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[komaalrani]

Story: कौमार्य (virginity)
Writer: Shetan



कहानी बहुत ही स्वाभाविक है, खासतोर से कविता का चित्रण बहुत अच्छा हुआ है . संवाद बहुत ही बेलौस हैं। ट्रेन में मिलन से लेकर सुहगरात तक की यात्रा को बहुत अच्छे ढंग से दर्शाया गया है। लघु कथा में किसी एक बिंदु को ही विकसित करने की संभावना रहती है और यह उसके एकदम अनुरूप है। यद्यपि वह सामन्यतया हॉरर विधा में लिखती हैं लेकिन रोमांस में भी एक बहुत सफल प्रयास है। वह सामान्यतया हिंगलिश या रोमन में लिखती हैं और यह प्रयास देवनागरी में हैं इसलिए वर्तनी की गलतियां समझी जा सकती हैं और पढ़ने में रुकावट भी नहीं डालतीं।

कहानी पठनीय है और मन को छू लेती है।

 

[Shetan]

Story: कौमार्य (virginity)
Writer: Shetan



कहानी बहुत ही स्वाभाविक है, खासतोर से कविता का चित्रण बहुत अच्छा हुआ है . संवाद बहुत ही बेलौस हैं। ट्रेन में मिलन से लेकर सुहगरात तक की यात्रा को बहुत अच्छे ढंग से दर्शाया गया है। लघु कथा में किसी एक बिंदु को ही विकसित करने की संभावना रहती है और यह उसके एकदम अनुरूप है। यद्यपि वह सामन्यतया हॉरर विधा में लिखती हैं लेकिन रोमांस में भी एक बहुत सफल प्रयास है। वह सामान्यतया हिंगलिश या रोमन में लिखती हैं और यह प्रयास देवनागरी में हैं इसलिए वर्तनी की गलतियां समझी जा सकती हैं और पढ़ने में रुकावट भी नहीं डालतीं।

कहानी पठनीय है और मन को छू लेती है।

Thankyou very very much Komalji. Me kosis karaungi aage ye galtiya bhi na ho.

 

[Riky007]

Story: Guilty or not?
Writer: Amour

Story Line: Court room drama पर आधारित ये कहानी दो दोस्तों की है, जिसमे से एक की मौत हो जाती है, और दूसरे पर इसका इल्जाम लगता है। लेकिन पूरा सच उन दोनो के अलावा किसी को भी नही पता।

Treatment: कहानी फ्लो में चलती है, और लेखक ने बहुत ही अच्छे से कहानी को कहा है। हालांकि कुछ जगह नाम का कन्फ्यूजन हुआ है। फिर भी कहानी साफ सुथरे तरीके से लिखी गई है।

Positive points: कहानी की ले अच्छी है, संदेश साफ है, और संदेश देने का तरीका भी अच्छा है।

Negative points: कहानी बहुत ही साधारण है, कहानी में कोई भी एक्साइटमेंट नही होती, और नही ही पाठक इससे जुडाव को महसूस कर पता है कहीं भी।

Sugesstion: आपकी लिखावट अच्छी है, लेकिन कथानक बहुत ही कमजोर था इस कहानी का। ये कंपटीशन है, जहां कहानी में दम होना चाहिए, लेकिन आपकी कहानी बहुत ही साधारण है।

Rating:6/10

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Story - Virginity
Writer - Shetan.

कहानी बहुत ही खूबसूरत थी लेकिन जैसा कि ब्लैक भाई ने कहा , सुहागरात के मौके पर ही कविता का अपने कौमार्य पर कहा गया झूठ अगर उसकी वैवाहिक रिश्ते से हमेशा के लिए बिदाई की रात हो जाती तब क्या होता ?
ऐसा मजाक कौन करता है भई !
कौन लड़की अपनी सुहागरात की रात को ही अपने शादीशुदा जीवन की आखिरी वक्त मुकर्रर करती !

वैसे बहुत ही खूबसूरत विषय पर आपने यह स्टोरी लिखा है । कौमार्य खासकर युवतियों के लिए बहुत ही संवेदनशील विषय है । और इस पर नाना प्रकार की भ्रांतियां भी मशहूर है । प्रायः लड़कों की सोच यही रहती है कि अगर सुहागरात के मौके पर लड़की के यौनांग से रक्त नही निकला , बिस्तर पर खून के धब्बे न दिखाई पड़े तो इसका मतलब लड़की ने पहले ही अपना कौमार्य गंवा दिया है । लड़की चरित्रहीन है ।

ऐसा बिल्कुल ही नही है । ऐसे बहुत सारे चीजें है जिसकी वजह से लड़की की योनि खुल जाती है । लड़की अगर साइकिलिंग करती हो , लड़की अगर जिम या कोई कसरत करती हो और लड़की अगर मास्टरवेशन करती हो तो लड़की की योनि के संकुचित न होने के चांसेज बढ़ जाती है ।
कौमार्य के नाम पर लड़की के यौनांग से ब्लड निकलना एक दकियानूसी और बहुत बड़ी भ्रामक सोच है ।

वैसे आप के जज्बे को मै प्रणाम करता हूं । आप निरंतर कुछ नया लेकर आती है , स्टोरी पर अनवरत अनुसंधान करती है , मेहनत करती है और अपने कम्फर्ट जोन से भी बाहर निकलने की कोशिश करती है ।

मुझे आपकी कहानी बहुत ही पसंद आया ।

 

[Amour]

Story: Guilty or not?
Writer: Amour

Story Line: Court room drama पर आधारित ये कहानी दो दोस्तों की है, जिसमे से एक की मौत हो जाती है, और दूसरे पर इसका इल्जाम लगता है। लेकिन पूरा सच उन दोनो के अलावा किसी को भी नही पता।

Treatment: कहानी फ्लो में चलती है, और लेखक ने बहुत ही अच्छे से कहानी को कहा है। हालांकि कुछ जगह नाम का कन्फ्यूजन हुआ है। फिर भी कहानी साफ सुथरे तरीके से लिखी गई है।

Positive points: कहानी की ले अच्छी है, संदेश साफ है, और संदेश देने का तरीका भी अच्छा है।

Negative points: कहानी बहुत ही साधारण है, कहानी में कोई भी एक्साइटमेंट नही होती, और नही ही पाठक इससे जुडाव को महसूस कर पता है कहीं भी।

Sugesstion: आपकी लिखावट अच्छी है, लेकिन कथानक बहुत ही कमजोर था इस कहानी का। ये कंपटीशन है, जहां कहानी में दम होना चाहिए, लेकिन आपकी कहानी बहुत ही साधारण है।

Rating:6/10

Tumhara bahot bahot shukriya mai tumhari baato par dhyaan dunga

 

[Riky007]

Story: Making a cab driver forcefully bang my Wife Anjana, followed by a 3some
Writer: maduranaranga

Story line: Based on cuckold and adultry it us a story of a man and how he tricks his wife and a cab driver to have sex and group sex with him too.

Treatment: Very neatly and nicely written, and on writing parameters it has everything except few mistakes, which are not noticeable.

Positive Point: it has everything in which a cuc lover wants to have.

Negative Points: just the topic, as it is too used one, and there are rare chance to develop a interesting story out of it, and at last these just remained as "हिलाने के लायक कहानी"

Suggestion: you seems a promising writer, so just want to suggest you to try some interesting topics which can develop the writer inside.

Rating: 7.5/10

 

[Black]

Pakeeza maa bahan
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me rihan meri family me abbu
ammi sabana 39


bahan hina21


Me 23 lund 9inch
Mere abbu ik madarsa chalate h
Jisme ladke ladkiya sb padte h
Abbu ladko ko padhate h Ur ammi ladkiyo ko
Meri ammi abbu dono bahut dudakkad hai
Ammi ko raat bhi lund liye bina raha nhi jata
Meri bahan ab ik teacher h aur ladkiyo ko padhati thi
Meri bahan ik pakeeza ladki thi kabhi limitcros nhi ki
Hamesha burkhe me rahti thi
Kabhi koi ghr me gair mard aa jata to uske saamne bhi nhi jati
Ammi abbu ki chudayi ki aawaze han dono aksr sunte the
Me to lund hila leta tha

Dosto me pahle sehi sex ka deewana hu
Abbu mujhse bolte tu deeni padai krle
Pr me thoda bigd gaya tha mohlle ke ldko ke saath
Maine zid karke school paas kiya college gaya

Ammi bahan bahar to abbu ki bajah se burkhe me jati
par ghr me bahut tight kapde pahnke rahti
Jiska seedha asr mujhpe bada
Apni bahan aur ammi ko dekh mera lund tan jata tha khayal to aa jata tha kabhi kash ammi ya bahan chodne ko mil jaye
Par kabhi koshish nhi ki bs khayal tha ik

Mere bachpan ke teen dost jigri
Rakesh rahul ravi
Inki gandi baton ki wajah se me ammi aur hina ko chodne ki sochne laga


Meri ik gf thi saziya mere hi college me rhi
Me use bahut chodta
Wo sali bhi hamesha burkhe me aati thi
Me kabhi kabhi uske boobs burkhe ke uper hi apne doston ke saamne dawata tha
Rahul. Yarr kisi mulli ki hame bhi dila
Me. Me sale teri gf h to usko chod
Rakesh. Yaar bura mt maanna
Mulliyon ko chodne me jo maza h wo kisi me nhi
Hm aisi baton se bura nhi maante
Ok doston saziya ka gangbang karte h
Rahul . Maaan jayegi
Me. Maanegi plan h me aaaj saziya ko jb chudu to tum video bana lena aur fir blackmail krke chodege

Ik me saziya ko chod raha tha mere dost video banate huye aaye
Saziya ghabra gayi

Me. Salo video q bana raheho niklo yarr chodne do
Rahul. Sale aaj ise hm bhi chodege warna ye video poore college me virel hogi

Saziya pahle to bahut royi gabrayi maine use bahut samjhaya aur zabardasti ghodi bana diya
Rahul ne apna lund saziya ki choot me daal diya aur chodne laga
Ahhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhrandi mullli kiya choot h teri ahhhhhhg

Me. Ahhh saziya maza aa raha h chudne me uncutlund se
Ravi ne muh me daal diya

Saziya bhi maan gayi aur choosne lagi

Fir rakesh ne saziya ko lund pe bitha aur lund choot me gusa diya aur maine peeche se gaand me daal diya
Aur rahul ne muh me
Aur lagatar hm saziya ko chode



Fir maan gayi aur hamne milkr saziya ko bahut choda

Fir aise hi ham saziya ko roz milker chodte
Rahul. Yarr mulliyon ki baat hi alg h bahut maza deti h sali randiya

Yarr rihaan koi pakeeza mulli ho tab maza aayee uska gangbang karne me
M. Yar ab pakeeza mulli kaha se laun
Ravi. Sale tere baap mad****sa chalata h usme padti h mulliyan
Me. To salo me to nhi padta usme

Ham aisi gandi baton se bura nhi maante the
Ravi. Yarr chal tere mad*se chalte h
Me. Chal fir
Ham phli baar gaye fir ladkiyan nikli
Rahul. Ufff yarr kiya mst mulliya h randiyo ki gaand dekh yarr
Yarr rihaan tu kismt wala h aisi mulliyan tujhe hi milegi
Hame in mullliyo ko kab milga chodneko

Rakesh. Ahh rihaan us mulli ko dekh wow kiya mast maal h sali ki gaand dekh ahh

Me rakeski baat se sisk utha wo meri sagi bahn ke baare me bole
Meri bahan bala ki khoobsurt thi
Figure to budhdhon ka lund khara karde
Fir mere dosto ki najar se bahan kaise bach jati
Rahul. Ahhh rihaan yarr ye kon raand h bahut mast maal lg rahi h ise patwa de
Bahut maza degi ye rihaan
Bol na sale kuchh

Me. yarr wo nhi pategi kisi aur ko dekh
Ravi. Baki sbne chahra chipa rakhe h jo dikh rahe h wo kash nhi
Yarr uske baraber wali mulli dekh ufff sali gaand aur figure

Mera lund aur tn gaya sun ke ab wo sb meri ammi ke baare me bole
Meri ammi bhi ik mst kase huye badn ki auart thi
Koi nhi khta do bachho ki maa h
Ammmi ka figure ufff

Ham sb bahut gandi gandi baten karte rahe
Me bhi apni ammi bahan ke baare me gandi vaten karne laga
Mujhe bhi maza aane laga apni ammi aur bahan ki gandi baton me
unhe kiya pata wo meri sagi maa bahn h

Fir ye hamara roz ka bn gaya hm roz aate mere abbu ke mad*se ki ladkiyo ko cherte the
Meri ammi aur bahan mujhse pareshan ho gayi thi
Wo dono mere dosto ke saamne kuchh nhi bol pati thi
Ghr aake ammi mujhe chillti ke un aawara ladko ka saath chorde
Mujhe bahut tane deti ke
Tujhe sharm nhi aati apni maa bahan ko cherta h un haramiyo ke saath milkr
Khuda ka kuchh kaof nhi tujhe

Ammi mujhe damki deti abbu ko bolne ki
Me us time ammi se mafi maaang leta
Fir doosre din ammi aur bahan aur ladkiyo ko cherne aa jata dosto ke saath

Ab mujhe ammi aur bahan ki liye gandi baten dosto ke muh se maza deti
Maine ammi hina ko chodne ki thanli

Me ik din phone me porn dekh raha tha
Achanak hina aa gayi
Usne aawaze sunli
Wo bahut gussa huyi
Hina.. Bhai aisi gandi video mt dekha kro bhayya bahut guna h
Bhayya kuchh to uper wale se daro
Ik waqt ki bhi namaz nhi padte
Me . Tu pad to leti h mere badle ki
Ab mujhe mt samjha tu dekhe to aa dekh le
Hina. Mujhe khuda ka kaof h me itna bara guna kabhi nhi krungi

Ik din achank abbu ko heard pada aur abbu ki death ho gayi

Me abbu ki death se bahut pareshan hua
Kuchh month kisi se nhi mila
Ammi hina mad*sa chalati thi

Kuchh moth me sb norml hua
Ammi aur hina ab bahut tight burkhe pahnne lagi
Meri niyat fir bigdne lagi

Me din raat yahi sochta kaise apni ammi aur bahan ko chodu mere dimag me kuch nhi aaye

Fir maine socha qna hina ko porn dekhne ki adt dalu

Hamare gher do hi room the ik me ammi ik me hina

Raat me porn dekhu aur janboojh ke thodi si volume kholdi

Hina phone chala rahi thi
Aawaz wo sune bhi pr kuchh bol na paye
Me aisa hi roz karta aur raat ko apni bahan ki gaand sahlata ufff bahan ki kiya gaand thi
Main fir hina ki gaand pe maaal nikaalne laga

Maal girte hi meri bahan thodi hilti pr uthti nhi

Wo bhi sochti hogi kitna harmi bhai mera apni sagi choti bahan pe gandi nazer h
Pr aag to hina ke jism me bhi lg gayi thi

Agli raat maine volume thoda aur tez kar diya
Hina kasmasane lagi
Porn me ik hijabi ladki ka ganabang ho raha tha
Me volume aur tez krke sone ka natak karne laga
Phone uski tarf gira diya

Hina ki bhi halt kharab hone lagi aawazo se
Hina himnat karke mere paas aayi aur mera phone utha liya
Aur apne bad pr chali gayi

Maine dheere se aaankh kholke dekha
Hina porn dekh rahi thi

Me bahut khus hua
Mera plan kamyab hota dikhayi diya

Mere phone bahut porn thi aur gande gande photos hijabi ladkiyon ke

Hina dekh kr bahut garam ho gayi wo apni choot masalne lagi
Kuchh der me wo sant ho gayi
Aur phone mere paas rakh gayi

Me kmhi college jata dost bolte chal yarr tere madrse ki mulliyo tarte h
Me inkar karke ghr chala aata

Fir doosri raat bhi me be fikr hoke porn dekhne laga
Ab hina ka koi dr nhi tha me tez aawaz me porn dekhun
Hina mujhse choti thi to uski himmat na ho mujhse kuchh kahne ki
Aur badi himmat karke boli
Hina - bhayyw aawaz dheere karlo me pdh rahi hu dikkat ho rahi h

Me - kiya yarr tu sara din pdti rahti h kabhi free hoke video bhi dekhle

Hina - me nhi dekhti aisi gandi video aur bhayya mujhe aur ladkiyon ko padana bhi hota h
Tumhari tarh aajad thodi hun

Me - to padhane ke liye akl chahiye roz roz padne se kiya akl aayegi
Hina. Ilm badta h badne se tum bhi padho kuchh

Me. Tu hi padh me aise hi theek hu

Kuch der mer hina let gayi maine fir aawaz tez kardi aur phone hina ki tarf gira ke sone ka natak kiya

Kuch der me hina fir aayi aur mera phone le gayi
Aur baar apni salwar me haath dlkr choot masalte huye porn dekhe

Meri ab samjh nhi aaye kiya kru bahan to garam ho gayi h
hina apne phone me porn daalne lagi mere phone se

Fir wo mera phone rakh gayi aur apne phone me porn dekhe

Uski gaand meri tarf thi ufff dosto bata nhi sakta uski pakeeza gaand kiya kahar dha rahi thi
Dil kar raha tha abhi hina pe chr jaun

Pr himmat nhi huyi

Main achank utha hina ke paas gaya
Aur peeche khare hoke me uski gaand sahlate huye bola
Ahhhh gudya porn dekh kr maza aa raha h
Hina ghabra gayi aur boli nhinhi bhayya wo wo me

Me. Koi baat nhi yarr dekh le aaj kl sb dekhte tu befikr hoke dekha kr
Ye sb dekh le fir new daal dunga aor

Hina pani pani ho gayi
Main bhi jiyada aage nhi badha
Qki abhi hina poori nhi bigdi thi

