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Fantasy ABHI - THE WARRIOR 2 (Completed)

abhi1008

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Abhi - abhi bhi samay hai Ferron ...Darmen ..ka ..saath chod do .....mein tumhe kshama kar dunga .....Abhi mein chala .....jald hi milunga .....

Abhi k jaane k baad Ferron ......apne bhiter chal rahe dwandwa par Vivhar kar raha tha ....

Ferron - mann mein ...nahi yeh galat hai ....mein kaise Darmen ki baaton mein aakar apne hi janmdata ...k virudhh ho gaya .....ab ..itne varsho ..baad ....muzhe apne kiye hue apradh ka ...prayaschit karne ka awsar prapt hua hai ....muzhe ...apne pita ka ...saath dena chahiye ....

tabhi uske bhiter se ek aur aawaj aayi ....nahi ....Arsalan kabhi tumahare ...hit k baare mein nahi soch sakta ...woh .tumahara shatru hai ....Darmen hi tumahara maalik hai ....uske virudh jaanr ..ka arth hai ....apni mrityu ko gale lagana .....

andar chalte hue dwadwa mein aakhirkar ....kaali shaktiya usspar haawi ho jaati hai ......aur ..Ferron ki aankhien laal ho jaati hai .....aur ...mann mein kuch dridh nischay kar leta hai .....

yaha Abhi Ferron k nagar k madhya bhag mein pahunch jaata hai ....aur .....chupte hue ..nagar ka nirikshan karta hai ...woh yaha se jaane se pahele aur ek dhamaka karna chah raha tha .......
itni raat mein bhi poore nagar mein Darmen k sainik poori satarkta se pahra de rahe the .....

Nagar mein chupte hue nirikshan karte hue ...Abhi ....ek ...bade se bhawan k saamne ...pahuncha .......ek deewar k piche chupkar ...usne dekha k waha ...bakki jagaho se ....sainiko ka pahra kuch jayada hi ..tha...waha lagbhag 200 k kareeb ...sainik the .........itna kada pahra dekhkar uske mann mein aaya ..k hona ho yaha kuch aisa chal raha hai ...jo ...Darmen k liye bahut mahatva purna hai .......

Abhi ..uss bhawan k taraf dekh hi raha tha ....toh piche se kissi ne uske garden par talwar rakhi ...Abhi ne palatkar dekha ...toh waha 4 sainik khade the ...

1 - kaun ho tum aur yaha kya kar rahe ho ....Vastro se yaha k toh nahi lagte ho ....

Abhi - mein ...bas ..aise hi yaha se ghum raha tha ...bada ..accha ..bhawan hai ......

2 - isse puchkar apna samay nasht kyu kar rahe ho ......yeh chupkar dekh raha tha .....iska arth yeh hi hai ....yeh yaha kuch gadbad karne k irade se yaha aaya ..hai ....khatam kar do isse ....

itna kahkar usne apni talwat ka vaar Abhi ki garden par kiya .....jisse ....Abhi ne ...apne haatho se rok liya .....

Abhi - soch raha tha k kuch kaam toh shantipurna tarike se ka lu ...parantu tum log karne kaha doge .....itna kahkar Abhi ne haath mein pakdi hui talwar tod di ...aur palak zhapakte ...hi ...talwar ka tuta hua bhag ...uske ..sar mein ghusa diya .....ek cheekh nikli aur khoon ka fawara ...aur woh sainik wahi dher ....

Baaki k teen ....ek saath Abhi par zhapte .....Abhi chalng lagkar hawa mein kalabajiya khte hue ...ek k piche gaya ....jab tak koi kuch samaz paata ....kadaak ki aawaj k saath uske garden ki haddi tut chuki thi .....

baaki k do palte hi the ...Tab tak ...Abhi ..ki talwar..unke sar ko dhad se alag kar chuki thi .....waha sainiko ki cheekho se ...Bhawan ki suraksha karne wale saink ..satark ho gaye ...
Abhi ne Ferron se prapt kiye ....Trishool ko pragat kiya ....aur usse aakash ki taraf uthaya .....aisa karte hi ...aakash mein bhayankar megh pragat hogaye ...aur ...unse pragat honewali ..vidyut tarange uss trishool mein samane lagi .....

Abhi ne ...uss trishool ko Sainiko ki or kiya ....uss trishool se nikalti bhayankar ...vidyut tarango se ...aage ki pankti k lagbhag 20 sainik ek saath zhulas gaye ....aur mrityu ko prapt hue ....
Abhi ne ek aur prahar kiya .....toh aage k lagbhag 50 aur mrityu ko prapt ho gaye ....

