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Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)

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Baba__Bhai

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Aryan said:
nice update bhai.
shakshi ki koi secret pata lgi hai sayad.
abhi to hero trip pe jaega
aur pallvi ka bday bhi hai.
dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.

keep it up babaji
:superb::superb:
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Sakshi ka is story me bohot bada roll hai.. or ye suspance jaldi hi clear karne ki koshish karunga..

Pehle pallavi ka birthday celebrate kar len.. fir chalenge trip pe.

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Baba__Bhai

Baba__Bhai

I am open book, But you have no access to read it.
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Baba__Bhai

Baba__Bhai

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·.·★ R♥I♥S♥H♥U♥ ★·.· said:
Nc update babaji..
Parkar maja aagaya..
Rocky apni dono lovers kam behen ko pyaarse kiss kar jagate he..
SoooooSoo cutee..
Family ke sath trip..
Bohot achaa socha..
Qki kuch updates se toa ghar wale kai gayab he hogaye the..
Par lagtay sirf ye family akele ni jayegi..
Jarur kuch na kuch or hona he..
Sayad sheetal b sath jayegi picnic par..
Maja aayega jab rocky ke dono behene is tisri behen se milegi..
Sakshi ke past me aisa kya dekha yaar jo chounk gaye or hame b suspense mea daal diya..
Its not fair haa..
Ab nxt update tak dimag lagao ki kya baat thi..
Sahi nai kiya aapne hamare sath chalo isse maaf kiya par last mea ek or bomb fod diya pallavi ke dad ko cancer ka batakar..
Abi jaha romance tha waha suspense dala or ab suspense ki jagga emotional kar diya aapne..
Pallavi ki ab rocky kaise help karta or khaskar kal birthday par kya karega dekhne maja aayega..
Ek he update me bohot kuch dea diya sochneko aapne..
Keep rocking babaji..
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Ʀ Maine bhi isi liye ye trip create ki is story me .. ki ghar valon ko time bilkul nahin mil raha hai..hero ke sath spend karne ke liye..

Ʀ Haan ye to aapne theek pehchana ki trip par kuchh nahin balki bohot kuchh hoga..

Ʀ Next update me zaroor mulakat hogi shital ki mansi & priya se.

Ʀ Sakshi bhi is story ki kirdaar hai..
Ye suspance jaldi hi khone ki koshish karunga...

Ʀ Actully, kuchh readers ki request hai ki rocky pallavi ki mom se se romance kare..
to isi liye rocky se inke rishte gehre karane padenge..
To isi liye pallavi ke dad ko cancer karvana pada ...

Ʀ Jaisa ki aapne kaha (Abi jaha romance tha waha suspense dala or ab suspense ki jagga emotional kar diya aapne..)
Bas ye samajh lo readers ko kabhi bhi seedhe - seedhe updates pasand nahin aate.. isi liye karna padta hai.. aap bhi apni story me ye trick azma kar dekho..

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Baba_Balatkari said:
Ʀ Maine bhi isi liye ye trip create ki is story me .. ki ghar valon ko time bilkul nahin mil raha hai..hero ke sath spend karne ke liye..

Ʀ Haan ye to aapne theek pehchana ki trip par kuchh nahin balki bohot kuchh hoga..

Ʀ Next update me zaroor mulakat hogi shital ki mansi & priya se.

Ʀ Sakshi bhi is story ki kirdaar hai..
Ye suspance jaldi hi khone ki koshish karunga...

Ʀ Actully, kuchh readers ki request hai ki rocky pallavi ki mom se se romance kare..
to isi liye rocky se inke rishte gehre karane padenge..
To isi liye pallavi ke dad ko cancer karvana pada ...

Ʀ Jaisa ki aapne kaha (Abi jaha romance tha waha suspense dala or ab suspense ki jagga emotional kar diya aapne..)
Bas ye samajh lo readers ko kabhi bhi seedhe - seedhe updates pasand nahin aate.. isi liye karna padta hai.. aap bhi apni story me ye trick azma kar dekho..

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Thanks for the compliment
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Your beautiful Comment.
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Jarur will try what you said for my story to..
Hope it goes goom n boom like yours.
Will wait for next one..
 
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RAAZ said:
Very nice build up of the story. Ab dekhtay hai ki yah priya kia cheez hain. Boss ek dum mast likh rahay ho. Aur zaroori hota hain story ka flow thoda slow ya fast karna jo ki aap behtreen kar rhay ho.
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Bhai main lambe updates isi liye deta hun ki readers ke sabhi consept clear ho jaayen....
Abhi aap bohot peechhe ho thoda aage aayyiye aapko story ka flow tez hota nazar aayega..
 
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