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Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)

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Naughtyrishabh

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Update 81

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Kafi behtareen dhang se dikhaya h shaitanlok ki sari ghatnao ko.
Sardar ko thik kar unki beti ko impress kar liya.
Paka hua mans khilakar or jyada.
Lekin kiss ke bad jo baten Anju ne kahin vo badi hi funny lagi bhai.
Lamika ke saath sb kuchh dekh bhi aaye.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.
Picture to char chand lagadete h hamesha ki tarah .
Mansi ke chakkar me kahin ye sardar ki beti to nahin....

Or isiliye ,
Aage ka intjar
 
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Sabse pahle to 500 pages pure hone par dher sari badhaiyan baba bhai.

Update 82

Behad hi shandaar update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Khoon ko juice banakar pina funny tha bhai.
Anju ki dant bhi achhi lagi .
Or jo Aadi ne socha dusri baat pr amal karne ka lamia ke liye vahi sahi h.
Dekhe kya hota h kaidkhane me ??

Or isiliye ,
Aage ka intjar
 
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CG said:
Jinni, Pari , Insaan to hain hi ye bhi chal sakti hai lekin
1. iski shakal
2. iska khaanpaan, rahan sahan...

waise yaar meri maano to rahne do ghar basaane ki iske saath chaho to iske sath ek sex scene karwa do with anjalika's permission taaki live telecast naa ho. aakhirkaar jo help wo kar rahi hai uska paaritoshik bhi to milnaa chahiye usko.
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With respect ,
Paritoshik me sex ??
Kya yahi uchit h sir ??
 
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Siraj Patel said:
Excellent update bhai bahut hi Shandar aur lajawab ekdum jhakaas mind blowing
Mast update tha bhai aaj ka update to tajposhi aur baat cheet Jashn ki taiyari mein nikal gaya ab aage dekhte hain Yagg khatam hone ke bad story mein aur kya - kya new twist dekhne Ko Milta Hai

Keep going
We will wait for next update

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ThankYou So Much For The Compliment and your support
 
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Rohan008 said:
Haha cute sa update tha bhai
Menka ko full form mein chal rhi h
Hero ki lene pe tulli h
Hero ne parilok ka raja nraja na ban k unko doosra upay bhi de diya
Lekin jinlok ka upay nhi de paaya
Mansi udas h qki use wapas earth jana h

Agle update ka intzaar rhega
Brilliant update
Keep rocking bhai :)
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ThankYou so much for the Compliment and your beautiful comment.
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Keep Support Yara
 
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Bhai bahut badhiya update tha...
Ap story bahut perfectly likhte ho.
1.Ag apne shaitani ka beta aur beti ka character ya image ke bareme decide kar liya ho toh nicheka mat padhaiye
Bhai apko shaitan lok pr Vijay parapt karne ke bad vaha Shanti banaye rakhnne ke liye vaha kisiko toh vahaka karobhar sopna ( shabhalne ke liye denahi hoga na)
So apko shaitan ki beti ya beta dono mese ek chuna hoga so apko ek ko bohot bura dikhana hoga aur ek ko acha agar apne bete ko acha dikhaya toh 2-3 update uske andarki burai khatam karne ke liye lagegi aur shaitan lok ka usse raja banane ke liye 1-2 update lagege so total 3-5 update lagege aur agar ap beti ko acha dikhaoge toh 2-3 update usse sudharne ke liye aur fir 5-6 update ke bich-bich me thoda bohot me uske sath pyar fir 2-3update love story fir shaitan lok pr Vijay ke Baad firse usko vaha ka karobhar Sambhal ne ke liye 1-2 update fir usse vaha ka varis Dena hoga usse shadi karni padegi aur uske liye sex+shadi means = 4-5 update kaise bhi laghi jayege so total apko14-19 ke aas-pas update dene hoge. Aur muze nahi lagta ap shaitan lok pr Vijay ke Baad story khatam karege apne uske baad ke liye bhi kuch jarur socha hoga so I'll prefer shaitan ka beta but choice is urs.
2. Bhai ho sake toh plz shadi yadash Jane se pehle niptana nahi toh fir yadash vapas Lani hogi fir jinn lok ki Shakti firse shadi firse shadi ki tayari n all firse sab thoda Lamba jayega bhai ha ye bhi ho sakta hai ki jinn lok ke Shakti ke saath hi yadash vapis aaye ya fir uski yadas jayehi nahi or something totally different. But my point is leeza ko aur mat tadpao yr..

Bhai Mai firse kehta hu agar apne pehle hi kuch socha ho toh ye sab najar andaj karo ap khudhi bahut achi story likhte ho. Ap apne hisabse hi likhna.....
 
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luv4sale696969 said:
बाबाजी, ये जो आप हर अपडेट के ऊपर मेगा अपडेट लिखते हैं वो इस अपडेट को सूट कर रहा है। कुछ पहले के भी अपडेट सच में मेगा ही रहे लेकिन सारे नहीं।
काफी अच्छा अपडेट। लिखते रहिये।
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Hahahhaa theek hai bhai theek hai...
Ab se soch samajh ke mega likhunga...
 
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Malik-18 said:
SUPERB UPDATE BRO...:superb:

MENKA TO HAR JAGAH PAR ROCKY KI LENY PAR TULI HUI HAI
MAIN TO KEHTA HUN ACHA SA MOHRAT DEKH KAR SALI KO PEL DO
DONO MUH BAND HO JEYEN GE PHIR...:mad:

LAGTA HAI AGHORA ABHI BHI PURI TARHAN MUTMIN NAHI HUA
K ROCKY KI ITNI BEWIYAN EK SATH KHUSH REHEIN GI...:hmm:

WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATED....​
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Menka ko agar ekdam se pel diya to story ka maza kirkira ho jayega....kam se kam 2 ladkiyan to bachni hi chahiyen jo story ke end me jakar pyar kabool karen.... Itne aise hi chalne do... Bas maze karte raho...
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Thanks for the Compliment & your beautiful comment.
 
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Awesome Update
Ek Tarf Shadi To Dusri Tarf Yaddasht Jane Kar Katra Dehan Se Mere Bhai.
 
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Rock Alvi said:
Zabardast update bhai magar is ma koi khass masala dar nhi tha jaisa ap keh rahe tha bas is ma menka ka aik do funny scene btaye han
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Sabar ka phal mitha hota hai....
Ab har update thode hi na masaledaar hoga....
Ye update to bas story ko explain karne ke liye tha... Varna aisa lagega ki story bhagi ja rahi hai....
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