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UN expected sex with an IPS wife..in train

Spoiler

Hi my name is Mohit ,Mohit Sharma age 26 bachelor but not a virgin..hahahahah...

Ajj main apko Apne ek UN expected sex ke bare main batta hu..Jo muje to kabhi ummid hi nahi thi ki aisa bhi Hoga..or jab hua uske baad muje Apne pe hansi bhi Aayi...or main shocked bhi tha...


Kynki Jo Kuch bhi hua wo train main hua....to main Thoda zaida shocked hu...

Baat abhi last November end ki hai... actually main Moradabad se hu..or Gurgaon ek MNC main job karta hu...

B.tech pass out 6 year ho chuke hai...to baat ye thi ki...

Meri ek bua ji hai..Jo Mumbai main rehti hai...unke jeth ke bete ki shadi thi...to hamare waha se bhi Jana tha..Maine apni Ghar pe mana kar diya tha ki main nahi ja paunga .

But papa ko leave Mili nahi..to mummy ko Le kar muje Jana tha...or problem tab hui...jab shadi ke 15 days Bache the...or tab card aaya.. muje Jana tha..to first Maine flight Dekhi.... but price bhut jaida tha..or mummy ne bola ki wo flight main nahi jayegi...


Main buri tarh se fas gaya tha..kaher fir train search ki...sab train full thi...
3 ac main ticket dekha to Mila nahi 34 waiting...or na second ac main..

Badi mushkil se ek train ke 1 AC to main 2 waiting thi.....Maine mummy se bola ki flight se hi chalte hain ..but wo Mani nahi...

Kher Kya karta Maine aise hi uska ticket kar diya...muje laga ki ye confirm nahi Hogi...bas mummy ka Dil rakhne ko kar diya...or sath main flights ka ticket bhi dekhne laga.. mummy ko bina bataye...

Din Yun hi Nikal gaye..mere mind se Mumbai Jane wali baat bhi Nikal gayi...sham ko main office tha..tabhi muje mobile main irctc ka message Aya..

Main shocked tha .mere or mummy ki sheat confirm thi..

Sheat number 2 and 4 thi..malab ki ek lower or ek upper

Muje koi problem nahi thi...sheat mil gayi thi...kher Maine mummy ko bataya...
Mummy bas muje gyan dene lagi...

M:: dekha bola tha na mil jayegi...Bach gaye na Tere paise ..Kitne baje ki hai train???(phone main)


Mo:: subh 10.15 ki hai mummy...app pehle din Aa Jana..Delhi cantt se hai ..( normal tarh se)


M:: haan.raat ki train se Aa jaungi ..Tere papa chor denge...( Casually bolte hue)

Mo:. Are mummy late ho jaoge...AJ Kal waise hi train late hoti hai...Aa Jana aap log Friday sham ko...mere hi room pe..subh chale jayenge...( Thoda zor dete hue)


M::are haan haan...sun bua ke Liye Kuch kapde bhi Le Jane hai...ajj market jaungi..accha Kaun si train main hai???ac hai ya sleeper main??( Normal aise hi puchate hue)

Mo:: first ac main hai mummy.... blanket wagera mat Le aanna...Chalo main rakhta hu....to app Aa Jana parso ko...( Phone rakhte hue)


fir Maine phone rakh diya...aise hi agla din bhi Nikal gaya office main...


Sham ko mummy se baat ki wo Kal aane wali thi..but mummy keh Rahi thi ki unki tabiyat Kuch thik nahi lag Rahi hai..but maine utna Dyan nahi diya...is baat pe..

Agla din hua or main office main work main laga raha..sham ko muje Dyan aaya ki mummy se Puch lu..Kitne baje tak Aa Rahi hai..

To Maine mummy ko phone Kiya...phone Kiya to Mera mood khrab ho gaya..


Kynki mummy ne bola ki wo Kal subh Aa jayegi...Maine bhi gusse main phone rakh diya..

Kher subh hui .4 baje call kiya.to call papa ne uthaya..

papa ne ek or bomb foda...

P:: are Mohit beta Teri mummy ko to bahut bukahar hai..kaise aayegi...TU Chala jayega..???( Tension wali awaz m)


Papa se main Thoda darta tha..to Kuch bol nahi paya ..or Mari hui awaz main bola .


Mo:: hm..mmm..thik hhh...( Off mood se)


Kher Maine phone rakha...massage dekha to chart bhi prepared ho Chuka tha..Matlab ki ab ticket cancel ka bhi koi option nahi tha..kher main tyar hua..

Or apna laptop bag or duffle bag lekar main Delhi cantt railway station ko chal pada..


7.30 time ho Raha tha...train actually 10 baje around ki thi but muje Thoda zaldi Jane ki aadat hai...Kahi pe bhi..

Main 9 baje karib railway station pahuch gaya...

Train 22452 thi...chd to Bdts...


Train 1.30 hours late thi...main station main time pass Karne laga..

Tabhi train ka announcement hua main wait Karne laga..or train bhi Aa gayi...Meri bogi A1 main thi...

Main train m chadha...or Apne coupe ko dhudhne laga...tabhi muje apna coupe dikha Jo khula hua tha..main ander gaya...to dekha ek lady Jo around 34,35 ki Hogi...,baat kar Rahi thi.. mobile pe .Bahar ko dekh ke.. ..or hanste hue...

Or ek karib ** ka baccha Jo dusri sheat m betha chips kha Raha tha....us lady ke samne...


Maine or usne ek dusre ko ignore Kiya ..Maine mobile main sheat Dekhi..2 or 4 thi..to dekha wo 2 number main bethi hai..to.maine Kuch nahi bola...
Bas apna bag rakhne laga...us bacche ko dekh ke smile Karke..

Baccha muje dekh ke bas chips khane laga...aadhi sheat main lete hue


Bag rakhte hue main ye soch Raha tha ki sayad iske sath Jo Hoga wo niche gaya hoga...

Tabhi train chal padi..or wo aram se baat kar Rahi thi...main sheat pe beth gaya...

Wo baacha Bahar ko dekh Raha tha ..or fir a
Us lady ke pass ja ke bola .Jo abhi bhi phone pe baat kar Rahi thi...


Baccha:: mummmaaa.....mummmaaa... mobile de.doo naaa.....plsssss.plssss...( bacche wali awaz m apni body ko aise waise ghuma ke)


Us lady ne bachhe ko dekh ke aankh fikhayi..or baat karte Rahi...


Yu hi tabhi train chlne lagi ..Maine bhar ko dekha koi or to aaya nahi...lekin wo lady Apne main baat karte Rahi...


Main to bass us bacche ki hi activity dekh Raha tha...

Muje Apne din yaad aane Lage..or ek smile muh m Aa gayi...tabhi muje mere mummy ka Dyan aaya ..or mummy ko phone milaya..


Kher thodi der baat ki...or bata diya ki main train main beth gaya hu...

Tabhi wo lady ne bhi mobile rakh diya..or gusse se boli Apne bete ko..

Lady:: bilkul...tameez nahi hai na beta...Kisi se baat bhi nhi Karne dete ho...( Dante hue)din bhar game khelna hai na...waha masi ke gahr bhi aisa hi karoge na...??( Dhere se usko dante hue ek Baar muje dekh ke ankh bachate hue)

Maine bhi Apne mobile m Lage Raha aisa dikhaya ki muje Kuch nahi pata...

main boor ho Raha tha .. kynki gf ki bhi shadi ho gayi thi..AJ Kal bilkul tanha tha...

To Maine mobile main mail check kiye ..to mere boss ne muje ek work mail Kiya tha..gussa to bahut aaya ..lekin boor hone se to ye hi thik laga...


Kher Main utha or apna laptop nikala...Maine just noticed Kiya ki wo lady mujse Kuch bolna Cha rahi hai..but Kuch bol nahi paa Rahi h...

Maine bhi Apne kaam main Lage Raha....wo baacha zid karte Raha...


Tabhi TT Aa gaya ..


TT:: Aa gaye hai sab...??( Naak main chasma lagye hue chart dekhte hue)


Maine mobile liya..or usko dikha diya...


Wo bola..

TT:: Mohit Sharma...,Nirmala Sharma....??( Us lady ko or muje dekhte hue Thoda doubt se)


Sayad wo age ko Lekar confused hua tha...


Main ek dam se halka sa smile Karke bola ..


Mo:: are sir wo baat ye hai ki..meri mummy nahi Aa payi....main single hi hu...( Baat karte hue normally us lady ko dekh ke)


Tabhi wo lady bhi boli ..


Lady:: sir wo mere husband bhi nahi Aaye hai...Anand Singh,main Anita Singh...( Kahde ho ke sandal pehnete hue)


TT:. Ok ok ...main Thoda confused ho gaya tha.( Hanste hue)
.koi nahi thik h ...app logo ko blanket nahi diya na..abhi aayega ladka....( Jate hue chart ko mod ke)

Main or wo apni sheat pe beth gaye..is Baar wo bas halka sa muskura gayi....sayad TT wale incident pe..

Main bhi bas halka sa muskura diya...


Or wo apni sheat pe beth gayi....or Bahar ko dekhne lagi...uska beta zidd karte Raha ..

Or wo mana karte Rahi..mobile chupate Rahi...bacche ne train main tandav kar diya...main bhi distrub ho Raha tha...lekin Kya karta..to Maine usko apna mobile de diya ..


Wo Thoda sa dhere se boli...


A:: thodi der haan ?? Fir bhaiya ko de dena...( Bhaut dhere se)


Main apna kaam karte hue usko dekh Raha tha..tabhi wo boli pehle Baar...


A' :: excuse me..aapp kaha tak ja rahe hai ..??( Thoda jijhakte hue)


Maine kaan se earbuds nikala .or bola... gently..


Mo:: ji... Mumbai....( Bas smile Karke)


A:: ohh hum bhi ... ( Bas itna hi boli)

Main Apne kaam main Lage Raha....lekin main tabhi dekha...wo lady bhut hot thi...matlab.ki bilkul perfect shape or hot face...bahut Gori nahi...pale face tha...face Thoda bhara hua ...halki lipstick..

Ek garam salwar suit..or upper se swetar...


Tarin chalte Rahi..Karib half hour tak koi baat nahi hui..wo bas Apne mobile m lagi thi...

Tabhi uske husband ka phone Aa gya...
Uske ladka Jo mere berth pe betha tha..wo boli...


A:: vedans beta papa ka phone hai...( Mobile dekhte hue)


Or boli phone utha ke...


A: hello....( Bhar ko dekhte hue)


Hus:: hello.....kha phuche ho ?? Number nahi mil Raha tha??


A:: pata nahi.... network nahi hoga...pata nahi kha phuche hai...( Bahar ko dekhte hue jaise station dudndh Rahi ho)


Hu::: rewari pahuchne wale ho....vedans kaha hai..???


A:: yahi to hai..beta lo papa baat kar Rahi h(( halka sa uth ke mobile dete hue)


Kher thodi der baad phone rakh diya...uska beta to mobile main khoya hua tha...

Or wo daant ke boli...


A:: tabhi nahi deti hu tumko mobile...Chalo do bahiya ko..aao so jaoge.....(halka sa daant ke Apne mobile ke mike pe hath rakh ke taki uske pati ko na sunayi de)

Usne unsuna kar diya...


A:: vedans....????( Ankh dikha ke)


Wo ladka muh bana ke muje mobile de diya....Maine bhi Hans ke Apne pass rakh diya or bola...
Ladke ne Apne papa se baat ki or fir rakh diya phone..
Wo muh latkaye betha to main bola..

Mo:: abhi so Jao..sham ko khel Lena...( Smile Karke)


Wo khus ho ke apni maa ke pass Chala gaya...main kaam main Lage Raha...


Or wo apni swetar kholne lagi mere or ko pith Karke..Meri najar uske pith pe padi ..


Uske suit ke cut se uski pink bra ka strep dikhane laga...

Maine ek dam se Nazar Hatha di....or wo kambal ke Ander ghus gayi....Jo attenders de gaya tha..or fir palat ke boli..


A:: excuse me....( Bearth m lete hue bas muh ko mere or ko Karke)


Maine ek dam se bola..


Mo:: ji.....( Earbuds Nikal ke)


A:. Wo door band kar dijiye..Hawa Aa Rahi h...( Request wali Nazar se)


Main ek dam se utha..kynki thand to muje bhi lag Rahi thi..wo bas jhijak Raha tha...ab usne bol diya tha to Maine band Kiya..or betha gaya..uske or dekh ke ..


Kehte hai na man will be man...Meri Nazar Baar Baar uske bhar ko nikle hue khulhon pe tik ja Rahi thi....
Kaam Karne pe bhi man nhi laga ..to laptop band Karke..main bhi let gaya ..

Train chlte Rahi...or hamari nind tab khuli...jab Narnaul main hamara Khana aaya...


Main utha to wo bhi uth gayi..uska beta mast soya tha...

Service Wala kahna rakh ke Chala gaya...


Wo uthi or angdai lete hue boli...


A:. Kha phuche???( Jamhai lete hue Bahar ko dekh ke)


Maine turant mobile nikala or bola..


M:: Narnaul..hai ye .. ( mobile dekh ke

A:: wo hasne lagi .or hath se ishara Kiya bhar ko...( Muje dekh ke hanste hue)

Bahar Bord laga tha or main bhi bas hans diya...

Fir usne Apne bete ko uthaya...fir hum log Kahana kahne Lage...


Tab usne bataya ki...uska husband ek IPS hai.delhi police main...or Kuch urgent kaam hone se uska aana cancel ho gaya....
Or usko Jana pada Apne behan ke Ghar koi program main...


Kher hamari aise hi baat hone lagi....baat karte karte Meri Nazar Baar Baar uske urozzo pe chale jati ..

