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Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

Aapko Kahani kese lag rahi hai...

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abhi1008

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abhi1008

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shandar update bhai :applause: ....abhi ko apni powers mil gayi ab usse 14 loko ki shakti prapt karni hai jo uski patniya hogi. dekhte hai abhi kaise inhe prapt karta hai....aur ye last me kon tha jaha abhi teleport hua....shayad rimpy hogi.
Superb shandar Review sakal bhai...Thanku soo much
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Bikul sahi bhai yeh Rimpy hi hai

aise hi apna saath banaye rakhe



Latest update 45 posted...
 

abhi1008

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Very Nice, Fantastic, Awesome, Mind blowing update ...................
Keep it up bro ................
Waiting for next update .....................
Bahut bahut shukriya bhai.......

aise hi saath banaye rakhe....
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Latest update 45 posted....
 
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abhi1008

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Jabardast update
Fabulous update ?????
Mast update ???
College Life sharu hero ki
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Nice update bro
Nice update bro
Rimpy keha gai bhai ab
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Nice update bro
Yeh rimpy hai bhai
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Mind-blowing update
Bahut bahut dhnyawad bhai aapke saath aur comments k liye.....
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ji bhai saho kaha yeh Rimpy hi hai

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Killerpanditji(pandit)

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Update - 45

ab tak aapne dekha......Abhi aur A1 ek ho gaye...........
Mahaguru ki mukti....
aur kisi ki pukar dil mein sunkar kahin pahunchna....

ab aage.......


Abhi ne jaise hi saamne dekha toh uske dil mein ek dard sa utha aur aankhon mein aansoo...

Saamne Rimpy thi .........hospital k ICU mein ventilator par ......usski body se connected machines ......ki dhimi aawaj aur dhire dhire chal rahi saanse

aur Rimpy k dil mein abhi k naam ki pukar.....

Abhi uss pukar ko sun sak raha tha...

Abhi aage bada aur aur Rimpy k haatho ko ko chua ....usse haatho mein lagi Saline ki suiya bhi aur badan par jagah pattiyan .....bandhi thi....

jaise hi Abhi k haath ki ungliyan ne Rimpy k haatho ungliyo ko chua.....
toh usske haatho mein halki si harkat hone lagi.....aur band aankhon k kone se aansoo ki bunde.....

Abhi - Sweetu utho na baby.....dekho tumahara abhi tumahare saamne khada hai......utho na jaan ......kya hua ....tumhe .....sorry na jaan .....yaha tum iss halat mein ho.....aur muzhe pata bhi nahi chala .....

Abhi Rimpy ka haath pakadkar Rone laga.....tabhi Rimpy ne bhi usska haath pakad liya ...jaise kah rahi ho ....

k abhi mat ro na tera dard muzhe aur takleef de raha hai...

abhi bhi Rimpy ki aankhien band thi

(Kabhi Kabhi dukh ki adhikta mein hum apni shaktiyon ko bhul jaate hai,
haal humare paas hota hai , lekin hum samaz hi nahi paate hai )

Abhi Rimpy ka haath pakade ro raha tha....tabhi bhiter se A1 ki aawaj aayi

kyu bhai bhul gaya apni shakti ko bhul gaya ....jaldi kar abhi bhi samay hai..

A1 ki aawaj se Abhi shant ho gaya
Aur ab apne panch tatwo ki urja ko apne haato mein laakar Rimpy k maathe par rakha ....dheere Rimpy k ghav bharne lage ....sanse normal hone lagi ....aur ussko hosh aanalaga.

Tabhi ward k door khulne ki aawaj aayi ..toh Abhi teleport hokar hospital k ek kone mein aagaya.....aur waha se chalkar .....icu ward k bahar pahuncha

waha ek chair par Khemraj ji sir par haath rakhe baithe the unki aankhon se niranter aansoo bah rahe the...

Abhi ne unke paas jaakar unke kandhe par haath rakha toh unhone jab abhi ko apne saamne khada dekha ....toh unke sabar ka baadh tut gaya

abhi ko gale lagakar fut fut kar rone lge.......beta dekho na kya ho gaya...
yahi ek mere jeene ka sahara tha ab ..

mein - Uncle kuch nahi hoga Rimpy ko woh thik ho jaayegi.....

Khemraj - kaise thik hogi ...beta ....Docter kah raha tha.....ki ...ab bas kuch sannnsein hi bachi hi ...mere bacchi ki.......
Abhi ....tum ..toh usse ...pyar ..karte ..ho...na..muzhe pata.hai ......tum ..usse pukar k dekho....shayad ...meri bacchi ko hish aajaye.....

mein - Uncle ....Rimpy thik hai....jab tak merii sannse chal rahi hai..ussko kuch nahi ho sakta...

aur yaha jab doctor nurse k saath aaya toh hairan ho gaya....Rimpy ko hosh aagaya tha.....woh Oxygen mask aur saline ki needles nikalkar bed bed par baithi idhar udahar dekh rahi thi..

aur Abhi ko pukar rahi thi.......yeh Dekhkar toh doctor aur nurse ki haalat baal nochne jaisi ho gayi.....

