Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)
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Sabse pehle to bohot - bohot shukriya itni achchhi comment karne ka...
Kyonki comment ka asli matlab hi ye hota hai ki apne vichaar ya apne dout clear kiye jayen..
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Jaisa ki menka ne bataya ki is jail ke pichhe ek kahani hai jo vo baad me batayegi.. to intzaar kijiye us ghadi ka... Jab menka ur karagaar ka bhed kholegi...
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Ye baat to maine pehle hi saaf kar di thi ki hero ko jab peeta gaya tha karagaar me to uske kapde phat gaye the.. to zagir si baat hai ki hero shirtless hoga..
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Rakshak ka raaz zaroor khulega aadha is aane vale update me or baaki ka aadha kal ke update me..
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Thank you so much for the admiration and your support..
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Bhai abhi to khud ka or doston ka update likhne se fursse fursat nahin milti... Jaise hi free hota hun.. zaroor padhunga...
Pakka vala vada...
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Thank You so much for the admiration and your support yaaron...
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Update -- 55
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Vahan khade log jo ye sab dekh kar kaafi shock me the,
Raja apne sinhasan se uthkar khada ho gaya,
Tabhi sabhi darbari ek awaaz me chillane lage -
"Rakshak aa gaya....Rakshak aa gaya..."
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Raja ne apna hath dikha kar sab ko shant kiya, or vapas apni rajgaddi par baith gaya,
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Raja [Aghora] - Ham maante hain, ki aap rakshak hain, par yahan par niyam or kanoon sab ke liye ek samaan hain, isi liye aapko dand diya jayega.
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Raja ki is baat se saare darbaari shoked ho gaye, or baglen jhaakne lage.
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Main (Vinamrta purvak)- Kintu maharaaj, main to yahan par naya sadasye hun, yahan ke niyam or kanoon ka mujhe kya maloom, main to kal subha hi pehli baar yahan aaya hun.
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Aghora (hairat se)- To tum jinn nahin ho?
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Main - Nahin Maharaaj, main jinn hi hun, kintu bachpan me yahan se privathvi lok par chala gaya tha,
Or main kal hi louta hun,
Mujhe yahan ke niyam or kanoon nahin maloom, jiske phal-sweroop mujhe bandi bana liya gaya.
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Itne me Leeza josh me uth khadi hui
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Leeza (josh me raja se)- Pitaji, jab vo keh rahe hain, ki unse galti anjane me hui hai, to bina galti ke dand kyon?
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Uski baat sunkar sabhi darbariyon me kana-phusi hone lagi.
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Or menka ne leeza ko pakad kar vapas baitha diya.
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Aghora (apne sinhasan se khade hote hue)- Rajkumari, hame aapse ye ummeed nahin thi,
aapne bhare darbaar me hamara apmaan karne ka dussahas kiya hai,
Iske tehet aapko dand diya jayega.
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Raja ki itni kathorta dekhkar sab ki phat ke chaar ho gayi.
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Tabhi bahar se 10-12 sainik bhaagte hue aaye, or bole-
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1 sainik (haafte hue)- Majaraaj, Gazab ho gaya,
Achanak Shaitaan lok ka hamla shuru ho gaya hai,
or ve yudh ke liye seema par khade hain,
or hame lalkaar rahe hain,
is baar vo doguni sena or kaali shaktiyon ke saath aaye hain.
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Aghora (apne chehre par aaye hue paseene saaf karke)- Turant senapati ko yahan bulaao.
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Sainik - jee maharaj.
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Kuchh hi dee baad senapati bhi aa gaya, vo bhi kaafi dara hua tha.
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Senapati - Maharaaj ki jay ho,
Maharaaj, shaitaan lok ne hampar hamla kar diya hai,
or Rajguru ke kahe anusaar rakshak abhi tak nahin aaya hai,
aise to sara jinnlok tabah ho jayega, shaitano ke paas aseem kaali shaktiyan hain, or ham se doguni sena bhi.
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Aghora (Meri or ishara karke)- Rajguru ka kathan satye tha, yahi hai rakshak, vo aa chuka hai.
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Abhi uski baat poori bhi nahin hui thi, ki senapati khushi se uchhal pada or usne mere pair pakad liye.
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Senapti (nam aakhon se)- Aap aa gaye, ham sab ne bohot pritiksha ki hai aapki, ab hame kisi shaitaan lok se darne ki koi zaroorat nahin.
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Aghora (gusse se)- senapati, vo rakshak baad me pehle is sabha me doshi karaar de diya gaya hai.
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Ye baat sunkar Senapti boukhla gaya.
