Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

[Aryanv]

Update - 45

ab tak aapne dekha......Abhi aur A1 ek ho gaye...........
Mahaguru ki mukti....
aur kisi ki pukar dil mein sunkar kahin pahunchna....

ab aage.......

Abhi ne jaise hi saamne dekha toh uske dil mein ek dard sa utha aur aankhon mein aansoo...

Saamne Rimpy thi .........hospital k ICU mein ventilator par ......usski body se connected machines ......ki dhimi aawaj aur dhire dhire chal rahi saanse

aur Rimpy k dil mein abhi k naam ki pukar.....

Abhi uss pukar ko sun sak raha tha...

Abhi aage bada aur aur Rimpy k haatho ko ko chua ....usse haatho mein lagi Saline ki suiya bhi aur badan par jagah pattiyan .....bandhi thi....

jaise hi Abhi k haath ki ungliyan ne Rimpy k haatho ungliyo ko chua.....
toh usske haatho mein halki si harkat hone lagi.....aur band aankhon k kone se aansoo ki bunde.....

Abhi - Sweetu utho na baby.....dekho tumahara abhi tumahare saamne khada hai......utho na jaan ......kya hua ....tumhe .....sorry na jaan .....yaha tum iss halat mein ho.....aur muzhe pata bhi nahi chala .....

Abhi Rimpy ka haath pakadkar Rone laga.....tabhi Rimpy ne bhi usska haath pakad liya ...jaise kah rahi ho ....

k abhi mat ro na tera dard muzhe aur takleef de raha hai...

abhi bhi Rimpy ki aankhien band thi

(Kabhi Kabhi dukh ki adhikta mein hum apni shaktiyon ko bhul jaate hai,
haal humare paas hota hai , lekin hum samaz hi nahi paate hai )

Abhi Rimpy ka haath pakade ro raha tha....tabhi bhiter se A1 ki aawaj aayi

kyu bhai bhul gaya apni shakti ko bhul gaya ....jaldi kar abhi bhi samay hai..

A1 ki aawaj se Abhi shant ho gaya
Aur ab apne panch tatwo ki urja ko apne haato mein laakar Rimpy k maathe par rakha ....dheere Rimpy k ghav bharne lage ....sanse normal hone lagi ....aur ussko hosh aanalaga.

Tabhi ward k door khulne ki aawaj aayi ..toh Abhi teleport hokar hospital k ek kone mein aagaya.....aur waha se chalkar .....icu ward k bahar pahuncha

waha ek chair par Khemraj ji sir par haath rakhe baithe the unki aankhon se niranter aansoo bah rahe the...

Abhi ne unke paas jaakar unke kandhe par haath rakha toh unhone jab abhi ko apne saamne khada dekha ....toh unke sabar ka baadh tut gaya

abhi ko gale lagakar fut fut kar rone lge.......beta dekho na kya ho gaya...
yahi ek mere jeene ka sahara tha ab ..

mein - Uncle kuch nahi hoga Rimpy ko woh thik ho jaayegi.....

Khemraj - kaise thik hogi ...beta ....Docter kah raha tha.....ki ...ab bas kuch sannnsein hi bachi hi ...mere bacchi ki.......
Abhi ....tum ..toh usse ...pyar ..karte ..ho...na..muzhe pata.hai ......tum ..usse pukar k dekho....shayad ...meri bacchi ko hish aajaye.....

mein - Uncle ....Rimpy thik hai....jab tak merii sannse chal rahi hai..ussko kuch nahi ho sakta...

aur yaha jab doctor nurse k saath aaya toh hairan ho gaya....Rimpy ko hosh aagaya tha.....woh Oxygen mask aur saline ki needles nikalkar bed bed par baithi idhar udahar dekh rahi thi..

aur Abhi ko pukar rahi thi.......yeh Dekhkar toh doctor aur nurse ki haalat baal nochne jaisi ho gayi.....

Abhi yaha Rimpy k dad ko chup kara raha tha k tabhi nurse ward k bahar daudte hue aayi.......aur Rimpy k dad k saamne pahunch kar haanfne lagi ..

nurse - Sir.....jaldi chaliye.....Aapki beti.....ko...hosh aagaya hai.....

Nurse ki baat sunkar ...khemraj bhi daudkar ward k ander pahunch gaye

aur aAbhi bhi piche piche...

andar pahunch kar jab khemraj ji ne apni beti ko baithe hue dekha toh unhone ne daukar usse gale laga liya

ohh ..meri bacchi...bhagwan tera lakh lakh shukr hai jo tune meri bacchi muzhe lauta di....

Rimpy ki nazar jaise hi abhi par padi toh woh apne dad ko chodkar daudkar Abhi k paas pahunchi aur usse kas kar gale laga liye...

Abhiii tum thik toh ho na......aur woh tv par ....dikha rahe the k ...
aur phir abhi k shari ko chukar dekhte hue.....kahi chit toh nahi lagi....

mein - bas ....sweetu bas...dekho mein thik hu...kuch nahi hua muzhe

lekin tumne toh muzhe chodkar jaane ka irada kar liya tha....

phir se Rimpy ne abhi ko gale laga liya aur dhire se kaan mein boli Happy Birthday babu...

mein - Happy Birthday sweetu....
bas karo dekho Doc ..nurse aur Uncle kaise ghur ghur ka dekh rahe hai....

Rimpy hat gayi aur sharmakar apne muh niche kar k khadi ho gayi ...

