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Fantasy RISHI the SAVIOR(BEING EVIL)

What you guys think about my this story..


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Hello guys..
Ye meri 2nd thread hea yaha par..
1st thread just friends jisse mene english mea likha tha sayad islli yaha par usse jadda prem na mila jiske chalte muje wo thread band karni pari qki uske sare updates already mene english mea likh diye the..

Khair is story ke baad jarur usse hindi mea subbed kar fir post karumgi qki mea apni pehli he kahani ko adhuri ni chodna chahti..

Ab aate hea is kahani ko likhne ki waja bolo ya prerna..

Par jesa ki mene dekha he yaha par jada magic related story karna pasand karte hea sab..
Toa fir mene b isme apna hath aajmane ka socha..

Par mea batadu ki meri hindi jadda achi ni hea qki suru sea he english lagualan he jada use ki thi bachpan se..
Isliye thori bohot mistake hogu jarur mujse toa jell lena ha plss:wink::wink:..

Mea pichle kuch dino se is story ke plot ke bareme soch rahi thi..
Par kuch khass idea he ni aaya..

Tab mere friend jinki yaha ek story already chal rahi hea unhone kaha ki mea pehlea kuch stories read karu fir muje kaise or kya likhna he uska idea aayega..

Fir kya tha hogai suru..
2 din mea mene bohot sari stories pari jiski links mere dost ne he muje bejithi..

Jisse muje ye toa pata chal gaya ki yaha par magic ke sath sath adultery incest romance agar ye sab ho story mea toa almost sabi reader's usse parna pasand karengea..

Mea pehlea toa upar likhe prefixes ki story parna b pasand ni karti thi..
Par jab mene meri family mera goan or mea,dil ka rista,chehek ta chirag,aise b or b links he par mene abi tak ye 3 he pari hea...

Ye muje kafi achi lagi..
Bhale he inka content extraordinary tha par usme b inke writers ki mehnat saaf dikhai deti thi..
Isliye mene b socha ki ek try karti hu..
Achi hui or aap sabi ko pasand aai toa tk warna waise b muje kisise farak ni parta:nana::nana:(joking)..

Toa fir jada bor na karte huye shuru karti hu meri story..

RISHI THE SAVIOR(BEING EVIL)..

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ab isse acha naam muje ni suja..
Agar app logo ke pass koi suggestion ho toa jarur dena..

N koi acha cover ho toa b aap muje pm me suggest kar sakte ho..

Or batadu ki mea ye story me jitna hosake aaplogon pasand aaye wo content likne ki puri kosis karungi..


Or yaha agar kisiko index banana aata he toa pls pm me..

INTRODUCTION jald he post hoga..
 
INDEX

Credit goes to Aayush(warrior boy
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Thnx for the index..


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INTRODUCTION

(AARTIS FAMILY)

{Yaha par mea jinka b introduction dungi unka relation hero ke sath kya hoga uss hisabhse jaise ki}

Nanaji - ARUNLAL RAJAWAT
{Hero ko chor imp character ke he male pics dalungi}
(Inka mumbai mea bohot bara business hea diamond ka or ye pure state mea top business mans mea aate hea.
He toa ye b Raj pariwar se he par inke pitaji
ne wo sab chor mumbai aagaye the..
Q ye aage bataungi
Bohot he sulje huye inshan he ye..
Or apne tino betiyo se bohot pyaar karte hea khaskar aarti se..
Or uske jane ke baad se he inka bartav thora sakt hochuka hea..
Par aaj b ye aarti ko bohot yaad karte hea or veer bahadur ko apna dushman mante hea)

Naniji - SHUSILA DEVI.
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(Ye behad he shant or khush mizaz he..
YE hamesa apne pariwar khush dekhna chahti hea..
Chahe iske liye inhe kuch b karna pare..
Ye b apni betiyo par jaan deti hea..
Or usse yaad kar kabi kabi apne kamre mea beth roti b hea)

Badi masi - ARCHANA RUHIA
Age 38
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(Shadi ho chuki he inki or ye apne pati ke sath rajasthan mea rehti hea..
Inke sar yoga ka bhut sawar hea..
Or issi wajase ye kafi fit or attaractive b hea..
Inke pati RAHUL RUHIA rajasthan ke janemane imdustrialist hea
Naam rutba sab he inke pass bas kami hea toa ek bache ki..
Q aage batungi)