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Senapati (phati aakhon se)- ye aap kya keh rahe hain maharaaj, jiski hame pooja karni chahiye, usko aap doshi bata rahe hain.
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Aghora - Haan bilkul, isne rajkumari ko dekhne ka dussahas kiya hai.
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Main (apne man me)- Ghanta, BC agar ye raja gidgida kar bhi mujhse madad mangega tabh bhi nahin karunga...
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Ye "Doshi" - "Doshi" word baar baar sunkar meri jhaten brown ho gayin.
Or meri aakhen laal surkh ho gayin.
Or main gusse me bola-
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Main (poore gusse me)- Bas! Bohot ho chuka, bohot bezzati kar li aapne meri bhare darbaar me.
Ab apna faisla suna kar mujhe dandit kijiye,
fir mujhe vapas bhi loutna hai...
Meri family mera intzaar kar rahi hai.
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Meri jane ki baat sunkar vahan khade har shaksh ki aakhon me aansu aa gaye, sivaye raja ke.
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Aghora - Tum ne jin aakhon se rajkumaari par nazar daali,
un aakhon ko nikaal liya jaye.. yahi tumhara dand hai.
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Raja ki baat poori hote hi maine leeza ki taraf dekha,
Uska chehra to dhaka hua tha, par uski aakhon se aansu jaari the.
Main uski taraf dekh kar muskura diya,
Tabhi, Kuchh sainik raja ki aagya ka palan karte hue, khanjar lekar meri or bhadne lage,
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Maine unhen hath se rukne ka ishara kiya, or raja se bola-
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Main (raja se)- Maharaaj, agar aapne mere praan bhi maange hote, to main vo bhi de deta, par aap ek nirdosh ko us galti ki zaza se rahe ho, jo usne ki hi nahin, pachhtayenge aap,
Bohot pachhtayenge...
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phir maine ek Daggers (khanjar) ko yaad kiya,
jo turant hi mere hathon me aa gaya
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Maine us Daggers ko ek baar hawa me lehraya.
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Or "JAI MAHAKAL" kehte hue apni apni ek aankh me mara,
dard ke maare meri halat kharaab ho gayi, agar koi normal insaan hota to behosh ho chuka hota, maine us khanjar ko apni aankh ke charon or ghuma ka ek aankh nikaal kar phaink di, or dusri nikaalne laga.
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Vahan khade har shaks ki phati hui thi, vo ye sochkar shock me the, ki koi khud apni aakhen kaise nikaal sakta hai,
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Jaise hi maine apni dusri aankh nikaal kar phainki to kuchh logon ko vomiting shuru ho gayi, or leeza to behosh hi ho gayi thi.
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Apni dono aakhen nikaal kar phainkne ke baad, maine chaku bhi phaink diya, mere hath hi kya, balki aage ka poora shareer khoon se lath-path ho gaya tha.
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Raja bhi meri taraf phati aakhon se dekh raha tha, vo mujhse kuchh kehna chahta tha, magar us wakht main kuchh bhi sunne ke mood me nahin tha.
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Main - Maharaaj, aapke kahe anusaar mujhe mere paapon ka dand mil chuka hai, ab main chalta hun.
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Vo kuchh kehta usse pehle hi maine apne man me ek safe jagah ka socha, or main teleport ho gaya.
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Yahan Mahel me
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Leeza ke behosh ho jane par usko turant mahel me bhej diya gaya.
Or raj-vaidh ko bulva liya gaya.
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Senapati (rote hue)- Maharaaj, ye aapne kya kiya, ab shaitaan lok se hame kon bachayega...
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Raja kuchh bolta usse pehle hi bahar dhamakon ki awaazen aane lagin,
Sath hi logon ke chillane ki
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2 sainik dodte hue aaye, or unme se ek bola-
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Sainik - Maharaaj, shaitaan lok ne apni kaali-shaktiyon se rajye me hamla kar diya hai… rajye me aag baras rahi hai..
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Raja (Senapati se)- senapati turant yudh aarambh karo, or sath hi rajye ke logon ki raksha bhi.
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Senapati "Jee maharaaj" keh kar turant mahel se bahar chala gaya.
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Or is musibat ke chalte darbaar ko kharij kar diya gaya.
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Idhar Meri Taraf
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Mujhe kuchh bhi dikhai nahin de raha tha, ki main kahan par hun, bas itna mehssos zaroor ho gaya tha,
ki main kisi ghar me hun,
or ek naram se bed par, meri shaktiyon ki vajha se mera khoon to ruk gaya tha,
par aakhon ka kuchh pata na tha.
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Tabhi.......
To... Be... Continued
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Bhai jis wakt update finish kiya kya batau intazar nahi ho raha hai...... Nice update bhai