Khemraj - Beta lagta hai ab humari beti parayi ho gayi hai

Rimpy - sharmakar ....Dad...aisa kyu bol rahe ho ....

aur khemraj ji ne phir haste hue gale lagakar .....dekho toh sharam se kaise lal ho gayi hai...

doc aur nurse abhi bhi shock mein the
unko samaz nahi aaraha tha k ...

jiski haddiya kai jagah se tut gayi thi
aur saare jism par kakham the...
jisse woh dead declare karne ki soch rahe the .....woh bilkul thik jaise ki kuch hua hi nahi....

abhi Rimpy aur usske dad baat kar rahe the ...tab tak maine doc aur nurse k mind ko control karte hue yeh baat unke dimag se nikal di.....

Khemraj ji bhi hairan the....lekin unke liye unki beti jayada mayne rakhti thi

Doc - sir aaye Aapki beti ko aap leja sakte hai ...aaiye mein abhi discharge paper banwakar deta hu...

Doc ki baat sunkar Rimpy k Dad usske
saath chale gaye ,..aur waha rah gaye Rimpy aur mein .....

Mein - yeh sab kaise hua jaan ....

Rimpy - mein apni frd k saath ek cafe mein gayi thi ....tabhi waha tv par tumahare ghayal hone ki news dekhi

toh mein turant tumshare paas aane k liye nikli .....uss samay muzhe tumahre alawa kuch nahi dikh raha tha.....jab mein cafe se bahar aayi toh ek gaadi muzhse takrayi....phir muzhe kuch pata nahi chala ...

mein - pagal hsi tu bikul itna pyar karti ho .....
Rimpy - apni jaan se jyada..

aur maine rimoy ko kamar se pakadke baahon mein bahr liya

Rimpy - Abhiii....

Mein --- shhhhh ...uske hontho par ungli rakhte hue......dono k dil joro se dhadak rahe the......aur saanse takra rahi thi....
Rimpy k maasum chehere ko dehk kar muzhe pyar aaraha tha meri ungli jaise hi uske hontho se toch hui usska sharir kaanp utha.....usske hontho ki naramahat aur tez chalti saanse mere mann mein hulchal paida kar rahi thi ...uuski aankien band hui ......aur hum dono k honth aapas mein mil gaye..

hum dono ek dusre k pyar ko mehsus kar rahe the.....koi vaasna nahi srif pavutra perm tha .....humare honth jab aapas mein mile toh Rimpy ne muzhe aur kas kar pakad liya....dhire dhire humare hontho ne ek dusre ko chum shuru hi kiya tha....

k tabhi hum dono ko jor ka chatka laga ...aur Rimpy ek zhtke se muzhse alag ho gayi...

maune dekga mere gale mein pada
locket lal hogaya tha....

Uff .....Yeh ....bhi ...ab isse bhi mana
hoga....

tabhi uncle waha aaye .....aur phir maine unse sham ko party mein aane ka aur Rimpy ka Birhday saath celebrate karne ka bolkar waha se nikal gaya......aur ghar ki chat par pahunch gaya.....

jab mein niche aaya toh Nilima maasi muzhe chat ki raraf aate hue dikhi

Nilima - kaha gaya tha tu ...pata hai sab kitna pareshan the ...kitne ..der se tuzhe hi dhund rahe hai....aur tu yaha chat par kya ...kar raha tha....

Mein - mann mein --- arre baapre ..yaha toh bawal macha hua hai ...

ab toh kuch bahana banna hoga...aur sab ko shaant karna hoga..

mein - kuch nahi maassi ....woh frnds k ph aarahe the halchal puchne k liye aue room mein network nahi aaraha tha toh chat par chala aaya...

phir niche jaakar sab ko samjhabujhakar apne room mein aaya

abhi k liye itna hi ....
agla update kal.......

Fantastic update

 

[Naik]

Update - 37

ab tak aapne dekha ......
mahaguru ne Naina aur Rimpy
dono ki sahayta se drug ki samasya ka hal nikalne ki aur ishara kiya.....
aur saath hi saath ek yudh ki aur ishara kiya.......

ab aage.........

RVS .........Rimpy ki lab mein Abhi ko lekar pahunch jaata hai ......

RVS - beta ....tumne iss chotti si umar mein adbhut gyan paaya hai.....
aaj tumahare hi ......karan hum iss vinash ko rok paaye hai.......

lekin abhi bhi lakho aise hai jinn tak yeh medicine nahi pahunch paa rahi hai....kya kuch aisa ho sakta hai ki hum unn tak yeh antidote pahuncha sake ...........kya kuch aise gadget hai jo medicine ko affected person tak pahuncha kar inject kar de...

Rimpy - Sir medicine ko carry kar k inject kar ne wale 5 micro robot mere paas hai , jo dikhne mein bilkul honey bee ki tarah hai.....hum unhe computer dwara operate kar k kisi patient tak pahucha sakte hai......

yeh khud kisi patient ko pehchan ke antidote inject nahi kar sakte.....

Abhi - agar innmein koi aise sensor laga de jo aurra ko dekhkar pahchan jaaye ki kaun normal hai kaun patient
toh humara kaam ban sakta hai....

yeh drug logo k dna mein badlav laa raha hai......agar dna mein badlav aaraha hai toh aurra mein bhi change aayega .......

Rimpy - haa yeh ho sakta hai ek normal person aur affected dono k body nikalne wali body heat aur waves mein bahut antar hota hai.......
yes hum yeh kar sakte hai....
lekin sir sirf 5 micro robot se kya hoga
hume toh laakho tak yeh antidote pahunchana hai.....

RVS - tum iss baat ki chinta mat karo
jald hi inn mein woh changes karo ...
Abhi tum bhi Rimpy ko madat karo
muzhe kal subah tak result chahiye

Rimpy aur abhi raat bhar apne kaam mein lage rahe aur tayar ho gaye aise 5 Honey bees robot....

