soch rakhi hai mene )
Ab Easter eggs kya hote hai? Toh wo homework hai...

Sabse pehle is story ke atit yani flashback pe focus karo...
I think flashback kaafi dilchasp hone wala hai.... specially bhaavna & family ke atit....

 

[Aakash.]

Aisa kya....??

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