Koi bhi ladki ka saga bhai jb use randi banaye to wo bn hi jati h

Subha huyi wo naha dhoker mad*sa jane lagi
Hina - bhayya mujhe aaj market jana h mujhe madarse me lene aa jana
Me. Q kiya kaam h
Hina. Kuchh kapde lane h
Me. Ok beti

Me fir college jaldi aaker hina ko market le gaya
Me. Achha hina kiya padhati h tu ladkiyo ko
Hina. Tumhe samjh nhi aayega wo sb
Me. Achha raat wala content bhi padh dena
Hina. Muh banate huye bhayya please
Me. Koi na yarr gudya tu meri jaan h ikloti bahan h meri
Tujhse mazak nhi krungw to kisse karunga

Maine hina ko apne se chipkaya
Hina ka jism ufff bahut garam tha
Aaj pahli baar hina ko maine gale lagaya

Fir hm ik shop me gaye
Hina. Kaise kapde lu
Me. Meri maane to jeanstop lele mast lagegi usme
Hina. Bhai khuda ka kaof kro me aise kapde nhi pahnti
Me. Yarr pahan ke to dekh ikbaar please mere liye try kr
Me tujhe ik baar jeanstop me dekhna chahta hu

Hina samjh gayi mera harami bhai meri jawani tarna chahta h

Hina. Ok bhayya sirf tumhare liye pahnti hu

Uffff meri bahan aaj to jeanstop pahanwa raha hu kl tujhe nangi kardunga

Kuchh derme hina jeanstop me aayi uffff mera lund jhatke maarne laga hina ko dekh kr
Ahhhh yarrr aisa mast khazana mere gher me chipa tha
Hina ki moti gaand ufff aur tane huye boobs


Hina bahut sarmaye aur mere saamne khari ho gayi
Maine hina ke saamne hi apna lund acjust kiya
Aur bola uffff meri gudya pari jaisi sexy lag rahi h
Mn kr raha h tujhe aise hi zindagi bhar dekhta rahu
Tu sharma q rahi h
Hina. Bhayya sb mujhe dekh rahe h
Me. Gudya tu bahut pyaari lg rahi h to sb tujhe hi dekhege
Unko chor
Chal ghoomne chalte h
Hina. Aise hi koi dekh lega bhayya
Me. Nhi dekhga aur dekh bhi lega to kiya bigaad lega
Hina. Bhayya me ik teacher hun me jin ladkiyon ko padati hu wo dekh lengi to unse najre kaise milaungi
Me. Tu khali ki tension matle koi nhi dekhne wala h hame chal ab
Aur apne baal khule chor de

Maine hina ke baal khol diye
Hina. Bhayya baal mt kholo
Me. Gudya khule baal aur pyare lgte h ais
Ab lali hoton pe aur lagale bs
Ruk aata hu

Me ik selsgirl se lipistic maang laya

Hina. me laga lungi
Me. Nhi me khud lagunga apni gudya ke

Me hina ke honton pe lali lagane laga
Mera lund jhatke maare
aisa lg raha tha abhi hina ke hoton ko choosne lagu
Itni hot bahan shayd kisiki ho


Hina ki saansen tez ho gayin
Wo sage bade bhai ke itne kareeb kabhi nhi aayi

Me. Uffff ab lg rahi tu angle chal bata kaha chalegi ghoomne

Hina. Bhayya me aaj tk ghoomi hi nhi mujhe pata nhi

Me. Gudya aaj ke baad me tujhe dunya ki saari khusya dunga
Chal aaj tujhe movie dikhake lata hu

Hina. Bhayya guna h movie dekhna
Me. Ham insan h farishte thodi h jo guna na ho
Chal
Maine hina ke gale me haath dal diya

Hina sisk uthi pr mera haath nhi hataya

Hina pahli baar cinema hall me aayi
Main janboojh kr sexymovie dikhane laya

Ham dono andr gaye hamare barabr me kuchh couple the
Ik ladka bola
Bhai aapki girlfreind h ye
Me. Han
Ladka. Bahut cute h aapki gf

Ik aur cuople hina ke paas tha

Wo ladki hina se baat krne lagi
Ladki. Mujhe lg raha tum pahli baar apne boyfreind ke saath nikli ho
Jo itni dari ho
Yar yaha kon dekhne wala h tumko maze kro
Waise itna hot boyfreind h tumhara
Uffff

Hina. Ki saanse tez ho gayi sb mujhe hina ka bf samjhe
Hina mere kaan me boli
Hina. Bhayya yaha mujhe sahi nhi lg raha h
Sb glt samjh rahe h appne jhoot q bola bol dete bahan h meri
Me. Pgl abhi sb norml h bahan bolta to sb tujhe ghorte
Ab tension mt le movie dekh
Maine ik haath hina ke gale me daal diya

Movie chalti gayi movie me sex seen aane lage
paas wale couple kissing kare

Hina garam hone lagi wo apne aapko bahut muskil se roke
Me uska sholder sahlaun
Movie me sex chal raha tha full open aawz thin

Sb apni apni gf ko masal rahe the
Me dheerre dheere apne hont hina ke kano ke paas Le gaya
Aur dheere dheere maine apne hont hina ki gardn pe rakh diye

Hina machal uthi maine apne hath hina ke boobs per rakh diye aur zor zor se hina ke boobs dawane laga

Ufff dosto poocho mt kitna maza aa raha tha hina ko masalne me

Hina machal uthi me boobs dawata raha
Wo achank uth khari huyi aur boli
Hina. Bhayya ruk jao galt h ye chalo yaha se
Pas wale couple bhi chonke ufffye bhai bahan hai

Hina waher aayi aur boli bhayya mera burka do
Mujhe burkha pahnna h

Maine bhi kuchh nhi bola aur burka de diya
Hina burka pahnke nikl aayi
Hm bus se aa rahe the bus me bahut bheeg thi
sb khare the
Bus me kuchh harami ladke aaye wo aps me bole
Ufff yarrr kiya mst mulli h dekh yarr
Randi ki gaand aur boobs kase huye h ahhh ye chodne ko mile yarr
Sali mulliyan hoti bahut hot h
Chal aage chal maze lete h mullli ke

Unhe pata nhi tha wo meri bahan h wo mujhe bole bhai thoda peeche aao
Me peeche aa gaya mujhe hina kisi tarh garm karni thi
Aur mn bhi hua dekhu ye sb bahan ke saath kiya krte h

Wo ladke mere bahan ke peeche khare ho gaye ik ne apna lund hina ki gaand pe tek diya
Hina aage huyi to aage ik ladka chala gaya
Sb dheere dheere mere bahan ko aage peeche se dawayen

Aage ik ladka meri bahan ke boobs ka maza le peeche ik gaand ka
Hina tarsti huyi nigah se mujhe dekhe

Maine bardast kerne ka ishara kiya
Itne me ik ladke ne meri bahan ki kamr pkdli

Hina pahle hi bahut garm thi
Uski aankhen band hone lagi
Achanak breck lgne se usne hina ke boobs dawa diye
Meri bahan sisk uthi

Me fir hina ke paas aage khara ho gaya
Hina ko thodi raht mili
Hina ne mere seene pe sr rakh diya uski aankho me aansu aa gaye

Maine us ladko peeche hatne ko bola

Hina achank mere se chipk gayi
Aur sisk ne lagi
Me. Gudya kiya hua ro q rahi h
Hina. Kuchh nhi bhayya tum door q gaye

Me samjh gaya wo dr gayi
Me. Nhi gudya yahi tha ab aa gaya na

Fir ham ghr aa gaye

Me sote time ammi aur hina ki gaand boobs touch krta
Aur unki gaand pe maal girata
Jiske baare me ammi hina bhi jaan gayi
Pr kuchh boli nhi

Hina ab mujhsw kafi open ho gayi
me usse gandi gandi baten krta
Aur use porn dekhna ka bolta
Wo bolti mere phone me daal do me khud dekh lungi

Mere dost sb pareshan the roz mujhe bulate milne
Ik din me bhi gaya
Ravi . Sale tu kaha tha itne time sale teri mad*se ki ik mulli set bhi ho gayi h
Bahut line deti h
Bs dr lgta h kaise baat ho yarr tu karayega hamari baat

Me. Chal dikha kon si mulli h ravi ne jis pr ishara kiya mujhe jhatka laga
Wo meri sagi bahan ki tarf ishara kare

Me .sale ye kaise set ho gayi mujhe yakeen nhi
Ravi. Sale ab nhi dekh rahi
warna roz dekhti huyi jati h
Chl aaj iska peecha karte h kaha rahti h
Me. Yarr bat suno me nhi ja sakta hu
Rahul. Sale tujhe kiya problem h abe tere bina hm kuchh nhi kar payege
Sabse pahle tu choot maarna uski

Mera lund jhatka mara apni bahan ki choot ne nam se

Itne me ammi aur hina nikl gayi

Doosre din meri bajah se hina mere dosto ko na dekhe

Rahul. Sali is mulli ko kiya hua randi roz to bahut line deti thi ab nhi dekh rahi h
Ravi. Yaar chodne me bahut maza aayega isko
Me. Haan yarrr maza to full degi sali
Doosri wali bhi mst h
Ravi . Han uski maa h wo sali wo to aur jiyada mza degi
Dono ma beti mast randiyan h
Yarr rihaan kuchh kr
Me - salo mera lund khud shant nhi ho raha dono ko Dekh kr inko chodna to padega hi

Fir doosre din hm sab ladkion ko ghoore

Ham aise hi baten kar rahe the tabhi ammi aur hina aayi
Ammi mera name lwker boli
rihaan sara din aawara hi frta rahta chal ghr

Mere dost ammi aur bahan ke aate hi chonk gaye
Wo hairan the unhe aaj hi pata chala ye mere ammi aur bahan h
Unhone aajtk meri ammi aur hina ko nhi dekha tha
Qki anmi aur hina pahle abbu ke dr se hamesha muh chipa ke rakhti thi
Meri ammi aur bahan abbu ke jane ke baad kafi aazad ho gayi ab burkhe bhi aise ke sara jism saaf dikhe
Ammi to gazb ki lg rahi thi

Hina chor nazro se mere dosto ko dekhe
Jisme hina ik teacher thi

Me apni bahan ki nazro ko dekhu

Fir ammi hina chali gayi

Mere dost kuchh na bole
Rahul. Sale bata to deta teri ammi aur bahan h ye
Me. Salo to tum kiya goorne se man jate
Ravi. Sale wo teri sagi maa bahan h
Me. Salo in dono ko dekho to kaisi hot maal h
Ravi. Han yarr mast to h pahle batata to set kr lete

Ab krlo set bahan ko lund pareshan bahan ki choot fadne ke liye .
Rakes. Sale fir vhi teri sagi bahan ammi h
Me. Salo lund kuchh nhi dekhta ye dono chud gayi to mad*se ki jane kitni mulliya chodne ko milegi tumko
Hamara hi raaz hoga kachhi kaliyan milengi
Rahul. Han yarr kuchh plan h hm tere gher aaye
Me . Ok aa jao
Fir sham ko mere dost roz ghr aate aur ammi aur bahan ko khoob ghorte

Mere room me hm sb nange hoker muth marte
Mujhe Kuch samjh nhi aaye
kaise chodo ammi aur hina ko

Me. Salo kuchh baat bhi kiya kro bahan se meri
Meri bahan to tumko line deti h

Rahul. Yar dr lagta h

Me. Salo aaj room khol kr muth marte h me hina ko butata hu
Hamare lund dekh kr grm hogi hina

Fir ham sb nange apne lund door ki trf karke hilaye aur meri bahan hame chaye dene aayi
Room khule hi uska muh khula ke khula rah gaya
Meri bahan ham sb ke lund khare hoker dekhne lagi
Hm anjaan bante huye neeche grdn kiye muth mare
Kuchh der meri pakeeza bahan jisne aaj tk lund nhi dekha nhi
aaj 4 lund ik saath dekhe aur teen uncut lund
Kuch der me maine jaise hi hina ko dekha
Meri bahan bhag gayi wahi chaye rakh ke
Rahul. Ufff mulli bhagle
kisi din tujhe poore ghr me bhaga bhaga kr chodege ahhh rihaan bahan mst h teri

Fir ye hamara roz ka bn gaya ik baar ammi ne dekh liya hame muth marte huye
Wo bhi aise hi bhagi


Meri ammi aur bahan samjh gayi thi me hi harami hu
Pr kuchh bole nhi

Ik din ammi nani ghr gayi thi
Hina akele thi
Maine try kiya baat nhi bani maine dosto ko call ki wo sb aa gaye

Me. Hina yarr aaj ammi bhi nhi h pleaae yar aaj koi new dress pahn ke dikha na please aaj mini dress jo tere liye laya tha wo pahn ke dikha de
Hina. Aaj ammi nhi h bilkul nhi tumhara bharosa nhi
Me. Tera rape thodi krdunga
Hina. Tumhara bs nhi chalta warna tum mera rape bhi krdo

Me. Tujhe apne sage bhai pe bharosha nhi h
Hina.bharosa to jaan se badh kr h
Me. To ulti baat q kr rahi h
Hina. Bhai shaitan ka koi bharosa nhi kab bahka de

Itne me mere dost aa gaye

Me doston ko andr le aaya maine hina ko chaye banane ka bol diya
Kitchen saamne thi
Meri bahan abhi burke me thi madrse se aakr chenge nhi kiya tha usne

Mere dost sb meri bahan ko bath kr ghoorne lage
Rahul. Bhai gaand gazb ki lagti h teri bahan ki
Ravi. Rihaan ik baar chud jaye fir aur nikhr jayegi ye

Me. Yarr kb chudegi sali itni koshish ki chudne me nhi aayi
Rakesh. Wo teri sagi bahan h itni jaldi tere neeche nhi aayegi
Hm try karte h
Me. Ok try kro me waher ja raha hu
Kuchh kr lena

gudya kuch leaun tu yahi rahna
Hina . Ok bhayya jao jaldi aana

Fir me wahr se jhank kr dekhne laga kiya kr rahe sale
Mere dost hina ke paas gaye aur bole
Rahul. Yarr hamse kiya glti huyi
jo hame ab tum dekhti bhi nhi
Pahle to tum bahut dekhti thi
Hina Thoda gabraye wo akeli ghr me aur teen gair mazhabi ladke uske itne paas aa gaye

Hina. Wo aap log baitho bhayya ane wale honge
Rahul. Uski trnsion mat wo kuch nhi kahne wala hamara jigri dost h wahi to chor kr gaya h
dro nhi yarr

Rahul ne meri bahan ke sholder me haath rakh diya

Idher mera lund tan gaya ahhh meri pakeeza bahan teen gair mazhabi ladko ke saath bilkul akeli

Hina. Thodi peeche hati aur boli please bhayya aate honge dekh lenge tum sofe pe baitho
Ravi. Hina tum bahut khoobsurt ho ham deewane ho gaye h tumhare
Tum hame igone q kar rahi ho
Tumne hi pahle hame apne peeche bulaya
ab khud bhag rahi ho
Hina. Maine kb bulaya
Rakesh. Tum hame dekh kr muskurati thi na
Ab natk q kar rahi ho jb maoka mila h

Achanak hina ko rakesh ne peeche se pakd liya aur meri bahan ke boobs dawane laga
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Hina. Gabra gayi aur rakeah se jhootne ki koshish kare
Hina. Plese mujhe choro warna me shor macha dungi
Rahul. Meri bahan ka muh pakd ke ik thappad mara
Sali randi pahle hme ishare deti h ab natk kar rahi h
Macha shor randi hamara kuchh nhi bigdega tu zaroor badnaam ho jayegi

Wo teeno mere bahan ko masalne lage ravi meri bahan ke honto ko choosne laga
Rahul. Meri bahan ki chot masalne laga ahhh sali mulli kiya garm maal h tu randi jiyada natk mat kar warna tera rape karke net pe video uplode kar denge

Hina saath dene lagi aur boli please abhi nhi mere bhayya aane wale honge

Ahhh randi wo kuch nhi kahega wo khud tujhe chodna chahta h chal neeche baith lund choos mera

Mere teeno dosto ne lund nikal liye
Hina bahut ghabra gayi thi par shor machati to khud badnaam hoti ab wo kiya kare uski shamjh na aaye wo neeche baith gayi
Uske saamne teen uncut lund the
Meri pakeeza bahan mere teeno dosto ke paro me baith gayi

rahul ne meri bahan ke pakeeza muh me lund gusa giya
Aaj pahli baar meri bahan ne lund choosa

Ab maine socha me chala jata hu me nhi chahta tha meri bahan ko pahli baar ye teeno bhi chode
Me bas hina ko bigadna chah raha tha
Take wo mere neeche aaram se aa jaye

Wo teeno baari bari meri bahan ka moh chode
Hina ko upkiya aaye pahli baar lund hina choos rahi thi

Rahul. Ahhh randi burke wali randiya hoti hi garm h sali choos rand ahhh

Ravi ne meri bahan ka burka fad diya
Andr se meri bahan sirf bra panty me thi
Rakesh. Ahhh sali randi andr se kuvh nhi pahna tune
Mullliya sali burke ke andr hoti hi nangi h dekh rahul me kahta sali mulliyan burke ke andr nangi hoti h

Hina. Ufffmera burka q fad diya please chordo bayya aate honge
Rahul. aaj teri choot gaand sb faad denge ahh burka chor
Aur aaj hi chudegi tu tera bhai bhi chodega tujhe
Uski tension mt le

Me sochne laga maine aaj glti kardi ab inko kaise ruko warna ye sb bhi meri bahan chodege ab

Meri kuch samjh na aaye mujhe ammi aati dikhayi di

Ammi ko dekh kar meri fat gayi
Ye kiya ho gaya sala ab meri aa gayi
Meri kuchh samjh nhi aaya me wahr hi chip gaya