RVS unn 5 robots ko Naina k paas le aaya.....Naina ne apni Nirman shakti
( power of creation) se unn 5 ko 5cr
mein badal diya aur RVS ne unnko har un jagah par pahuncha diya
jaha iss drug ka asar dekha gaya tha

aise hi pura din iss kaam mein lag gaya..
RVS ki poori team bahut khush thi ...
Rimpy aur Abhi bhi bahut khush hue

kai raato se jag kar jis kaam mein lage hue the aakhir woh pura hua....

nayi subah ki aasha k saath woh raat bhi beet gayi..

ek nayi urja k saath savera hua ...

Abhi apne room mein so raha tha....
tabhi aisa laga ki jaise ko koi thande paani ka badal uss par fat gaya ho .......chapak

ohhh ahhh ....baarish ...baarish....
karke chillate hue utha ........toh dekhta hai k poora gila ho chuka tha
aur saamne khilkhilati hue Addu haath mein khali balti liye hue....

Addu - ha..ha....hi....hi...hi..bhai....
.......Happy Holi .....hi...hi..hi

mein - Addu ki bacchi ....tu.....toh ruk jaa abhi.....batata hu ...tuzhe holi....
aur bed se uthkar addu ko pakadne k liye dauda.... woh wahi balti chodkar room mein idhar udhar bhaagne lagi...
aur abhi usske piche....

Addu - hi..hi..bhai ...muzhe nahi pakad sakte ......

mein - accha bacchu ..muzhe challenge.....tu ..ruk ab...

aur phir meine addu ko pakad liya aur uske pet mein gudguli karne laga...

woh ...hiiii....hiii...nahiii...hiii.hhhhi
bhai ...chod...do..na....

mein - bahut shaitan ho gayi hai tu gudiya......aise koi uthata hai...
dekho muzhe poora gila kar diya

tabhi mein apne bed k side table par pade hue paani k jug ko uthane k liye muda ......gudiya haath se chutkar door ki taraf bhagi.....aur maine uss jag ka paani uski aur phenka ...lekin tab tak....woh door khol chuki...thi
aur ....chapak.......
saamne Ritu di thi ...jo muzhe uthane aa rahi thi......achanak paani girne se
di bhi hadbada gayi ...

Di - Betu yeh kya chal raha hai yaha
.....subah subah paani se bhiga diye

mein - nahi di ....yeh ..addu ..ne pahle muzhpar paani phenka tha ......isiliye

lekin aap bich mein aagayi....

Di - koi baat nahi betu tum dono ruko muzhe kuch baat karni hai....mein wasroom se hokar aayi.......

di washroom mein chali gayi ...

mein - dekh ...gudiya tere wajah se di
bhig gayi.....

Addu - sorry bhai.....woh aap itne dino se mile nahi ......aur jab mein yaha aayi toh aap soye the....maine aapko aawaj bhi di lekin aap toh uthe hi nahi
isiliye...

Mein - ohh....meri pyari gudiya....mein kaise tuzhe bhul sakta hu ..woh toh mein kaam mein bahut busy tha beta
sorry...mera baccha..

aur mein kaan pakadke niche baith gaya ...toh gudiya bhi uchakar meri goad mein baith gayi aur gale laga liya

tabhi washroom ka darwaja khula aur di haath mein balti lekar.....

hum ne jaise hi dekha hum jaldi khade ho gaye....aur jaise hi door par pahuche ....tabhi mom aagayi aur idhar di ne tab tak paani ka war kar diya tha ...hum jaldi se niche baithe

aur ....chapak........aur mom poori bhig gayi..... yeh sab itne jaldi hua k mom ko kuch samaz hi nahi aaya...

mom - Ritu yeh sab kya hai....kya haalt kar di hai room ki......
tum se aisi ummid nahi thi .....

mein - sorry mom issmein didu ki koi galti nahi hai.....aap unhe mat daato

Addu -- nahi mom yeh meri...

Mom - chup ho jao sab ab ek dusre ki vakalat karna band karo.....aur meri baat suno......aaj hum sab gaon jaa rahe hai.......jaldi se ready ho jaao...

gaon ka naam sunkar hum khush ho gaye ....

yaha RVS apne family ko saath lekar Gaon pahuncha Abhi ..addu ..aur Ritu
apne Dada daadi se milkar bahut khush hue......gaon k khet pahad aur nadi mein sab ne khub enjoy kiya

innhe yahi chodte hai dekhte hai aashram mein kya ho raha hai....

Aashram k sarover k kinare A1 aur shalu baithe hue baatein kar rahe the

Shalu - Abhi tum itne din muzhse dur rahe.....tumhe pata hai....k yeh din kaise gujare hai.......pata nahi kyu ek din bhi tumhe na dekhu toh jeewan niras sa lagne lagta hai......kya tune muzhe kabhi yaad kiya tha....

mein - nahi....

Shalu - isska arth yeh hai k mein hi pagal hu ....tumahare hriday mein mere liye koi prem hi nahi hai...

aur uski aankon mein aansoo aagaye

mein uske aasoon pochte hue----
sach mein Shalu tum pagal ho.......yaad usse kiya jaata hai jise hum kabhi kabhi bhul jaate hai.......
aur tum toh meri prerna ho tumhe kaise bhul sakta hu ....aur phir shalu ko maine gale laga liya.......

tabhi mere gale mein pada locket garam hone laga jisse shalu ko chatka laga ......toh alag hote hue...

Shalu - ohh .....yrh kya hai tumahare gale mein .....garam ....issne toh muzhe jala hi diya.......

ab mein usse kya batata .....

kuch nahi ....yeh toh bas......

Tabhi CT ki aawaj se hum dono ka dhyan uss taraf gaya

CT - Tum dono ka ho gaya ho toh ....
jaldi chali .....gurudev ne bulaya hai

utna kahkar woh chala gaya....

hum bhi waha se uthkar chal diye ..