2nd Badi masi - ARUNA RAICHAND
Age 34
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(Ye or aarti dono judwa he bas inke bich 10 seconds ka fasla tha..
Dono behene 2 dil ek jaan jaise rehti thi..
Par uparwale ko inka pyaar na bhaya isliye aaj aruna aarti se itni nafrat karti hea jitni sayad he koi karsakta ho apni he behen se..
Q ye b aage bataungi..
Inhe modelling ka bhut sawar tha ek samay isliye kafi modern hea..
Or open minded b..
N haa ye b aarti ke tarha he pregnant hea..
Inke pati ka naam ROHIT RAICHAND hea..
Ye mumbai ke jane mane business man ke sath sath bohot khatarnak or vaishi kisam ka insan hea..
Aisha koi galat kaam ni hoga jo ye ni karta hoga..
Par iski ek khubi hea chahe kitne b galat kaam ho iske karta sab kuch legally he hea..
Or toa or inka usul hea ki galat ke sath bohot galat or sahi ke sath bohot toa nai par thora he sahi par sahi jarur karega..
Inka character samajna thora muskil hoga..
Isliye ham ye waqt par chor dete hea..
Ha par itna jarur bata deti hu ki ye kafi important character hea..)

Mom -Aarti singh
Age 34

Ye b modern hea par sath he sath apne sanskaro se b judi hui hea..
N aksar judwao mea ye aam baat hoti hea ki dono ka behaviour kuch chijo mea opposite ho or aarti or aruna mea b yahi baat thi..
Aarti kafi sulji hui hea or apne pati ko or apne bhai raamu ko apna sab kuch manti hea..
Manti toa ye apni judwa behen ko b bohot thi par aaj inhe b unse nafrat hea bohot..
Ab inke bareme jada toa aage he bataungi warna majja nai aayega parne mea..
Ha par itna jarur batadu indono beheno ki ladai ya jagra kah sakte hea kafi ehmiyat rakhta hea story ke liye..
N q ye b aage hea bataungi..)

Ab hero ke dad ka joki aarti ke pati RAAJ BAHADUR SINGH
Unka intro unki family ke sath he dungi..
Filal ke liye itna he bas he ki wo aarti ke pati hea n hero ke dad..
 
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:hmm: ap ke pahali stori maynay dhaykhi thi dusri side par..
Lekin tori bohat english toh sb par or likh laytay hain bt zada stories ko hindi may he parna pasand kartay hain..
Or acha laga ap nay new or hindi may stori start ke..
:thanks: :thanks: or rahi bat mistake ke toh wo sb say hoti hai har kisi ka likhnay ka andaz diffrant hota hai..
:hmm: ap ko farak parna bhe nahi chahiay qk in he readers may say kuch aysay bhe hotay hain k wo aglay ko :discourage: karnay ke koshish kartay hain..
Lekin ap ko jo pasand ho wohi likhay humari best wishes ap k sath hain..
Or :waiting: :waiting: update no.1
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:congrats: :congrats: :congrats: for new thread..
:hmm: ap ke pahali stori maynay dhaykhi thi dusri side par..
Lekin tori bohat english toh sb par or likh laytay hain bt zada stories ko hindi may he parna pasand kartay hain..
Or acha laga ap nay new or hindi may stori start ke..
:thanks: :thanks: or rahi bat mistake ke toh wo sb say hoti hai har kisi ka likhnay ka andaz diffrant hota hai..
:hmm: ap ko farak parna bhe nahi chahiay qk in he readers may say kuch aysay bhe hotay hain k wo aglay ko :discourage: karnay ke koshish kartay hain..
Lekin ap ko jo pasand ho wohi likhay humari best wishes ap k sath hain..
Or :waiting: :waiting: update no.1
:thanks: :party: :party: :party: :) :)
Thnx for ur wishes:hi::hi:..
Bas aise he support karte raho toa aage ka safar b shuhana hoga..
Hope further story also will loved by you:peace::peace:..

Keep commenting:poet::poet:..
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