Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)

[Mr.X796]

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[sonukale]

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[Jay Sutar]

okay bhai we are waiting

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Superb story bro

Aaj hi aap ki puri story padhi index ki help se warna readers ka itna pyar hai aap ke saath ke story ke update dhhodhne me hi time chala jata

Lakin ek baat to hai kya jaado hai aap ko lekhni me bahut hi uttam tarike se har baat ko describe kiya hai

to this story from my side

Now i am regular reader reader of this story

Thanks for the compliment and your support yara..
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Aapko ye story or meri writing skills pasand aayin ye jankar bohot khushi hui...
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Aise hi sath bane rahiye...
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[Baba__Bhai]

Bhai mene shetal Rajput jisko abhi rocky ne new ghar dilwaya marhum army officer ki beti ko rocky ke sath intimate na karne ko kaha h sakshi ko to karenge hi aap hame pata h shetal ko na kare nahin yo yesa lagega ki uski garibi ka mazak banaya gaya
baki kisi se bhi apne hero ka chirharan karwana suru kar sakte hain

Maine to sheetal se sex na karne ke liye pehle hi comments me bol diya tha..
Par kuchh readers uske sath bhi chahte hain.. abhi to chhodo ..
Baad me voting karva kar adjust kar lenge... Vaise iski zaroorat nahin padegi.. kyonki rocky ki zindagi me waise hi itni kadkiyan hai.. or kuchh aane vali hain..

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Ok bhai waiting for next update

Next uoupda will post on 9pm.

Bhai jaisa story ke liye thik lage us tarah ka flashback dijiye jitna jaruri ho utna hi baki faltu ke flashback me maza bhi nahin aayega

[QUTE="CG, post: 26022, member: 329"]Jyada detailed nahi bas kuch important pahlu jo is kahaani mein aage kaam aa sakte hain sirf unhi se roobaroo karwana dost....aisa meri feelings hai.,[/QUOTE]
Aisa hi kiya hai.. ek hi update me khatam kar dala sara flashback rocky ki zabani.

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okay bhai we are waiting

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[spritemathews]

mind blowing updates waiting for next update

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Maha - Mega - Update​

Update - 28

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EX --
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Mansi - tumhen kaise pata chala ki sakshi hamare chacha ki beti hai?
Or hamare dada - dadi sab hain kahan??
Or dada ji ne dad ko ghar se nikal diya par priya ki mom matlab bua ji se dada ji ka rishta kaise tuta??

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NEXT --
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Main - Ek sath itne savaal??
Are bata raha hun,
sab bata raha hun,
thoda saans to lelo.
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Priya- Please Continue ...
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Main - Jab main sakshi se mila to uski friend ne mujhe sakshi ke gaw ka naam bataya tha,
mujhe shak hua,
isliye maine kuchh aadmi is kaam par laga diye,
Uski history janne ke liye or mujhe uske baare me sab pata chal gaya (Jhooth)
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Main (Priya se) - Babu, teeno ke liye coffee bana ke le aao,
Fir baat ko continue karunga..
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Priya uth kar chali gayi,
or mansi bhi uski help ke liye chali gayi,
Or main sochne laga baat Kahan se shuru ki jaye,
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Thodi der me dono cofee lekar aa gayin,
Or maine unse coffee lekar ek sip markar baat ko continue kiya...
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Main -
Yahan se 150 km door Uttar - Pradesh me ek bada hi sundar gaw hai "Ameerpur".
Ye gaw 60 gawon ka sardaar (block) hai,
or in 60 gawon ke zamindar hain,
hamare dada ji "Thakur Vishnupratap"
Jo "Ameerpur" ki haveli me rehte hain,
Badi hi khubsurat haveli hai,