Guru dev shivalaya k prangan mein aasan par baithe the aur waha par mere sabhi mitr aur shikshak khade the

Mahaguru - baccho ab tumahari shiksha ka pahla charan samapt hua

ab tum sab ko ek yudh mein bhag lena hoga......issko tum pariksha bhi samaz sakte ho .......

yeh pariksha unhi k liye hai jo astra vidya , 5 tatvo ki vidya ka abhyas kar rahe the.....

aaj tum sab apni apni vidhya ka acche se abhyas kar lo......

kal hoga tumahara saamna ....
yeh jaan lo k yeh yudh bada bhyankar hoga ...kai kathinayi aayegi......mrityu ka bhay bhi hoga.......
tumhe usse bhaybhit nahi hona hai

yeh yuddh sansar ki raksha k liye hai
aage chalkar tumhe jis uddyshya ko paana hai uske liye toh bas yeh ek shuruwat hai.....
apne aap par aur apni vidya par vishwas rakho........
aap mein se yaadi koi aisa hai ki jisse sansar se jyada apne jiwan ki chinta hai toh abhi bata de.........

yaha unhi ko chun kar laaya gaya hai.
jinki aage chalkar ek bahut bade uddesya ko poora karne mein bhumika hogi........

mrityu se bhaybhit hone walo ka yaha kaam nahi .......
aur waise bhi - shastra kahta hai

Mrityur janmata viram dehen saha jaayate...

har prani ki mrityu usske janm ke saath hi nirdharit ho jaati hai

issiliye jeewan woh hi hai jo sansaar k kasm aaye....

Maha guru ki baate sunkar muzhe kisi bahut bade yudh ka aabhas ho raha tha.........saare waha khade shishyo k mann mein mahaguru k baato se urja si bhar gayi thi sab ek swar se tayar ho gaye.....aur apne apne kala ko aur tez bannane l liye abhyas mein jut gaye......

abhi k liye itna hi....
agla update jald hi......

Awesome update brother

 

[Vickey1211]

Waiting

 

[Naik]

Update - 43

ab tak aapne Flash back mein
Abhi k purva janm se lekar ab tak ka safar dekha....

ab aage.....

mein ab thik tha mom mere pass hi baithi thi.......aur Dad Discharge papers ki formality dekhne gaye the

waise toh hume inn sab formalities ki koi jarurat nahi thi........lekin dad niyam k bade pakke the......aur mere liye sab kuch khud karna chah rahe the.....

Meri nazare darwaje par thi ....kisi ka intezar mein .......sab rishtedar yar dost .......aaye ...lekin woh kyu nahi aayi.....mere dil ki dhadkan Rimpy

maine mom ko baar baar pucha lekin woh bhi baat taal rahi thi .....

mein soch mein gum tha......kaha ho jaan ......kya ab tumhe muzse pyar nahi raha.......yaa tumhe mere baare mein pata hi chal........jaane kyu
usska khayal aate hi dil ghabra raha hai.........Rimpy ......aakhir ..kyu...
nahi aayi...,.

aur meri aankhon se do bund aansoo ki nikal hi aayi ....jo mom ne dekh li

uff yeh kambakhat aansoo.......

Ansoo bata dete hai haalat dil ke
Chahe koi baitha ho bich mehfil ke

mom - Kya baata hai betu........

maine mom ki tarf dekha toh woh bhi mere dil ka haal samaz gayi....

mom - Rimpy aajayegi beta......kahi out of town gayi hogi........tu kyu itna dukhi ho raha hai.......tera yeh dard mein nahi drkh sakti beta...

aur mom ne muzhe gale laga liya...
aur yeh nigode aansoo beh chale...

mein - toh kyu nahi muzhe sach batati ho maa.....main jaanta hu aap jarur muzhse kuch chipa rahi ho

mom mere ansoo pochte hue...

chup ab ....tuzhe meri kasam hai....

mein bhi kya karta....

tabhi Dad bhi aagaye aur hum chal pade ghar ki aur.....

Jaise hum Gadi ghar k gate k ander pahunch se maine dekha
ki pura Ghar phulon se sajaya gaya tha.......Gate se lekar Ghar tak ....

Hum abhi ander jaate k Main door par
Ritu di Aarti ki thali liye khadi thi aur unke pichhe khada tha poora parwar

Mein - yeh asb kya hai didu ........iss sab ki kya jarurat thi

Di - chup .....chup chap khada rah....

Di ne aarti utari aur tilak lagaya...

Ander aate hi maine dadu k pair chue toh unhone khande se pakadkar uthaya ......bas kar mere bacche....

aur gale laga lya....phir dadi k pair chune hi wala tha toh dadi ne rok diye aur mere sir par pyar se haath pherne lagi......arre beta rahne de ......kitno k pair chuega .........

Vinay chacha se mila ......gale lag jaa beta yeh business k chakar mein tuhse milna hi nahi ho raha tha

Tabhi aawaj aayi....Shushila chachi ki

arre hum bhi hai line mein.....
abhi chachi se milta......Payal di , aur Sonu aage aayi aur mere gale lag gayi

chachi - are ..arre ..tum dono bhi na

mein - chachi milne do na ....aaj kitne di baad dekha hai di ko.....

dono alag hui phir chachi se bhi mila
tabhi dekha chachi k piche ek Gudiya
jaisi bacchi haath mein rose liye khadi hai ...aur chup chup kar dekh rahi hai

mein - arre chachi aapne apne piche kis angel ko chupaya hai....

Chachi - arre Sonu kyu aise chup rahi hai.........tabhi toh bol rahi thi ..bhai ko rose dungi ......ab

mein - Chachi .....meri angel ko koi kuch nahi bolega , aur mein niche baith gaya......arre meri pyari angel
apne bhaiya se nahi milogi....

