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Story. (. Deewanapan. )
Writer. (. _ABHAY. )
Theek hi thi kahani
Achcha laga baap bete ke beech
Tom and Jerry waali ladayi dekhke
Lekin love story toh nahi dikhi mujhe kahin
South movies kam dekha kijiye
Story mein pyar toh nibba nibbi waala tha
Phir bhi dost hone ke naate padh liya
Suggestion
yahi kahunga ki yeh ghisi piti romantic story na likhke
kuchh alag likhe ki koshish karte
toh achcha hota..
Writer. (. _ABHAY. )
Theek hi thi kahani
Achcha laga baap bete ke beech
Tom and Jerry waali ladayi dekhke
Lekin love story toh nahi dikhi mujhe kahin
South movies kam dekha kijiye
Story mein pyar toh nibba nibbi waala tha
Phir bhi dost hone ke naate padh liya
Suggestion
yahi kahunga ki yeh ghisi piti romantic story na likhke
kuchh alag likhe ki koshish karte
toh achcha hota..