Tabhi bhiter se Kaal ki aawaj aayi .....mirta ...iss tarah se aanand nahi aaraha hai .....Abhi Kaal k Abhipryay ko samaz chuka tha .....toh usne Kaal ko pragat kiya ....jo apne bhayankar sher manav k roop mein pragat hua .....Abhi ne Kaal ko ishara kiya ....aur shuru hua maut ka bhayanka khel ....kissi ki garden ukhad di ...toh kissi ko bich se fadkar ....uski aantadiya bahar nikal di .....Kaal k bhayanak roop ko dekhkar sainik jaan bacahkar bhagne lage ....parantu Kaal se kaun bach sakta hai ....aur jo bachkar bahar bhagne lage ....woh Abhi ki talwar k bhaent chad gaye ....kuch hi der mein ...unn sab sainiko k kshat vikshat shav waha ...pade the ......
Kaal ne apne muh par lage hue rakt ko ...apni jeebh se chatkar saaf kiya ....aur ..apne ..sadharan roop mein aagaya .....

Abhi .ne Kaal ko wahi nazar rakhne k liye kahta hai ......aur khud babaji ki anguthi se bhiter pahunch jaata hai ......bhiter pahunchkar ....woh ek ..kone ...mein ...chupkar ....waha k anirikshan karta hai ......waha ek bahut badi paryog shala thi .......jaha....shishe k hazaro .....gol ...martaban rakhe hue ...the ......jinmein kissi taral padarth mein ....mavanavo jo rakha gaya ...tha .......

Darmen k ishare par yaha uske vaigyanik .....munushyo ko pisach banane ka prayog kar rahe the ......abhi bhi kuch ....vaigyanik .....apne ....kaam ..mein lage hue the .......

Yeh sab dekhkar Abhi ko samaz nahi aaraha tha k yeh kya ho raha hai .....yaha itne saare manavo ko iss tarah shishe mein band karke yeh log kya kar rahe hai .......
woh waha chal rahi unki baatein ...sunane lagta hai ....

X - humara prayog safal hone hi wala hai ....kuch toh poori tarah se pisach mein badal chuke hai .aur kuch ....agle 24 ghante mein tayar ho jaayenge .....

y - hume yaha se shighra nikalne hoga ....pata nahi ...kab yeh pisach ..bahar aajaaye ...inmein se kuch ....martabano mein hulchal shuru ho gayi hai .....agar yeh bahar aagaye toh .....

Z - tum bahut darte ho .....yeh ...san pishach himare niyantran mein hai .......yeh shishe k martaban bahut majboot hai ....yeh ..inhe todkar bahar nahi aasakte ......yadi inmein se koi ..bahar bhi aajaye ....toh ... inn pishacho ..ko ......humare pass ...k ...aadhunik hatiyar ....jinse ....surya kirano ...k ghanatva ....roop ...ki vishesh kirne nikalti hai ...rokne mein saksham hai ....issiliye ..bhaybhit hone ka koi kaaran nahi .........

Y - ek martaban mein kuch jyada hulchal ho rahi hai ....lagta hai usmein halki si darar aagayi hai ..
x - nahi yeh sambhav nahi ...lagta hai kuch gadbadi hui hai ......jab tak woh uss taral padarth mein hai ...woh kuch nahi kar sakte ....aao dekhte hai ......jara hum bhi toh dekhe himne kya banaya hai

woh teeno ...ek martaban ki taraf badhe ....ussmein ek daarar si ban gayi thi ...aur ander ka taral ..uss mein se ris raha tha ....aur jor jor se hil bhi raha tha .......

jab woh teeno uske pass pahunche ..toh ...uss martaban ...ki hulchal ekdum ruk gayi ......sab...kuch shant tha .....

X - yeh kya ...kahi yeh mar toh nahi gaya ....humara prayog vifal toh nahi ho gaya ....tum jara ....dekho toh .....

waha prayog shala mein ek taraf ...ek ..badi si screen thi .....jo badi si ...ecg ....screen ki tarah thi ....jo har martaban se judi hui thi ......y ....uss screen mein kuch dekta hai ..

Y - lagta hai humara prayog vifal ho gaya ....yeh ...toh ..usse mara hua dikha rahi hai ...

X - nahi yeh nahi ho sakta ....kahte hue ..uss martaban k paas jaakar dekhne lagta ...hai ......

