Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)

[Winsam20]

Awesome update bhai waiting for next

 

[Sushant prasad]

Very nice

 

[Aj1980]

कहां हैं भाई
सब ठीक है न भाई अब आप का स्वाथ्य कैसा है

 

[Baba__Bhai]

BHAI MAST UPDATE HAI YAAR...

CHLO PAST TO CLEAR HUA...

TO BHAI MAIN TO KEHTA HOON K GAWN
KA SCENE HI PEHLE CLEAR KRO...KYUN
K AB AP NE PAST CLEAR KIYA HAI JO
GAON K RELATED HAI...TO PHIR AB GAON KI
TRAF HI AO BETTER RAHE GA...BAKI YOU
KNOW BETTER KYA KRNA HAI KYA NAHI

WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE...

ARU BHAI AP K HAAL CHAAL KESE HAIN..
CONDITION KESI HAI AP KI SEHAT KI​

Thanks for the compliment and your support Bhai..
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Or pehle gaw hi chalte hain.. uske liye situation create kar dunga.. kal ke update me...
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Or haal - chaal ekdam mastt hain...
Ab daily update aayenge...

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Once again as usual awesome update..
Priya or manu ko akhir rocky bata he diya apne pariwar ke bareme..
Bohot he ache tarha se darsaya apne flash back ko ek he update mea..
Abi tak toa sirf adhi family ke bareme bataya he..
Mama mausi wala suspense b jald khol deana..
Wait ni hota..
Pehle se he bohot sari chijo ka wait ho raha hea..
Ab rocky apni family ko kaise ek karega dekhne mea majja bohot aayega..
Kahi aisa na ho..
Inki trip gaav ko he chalijaye..
Sakshi ko b sayad aaj pata chal jayega rocky ka sach..
Uske baad uska jo reaction hoga..
Wo dekhne layak hoga..
Ab is akarshan shakti ke aane ke baad jab rocky pallavi se milega toa bichari ka kya hoga..

Bohot kuch hea babaji..
Jald he agla update dena..
Warna aisa na ho ki khyali pulav banati jau or aapki thread par likhti jau..

Keep rocking..

Ʀ Agar main flashback detail me deta to 5-6 updates usi me chale jate...
Isi liye main points clear kar diye..
Or mama - mousi ke baare me gaw jakar hi pata chalega...
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Ʀ aapke guess kaafi had tak theek hain.. jaldi hi aapko gaw le chalte hain..
Itne miliye sakshi se...
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Next update agle aadhe ghante me..
Or main aapki story read kar raha hun.. story mastt ja rahi hai..
Par abhi review comment nahin de pa raha hun.. kyonki itna time nahin mil pa raha hai... Par 1 january se aapko daily comment dunga..
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Thanks for the compliment and your support dear.

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Super mind blowing update hai bhai waiting for next update

Thanks for the compliment yara.
Next update in half an hour

Waiting

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Thanks for the compliment

Waiting

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आप का बेसब्री से इंतज़ार है

Next update in half an hour

Waiting bhai

Next update in half an hour

Aap ki agle update ka intezar rahega bhai... please update...

Next update in half an hour

waiting for the next update

Next update in half an hour

Waiting next update . . .

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Nice going dude...
Keep it up...

Shekhar...

Thanks for the compliment and your support yara.

Awesome update bhai waiting for next

Next update in half an hour

Very nice

Thanks for the compliment
Next update in half an hour

कहां हैं भाई
सब ठीक है न भाई अब आप का स्वाथ्य कैसा है

Sab bhadiya bhai... Bas apne cousin ki shadi ke card baatne gaya tha.. usi me poora din busy tha...
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Next update in half an hour

 

[Jay Sutar]

waiting bhai waiting

 

[Mr.X796]

Thanks for the compliment yara.
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Next update in half an hour