Ammi jaise hi andr gyi ammi cheeekh padi
Hinaaaaaa ye kiya h allah ka koaf nhi h tujhe kutya
Haramiyon me tumhe jaan se maar dungi
Ammi ke aate hi mere dost bhi gabra gaye wo sb ulte seedhe bhage ammi ko dhakka dete huye

Hina sir bra panty me thi ammi thappad thappad mare hina ko

Ammi. Randi itni aag bhari h tujhme bata deti mujhe
Jamana kiya kahega ham aur ladkiyon ko ilm sikhate h aur tu ye galeej kaam
Gair mahabi ladko ke saath

Aur rihaan kaha h tujhe akela kaise chor ke gaya wo
Uski kambakhti me nikalungi

Ammi ne fir gusse me hina ke thappad marna chalu kar diye

Hina. Rote huye ammi meri galti nhi h wo mujhe damka rahe the me dr gayi thi
Meri video banali aur bole netpe daal denge
Ammi aap hi socho aisa kuchh hota to hamari kiya izzat rah jati

Ye rihaan kaha gaya h
Hina. Wo ammi nasta lene gaye the pata nhi kiya ho gaya abhi tk nhi aaye

Meri fat gayi me kiya karu ab

Idea
Maine apna sr ik pattar se foda aur khoon jagah lagake
Langdate huye aaya

Ammi mujhe dekhte hi sara gussa bhool gayi aur bhagte huye aayi
Ammi. Rihaan mere bachhe kiya hua tujhe
Me. Ammi mera accident ho gaya me bahut der beshos pada raha kuchh log chor ke gaye h
Ammi. Rote huye koi tujhe hospital q nhi le gaya kameena chal jaldi

Ammi aur hina dono gabra gayi mujhe hopitl le gayi

Docter ne patti ki

Kuchh der ammi aur hina aayi
Ammmi . Beta ab theek h kaha kaha lagi tujhe
Docter bola darne baat nhi inko bas srr pe lagi h aur kahi kuchh nhi hua
Ammi. To langa q raha h
Docter. Pata nhi chot nhi h shayad aise drd ho theek ho jayega
Mujhe lagta sr pe kuchh mara gaya h

Hina mujhe ghoorne lagi
Wo samjh gayi maine ammi se bachne ke liye khud sr fod liya

Ammi bhi ajeeb najr se mujhe dekhe aur muskurate huye bole koi nhi beta kuchh nhi hua tujhe khuda ka shukr h

Me dawa leke aati tu aaram kar

Hina mere paas aayi aur gusse se boli bhayya mujhe pata h koi accident nhi hua tumhara
Ammi se bachne ke liye ye sb tha
Bhayya tumne mujhe fasa diya

Me. Tu kaha fasi tune ne bhi sara ilzaam dosto pe daal diya
Ab sb chor bhool ja sb
Hina. Bhayya ammi ki najar me main gir gayi bilkul
Fir ammi aayi aur boli le dawa khale
Shukr h tu theek h aur idher teri bahan
Me. Kiya hua ammi
Ammi. beta meri ik baat manega
Agrr zara bhi meri izzat karta h
Me. Bolo ammi aap meri jaan ho
Ammi. Tu kabhi apne dosto ko ghr mt lana
Me. Ammi kiya hua batao to
Ammi. Beta kuch nhi bs meri baat maan aur unka saath chorde warna bhoolja mujhe teri ammi hu
Me. Ammi tum sabse bar ker ho
me unka saath chor dunga
Ab khus
ye batao hua kiya
Ammi. Unhone teri bahan ke saath battamzi ki
Me.gusse ka natk karte huye ammi kiya bol rahi ho me salo ko chorunga nhi
Ammi. Beta tu kuchh nhi karega tujhe kuchh ho gaya to me sh nhi paungi
Tu hi ham dono ka sahara h

Din beet gaya agle din ammi hina madarse se aayi aur ammi boli rihaan ammi ke ghr ja rahi hu tu ghr hi rahna kahi mt jana apni bahn ko akela chor kr
Me. ok ammi

Ammi chali gayi me uth kr gate lock kar aaya room me gaya hina pat leti thi ufff uski gaand kahr dhaye

Me hina ke uper chr gaya hina ki gaand ki darar me mera lund fas gaya
Hina ka jism bahut garm tha
Me. Kiya kar rahi h gudya meri
Hina. Bhayya hato mere uper se me tumse nhi bol rahi
Me. Gussa h mujhse
Hina. Han bhayya tumne kl mujhe fasa diya
Me. Yarr hina tu hi bata me kiya karta koi aur chara bhi to nhi tha
Hina ki gaand me me lund gis raha tha

Hina Palatne ki koshish kre maine bhi palta liya ab hina ki choot me lund gise

Me hina ki aankho me dekhta hua
Sorry gudya mere paas koi chara nhi tha ammi achanak a gayi
Hina. Bhayya achha ik baat batao kal tum mujhe apne dosto ke saath akela chor gaye tumhe kaisa lag raha tha
Wo sb ager mera rape kar dete to
Me. Nhi karte me aa jata ager wo tere saath kuch glt karte
Hina. Matlb tum yahi the
Me. Han me dekhna chahta tha meri gudya kaha tak jati h
Unke uncut lund bahut pyaar se choos rahi thi tu
Hina. Tum mujhe dekh rahe the lund hilate hoge tum na
Hina sharma gayi
Me. Han jan tujhe kaise pata
Hina. Ik Porn tumne di thi usme jab ik ladki ka gangbng hota to uska bhai chip kar dekh muth marta h
Me. Han tujhe achhi lagi porn
Hina. Han bahut tumne mujhe bhayya bahut bigaad diya
Pahle me kuchh bhi glt nhi sochti thi
Tumne jabse porn dikhayi h mera dil bhi chudne ka krne lga
Jab porn me ik bhai apni bahan ko chodta tha to mujhe lagta tum bhi mujhe kash aise hi chodo
Me. To me tere paas aata to bhagti q thi
Hina. Bhayya dr tha thoda sage bhai the tum khoshish bhi to nhi karte the thodi zabardasti krte mujhse to me kab ka chud gyi hoti tumse
Me. Ab chudwa le to ahhh
Me hina ko kiss karne laga hina bhi mera poora saath dene lagi
Maine kuchh der apni bahan ke hont choose fir hina ke boobs dawane laga burke ke uper se
Ahhh hina utaar burka apna is shareefi ke libaas ke neeche ik randi chipi h
Hina. Fark karo wo randi bhi tumari sagi bahan h
Me. Ahhh hina tune itne achhi baten kaha se seekhi h
Hina. Bas aa gayi
Me. Chal nangi hoja utaar burka apna
Hina. Bhayaa kl un kutto ne mera new burka faad diya
Me. Gudya tension mt le wo tujhe usse bhi manhge burke lake denge
Tu unko apni ik baar choot de dena
Gudya tere paas jo choot h isse to hazar burke kharide ja sakte h

Hina ka jb maine burka utaara to hina andr bra panty me thi



Ufff hina randi hi bani rahti h tu hamesha burke me tu nangi rahti h
Ammi bhi nangi rahti hongi shayad
Hina. Ahhh bhayya jiyada tr ladkiya burke me nangi hi hoti h
Ammi main kabhi kabhi bra panty bhi nhi pahnti aise hi chali jati hu

Maine hina ki bra panty bhi nikl di
Hina ki choot aur boobs ufff
Boobs brown
Aur choot Bilkul gori pakeeza thi
Ik vhi baal bhi tha

Hina ki choot ko me chatne laga
Hina. Ahhh bhayya kiya kr rahe ho ahhh bhayya chato ahhh
hina mera sar choot me dawane lagi
Fir me bhi nanga ho gaya aur hina ko bahon me leker kiss krne laga
Me. Ahhh gudya nangi kitni mst lg rahi h tu ahhu randi bane gi ab meri

Hina. Ahh bhayya bana do mujhe randi ahhh bhayya lund choosu
Me. Ahh choos kl tune lund choose to maza aaya
Hina. Han bhayya maza bahut aaya tabhi to fir dil kr raha h choosne ka

Fir kuchh der mera lund choosa maine poora lund hina ke muh me gusaya
Mujhe hina ka muh chod kr jannat ka maza mil raha tha

Kuchh der me main hina ke uper aa gaya ahhh hina ab raha nhi ja raha h
Hina. Ahhh bhayya daldo fir ahhh

Maine hina ki choot pe lund set kiya aur dheere deere lund ka topa daal diya
Hina dard se machli
Maine hina ka muh dawaya aur zordaar dhakka mara adha lund hina ki seal torta hua gus gaya
Hina machane lagi
Maine fir doosra dhakka mara mera poora lund gus gaya

Hina cheekhne lagi ahhhhhi ammi mar gayi ahhhh bhayyaa nikallo ahhhh me mar jaungi

Maine hina ki ik na suni aur poora gusa ke ruk gaya
Kuchh der me hina shant huyi
Me. Ahhh gudya bs jitna dard hona tha
ho liya ab maza aayega tujhe
Maine fir hina ka muh dawaya aur dheere dheere hina ko chodne laga



Kuchh der me hina sant ho gayi
Aur mera saath dene lagi
Hina. Ahhh vhayya ahhh dheere dheere ahhh chodo bhayya ahhh aise hi
Me.ahhh gudya ab teri choot ft chuki h ab tujhe jannat maza dilaunga ahhh ahhh

Me dheere dheere speed badane laga
Hina. Ahhh bhayya ahhh dheere ahhh bhayya dard ho raha h bahut bara lund h tumhara ahhh ahhh bhayya
Chodte raho ahhh
Me. Ahhh sali randi maza aane laga tujhe ahhh le ahhh
Hina. Ahhh bhayya chodte raho ahh me jane wali hu ahhh
Aur tez ahhh bhayya ahhhh chodo apni pakeeza bahn ko ahhh bhayya mujhe randi bana do ahhhh
Ahhh fardo meri choot ko

Me. Ahh sali le ahhh meri bahan kiya mst tight choot h teri ahhh bahut maza degi tu ab ahhh


Hina. Ahhh bhayya chodo tez tez ahhh me jane wali rukna mat ahhh

Hina ne pani chor diya
Hina ke pani nikalte hi me bhi full speed me chodu apni choti bahan ko
Aur maine bhi sara maal hina ki choot me bhar diya

Kafi der ham dono nange hi pade rahe

Hina ki choot sooj gayi maine pankiller di sham tak hina theek ho gayi
Aaj poore din hina nangi nhi
Poore ghr me hina nangi hi firti rahi
Fir raat ho gayi

Hina bhi bahut khush thi nangi hoker abhi tak wo ik pakeeza ladki thi jo hamesha shareefi ka libas burka me rahti thi
Aur aaj poori nangi khoome ghr me
Me poore din kiss krta maslta raha hina ko

Me. Gudya maza a raha nanga rah kar
Hina. Bhayya bahut achha lag raha h kash sari zindagi aise hi rahu
Me. Mujhse shadi karle tujhe hamesha nanga hi rakhuga
Hina. Bhayya shadi ham kaise kar sakte h
Jamana nhi manega aur ammi to maar degi ager hamare baare me pata chal gaya to
Me. Gudya ager me ammi ko bhi chod lu to kaisa rahega
Hina. Uff bhayya tab to maza aa jaye
Ammi bhi waise bahut hot h
Ammi ko lund nhi mil raha ab
Unki choot me bhi aag lagi hogi

Me. Bata gudya kaise chode ammi ko
Hina. Bhayya ammi ke sote huye boobs dawao
Aur apna maal nikalo gaand par bhayya tumne jb meri gaand pe maal nikalte to meri choot meaag lag jati
Dil karta tha tum usi time mujhe chodne lago
Partum chodte nhi

Maine fir us raat me hina ko bahut baar choda
Poore gher me har tareeke se hina ki choot mari
Fir ham dono aise hi ammi se chip chip ke roz chudayi karte hina kabhi tabiyat kharab ka bahana karke ghr ruk jati
Maine ik din hina gaand bhi maar li
Ab me choti bahan ke dono cheedo ko siddat se chodta tha

Ik din maine fir hina ko nhi jane diya aur ammi ke jate hi hina ko nanga kr
Hina jaldi se nangi ho gayi

Ahhhhina chal aaja
maine hina ko pat litaya aur hina ki gaand me lund gusa diya
Aur chodne laga
Ahhh hina teri gaand marte huye jiyada maza aata h
Hina. Ahhh bhayya pahle thodi der choot mar liya kro
Me. Ahhh hina ik aur lund hota wo teri choot me hota me teri gaand marta ahhhh
Hina. Aah bhayya apni bahan ko ksi aur se chudwane me sharam nhi aayegi tumhe
Me. Ahhh gudya sharam kaisi ab

Itne me ammi aa gayi
Ammi ko shak tha ammi ne pakd liya hame
Me hina ki gaand be fikr hoker maar raha tha
Hina bhi mase se marwa rahi thi

Ammi. Hinaaaaaaa haramzadi randi kahi ki
Rihaan tujhe jaan se maar dungi harami tujhe sharam nhi aa rahi apni sagi bahan ko chodte huye

Me ghabra gaya meri samjh me na aaye kiya kro
Ammi mujhe marne ke liye aayi aur maine ammi ko pakd liya
Aur ammi ke boobs dawane laga
Me. Ahhhhammi maza karna galt nhi hota ammi tum bhi hamara saath do bahut maza aayega aapko bhi
Ammi.chor rihaan mujhe me maar dungi kutte tune bahan chodli ab apni maa bhi chodni h tujhe kutte choor

Me. Ammmi please maan jao tumhe bhi bahut time se lund nhi mila hoga
Ahhh ammi boobs to bahut mast h aapke ahhh ammi. Tumne bra nhi pahni h kiya
Hina. Please ammi bahut maza aata h bhayya ka lund lene me
Ammi chudwa lo tum bhi
Apne bete ka lund lene me tumhe bhi maza aayega

Maine ammi ka burka faad diya
Ammi burke ke andr poori nangi thi
Me. Ahhh randiammi jaam shareefi ke libaas ke peeche meri randi ammi h
Hina to bra panty me nikli thi tum to poori nangi h
Mere dost sahi bolte the
Ke teri mulli ammi sali burke ke neeche poori nangi rahti h


Ammi apne badan ko chipane lagi
Ammi. Rihaan please beta chorde me teri maa hu aisa nhi karte

Maine ammi ko pakda aur ammi ki choot maslna shuru kiya
Ahhh ammmijaan ik baar mera lund apni choot me lo to maza aayega
Main ammi ko girane laga
Maine zabardaati ammi ko gira
Hina meri madad karne lagi
Hina ne ammi ke haath pakde aur maine apna lund ammi ki choot me gusa diya
Ammi machal uthi
Me. Ahhhh ammi bol maza aaya lund leker apne aage bete ka ahhh ammmi teri choot to bahut garam h
Ahh sali randi tu nangi rahti h kahi na kahi tu bhi lund leti hogi

Maine ammi ko kuchh der choda fir ammi mera saath dene lagi
Aur fir ammmi bhi chudwane lagi
Ammi. Ahhh beta ye gatl h ahhh
Me. Kuchh glt nhi ammi mujhe pata tum kisi na kisi ka lund leti ho
Ammi. Ahhh beta tere saath bahut guna h ahhh beta ahhh
Me. Ammi bs maza lo sb bhool jao ahhh apne bete ka lund kaisa h

Ammi. Ahhh beta chood mst lund h tera ahhh beta

Maine ammi ko tez tez chodna chalu kr diya




Ammi. Ahhh beta chood me jane wali hu ahhhh chod zor se beta ahhahhh

Us din maine ammi ko bahut choda
Ammi bhi razi ho gayi
Ik din maine ammi ki gaand mari ammi ki gaand kuwari thi
Maine ammi ki gaand bhi faddi
Uske baad ammi aur hina meri parsnol randiyan bn gayi
Madarse se aate hi me dono ko nangi kar deta aur bolta chalo subha tk tum dono nangi hi rahogi
Uske baad mere dosto ne bhi kayi hina aur ammi ko choda
Maine thoda force kiya to hina aur ammi maan gayi
Fir maine hina aur ammi se shadi bhi ki aur ik ik bachha bhi paida

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anookhi kitaab ,

Spoiler

year 2003 ...