Sonu apni mom ko dekhti hai phir mre paas aati hai .....rose aage karte hue
welcme bhaiya.....

mein uske chote chote haato se rose lekar usse godh mein utha leta hu

aur usske gaal par kiss kar deta hu...

toh woh muzhe dekhkar muskurane lagti hai......

chachi - arre Sona tum toh kisi ko kissi nahi karne nahi deti thi ...aur ab dekho.....

tabhi maine dekha ki Addu aur Pari Sona ko gusse se dekh rahi rahi

mein - arre kya hua Pari addu sirf dekti hi rahogi bhai se nahi milogi

Sharmishta bua - aare beta aise kab tak sabse milta rahe ga tu aaram se baith jaa aur sabhi mil lenge

mein sofe par baith gaya meri ek taraf pari ek taraf Addu ..aur godh mein Sona....

Nirali bua - dekho toh terno maharaniya kaise baithi hai......

Sona -Bua mein mahalaani nahi Shona hu .....aur ghur k bua ko dekhne lagi.....sabhi uski maasumiyat dekhkar hasne lage

phir ek karke sabse mila...

Sunita aur Nilima maasi ....Satish aur Raju mama.....Sarmishtha aur Nirali bua....aur sabhi baccha party...

Mom - Bas ...bas....chodo ab sab Abhi ko ....betu jaa abhi rest karo....thodi der phir fresh hokar aana...

mein - Mom mein thik hu ab ........
rest kar kar k thak gaya.....

mom - bola na ......jaao toh...

main bhi phir apne room mein chala aaya....

Room mein aakar bed par baitha ....ki phir Rimpy ki yaad aane lagi.....

maine socha call kar k dekta hu......
lekin mera ph bhi mere paas nahi tha

tabhi di mere room mein aayi ...aur mere cellph de gayi...

maine phir Rimpy ko call lagaya toh switch off aaraha tha.....

phir maine Uncle
(Rimpy k dad, Khemraj Singh)
ab HM nahi gai...... ko call lagaya..lekin unka bhi number not reachable aaraha rha....

toh mein bed par let gaya aur sochte sochte na jaane kab nind aagayi ...

tabhi meri nind Ph ring se khuli , jab maine dekha Toh Addu aur Pari dono taraf se pakadkar soyi hui thi.......

maine call receive ki aur bed se uthkar balcony mein aagaya.....

Rinku ka call tha ......hllo kya haal hai .......dost....main ..hospital mein aaya tha yr lekin uss time tu soya tha....

mein - Woh sab chod Yeh bata ...Rimpy k baare mein kuch pata hai

Rinku - Nahi yr do din se woh bhi college nahi aarahi hai......

tabhi Nilima maasi Lunch k liye bulaane aayi......aur hum maine Addu aur pari ko uthaya aur Lunch karne chala gaya......

Dinnig Table par sabhi baccha party shor macha rahi thi.....mere dono taraf ki chair par Addu Aur pari baithi thi ......aaj sab kuch meri pasand ka bana hua tha.......maine khana shuru kiya hi tha k dekha pari aur Addu nahi kha rahi thi ......

mein kya hua ...gudiya khana kyu nahi kha rahi ho ....

Addu - muzhe aapke haatho se khana hai ......
pari .....muzhe bhi.....

Ritu di - Addu yeh kya hai yadi betu tum dono ko khilayega toh khud kab
khayega.....

pari - Hum khilayenge bhai ko...

aise hi ek dusre ko khilate hue lunch khatam hua...

Dad k frnds .......mom ki frnds ....Bahut logo se milte milte woh din aise hi beet gaya......

Raat ko bed par lete lete ......apni life k baare ..mein sochne laga......

aise hi sochte sochte raat k 12 baj gaye.....ab mera dhyan baar bssr mobile ki taraf jaa raha tha ...ki na jasne kab Rimpy ki call aaye....

mere har Birthday par raat 12 baje hum dono ek dusre ko wish karte the

jab call nahi asyi toh maine usse ph karne laga lekin wahi switch off...

tabhi mere door par knock hua ...

aur mein darwaja kholne chala gaya ..

jaise hi door khola toh sabhi baccha party k saath...Dad ....mom aur ..Ritu ..di....khade the

aur sabse aage Aadu pane haath mein Cake lekar.....

Happy Birthday to you
Happy Birthday to you
Happy Birthday to dear Abhi
Happy Birthday to you

Sabhi ne muzhe Birthday wish kiya
Maine Bhi Mom Dad ka aashirwad liya

Ritu di ne bhi wish kiya aur gale lagaya ...Aur ek chota se box meri tarf badate hue .........yeh chota sa pyara se gift meri taraf se....mera betu

aur phir mere bed Room mein hi cake kaata Aur sabko khilaya...

phir sab baccho ne cake muzhe khilaya......khilaya kya.....cake se mera poori muh hi bhar diya...

Mom - arre.....arre..arre hato sab yeh kya betu ka saara muh bhar diya....

cahlo chalo sb abhi bahut raat ho gayi
betu tu bhi fresh hokar soo ja ab

phir sab chale gaye lekin Addu ..Pari ..
aur Sona toh jaane ko hi tayyar nahi thi.........

mein bhi fresh hokar aagaya aur let gaya addu aur pri aur sona k saath so gaya......

abhi k liye itna hi....
agla update jald hi.....

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[Naik]

Update - 45

ab tak aapne dekha......Abhi aur A1 ek ho gaye...........
Mahaguru ki mukti....
aur kisi ki pukar dil mein sunkar kahin pahunchna....

ab aage.......

Abhi ne jaise hi saamne dekha toh uske dil mein ek dard sa utha aur aankhon mein aansoo...

Saamne Rimpy thi .........hospital k ICU mein ventilator par ......usski body se connected machines ......ki dhimi aawaj aur dhire dhire chal rahi saanse

aur Rimpy k dil mein abhi k naam ki pukar.....