Abhi yaha Rimpy k dad ko chup kara raha tha k tabhi nurse ward k bahar daudte hue aayi.......aur Rimpy k dad k saamne pahunch kar haanfne lagi ..

nurse - Sir.....jaldi chaliye.....Aapki beti.....ko...hosh aagaya hai.....

Nurse ki baat sunkar ...khemraj bhi daudkar ward k ander pahunch gaye

aur aAbhi bhi piche piche...

andar pahunch kar jab khemraj ji ne apni beti ko baithe hue dekha toh unhone ne daukar usse gale laga liya

ohh ..meri bacchi...bhagwan tera lakh lakh shukr hai jo tune meri bacchi muzhe lauta di....

Rimpy ki nazar jaise hi abhi par padi toh woh apne dad ko chodkar daudkar Abhi k paas pahunchi aur usse kas kar gale laga liye...

Abhiii tum thik toh ho na......aur woh tv par ....dikha rahe the k ...
aur phir abhi k shari ko chukar dekhte hue.....kahi chit toh nahi lagi....

mein - bas ....sweetu bas...dekho mein thik hu...kuch nahi hua muzhe

lekin tumne toh muzhe chodkar jaane ka irada kar liya tha....

phir se Rimpy ne abhi ko gale laga liya aur dhire se kaan mein boli Happy Birthday babu...

mein - Happy Birthday sweetu....
bas karo dekho Doc ..nurse aur Uncle kaise ghur ghur ka dekh rahe hai....

Rimpy hat gayi aur sharmakar apne muh niche kar k khadi ho gayi ...

Khemraj - Beta lagta hai ab humari beti parayi ho gayi hai

Rimpy - sharmakar ....Dad...aisa kyu bol rahe ho ....

aur khemraj ji ne phir haste hue gale lagakar .....dekho toh sharam se kaise lal ho gayi hai...

doc aur nurse abhi bhi shock mein the
unko samaz nahi aaraha tha k ...

jiski haddiya kai jagah se tut gayi thi
aur saare jism par kakham the...
jisse woh dead declare karne ki soch rahe the .....woh bilkul thik jaise ki kuch hua hi nahi....

abhi Rimpy aur usske dad baat kar rahe the ...tab tak maine doc aur nurse k mind ko control karte hue yeh baat unke dimag se nikal di.....

Khemraj ji bhi hairan the....lekin unke liye unki beti jayada mayne rakhti thi

Doc - sir aaye Aapki beti ko aap leja sakte hai ...aaiye mein abhi discharge paper banwakar deta hu
...

Doc ki baat sunkar Rimpy k Dad usske
saath chale gaye ,..aur waha rah gaye Rimpy aur mein .....

Mein - yeh sab kaise hua jaan ....

Rimpy - mein apni frd k saath ek cafe mein gayi thi ....tabhi waha tv par tumahare ghayal hone ki news dekhi

toh mein turant tumshare paas aane k liye nikli .....uss samay muzhe tumahre alawa kuch nahi dikh raha tha.....jab mein cafe se bahar aayi toh ek gaadi muzhse takrayi....phir muzhe kuch pata nahi chala ...

mein - pagal hsi tu bikul itna pyar karti ho .....
Rimpy - apni jaan se jyada..

aur maine rimoy ko kamar se pakadke baahon mein bahr liya

Rimpy - Abhiii....

Mein --- shhhhh ...uske hontho par ungli rakhte hue......dono k dil joro se dhadak rahe the......aur saanse takra rahi thi....
Rimpy k maasum chehere ko dehk kar muzhe pyar aaraha tha meri ungli jaise hi uske hontho se toch hui usska sharir kaanp utha.....usske hontho ki naramahat aur tez chalti saanse mere mann mein hulchal paida kar rahi thi ...uuski aankien band hui ......aur hum dono k honth aapas mein mil gaye..

hum dono ek dusre k pyar ko mehsus kar rahe the.....koi vaasna nahi srif pavutra perm tha .....humare honth jab aapas mein mile toh Rimpy ne muzhe aur kas kar pakad liya....dhire dhire humare hontho ne ek dusre ko chum shuru hi kiya tha....

k tabhi hum dono ko jor ka chatka laga ...aur Rimpy ek zhtke se muzhse alag ho gayi...

maune dekga mere gale mein pada
locket lal hogaya tha....

Uff .....Yeh ....bhi ...ab isse bhi mana
hoga....

tabhi uncle waha aaye .....aur phir maine unse sham ko party mein aane ka aur Rimpy ka Birhday saath celebrate karne ka bolkar waha se nikal gaya......aur ghar ki chat par pahunch gaya.....

jab mein niche aaya toh Nilima maasi muzhe chat ki raraf aate hue dikhi

Nilima - kaha gaya tha tu ...pata hai sab kitna pareshan the ...kitne ..der se tuzhe hi dhund rahe hai....aur tu yaha chat par kya ...kar raha tha....

Mein - mann mein --- arre baapre ..yaha toh bawal macha hua hai ...

ab toh kuch bahana banna hoga...aur sab ko shaant karna hoga..

mein - kuch nahi maassi ....woh frnds k ph aarahe the halchal puchne k liye aue room mein network nahi aaraha tha toh chat par chala aaya...

phir niche jaakar sab ko samjhabujhakar apne room mein aaya

abhi k liye itna hi ....
agla update kal.......
Nice update bro
 

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Superb update bhai
 
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