Kynki ac chal Raha tha to temperature normal tha...
To usne sweater utara hua tha...or usne ek normal sa dupatta dala tha Jo us Jawan aurat ke joban ko dhakne ke Liye Kafi nahi tha..

Kahne time main Baar Baar uski cleavage ko dekh Raha tha...jispe ek gold ka mangalsutra larak Raha tha..or ek Baar usne dekh bhi liya or bahne se Apne bete de dekhkar bolte hue Apne dupatte ko sahi kiya..or bola...

A:. Vedans ..beta Khana Khao pura...fir mat bolna...Dekho bhaiya or Maine bhi khtam kar liya hai ..( dupatta sahi karte hue Apne bete de bolte hue)

Muje bhut embarrassed feel hua..or fir sir jhuka ke kahna kahne laga..


Fir mujse mere bare main puchne lagi..mahol ko Thoda halka Karne ko ..

Maine use Apne bare main sab bataya..ki kha job karta hua Kya ye sab ..

Khana kahne ke baad wo mujse boli ..

A:: boor ho gaye hai..Kya kare..so hi jate Hain ..( hanste hue balnket odh ke sote hue)


Maine bhi bas smile Kiya or Apne kaam m lag gaya..

Uska beta wahi betha tha...or wo Let ke mobile main lagi thi...Anita ke Baal khulhe the..or apni boobs tak kambal Dhaka hua tha sayad main na dekh pau isliye ..
Lekin muje Baar Baar uske pink bra ka streps dikh Raha tha..

Mera to waise hi kahda hone laga...mast lag Rahi thi wo ..kher main kaam karta Raha..or wo soyi to uska beta chupke se mujse Mera mobile magne laga..Maine bhi Hans ke de diya...

Kher aise hi 4 baj gaya...train late hote ja Rahi thi...uski nind tab khuli .jab uske husband ka phone aaya..kynki network thik nahi tha to zaida baat nahi ho payi...
Or jab usne Apne bete ko dekha mobile m Lage hue to usko danta..to Maine bhi bola...

M:: khelne dijiye..boor ho Raha hoga..( smile Karke)


To wo boli ..

A:. Are nahi iski adat bahut khrab ho gayi h..din bahr bas Apne PS pe game khelna..ya mobile main....( Usko ghurte hue)


Usne muje mobile de diya..to Maine bola..

M:. Khel lo, koi nahi aaj khelne do....( Bacche ko dekh ke fir uski maa ko dekh ke)


Kher wo fir mobile m lagi Rahi..or bich bich main mujse baat bhi Karti...main kaam kar Raha tha to wo boli ..

A:: bahut kaam Hota hai Kya???( Smile Karke)


Maine bhi Hans ke reply diya..

M::haan na...chain nahi Lene dete....tabhi to government job badiya hai( smile Karke)


A:. Aisa lagta hai...iske papa ko hi Dekho na ,na aane ka time na Jane ka..ajj bhi Jana tha to koi neta Aa Raha tha to waha Jana padha ...( Uthe hue Baal bandhte hue)


Tabhi wo uthi ..or jab Baal badhne lagi to Meri Nazar sidha uske mote mote gubbare pe padi ..lekin is Baar Maine Nazar hata di..to wo bhi pata nhi kyn..smile daba ke wash room ko chale gayi..Apne suit ko sahi Karke...

Pehli baar Maine uske mote khulhon ko dekha..Jo almost Bahar ko nikale the...uska beta mobile m laga tha usko Kya pata..ki main uski Jawan maa ko dekh Raha hu ..


Kher thodi der baad wo muh dho ke Aayi...to fir main bhi washroom Jane ko apna face wash bag m dhudhne laga...to wo Mila nahi ...


Main pareshan ho Raha tha to wo muh pochte hue boli..


A:: Kya hua?? Any problem??( Purple churiyon se bahre hue hath ko pochte hue)

Main saman dhundhte hue bola..

M: wo Mera face wash...( Bag se kapde Bahar nikalte hue)

Meri back abhi uske or thi .to wo boli...


A:. Ager app Chao to Mera use kar sakte ho..( Hans ke Piche se dete hue)


Main Piche muda or embarrassed feel karte hue bola..

M:: no thanks it's ok....bas aise hi dekh Raha tha...( Smile Karke)


A:. Are Kya hua fir..Le lo na..train main kaha milega...lo...( Mere hath m dete hue smile karke)

Or Maine bhi Hans ke liya...or Chala gaya..thodi der baad aaya..to dekha..wo apna bag Nikal ke Apne kapde dekh Rahi thi...jaise check kar Rahi ho..


Main Ander aaya or uske sheat pe uska face wash rakha or usko thank bola..

Wo bhi smile Karke it's ok boli ..

Main bhi muh hath dho ke beth gaya...

Tabhi wo apni saree Nikal Rahi thi.jaise check kar Rahi ho.to wo hua jisse hum dino Sharm shar ho gaye .hua ye hi bag se saree nikalte time .uski black panty..or bra niche fir gaye .dono bearth ke samne..


Wo hadbada gayi .or bina muje dekhe zaldi se uthane ko jhuki .to uske boobs uske suit se Bahar nikalte hue dikahyi dene Lage ..

Meri to heartbeat badha gayi ..or uski Nazar mujse Mili..to usne apna dupatta sahi kiya..muje fir se sharmsar hona pada..ye second time tha jab usne muje dekhte hue pakad liya tha..


Muje Apne pe bahut gussa Aa Raha tha..wahi wo chup chap Apne kapde dekh ke..beth gayi..or Apne bete de boli .bina muje dekhe hue ..

A:. Beta bahut der ho gayi na..do mobile bhaiya ko..Pagal ho jata h ye to game ke Piche...( Hanth se mobile Le kar mere sheat pe rakh ke)

Kher tab tak service Wala coffee Le Aya...or fir hum dino main normal baat hone lagi ...
Ab main uske gale se niche dekh hi nahi Raha tha..or wo bhi Apne dupatee ko pakad ke bethi thi...


fir sham ho gayi .train late hote ja Rahi thi...


Sham ka 6 baj gaya tha or hum phulera junction bhi nahi pahuche the ..


Main boor hone laga tha..na to usko dekh sakta tha..or mobile main bhi Kitna lagta....wo bhi Kitna baat Karti..bas mobile main lagi thi..lekin network aacha nahi tha to wo bhi nahi chal Raha tha.. isliye main bhi mail nahi kar paya tha..Apne boos ko ...

Bas laptop kholke betha tha..wo bas Kisi soch main dubi thi...
Maine usko gaur se dekha...uske Baal shine kar rahe the..jaise ki baalon main Mehandi lagayi ho... hathon main puri churiyan pehani thi....or pero main moti si payal...Kali aankh...

Wo modern thi lekin ek puri housewife...

Bilkul mast bhabhi...

Maine Nazar hata di...train dhere dhere chal Rahi thi...Bahar kohara laga tha..or Ander khamoshi thi...

Khamoshi tab tuti ..jab door knock hua..wo mere taraf Dekhi..main blanket hata ke utha to dekha service Wala tha Jo night ke kahne ki timing ke bare main Puch Raha tha..

Maine usko dekha to wo boli ..

A:: 8 baje tak??( Jaise mujse Puch Rahi ho)


Maine same service wale ko bol diya...


Main sheat pe aaya to wo boli ..

A:: kahli Bethe Bethe bhuk bhi nahi lagti hai..( smile Karke)


M:: haan wo to hai....accha aap Kuch karte Hain??( Usko dekh ke)

Wo samjh nahi payi or aankh choti Karke smile Karke puchi..


A:: samjhi nahi ..( kaan ke Piche Baal daal ke)


M:. Wo sorry Matlab work karte Hai aap ya housewife??( Smile Karke)

A:: ohhh.....main ek dance teacher hu....gahr pe hi shikati hu...or banki ye Hain hamare bahut bade kaam....( Apne bete ko dekh ke hanste hue)

M:: oh good.....( Smile Karke)


Kher fir aise hi baat hotel Rahi kab 8.15 ho gaya pata hi nahi Chala...

Maine bhi apni mummy se baat ki... mummy ne pucha ki sath ki sheat pe Kon hai..to Maine aise hi bata diya ki koi family hai..ye nahi bola ki ek Jawan aurat ke sath ek coupe main akele hu....


Jab maine ye bola ki ek family hai to wo muje dekh ke Thoda hansi...or Bahar ko dekhne lagi ..


Muje Apne pe Thoda gussa bhi aaya ..lekin ab to bol diya tha..kher..uske pati ka phone aaya to usne bata diya tha..ki ek ladke Hain bahut helping hai.....uske husband ne koi react nahi Kiya...
Sayad ips tha isliye koi dar ya insecure nahi tha...Jo bhi tha muje Kya...


8.20 pe kahna aaya or usne mobile rakha...or hum log ek ek Karke hand wash ke Liye gaye or fir kahna kahne Lage...

Khana testy tha...or karib 8.50 tak kahna kahne ke baad Bethe the ki service Wala Aa gaya...


Or Le gaya sab ...

Wo Apne ladke se boli....Jo mere sheat pe betha tha...


A:: vedans?? Chalo beta upper so Jao.. bahiya bhi soyenge....( Bearth main letate hue)


V:. Nhi...mumma Kitna sounga main??? ( Baachon wali awaz main)


A:. Chup chap upper Jao....Chalo....Chad jaoge???( Thoda strict awaz m)


Wo muh bana ke upper Chad gaya...to Maine bhi uski help ki or usko blanket odha diya...


Jab main usko blanket odha Raha tha.Wo niche ko dekh ke dhere se mujse bola .


V:. Bahiya thodi der game khelne doge...( Bahut dhere request karte hue )

Muje us pe bahut hansi Aayi...sath main ye bhi laga ki ajj Kal bacche bhi mobile ke addicted ho chuke hai..

Tabhi uski mummy niche se uth ke upper ko jhank ke boli...


A:. Vedans batmezzi bhut ho Rahi hai...sun Rahi hu sab..
( Thoda gusse se)


Wo chup chap let gaya...

Main apni sheat pe beth gaya...or Socha ki Kya karu nind to Aa nahi Rahi thi...

Nind to usko bhi nahi Aa Rahi thi...light on thi to main usko dekha or bola..ishara Karke..


M: light off kar du... ager apko problem ho Rahi hai to??( Light ke or ishara Karke)


Wo bas uth ke beth gayi..or boli ..

A:. Nahi nahi nind hi nahi Aa Rahi h...( Hans ke)


M:: muje bhi actually din main sone ki adadt nahi hai na...to ab ayegi nahi....( Hans ke)


A:: accha koi movie hai...mere Mobile main de doge??? Boor ho Rahi hu...( Hans ke request karte hue)


M:. Haan haan laiye na...( Hath uske or badha ke)

Maine uska mobile liya or laptop se connect Karne laga ..but pata nhi uske mobile main Kya problem thi ki nahi Aa paa Rahi thi movie to main usko bola..


M:: ek kaam kariye mere mobile m dekh lijiye....( Usko apna mobile offer karte hue)


A:. Nahi nahi thik h aise bhut nahi dekhti hu...rehne dijiye...( Smile Karke upper bete ko dekhte hue)


Or wo fir se let gayi...

Main Baar Baar usko dekh Raha tha.. laptop main movie chal ke ..

Wo bhi muje dekhti..hum dono ka eye contact hua.....Maine or usne Nazar fer li...Maine fir dekha to wo bhi Dekhi.....but koi reaction nahi deti...

Tabhi Maine bahut himmat Karke usse bola...

M:: dekhna hai to laptop main dekh lijiye..kahli boor ho rahe Hoge ..( bahut normal hona dikha ke lekin Ander se halat bhut kharab thi ki wo Kya sochegi..)


Wo bhi na haan...kehte hue Apne bete ko dekhte hue..mere sheat pe Aa ke beth gayi window sheat pe...


Abhi main ek blanket odha tha...or wo aise hi bethi thi ..Thoda dur...main 777 charlie movie dekh Raha tha just start hi ki thi..
Lekin ab Dyan koi movie pe nahi tha,bas bagal main bethi hui haseena pe tha...

Main palthi maar ke betha tha...or laptop mere left per pe...usko Kuch sahi se nahi dikh Raha tha...


To wo Thoda sa mere or ko khiski..Maine bhi laptop uske or kar diya...

Wo abhi tak blanket nahi odhi thi..jabki Maine ab ek per niche dale betha tha blanket daal ke...

Karib 5 min tak Kuch hua nahi....Mera to Dyan hi nahi tha movie main...Baar Baar tirchi Nazar se uske mote chuche taad Raha tha....
Wo laptop ki screen ko hi dekh Rahi thi...


Tabhi himmat Karke main usse bola...

M:: wo..ye blanket odha lijiye..thanda lagega....( Normal dikahte hue..lekin Ander se Meri fati thi)


Wo Kuch nahi boli bas Apne pero main blanket daal li...

Ab wo or main ek hi blanket Mai the...lekin duri thi...

Usko sahi se dikh nahi Rahi thi..to wo aage ko jhukne lagi..to Maine uske tarf laptop kar diya...ab laptop aadha Hawa main or adha mere left per main tha..

Jisse laptop Baar Baar niche ko girne lagta...to wo Thoda sa mere tarf khiski.apnw Baal kaan ke Piche dalte hue.or aadhe laptop ko apni right jangh pe rakh li...


Ab uski or Meri jangh bilkul sati hui thi... ufffff Kya garam jangh thi...train bich bich main station pe rukte jati...bus hum log movie dekh rahe the...


Wo Baar Baar Apne bete ko dekhti...uska bere ne karwat badli..or hath niche latkaye hue..humko dekh Raha tha..jaise mobile Mang a Cha Raha ho mujse...