Y - ..Nahi...ruk..jaao ...dur..hato.....woh kah hi rahta hai ...

tabhi woh martaban ek dhamake k saath chaknachur ho jaata hai .....uske kuch shishe ...X ..k sharir mein pravesh kar jaate ...hai ...aur woh piche gir jaata hai ....woh apne aapko sambhalkar uthne hi wala hota hai .....k uske saamne ......safed ...sard sahrir .....badi ..aankhien ...aur virit chehre wala woh bhayankar pishach ....apni laar tapkata hua ...khada ho jaata ..hai ....

X ko uske roop mein sakshat apni maut nazar aati hai......phir bhi himmat karke ..woh apne kamar mein bandhi hui ...laser gun haise hatiyar ko nikalta hai ....lekin iske pahele woh kuch kare ..woh pishach ..uska sar chaba chuka tha ......x ...ko toh ...cheekhne ka bhi awsar nahi mila ...

bakki bache Vaigyanik yeh drishya dekhkar ..bhay...k kaaran ..jaise stabdh ho gaye the ......unmein hilne tak ki takat nahi bachi thi ....

woh pishach ek aur vaigyanik k paas pahanch chuka tha ......
aur ....uske bhi sar ko ....apne bade se jabde mein .....dabakar chaba chuka tha .....

yeh sab itni shigrata se hua tha ....k Abhi bhi chakit tha .....jab tak woh teesre tak pahunchta .....Abhi ne ..apni urja ka ek jordar vaar uss pishach par kiya ....

uss aakhri bache hue vaigyanik ko toh koyi hosh hi nahi tha ....k kya ho raha hai ....Abhi ..k vaar se woh ....ajeeb si aawaj nikalte hue piche ki taraf gir pada ....

parantu girte hi woh bijli ki si furti k saath..sambhal gaya ...aur Abhi par chalang laga di ....woh apna jabda kholkar ...
Abhi ko chabane ka prayas kar raha tha ....aur Abhi apne haat aage ..karke ...usse rok raha tha ....uske muh se nikalti hui laar ...se Abhi ka haath gila ho raha tha ....Usne ...uss pishach ki laplapti hui ...juban ko ..uske jabde mein haath dalkar pakad liye .....aur ek kaskar laat uske seene par maari ..jisase ....uski juban ...kuch aantadiyo k saath ukhadkar Abhi k haath mein aagayi ....aur woh ..dur ..nirjeev jaakar ..gir pada .....

uski ...laar ...Abhi k haath par jaha jaha giri thi ....waha bahut ..teevra jalan hone lagi thi .....tabhi 5 aur martaban tut jaate hai .....aur .....aur unmein se 5 ...pishach nikalkar ......Abhi ki or badhte hai ......

Yaha .....Ferron k antardwad mein jab kaali shakti uspar hawi ho jaati hai ...tab ...woh turant Darmen se sampark karke ....Arsalan k aane ki suchna deta hai ......

Suchna paakar Darmen thodi hi der ..mein waha aajaata hai ....aur Ferron usse sab kuvh batata hai .....Arsalan dwara usase Shakti trishool cheene jaane ki baat sunkar ....Darmen ka krodh badh jaata hai ....aur ..woh ...Ferron par ....apni urja ka vaar karta hai ...jiske lagte ...hi woh ...dard se bilakhne lagta hai.......

Darmen - itna accha awsar haath lagne k baad bhi ....tum kuch nahi kar sake ....tum jaise nikaame ...ka jeevit rahna ..mere liye vyarth hai .....tumahare kaaran Arsalan ek baar phir vijayi ho gaya .....

Ferron - kshama kare ....Mahamahim .....kshama kare .....ek aur aakhri awsar de dijiye iss baar mein aapko nirash nahi karunga ....uss baar ..Arsalan ...aapke pairo mein pada hoga ....daya kijiye ....mahamahim ...

Darmen - accha ...itni badi shakti k hote hue bhi tum Arsalan ka kuch nahi bigad paaye toh ab kya kar loge .....tum kaise uska saamna kar paaoge ....ab .....

Ferron - Vishwas kijiye muzhpar .....bas ek aakhri baar ....

Darmen - thik hai ek aakhri awsar deta hu tumhe ...yadi iss baar asafal hue ...toh ..apni ..mrityu k liye tayar rahna ......( phir kuch sochkar ) accha Arsalan ne tumhe jaate hue kya bataya tha ...

Ferron - kuch khas nahi ...bas yahi ...ki ..bahut jald dubara aaunga ....

Darmen - Ab tak jitna mrin Arsalan ko samaz chuka hu ...Arsalan aise bina kissi bade humle k yaha se nahi jaa sakta ....kyu ki woh apna bhay tum sab mein barkarar rakhna chahta hai .....
hona ho woh iss samay nagar mein hi kahi hoga ....