aadmi 1, ae sun jaisy mein ney bola waisa hee karny ka ,
aadmi 2 , han samaj gaya bhai aap jao isey ham dhek lengy ,

aadmi 1 , hahaha dheka mujsey ulhajney ka nuksaan haha ,

waha farash pay para ghayal shaks gussey sey us aadmi ko dhek raha tha .... uski aankho mein
khoon sawar tha ... par wo chah kar bhi kuch nahi kar sakta tha ,

ghayal shaks , kutto tumhara bhi waqt aye ga dhekna jaisa tum logo ney mery saath
kiya is sey bhi bura tumharey saath hoga ,

wo dono aadmi uski baat sunkay zor zor sey hasty hay ,
aadmi 1 , chal isney to nautanki chalu kardi mein ja raha ho tu dhek isey ,
aadmi 2 , han thik hay bhai ,

aur aadmi 1 waha sey chaley jata hay .... ab uska chamcha apny gundo kay saath wahi khara tha ,

aadmi 2 , han bey harami ziyada hee charbi char gayi hay tujey ,

ye keh kar wo aadmi uskey muh par zor sey laath mar deta hay ..... jis sey wo ghayal shaks
buri tarha dard sey tarap jata hay ,

ab wo sarey us shaks ko buri tarha peet rahy thy wo khoon mein latpat ho chuka tha ,

kisi kay dil mein rahem nahi aya uski halat dhek kar wo bss .... usey maarey hee ja rahy thy ,

aadmi 2 , ab ruk jao saalo hamey isey jaan sey nahi maarna ,
us aadmi ki baat sunkar wo gunday ruk jatey hay ,

aadmi 2 , dhek ab tu samaj gaya hoga kay ham kiya cheez hay isliye ab kabhi bhi hamsey mat ulhajna ,

wo ghayal shaks khoon mein latpat tha .... uskey maathey sey der sara khoon nikal raha tha .. wo ab jawab dene ki halat mein bhi nahi tha ,

aadmi 2 , aik kaam karo isko iskey ghar kay saamney phek kar ajao ,

uskey gunday ab us shaks ko jeep mein utha kar bitha dete hay ... aur khud bhi jeep mein beth jatey hay .. ab jeep uskey ghar ki taraf barha dete hay ,

thori der baad ...
aik jeep ghar kay saamney rukti hay ... tabhi jeep ka door khulta hay ... aur wo gunday us shaks ko bahar dhakka dedetay hay ,

ghar ki bolcany mein maa beta kharey howy ye sab scene dhek rahy thy ... jab us shaks ka chehra unkay saamney aata hay ... wo aurat zor sey chillaky neechy ki taraf bhagti hay ,

uska beta bhi apni maa kay peechy bhagta hay ... wahi wo aurat main gate kholkar us shaks kay paas ajati hay jo sarak par gira howa tha ,

aurat , ravi ye kiya howa tumari ye halat kaisy howi ,

jee han us ghayal shaks ka naam ravi tha ... jo aik imandaar journalist tha ... aur jinho ney uski ye halat ki wo(aadmi1) uska naam ashok tha jo aik barey neta kaa beta tha jisney abhi hali mein hee politics mein kadam rakha tha uski age 25 saal thi ,

aur wo (aadmi2) uska chamcha tha uska naam rakesh tha ...jo us ashok kay saarey kaaley kaam karta hay
aur age 30 saal thi ye shadi shuda hay isney 2 shadi kar rakhi hay ... lekin iski dono patniyo ko nahi pata tha kay isney 2 shadi ki howi hay ,

jeep wahi khari howi thi usmein sey aik gunda bolta hay ,
gunda , samja ley apni pati ko ashok bhai kay saath mat ulhaj dheka na kaisi halat kardi iski ,

wahi wo jeep ab chali jaati hay ,

wo aurat ab aanso bah rahi thi ...thori der baad log bhi jama hogaye ... aur unkay padosi ney ambulance ko call kardia tha ... kuch der baad ambulance bhi agayi thi ,

ravi ko ambulance mein daal kar hospital le gaye thy ,

wahi ravi ka beta ye sab dhek raha tha wo bilkul sehma howa tha .... uski aankhay apny baap ki ye halat dhek kar .... badla lene ki bhavnao ko jaga Rahi thi ,

20 years later .....

ravi , gayatri jaldi khana lagado ,
gayatri , han abhi leke ayi ,

ravi aur uska beta dining table par bethy howy khana lagney ka intezar kar rahy thy ... tabhi ravi ki biwi yaani gayatri khana lekar ajati hay aur paros deti hay ,

par rahul apni hee soch mein tha ... uski aankho mein 20 saal purana kissa chal raha tha .... aaj wo 24 saal ka hogia tha .... jo usney 4 saal ki umar mein dheka usey wo abhi tak nahi bhul paya ,

wahi ab aatey hay ashok par akhir 20 saal baad wo kaha hay ,
ashok ki umar 45 saal hogayi thi ... uska baap chal basa tha 3 saal pahly hee ... lekin wo apny baap ki tarha aik corrupt neech insan ban gaya tha ,

wahi uska chamcha rakesh aaj bhi uskey saath hee tha aur dono ney milkar kitney logo ko maut kay ghat utaar diya ,
ashok ka bss aik hee sapna tha state ka Minister banna ... wo kayi candidate aur news channels ko khareed chuka tha apny paiso aur badmashi ki power sey ,

aisa koi nahi tha jo ashok kay kaaley karnamao ka pindara khol sakey ... 20 saal pahely ravi ney ye kiya tha lekin uski halat kiya kardi thi ... jisey dhek kar aaj kisi journalist mein himmat nahi thi ,

neha , ashok tumney wada kiya tha mery liye wo gold chain lekar aogy ,
ashok , janeman bhul gaya tha lekin pakka kal zaroor laonga ,
neha , ohhh ashok tum aisa hee karty ho ,

ashok apni patni ko baho mein leleta hay ... aur wo uski baho mein nakhrey kar rahi thi ,

ashok apni patni sey behad pyar karta hay .. neha ki umar 38 saal thi ....han wo ashok sey 7 saal choti thi par ashok kay paas paisa aur power itna tha ... jiski lalach mein wo ashok kay pyar ko inkar na kar saki ,

rahul apni socho mein mast bss aik gali mein chaley hee jaraha tha ... tabhi uska pair kisi cheez par atak jata hay ,

aur uski nazar waha jaati hay ,
rahul , arey ye to book hay ,

rahul us book ko utha leta hay .... aur tabhi book ko ghuma kar dhekta hay .... uski aankhey ye parh kar chaudi hojati hay ,

rahul , ye kiya sexnote likha howa hay ye kiski book hay ,

aur rahul us book ko kholkar dhekta hay ... par page to pura khali tha ...wo har page ko dhekta hay par sab khaali thy ,
wo kuch page aur kholta hay ... tabhi aik black color ka pen usko dhikta hay ... aur wo us pen ko utha leta hay ,

rahul abhi bhi uljha howa tha ... aakhir ye book to khaali hay aur uski ..front par sexnote likha howa hay ,

tabhi rahul book kay pahely page par ... usee pen sey apna naam likhta hay ,

kuch 30 second baad uski body mein khoon tez raftar sey dhoodhney lagta hay ... uska lund uski pant kay andar ubharna shuro hogia tha ,

Rahul chauk jata hay .... akhir ye uskey saath ho Kiya raha hay ,
rahul man mein , arey ye kiya horaha hay kahi ye is book ki waja sey to nahi ... nahi nahi.. pagal hay kiya ..lekin ,

tabhi rahul ko apny kaano mein kisi ki awaz aati hay ,
anjan awaz , bewakoof apna hee naam likh diya ,

ye awaz sunkar rahul chauk jata hay ... wo idher udhar dhekta hay .. par koi nahi tha ... to akhir ye awaz kaha sey ayi ,

anjan awaz , bewakoof apny kandhey par dheko ,

ye kiya wohi awaz ... rahul foran apny kandhey par dhekta hay ... aur wo aikdam sey uchal jata hay ,

rahul , oohhh bhenchod keeda ,

wo apny hath sey khandey ko jharak raha tha ,
anjan awaz , daro mat bewakoof ladkey mein koi keeda nahi is kitaab ka rakhwala ho ,

rahul ye sunkar ruk jata hay ... wo dara howa tha ye uskey saath ho kiya raha hay ... rahul ko shayad ye sapna lagta hay .. wo khudkay chutki barhta hay ,

rahul , oooiiii ye sapna nahi hay par tum ho kon aur ye mujey kiya horaha hay tum itney chotey kaisy aur hato mery kandhey sey keeday kahi kay ,

rahul ka lund phatney ko ho raha tha ... uski pant mein bara sa ubhaar ban gaya tha ,

anjan awaz , pahley tum pen ki ulti taraf sey apna naam mita do aur mein koi keeda nahi par mera naam bhi koi nahi hay mein is kitaab ka rakhwala ho aur mujey isee liye banaya gaya ,

rahul , mujey kuch samaj nahi arha ye ho kiya raha hay ..par jo bhi horaha hay kiya ye sach hay ,

anjan awaz , han ye sach hay ab tum is kitaab kay maalik bangaye ho tum is mein jiska bhi naam likho gy unkay andar sex ki shamta barh jaye gi unka jisam garam hojaye ga wo apny apsey control khoo degy
jaisa abhi tumarey saath howa lekin aur ziada hota us sey pahely tumney apna naam mita dia ,

rahul ko ab sab samaj agaya tha ... uskey chehry par shetani muskarahat agayi thi ...uska man chillaney ko kar raha tha ,

ab wo sab karsakta tha .. usey samaj agya tha jo itney saalo sey uskey andar badley aag jalrahi thi usey kaisy bujhana hay ,

Rahul , pahley tum kandhey sey hato gy mujey bohot ajeeb lag raha hay aur agar kisi ney tumko mery kandho par dhek liya to keedy kahi kay ,

anjan awaz , fikar nahi karo mujey tumharey ilawa koi aur nahi dhek sakta aur rahi baad muj sey izzat sey baat karo mein koi keeda nahi tum mujey kisi aur naam sey bula sakty ho ,

Rahul , han han ..thik hay par mein tumhey kis naam sey bulao tum chotey ho aur ajeeb sey dhikty ho ..hmmm.. kitabi keeda kaisa rahy ga ... kio kay tum kitaab kay saath hee mujey milay ho ,

kitabi keeda , bewakoof mein kaha na mujey kuch bhi bol lo par keeda nahi ,

rahul , han han .. gussa kio horahy ho chotu ... han chotu naam kaisa rahy ga tumharey size kay hisaab sey tumpar beth jaye ga ,

chotu , naam ajeeb hay par tum mujey is naam sey bula sakty ho ,

rahul , to thik hay ab tum mujey is book kay baarey mein sab kuch batao mein kia kiya karsakta
ho akhir ,
chotu , mein ney bataya to hay .. chalo tum keh rahy ho to phir bata deta ho ,

chotu , goor sey suno ... agar tum is kitaab mein kisi ka bhi naam likho gy to uskey andar sex karney
ki uttejna barh jati hay wo sab kuch bhul jata apni bhook mitaney kay liye .. aur agar tum aik saath do logo
ka naam likho gy .. wo dono aik dusrey sey sambhoog karlengy .. lekin ye jab kaam karey ga jab wo do log aik
dusrey kay saath ya kareeb ho ,

rahul , hmmm to kiya sach mein agar mein 2 logo ka naam saath hee likh lo to kia wo apas
mein sex karlengy chahey unka koi bhi rishta ho lekin sex karney kay baad wo aik dusrey ko
pehchan jaye gy ,

chotu , han unka koi bhi rishta kio na ho wo apas mein sambhoog karlengy jab tum is kitaab
mein kisi ka naam likho gy wo bss aik katputli banjaye ga aur sab kuch kar bethy ga lekin
kaam pura hojaney kay baad wo asli dunya mein wapis ajaye ga .. aur wo to tumpay hay tum
kiska kiskey saath sambhoog karao gy ,

rahul , hmm ab mujey sab samaj agya hay .. ashok tayar hojao ..hahahaha ,

chotu , ashok .. ye kon hay ,

rahul , sab pata chal jaye ga dhekty raho ,

ab rahul us kitaab ko leky apny ghar ki taraf nikal jata hay ,

neha , sssss kiya kar rhy ho ashok ,
ashok , oohhh sorry neha slip hogia ,

ashok aik baar phir lund ko neha ki chut par set karta hay aur aik dhakkey kay saath ...apna lund chut kay andar dhakel deta hay ,

neha , oooohhhh ashook thora dheere ahhhh ,
ashok , hmmm jaan dheere hee kar raha ho ,

ashok neha ki tangy apny khandey par rakha howa dhakkey laga raha tha ... neha har dhakkey kay saath sisak rahi thi ,

tabhi side table par para howa ashok ka phone ring hota hay ,
ashok , arey kon bhenchod call kar raha hay is time ,

ashok apny dhakkey rok leta hay aur phone utha kar dhekta hay ,
ashok man mein , arey ye rakesh is time kio call kar raha hay ,
ashok , neha darling mein bss 2minute mein aata ho ,

ashok usi halat mein nanga balcony mein chaley jata hay ... neha usey gussey sey dhek rahi thi ,

ashok phone par , han bol rakesh kiya lafda hogia jo is time call kar kay tang kar raha ,

rakesh , wo bhai jo candidate tumari party mein aaney sey inkar kar raha tha ..mein ney galti sey usey maardia ,

ashok , kiya bol raha hay saaley ..mein ney usey nimtaney ko nahi kaha tha tujey pata bhi hay election ka time hay hamey koi lafda nahi karna abhi ,

rakesh , wo bhai ab mein kiya karta iski patni aik dam maal thi ..mein ney usko lalach deke pel diya par jab mein pel raha tha wo saala aik dam kamrey mein agya mery paas koi raasta nahi tha usko maarney kay ilawa ,

ashok , chal lekin uski patni uska kiya usney to sab dhek liya hay na ,

rakesh , uski tension nahi lo bhai uski patni khud us sey tang thi wo kuch nahi boley gi ,

ashok , hmmm thik hay magar ab aur koi lafda nahi kardio tujey pata hay na media ko sambhalna kitna mushkil hay ,

rakesh , han bhai samaj gaya ,

ashok ab call cut karkey wapis kamrey mein ajata hay .. par wo dhekta hay neha kambal aur kar karwat lekar leti howi thi ,

ashok uskey paas jakar usey hilata hay ... par wo nakhrey kar rahi thi .. ashok kaafi try karta ha usey mananey ki par neha waisi hee karwat lekar leti howi thi ,

ashok bhi ab haar maan kar let jata hay ,

rahul , papa kiya aap us ravi kay khilaf dubara article nahi chaap sakty ,

ravi aram sey dining table par beth kar khana khaa raha tha par jaisy hee uskey kano mein rahul awaz jaati hay wo khaney ka niwala hath mein lekar rahul ki taraf dhekta hay ,

ravi , rahul mein ney kahi baar samjaya hay tumhey uskey baarey mein kabhi baat nahi karogy ,

rahul samaj jata hay usney galti kardi .. isliye wo chup rehna hee behtar samajta hay ... usey dhuk tha kay aaj bhi uska baap 20 saal purani baat nahi bhula paya ,

rahul ab khana khaa kar kamrey mein chaley jata hay ..wahi wo daraz kholkar wo book nikal leta hay ,

chotu , is kitaab ko dhekty hee raho gy ya kisi ka naam bhi likho gy ,

rahul , arey jaisy hee mein is book ko touch karta ho tum aik dam sey ajaty ho kam sey kam batakar to ao dara dete ho ,

chotu , waisey tum is kitaab ko dhek kar kiya keechdi paka rahy ho ,

rahul , kuch nahi bss apny dushman kay liye planning kar raha ho bss tum dhekty rehna kaisy mein usko barbaad karonga .. chalo ab to mein soo raha ho kal sey apna kaam shuro kardonga hahaha ,


rahul book ko wapis daraz mein daal deta hay aur soo jata hay ,

subah subah ,

ashok aur neha car mein beth kar kahi jaa rahy thy ,

ashok , sorry neha darling wo call agayi thi aur tumhey to pata hay meri call kitni important hoti hay,

neha , han to tum mujey aisy hee beech mein chorh jao gy kiya call mujsey ziada important hay aur kaha leke jarahy ho mujey ,

ashok , tum important ho mere liye jan tumhara mood sahi karney kay liye aik jaga leke ja raha ho ,

neha , par kaha ,

ashok , ye to aik surprise hay ,

rahul ab puri tarha sey tayyar tha ... aur wo bike ko kick marta hay aur nikal jata hay apni
planing kay mutabik ,

thori der baad ..... rahul bike ko aik villa kay paas rokta hay ... rahul ki nazar gate par jaati hay jaha
2 guard kharey howy thy gun lekar ,

rahul apni nazrey charo taraf ghumata hay .... tabhi usko aik kachrey ka dibba dhikta hay jo villa ki deewar
kay saath laga howa tha ,

tabhi ..... horn bajaty howy speed sey car enter hoti hay .... aur guard us car ko dhek kar villa kay
gate khol dete hay ,
rahul , to ye ashok hay yehi mauka rahul apni acting chalo kardey ,

rahul bhaagtey howy us car ki taraf jata hay .... lekin car villa kay andar ja chuki thi ..rahul bhi
gate kay band honay sey pahely villa kay andar ghus jata hay ... ye dhek kar aik guard rahul kay
peechy bhagta hay ,

ashok car sey utar chuka tha aur uskey baad neha bhi dusri side utar gayi thi ..... rahul ab ashok
kay paas ajata hay ....tabhi uskey guard pakar leta hay ,

rahul , ashok sir ashok sir mein aapka bohot bada supporter ho mein bohot pasand
karta ho apko please aik selfie leni hay apkey saath please ashok sir ,

guard rahul ko peechy dhakel raha tha .. ashok ye dhek kar us guard ko rahul ko chorney ko
bolta hay .. aur guard ye sunkar rahul ko chorhdeta hay ,

ashok , shukriya tumhara bss aap logo ka pyar hay muj par ,

rahul ashok sey haath milata hay .... wo aisy behave kar raha tha jaisy wo uska fan ho ,

rahul , sir mein bata nahi sakta mujey kitni kushi ho rahi hay aap sey milkar please sir
aik selfie kich waley jiye mery saath ,

ashok , han han kio nahi ,

rahul apna phone nikalta hay pocket sey aur front camera on karkey ashok kay saath photo
click karleta hay ,

neha wahi khadi howi undono ko dhek rahi thi ... rahul ki bhi nazar neha par jaati hay aur wo
usey dhekta hee reh jata hay ,

rahul man mein , wah iski patni to jawan hay aur isko dheko uncle ho rakha hay sahi hath mara hay
waisey isney ...hahaha ab maza aye ga apna game khelnay mein hahaha bss ab iski patni ka naam
pata chal jaye ,

rahul , shukriya sir apka ,
ashok , koi baat nahi bss aisy hee support kartey raho dhekna isbaar minister mein banoga chalo neha darling ab andar chalty hay ,

rahul man mein , oohh to iska naam neha hay lagta hay bara pyar karta hay apni patni sey haha ,

ashok ab neha kay saath villa mein chaley jata hay rahul shetani muskrahat kay saath un dono ko jaatey howy dhek raha tha ,

wahi ab guard rahul ko jaaney ka boldeta hay aur rahul bhi bahar ajata hay aur bike start karta hay aur ghar kay liye nikal jata hay ,

neha , waah aaj paheli baar tumhara koi fan dheka haha ,
ashok , kio tumhey kia lagta hay mere koi fan nahi
hay ,
neha , hmm to jaisy tumharey kaam hay is hisab se to mujey nahi lag raha tha ,