Usko Thoda ajeeb lag Raha tha sayad Apne bete ke samne aise bethne se...to Apne bete ko dekhte hue..kaan se earbuds nikalte hue boli...


A:: vedans so Jao beta....( Thoda Pyar se)


V:: muje nind nahi Aa Rahi mumma...app to movie dekh rahe ho..or main boor ho Raha hu....( Pet ke bal lete hue hamari tarf dekh ke)

Tabhi Maine laptop uski godh m rakha..or usko apna mobile thama diya...is Baar wo bhi Kuch nahi boli ..


Tabhi main palat ke usse bola..

M:: light band kar du Kya??( Casually bola)


Wo Apne bete ke or Dekhi ..or kaan ke Piche Baal rakhte hue muje dekh ke bina koi reaction de kar boli..

A:. Haannnn....karr do....aaankh m lag Rahi h .na??.( hilte hue beth ke blanket aache se odh ke)


Yakeen maniye Mera hath kaamp Raha tha light off Karne main..o kynki main to Kya Kya nhi soch liya tha..


Or light off Karke main uske bagal m betha or kambal aache se odh liya screen ki light thodi Kam ki..or fir se hum movie dekhne Lage..

Abhi wo aise bethi thi ki..left per palthi mare hue..or right per jispe laptop tha wo niche...

Main bhi same aise hi right mod ke or left palthi mar ke beth gaya...

Mere jangh uske jangh se sat Raha tha train ke chalne se...mast garam jangh..Mera to kahda ho gaya...

Are main Batana bhul gaya..Mera chotu ka size aacha hai...mota bhi hai...gf jab tak thi..khub rula rula ke leta tha uski....


Kher thodi tak aise hi Chala ...Maine Apne right per ko Jo ki Moda tha...usse uski jangh ko touch Kiya anguli sem..

Mere per ke anguthe pe garam garm feel hone laga..

Main to bar Baar usko dekh Raha tha..jabki wo screen ko dekh Rahi thi... serious ho ke..or biche main palke upper Karke Apne bete ko ..wo hath bandh ke bethi thi...

Main usko dekh ke kamuk hua ja Raha tha...to Maine apna right per uski per ke niche dalne ki Koshish Karne laga dhere dhere...
Wo abhi bhi screen ko dekh Rahi thi...koi reaction nahi

Mere mind m bahut sare baat chal rahe the..ki jaise..ab uska thappd pada..ya wo or Main kiss kar rahe h..

Heartbeat itni Tez chal Rahi thi..Kya batau....
Maine apna per laptop ki screen ko dekhte hue Ander dalne laga..or tabhi muje uska left per ki anguli halki si touch hui...

Wo ek dam se sidhe beth gayi .or Apne bete ko Dekhi ..lekin na muje Dekhi na uthi...

Uske Aisa karne se muje space Mila or Maine uttejana main apna per uske per se Mila diya...


Ufffff Kya Komal per the...Maine din main dekhe the uske per ..usne bichiya pehni thi ...or per main payal bhi..or nail polish bhi purple color ki lagayi thi...


Maine jaise ki uske per ke tale se uske per ko milaya .usne Apne per ki anguliyan mod Li..or is Baar uske face alag tha..ek dar sa dikh Raha tha....or wo Apne bete ko Dekhi...

Or fir se movie dekhne lagi..lekin muje nahi dekha...


Mujee himaat mil Rahi thi...or Maine Thoda sa halka sa uske or ko khiska or kambal sahi Karne ke bahane ..apna right hand apni left Thai pe rakh liya ..

Ab man main sawal ye tha ki aage hath badau ki nahi... kynki ips ki wife thi..ager Kuch ho jata to itna zaroor tha ki main barbad ho jata..lekin us mast maal ko dekh ke control bhi nahi ho Raha tha..to Maine..

Just halka sa uski Thai ko apni anguli ke point se touch Kiya ..jangh itni mulayam ki anguli Kisi sponge ke jaise...Matlab ki main press karta to anguli Ander dhaste hi jati...

Wo screen ko gaur se dekhte Rahi thi .or main usko..to akbhi uske bete ko Jo ki mobile m laga tha...

Tabhi main halka sa uske or ko ho ke betha..or apna hath bina soche saamjhe uske garam Thai pe rakh diya...

Ufffffff.....Maine Marne ko ho gya...sex Kiya tha lekin aisa pehli baar dar dar ke...
Wo bas Apne bete ko Dekhi... serious muh ban ke or Thoda aage ko jhuk ke beth gayi..kohani ke sahare muh tikate hue..

Meri himmat Sach batu boss badhte ja Rahi thi..or Maine karib 5 min tak waise hi rakha uski jangh pe..train hilane se kabhi kabhi dabav uski moti mulayam Jang m dab jata .Mera hart fail hone laga tha ..

Jab uske tarf se koi reaction nahi aaya..to Maine Apna hath upper ko Le gaya...

Thoda zaldi baji kar di...or sidha apna hath uske right urozz se niche or pet ke upper rakha...or wo hadbada ke sidhe beth gayi...

Mera Dil utar gaya...ki Maine Kya kar diya..ab ye chilayegi..to bezatti alag Maine to usse sorry bolne ko Apne ko tyar kar hi liya tha...

Tabhi wo Apne bete se boli..lekin muje nahi Dekhi..Maine Apne hath or per Piche khinch Liye the ..Jo abhi tak main Hawa main ud Raha tha farsh main aage gir Chuka tha ..

A:: vedans so Jao beta...muje bhi nind Aa Rahi hai...( Balnket hata ke uthte hue)


Mere muh se koi awaz nahi nikali bas ganimat ye thi ki wo muje Kuch boli nahi ..

Mere hath se bazi niklte ja Rahi thi..pata nahi kaha se mujpe himmat Aayi..or Maine uske right hand ko pakda or dhere se bola .


M:: moovviiiee deekkhhh lijjjiiyew naa...thodi baachhi hai....( Tez sansoo se request wali awaz se)

Wo Jo kahde thi...fir se Apne bete ko dekh ke beth gayi.bina Kuch bole..main ab due tha usse wo blanket nahi odhi...wo dono per niche latkaye bethi thi...

Tabhi main samjh gaya ki ab ya to aar ya Paar...

Lekin usse direct kaise Bolta ..na uska mobile number ki massage kar du..or Mera mobile bhi uske pass...

Mere samjh nahi Aya..wo hath bandh ke dono per niche Liye hue..kohani ke sahare muh tika ke movie dekhne lagi...

Tabhi mere mind m world pad aaya or Maine movie pause ki..or world pad khola or type Kiya...

Wo screen ko dekh Rahi thi..mere or ko Dekhi bhi nhi ..Maine jaise taise type Kiya .


Sorry...wo main control nahi kar paya..,Apke jaise beautiful lady aaj tak itne karib nahi Aayi thi...sorry...
If you want something please replay the movie... otherwise it's ok...I will never touch you again ...and you can sleep...I am waiting ...

Main ye likh ke Piche ladhar Le kar beth gayaor usko dekhne laga...wo 2 min tak Sochi..or Apne bete ko Dekhi....

Or Apne left hath se pad hatya or movie play kar di...or pura balnket odh l..or pakad ke beth gayi blanket ko ..

Sach Mano yaar itni khusi tab nahi hui jab MNC main aachi job Mili thi...

Maine uske bagal sarak gaya...or is Baar sidha apna right hath uski garam jangh pe rakh ke halka sa press kar diya...

Wo Apne bete ko Dekhi or main bhi..wo game main mast tha..or hum dono uske bete ko dekh rahe the ..or Mera hath kab uske mote chuche pe pahuch gaya pata nahi Chala..or Maine pehli baar uske mote cuche ko uske suit ke Bahar se press kiyaa..


Ufffff what a feel....wo .screen ko dekhne lagi..or main maslta gaya...train full speed main thi..or blanket ke Ander Mera hath uske right mamme ko daba Raha tha...


Or fir Maine Apne hath ko niche ko laya or uske suit ke Ander dalte hue uske gale ke tarf apna muh Kiya ..

Usne Apne gale ko Thoda daba diya...jaise ki muje kiss na Karne de Rahi ho...

Maine kampte hue honth se uske mangalsutra pe kiss kar diya..or Mera hath uske halke se fatty pet pe tha...
Main badh raha tha ..Mera ling tan ke kahda ho gaya tha..wo gardan ek side daba ke screen ko dekhte Rahi halka sa muskura ke...jaise aacha lag Raha ho.....or Maine uske bra ke upper se uske mamme daba ke uske gale ko chumta Raha..


Uff Kya Khusboo thi..us garam mada ki ..

Usne laptop ki screen halki si niche kar di taki uske muh pe light na pade..

Tabhi jaise hi Maine hath uske bra ke upper se Ander dala usne Mera hath pakad liya Apne suit ke upper se..lekin hataya nahi.....
Wo almost kaamp Rahi thi ..Maine uske angur ke Dane jaise nipple ko pakad liya...or halka sa masal diya..

Uske muh se halki si kamuka awaz nikali ..


Aaaaaaaaahhhhh...ummmmm...veedaaaannsss...utttahaa h......


Maine ab nahi rukne Wala tha..or uske hath ko Apne left hath se pakda or Apne jeans ke upper Apne ling pe rakh diya...


Usne hath na hathaya...na Kuch Kiya .Mera ling zor maar Raha tha...Maine uske uske nipple masla raha tha..or uske gale ko chum Raha tha bade aram se...

Maine usko dekha..uski aankh band hone lagi thi .to gehari saans Lene lagi thi..


Tabhi Maine apna hath uske mamme se nikala ..or sidha uski janghon ke jod pe rakha...usne apni jangh chipka li...


Maine Thoda zor diya to..Mera hath uske salwar or panty ke upper tha...or usko bhinch liya...usne bhi zor se Meri jangh bhinch li..Apne honth kaat ke..


Uska beta upper game khel Raha tha or main uski maa ki janghon m hath daal ke uski yoni ko bhinch Raha tha..jaha se wo khud nikla tha...


Maine tabhi apna hath uske salwar ki lastik pe laya..or sida ek hi baar m Ander haath daal diya..


Uffffffffffffffffffff....uski Komal panty...Jo branded net wali thi...aage se..wo Meri mutti main thi...

Wo bechain ho gayi..or Meri jeans ke upper se hi mere ling ko pakdne lagi adhi khuli aankh se screen dekhte hue...


Maine hath jaise hi..panty ki side ki lastik main Dali ..wo chihuk gayi..or uthne lagi...


Ufff bina Baal wali wo chut..jispe hath lagne se lag Raha tha ki Baal puri chut main aate Hain or bahut gahne aate hai....

Main tabhi left hath uski kamar m daal diya jakad liya usko .or middle finger se uske clitoris pe rakh di..or tarin ki speed se Mari anguli ka dabav uske matar ke Dane pe pada to usne apni jangh mere Liye khol di....

Or Maine sidha middle finger uske love hole m daal di...

Yakeen mainye..puri buri tarh se paniya gayi thi wo...

Maine apni middle finger uski chut m Dali ..to aissa laga garm Pani ke kund main anguli daal di ho...


Wo madhosh ho gayi..or mere shoulder m muh chupa li...or kamuka awaz m boli...



A:::aaaaahhhh..ummm....ppplllllsssss...vedaanssss deekkhhh leegaaaa ....ussskoooooo soooneeee koo boolllll dooo. Pllllllllsssss.( kampte hue whisper karte hue)

Maine uski chut main apni anguli ghuma ke mod li .or daant bhinch ke uske kaan pe kiss karte hue bola..


M:: you are damn hottttt..I Wanaaaa fuckkkk you hard to night..and whole night....( Uske kaan pe bolte hue uske tops ko muh m lekar chuste hue..)


Or Maine ye karte hue screen or jhuka di...

Wo machalte hue apna muh mere honth ke pass Le Aayi..

Or hamara pehla kiss hua..Jo dono tarf se bahut passionate tha...Maine uske lower lips ko Jam.ke chus liya.....

Train chal Rahi thi..to ek kiss ki ...ummmmmmmmmaa chaaappp ki awaz Aayi...


Uske bete ne ek Baar hamari or ko dekha..lekin usko dikha nahi..kynki ..wo Mobile ki light pe dekh Raha tha..

Uski chudiyan bhi baj uthi...or wo...ummm karte hue apna garma Pani chor di...


Uski pakad dhili ho gayi..

Or wo halfte hue khidi ke or gir gayi...or mere ling se hath hata di..

Mera hath abhi bhi uski chaddi ke Ander tha...

Puri chaddi buri tarh se gili thi....Maine frir se anguli mod di..to wo Mera hath pakdne lagi......muh dusre side Karke Dard se..

Maine usko chodne ko becahin tha..or utha..to ek tezz Khusboo mere hath se coupe main fail gayi..

Maine usko dekha...wo bahr ko dekhte hue hanf Rahi thi..

Maine wo Khusboo sungi... perfume ko chut ki mix Khusboo mere Sabra ka bandh todne ko uatru thi....


Maine uske bete ke pass gaya .or usko...sone ko bola..


M :: beta so Jao aab..mumma bhi so Rahi h.lao mobile charge pe laga deta hu...Kal subh khelna ..( gehri saans lete hue)


Wo Meri baat sun Rahi thi .or jab main bol Raha tha uske bete se..to wo bhi blanket ke Ander Meri bearth pe let gayi...


Maine uske bete ko odha ke sula diya...uski hath se jisse main uski maa ki chut main anguli kar Raha tha...


Maine dher se apni sheat pe aaya or pehle uska mobile liya..or usse bola..