Darmen ...Ferron ko lekar ....pahele waha ki sainik chavni par pahuncha ...waha sab kuch thik tha ......waha apne shatru ko na paakar ....usse nirasha hua ....
juch der usne aur socha k aisi aur kaun si jagah ho sakti hai ...jaha .Arsalan humla kar sakta hai ...tab ...usse apni prayog shala ka dhyan aaya ....jaha pishach sena k nirman ka karya chal raha tha ...

Darmen turant uss jagah pahuncha .....Kaal ...yaha chupkar ....Nazar rakhe hue tha ......Darmen jab yaha pahuncha ....toh charo taraf phaili hui laashe dekhkar ....samaz gaya k yeh kaam Arsalan ka hi hoga ......

Darmen ko dekhte hi ....Kaal bhiter Abhi k paas pahunch gaya ......yeh woh samay tha ...jab ...Abhi ....uss pishach ko khatam kar chuka tha ....aur ....6 aur ..pishach ...Abhi ki taraf lapke the ..
Samay Abhi jyada nahi tha ....Darmen kissi bhi samay pahunch sakta tha ....issiliye Kaal Abhi k Sharir mein pravesh kar gaya ....aur uske bhiter sakriya ..ho gaya.....Jisase Abhi ko Darmen k aane ka pata chal gaya ...Tab tak ...woh pishach ..Abhi ..par zhapat pade ...Abhi ne apna maarak khanjar ..se ..ek ..pishach k seene par vaar kiya .....parantu woh khanjar kewal uske sharir par ghav hi bana paaya ....uss gahv se khoon ki jagah ...safed taral padarth nikal raha tha ......

woh 6 Pishach Abhi ko jagah jagah se ....jakad chuke the ...koi pair chabane ka prayatna kar raha tha ...toh koi haath ...Abhi k bhiter Kaal ab poori tarah se sakriya ho gaya tha ....usne do ...ki garden pakdkar uthaya aur dur phenk diya .....aur .....Abhi ne ab ek chakra ki tarah gumte hue ....baki k do pishacho ko bhi apne se dur phenka ....Ek ..ko pakadkar ....Abhi ne uski garden ukad di .....ussi samay Darmen ....waha pahuncha .....iss samay Abhi k ek haath mein pishach ki garden ..aur dusre haath mein uska dhad ....

Darmen ne itne varsho baad aaj Arsalan ko pratyaksha dekha tha ....aur ..woh bhi iss ugra roop mein ...issiliye woh thoda thithak gaya .....aur iss baat ka faayda Abhi ne uthaya ....Uske ....Agni tatva ki urja ka prachan gola banaya .....aur uss jagah ..ek bhayanak visfot karke ....turant ...Anguthi k sahare waha se ...nikal gaya ....

Darmen bas ..khada ..hatprabh dekhta rah gaya ......

Abhi k liye itna hi ....
Agla Update kal ......



 

abhi1008

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Abhi ne use mauq'a toh de diya par jab tak kaaliurja uske bhitar hogi kya woh is mauq'e ko bhuna kar vaapas aa paayega apanon ke dikhaaye maarg par?
Thanku so much bhai aapke shandar comment k liye....
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iska upay bhi abhi karega jab usse unke kaali shakiyo k prabhav mein hone ka pata chalega....

aise hi saath banaye rakhe ??

Update 33 posted.....
 

abhi1008

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Bahut bahut dhnyawad ...mitra ...
aapke iss aapar senh ....accha lagta hai yeh jaankar k aapko kahani acchi lag rahi hai ....aapki adbhut shabdo se alankrit samiksha ko padhkar ....aur likhne ki prerna milti hai .....
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aise hi saath banaye rakhe ??

Update 33 posted.....


Abhi ko Baba Manduk apni shakti ki sawrup apni anghuthi deta apne agle safar Ferron ke rajaye per jane ke liye aur Nebhru bhi ushe Arsalan ke Trishul jishme Bijli, Tuffan v Paani ki shakti nihit hai bachne ki salah deta hai aur ushe prapt karne ke liye kahta hai. Fir Abhi apni saari tayri karke chal padta hai Kaal ke sath Ferron ke rajye v baba ki anghuthi ke dwara Adrishye kali shield se hokar Ferron ke mahal me pahunch kar ushse yudh karta hai v Arsalan ka Trishul cheen le aata hai.
Bahut hi sunder update hai.
Partiksha rahegi agli update ki.
 
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