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Hamare dad ghar ke bade bete hain,
Bachpan se hi dad bohot shareef or seedhe - sadhe hain,
Or ye 2 bhai or 1 behen hain,
Teeno me aapas me beintiha mohobbat hai,
Hamare chacha "Thakur Gajender" dad se 2 saal chhote hain,
ye apne bhai or behen se beintiha mohobbat karte hain,
Or aaj bhi raaton ko rote hain,
dad or bua ko yaad karke,
Dad ki ek hi bua thin,
jinki 2 betiyan or ek beta tha chhoti beti yani ki hamari mom,
bachpan se hi dad ke sath unke ghar me rehti thin,
school ho ya college,
Ya phir khel ka maidan,
sab jagha dad ke sath hi jati thin,
yahan tak ki unke bina khana bhi nahin khati thin,
Ye bhai - behen vala pyaar dheere - dheere badhta chala gaya,
dono ko is baat ka ehsaas tabh hua jab mom ke liye ek rishta aaya,
Mom ke rishte ki baat sunte hi dad ko ek jhatka sa laga,
unko apni duniya ujadti hui nazar aayi,
yahi haal mom ka tha,
bichhadne ki soch se hi dono ko ehsaas ho chuka tha,
ki unka pyaar ab bhai - behen vala nahin raha, ye pyaar ab premi - premika ka roop le chuka hai,
Dad ne ek din mouka dekhkar himmat karke apne pyaar ka izhaar mom se kar diya,
or mom ne turant hi kabool kar liya,
Jaise kab se is pal ka intzaar kar rahi hon.
dad ki himmat ki daad deni padegi,
vo seena taan kar dada or dadi ji ke samne khade ho gaye,
Or apne dil ki baat bata di.
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Priya (muh banate hue)- or ek aap hain, agar ham dono apne pyaar ka izhaar nahin kartin, to aap kabhi bhi pehel na karte,
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Mansi - sahi kaha didi aapne,
ye kabhi bhi dad ke jaise nahin ban sakte,
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Main - tum dono ka ho gaya ho to baat aage badhaun ??
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Dono - haan, haan .. please continue.
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Main -
Dada ji to ye sunte hi shoked ho gaye,
Wo apne bachchon se bohot pyaar karte the, dada ji ne dad ko danta,
samjhaya yahan tak ki jamkar peeta bhi,
par dad apni baat se tas se mas nahin hue,
Akhir me dadaji ne samaaj or maryada ko dekhte hue dad ko ghar se nikal jane ka hukum de diya,
Dad ne apna hissa manga,
to dadaji ne unhen 10 carore rupye dekar or vapas na aane ka bolkar ghar se nikaal diya,
Chacha, bua or dadi ji ne dada ji ko bohot samjhaya,
to dada ji ne ye bol diya ki jo uske sath jana chahta hai,
Ja sakta hai,
par vo lout ke dobara haveli me nahin aa sakta.
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Chacha ji or dadi ji ne to dil par patthar rakh liya par bua ji dad se bohot pyaar karti thin,
isi liye vo bhi dad ke peechhe - peeche unke sath haveli chhod kar nikal gayin.
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Dad, mom or bua ko sath lekar vahan se bhaag kar yahan aa gaye,
or yahan aakar mom se shadi kar li,
Or bua ji ko bhi ek ladke se pyaar ho gaya, jo dad ke yahan par aane ke baad uska doat ban gaya tha, dad ne dono ki shadi karva di,
Dad MBA kiye hue the,
or bussiness ki bohot knowledge thi,
Unhone apna bussiness shuru kiya or apni mehnat or lagan se aaj vo state me top ke bussiness man hain.
Dad or phupa ji ek company me 50-50% ke partner the,
unka kisi baat ko lekar jhagda ho gaya,
isi liye hamari families aapas me 7 saal door rahin,
par dad or bua chhup - chhup ke mil lete the..
Dad or phupa ji alag ho gaye ..
or apna -apna bussiness start kiya,
phupa ji dad ke bina kuchh bhi nahin the,
is baat ka ehsaas unhen tabh hua jab unko bussiness me heavy loss ho gaya..
Or vo tension me sharaab peene lage jisse unhen heart atteck aa gaya..
Parvis incident ke chakkar me in dono ka dobara se mel ho gaya,
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Maine priya or mansi ki taraf dekha to dono ki aakhon se aansu beh rahe the..
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Mansi (apne aansu pochhte hue) - jaan, phir chacha ji ka kya hua
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Main - Dad or bua ke haveli chhodne ke baad chacha ki duniya ujad chuki thi,
Vo is gham ko seh nahin pa rahe the,
Or din - raat sharaab peene lage,
Dadi ji par unki ye halat dekhi na gayi..
Vo to pehle hi ek bete or ek beti ka gham liye baithi thin or oopar se apne chhote bete ki ye halat dekhkat vo dada ji ke saamne bohot royin..
Unki mamta chitkaar uthi thi,
Dada ji ne apne chhote bete ko sambhalne ke liye unki shadi karva di,
Meenakshi chachi saaf dil, khubsurat or padhi - likhi intelligent aurat hain,
unke kadam haveli me padte hi mano jaise haveli me phir se khushiyan aa gayi thin, unhone apne husn se chacha ko apna deewana bana diya,
Chacha ka gham kam hone laga tha,
Phir unke ghar sakshi ka janm hua,
Or haveli me khushiyan waps aa gayin,
Par dada ji ko apna vanshaj nahin mila tha,
jab dusri baar chachi pregnant huin to sidiyon par se phisalne ke karan unka miscarriage ho gaya,
Or unka metra (bachchedani) nikalni padi,
Ye dada or dadi ji ke liye ek bohot bada jhatka tha, haveli ko dobara dukhon ne gher liya,
Ek din dada ji ko dad ki khabar mili, jo unhone newspaper me padhi thi,
Tabh unko ye bhi pata chala ki dad ke ek beti or ek beta bhi hai,
Ab unka man dad ke liye pighalne laga,
Apne vanshaj ko dekhne ke liye vo utavle ho gaye, unhone dad ke phone no. ka pata laga kar unko phone kiya or apne kiye ki maafi maangte hue vapas haveli loutne ko kaha,
Par dad ek ziddi kism ke insaan hain,
Vo apni bezzati aaj tak nahin bhul paye hain,
Unhone dada ji ko haveli loutne se saaf inkaar kar diya,
Dada ji ab bhi phone karke dad ko bulate rehte hain, par dad apni zidd nahin chhod rahe,
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Maine ek thandi saans lekar apni baat khatam ki,