M:: flight mod pe daal dijiye...( Mobile uske tarf badha ke)


Wo palti..or mobile ko flight mod pe daal ke karwat Le kar let gayi..Maine dekha wo Baal khol chuki thi...main samjh gaya..ye chudne ko puri tyari h .Mera Lund fate ja raha tha...ye dekh ke ..


Maine night bulb bhi band kar diya..

Or khidki ke parde. Acche se laga diye...coupe main andhera tha or main uske Piche late gaya...


Wo Thoda sa aage ko sark gayi...


Maine leate hi Apna left per uske upper daal diya...

Or usko uske pet se pakda ke Piche ko khincha...

Jisse uski chudiyan baj gayi..kahaaaaa.nnnn..

Or Maine apna hath aise uske suit ke Ander boobs pe dala jaise wo Meri biwi ho ..

Or uske gale main love bite Lete hue...uske mumme dabte Raha...

Wo bhaut dhere dhere gehari saans Lene lagi..
Muje jeans se problem hone lagi ..


To Maine Apne jeans ko utara lete hue hi uske bete ke tarf dekh ke..lekin Kuch dikh nahi Raha tha..wo waise hi leti thi...


Main ab under wear m tha..ye baat usko pata thi...


Fir Maine uski pith pe hath dala or uski ..bra ka hua khol diya...

Or dhere se usko sidha letaya..wo bhi bina Kuch na nukar Kiya .let gayi...or Maine right hand uske gale ke niche daal diya..


Or Maine uske bra ke Ander hath dalte hue..uske honth pe jhukte hue...uske dono pero ke jod ke bich apna ghutna dalte hue..usko kiss Karna sure Kiya..


Main bhaut softly uske naram honth chuste hue uske mamme dabane laga..


Uske Apne muh ko halaka sa khol diya...or Maine uttejana main uske nipple ko maslte hue...uske jeeb ko Apne honth m daba ke chusne laga ..


Uff Kya meetha jeeb thi uski ..Mera ghutna uski yoni pe thokar Marne laga .or wo mere Baal khichne lagi ..or karhabe lagi .halke halke ..


Uski chudiyan halke halke bajne lagi thi...

Maine kiss todi to muh side Karke hafne lagi..usko ab Apne bete ki bhi chinta nahi thi..


Maine apna left hath uski salwar or panty ke Ander daal diya ..mere hath main. Uske uske chut ka khurdura mans lagne laga...

Hathon pe pata chal Raha tha ki iske Baal bhut aate honge ..


Maine jisse hi 2 anguli se uske clitoris ko dabaya ..wo mere Baal khinch di. ..or Maine bhi badle main index or middle finger uski bur main utar di .or anguthe se uske bhagnasa ko maslne laga...

Wo mare uttejana ke blanket muh m daba di .taki zaida awaz na ho ..

Train ki speed se mere hathon ki speed badhne lagi....or wo bhi Apne left hath se Mera under wear dhudhne lagi..or sidha mere v shaped underwear main daal di..


Or jab usne pehli baar Mera mota or lamba ling pakda Apne churiyon se bahre hath se..usne usko masl diya..jaise ki ye bata Rahi hoki usko bahut passnd ayaa..

Maine fir se uske honth chus diye...


Waha uska beta karwat Le kar soya tha..or khus wo mere sath apni pyas bhujne lagi thi...

Kareb 5 min tak ye sab hua ..


Maine uske kurte ko upper kiya or uske nipple zor se shuk karte hue uski chut main poking Karne laga...

Wo Baar Baar Apne kamar ko uathi...or mere sir ko sehalate Rahi..main jam ke uske nipple chusa...wo apni awaz dabne ki bharpur Koshish Karne lagi ..lekin..halki halki kamukta bhari awazz Aa hi jati...

Sssiiiiii ssssiiiiiiiissisisisisiisiaiaisi

Dono full garam the ...

Main ab uski kamuk chut chatna chata tha ..


Or Maine apna hath nikala uske gale se...or uth ke beth gaya..wo Apne bete ke or ko Dekhi...

Or Main uski salwar niche Karne laga..

Usne bhi apne bete ko dekhte hue dhere se apni kamar upper ki or mere sath apni apni panty or salwar niche Karne lagi...

Main to uski janghon pe tut pada ..or jaha milta waha pe kiss Kiya ..wo becahin ho ke mere sir ko pakdte hue usko sahi Disha dene lagi..

Or per upper niche Karke apni salwar or panty uatrne lagi..jisse payal chammmmmm chammmm ki awaz karti....uski salwar or panty uske pero m fasi thi...

Or akhir main Mera muh uski bina Baal wali bur pe tha..

Kaam uttejana se Meri jeeb kaap Rahi thi...

Or jaise hi Maine uski chut pe muh ragdha muje khurdura laga
..us Kate hue Baal wali us garam or heavy harmons wali mada ki chut pe .

Maine ek dog ki tarh uski chut chatni suru kar di...uff Kya Khusboo thi... perfume or chut ki Tez gandh mere dimag m bas gayi thi...



Wo ek hath se kambal pakdti or left hath se mere Baal khinchte hue kamar upper karte hue zaida se ziada apni chut mere muh pe deti..

Maine uske fanko ko failaya..or jeeb Ander daal di...usne masti m..pillo ko muh main daba diya...

Or fir Maine uske fanko ko apne honth pe dabaya ..or chusne laga ..


Wo kambal muh m dale hue .unnnhhhhh .unnnhh karte hue machalte Rahi......kamar hilate rahi

Train chal Rahi thi..or hum dono Lage pade the...awaz bhi Aa Rahi thi ...wo to uska beta so gaya tha....sayad mobile m zaida thak gaya tha....


Thodi der baad Usne aaaiyaaaa..sssiiiii unnnnnnhhh kamauk waza nikali .or apni kamar puri upper kar di..or ek Tez Dhar mere muh pe padi .or kahtta sa Pani mere jeebh pe...


Or wo sheat pe gir gayi...or hafne lagi buri tarh se ..


Main samj gaya...ki wo jhar gayi hai...


Or main uske bagal main let gaya..or usko apni bahon m Le kar usko chumne laga..or uske upper chadte hue usko hanfte hue bola...


M:: Wana suck my penis??( Uske gaal chumte hue)


Wo buri tarh se Sharma gayi..or Sharma ke dusre tarf dekh ke dhere se kampte hue whisper karte hue boli...


A:::ummmm nnaaaaaa..............plsss....( Sharmate hue)


Main bhi rukna nahi chata tha...or sidha apna under wear utar ke uske pero ke bich Aa gaya ..
Wo Thoda per faliye hue darte hue boli...


A:: plsssss dheereeee karrnaaa....kaafiiii mottaaa h...plssss...( Request wali awaz m whisper karte hue)


Maine uske honth chus Liye ..or ling ko pakad ke...uske chut pe ragadne laga....


Chut buri tarh se Pani Pani hui thi ..

Mera ling lagte hi wo kaampne lagi..or muje pakdne lagi mere baju se per faila ke..


Main heran tha ki abhi 2 Baar jadi hai...ye...main ye dekh ke uttejit ho gaya..or supda uske bagnasa main zor se ragdte hue daba diya..


Uski muh se Dard bahri awaz Nikal gayi...



A:: plsssss ......aaanhhhhh..ssiiiii ummm .plsssssiiiiiiiiiiiiii naahiiiiiii( gardan idhar udhar Hila ke)


Maine uttejana main uske chut ke ched m lagaya..or train ki speed ke sath kamar daba di...or ling uski chut ke fanko ko failaya hua...sarrrrr se ghus gaya...


Wo aaaiyaaaaaa niiiiiiiii..... karte hue Dard bahre awaz m karhane lagi...


Main Tez sans lete hue ruk gaya..or uske gaal chumne laga...

Chut Ander se Kisi bahtti se Kam nahi thi...

Mujse Raha nahi gaya..or Maine dhere dhere usko chumte hue uske Ander samne laga...


Or wo saans roke...aaaahhh siii ummmm .ssiiiiii..haaiiiii ssiiiii.aaaanhhh.plsssss......slowlyy slowly kehte Rahi...

Or Meri speed badhte gayi...uski kamuk awaz se...

Wo per failye mujse chudte Rahi...

Tarin ke coupe pe ek jawan ek baache ki maa..ek 26 saal ke Jawan ladke se chudne lagi...


Chut se pacch paccha pacch ki aawaz aane lagi ..

Hum dono ki saans badhi hui thi...

Maine ek constant speed main uski Marnee laga..

Ab usko bhi bahut Maza Aa Raha tha ac chal Raha tha bhar kohra..or hum dono pasina pasina ho rahe the...


Main uske honth chuste hue jaise hi pura ling Ander daba diya ..supada uske womb pe chot Karne laga..

Jisse uski aankh chadne lagi..or mere khulhon ko Apne hath se dabne lagi..


Main bhi dono hathon uske makhmali khulhe ke niche daal ke dabate hue..uske shoulder gardan pe daant lagane laga...

Train ki speed Kam hone lagi or Meri badhne lagi...main saans roke uski Le Raha tha...

Dhacchhh dhacchhh dhacchhh Karke main uske upper havy tha...wo bhi masti main karhate hue mere khulhon ko push Karti..jaise ki Apne baache Dani tak Marwana chati ho....

Or main bhi josh main Aa ke bich bich m ling pura uske womb tak daal deta..to wo

Aaaiyaaaaaa.......mummmmmmmyyyyyyy sssiiiii maarrr gaayyiiii...plsssss...aaaaannnnhhhhhhhh aannhhh Karne lagti...or mere shoulder pe muh chupne lagti...mere pith m nakun laga ke...

Sach main bahut garm aurat thi wo..chut bhi aachi kahsi tight thi..mere Lund ne uski bur ko faila rakha tha..or fank mere Lund pe grip ban ke chade hue the..

Ling sarr se Ander Bahar Hota..puar ling uske Pani se gila tha..bahut Pani chor Rahi thi...chorti bhi kyn nahi..apni jawani ke charm pe thi wo mada...

Pani lagatr tapak Raha tha uski chut se..or mere andkosh m lagta jab bhi ling Ander ghusta..

Mera har 4 jahtka uske bacchedani ko bhedne lagta....




Coupe main hum dono ke Tez saans or chut ki ..pachhhhh pacchhhhhhh pacchhhhhhhhh...cvhaappp...or dhacchhh dhacchhh dhacchhh ki awaz or Anita ki kamuk rone wali awaz ..

Aa Rahi thi...

Or thap thap thap thap thap thap thap thap thap thap ki frequently awaz Aa Rahi thi...


Uske gaal mere thuk se gile the...or honth halke se suj bhi gaye the...
Or Mera right hand uske left mamme ko masal ke Laal kar Chuka tha....

Main bhut control Kara tha...train ruki to log bhar Aa ja rahe the...or main us anjaan ips ki wife ki Le Raha tha ..tabad tod ...wo muje bolti...


A:: pllsssss dheeereeee marroooo naaa.kooiii ssuuinn leggaa..aaanhhh ssii mummmmyyyyyyyyyyyyy...siiiiii aaaanhhh ssiii....aaaaaannhhhhh..( muje zor se pakde hue mere jahtke sehn karte hue)



Ek alag hi experience tha....Maine saans rok ke ling Ander tak daba diya..jisse uski ghuti hui awaz nikali ..


Aaaaaaaaiiyhaaaaaaa..maarrrrr gaayiiiiii...mummmmyyyyyyyyyyyyy..( mere chest pe hath rakh ke ankh Minch ke)



Main ruka gaya waise hi ..or jaise hi train Chali..Maine ling bahr khincha..or pillow uski kamar ke niche lagaya.or usne bhi zaldi se kamar utha di.... uske per utha ke uski pindaliyon ko chuma jisse uski payal chaammmm chamm Karke uski pinadali m atak gayi .main fir se saans rok ke ..uske bur ke khule hue ched m supda lagaya..or jhuk gaya uske upper...

Usne fir se...aaaaaaaaaannnhhh siiii karte hue..dusre side ko kar liya .


Main is Baar bina ruke usko tabad tod chodne laga..

Bas lete Raha daant bhinch ke saans rok ke ..

Ab Meri jangh uske mote kulhon se takra ke..thap thap thap thap thap thap ki awaz Karne Lage..

Or chut se pacch paaach pacch ki awaz or uske muh se kamuk sitkari nikalne lagi...


Mere hath uske boobs pe the....train ki speed se Meri bhi
Speed badhte gayi..Maine uske nipple ko muh m Liye hue ..uske bacche Dani tak uski yoni ko thokne laga ..

Wo Apne dono per mere kamar pe chada li...

Main uske kaam ke pass usse chodte hue bol Raha tha..


M:: kasam se bahut hot ho ...bhut tight h tumhari....uffff...uffff....mazA Aa Raha h naa..haan haan ....( Tezi se chodte hue)

A:: aaaiyaaaaa...unnnnnnn.sssiiii aaahhh.haaannn..ssiiii mummmyyyy..ssiiiii maarr gaayiiii..ssiiii plsssss aaanhhh aanhh annhhhh aaanhhhh....sssiii waahhaaa taaakkk jaaa rahaaa Raha h....vedannssss deekkhhh legaaaa aaannnhhhhhh finalllyy you got me fuck hard.....aaannnhhh ssiii plssss......plllssss ...( Mere har dhakeke ko Apne bacchedani pe jehlete hue besudh ho ke badbate hue Meri bahon main)


M:: dekhne do....bol denaaa.bhaiiya meri...le raaheee theor main de Rahi thi.....you are so fuccking hot lady ever seen....I Wana fuck you whole night.... Aaaahhhh...ufff.......I am commmiiinnggggg....inssideeee yoouuuuuuu.....( Kamar daba ke chodte hue)




Coupe main kaam kriya ki bhut aawaz Aa Rahi thi...jisse uska beta bhi utth gaya..kynki wo chuste hue bol Rahi thi...