ashok , han to unko thori pata mein andar kiya ghul khilata ho .. wo to tumhey aur mujey pata hay na ab politics mein apni power barha ni hay to kuch kaaley kaam karney partey hay hahaha ,

ashok neha ko baho mein leleta hay ye boltey howy ,


wahi rahul ghar mein ajata hay lock khol kar ... kio kay ravi aur gayatri bahar gaye howy thy .. to rahul ghar mein akela tha ,

rahul seedha apny papa kay office room mein chaley jata hay jo ghar mein hee bana howa tha ... kio kay ravi aik journalist tha to jab wo koi research karta hay to isee room mein karta hay ,

rahul kuch khoj raha tha ... waha bohot sari kitabey rakhi howi thi aur table par laptop rakha howa tha jo ravi ka tha ,

tabhi rahul kay hath phone number ki book lag jati
hay ,

rahul usey kholkar dhekta hay .. jismey kaafi saarey number likhey howy thy ... aur sab kisi na kisi barey logo kay thy jaisy ... journalist.. politician.. ,

rahul aik aik karkey sabkay naam dhek raha tha .. thori der koshish karney kay baad usey wo number miljata hay jo usey chaiye tha ,

ashok chawla , xxxxxxxxx

rahul , yes milgaya haha sab mere plan kay mutabik ho raha hay ,

rahul jaldi sey wo number apny phone par save karleta hay ... aur office room sey bahar ajata hay ,

rahul apny kamrey mein aakar daraz sey( sexnote) book nikal leta hay ,

tabhi uskey kaano mein awaz aati hay ,

chotu , kiya haal hay bhai aaj bhi ismein kisi ka naam likho gy ya yohi dhekty raho gy bss ,

rahul , arey waqt aaney par likhonga naam abhi to bss tumsey aik baay clear karni hay ,

chotu , han bolo ,

rahul , tumhey nahi lagta agar mein jaisy kisi ka naam likho par us naam ka aik hee shaks thori hay aur bhi bohot saarey hay to ye uspey kaisy kaam karey ga ,

chotu , agar tum jiska bhi naam likho gy wo shaks tumharey man mein hona chaiye tabhi ye uspey kaam karey ga ,

rahul , ohhh bss itni si baat mein khama kha tension ley raha tha ,

chotu , hmmm ,


rahul us book ko wapis rak deta hay ... aur ab wo apny plan kay mutabik kaam par lag jata hay .. wo wapis ghar sey bahar aata hay aur bike lekar nikal jata hay ,

rahul ab wapis ashok kay villa ki taraf agya tha aur wo aik deewar kay chup kar waha par nazar rakha howa tha ... wo janna chahta tha kay kon kon ashok kay ghar par aata hay ,

kaafi der kharey rhny kay baat tabhi aik jeep enter hoti hay villa mein ,
rahul soch raha tha akhir ye kon hay .. lekin wo dhek nahi sakta tha andar ki taraf ... kio kay villa kay Charo aur deewar thi ,

tabhi usey wo kachrey ka dibba yad aata hay aur wo foran chupkey sey waha chaley jata hay .. aur dabbey kay upar charh jata hay ,

rahul ko ab andar sab dhik raha tha wo jeep wahi khadi howi thi ... rahul aisy hee khada dhek raha rha tha ... tabhi ashok kay saath aik aadmi villa sey nikalta hay ,

aur wo dono apas mein baat kartey howy wahi lawn mein tehal rahy thy ... rahul unki baatey to nahi sun paata par dhekny to aisa lag raha tha jaisy ye ashok ka bohot khaas aadmi ho ...aur to aur usko villa kay andar bhi janey sey nahi roka ,

yuhee ab rahul roz villa ki taraf aata aur har aik jankari leta .. kay kon kon villa mein aata jata rehta .. aur rahul ko kaafi jankari mili ,

subah doodhwala aata jis sey neha akar doodh leti aur wo aadmi bhi takriban 7,8 baar ashok sey milney aya ...issey to rahul samaj gaya tha kay wo aadmi ashok ka bohot khaas hay ,

rahul 15 din research karney kay baad apna pura plan bana chuka tha ,

rahul , ashok ab teri barbaadi ka samey aa chuka hay
mein tujey itna majboor kardunga kay tu khud is dunya ko chordega ,

finally ab wo din agya tha jaha sey rahul apny maksad ki shurwaat karta hay ,

neha abhi abhi car mein beth kar villa sey nikli thi rahul bike par betha howa uska peecha kar raha tha rahul kay peechy bag tanga howa tha jis kay andar (sexnote) thi ,

car aik mall kay paas rukti hay aur usmein sey neha bahar nikalti hay ... rahul bhi apni bike park karkey neha ka peecha kar ney lagta hay ,

neha mall mein enter hogayi thi rahul bhi usi kay peechy mall mein enter hojata hay ,

wo bss kisi maukey ki talash mein tha kaafi der peecha karney kay baad usey wo mauka mil jata hay ,

neha woman washroom chali jaati hay ... aur rahul apny bag sey wo sexnote nikalta hay... usey kholkar pen uthata hay ,

neha ka naam puri detail mein likh deta hay ,

rahul , ab shuro hoga iska asar hahaha chal rahul andar chal ab ashok kay maal par haq jamalu ,

neha toilet par bethi howi thi ... achanak sey hee uskey shareer mein ajeeb halchal shuro hogayi thi uski chut mein khujli ho rahi thi ,

neha man mein , oohhh ye kiya ho raha hay shit ahhh meri ... meri yoni mein itni kharish kaisy ,

neha apni do ungli chut par rak deti hay aur usey masalney lagti hay ... par koi fayda nahi tha neha bohot garam hogayi thi ... usey bss ab lund chaiye tha uski chut lagatar paani chorh rahi thi ,

wo kaisy bhi Karkay bss thanda hona chahti thi .. tabhi washroom kay door par khat khat .. hoti hay neha abhi bhi pagal howi wi thi ,

rahul chehry par mask peheny howy lagatar door khat khata raha tha .. tabhi wo bolta hay ,

rahul , kiya howa jaan bohot garam horahi ho lagta shayad mein tumhari garmi nikal sakta ho door kholdo bss .. jaldi karo ye woman washroom hay mein pakra jaonga ,

neha ko kuch samaj nahi aata wo bss abhi lund ki talash mein thi ... wo bina sochay samjey door kholdeti hay aur rahul fatak sey andar ajata hay ,

neha dhekti hay aik mask pehena howa shaks andar ghus jata hay ,

rahul , hmm tum to kafi paseene mein bheegi howi
ho ,

rahul apni pant neechy karkey apna lund bahar nikal leta hay ... jisey dhek kar neha foran usey pakar leti hay ,
rahul , arey arey itni jaldi bhi kiya zara isey hila kay chodney layak to banado ,

neha waisa hee karti hay ... aur rahul ka lund akarna shuro hogiya tha ,

rahul ab bina der kiye neha ko camote band karkey uspey bitha deta hay aur uski tangy phela kar andar dhakel deta hay ,

rahul ka lund ashok kay muqabley takda tha aur wo neha ko chut ki dewaarey phar kar dhakil hojata hay ,

neha cheekney hee wali thi kay rahul samey par uskey muh par hath rak deta hay ... aur dhakkey lagana Chalo kardeta hay ,

neha , mmhhhhh aahhmhhm ,

kareeb 5 min ho chukey thy rahul usee position mein dhakkey laga raha tha .. aur aik hath mein mobile pakar kay video bana raha tha ,

aaj paheli baar rahul ney sex kiya ... wo to asman ki seher kar raha tha ,

akhir rahul lund bahar nikal deta hay ... aur sara maal bathroom kay farh par gira deta hay ... paheli baar tha isliye rahul zaida nahi tik paya ,

neha ko bhi kuch shanti mil gayi thi ... aur wo bhi asli dunya mein laut ayi thi ... neha aesi halat mein saamney mask peheny howy shaks ko dhek kar dar gayi thi aur zor sey chilla kar bolti hay ,

neha , kon ho tum badtameez ye kiya kardia tumney ,

issey pahly baat aagey barti rahul fatafat door kholkar bhaag jata hay ... bahar usko kisi ney nikalty howy nahi dheka ... ab wo mall sey bhi bahar ajata hay ,

neha abhi tak apna sar pakar kay bathroom mein bethi howi thi ... usey kuch samaj nahi aya abhi uskey saath howa kiya ... aur wo yaad kio nahi kar paa rahi ,

rahul ab bike par beth kay waha sey jaa chuka tha ... kio kay ab uska kaam hogiya tha ... usney video bana hee li ... lekin wo video ka karey ga kiya ,

kuch din beet jaty hay ,

subah ka time tha ashok kamrey mein soya howa tha ,

neha bahar beth kar tv dhek rahi thi .. wo bhula chuki thi jo kuch din pahley uskey saath howa ..lekin wo ye nahi janti thi kay uski video bhi ban chuki hay ,

tabhi villa ki bell bajti hay ... neha samaj jati hay kon aya hoga aur wo foran uth kar kitchen sey aik bartan lejati hay aur door khol deti hay ,

saamney bari mocho wala shaks khara howa tha balti lekar ... aur neha bartan aagey kardeti hay ,

par undono ko kiya pata rahul sexnote mein unka naam likh chuka tha .. aur deewar kay peechy chupa howa khel start honay ka intezar kar raha tha ,

sexnote ka asar ab undono par ho chuka tha ... samney ka nazara ye tha ... wo shaks neha ko deewar kay saath chipka kar kiss kar raha tha ,

rahul camera zoom karkay video bana raha tha ... uskey chehry par kaatil muskrahat thi ,

chotu , achi chaal hay tumhari ab mein dheere dheere tumhara khel samaj raha ho ,

rahul , bewakoof keeday thori der muh band rakho gy dhek nahi rahy waha kamasutra chal raha hay aur tum mere kandhey sey hato mujey ajeeb feel horaha hay ,

main gate par guards kharey howy thy ..doodhwaley ko itni der hogayi par wo abhi tak aya nahi ,

waha doodhwala lagatar neha ko jhuka kar jhatkey maar raha tha ...aur rahul wo scene apny camera mein record kar raha tha ,

ashok jaag chuka tha aur wo naha raha tha .... bahar neha villa kay darwazey par aik doodhwaley ka veerya apni kookh kay andar le chuki thi ,

ab dono apni asli dunya mein agaye thy ... neha aur wo aadmi dono aik dusrey ki shakal dhek rahy thy .. neha apni leggy upar charha chuki thi ,

dono ko kuch nahi samaj arha tha ...abhi howa kiya ..wo doodhwala dara howa tha ... neha bhi chauki howi thi ... sexnote ka asar khatam hochuka tha ,

doodhwala dhoti doodh bartan mein daaldeta hay aur neha kapkapatey howy hath sey doodh lekar andar chali jaati hay ,

ashok muskrakar neha ko aatey howy dhek raha tha .. neha bhi ashok ko dhek kar dar jaati hay ... wo seedha ashok ko dheke kitchen mein chali jati hay ,

rahul bike start karkey waha sey jaa chuka tha ... uska ye kaam bhi hochuka tha ,

kafi din beet gaye ... ab rahul kayi baar neha ki chudai alag alag logo sey kara chuka tha ... bss ab usey aik aadmi sey aur neha ko chudwana tha ,

aur wo tha rakesh .. ashok ka khaas chamcha ,

neha tang aa chuki thi usey kuch nahi samaj arha tha ..usey aisa lagta jaisy koi usey apny vash mein karleta hay .. par akhir kio usney kisi ka kiya bigara hay ,

ab wo din bhi agya tha jab ashok ghar par nahi tha ..aur uska chamcha rakesh villa mein ussey milney aya tha ... wo door bell bajata hay ... saamney neha aakar door khol deti hay ,

rakesh muskrakar ,
rakesh , kiya haal hay bhabhi wo ashok dada ko bula do ,
neha , ashok bahar gaye howy hay ,

lekin ... rahul usee jaga par kachrey kay dabbey par khara howa deewar sey jhaak raha tha aur sexnote mein undono ka naam likh chuka tha .. aur camera pakrey howy khel shuro honay ka intezar kar raha tha ,

aur wohi howa kuch samey baad dono par sexnote ka jaadu shuro hogia tha ... usee jaga par jaha doodhwaley ney neha ko choda tha .. wahi aaj ashok ka khaas aadmi uski patni ko jhuka kar chod raha tha ,

ring ring .... ashok car chala raha tha .. tabhi uskey mobile par unknown number sey call aata hay .. ashok call utha leta hay ,

ashok , hello kon ,

unknown ,hello ashok tumhey kaisa lagey ga jab koi tumhara khaas tumhey dhoka dey kiya janna chaho gy

ashok , kon ho tum kiya bakwas kar rahy ho tum jantey ho mein kon ho puri 7 pushty khatam kardonga,

unknown , hahaha wo to waqt hee bataey ga kon kiski pushty khatam karey ga .. par abhi tum apny ghar par to jaakar dheko tumhey aik surprise milney wala hay
bye ,

ashok ab uski baat sey dar jata hay ... wo foran car ko ghuma kar ghar ki taraf barha leta hay ,

yaha rahul apna kaam karchuka tha ... usney ashok ko bhi call karkay bula liya tha ... sab kuch uskey plan kay mutabik ho raha tha ,

lekin saamney to neha rakesh nahi thy .. to phir kaha gaye ,
kuch der baad tez raftar sey aik car villa mein dhakil hoti hay ...aur usmein sey aik aadmi nikar kar tezi sey apney ghar ka door kholkar andar dhakil hota hay ,

andar sofay par wo neha aur rakesh ko dhek kar chauk jata hay ... rakesh apna akhri dhakka lagatey howy neha kay andar apny beech bhar chuka tha ,

wo dono abhi apni asli dunya mein wapis aye hee
thy tabhi ,

ashok zor sey , rakesh saaley harami ye tuney kia kiya,

rakesh saamney ashok ko dhek kar bilkul seham jata hay ... neha bhi ashok ki awaz sunkar foran rakesh ko dhakka deti howi uth jati hay ,

rakesh aur neha ko samaj hee nahi arha tha ... ye undono ko kiya hogia tha .. wo aisy nangi halat mein aik saath kaisy ,

neha kay saath aisa pahely bhi ho chuka tha ... wo phasna nahi chahti thi ... neha rootay howy ,

neha , ashok dheko jispar tumney itna viswash kiya usney mere sath kia kiya dheko .. ashok mein ab kisi ko muh dhikaney kay layak nahi rahi mujey maardo ashok mein jeena nahi chahti hay ,

ashok ki aankhey gussey sey laal ho chuki thi .. aur wo rakesh ko dhek raha tha ... jo pura nanga khara howa tha ,

ashok , saaley rakesh tuney mujey dhoka diya itney saalo ka viswash tuney apni hawas chakkar mein khatam kardiya harami tuney meri hee patni kay saath zabardasti ki ,

rakesh , ashok dada mujpar bharosa karo mein kuch nahi janta ye abhi kiya howa hay ..mein bss apse milney aya tha aur uskey baad mujey kuch yaad nahi yaha par kiya hay ,

ashok , saaley kiya bakwas kar raha hay tu ,

ashok apny dono hath peechy lejakar apni gun nikal leta hay aur rakesh kay upar nishana kardeta hay ,

rakesh , ye kiya kar rahy ho bhai mujpar bharosa karo mein kuch nahi samaj paa raha ,

ashok , tu marega saaley ,

rakesh , nahi bhai mujey mauka to do ,

lekin ab ashok trigger daba chuka tha ... aur gun ki awaz purey villa mein goonj jati hay ,

ye awaz bahar khadey rahul kay kaano mein jaati hay
aur uskey chehry par shetani hasi ajati hay .. wo zor zor sey has raha tha ,

rahul , akhir hahaha ... akhir mera kaam ho hee hogia aaj ashok ney apny chamchy ko apny hee hatho sey maarkar is dunya sey ruksat kardiya ,

rahul ab apni bike start karkay waha sey nikal jata hay,

gun ki awaz sunkar guard bhi andar bhaagty hay ,

ashok , tum kamrey jao neha ,

neha foran apny kaprey utha kar kamrey mein chali jati hay ,

rakesh wahi para howa tha .. aur tiles purey khoon mein hogayi thi ... goli seedha rakesh kay sar par lagi thi ,
ashok bohot dhuki tha ... aaj usney apney itney saalo sey saath aik dost ya bhai ko apny hatho sey goli chala kar maardiya ,

ashok , mujey tujsey ye umeed nahi thi rakesh tere saath yehi hona chaiye ab mujey koi dhuk nahi tere jaaney ka ,

waha guard bhi andar aa chukey thy .. wo ye scene dhek kar chauk gaye thy .. ashok unko body jungle mein dafna ney ka boldeta hay ,

aur wo guard bina koi sawal kiye rakesh ki deadbody ko utha kar lejaty hay car mein daalkar ,

waha ashok kamrey mein chaley jata hay .. jaha neha beth kay roo rahi thi ,

ashok , mujey maaf kardo neha mujey yakeen nahi arha kay rakesh tumpar buri nazar rakta tha ,

neha samaj gayi thi kay wo bach gayi hay .. akhir usney jhoot bolkar rakesh ko phasaya tha .. par situation hee aesi thi kay wo iskey ilawa kuch nahi kar sakti thi ,

neha apna natak chalo rakti hay ,

neha , kiya tumharey maafi mangney sey meri looti howi izzat wapis ajaye gi ,

ashok , neha mein ye sab kuch bhul jao ga please mujey dhuki mat karo ye bolkar mein tumsey bohot pyar karta ho ,

waha rahul apney ghar par agya tha .... wo bohot kush tha ... sab kuch uskey plan kay mutabik ho raha tha
ye wohi rakesh tha jisney ... ashok kay kehny par ravi ko zaleel kar kar kay maara tha ,

