Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)

[King Aryan]

Baba Bhai Ap Intna Acha Likte Ho K Yaad Hi Nahi Raha K 500 Pages Kab K Ho Gey



For 500 Pages Baba Bhai​

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Mast update bro

To anju or leela ki shadi ki sbi baat ho gyi

Y menka to very dangerous h yr pr y kisk acount me jayegi

Waiting for next

Thanks for the Compliment & your support...
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Ab ye kiske account me jati hai... Ye janne ke liye padhiye ye story end tak

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Awesome update bhai
Raja ki tajposhi ho gayi
Anju ND Sagar ki Shaadi bhi done ho gayi
Sagar ne khudko bachaliya raja banne se
Menka ko kaise manipulate karegi leeza

Priya dikhayi nai de Rahi
Ab jab Sagar 2 din baad wapis jaa hi Raha
Hai to Kya wo apne gaanv bhi jayega

Thanks for the Compliment and Your Beautiful Comment...
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Priya dikhai to di thi... Ek baar sahi se padhna pata chal jayega....
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Or gaw to jayega apna hero... Balki abhi to uske mama ka parivar bhi baki hai .... milne se....
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Keep Support

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Mast update bhai
Jhakaas
Jabardast

Awesome update bro ...

awesome update
lakin kuch andar ki khichdi pak rhi hi
jabardast like it
keep posting

Nice update

Very Nice Update Bhai

Nyc update

Fabulous update bhai maza a Gaya.

Nice update

Zabardast update

Excellent,, mind blowing.. fantastic update bhai.... Maza aa gaya

Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya
Menka to jab dekho tb ungli karti rhti h apne hero par

Nice update

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

Fabulous update bhai.....maza aa gya ...

Nice update bhai

Super update

Super Awesome Update

Nice update

Very nice fabulous updates bro... extremely waiting for next

ThankYou So Much Friends,
For the Compliments and your support.

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Awesome update bhai bahut hi shandar aur lajawab mind blowing
Wah Bhai bahut hi badiya aur behtarin update tha dekhte hain ab Shaitan log Aise kaun sa Dhatu ka prayog Karne Wale Hain Jis Se Rocky Ki yaddasht aur uski sari shaktiyan Chali Jayegi Intezar Rahega story mein yeh new twist ka

Keep going
We will wait for next update bhai

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Ye twist nahin tha...
Twist koi bata kar thode hi aata hai,
Isme to abhi samaye lagega,
Par dhartilok par vapas loutne ke baad kuchh naya hoga....
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Thanks for the Compliment and your support

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Update 81

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Kafi behtareen dhang se dikhaya h shaitanlok ki sari ghatnao ko.
Sardar ko thik kar unki beti ko impress kar liya.
Paka hua mans khilakar or jyada.
Lekin kiss ke bad jo baten Anju ne kahin vo badi hi funny lagi bhai.
Lamika ke saath sb kuchh dekh bhi aaye.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.
Picture to char chand lagadete h hamesha ki tarah .
Mansi ke chakkar me kahin ye sardar ki beti to nahin....

Or isiliye ,
Aage ka intjar

Thanks for the Compliment and your support....
Abhi kafi pichhe ho.... Jaldi aage aao yarrr.... Tabhi to maza aayega...

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Sabse pahle to 500 pages pure hone par dher sari badhaiyan baba bhai.

Update 82

Behad hi shandaar update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Khoon ko juice banakar pina funny tha bhai.
Anju ki dant bhi achhi lagi .
Or jo Aadi ne socha dusri baat pr amal karne ka lamia ke liye vahi sahi h.
Dekhe kya hota h kaidkhane me ??

Or isiliye ,
Aage ka intjar

Thanks for the wish, lot of Compliments and your beautiful comment.
Keep Support

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Sabse pahle to 500 pages pure hone par dher sari badhaiyan baba bhai.

Update 82

Behad hi shandaar update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Khoon ko juice banakar pina funny tha bhai.
Anju ki dant bhi achhi lagi .
Or jo Aadi ne socha dusri baat pr amal karne ka lamia ke liye vahi sahi h.
Dekhe kya hota h kaidkhane me ??

Or isiliye ,
Aage ka intjar

Thanks for the wish, lot of Compliments and your beautiful comment.
Keep Support

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Bhai bahut badhiya update tha...
Ap story bahut perfectly likhte ho.
1.Ag apne shaitani ka beta aur beti ka character ya image ke bareme decide kar liya ho toh nicheka mat padhaiye
Bhai apko shaitan lok pr Vijay parapt karne ke bad vaha Shanti banaye rakhnne ke liye vaha kisiko toh vahaka karobhar sopna ( shabhalne ke liye denahi hoga na)
So apko shaitan ki beti ya beta dono mese ek chuna hoga so apko ek ko bohot bura dikhana hoga aur ek ko acha agar apne bete ko acha dikhaya toh 2-3 update uske andarki burai khatam karne ke liye lagegi aur shaitan lok ka usse raja banane ke liye 1-2 update lagege so total 3-5 update lagege aur agar ap beti ko acha dikhaoge toh 2-3 update usse sudharne ke liye aur fir 5-6 update ke bich-bich me thoda bohot me uske sath pyar fir 2-3update love story fir shaitan lok pr Vijay ke Baad firse usko vaha ka karobhar Sambhal ne ke liye 1-2 update fir usse vaha ka varis Dena hoga usse shadi karni padegi aur uske liye sex+shadi means = 4-5 update kaise bhi laghi jayege so total apko14-19 ke aas-pas update dene hoge. Aur muze nahi lagta ap shaitan lok pr Vijay ke Baad story khatam karege apne uske baad ke liye bhi kuch jarur socha hoga so I'll prefer shaitan ka beta but choice is urs.
2. Bhai ho sake toh plz shadi yadash Jane se pehle niptana nahi toh fir yadash vapas Lani hogi fir jinn lok ki Shakti firse shadi firse shadi ki tayari n all firse sab thoda Lamba jayega bhai ha ye bhi ho sakta hai ki jinn lok ke Shakti ke saath hi yadash vapis aaye ya fir uski yadas jayehi nahi or something totally different. But my point is leeza ko aur mat tadpao yr..

Bhai Mai firse kehta hu agar apne pehle hi kuch socha ho toh ye sab najar andaj karo ap khudhi bahut achi story likhte ho. Ap apne hisabse hi likhna.....

ThankYou so much for the Compliment and your beautiful review & suggestions.
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I think, ye aapki pehli comment hai is thread par,
Abhi batana to nahin chahta tha par phir bhi thoda sa bata deta hun,
Shaitan ke bete or beti me se choose karne ki zarurat nahin padegi...
Kyonki vijay prapti ke baad sardar ki beti Lamia hi ShaitanLok par Raaj karegi.... Or feature me hero ki usse shadi hoti hai ya nahin, ye us wakht readers ki votes decide karengi...
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Or aapka ye suggestion main accept karta hun, ki leeza ki shadi ke baad hi ye yaddasht vala twist dalunga...
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Ek baar phir se thanks....
Keep Support.

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Awesome Update
Ek Tarf Shadi To Dusri Tarf Yaddasht Jane Kar Katra Dehan Se Mere Bhai.

Sab kuchh dhiyan se hi ho raha hai yara.... Bas sabar kijiye .....
& Thanks for the Compliment.