Uska beta lete hue sab sun Raha tha...kynki chudiyan or payal ki awaz or uski maa ki rone jaise awaz it a Aa Rahi tj...

Lekin us baache ko Kuch samj nahi aaya...

A:: yeesssss.....aaaaaahhhhh Aaaahhhh....plsssss pllsssss I aaammmmmcommmmmmmmmmmiiinnngggggg sssoooo haaddddddd firrssstttt timmeeeeeeee...( Muje zor se jakad ke)


Or usne mere honth m kaat diya..

Or Maine bhi7,8 tabadtod zahtke mare or puri takat se Apne khulhe sikod ke ...Apne andkosh m bahre hue maal ko uske bacche Dani main Gira diya ..


Mera pura ling uski bacche Dani m ghusa tha .or khub Sara maal Maine uske Ander utara...

Wo aaaiyaaaa Marr gaayii Marr gayyii.mummmyy siiiiiii sssii karte hue mere pith m nakun lagte Rahi....

Maine apni last bund tak uski bur main giaryi....

Hum dono ek dusre ki bahon main lete rahe.....


Pillow main uska Pani gira hua tha.....pura bhiga tha..

Or fir Maine ling bahr nikala to puck ki ek awaz hui...
Or maal girne laga...usne haath laga ke maal ko roka..or dusre hath se apni panty dhundi ...or pochne lagi...



Or main uthne laga to usne muje khinch liya..or mere lips main ek pyara sa smooch diya ..


Or fir hum dono uth gaye...
Thodi der baad wo uthi..or Apne bra ke huk lagaye ..
Jisse chudiyan bajne lagi .or salwar pehn ke dhere se duppate dale hue wash room ko chale gayi...


Us Raat karib sub 4 baje tak Maine uski li...

Subh wo bahut Sharma Rahi thi..train late thi to karib 12 baje tak hum Mumbai pahuche...


Main usko dekhte Raha lekin wo sharmate Rahi...usne muje apna number diya ...or hum.mumbai main ek hotel main bhi mile...


Abhi last week jab uska husband out of station tha to wo mere room pe bhi Aayi thi...


Ager aap logo ko ye story aachi lagi ho to train main hue or 2 round bhi explain karunga...



Thanks....

भाई एकदम real स्टोरी है, कहीं से भी स्टोरी तो है ही नहीं, real incident, u r lucky

 

[Flymovers777]

भाई एकदम real स्टोरी है, कहीं से भी स्टोरी तो है ही नहीं, real incident, u r lucky

Hahaha thanks Bhai...aacha laga Apne enjoy Kiya...

 

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Mera name subhas chand he. Umar 58 sal. Me ek sone chandi ka vyopari hu. Matlab ki ek sunhar. Meri jaweri bazar me dukan he. Meri biwi maya rani. Hight 6 fit ki. Mujse tagdi. Me to dubla patla maryal sa hu. Par meri biwi mujse kai gunah tagdi he. Mere ghar me meri biwi ki hi chalti he.

Vese vo chalchalan ki khatab to nahi he. Par ghar ki malkin vahi he. Jesa vo chahti he. Ghar me vesa hi hota he. Par ye kahani maya ki nahi he. Meri do betiyo ki he. Mere ek dost vyapari seth Mafat lal. Jiski meri dukan ke bagal me hi dukan he. Vo mera samdhi he. Meri do betiya he. Malvika or simran. Malvika ki umar 26 sal. Uski shadi ko 6 sal ho chuke he. Vo apni maa pe gai he. Meri tarah nati nahi he.

34 ke boobs 30 ki kamar or 36 ka pichhvada. Bahot khubshurat he. Name bhi sahi diya meri biwi ne. Malvika. Ka ka pata nahi par mal to jabardast he. Mafat lal ke bade bete Sundar lal se uski shadi aaj se 6 sal pahele hui thi. Abhi sayad uske pet me he. Meri biwi ne bataya uska mahina ruk gaya.
Dusri he simarn jiski shadi mere shamdhi Mafat lal ke chhote bete shameer se pakki kar di he. Bas shadi ki bat pakki Karwne ke lie hi Meri beti or shamdhi mere ghar aae hue he. Simran bhi malvika ki tarah mal hi he. Uske bhi 34 ke boobs 28 ki kamar or 34 ka hi pichhvada he. Meri biwi meri niyat janti he.
Is lie vo muje meri betiyo ke pas bhatakne tak nahi deti. To ab asli kahani par chalte he. Meri badi si kothi ke bahar. Gardan me. Mafatlal or me ham dono hi sharab ki chuskiya lete hue rangin bato ka maza le rahe the. Halka halka shusrur ham dono ko chadh chuka tha.

Me ; are yaar tuje vo sweety yaad he. Jise ham dono ne choda tha.

Mafat ; (smaile) ha ha. Sali ne anguthi churai thi. Or tune hi muje phone kar ke bulaya tha. Mast kashi hui chut thi uski.

Hame nasha jyada hone laga tha.

Me ; par yaar esi kashi chut ab kaha mil sakti he.

Mafat ; muje to malvika ki chut se jyada kashi hui kisi ki nahi lagti. Usi ki marne me jyada maza,aata he yaar.

Malvika ka name sunkar muje zatka sa laga. Vo meri beti yani apni bahu ki bat kar raha he. Vo bolte hue zum raha tha. Nasha to muje bhi ho gaya. Par pine ke bad bhi mera dimag tez chalta he. Sunar hu. Kanjus bhi hu. Or bahot syana bhi hu.

Me ; (sock) kya bat kar raha he yaar.

Mafat ; (nasha) ha yaar sach me. Jo maza muje teri beti ki chudai me aati he. Vo kisi me nahi aati.

Me ; (nasha) sale nasha tuje ho gaya he. Tu kuchh bhi mat bol.

Mafat ; (zumte hue) are me zutth nahi bol raha yaar. Tu bol me vo shart lagane ko taiyar hu.

Me ; (nasha zumte hue) sale zutth bolega to tuje mera land chusa dunga.

Tabhi meri beti malvika ki aavaj aai. Vo andar se hi chilakar bol rahi thi.

Malvika ; papa..... Please dono aa jao. Khana thanda ho raha he.

Mafat sala ghum kar door ki taraf dekha or fir muje kamini smaile karte hue dekhta he.

Mafat ; (nasha kamini smaile) agar vo yaha tere samne meri god me beth kar muje kiss karegi to bol tu mera land muh me lega.

Nasha use nahi muje bhi ho gaya tha. Par land mera bhi meri dhoti me sochkar hi tan gaya. Me josh me bol gaya.

Me ; (nasha josh) manzur he.

Vaha meri beti papa papa chilla rahi thi. Mafat ne malvika ko aavaj di.

Mafat ; malvika..... Jara idhar aana Darling.

Malvika door se bahar aai. saree me. Uske face par ajib si mushkurahat thi. Chandni rat me bala hi khubshurat. Bas uske aane se hi mere land me zanzanati or dill me becheni badh gai. Mafat ne uski taraf face kiya. or apni god ki taraf hisara kiya. Mere dill ki dhadkane tez ho gai. Vo apne chahere par aa rahe balo ko ungli se kan ke pichh karti hui mushkurai.
Pahele to usne muje dekha. Meri dill ki dhakne tez ho gai. Par sayad use laga muje nasha jyada ho gaya ho. Vo bade aram se hamare bich me aai or mafat ki god me beth gai. Apne dono hatho ko uske gale me ese dalkar zul gai. Jese vo uska shasur na hokar pati ho.
Mafat ne bhi sidha ek hath blouse ke upar se hi uske boobs pe rakha. Duse hath ko uske sar ke pichhe lejakar uske lips se lips jod diye. Vo mere hi samne meri beti ko kiss kar raha tha. Mera to nasha hi fat gaya. Mera hath khud hi apni dhoti ke upar se apne land par chala gaya.

Mafat ; (smaile) dekh tera bap kese ham dono ko dekh kar apna land mashal raha he.

Malvika ne muje smaile karte hue dekha.

Malvika ; (smaile) papa aap kisi ko bataoge to nahi na???

Me jese stabdh hi rahe gaya. Or na me sar hilaya. Meri beti khadi hui. Or mafat ne apni dhoti upar kar li. Vo apna bada or mota sa land nikal kar bola.

Mafat ; (smaile) chal sale ab tu sharat har gaya. Ab chus ise.

Muje apne aap par sharam aane lagi. Me kabhi mafat ko dekhta. To kabhi uske 8" ke land ko to kabhi malvika ko. Jo ye sab dekh kar mushkura rahi thi.

Malvila ; (smaile) ab papa sharat lagai he to man na bhi padega.

Pata nahi kya huaa me aage khisak kar apne hatho se kamine mafat ka land pakad liya.

Malvika ; (smaile) jaldi kijiye papa. Kahi mammy na aa jae.

Muje sharam bhi aa rahi thi par maza bhi aa raha tha. Me uske land par zuka or land ko muh me le liya. Uska land pahele se tana huaa tha. Pure 1 minit hue ki usne mere kandho se pichhe dhakela. Bas bas sharat puri hui.

Malvika ; (smaile) bas bas ab aap kisi ko kuchh nahi kahoge.

Me sock ho gaya. Kyo ki meri khud ki beti mera video bana rahi thi

Me ; beta me sach me kisi ko kuchh nahi kahunga.

Malvika ; (mobile me dekhte) ha ha par aap muje chodne ki jidd to karoge na. Or me aap se chudvane vali thodi hu.

Malvika ne bhi badi shararat se mushkurate hue mafat ko dekha.

Malvika ; (shararat smaile) me to bas aap ke dost se hi chudvane vali hu.

Mafat hasne laga.

Mafat ; (smaile) yaar teri beti mere bete ko bhi chodne nahi deti. Iske pas uski bhi koi kamjori he.

Me ; (sock) yani ye sab tum dono ka plam tha???

Dono jor jor se hasne lage.

Malvika ; (smaile) or nahi to kya. Me chahti thi ki koi muje dekhe inke sath. Or aap se bada tharki duniya me kaha milega. Ab chaliye cortege me. Ham dono ko dekh lo.

Mafat or malvika dono khade hue or meri kotthi ke bahar jo cortège mahemano ke lie bana huaa tha. Us taraf jane lage. Malvika ruki or pichhe mudi

Malvika ; aaiye na papa.

Mafat ; (smaile) chal vo aajaega.

Vo dono jane lage. Me sock bas un dono ko jate dekhta hi raha. Par meri kalpna muje vaha jane ko majbur kar rahi thi kuchh der bad me khada huaa. Or us taraf jane laga. Meri dhadkane badi joro se dhadak rahi thi.
Me cortege ke door tak pahocha. sirf door pe hath rakha or Jo najara samne dekha vo dekh kar me sock ho gaya. Mafat bad par leta huaa tha. Or uske land pe magar puri saree me. Meri beti malvika uski taraf face kiye bethi hui thi. Malvika ne meri taraf smaile karte hue shararat se dekha.

Malvika ; (smaile) andar aa jao papa.

Me andar aa gaya. Or door band kar diya.

Malvika ; (smaile) apni beti ko dekho. Or hila lo. Kuchh bolna mat. Na muje tach karna.

Malvika ghum kar apna blouse ke huk kholne lagi. blouse khulte hi vo sirf bra me ho gai. Vo mafat ki kamar ke pas dono tango ko ird gird kiye khadi hui tab pata chala ki mafat bina dhoti ke niche se nanga or land tana huaa 90°.

Malvika ; papa jara ye nada khichna.

Me karib aaya. Malvika ne apni kamar ka nada mere hatho me diya. Pata nahi kyo mene use khich diya. Or chhodte hi ghaghra niche. vo andar se nangi. Malvika ne ghaghra utthakar side kiya. Or mafat ke land par bade ahista se beth gai. land ko chut ke muh par lagaya. or dhire dhire use apni chut me nigal gai. Uska face meri taraf smaile karte hue. Ankhe nashili or ajib si shararat.

Malvika ; (smaile nasha) ahhhhh sssss. Maza aaya papa.....

Vo malvika uske land par kudne lagi. Bich bichme vo bar bar muje dekhti.

Malvika ; (smaile shararat) apna hila lo papa. Aap ko dekhne to de rahi huna.

Ahhh uhhh ki aavaj aati rahi. mene bhi dhoti upar ki or apna 7" ka land hilane laga. Muje dekhne me bhi maza aa raha tha.

Malvika ; (smaile sharat) abhi to simran ka bhi show dekhna he aap ko.

Me sock tha. tabhi ye sunkar mene jor ka land hilaya or apni ankhe band kar li. Me jor ka zad gaya. Jab ankhe khuli to malvika mere samne sirf bra me khadi thi. Vo jor ki hasi. Muje sharam aa gai.

Malvika ; (smaile) papa ab niche betho. Or meri chut chat kar saf karo.

Me niche betha or uski dono zango pe hath rakh kar. uski chut pe muh lagaya.

Malvika ; (ankhe band) sss ahhh... Aaj se aap mere kutte ho.

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Story kuch jyada hi speed pr chali .. characters or dialogues ka koi maza nhi aaya... Shubhash chand ki biwi ke barey be-mayina byan kiya hai... Iski jarurat nhi thi.... Or uski betiyon ke liye hawas kese badhi woh v kuch likha jata toh accha rehta .. malvika ka sasur toh uska purana dost tha dono ne masti v ki thi .. .. pr sasur bahu ke samband mein or likha ja sakta tha...fir beti baap ko apne jaal mein fsa kr uske maze le rahi thi .yeh apne samdhi ka lund chusne wala kaam faltu tha .ghey wala action ho gya...or shayad isi liye woh cuckold type ho gya ....
Jinhe sirf sex chahiye unke liye story mast hai .. pr thoda dhyan diya jata kuch behtar ho jata .. aisa lag Raha hai jese jaldbazi mei yeh story likhi gyi ho .