2 din beet jatey hay ab neha aur ashok pahely ki tarha behave kar rahy thy ... par neha abhi tak nahi
samaj paa rahi thi akhir usey kiya hojata hay ... wo apney aap sey control kio khoo deti hay ,

ashok bed par bethy howy mobile chala raha tha ... neha kitchen mein internet sey recipe dhek kar dish
bana rahi thi ,

tabhi ashok kay mobile par unknown number sey sms aata hay ... ashok us sms ko kholta hay tu aik
video thi jo download ho rahi thi ,

download honay kay baad ashok wo video open karta hay ..... kareeb 5 min ashok video dhekta rehta hay ,

ashok kay hath kapkapaney lag gaye thy ... uskey maathey par paseene chooht rahey thy .. wo pura dara
howa .... kapkapatey hatho sey us number par reply kar raha tha ,

akhir video mein aisa kiya tha ,

rahul ney apni agli chaal chalty howy ashok ko video bheji thi .... rahul ney neha kay har kisi kay saath jo
encounter howy wo video edits karkey aik kardi aur usmein sabhi scene thy aur uspar apna voice over
bhi kiya par voice changer use karky ,

video .... ( ooohhhh zara dheko to kiya mein sahi dhek raha ho .. nahi nahi aisa nahi ho sakta .. kiya ye
ashok chawla ki patni hay ... par ye inkay saath kon hay .. jo bathroom mein unki izzat loot raha hay
arey ye kiya ye to ashok chawla ka villa hay ... yaha bhi ashok chawla ki patni .. aik anjan aadmi kay
sath rangleriya mana rahi hay ... ufff ye to had hee hogayi kiya ye ashok chawla ka muh bola bhai rakesh hay ...
arey arey yaha to tarha tarha kay logo kay saath ashok chawla ki patni nangi khari howi hay ... chee chee
ye ashok chawla ki patni hay ... yaa .. kothy ki randi ... jawab do ashok chawla jawab do ,)

video end ,

ashok ka blood pressure low hogia tha ... wo kaapty howy hatho sey msg bhej deta hay ,


ashok , unknown chat ....

ashok , kon ho tum .. kiya chahty ho .. aur ye sab kiya hay mujey kuch nahi samaj arha ..ye videos
kaisy banai tumney .. nahi tumney ye face cloning ki hay .. meri patni aesi nahi hay .. tum dusri party
kay to nahi kahi ,

thori der baad ashok ko reply aata hay ,

unknown , hahaha ashok chawla ki patni aik randi hay .. tumhey kiya lagta hay ye face cloning hay
saari videos hd quality mein hay .. koi bevda bhi dhek kar bata dega ye ashok chawla ki patni hay ...
.. jab ye video internet par jaye gi tab log hee faisla karengy kiya ye ashok chawla ki patni hay ya
face cloning .. ashok chawla thadaam karkey asman sey neechy gir jaye ga uska minister banney
ka khuwab bss khuwab hee rahy jaye ga ,

ashok , dheko please aisa mat karna tum jitney paisy bolo gy mein utney dunga please ye meri
izzat ka sawal hay ... mein mala maal kardonga tumhey par aisa nahi karo ,

unknown , haha .. badey bewakoof ho tum ashok .. mujey paisy nahi chaiye ... mein aik shart par
ye videos internet par upload nahi karonga ,

ashok , kiya shart hay bolo mein kuch bhi karney ko tayyar ho ,

unknown , tumhey media pay aakar ... apney saarey kaand jo tumney kiye hay aik karkay media
par bataney hogay ... tumney kitney logo ko maut kay ghaat utar diya ..tumney kitni aurto ki
izzat ko linaam kiya .. aur jab tumhari patni par aayi tumhey kaisa laga kiya tumney socha tha
kay tumharey saath bhi aisa honay wala hay ... tumharey paapo ka ghara ba barh chuka hay
aur aik baat .. tum apni patni sey is sab kay barey mein nahi pucho gy warna ye video internet
par miley gi ,

chat end ,

ashok ye parhkar seham giya tha ...ab uskey dono taraf khayi thi ... wo neha sey behad pyar karta tha ,

usey yakeen nahi arha tha kay neha ye sab kar sakti hay akhir kiya kami thi usey ... dono taraf sey wo phas gaya tha ,

agar gunah kabool karey ga to bhi gir jaye ga .. aur agar video internet par upload howi to izzat shauhrat chali jayi gi ,

ashok ab us unknown number par aik msg bhej deta hay ,
ashok , tum jo bhi ho suno kiya tum raat ko aa saktey mujey tumhara face dhekna hay akhir ab to tum jeet gaye na mein apni balcony par khara milunga tum saamney road par aakey kharey hojana ,

rahul ye msg parh leta hay ... aur wo decide karleta hay jaaney kay liye ,

unknown , ok ,

rahul soch raha tha akhir ashok kiya karney wala hay usey dhek kar ,

waha kitchen mein neha ki bhi halat ashok jaisi patli thi ...kio kay rahul ney usey bhi video bheji thi .. aur ussey bss chup rehny kay liye kaha tha ,

ab raat hogayi thi ... rahul puri tayyari kay saath mask pehen kar bike start karta hay aur nikal jata hay ashok chawla sey milney raastey mein halki halki baarish ho rahi thi ,

thori der baad ...

scene ye tha .. ashok apni balcony mein khara howa saamney road par mask peheny howy shaks ko dhek raha tha ,
ashok , akhir kon ho tum kiya dushmani hay mujsey ,

unknown , dhekna chaho gy ... to ye lo dheklo ,

tez baarish ki waja sey road ki street light bohot dheemi jal rahi thi .. aur us dheemi roshni mein ashok us shaks ka chehra dhek kar shock hogiya tha ,

ye wahi tha jo usdin ashok ka supporter ban kar ussey milney aya tha aur selfie bhi li thi ,

ashok , mujey yakeen nahi horaha tum usdin supporter bankar aye thy ,

unknown , ab bakwas bohot hogayi batao kiya hay tumhara faisla .. kiya tum tayyar ho subah media par aakey apna pindara kholney kay liye ya mein khud tumhey video leak karkay barbaad kardo ,

unknown , aur aik baat .. 20 saal pahely jis journalist ki tumney maar maar kar halat kharab kardi thi mein usee ravi sharma ka beta ho.. 20 saal sey mein badley ki aag mein jal raha tha aaj dheko kaisy tum bheegi billi ban gaye hahaha ,

ashok , mein ney galti kardi thi shayad 20 saal pahely mujey ravi sharma ki puri family ko maardena chaiye tha ... lekin ab ,

ashok apny dono hath peechy lejata hay ... aur gun nikal kar .. apny maathey par rakdeta hay ,

ashok , tumhara badla pura howa ladkey lekin mein kabhi bhi media mein aakar sach nahi bolney wala ..isee liye alwida .. tum jeet gaye ,

tez baarish mein gun ka sound itna nahi gunjta par andar villa mein neha aur bahar road par kharey rahul kay kaano mein ye awaz zaroor jati hay ,

rahul , oohhh to mera badla pura howa ..? ..nahi... abhi aik kaam aur baaki hay ,

rahul sexnote wahi sadak par phek kar chaley jata
hay ,

the end ..?



subah subah ...

bohot saari police ki cars ashok kay villa mein khari howi thi ... balcony mein ashok ki deadbody pari howi thi,

purey news channels par sirf aik hee khabar thi ,

raj chawla kay bete ashok chawla ney khud ko goli maar kar aatma hathiya karli ,

breaking news ...

ashok chawla ki patni ney bohot barey khulasey kiye hay ... ashok chawla aik corrupt aur dareenda insan hay isney kahi logo ko maut kay ghaat utara ... unki patni ney ashok ka sara kaala paisa aur illegal dhandey kay baarey mein police ko batadiya ... aur to aur paiso kay khaatir ashok ney apny muh boley bhai ko goli maar kar maut kay ghat utar diya

rahul aur ravi sofey par bethy howy news dhek rahy thy .. ravi kay chehry par kahi saalo baad muskrahat loti thi ,

rahul , ab howa mera badlaa pura ,



the end

Fantasy section mein story likhne ki yahi khasiyat hai
Ki koi bhi explanation nahi dena padta
Aur isi liye main bhi fantasy stories hi likhta hoon
Ab aate hain story pe
Ashok chawla kabhi barbaad nahi hota
Bhale hi woh kitna hi bura kyun na ho
Lekin Rahul ke hath sex note lag gaya
Aur phir Rahul ne plan banaya
Lekin Rahul badla kayi tarah se le sakta tha
Use Neha ko alag alag logo ke sath
Chu
Control
Nahi karwani chahiye thi
Neha ko blackmail karke Ashok ko bandhwake
Phir Neha se hi Ashok ko pel
CONTROL
Phir Ashok ke saamne hi Neha Rahul se chu
CONTROL
Ek toh aap ka naam ladkiyo waala.hai
Cheeku
Toh main cheeku Bhai bolu
Ya cheeku did
CONTROL
story badhiya likhi aapne cheeku bhai
Lekin thoda scope bada kar dete
Toh maza aajata
Jaise ki state saare corrupt politician ki
Aisi taisi kar dena
Bhale ki woh kuchh word's mein likh dete
Itni powerfull cheez hath Lage
Aur uska use achche se na kiya jaaye
Toh maza nahi aata
Phir bhi humko maza aaya kahani padhne mein
Itni mazedaar story likhi hai aapne
agar AAP saamne hote toh main aapko ek geeli puchchi deta
CONTROL
Koi galatfehmi nahi paal lena
Theek hai na
Bas apni imagination ko thoda badhaiye
Aur yeh sochke dekhiye ki aapke paas sex book hoti
Toh aap kya karte
Humari taraf se rating nahi milegi
Hum in sabse upar uth chuka hoon
Isi liye ummid karunga
competition khatam hone ke baad
Aap is story ko aage badhaye
Bas itna hi likh paaunga
Isi se kaam chala lo...

 

[Shetan]

Story - Virginity
Writer - Shetan.

कहानी बहुत ही खूबसूरत थी लेकिन जैसा कि ब्लैक भाई ने कहा , सुहागरात के मौके पर ही कविता का अपने कौमार्य पर कहा गया झूठ अगर उसकी वैवाहिक रिश्ते से हमेशा के लिए बिदाई की रात हो जाती तब क्या होता ?
ऐसा मजाक कौन करता है भई !
कौन लड़की अपनी सुहागरात की रात को ही अपने शादीशुदा जीवन की आखिरी वक्त मुकर्रर करती !

वैसे बहुत ही खूबसूरत विषय पर आपने यह स्टोरी लिखा है । कौमार्य खासकर युवतियों के लिए बहुत ही संवेदनशील विषय है । और इस पर नाना प्रकार की भ्रांतियां भी मशहूर है । प्रायः लड़कों की सोच यही रहती है कि अगर सुहागरात के मौके पर लड़की के यौनांग से रक्त नही निकला , बिस्तर पर खून के धब्बे न दिखाई पड़े तो इसका मतलब लड़की ने पहले ही अपना कौमार्य गंवा दिया है । लड़की चरित्रहीन है ।

ऐसा बिल्कुल ही नही है । ऐसे बहुत सारे चीजें है जिसकी वजह से लड़की की योनि खुल जाती है । लड़की अगर साइकिलिंग करती हो , लड़की अगर जिम या कोई कसरत करती हो और लड़की अगर मास्टरवेशन करती हो तो लड़की की योनि के संकुचित न होने के चांसेज बढ़ जाती है ।
कौमार्य के नाम पर लड़की के यौनांग से ब्लड निकलना एक दकियानूसी और बहुत बड़ी भ्रामक सोच है ।

वैसे आप के जज्बे को मै प्रणाम करता हूं । आप निरंतर कुछ नया लेकर आती है , स्टोरी पर अनवरत अनुसंधान करती है , मेहनत करती है और अपने कम्फर्ट जोन से भी बाहर निकलने की कोशिश करती है ।

मुझे आपकी कहानी बहुत ही पसंद आया ।

Tabhi to mene ye kahani likhi he. Ab bhi soch ka komarya bhang nahi huaa.

Aap purush ho is lie nahi jante. 90% boys shuhagrat se pahele. Ya us hi din ya fir shadi ke bad bhi. Ye sawal ladki apni biwi se kar hi dete he. Ki shadi se pahele koi tha. 60% se jyada ladki zutth bol deti he. Nahi tha. Kyo ki vo janti he. Aage kya hoga. Par 40% ladkiya sach bol deti he. Ha koi tha.

Chahe usme se 20% boys never maind bol dete he. Par vo ek sawal der se hi puchh hi lete he. Kabhi kuchh huaa tum dono me. Sirf 1% ladki sach bol deti he. Ha huaa.

Ab naya twish suno.

20 me se 15% ladke nevar maind to bol dete he. Par vo bhi itna ganda bolte he.

Kon best he. Vo ya me.

Uska mujse bada tha kya.

Ham womans shadi ki shuhagrat ke bare me ek dusre se ye bat puchh hi lete he. Tere vale ne puchha kya??? Tune kya jawab diya.


Mene Black se sirf janbuchkar ye ans diya. Me mazak kar rahi thi. Jab ki me pura jawab dene se bach rahi thi. Par agar dulhan jyada attech ho dulhe se. Aur ye bol de. To koi fark nahi padega riste me.

Ye vahem he. Agar vo kuchh bolega to uska mazak ban jaega. Is topic ko ladke ladko se kabhi nahi bolte.

Har ek dost jaruri hota he. Par vahi dost se ye bat sare kar di to vahi dost usi dost ki bat ka mazak 90% bana dega. Ye bat womans hi pacha sakti he. Koi kisi ko nahi bolta. Chahe vo kuchh bhi kar ke aai ho pahele. Bade budhe bhi ye bat ko daba dene ki salah denge. Black ko bhi batao.

Aur ye bato ke ese jawab aaj ke jamane me milte he. Vo bhi shuhagrat ko hi.

 

[Shetan]

SURAJ

Spoiler

RAVEENA
mera naam raveena hai
main aur Rajesh ek dusre se bahut pyar karte the
lekin woh gareeb ghar se tha
isi liye mere pita ne meri shaadi karwa di
ranjeet se
aur yeh bhi bola ki agar maine ranjeet ke sath koi bhi galat bartaav kiya
toh woh apni Jaan de denge
mere pati bahut suljhe aur achche insaan the
lekin mujhe unse nafrat thi
main bas apne Rajesh se pyar karti thi
main suhag ki sej pe baithi thi
woh aaye aur unhone mera ghughat uthaya
pata nahi kyun unki baatein sunke
mera dil paseej gaya
woh mujhe apne baare mein bata rahe the
aur baar baar yahi keh rahe the
ki woh mujhe humesha khush rakhenge
phir kuchh der baatein karne ke baad
unhone mujhse anumati maangi
main kuchh nahi boli
tabhi mujhe pitaji ki baat yaad aayi
aur maine unhein anumati de di

ek saal baad Taniya paida hui
aur main apni family life.mein busy ho gayi
mujhe Rajesh ki yaad aati thi
lekin mere pati ranjeet bhi mujhse bahut pyar karte the
isi liye.main ab Rajesh ko bhoolne lagi thi

meri shaadi ko do saal beet chuke the

ek din ek mall mein mujhe Rajesh dikha
use dekhte hi main use pehchaan gayi
woh mujhse baat karna chahta tha
lekin mere pati ko dekhke woh peechhe hat gaya

kayi din beet gaye

ek din Rajesh mere ghar aagaya

maine.usse kaha ki chala.jaaye
lekin usne mujhe apni baaho mein bhar liya
aur mujhe kiss karne laga
main kuchh der virodh karti rahi
lekin phir main apne aapko rok nahi paayi
Rajesh jaise mujhe pyar karta tha
waisa kabhi mere pati ne bhi nahi kiya tha

humare beech sex hua
aur aaj itne samay baad mujhe ehsaas hua tha
ki maine sex kiya hai

us din se roz Rajesh mere ghar aane laga
aur mere sath sex karta
woh mere liye humesha orange juice leke aata
use Peete hi main sex karne ke liye tadapne lagti thi
main bhi bahut khush rehne lagi thi
din.mein Rajesh mere sath sex karta
lekin raat mein jab ranjeet aate
toh main sone ka natak karne lagti

ek raat ranjeet ne mere pair pakad liye
aur rote hue bole
mujhse koi galti Hui hai toh mujhe maaf kar do
tum mujhe daanto ek do thappad bhi maar.do
lekin mujhse aise door na raho

mera dil paseej gaya
woh mujhse kitna pyar karte the
aur waise bhi ab mere andar sex karne ki ichcha kuchh jyada hi badhne lagi thi

din mein main Rajesh ke sath sex karti
Rajesh mujhe ehsaas dilata tha ki woh mard hai aur main aurat hoon
aur wohin ranjeet mere sath aise sex karte
jaise pehli baar kar rahe ho
dheere dheere aaram aaram se
dono ke sath sex karne mein
zameen aasmaan ka farq tha
Rajesh ke sath sex karne mein mujhe bahut achcha lagta
woh mujhe Jo aanand deta tha
uski koi seema.nahi thi
kuchh dino baad main pregnant ho gayi
mere pati bahut khush hue
aur mujhe apni goad mein uthake naachne lage
kabhi kabhi mujhe unpe Daya aati thi
woh mujhse kitna pyar karte the
lekin main toh Rajesh se pyar karti thi na
isi liye

kuchh samay baad Suraj ka.janam hua
main bahut khush thi
apni Taniya aur Suraj ke sath
Taniya Suraj se do saal badi thi
ranjeet bhi bahut khush the
unka promotion bhi ho gaya tha company mein
aise hi din beetne lage