Abhi uss pukar ko sun sak raha tha...

Abhi aage bada aur aur Rimpy k haatho ko ko chua ....usse haatho mein lagi Saline ki suiya bhi aur badan par jagah pattiyan .....bandhi thi....

jaise hi Abhi k haath ki ungliyan ne Rimpy k haatho ungliyo ko chua.....
toh usske haatho mein halki si harkat hone lagi.....aur band aankhon k kone se aansoo ki bunde.....

Abhi - Sweetu utho na baby.....dekho tumahara abhi tumahare saamne khada hai......utho na jaan ......kya hua ....tumhe .....sorry na jaan .....yaha tum iss halat mein ho.....aur muzhe pata bhi nahi chala .....

Abhi Rimpy ka haath pakadkar Rone laga.....tabhi Rimpy ne bhi usska haath pakad liya ...jaise kah rahi ho ....

k abhi mat ro na tera dard muzhe aur takleef de raha hai...

abhi bhi Rimpy ki aankhien band thi

(Kabhi Kabhi dukh ki adhikta mein hum apni shaktiyon ko bhul jaate hai,
haal humare paas hota hai , lekin hum samaz hi nahi paate hai )

Abhi Rimpy ka haath pakade ro raha tha....tabhi bhiter se A1 ki aawaj aayi

kyu bhai bhul gaya apni shakti ko bhul gaya ....jaldi kar abhi bhi samay hai..

A1 ki aawaj se Abhi shant ho gaya
Aur ab apne panch tatwo ki urja ko apne haato mein laakar Rimpy k maathe par rakha ....dheere Rimpy k ghav bharne lage ....sanse normal hone lagi ....aur ussko hosh aanalaga.

Tabhi ward k door khulne ki aawaj aayi ..toh Abhi teleport hokar hospital k ek kone mein aagaya.....aur waha se chalkar .....icu ward k bahar pahuncha

waha ek chair par Khemraj ji sir par haath rakhe baithe the unki aankhon se niranter aansoo bah rahe the...

Abhi ne unke paas jaakar unke kandhe par haath rakha toh unhone jab abhi ko apne saamne khada dekha ....toh unke sabar ka baadh tut gaya

abhi ko gale lagakar fut fut kar rone lge.......beta dekho na kya ho gaya...
yahi ek mere jeene ka sahara tha ab ..

mein - Uncle kuch nahi hoga Rimpy ko woh thik ho jaayegi.....

Khemraj - kaise thik hogi ...beta ....Docter kah raha tha.....ki ...ab bas kuch sannnsein hi bachi hi ...mere bacchi ki.......
Abhi ....tum ..toh usse ...pyar ..karte ..ho...na..muzhe pata.hai ......tum ..usse pukar k dekho....shayad ...meri bacchi ko hish aajaye.....

mein - Uncle ....Rimpy thik hai....jab tak merii sannse chal rahi hai..ussko kuch nahi ho sakta...

aur yaha jab doctor nurse k saath aaya toh hairan ho gaya....Rimpy ko hosh aagaya tha.....woh Oxygen mask aur saline ki needles nikalkar bed bed par baithi idhar udahar dekh rahi thi..

aur Abhi ko pukar rahi thi.......yeh Dekhkar toh doctor aur nurse ki haalat baal nochne jaisi ho gayi.....

Abhi yaha Rimpy k dad ko chup kara raha tha k tabhi nurse ward k bahar daudte hue aayi.......aur Rimpy k dad k saamne pahunch kar haanfne lagi ..

nurse - Sir.....jaldi chaliye.....Aapki beti.....ko...hosh aagaya hai.....

Nurse ki baat sunkar ...khemraj bhi daudkar ward k ander pahunch gaye

aur aAbhi bhi piche piche...

andar pahunch kar jab khemraj ji ne apni beti ko baithe hue dekha toh unhone ne daukar usse gale laga liya

ohh ..meri bacchi...bhagwan tera lakh lakh shukr hai jo tune meri bacchi muzhe lauta di....

Rimpy ki nazar jaise hi abhi par padi toh woh apne dad ko chodkar daudkar Abhi k paas pahunchi aur usse kas kar gale laga liye...

Abhiii tum thik toh ho na......aur woh tv par ....dikha rahe the k ...
aur phir abhi k shari ko chukar dekhte hue.....kahi chit toh nahi lagi....

mein - bas ....sweetu bas...dekho mein thik hu...kuch nahi hua muzhe

lekin tumne toh muzhe chodkar jaane ka irada kar liya tha....

phir se Rimpy ne abhi ko gale laga liya aur dhire se kaan mein boli Happy Birthday babu...

mein - Happy Birthday sweetu....
bas karo dekho Doc ..nurse aur Uncle kaise ghur ghur ka dekh rahe hai....

Rimpy hat gayi aur sharmakar apne muh niche kar k khadi ho gayi ...

Khemraj - Beta lagta hai ab humari beti parayi ho gayi hai

Rimpy - sharmakar ....Dad...aisa kyu bol rahe ho ....

aur khemraj ji ne phir haste hue gale lagakar .....dekho toh sharam se kaise lal ho gayi hai...

doc aur nurse abhi bhi shock mein the
unko samaz nahi aaraha tha k ...

jiski haddiya kai jagah se tut gayi thi
aur saare jism par kakham the...
jisse woh dead declare karne ki soch rahe the .....woh bilkul thik jaise ki kuch hua hi nahi....

abhi Rimpy aur usske dad baat kar rahe the ...tab tak maine doc aur nurse k mind ko control karte hue yeh baat unke dimag se nikal di.....