 

[Shetan]

Story kuch jyada hi speed pr chali .. characters or dialogues ka koi maza nhi aaya... Shubhash chand ki biwi ke barey be-mayina byan kiya hai... Iski jarurat nhi thi.... Or uski betiyon ke liye hawas kese badhi woh v kuch likha jata toh accha rehta .. malvika ka sasur toh uska purana dost tha dono ne masti v ki thi .. .. pr sasur bahu ke samband mein or likha ja sakta tha...fir beti baap ko apne jaal mein fsa kr uske maze le rahi thi .yeh apne samdhi ka lund chusne wala kaam faltu tha .ghey wala action ho gya...or shayad isi liye woh cuckold type ho gya ....
Jinhe sirf sex chahiye unke liye story mast hai .. pr thoda dhyan diya jata kuch behtar ho jata .. aisa lag Raha hai jese jaldbazi mei yeh story likhi gyi ho .

Muje bas socking dikhana tha. Ye story pahele nots me likhi. Vaha 6500 ward show kar raha tha. Is lie mene short se short likhi. Yahi vistar se likhna hota to me alag dhang se show karti. But. Abhi tak bahot chhitar kha chuki hu.

 

[Jaguaar]

IMPOSTER ( ONE KILLER IN AMOUNG US )



Kahani ke shuru mai hum do doston ko dekhte hai... Jisme se ek dost ka naam Soniya tha woh apni ek dost ko lekar apne bachapan ke dost ke ghar jaa rahi thi... Jisne apne ghar sab doston ke liye party rakhi gyi thi... Soniya ke dost uski friend Priya ke baare mai nahi jaante the.. Isliye woh pareshaan thi Priya yeh soch rahi thi uske dost uske baare mai nhi jaante woh uske baare mai kya sochenge... Qyunki woh gareeb ladki thi aur Soniya aur uske dost kaafi ameer the... Jispar Soniya yeh kehti fikr mat karo mere dost tumko pasand karenge...

Thodi der baad hi dono Soniya ke dost ke ghar pahuch jate hain.... Jaha gadi rukte hi Soniya apne car ke seeshe par gussa hoti hai qyuki woh band nahi hota hai... Aur woh gussa karti hui ander chali jaati hai.. Priya thoda nerves thi first time kisi party mai aise bahar aayi thi woh car mai rukkar thoda tuch up karti hai aur bahar nikal jati hai yaha Soniya use awaaj dekar bula rahi thi... Jaldi mai woh car ki lights on chod jati hai...

Dono ander jate jaha Soniya ke saare ameer dost pool mai masti kar rahe the... Woh sab Soniya dekh kar bhut khush hote hai aur hairaan bhi qyuki Soniya ne group chat mai kisi ko nahi btaya tha ki woh bhi aane waali hai... Soniya ke dost use dekh khush the sivaay ek dost jo ki uski puraani dost magar ab woh usse nafrat karti hai... Yaha par sabne Soniya ko bhut saal baad dekha tha isi lamhe ko yaadgaar banane ke liye.. Ek doat Shampane ki bottle kholta hai woh bhi kaafi bade chaaku se... Sab log cheers kr sharaab peete hai Soniya ko uska glaas dete hai toh woh mana kar deti hai.... Maine chod di bolkar aur Priya toh iss sab se door hi thi...

Thodi hi der mai waha ka mausam kharab hone lagta hai aur baarish shuru ho jaati hai sab log ghar ke ander bhaag jate hai... Ander aaker Ek dost (L1) jiski yeh party mai aaye the woh Soniya ke room mai aaker baatein karta jise dekh Soniya usse puchti hai tumhari aankh par kya hua hai... Jispar L1 kehta hai kuch der pehle meri ek dost se thoda jhagda ho gya tha aur mujhse naraz hokar chala gaya hai... Aur dono puraane dino ko yaad karne lagte hai...

Wahi Doosri taraf Priya koi book padh rahi tabhi waha woh ladki aa jati hai jo Soniya se nafrat karti thi (G1)woh Priya se kehti hai tum jara Soniya se door hi rehna toh tumhare liye aacha hoga... Jiska matlab Priya ko samjh nahi aata aur woh waha se chali jaati hai... Kitchen mai pahunch kar dekhti hai 2 ladkiya tik tok bana rahi thi woh bhi bina kapdon use yaha bhut ajeev lag raha tha woh wapas hall mai aakar book padhne lagti hai...

Dheere dheere Raat hone lagti aur asli party shuru ho jaati hai... Ek tarf dance chal raha tha toh ek taraf daaru sabhi log kaafi enjoy kar rahe the.. Soniya bhi Priya ke haath pakad uske saath dance krne lagti hai.. Toh wahi G1 jo Soniya se nafrat krti hai use Priya ko Soniya ke sath dance krte dekh aacha nahi lag raha tha... Woh thodi der mai Soniya jab alag hoti hai toh uthkar Priya se dance ka puchti jo Soniya bhi sun leti hai usse G1 par gussa aata hai mager woh kuch nahi kehti....

Kuch Sochkar Soniya sabko ek game khelne ka bolti hai jiska naam tha IMPOSTER... Sab khush ho jate hai yeh game sab log bachpan mai khela krte the... Soniya sabko rules samjhati hai 7 parchi sabko di jayegi jisme ek par X bana hoga woh IMPOSTER banega ghar ki light band kar di jayegi IMPOSTER sabko dhundega sabko phone ki Flash light madat se chupna hoga... IMPOSTER jisko bhi pakdega usko maar dega usko chup karke marne ki acting karni hai baaki sab log ko agar koi body milti hai toh chilla kar sabko bulana hai aur discuss karke kon IMPOSTER hai iska pata lagana hai... ( like amoung us game )

Sab log bhut khush hote hai kaafi time baad yeh game khel kar bachpan ki yaad taza kar rahe the.... Khushi khushi mai sab log drink uthate hai cheers krte hai is baar Soniya bhi utha leti hai aur sabko dekh drink krti hai fir parchi baanti hai aur shuru hota hai game...

( GAME BEGIN )

Light band kar di jati hai sab log chupne ki jagah dhoond rahe the.. Priya bhi phone ki light ki madat se jagah dhoond hi rahi thi ki tabhi use awaaz sunai deti hai syad kisi ne body report kar di thi woh bhi uth kar chal deti jaha ek dost neeche gira hua marne ki acting karta aur sabhi tog discuss krte hai ise kisne maara hoga... Sab log ek dusre par iljaam laga rahe the koi kehta tum kaatil ho koi kehta tum Tabhi do logo mai jhagda ho jata hai.. Aur yeh game waala jhagda nhi tha unki aapas li ladai hoti hai..( L1 aur L 2 ) Dono game chod kar chale jaate hain....

Baaki log ( G1 G2 G3 Soniya aur Priya bhi shaamil thi ) sochte hai game toh khatam ho gaya chalo peena shuru karte hai... Sab log peene lagte hai..... Aur hasi majaak krne lagti hai kuch apne kapde utaar rahi thi ki achanak se mausam bhut kharab ho jaata bahar bhut tez toofan shuru ho jata hai aur ghar ki light bhi chali jati hai... Sab log pareshaan ho jate hai light ko kaise theek kiya jaye soch rahe the...

Sab Flash light on karke poore ghar mai ghoomne lagte hai tabhi... Priya ko khidki ke bahar L1 dikhta hai ( jiske ghar party thi ) uski gerden se khoon aa raha tha jise dekh Priya chillane lagti hai aur sabko waha bula leti hai.. Sab log L1 ko dekh rone lagte hai unka woh dost mar chuka tha sab sochte hai kya sach mai un sab ke beech koi IMPOSTER hai.... Woh madat ke liye phone lagane lagti hai magar kisi ke phone mai network nahi aa rahe the...

Soniya sab log ke saath paas waale seher mai madat maangne ke liye apni car se jaane lagti hai lekin pata chalta hai ki gaadi ki battery bhi dead ho gayi thi Qyuki Priya ne light on chod di thi... Aur unke paas car bhi ek hi thi qyuki Soniya ke saare dost jiski car mai aaye the woh dost naraz ho kar chala gaya tha... Unke paas ab koi doosra raasta nhi tha toh sab ladkiya ghar ke ander aa jati hai....

Tabhi G1 ( Soniya se nafrat krti hai ) usko ek bada sa chaaku milta hai jispar khoon laga hua tha... G2 kehti hai kya pta humara dost wapas aaya ho jisse L1 ka pehle jhagda hua tha aur usi ne aakar isko maar diya... Jisper G1 kehti hai mujhe nahi lagta aisa kuch hua hoga aur sabka dhyaan L2 ki taraf krti jo game chod kar room mai chala gaya tha aur yaha itna hungama hua shor hua fir bhi woh aaya nhi... Sabka shak ab usi par tha ki haan ho sakta hai usi ne L1 ko maara hoga... Lekin uski dost jo use yaha laayi thi G2 kehti woh aisa nahi kar sakta woh kyun marega kisi ko... G3 kehti hai tumhe kitna waqt hua hai use jaante hue... Toh G2 batati hai abhi kuch hi maheene hue hai... Aur sochne lagti hai haan shayad mai use theek se nahi jaanti woh uska naam lene waali thi ki G1 uska muh band kr deti hai sabko yakeen ho gaya tha wohi IMPOSTER hai..

Sab use dhoondhte hue uske room mai jaati hai jaha woh unhe nahi milta saath hi G3 bhi gayaab ho gayi thi... Sab uske saman check krte jo bhut ajeev tha saath mai uske bag mai ek chaaku bhi milta sab ghabra jaate hai aur ek saath milker use dhoondhne lagte hai.... Ki ek room mai unhe G3 bhi mill jaati hai jiski Tabiyat kharab thi aur pagalon waale daure pad rahe the... Priya apne bag se use dawai deti jiske baad use aaram krne ka bol woh chali jaati hai tabhi unki nazar ek room mai padti hai...

Jaha Room mai L2 beecho beech leta hua uske kaanon mai bade bade headphones lage hue the jisse use kuch sunai nahi diya tha... Sab log room ander ghuss usse hilane lagte jisper L2 apne headphone nikaal sabse puchta hai kya hua... G1 ( haath mai chaaku tha ) usse kehti hai inta bada hungama hua hum log chilla rahe the tum yaha kya kar rahe the aur humla kar deti hai... Jisper L2 G1 ke haath se chaaku chudakar sabka chilla kar kehta hai shaant ho jao aakhir btao hua kya hai.. Tab sabke haath hai hathiyaar dekh chaaku neeche rakh deta hai aur sabse puchta hai aakir hua kya hai....

Lekin koi uski sunne ko nahi tha do ladkiyan usper humla kar deti deti hai... Lekin woh jaise taise unko khud se door kar deta hai... Yeh dekh kar Soniya chaaku ko uthaane jaati hai lekin L2 usse pehle chaaku ko utha leta hai aur Soniya ki taraf aage badhne lagta hai... Yeh dekh Priya ghabara jaati usse lagta hai L2 Soniya ko maar na de woh paas mai pade gamle ko utha kar peeche se L2 ke sir mai maar deti hai... Jisse uska sir gubbaare ki tarah fat jata hai aur woh mar jata hai sabke hosh udd jaate hai G2 jiska woh dost tha usko kaafi dukh ho raha tha... Priya ko apne uper yakeen nahi aa raha tha ki usne kisi ka khoon kar diya tha woh khoon dekh kar wahi ulti kar deti hai..

Sab log room se baahar aa jate hai jaha G3 ko sab pata chal jata hai... Soniya apni dost G3 se L1 ( jo sabse pehle mara tha) ko lekar jhagda karne lagti hai... Woh kehti hai tum usse pyaar nahi karti thi woh bas ameer tha isliye tum uske saath reh rahi thi... Jispar G3 kehti hai aacha L1 toh mujhse keh raha tha aacha hua meri life se Soniya chali gayi ab mujhe uska pagalpan bhi nahi sehna padega... Sab baat sochte hue Soniya ko bhut dukh ho raha ki L1 uske baare mai aise soch raha tha.. Jab usse bardast nahi hua toh woh G3 se kehti hai isse aacha toh tum mar jaati... Aur woh waha se chali jaati hai...

Priya ek room mai ro rahi thi uske kapdon par L2 ka khoon laga tha jise woh badal rahi thi.... Sab log alag alag ho gaye the G2 ek taraf jaa rahi thi ki uska pair kisi cheez mai fass jata aur ek lash par jaaker girti hai.. Yeh wohi ladki thi jiski Soniya se jhagda hua tha ( G3 ).. Uski cheekh sun sab ek baar fir ek saath ho jaate hai ab inki ek aur dost mar gayi thi... G1 kehti hai ab toh woh bhi mar gya jisko hum IMPOSTER samjh rahe the ager woh nahi toh kon hai fir... G2 kehti hai tumlog maan lo humare beech hi koi IMPOSTER hai... Jo humari jaan ke peeche pada hai hume usse dhundna hoga isse pehle koi aur maara jaye... Ab jawaab dhoondne ke liye Soniya ki dono dost Priya par iljaam lagati hai qyuki ek wohi thi jiske baare mai woh kuch nahi jaanti thi...