Taniya ab 7 saal ki ho chuki thi
aur Suraj 5 saal ka

main ab sex addict ho chuki thi
ek din bhi agar Rajesh nahi aata
toh.main buri tarah se tadap jaati thi
ranjeet kabhi kabhi sex nahi karte the
main raat bhar karwat badalti rehti thi

ek din Rajesh ghar pe aaya
aur mujhe apni baaho mein bhar liya

raveena
kabhi toh apne bete ko pyar kar liya karo
aate hi bas shuru ho jaate ho

Rajesh
kya karu jaan
tumse najar hi nahi hat ti
man karta hai bas tumhein pyar karta rahu

uski baatein sunke main bhavuk ho gayi
woh kitna pyar karta tha.mujhse

aur phir humne sex kiya
kuchh der usne mujhse pyar bhari baatein ki
aur phir chala gaya
uske jaate hi meri najar room ke gate pe padi
mere.hosh udd gaye
main buri tarah se ghabra gayi

mere pati ranjeet us samay room ke bahar khade mujhe dekh rahe the
woh ro rahe the

ranjeet.rote hue
shaadi ke baad ek baar keh diya hota
ki tum mujhse pyar nahi karti
tumhein azaad kar deta
meri zindagi barbaad karne ki Kya jarurat thi

main kuchh nahi bol paayi
aur rone lagi
meri samajh.mein nahi aaya
main kya bolu

ranjeet
suraj mera beta hai ki nahi

mujhe khud nahi pata tha

main bas roti rahi

ranjeet rote hue
aaj tak kabhi tumhare sath kuch galat nahi Kiya
humesha tumhein pyar kiya
aur tumne mujhe dhokha diya
tum randi nikli

yeh sunte hi mujhe aisa laga jaise
kisi ne mere seene mein khanjar utaar diya ho

ranjeet
laanat hai tum jaisi aurat pe
tum jaisi ladkiyo ne hi hum Shareef mardo ko barbaad kar rakhkha hai
kaash main bhi ek bura mard hota
apne pita ki tarah toh aaj mujhe dukh nahi sehna padta
kaash is duniya ke saare mard bure hote
toh shayad is duniya mein tum jaisi aurtein na hoti

yeh bolke woh Suraj ki taraf badhe
main ghabra gayi
aur bhaagte hue apne Suraj ko apne seene se laga li

ranjeet ne mujhe aas bhari najro se dekha


RANJEET
main bachpan se bahut Shareef aur seedha saadha ladka tha
humesha padhai pe dhyan deta tha
mere pitaji baat baat pe meri maa pe hath utha dete the
woh mujhe bhi maarte the
maine soch liya tha ki main pitaji jaisa nahi banunga main ek achcha insaan banunga

dheere dheere meri age badhti gayi
aur papa.ki.kam.hoti gayi
main humesha apni maa se kehta tha
ki woh mujhe leke yahan se bhaag jaaye
lekin maa.bechari yahi kehke taal deti
ki beta tumhare pita se main bahut Prem karti hoon
aur main unhein chhodke kahan jaaungi
unke siwa mera is.duniya mein hai kaun

meri maa mere pita se bahut pyar karti thi
dilo jaan se pyar karti thi
jab tak pitaji ghar nahi aajate the raat mein
woh khana nahi khaati thi
mere pitaji ke khaane ke baad
woh unki hi plate mein khaati thi
lekin mere pitaji is baat ka jeeta jaagta saboot the
ki is duniya mein burayi hai
woh meri maa ko aise treat karte
jaise woh unki Ghulam ho
lekin meri maa ne kabhi koi shikayat nahi ki

main us din bahut roya
tabhi bade papa mujhe dikhe
woh apne pariwar ke sath aaye the
main unse lipatke rone laga

woh mere sar ko sehlate rahe

mere papa
beta kisi bhi cheez ki jarurat ho toh
mujhe bata dena

aur phir woh chale gaye

mere pitaji mere liye zameen jayedaad chhod gaye the
main achche se padhai Kiya
aur phir ek achchi si company mein naukri karne laga
ek din mere ek dost ne mujhse kaha
mujhe ab shaadi kar leni chahiye
kab tak akayla rahunga
aur phir maine apne bade papa ko phone kiya
woh gaon mein rehte the
unki aur mere pita ki kabhi nahi bani
mere pita jitne bure the
woh utne hi achche the
unhone mera rishta tay kar diya
main raveena ki photo bhi nahi dekhi thi
meri raveena se shaadi ho gayi
aur jab maine ghughat uthaya
toh Chand sa mukhda dekhke
mera dil jhum utha

maine usse yahi vaada kiya
ki main humesha use khush rakhunga
aur phir main usse baatein karne laga
woh bas haan hoon mein jawab de rahi thi
kuchh der baad maine usse anumati maangi
usne kuchh nahi kaha

ranjeet
koi baat nahi
jab aapka man kare
tab bata dijiyega
main intezar karunga
aap kapde badal lijiye

yeh bolke main let gaya
kuchh der baad raveena ne mere kandhe pe hath rakh diya

main mudke dekha
toh woh apni najrein neeche kiye hui thi
main khushi se uchhal pada
aur phir use apni baaho mein bharke chumne laga

lekin jab main apna ling uski yoni mein daala
toh khoon nahi nikla
ek pal ke liye mujhe gussa bahut aaya
main use gusse se dekhne laga
woh bhi ghabra gayi
uski aankhon se aansu chhalak gaye

lekin phir mujhe yaad aaya ki meri maa ne kaisa jeevan jeeya tha
isi liye maine Dhyan nahi diya
aur use jitna achche se ho sakta
utna achche se pyar kiya

aise hi din beetne lage
main raveena ka jitna achche se ho sake
utna achche se khyal rakh Raha tha
raveena bhi mera poora khyal rakhti thi
aur phir meri jaan meri gudiya Taniya paida hui
main bahut khush hua
woh bilkul meri maa jaisi thi
main apni raveena aur Taniya ke sath bahut khush tha
do saal beet chuke the
humari shaadi ko
ek din maine yeh mehsus kiya
ki ab raveena mujhse Kam baat karti hai
main office se aata
woh khana nikaalke de deti
aur phir room mein jaake so jaati
main yeh sochne laga ki kya mujhse koi galti Hui hai
main jab room mein gaya toh raveena soyi hui thi
main uske pair pakad liya

ranjeet
please mujhse agar koi galti Hui hai
toh mujhe maaf kar do
tum mujhe daanto mujhe thappad bhi maaro
lekin mujhse door mat raho
main mar jaaunga

raveena ne mujhe apne seene se laga liya
ab raveena pehle jaisi ho gayi thi
woh waise hi mujhe pyar karne lagi thi
jaise main use pyar karne laga tha

suraj ab 5 saal ka ho chuka tha
aur Taniya 7 saal ki
main uska admission karwa diya tha
school mein

ek din main office se socha jaldi ghar jaake raveena ko surprise deta hoon
aur main ghar pahunch gaya
mere paas ghar ki dusri chabhi thi
main lock khola
aur apne room ke paas pahuncha
mere pairo tale zameen khisak gayi
mera sab kuchh bikhar Gaya
living room mein meri wife raveena kisi dusre mard ke sath munh kaala kar rahi thi
main saans nahi le paa raha tha
meri samajh mein nahi aaya main kya karu
main unhein roku unhein jaan se maar doon
apni Jaan de doon
aur main dusre room mein aake rone laga
meri maa humesha yahi kehti thi
ki beta kabhi bhi apni biwi pe hath mat uthana
apni biwi ko Rani ki tarah rakhna
apni biwi ko humesha pyar karna
main apne munh pe hath rakhke rota raha

kuchh der baad main utha
aur room ke paas gaya
raveena mujhe dekhte hi chaunk gayi

main usse woh sab kaha jo mere dil mein tha
kaash raveena ne mujhse maafi maang li hoti
toh shayad.main use maaf kar deta
main Taniya ko school se lene chala gaya
aur jab hum ghar pe aaye
toh main usse lipatke rone laga
woh bechari bhi rone lagi

aur phir main wahan se nikal gaya

SURAJ
main jab chhota tha tab mere papa chal base
mujhe unki bahut yaad aati thi
Rajesh uncle ko maine kabhi nahi dekha tha
aaj woh pehli baar humare ghar aaye the
unke aate hi mummy ne mujhe aur didi se bola ki jaao ghum aao

hum do ghante baad khelke jab wapas aaye
toh uncle Jaa chuke the

us din se woh roz humare ghar pe aate
aur
woh mujhe humesha paise dete the
didi ko bhi dete the
main nahi leta tha
lekin maa mujhe kehti thi
ki le lo
yeh tumhare papa ke dost hain
woh mujhe bahut achche lagne lage the
jab bhi woh mere paas hote
toh main papa ko yaad nahi karta tha

dheere dheere main bada hone laga
aur sochne laga
ki aakhir uncle kyun humare ghar aate hain
aur main yeh bhi sochta ki mummy unke aate hi humein ghar ke bahar kyun bhej deti thi
unse humara kya rishta hai
ab main 10th mein tha
aur didi 12th mein thi
ek din achanak mujhe bukhaar lag gaya
aur main teacher se bola
ki mujhe ghar jaane dijiye
teacher ne mujhe permission de di
aur main ghar aagaya
ghar andar se lock tha

main gate bajaya

mummy ne gate nahi khola
kuchh der tak

jab woh gate kholi
toh main chaunk gaya
unki ajeeb si haalat ho rakhkhi thi
poora sharir paseene se bheega hua tha
baal bikhre hue the
woh mujhe dekhte hi ghabra gayi
kapde bhi sahi nahi the unke

main
mummy aapki tabiyat toh theek hai

mummy
haan beta theek hoon
tum jaldi kaise aagaye

main
woh mujhe bukhaar laga tha
isi liye main aagaya

mummy ne mere maathe ko chhua

mummy
tumhein toh bahut bukhaar hai
aao andar aao

woh mujhe apne sath leke gayi
tabhi mujhe uncle dikhe
jo sofe pe baithe hue the

mummy ne mujhe dawayi di
aur main let gaya

kuchh der baad bahar se awajein aane lagi

mummy
Rajesh please abhi nahi
suraj room mein hai

Rajesh
toh kya hua
ek na ek din use sab pata chal hi jaayega
jaldi karo phir mujhe bhi jaana hai

mummy
Rajesh maine mana kiya na

Rajesh
toh phir theek hai
main aaj ke baad kabhi nahi aaunga
aaj se tumhara mera rishta khatam

mummy rote hue
Rajesh tum toh jaante ho
main tumse kitna pyar karti hoon
aur tum aaj yeh keh rahe ho
please mujhe chhodke mat jaao
please

Rajesh
toh phir jaldi se mera lund chuso


yeh sunte hi mere pairo tale zameen khisak gayi
main buri tarah se chaunk gaya
mujhe apne kaano pe vishwas nahi hua
sex ka poora Gyan tha mujhe

tabhi mujhe ek dost ki baat yaad aayi
yaar Suraj main kal market gaya tha
wahan Teri mummy kisi ke sath ghum Rahi thi

Suraj
kya

haan mujhe lagta hai teri mummy aur us aadmi ka chakkar chal raha hai
dono ek dusre se chipke hue the

yeh sunte hi maine use thappad maar diya

suraj
saale aaj se mujhse baat mat kariyo

aur phir maine usse dosti Tod di

main bukhaar mein tha
mera sar pehle se bhaari tha
ab aur jyada ho gaya tha

main room ka gate khola
aur saamne dekhte hi mere hosh udd gaye

meri aankhon mein khoon utar aaya

main apne room mein pada cricket bat liya

Rajesh ki peeth meri taraf thi

main maara uske sar pe bat
uske sar se khoon nikla
aur neeche zameen pe gid Gaya

mummy ki cheekh nikal gayi
mummy jis haalat mein thi
us haalat mein main unhein dekhke buri tarah se tadap gaya
woh madarzaat nangi thi

pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya
ki maine apna aapa kho diya

aur Rajesh ke sar pe bat zor zor se maarne laga

mummy yeh dekhke buri tarah se ghabra gayi
aur rone lagi

Rajesh mar chuka tha

mummy Rajesh se lipatke rone lagi

mummy
Rajesh please uth jaao
main tumhare bina mar jaaungi
please Rajesh please
yeh tumne kya Kiya Suraj
tumne ise maar diya
main isse kitna pyar karti thi
tum khooni ho Suraj tum ek khooni ho

mummy ko yeh tak ehsaas nahi hua
ki woh mere saamne nangi hain

mummy
suraj yeh tumhara baap tha
yeh tumhara baap tha Suraj

yeh sunte hi mere pairo tale zameen khisak gayi
main buri tarah se hil gaya

Suraj
kya matlab hai aapka
yeh Mera baap kaise ho sakta hai

mummy rote hue
yeh aur main ek dusre se pyar karte the
lekin mere pita ne meri shaadi kisi aur se karwa di

main cheekhte hue
kapde pehno jaake

maa ko jaise hosh aaya
woh apne aapko chhipane lagi

main cheekhte hue apne room mein aagaya

kuchh der baad mummy room mein aayi
aur mujhe thappad maar di

mummy
khooni darinde yeh kya kiya tune

woh mujhe maarti rahi

main bhaagte hue room se bahar aagaya
aur kitchen se chaaku utha liya

mummy ghabra gayi
unhein laga shayad main unhein bhi maar dunga

main chaaku apni gardan pe laga diya

main
mummy mujhe sach jaan na hai

mummy rote hue
suraj Suraj beta chaaku neeche rakhkho
neeche rakhkho beta chaaku

main rote hue
mujhe sach batao

mummy rote hue batane lagi

main gusse se paagal ho gaya

main
mummy tum ek chhinaal aurat ho
tumse achchi toh randiya hoti hain
jo kisi ke sath pyar ka natak toh nahi karti
kya kasoor tha mere papa ka
yahi ki woh ek achche aur Shareef insaan the

mummy rote hue
Suraj meri baat suno beta

main
mujhe nahi sunna hai kuchh
samajhi tum
main jaa raha hoon police ke paas

mummy ne rote hue mere pair pakad liye
please mat jaao
mat jaao

main
tum jaisi chhinal Ke pet se janam lene ka yahi anjaam hota hai

mummy
tumhein Jo kehna hai keh lo
lekin mat jaao
tum agar gaye toh main apni Jaan de dungi

main apne room mein aake rone laga

aur phir meri mummy ne Rajesh ki laash ke kayi tukde kiye
aur use freezer mein daal diya
didi Bhi school se aagai thi

maine us din se mummy se baat karna band kar diya tha
didi se bhi baat nahi karta tha

Taniya
kya hua Aaj kal mujhse baat kyun nahi karta
sab theek toh hai
school mein agar koi pareshan kar raha hai
toh mujhe bata
saale ki taangein tod.dungi

main kuchh nahi bola
woh chali gayi

main yeh samajh nahi paaya
ki Rajesh ko police ne kyu nahi dhundha
ek aadmi gayab hua tha

ek din maine dekha ki kuchh log humare ghar aaye the
ek aurat thi mummy ki age ki
aur ek aadmi

main pehle aadmi ki najar ka peecha kiya
kahin woh meri mummy ko toh nahi dekh raha hai
lekin uski kismat achchi thi
ki woh Shareef tha

tabhi us aurat ki najar mujhpe padi
woh haramzaadi aurat mujhe line de rahi thi

mummy
beta yeh meri mama ki ladki hai Sunita
aur yeh hain inke husband aalok

Ranjeet
pehle toh kabhi nahi aayi yeh

mummy
inke pati ka abhi abhi transfer hua hai
yahan
toh yeh mujhse milne aagayi

main kuchh nahi bola
aur apne room mein aagaya

kareeb ek mahina beet chuka tha
ek din school mein meri maar peet ho gayi
principal ne mujhe bhaga diya
aur kaha ki apni mother ko leke aana
main ghar aaya
toh dekha
mummy ban sanwar ke kahin Jaa Rahi thi
Sunita aunty ke sath
saari bhi aisi pehen rakhi thi
ki mera khoon khaul gaya
aadhe boobs dikh rahe the
sleeveless blouse pehen rakhkha tha dono ne

jaise hi mummy ne mujhe dekha
ghabra gayi
aur unhein ghabrata dekh
main samajh gaya ki kya chal raha hai
jarur yeh phirse chhinala karne jaa rahi hai

Sunita
are Suraj tum school nahi gaye

woh haramzaadi jaan bujhke apni saari ka pallu side kar di
mujhe uske chuche dikhne lage

main
randi nikal yahan se
warna Aaj tujhe jaan se maar dunga

woh shocked ho gayi

Sunita
Suraj hosh mein rehke baat karo
warna achcha nahi hoga

main
madarchod

main yeh bolke kitchen mein gaya
aur chaaku leke Sunita ki taraf badha
Sunita ki gand fat gayi

woh bhaag gayi wahan se

main rote hue
mummy kyun aakhir kyun
tum apna randipana nahi chhod Rahi ho
kyun mummy kyun
ek kaam Karo yeh chaaku lo
aur mujhe jaan maar do
phir Jo chahe karti rehna

main chaaku mummy ko de diya

mummy ro padi
beta Mera vishwas karo
tum jo soch rahe ho
waisa kuchh bhi nahi hai
please mera vishwas karo

main apne room mein aagaya
aur rone laga

kuchh din aise hi beet gaye
sunita aunty ne aana band kar diya tha

main ek din main school mein tha
tabhi Taniya didi ka phone aaya
unki tabiyat kharab thi

main ghar pahuncha toh dekha Tania didi ro rahi thi
mummy Ghar pe nahi thi

suraj
kya hua

Taniya didi rote hue mujhe batane lagi
aaj main apni friend seema ke ghar gayi thi
uski mom nahi hain
woh bas apne dad ke sath rehti hai

wahan maine mummy ko dekha

yeh bolke didi cheekh cheekh ke rone lagi

Suraj
kya matlab mummy ko dekha

Taniya
Mummy seema ke dad ki girlfriend hain

koi baat nahi tum rona band karo

Taniya
main marna chahti hoon Suraj
main marna chahti hoon
mummy ke andar agar itni hi aag lagi thi
toh woh dusri shaadi kar leti

main kya bolta apni didi se
ki mujhe sab kuch pehle se pata tha

Suraj
didi tum rona band karo
band karo Rona

Taniya rote hue
ek din maine mummy ko Sunita aunty se phone pe baat karte suna
ki haan haan main rustam ke ghar time se pahuch jaaungi
seema.ke dad ka.naam Prem hai


main bhi ro pada
hum dono bhai behen rote rahe
tabhi didi ne mujhe dekha

Taniya
suraj agar main tujhse kuchh maangu toh dega

Suraj
apni Jaan de dunga

Taniya
main chahti hoon
ki aaj tu mere sath sex kare

main chillate hue
didi

Taniya rote hue
agar tune Aaj mere sath sex nahi kiya
toh.main apni Jaan de dungi

suraj chillate hue
didi

TANIYA

Main apni maa ko takleef Dena chahti thi
main use dikhana chahti thi
ki agar maa randi ban jaaye
toh bachcho pe kya asar padta hai
main yeh bhi samajh gayi thi
ki Suraj pehle se hi sab jaanta tha
warna Mera Bhai toh hansta rehta tha
Achanak woh chup kyun rehne laga tha