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Priya - Babu, Ye batao ki mami ji ke 1 bhai or 1 behen bhi to thi, kya unko pata nahin chala. Is baat ka, ki mama or mami ji ne shadi kar li hai??
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Main - jab nani or nana ji ko is baat ka pata chala to unhone dada ji ko hi galat thehra diya,
Kyonki vo south india me rehte the,
Or us side bua or mama ke beti betiyon ki shadi hindus me bhi ho jati hai..
isi liye unhone dada ji ko bohot bura bhala kaha..
Or apni beti or damaad ka ka pata lagane ko keh kar vapas lout gaye.
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Priya - Or aapke mama & mousi? Unka kya hua??
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Main - Main unke baare me kuchh nahin janta.. or na hi mom janti hain..
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Mansi - jaan vo sab to theek hai,
Par ye sakshi ko Uttar Pradesh me koi college nahin mila tha kya??
Uska admission yahan karvana mere samajh nahin aaya.
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Main - ye sakshi ki fantasy ya khuwahish keh sakte ho, ki usko pahadi ilake zyada pasand hain, or vo hamare ya mom - dad ke baare me kuchh nahin janti, usko sirf itna hi pata hai ki uske pita dada ji ke ikloute bete hain,
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Priya - Babu main ek baar sakshi se milna chahti hun,
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Mansi - our me bhi.
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Main - vo to main abhi kar sakta hun,
Isme kya badi baat hai. Tum dono milkar ek mast se lunch ka intzaam karo, chahe bahar se order karo.
Main usko lunch le liye invite karta hun.
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Mansi & Priya - O.K Done
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Maine sakshi ko phone lagaya, usne pehli hi ring me phone receive kar liya.
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Main - Hii sakshi, how are you?
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Sakshi (pyari si awaaz me)- hii, rocky
I am fine, aap sunao kaise yaad kiya?
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Main - are ab apni friend ko yaad bhi nahin kar sakta kya??
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Sakshi - are aisi koi baat nahin, aap mujhse baat hi kahan karte ho?
Aap ko to bas pallavi hi dikhai deti hai?
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Main - are vo sirf meri friend hai, mere liye to tum dono ek jaisi ho,
Bas tum thoda zyada spacial ho.
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Sakshi (khush hote hue)- Achchha ji, main kab se spacial ho gayi,
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Main - ab baaten band karo, or ye batao ki aaj tum free ho ya nahin?
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Sakshi - aapke liye to free hi free hun,
Hukum kijiye.
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Main - hukum nahin request hai, aaj ka lunch mere sath mere ghar par karo,
Tumhen apni behno se bhi milva dunga.
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Sakshi (khushi se uchhalte hue)- kyaa sach me!
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Main - ab invitation card bhejna padega kya??
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Sakshi - nahin main aa jaungi, but hamari warden se chhup kar aana padega,
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Main - ek kaam karo apni warden se mari baat karao,
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Sakshi- wo bohot strict hai..
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Main - strict vo tumhare liye hogi..
Tum se jo kaha hai vo karo,
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Saksi - ek minute hold karo, main abhi karvati hun,
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Usne phone hold par daal diya, or thodi der baad ek aurat ki kadak aavaz sunai di, jo uski warden ki thi.
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Warden - Hello, kon bola raha hai?
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Main - Hello Madem, Main Keshav Thakur ka beta Rocky Thakur baat kar raha hun, naam to suna hi hoga
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Dad ka naam sunkar uski awaaz turant naram pad gayi.
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Warden (narmi se)- Ji, ji sir boliye kya baat hai?
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Main - sakshi meri friend hai, or college me mere hi sath padhti hai,
Kya aap shaam tak ke liye use chhutti de sakti hain?? Mujhe usse kuchh kaam hai.
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Warden - ji, ji kyon nahin. Main sakshi ji ko abhi chhutti de deti hun..
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Ye Kehte hue usne phone sakshi ke hath me de diya.. or sakshi vapas room me aakar mujhse baaten karne lagi.
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Sakshi - Wah! Kya baat hai hero, tumse baat karte hi main sakshi se sakshi ji ho gayi,
Manna padega koi baat to hai tumhare andar..
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Main - Are mere papa ka thoda naam hai yahan, vo sab chhodo or tayyar ho kar yahan aa jao, main tumhen address send karta hun.
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Sakshi - O.K. handsome, i will be there,
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Or usne haste hue call cut kar diya..
Or mansi & Priya lag gayin uske swagat ki tayyari me...​

To...be... Continued..

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[Baba__Bhai]

mind blowing updates waiting for next update

Thanks for the compliment yara..
Next update post kar diya hai..

 

[Sunilgupta]

Superb update