G2 kehti hai humne tumhara naam search kiya hai tumhare naam ki koi ladki social media par nhi hai... Aur na hi tumhara naam kisi university mai hai... Yeh sab tumhare kamre ke baahar hua hai... Aur tumne mere dost ko bhi mara hai jisse mai pyaar karti thi.... Yeh sab bolkar G1 aur G2 Priya ko ghar se bahar nikaal deti bahar bhut tez toofan aa raha tha.... Priya ro rahi thi Soniya ko bula rahi thi mager Soniya bhi kisi soch mai gum thi... Priya ghoom ghoom kar koi gate koi raasta ander jaane ka khoj rahi thi... Usse khud se jayda Soniya ki fikar thi... Wohi G1 G2 har khidki darwaaja aache se band kar de rahi thi... Priya bhut ghabra rahi thi aur use rona bhi aa raha tabhi woh samne khadi car ko dekhti hai jiska seesha khula tha usme baith jaati hai... Aur rone lagti hai...

Kuch der khud ko shaant kar jab koi hulchal nahi hoti use Soniya ki fikar hone lgti hai woh wapas ghar ki taraf jaati hai... Aur dubara ghar ke ander jaane ka raasta dekhti hai tabhi use Ek khidki ke paas G1 dikhti hai ( jo Soniya se nafrat krti thi ) woh L1 ke papa ke room mai thi syad jaha use Gun mill jati aur woh use chupa leti hai... Jisse Priya bhut jayada dar jati hai aur charon aur ghar mai ghusne ka raasta dhoondne lagti hai.. Finally bhagavaan uski sun leta hai aur use ek khidki mill jati hai jo aadhi khuli thi jisme ghuss kar woh ander chali jaati hai...

Ander jaate hi use Soniya aur uski dost G1 G2 mill jaati hai Priya Soniya ko theek dekh khush hoti hai aur woh dono ko batati hai... G1 ke paas bandook hai jo usne L1 ke Dad ke kamre se churai hai... Jisper G1 apni jev dikhati hai jisme kuch bhi nahi tha tabhi uski jev se ek paper girta hai jisper X likha hua tha yahi ki G1 hi IMPOSTER thi lekin... Fir bhi koi Priya ki baat par wishwas nhi kar raha tha qyuki usne Soniya se bhi jhooth kaha tha ki woh university mai hai...

Thak kar Priya Soniya ko sach bta deti hai... Ki maine university mai liya tha mager paison ke chalte maine chod diya lekin Soniya mai tumhe yeh aise nahi batana chahti thi jisse tum mujhe gareeb samjho aur meri madat karo... Jo sunkar Soniya ki aankhe nam ho jati hai aur woh Priya ko kaske gale laga leti hai... Ki tabhi G1 gun nikaal leti hai aur kehti hai Priya hi IMPOSTER hai mai abhi bhi priya ko hi IMPOSTER maanti hoon mai iski meethe meethe baaton mai nahi aane waali... Soniya kehti hai dekho bandook ko neeche karo tum aisa kuch bhi nahi karogi...

Dono ke beech jhagda hone lagta hai... G2 bhi aage aakar G1 ke raz kholne lagti hai.. Aur tabhi woh G1 ko kehti hai tum itni bhi ameer nahi ho jitni banti ho mujhe pta hai tumne kha kaha muh kala kiya hai ameer banne ke liye... Uski baat sunker G1 ko gussa aane lagta hai aur woh ek fire krti hai goli G2 ke pair ko lagti hai... Woh cheekh cheekh kar bol rahi thi G1 hi IMPOSTER hai isi ne sabko maara hai... G1 gusse mai G2 se hatha payi krti hai... Soniya ( G1) aur Priya ( G2) dono ko alag kar rahi thi ki tabhi G1 ke haath se goli chal jati hai... Jo G2 ko lagti hai woh ab mar chuki thi G1 apni jaan bachane ke liye bhagne lagti hai...

Aur seedhiyon par pahunche hi thi ki Soniya Priya ke saath waha aa jati hai aur usko gun chenne ki koshish krti hai... G1 gun Soniya ki taraf karti hai ki tabhi Priya use peeche se dhakka de deti hai jisse G1 neeche girkar mar jaati hai... Marte marte G1 Priya se kehti hai Ek baar Soniya ka phone dekho woh tumko dhokha de rahi hai... Priya shocked Soniya ko dekh rahi thi jiske chehre par paseene tha... Ab sirf Priya aur Soniya hi bache the 5 dost maare jaa chuke the... Priya bhi Soniya se door bhaag jaati hai usse lag raha tha ho na ho G1 sahi bhi ho sakti hai... Poori raat woh ghar mai chupkar nikaal deti hai...

Subh hote hi ghar se bahar nikal kar dekhti hai.. Baarish bhi band ho gayi thi ki tabhi peeche se Soniya baag kar use gale laga leti hai... Priya ke pass G1 ki bandook thi woh kehti hai pehle apna phone dikhao... Iss baat par Soniya nahi maanti aur dono ka jhagda hone lagta hai aur dono jaake pool mai girti hain... Priya jaldi se bahar nikalti hai toh uske haath ek phone lagta hai yeh phone Soniya ka nahi tha yeh phone L1 ( jiski party mai aaye the ) ka tha woh jaldi se phone ko unlock karti hai... Jisme ek tik tok video ban rahi thi jisme L1 Shampane ko ek bade se chaaku ki madat se khol raha tha aur galti se woh chaaku uske gale ko lag jata hai jisse uska gala kata tha aur uski maut hui thi...

Yeh dekh dono ko bhut jayada shock lagta yaani koi IMPOSTER tha hi nahi... Jitne bhi logo ki jaan gayi sab bekaar mai maare gaye... Tabhi Soniya ka woh dost aata hai jo jhagda karke chala gya tha... Woh waha par padi laashon ko dekhta hai toh sochta hai aakir yaha hua kya tha... Tabhi Priya dekhti hai phone ke Signal bhi aane lage the aur light bhi aa gayi thi...

Aur yaha par jitne log the sab bekaar hi mai maare gya na toh koi IMPOSTER tha na ki unke marne ki koi wajah.. Na dushmani... Kabhi kabhi hum aise galtiyaan kar jaate hai jiske baare mai hum khud nahi jaante ki hum kar kya rahe hai toh kuch bhi karne se pehle poori jaankari le ki aakhir asal baat kya hai... Aur in doston ne jo galti ki uski wajah se sab jaan se gaye ya fir yeh keh le yeh inki bewakoofi thi.. Aur isi ke saath story end ho jaati hai..

The End...

Story mein kuch samaj hi nhi aaya. Bahot sara confusion hai iss story mein. Sabse bada confusion hai naam ko leke. Agar story mein G1 L1 aisa naa karke koi naam hi likh dete toh jyaada achha rehta.
Chaaku se champagne ki bottle kaun kholta hai. Aur chalo agar kholta bhi hai toh waha kisi ka naam nhi likha hai kaun kholta hai bas likha hai ek dost bottle kholta hai. Par last mein likh dete ho L1 bottle kholta hai. Pehle yeh clear karo bottle kisne kholi aur aise kaise kholi jisse uska gala kat jaata hai.

Pehle bola tiktok video 2 ladkiyan bana rahi hai nangi hoke phir bolte ho tiktok L1 bana raha tha. L1 bottle bhi khol raha tha tiktok bhi bana raha tha apna gala bhi kaat raha tha yeh baat bhi clear nhi horahi.

Game ke starting mein hi likhte ho L1 aur L2 ke beech jhagda hojaata hai. Agar L1 apna gala chakau se kaat chuka tha toh jhagda kiska kisse horaha thaa. Yeh toh jaadu nikla. L1 marne ke baad bhi game khel raha tha.

Aise naajaane aur kitne confusion hai jisko bolte bolte main khud confuse horaha hu kisne kisko maara kab maara aur sabse badi baat kyo maara kisliye maara.

Story mujhe bahot hi jyaada ajeeb lagi kuch samaj hi nhi aaya akhir maajra thaa kyaa.

 

[Jaguaar]

Ek duje ke lie.(romantic)​

Spoiler

Me ek file talash kar raha tha. Boss muje bar bar call kar rahe the. Unhe kisi chij ka data urjant jan na tha. Mene kandhe ki madad se kan par phone laga huaa. Or phone par hi gidgida raha tha.

Me ; yyy yes sir yesh sir.

Finally purani lakdii ki almari ke daraj me. Muje meri file mil gai. Mene turant hi file nikal kar kholi. Or data batana shuru kiya.

Me ; yesh sir yesh sir note kariye please.

Me unhe data bataya. Tab jakar meri jaan chhuti. Or boss ne bhi aage kuchh suna nahi or call cut kar diya. Mene bhi chen ki shans li. Bas me yahi soch raha tha agar aaj ye file nahi milti to boss meri bina tel ke mar leta. Mera name Veer he. Umar 28 sal. 5.11 ki hight.
Hamesha fit raheta hu. Kabhi kisi ladki pe na line mari. Na patane ki kosia ki. Kabhi ladkiyo se sidhi bat to nahi ki. Par apni biwiyo ki saheliyo se bahot suna he. Yaar jiju bahot Handsome he. Bat karwana. Ham to unki saliya he. Hamse bhala kya sharamana. Me apni wife ke alava kisi aur lady se jyada bate bahi karta.
Par yaha kahani meri nahi. Mere kisi apne ki he. Me khada huaa or file rakhne ke lie vahi daraj kholi. Muje us daraj me ek moti si dayri dikhai di. Muje thoda ajib laga. Mene bas 1st page dekha. Likha tha un dekhi kahani. Vo dayri kisiki he vo pata nahi chal raha tha.
Mene pahela panna palat kar dekha. Usme jisne bhi likha tha. Un sabdo me dard romanch, romance or becheni sab kuchh tha. Kya wards the. Dill khush ho gaya. Mene padhna shuru kiya.

Aaj Ashok ne paheli bar muje dekha. Hamari najre jese ekdusre ki najro se mano atak hi gai ho. Na me mushkura pai. Nahi najre hata pai. Par esa lag raha tha vo meri najro ko padh sakta he. Meri shase to mano ruk hi gai. Par fir bhi mere dill ki dhadkane muje saf mahesus ho rahi thi.
Sayad vahi hal Ashok ka bhi tha. Lekin Varsha ne ham dono ka dhyan toda. Or use khich kar lejane lagi. Vo dekh to muje rahi thi. Par kahe Ashok ko rahi thi. Varsha ke chahere par narajgi saf dikhai de rahi thi.

Varsha ; (naraj) Chalo Ashok. Aaj kal logo ko dusre ki thali me roti achhi nahi lagti.

Me soch me pad gaya. Ye name kahi suna huaa he. Ashok or Varsha. Par ye he kon. Fir muje khayal aaya. Meri wife kavita. Uske papa or mammy un dono ka yahi to name he. Ashok or Varsha. To ye dayri kisne likhi. Or mere ghar kese he. Kahi ye kavita ki dayri to nahi.
Meri biwi Kavita. Khubshurat or sadgi ki murat. Figar nahi bataunga. Kyo ki tum sab hawas ke bhukhe ho. Or muje meri biwi se bahot pyar he. Andha pyar. Par ye kahaniya kisne likhi. Ye kavita ki najare apne bap se mili hogi.
Or uski maa Varsha kavita se to bahot pyar karti thi. Aaj vo jinda nahi he. Par kavita apni mammy ke kisse bahot suna chuki thi. Vo kesi dikhti hogi. Mene unhe kabhi nahi dekha. Kyo ki jab kavita 18 sal ki hui tabhi uski maa gujar chuki thi. Me kabhi shapne me bhi Kavita ke bare me galat nahi soch shakta.
Vo college ke wakt se hi deewano ki tarah mujse pyar karti thi. Muje aaj bhi yaad he. Kavita class me khadi hui or bord pe likh diya. Kavita loves Veer.
Sabhi sock the. Ek to Kavita college ki sabse hot or beautiful ladki. Upar se ek amir maa bap ki loti aulad. Or mera bap ek sidha sadha kapdo ka selsman. Jo shaher shaher jakar kapdo ke sode karte the. Lekin Kavita nahi ho sakti.
Is kahani me Jawani ke pahele pyar ka ehsas ho raha tha. Bilkul vese jese mere or kavita ke pyar me huaa tha. Fir ye kahani he kiski. Mene dusra panna palta. Un sabdo me dard tha.

Aaj Ashok mujse mafi mangne ke lie college gate par hi khada tha. Use dekhte hi mene apna sar niche kar liya. Par ashok ko dekhte hi mere dill ki dhadkane pata nahi kyo tez ho jati he. Jese ham dono ek dusre ke lie hi bane ho. Mere shapno ka rajkumar. Bilkul vesa jese dadi ki kahaniya sunte wakt me kalpna kiya karti thi.
6fut ki hight, chodi chhati. Gora lamba chahera, kale ghane bade bal. Or chal me rawangi.

Me sochme pad gaya. Ye sab shakal shurat ki tarif to Kavita ke papa ashok ki he. Par bal kale ghane. Aaj to vo budhe he. Safed bal. Matlab ye unki Jawani ke dino ki bat he. Matlab thank god. Ye kavita ne to nahi likha. Are ye kavita ki righting bhi nahi. Me bhi kitna chutiya hu.
Ye to socha tak nahi. Kavita muje kabhi dhokha nahi de sakti. To fir ye kisne likha. Mene ek or panna palta.

Me bhi Ashok ko jata dena chahti thi. ki tum bin meri jindgi rukne vali nahi he. Me jan buchkar mayank ka hath pakadkar Ashok ke samne se nikli. Par muje nahi malum tha ki Ashok mayank par hath uttha dega. Me chilati rahi. Or Asok mayank ke chahere par mukke barsata raha.