Taniya
agar tune mere sath sex nahi kiya
toh main apni Jaan de dungi

suraj rote hue
didi Aisa mat bolo
please Aisa mat bolo
apne bhai pe Aisa zulm na karo

Taniya
haan ya na

Suraj
didi

Taniya
haan ya naa

suraj bas rota raha

Taniya
theek hai

aur main kitchen ki taraf badh gayi
chaaku uthake apne hath pe lagayi hi thi
ki Suraj ro pada
aur usne mere hath se chaaku chheen liya
aur rote hue bola
tum jo bologi main karunga

Taniya
theek hai

aur phir main suraj ko kiss karne lagi
mujhe use mentally ready karna tha
kahin woh kuchh galat na kar de

main use uttejit karna chahti thi
mera dil khud ghabra Raha tha
mujhe khud nahi pata tha
ki main jo kar rahi hoon
uska.anjaam.kya hoga

suraj ko.main kiss kar rahi thi
lekin woh mujhe nahi kar raha tha

main ghutno ke bal baith gayi
aur uski pant kholne lagi
Suraj ne apni aankhein band kar li

jaise hi main Suraj ki pant neeche ki
mere.hosh udd gaye
underwear mein hi uska lund ek dum tight tha
ek pal ke liye mera man Kiya
ki main peechhe hat jaaun
yeh main kya kar rahi ho
lekin maine ek baat soch Li thi
ki agar mummy ko chudne ka itna hi shauk hai
toh Suraj hi ab use chodega
uski hawas mitayega
uski hawas poori karega
use woh dega Jo woh bahar dhund rahi hai
aur iske liye mujhe suraj ko tayyar karna tha
mujhe toh ek hafte pehle se pata tha
mummy ke baare mein
maine socha ki shayad mummy kisi se pyar karti hain
lekin yahan toh yeh randipana kar rahi thi

main ek hafte se yahi soch Rahi thi
ki kya karu
aur phir main is faisle pe pahunchi thi
ki mummy ki hawas ab suraj hi mitayega
main sex ke baare mein jitna jaan sakti thi
utna main research kar chuki thi

main underwear bhi neeche kar di
suraj ke lund ko dekhke mera sar chakra gaya
aaj tak kabhi maine real mein nahi dekha tha
sirf porn mein hi Aisa dekha tha

main aur der nahi karna chahti thi
pichhle ek hafte se main dekh rahi thi
ki mummy kab bahar jaati hai
aur kab aati hain
aaj main school toh gayi thi
lekin ek ghante baad main wapas aagayi thi

ab unke aane ka samay ho raha tha
main Suraj Ke lund ko apni mutthi mein pakadke uski chamdi ko aage peechhe karne lagi

woh apni aankhein band kiye hua tha
kuchh der baad uska lund khada hone laga
woh bhi ek ladka tha
hawas mardo mein jyada hoti hai
aur aurto mein kam
lekin aurtein jab apni pe aati hain
toh woh randiyo ko bhi fail kar deti hain
jaise ki humari mummy

kuchh der baad Suraj sisakne laga
ab use maza aaraha tha
main bhi uttejit ho rahi thi
mere bhai ke lund ko hilate hue

aur phir main apne bhai ki taraf dekhi
jo ab bhi aankhein band kiye hua tha

main apna munh lund ke paas le gayi
ajeeb si smell aayi mujhe
main thook nigalke apna munh kholi
aur lund ke agle hisse ko apni jubaan se chaatne lagi
suraj ka sharir kaanp gaya
kuchh der tak main lund ko chaat ti rahi
phir maine lund ko munh mein bhar liya
mujhe ubki aane lagi
main lund munh se nikaali
aur lambi lambi saansein lene lagi
aur kuchh der baad main apne bhai ka lund chus rahi
woh aahein bhar Raha tha
uski aankhon mein se bhi aansu nikal rahe the
aur meri aankhon mein se bhi aansu nikal rahe the
kuchh der baad main lund ko apne gale tak bhar ke chusne lagi
aur phir dekhte hi dekhte ab suraj ko bhi maza aane laga
woh mere sar pe hath rakhke mere sar ko sehla raha tha

main phir lund munh se nikaali
aur phir khadi ho gayi
aur apne kapde utaarne lagi

Suraj ne aankhein kholke mujhe dekhne laga
ab woh jhijhak nahi raha tha
hawas uspe.poori tarah se haawi ho chuki thi

main jaise hi apne kapde utaari
woh mere jism ko dekhne laga

Taniya
suraj mera pehli baar hai
mujhe pyar nahi karega

yeh sunte hi usne mujhe lita diya
aur mere upar aake mujhe kiss karne laga
mujhe ghabrahat bhi ho rahi thi
main bhi uska sath dene lagi
woh mere honto ko kuchh der chusta raha
phir mere boobs chusne laga
unhein daba daba ke chusta raha

aur phir usne apna lund meri Choot pe laga diya

meri aankhon mein aansu aagaye the
woh bhi ro pada tha

Suraj
didi please

main use thappad maar di

aur phir uska lund pakadke apne chhed se laga di
usne dhakka maar diya
aur meri cheekh nikal gayi
abhi toh agla hissa hi andar gaya tha
woh mujhe kiss karne laga
kuchh der baad maine use ishaara kiya
usne phirse dhakka maara
aur is baar meri seal toot gayi
main buri tarah se rone lagi
woh bhi ro pada
aur mujhe kiss karne laga
main dard se tadapti rahi
aur woh mere hontho ko chusta raha

kuchh der baad maine use phirse ishaara kiya
poora lund andar jaate hi meri phirse cheekh nikal gayi
main phirse rone lagi

Suraj
kaash us din maine maa ko maar diya hota
aaj tumhein yeh sab nahi karna padta
mujhe maaf kar do didi
main bahut bada kaayar hoon

main bhi roti rahi
lekin woh mard tha
kitna der tak khudko rok paata
usne dheere dheere dhakke maarne shuru kiye
mujhe ab bhi dard ho raha tha
Lekin maine use nahi roka
kuchh der baad main aahein bharne lagi
jise sunke woh madhosh ho gaya
aur zor zor se dhakke maarne laga


kuchh der baad raveena ghar ke andar ghusi
aur tabhi use apne beti ke room se awajein sunayi di

woh jab apni beti ke room mein pahunchi
toh uske hosh udd gaye
uski beti aur beta dono sex kar rahe the
Raveena ki aankhon mein aansu aagaye
aur phir use bahut tez gussa aaya

Raveena cheekhte hue
yeh kya ho raha hai

aur tabhi dono bhai behno ne apni maa ki taraf dekha

Taniya ek qaatil muskaan ke sath apni maa ko dekhne lagi

Suraj ruk gaya

Taniya ne suraj ko thappad maar diya

Taniya
dikha apni maa ko
tere lund mein kitna dum hai
tu hijda nahi hai
dikha use ki tu khud apni maa ki hawas poori kar sakta hai
use apna munh kaala karne bahar nahi jana padega
dusro se chudwana nahi padega
randipana nahi karna padega

yeh sunte hi suraj zor zor se apni didi ki choot mein apna lund pelne laga

apni beti ke munh se aisi baatein sunke
ro padi
aur ghutno ke bal baith gayi

Suraj apni didi ko humach humach ke chod Raha tha
Taniya aahein bhar rahi thi

Raveena rote hue
ruk jaao
mujhe maaf kar do
mujhse galti ho gayi
yeh sab band karo

Suraj ne apni maa ko rota dekh
ruk gaya

Taniya ne phirse use thappad maar diya
kameene kitni baar tujhse isne maafi maangi hai
kitni baar tujhse vaada kiya hai
is randi pe vishwas karega tu

Suraj yeh sunke apni maa ko gusse se dekhne laga
aur itni zor zor se dhakke maarne laga
ki Taniya ki cheekh nikal gayi
Suraj jaanwaro ki tarah dhakke maarne laga
Taniya buri tarah se ghabra gayi thi

aur kuchh der baad Taniya ka paani nikal gaya
Taniya buri tarah se jhadne lagi
uska sharir jhatke khaa raha tha

lekin suraj nahi rukne waala tha
usne apni didi ko ghodi banaya
ab Taniya ka chehra bhi raveena ki taraf tha
aur Suraj ka chehra bhi raveena ki taraf tha
raveena roti rahi

aur Suraj apni behen ko chodta raha
bina ruke bina koi rehem kiye
Taniya ko bhi maza aaraha tha
usne nahi socha tha ki uska bhai itna dumdaad niklega

kuchh der baad Taniya ka phirse paani nikal gaya

Taniya bed pe gid padi
aur sisakne lagi
use dard ho raha tha

Taniya
ab jaake apni maa ko nanga kar
aur uski hawas mita
pehle uske munh ko chod
phir use nanga kar
phir uske hontho ko chus
uske hontho ko chuste hue apni jubaan uske munh mein daal
kiss karte hue uske boobs ko zor zor se daba
unhein masal de unhein laal kar de

yeh sunte hi suraj ne apna lund Taniya ki choot se nikaala
raveena ne apne bete ka lund dekhte hi apni aankhein band kar li

Taniya
mummy agar aapne suraj ko roka
toh isi haalat mein ghar se bahar chali jaaungi

yeh sunte hi raveena ro padi

suraj bhi ghabra gaya

suraj apni.maa ke paas pahuncha

Raveena
please maaf kar do meri bachchi
yeh galat hai paap hai
Aisa mat karo

Taniya
theek hai
phir main aapko dikhati hoon
ki main dhamki nahi de rahi hoon

aur Taniya jaise khadi hui
uski cheekh nikal gayi
woh langdate hue gate ki taraf jaane lagi

Raveena rote hue
nahi nahi Aisa mat karo
main main nahi rokungi Suraj ko

Taniya
Suraj pehle maa ko thappad maar
aur phir uske munh ko chod

yeh sunte hi Suraj apni maa ko thappad maarne laga
raveena ro padi
raveena ke.dono gaal laal ho gaye the

Suraj
chal ab munh khol randi
khol munh bahut shauk hai na tujhe chudwane ka
madarchod chhinal aaj teri saari garmi nikaalunga

raveena ne.munh khol diya
aur Suraj ne apna lund raveena ke munh mein pel diya
aur apni maa ke sar ko pakadke zor zor se chodne laga
raveena ki aankhein bahar ko aagayi
aisa laga jaise woh abhi behosh ho jaayegi

Taniya
Bhai kuchh der ke liye nikal le

Suraj ne lund nikaal liya
aur raveena rone lagi

Taniya
ab phir se chod mummy ke munh ko

suraj phirse raveena ke munh ko chodne laga
raveena ki aankhon se aansu nikalte rahe
aur phir kuchh der baad Suraj raveena ke munh mein hi jhad gaya

raveena suraj ko dhakka Dene lagi

Taniya
khabardar agar lund munh se nikaala hai
ek ek boond peene de kutiya ko

Suraj ne apni behen ki baat maani
aur phir majburan raveena ko saara cum peena pad gaya

Taniya
mummy ab jaake apna munh saaf karke
aaao aaj tumhara apne bete ke sath suhagdin manega

Suraj rone laga
hawas ka nasha utar chuka tha

Taniya cheekhte hue
kya chahta hai
ki teri maa roz naye lund le
roz chudwaye alag alag mardo se

in sab baato ne phirse suraj ke andar gusse ki aag bhar di
aur phir Suraj gusse mein bathroom mein gaya
raveena ro Rahi thi
suraj ne uske baalo ko pakda
aur phir room mein leke aaya

raveena
aah aah beta dard ho raha hai
Suraj

suraj ne raveena ko patak diya bed pe
aur uske upar aake uske.honto ko chusne laga
aur uske boobs dabane laga
kuchh der tak boobs dabane ke baad
suraj ne apni maa ke blouse ko pakda
aur faad diya

Raveena toh thi hi sex addict ab uske dil aur dimaag ne kaam karna band kar diya tha
lekin aise toh Rajesh ne bhi sex nahi kiya tha uske sath

Suraj apni mummy ke boobs pe kisi sher ki tarah jhapta
aur uske boobs ko chusne laga
kaatne laga
raveena ko dard ho raha tha
lekin woh kuchh nahi kar sakti thi
use maza bhi aaraha tha

kuchh der baad Suraj ne apni maa ke petticoat ko bhi utaar diya
raveena ki panty poori tarah se geeli hui padi thi
suraj ne panty ko pakda
aur kheench diya panty fat gayi

ek pal ke liye Taniya bhi ghabra gayi
suraj ke is roop ko dekhke

Suraj ne raveena ko kiss karna shuru kiya
aur apni teen ungli apni mummy ki choot mein ghusa diya
aur andar bahar karne laga

raveena aahein bharke reh gayi
kuchh der baad raveena ka paani nikal gaya

Taniya ne apne bhai ka lund saaf kiya
aur phir Suraj ne raveena ki choot pe lund rakhkha

raveena bhi ab suraj se chudna chahti thi
suraj bhi raveena ko chodna chahta tha

suraj ne ek zordaar dhakka maara
lund poora raveena ki choot mein sama chuka tha
suraj bina ruke dhakke maarne laga

raveena rone lagi thi
suraj kisi jaanwar ki tarah apni mummy ko chod raha tha
use ab kisi baat ki parwaah nahi thi

raveena bas aahein bhar rahi thi
kuchh der baad raveena ko bhi maza aane laga
aur Suraj use chodta raha

Taniya apne bhai ko dekh rahi thi
uske bhai ne toh uske sath is tarah se nahi kiya tha

kuchh der baad Raveena ka paani nikal gaya
suraj phir bhi chodta raha

jab dusri baar raveena ka paani nikla
toh raveena ro padi

Raveena
beta ruk jaao
please ab aur nahi dard ho raha hai

Suraj ne apni maa ki ek na suni
usne apni maa ke munh mein lund daal diya
aur uske munh ko chodne laga
raveena ki aankhon mein aansu aagaye
phir Suraj ne use ghodi banaya aur chodne laga

suraj ne apni maa ko nahi chhoda
woh apni mummy ki choot mein ek baar jhada
do baar jhada
aur teesri baar bhi jhad gaya

Raveena behosh ho chuki thi
suraj bhi so gaya tha


raveena ko jab hosh aaya
toh use apni choot mein bahut dard mehsus hua
Taniya wohin pe baithi ro Rahi thi

ab sabka Josh thanda pad chuka tha

Raveena bhi rone lagi
usne apni beti ko apne seene se laga liya
aur Suraj ki bhi aankh khul gayi

usne apni mummy aur didi ko rote dekha
toh khud bhi ro pada

Raveena ne apne bachcho ko sab bata diya
ki kaise woh sex ke liye tadap rahi thi
phir Sunita uske ghar aayi
aur use batane lagi ki kaise woh apne pati ko dhokha deti hai
har hafte woh Naya lund leti hai
raveena bhi behek gayi
aur Sunita ka sath dene lagi

ek hafte Tak Taniya ne plan banaya
aur phir Raveena ne Sunita ko phone kiya

Sunita
Raveena tum ek hafte se mera phone bhi nahi utha rahi thi
aur aaj tumne achanak mujhe kyun bulaya

raveena
mere bachche tumhara hisaab karna chahte hain

Sunita
matlab

tabhi peechhe se Taniya ki awaj aayi

Taniya
matlab main batati hoon maasi

Sunita ne Taniya ki taraf dekha

Taniya ne ek strap on dildo pehen rakhkha tha
Sunita ghabra gayi thi

Sunita
yeh sab kya hai Taniya

Taniya
maasi aaj main aur Mera Bhai
aapko apni rakhel banayenge

yeh sunke Sunita ke hosh udd gaye

Sunita
kya bakwas kar rahi ho
Raveena tum sun Rahi ho apni beti ki baatein
main jaa rahi hoon yahan se

Taniya
aap kahin nahi jaayengi maasi
suraj

aur phir Suraj room se bahar nikla
bilkul nanga

aur phir wohi hua jo Sunita ke sath hona tha


mental hospital
aage kya hua Suraj

doctor suraj ke saamne baithi use bade dhyan se dekh rahi thi
aur Suraj apna sar neeche kiye apni hi soch mein dooba hua tha

doctor
Suraj

suraj ne koi jawab nahi Diya

doctor
aage kya hua Raveena

suraj ne phirse koi jawab nahi Diya

doctor
aage kya hua Taniya

suraj chup tha

doctor
Ranjeet
aage kya hua

suraj
Ranjeet toh mar gaya tha na

doctor
aage ka nahi bata rahe tum

Suraj
baad mein bataunga

doctor cell se bahar aagayi
Suraj bed pe let ke ciggerate peene laga...

Amezing incast story hawas aur kamukhta ki had par ho gai. Superb....