Khemraj ji bhi hairan the....lekin unke liye unki beti jayada mayne rakhti thi

Doc - sir aaye Aapki beti ko aap leja sakte hai ...aaiye mein abhi discharge paper banwakar deta hu...

Doc ki baat sunkar Rimpy k Dad usske
saath chale gaye ,..aur waha rah gaye Rimpy aur mein .....

Mein - yeh sab kaise hua jaan ....

Rimpy - mein apni frd k saath ek cafe mein gayi thi ....tabhi waha tv par tumahare ghayal hone ki news dekhi

toh mein turant tumshare paas aane k liye nikli .....uss samay muzhe tumahre alawa kuch nahi dikh raha tha.....jab mein cafe se bahar aayi toh ek gaadi muzhse takrayi....phir muzhe kuch pata nahi chala ...

mein - pagal hsi tu bikul itna pyar karti ho .....
Rimpy - apni jaan se jyada..

aur maine rimoy ko kamar se pakadke baahon mein bahr liya

Rimpy - Abhiii....

Mein --- shhhhh ...uske hontho par ungli rakhte hue......dono k dil joro se dhadak rahe the......aur saanse takra rahi thi....
Rimpy k maasum chehere ko dehk kar muzhe pyar aaraha tha meri ungli jaise hi uske hontho se toch hui usska sharir kaanp utha.....usske hontho ki naramahat aur tez chalti saanse mere mann mein hulchal paida kar rahi thi ...uuski aankien band hui ......aur hum dono k honth aapas mein mil gaye..

hum dono ek dusre k pyar ko mehsus kar rahe the.....koi vaasna nahi srif pavutra perm tha .....humare honth jab aapas mein mile toh Rimpy ne muzhe aur kas kar pakad liya....dhire dhire humare hontho ne ek dusre ko chum shuru hi kiya tha....

k tabhi hum dono ko jor ka chatka laga ...aur Rimpy ek zhtke se muzhse alag ho gayi...

maune dekga mere gale mein pada
locket lal hogaya tha....

Uff .....Yeh ....bhi ...ab isse bhi mana
hoga....

tabhi uncle waha aaye .....aur phir maine unse sham ko party mein aane ka aur Rimpy ka Birhday saath celebrate karne ka bolkar waha se nikal gaya......aur ghar ki chat par pahunch gaya.....

jab mein niche aaya toh Nilima maasi muzhe chat ki raraf aate hue dikhi

Nilima - kaha gaya tha tu ...pata hai sab kitna pareshan the ...kitne ..der se tuzhe hi dhund rahe hai....aur tu yaha chat par kya ...kar raha tha....

Mein - mann mein --- arre baapre ..yaha toh bawal macha hua hai ...

ab toh kuch bahana banna hoga...aur sab ko shaant karna hoga..

mein - kuch nahi maassi ....woh frnds k ph aarahe the halchal puchne k liye aue room mein network nahi aaraha tha toh chat par chala aaya...

phir niche jaakar sab ko samjhabujhakar apne room mein aaya

abhi k liye itna hi ....
agla update kal.......

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[abhi1008]

Update - 46

ab tak aapne dekha ki kaise Abhi ne Rimpy ko bachaya

ab aage.....

Phir mein apne room mein aakar ready hua .......didu hi mere har birthday par mere liye kapde select karti thi.....

Phir hum sab Shiv Mandir pahunche...
Mandir par bhi tayariya jor shor se chal rahi thi.....ek aur yagya shala thi
toh ek aur Bhadar ghar (kitchen) jaha bhandare ka prasad tayar ho raha tha.

Mandir k charo aur Gopuram ( patther ki prachin kalakari se bane dwar)

Yeh Shiv mandir Humare purvajo ne banaya tha ....jo Dakshin bhartiya shilpkala ka adbhut namuna tha...

Aur Mandir par vishal Swarn Kalash
usski shobha bada raha tha...

Aur bhiter Garbhgriha mein Vishal Shivlinga.......

Pujari ji ne Mere haatho Bhagwan ka Rudraabhishek karaya....

phir hum yagya shala k aur bade hi the koi muzhse takarai.......woh girne hi wali thi k maine usse pakad liya....

mera dhyan mom ki taraf tha ...woh muzhe kuch bata rahi thi j yeh takkar ho gayi....

Mom - betu...dhyan se....

Aur mere kaano mein uss ladki ki dheemi si surili aawaj aayi ....
Janamdin ki Bahut Bahut Shubhkamnaye mere jaanu...

Jab maine usske taraf dekha ...toh shock rah gaya.....Yeh toh Shalu thi..

Hum jaldi se sambhal gaye ....
Mom aur dad Shalu ko pehchante the

Shalu ne aage badkar Dad k paaon chuye ...Dad jeete raho bacche...
Kaise ho ........

Shalu - Thik hu Uncle.....

Dad - Beta aaj toh tumahara bhi Janamdin hai.....Bahut bahut shubhkamnaye beti.....Chalo tum bhi Abhi k saath hawan mein baitho..

Ab shalu bhi humare saath hawan mein baith gayi........mein bar bar usse hi dekh raha tha......Mom aur Dad muzhe dekhkar jaane kyu muskura rahe the.....

Ritu di ...aadu....bhi usse hi dekh rahe the aur pechanne ki koshish ka rahe the .....

Khair Hawan samapt hua aur Bhandara shuru hua .......Bhandare mein aaye hue sabhi logo ko bhojan karane mein humari poori family lag gayi .....

Bhandare k baad hum Garibo ko Kapde aur paise baantne lage......

