Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)

[Arjun Singh 72]

bhai aap agar mere samne hote na aap ko bhot Marta
aap ki story main pause mushje aacha nahi lagta aap har bar suspense main katam Kar dete ho
aapki story continue read karta rhu man karta hi

 

[Subha]

Uffff... Awesome Update tha bhai ..

Uffffff..Kya dileri dikhayi hai hero ne .. kabil e tarif hai..

Achha To rakshak tha .. Or Maine rakshas padh liya tha isko..
To mere andaza sahi tha raj guru ne pehle hi bawisyawani kar Rakhi thi ki koi Divya purus ayega..

Kaisa bekar raja hai .. Jo madad ke liye aya hai use hi saja dena chahta hai .. hero ki koi galti nahi hai ye to usne clear kar diya hai fir bhi raja ke liye niyam zyada important hai .. leeza ko bada josh aa gaya tha ..bhul gayi thi ki kaha khadi hai

To danwo ne akraman kiya hai jinlok me
Or unse hi raksha karne ke liye hero ka yaha nischay tha.. Rocky bhi kya kya soch raha hai.. pair pakad ke bhi madad mangega to bhi nahi karega ..hahaha

Kya mast scene likha hai bhai .. ufff bata nahi sakta kitna romanchit hai.. Hero ki dileri ke kya kehne.. Apne hi hatho se Khud ki aakhe nikal di .. or ufff tak nahi kiya .. best scene

Danwo ka hamla suru ho gaya hai ..or apne hero ne muh mod liya hai .. Jinlok ki fati padi hai .. Ab raja ko samjh ayega usne kya galti ki hai .. Ab sayad hi Raj guru ke kehne raja hero se maafi mangega or hero ko wapas bulayega.. ya fir sayad raaj guru hi hero se baat karke manaye..

Ab pata nahi hero ne apne aap ko kaha teliport kiya hoga.. safe jagah to kaha hai
.. kisi ke ghar me pohucha bed pe hai . .. or achanak kya hua hoga pata nahi..

Uffff .. Ye Update bahot hi Dhamakedaar thi bhai.. jaisa scene aapne likha hai ..to ab lagta hai fight scene to is baar speechless karne wali hogi..

Great bhai
Keep rocking bhai
Eagerly waiting for the next update

 

[JigsRock]

BaBaji ap thullu to
Apne pas hi rakho yaar update likhneme kam ayega
or ha last update to bahut hi fadu dhamakedar update he ab dekhtte he age kya hota he.....

 

[aks 21]

Bohot hi sandaar update bhai.........!

 

[John Cena]

Hero na to sab ki bolti band kar di is raja ki peecha aik danda da dena chahiye tha sala khud ki phatti padi ha phir bhi saza deni ha is ko
Update is awesome next update ka besabri sa intzar ha

 

[Dark Devil]

Maza aa gya
Awesome update Bhai.
Keep it up.
Waiting for the next update.

 

[Hacker]

Nice

 

[luv4sale696969]

अरे करमजले, आँखें क्यों फुड़वा लीं अपनी। बल्कि खुद ही फोड़ लीं।
हालांकि मेरे को भी और बाकी पाठकों को भी पता है कि तेरे को कुछ भी नहीं होगा लेकिन अभी के लिए तो सूरदास हो गया ना भाई।
Marvelous update....
Waiting for next rocker....

 

[bd sharkar]

Ye acca nehi kiya itna suspence me update khotam kiya..kon kon hey jo aji second update chatey hey???

 

[Blade axel]

jabardasttt update bro. ...