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Update - 29

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EX -
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Sakshi - O.K. handsome, i will be there,
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Or usne haste hue call cut kar diya..
Or mansi & Priya lag gayin uske swagat ki tayyari me...
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NEXT -
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Or main neeche hall me baith kar T.V dekhne laga.. halaki mujhe T.V dekhna pasand to nahin tha.. bas time pass kar raha tha.
Thodi der baad door bell baji, maine jakar gate khola, saamne ek pyara sa chehra tha,
Maine use gale laga liya,
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Main - Are gudiya,
what a present surprise, aaja andar.
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Sheetal (mujhe tight hug karte hue) - Bhai, aaj sunday tha, free thi to socha aapse hi mil aayun.
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Main - Ye to tumne bohot achchha kiya, chalo aao andar.
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Main usse alag hua or usko apne sath andar le aaya.
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Sheetal (man me)- ye aaj kya ho raha hai mere sath, bhai ko dekhkar aaj bhai vaali feelings kyon nahin aa rahin,
Bhai se gale lagte hi unse alag hone ka dil nahin kar raha tha. Mujhe khud par control karna padega.
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Phir vo jakar priya & mansi se gale lag ke mili, or unke sath lunch ki tayyari me lag gayi. Or main wapas T.V dekhne laga,
Mom - dad, Bua - phupa to ja chuke the
Or sham ko hi aane vale the.
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Teeno ladkiyon ne milkar lunch bana liya or mere paas aakar sofe par baith gayin.
Thodi der me fir se doorbell ring hui,
Priya & Mansi bhagi gate kholne,
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Sheetal- Bhai kon aaya hai, jo dono itni utaavli hokar gayi hain gate kholne,
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Main - Tumhari ek or didi hai, or meri friend,
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Sheetal bhi bhagkar gate par pohoch gayi, Priya ne gate khola, saamne Sakshi khadi thi,
Pehle Mansi ne use gale lagaya fir baaki dono ne, or use lekar mere paas aa gayin.
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Main khada ho gaya or use gale laga liya,
Thodi der gale lagane ke baad maine use khud se alag karne ki koshish ki, to usne mujhe or tight hug kar liya.
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Main - Bas ho gaya sakshi, ab hato bhi,
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Sakshi (mere gale lage hue)- Bas thodi der or,
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Uski ye baat sunkar mansi & priya ki aakhen badi - badi ho gayin, or vo mujhe ghoor kar dekhne lagin,
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Main (sakshi ko hilate hue zor se) - Sakshiii,
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Sakshi hosh me aayi or mujhse alag hokar khadi ho gayi, or blush karne lagi,
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Is mahol me sab ke man me alag - alag
Vichaar the,
Mansi (man me) - is sakshi se bhai ka koi chakkar lagta hai.. pata karna padega..
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Priya ki bhi same feeling thi,
or sheetal to ise bohot dino baad milne vala friend ka pyaar samajh rahi thi,
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Shakshi (man me) - Yarr, kya hai is bande me, jo saari college ki ladkiyan iske peechhe bhagti hain,
Uske gale lagte hi meri panty geeli kaise ho gayi, main to control se bahar ho gayi thi, lagta hai mujhe rocky se pyaar ho gaya hai, par iske ghar par mujhe apne - aap par control karna padega.. mouka dekhkar propose zaroor kar dungi aaj hi.
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Phir ham sab baith kar baaten karne lage, or sakshi mere ghar ki tareef karte nahin thak rahi thi,
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Main - waise haveli to tumhari bhi bohot khubsurat hai, (mere muh se achanak nikla)
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Sakshi (choukte hue) - aapko kaise pata ki meri haveli hai.
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Main (baat ko sambhalte hue) - Are tum meri spacial friend ho, or apne friends ki itni jankaari to rakhni padti hai,
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Sakshi - waise aapki girlfriend hai??
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Main - Nahin, kyon?
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Sakshi (haste hue)- Mujhe bana lo.
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Mansi or priya sakshi ko kha jane vali nazron se dekhne lagin, sakshi ne ye notice kar liya..
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Sakshi - I am just joking yarr..
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Sheetal - Bohot yarana lagta hai, (gabbar dialog in "sholay")