Tabhi line mein khade ek 10 saal k ladke ki taraf mera dhyan gaya....
jo dikhne mein bahut maasoom tha

aur shari par fate purane kapde......
uski udaas aankon se ..uss k dil ka dard chalakta tha......muzhe woh asnkhein kuch jaani pahchani si lagi

toh mein usske mind mein zhankkar usska past pata karne ki koshish karne laga.........aur jab pata chala

toh bahut dukh hua .........Woh deepu tha Pappu bhai ka ladka......jisne ne Mayasur k failaye hue drugs k vinash ko rokne k liye humari bahut madat ki
thi .......

usske mind mein zhankkar muzhe yeh bhi dikha k kaise usdke saamne hi
Mayasur k logo ne Paapu bhai ki hatya ki thi......

kabhi kabhi hum aapne kasmo mein aise ulaz jaate hai ....ki mushkil wakht mein hamare saath khade rahne walo ki sudh hi bhuljaate hai
wahi yaha hua tha.....

mein toh sab kuch bhul gaya tha lekin dad......

Maine usse Aawaj lagayi......Deepu..

woh apni hi soch mein gum tha....

phir mein usske paas jaakar uske kandhe par haath rakhkar usse pukara , toh usne meri taraf dekha.....

muzhe pehchan ne ki koshish karne laga.....jaha usse sab gaali de dekar bulate the ...waha kaun hai jo usse naam se pukar raha hai..

Deepu - sahab....kya aap muzhe jaante ho.......maine kuch nahi kiya sahab.......mein toh bas yaha khana khane aaya tha ...lekin woh bhi muzhe nahi mila.......mandir k ek karmchari ki taraf ishara karte hue......uss uncle ne dhakka dekar bhaga diya tha........

maine usse ishare se bulaya....
aisa karte ho tum mandir mein rahete ho aur iss maasoom k saath aisa suluk karte ho

woh - saab isske kapde bahut gande aur fate hue the ....aur jasne kitne dino se nahaya bhi nahi...isiliye...

mein - Deepu beta ...mein tumahara Abhi bhaiya hu......yaad hai kai saal pahele ....

mera naam sunkar woh mere gale lag gaya aur usska dard aansoono k saath bahar aane laga.....

Addu Ritu di Aur mom dad bhi tab tak paas aagyaye aur unki bhi aankhien nam ho gayi.....

Dad ko bhi apni galti ka ahsas ho gaya
jis pappu bhai ne laakho logo ki jaan bachane mein madat ki thi aaj unka
beta ....unki ..bhul k wajah se dar ...dar ...ki thokre khaane par majbur ho gaya hai....

Ritu di deepu ko khana khilane aur tayar karne apne saath le gayi...

aur jab Deepu di k saath wapas aaya toh bilkul badal chka tha ..bilkul nanha rajkumar lag raha tha......

Mandir ka karyakram niptakar hum sham ko ghar pahunche ....

Tab tak Event managment k logo ne gahr ko khub saja diya tha...

Party ka aarangement bahar lawn mein kiya gaya tha......jo kuch aise sajaya hua tha










Sajawat dekhte dekhte mein apne Room mein pahuncha......
abhi Shalu k baare mein soch raha tha
ki kitne din baad mili aur dhang se mulakat bhi nahi hui

Tabhi usske saamne achank GK pragat hua......

aise achanak kisi ko saamne dekhkar mein thoda hadbada gaya tha....

mein - kya mitra tum ne toh muzhe dara hi diya tha......

GK - ha...ha...ha... qap aur humse dar gaye ....
Janamdin ki bahut bahut Shuhkamnaye mitra

mein - Bade din baad tumhe dekha accha laga....Shivali ksisi hai....
ussne koi sandesh nahi bheja.....

GK - Sandesh......woh toh tumhe mil hi jaayega raat ko....jara Sawadhan rahna mitra.....mein ab chalta hu milte hai aaj raat ko .....
aur woh chala gaya....

mein sochne laga ki kisse sawdhan rahna hai aur kyu......aakhir yeh kya kahkar gaya........

chalo ab toh raat ko hi pata chalega

Rimpy bhi apne Dad k saath aagayi thi Aur ek Room mein raat ki party k liye Beautician k saath tayyar hone chal di

Main bhi tayar hua ...aur Rakesh ko yaad kiya......aur Rakesh mere saamne.......

Mein - kya baat hai dost aaj toh tumne muzhe wish bhi nahi kiya..

Rakesh - mein toh aapke bhitar aspke hi saath tha...jab se aap k dono roop ek hue ......

Mein - yaar tu mere saath hi raho...
akele party mein aise jaana kuch ajeeb lag raha hai.......tum dost bankar mere saath hi chalo

aur mein Rakesh k saath Room k bahar nikla hi tha k.......

abhi k liye itna hi...
agla update jald hi.....

 

[abhi1008]

Mast update h Bhai
Maza aa gya

Nice one. Finally rimpy is saved from her dying moments.

Eagerly waiting for more

Nice update bhai maza aa gya

Nice one

Mst update hai bhai

Waiting 4 next

Superb update bhai

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

Awesome update bhai

Aap sabhi dosto ka dil se bahut bahut dhnyawad..????

bas aise hi apna pyar banaye rakhe......

Latest update 46 ...

 

[abhi1008]

Nice update ?

Superb update bhai

Awesome update

Fantastic update

Waiting

Aap sabhi frnds ka dil se bahut bahut shukriya aapke iss saath k liye
????????

aise apna saath banaye rahke...

 

[abhi1008]

Nice update bro

Bahut bahut dhnywad bhai aspke saath k liye....?????

aise hi saath banaye rakhe

Latest update 46 posted

 

[abhi1008]

Awesome update

Awesome update brother

Awesome update brother

Awesome update brother

Superb very nice update brother

Excellent update brother

Awesome update brother

Awesome update brother

Bahot shaandaar update dost

Bahot shaandaar update dost

Bahut bahut dhnywad bhai aspke saath k liye....?????

aise hi saath banaye rakhe

Latest update 46 posted