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Main - chup kar Basanti.. wo.. mera matlab hai sheetal..
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Sabhi apna pet pakadkar hasne lage
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Main - Well, well, well... Ab lunch ka time ho chuka hai.. khana laga do,
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Meri baat sunkar teeno ladkiyan uthkar hasti hui kitchen ki taraf jane lagin,
To sakshi bhi unke peeche chal di,
Par un teeno ne use vahin baitha diya
Or khud kitchen ki taraf chali gayin..
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Sakshi (mujhse) - To kya socha?
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Main - kis baare me
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Sakshi (smile karte hue)- mujhe girlfriend banane ke baare me..
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Main - nahin yarr, mujhe vo feeling nahin aatin,
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Sakshi (haste hue)- Kyon impotant ho kya??
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Main - Nahin aisi baat nahin hai,
Bas main tumko sabse achchhi friend bana sakta hun, girlfriend nahin?
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Sakshi ka chehra ekdam se utar gaya, or uski avaaz bharra gayi
vo bharraye gale se boli
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Sakshi - Mujhme kya kami hai ?
Kya main khubsurat nahin hun ?
Kya Tumhen pata hai, main tumhare alava kisi ladke se baat tak nahin karti,
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Main - Aisi baat nahin hai.. Sakshi..
Tum bohot khubsurat ho, tumme koi
Kami nahin hai.. par main in sab ke chakkaron me nahin padna chahta.
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Sakshi - or iski vajha??
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Abhi main kuchh bolta uase pehle
mujhe vo teeno hatho me khane ki dishes lati hui dikhai din.
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Main (sakshi se) - is baare me baad me baat karte hain, par tum ye jaan lo ki main tumhen us nazar se nahin dekhta.
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Vo teeno aa gayin or dianing table par khana laga diya..
Or ham sab baithkar lunch enjoy karne lage, or aapas me gup - shup karte hue khana khane lage..
Sakshi ka chehra utar chuka tha,
Vo sabhi baaton ka javaab sirf.. haan - naa me hi de rahi thi..
Or vo jaldi - jaldi khana khakar hame bye karke nikal gayi..
Priya or mansi ne use bohot rokne ki koshish ki par vo nahin ruki.. or chali gayi..
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Uske jane ke baad mansi boli..
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Mansi - Bhai isko kya hua, ekdum se?
Ye aise kaise chali gayi??
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Main - usne mujhe propose kiya,
Or maine mana kar diya, isi liye bura
Maan gayi hogi..
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Priya, Mansi & sheetal teeno hi shoked ho gayin..
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Teeno ek sath - Kyaaaa ??
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Priya - Bhai aapne use sach kyon nahin bataya??
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Main - maine socha abhi iska time nahin aaya hai..
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Sheetal - kaisa sach bhaiyya ??
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Priya or mansi ne use poori baat batai..
Hamari family ke baare me.. sirf is baat ko chhodkar, ki mom dad ki bua ki beti hain..
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Sheetal - Bhai aapko sach bata dena chahiye..tha
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Main - koi baat nahin, kal college me bata dunga..
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Vo teeno bhi maan gayin.. or ham idhar - udhar ki baat karte rahe.. fir sheetal
Bhi apne ghar chali gayi...
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Dad log bhi sham ko vapas aa gaye the..
Or dinner karke main apne room me aa gaya.. mere peechhe - peechhe vo dono bhi aa gayin..
Or ham bed par let gaye.
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Tabhi Mera phone ring hua.. maine uthkar phone uthaya dekha to
Deepali (sakshi ki friend) ka phone tha..
Maine phone pick kiya..
To main shoked ho gaya.. udhar se rone ki aavaz aa rahi thi...
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Main (ghabrakar)- Hello, deepali kya hua??
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Deepali (rote hue)- Rocky ji, jaldi ×××× hospital aa jaiyye, sakshi ne atmahatya karne ki koshish ki hai..
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Main - Main bas 10 minite me pohochta hun.

To ...Be ...Continued ...

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[CG]

kasam se mast dialogue tha - Impotent ho kya

Galat baat hai pyaar mein anakami to Suicide....

ab lagtaa hai sach batana hi padegaaaaaaaaaaa

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