???? ; ashok ashok please use chhod do. Usne kuchh nahi kiya. Mammy kasham hamare bich kuchh nahi he.

ashok ne ghum kar meri gardan kash ke pakdi. Or dhakelte hue deewar tak le gaya. Use is tarah vehshi roop me pahele kabhi nahi dekha.

Ashok ; (gussa) tum sirf meri ho. Samzi. Agar kisi ne tumhara shapna bhi dekha to maa kasham.

Mene uska hath badi mushkil se hataya.

???? ; maa kasham kya? Tumhare Papa ko me chalbaz batchalan ladki lagti hu. Kya tum tumhare papa ke kilaf jakar mera hath pakad sakte ho bolo?? Mere sath shadi ke sath fere le shakte ho bolo. Or muje rokne vale hote kon ho.

Mene uski ankho me dekhte hue badi josh me bola. Par fir bhi me pighal gai. Ashok ne meri kamar pe hath rakh zatke se apni tataf khicha. Mere sar ke bal pakad kar kash ke apne hotho ko mere hoth par rakh diye. Meri ankhe band ho gai. Me hosh me aana hi nahi chahti thi. Par ashok ne muje zatak diya. Mere hatho se khoon nikal aaya.

Ashok ; (gussa josh) puri college ko pata he. Me tujse pyar karta hu. Or tuje nahi pata.

Ashok muje zatak kar chala gaya. Me use jate dekh mushkura utthi. bas uski yahi adah pe me fida ho jati hu. Ashok hi to meri jindgi ka pahela mard he. Jisne mere hotho ko chuma.

Me soch me pad gaya. Ye to Kavita ne college me. Mere sath bhi same esa hi kiya tha. Sir ne muje or kavita ko vo bord vali harkat ke lie suspend kiya. Or hame class se bahar nikal diya. Me kavita ka hath pakda or zatak kar uska face apni taraf kiya.

Me ; (gussa) dekho me tumhari tatah amir bap ki aulad nahi hu. Me yaha padhne aaya hu samaz gai.

Kavita bhi same ese hi muje dhakelte hue deewar tak lejake sata diya. Uski ankho me vo shararat vo halki nashili smaile. Kavita ne bhi mere sar ke bal pakde or upar hoti same vese hi mere hotho se apne hotth jod diye. Meri jindgi ki paheli kiss. Bahot nashili or jabardast. Josh se bhari.

Kavit ; (nashili ankhe, smaile, aavaj) pute college ko pata he. Kavita ka dill sirf veer ke lie dhadakta he. Or tumhr nahi pata.

Me soch rahe gaya. Kavita ke papa Adok or kavita dono ne apne pyar ke sath same. ye itfak nahi ho sakta. me bar bar panne palat raha tha. Usme se ek panna. Meri ankho se anshu le aaya.

Aaj Asok Varsha ki shadi he. Or ashok sharab ke nashe me. mere ghar ke darwaje tak aa gaya. Agar kisi ko pata chal gaya to mere bapu ki pagdi uchhal jaegi. Garib ese wakt pe ya to atmahatya kar leta he. Ya fir koi gunah kae ke jail. ese harib ghar tabah hi ho jate he. Me apne bapu ka sar nahi zuka sakti.
Me shadi ke jode me khadi Ashok ko upar se hi dekhte hue ro rahi thi. Tabhi vo badi si car ruki or ashok ke papa use le gae. Upar vale ne to hame ek dusre ke lie banayatha sayad. Par kismat ko ye manzur nahi tha.

Meri ankho se anshu tap tap girne lage. Tabhi mere kandho pe do hath aae. Kavita pichhe se aai. Or muje baho me bhar liya. Me rote hue shaso ko kabu karte hue bola par meri shanse rote hue,atak hi gai.

Me ; aaa Kavita is ladki ne kitna dard zela hoga.

Kavita ne mere gal chum lie.

Kavita ; (smaile) or us ladke ashok ne.

Me soch tha. Matlab kavita ye kahani pahele hi pad chuki he.

Kavita ; are baba ese mat dekho. Ha ye kahani me pahele hi padh chuki hu. Or ye kahani mere papa ki he.

Me ; fir ye ladki kon he. Kya kya ye abhi jinda he???

Me jan ne ke lie badi utsukhta se kavita ki taraf dekhne laga. Kavita kuchh pal khamosh rahi.

Kavita ; (smaile) kya meri ek wish puri karoge???

Me kavita ko gor se dekhne laga. Uski chanchal ankhe mujse bahot kuchh kahena chahti thi. Kavita janti he. Meri khamoshi ka matlab ha he. Ye use bakhubi pata tha. Farsh par muje girakar vo mere pet par badi sexual andaz me beth gai. Uske isi dill fek pyar karne ki adah pe hi to me fida hu.

Kaivata ; (smaile) is ladki ko iska pyar nahi mila. Please aaj aap ashok ho. Or me vo ladki.

Me apne sar ke pichhe hath kiye mushkurate hue use dekhta raha.

Kavita ; (smaile shararat) achha. Bahot nasi aa rahi he tume.

Kavita meri taraf zuki. Mere sar ke bal pakade or sar ko thoda upar kar ke mere hotho par bade joshile andaz me hoth jod kar. Kiss karne lagi. Vo itni kash ke mere hotho ko chusne lagi ki mera nichla hoth fat gaya. Or khoon nikal aaya.

Vo mere pet par bethi badi joro se haf rahi thi.uski saree ka pallu sarak gaya. Uska seena joro se ful raha tha.

Me ; (sock) tum apne aap ko vo ladki nahi. Ashok ko mahesus kar rahi ho.

Pata nahi kavita ko kya huaa. Vo mujpar dobara zuki. Or mere shirt ke sare botons ko todte hue shirt fad diya.

Kavita ; (gussa josh) tum sirf meri ho samzi. Agar ab tum meri nahi hui to sari duniya ko aag laga dunga.

Me sab dekh kar sock tha. Kavita josh me khadi hui or ghaghre ke niche hath dalte hue. Apni panty utarne lagi. Me bhi apni panty ke huks khol raha tha. Par kavita ne mera hath zatak diya. Jese vo bahot gusse me ho. Usne huk ke sath ese khicha ki pant ki jeep khulke aage tak fat gai.
Kavita me esa pagalpan esa zununu me paheli bar dekh raha tha. Mere underwear ke ilastic ko usne hatho se kese fad diya. Usme itni takat kese aa gai. Par uska yahi josh muje jyada uttejit kar raha tha. Dono tange khole vo mere land par beth gai.

Kavita ; (ankhe band madhosh) ahhhhh sssss

Kavita jese tham gai. Me uske aage badhne ka intjar kar raha tha. Par kavita achanak ro padi.

Kavita ; (rote hue) meri maa ko please maf kardo veer. Vo apne kiye ki saja bhog chuki he. Vo tadap tadap ke mari he. Me tumhare hath jodti hu. Please meri maa ko maf kar do.

Jidgi me paheli bar use rote dekha. Yaha tak hamne bhag kar shadi ki. Tab bhi vo nahi roi thi. Mene use seene se laga liya. Vo ese hi mere seene se chipki rahi. Uske anshu mera seena bhigo rahe the.

Kavita ; (ankho me anshu) tum jan na chahte ho na. Vo ladki kon he. Kya name he uska.

Me uske sar ko sahela raha tha.

Me ; ha kavita. Us ladki ke sath kismat ne vakei bahot galat kiya. Kon thi vo???

Kavita ; sandhya......

Me sock ho gaya. Mene kavita ke bal pakde or ham dono bethe ho gae. Vo tab bhi meri kamar me apni tange lapete vese hi meri god me thi.
Varsha or koi nahi. Meri vidhva maa he. Muje meri maa ke lie bahot taklif ho rahi thi. Me kavita se bahot pyar karta hu. Par pata bahi ab me kya Karu. Badla lu. Ya maf kardu. Kavita ki ankho me anshu the.

Kavita.; veer me tumse bahot pyar karti hu. Meri maa bahot tadap tadap kar mari. Lekin vo marne se pahele kahe kar gai. Mere hath jodkar. Me uska karz chuka du. Or mene tumhari mammy ko talash liya. Mene tumhe dekha or tumse pyar.....

Mene kash ke kavita ke sar ke bal pakde or zatak diya.

Kavita ; ssss ahh....

Me ; (gussa) to me ise tumhara pyar samzu ya hamdardi... Ha.

Me joro se kavita ke bal pakde hue tha. Use dard bhi ho raha tha.

Kavita ; (dard) ahhhh ssss mene apne man ke mandir me sirf tumhe bethaya he veer sssa ahh tumhi mera pahela or akhri pyar ho veer.

Mene kash ke uske hotho se apne hoth jod diye. Or kash ke use kiss kiya. Us bar uske nichle hotho se khoon nikal aaya. Jab hamare hoth alag hue. Ham dono haf rahe the. Kuchh pal bad ham dono mushkura utte.

Me ; (smaile hafna) tum janti ho. Hamare mammy papa ek dusre se kyo nahi mil pae.

Me kya jawab dunga. Ye jan ne ke lie kavita badi utshait thi. Vo mere or karib hui. Mera tana land ab bhi uski pyari si komal chit me hi tha

Kavita ; (smaile) kyo???

Me ; (smaile) kyo ki vo ham dono ko milana chahte the.

Kavita mujpar jor se tut padi. Me dobara girte hue late gaya. Me niche or vo upat. Hamare lips dobara jud gae.

The end.
​

Story mein romance kaha thaa. Title mein toh romance likh diya. Par story mein toh romance ka kuch dikha nhi. Dikha toh sirf sex.

Pehle yeh clear karo Veer ki sirf biwi hai yaa biwiyan. Dusra yeh clear karo Agar Varsha mar gayi hai toh aisa kyo likha Varsha meri vidhwa maa hai. Aur yeh Sandhya kaun hai.

Veer ne last mein kyaa kaha Ashok aur Sandhya nhi mil sake kyoki woh unndono ko milana chahte the. Matlab kuch bhi. Iss baat ka kuch sense hai.

Veer ne woh dairy padhte hue yeh kyo kaha ke kahi kavita use dhoka toh nhi de rahi hai. Kyaa kahi bhi dairy mein Kavita ka naam likha tha nhi naa toh usne aisa kyo kaha.

Dairy ka pehla page padhte hi Veer ko dukh dard romanch aur romance ke baare mein pata chal gaya. Kaiseeeeeee.

Iss kahani mein romance toh aapne dikhaya nhi aur romantic story jaisa kuch laga bhi nhi.

Mujhe laga tha pehli story se yeh better hogi par dono ek jaisi hi hai.

 

[_ABHAY]

Story mein kuch samaj hi nhi aaya. Bahot sara confusion hai iss story mein. Sabse bada confusion hai naam ko leke. Agar story mein G1 L1 aisa naa karke koi naam hi likh dete toh jyaada achha rehta.
Chaaku se champagne ki bottle kaun kholta hai. Aur chalo agar kholta bhi hai toh waha kisi ka naam nhi likha hai kaun kholta hai bas likha hai ek dost bottle kholta hai. Par last mein likh dete ho L1 bottle kholta hai. Pehle yeh clear karo bottle kisne kholi aur aise kaise kholi jisse uska gala kat jaata hai.

Pehle bola tiktok video 2 ladkiyan bana rahi hai nangi hoke phir bolte ho tiktok L1 bana raha tha. L1 bottle bhi khol raha tha tiktok bhi bana raha tha apna gala bhi kaat raha tha yeh baat bhi clear nhi horahi.

Game ke starting mein hi likhte ho L1 aur L2 ke beech jhagda hojaata hai. Agar L1 apna gala chakau se kaat chuka tha toh jhagda kiska kisse horaha thaa. Yeh toh jaadu nikla. L1 marne ke baad bhi game khel raha tha.

Aise naajaane aur kitne confusion hai jisko bolte bolte main khud confuse horaha hu kisne kisko maara kab maara aur sabse bad
Story mujhe bahot hi jyaada ajeeb lagi kuch samaj hi nhi aaya akhir maajra thaa kyaa. Naam add karo.. Maine aise hi nahi likhe.. Bas..

Story mein kuch samaj hi nhi aaya. Bahot sara confusion hai iss story mein. Sabse bada confusion hai naam ko leke. Agar story mein G1 L1 aisa naa karke koi naam hi likh dete toh jyaada achha rehta.
Chaaku se champagne ki bottle kaun kholta hai. Aur chalo agar kholta bhi hai toh waha kisi ka naam nhi likha hai kaun kholta hai bas likha hai ek dost bottle kholta hai. Par last mein likh dete ho L1 bottle kholta hai. Pehle yeh clear karo bottle kisne kholi aur aise kaise kholi jisse uska gala kat jaata hai.

Pehle bola tiktok video 2 ladkiyan bana rahi hai nangi hoke phir bolte ho tiktok L1 bana raha tha. L1 bottle bhi khol raha tha tiktok bhi bana raha tha apna gala bhi kaat raha tha yeh baat bhi clear nhi horahi.

Game ke starting mein hi likhte ho L1 aur L2 ke beech jhagda hojaata hai. Agar L1 apna gala chakau se kaat chuka tha toh jhagda kiska kisse horaha thaa. Yeh toh jaadu nikla. L1 marne ke baad bhi game khel raha tha.

Aise naajaane aur kitne confusion hai jisko bolte bolte main khud confuse horaha hu kisne kisko maara kab maara aur sabse badi baat kyo maara kisliye maara.

Story mujhe bahot hi jyaada ajeeb lagi kuch samaj hi nhi aaya akhir maajra thaa kyaa.

Copy paste ke chakkar me wrong waali post ho gyi.

 

[Riky007]

Ek duje ke lie.(romantic)​

Spoiler

Me ek file talash kar raha tha. Boss muje bar bar call kar rahe the. Unhe kisi chij ka data urjant jan na tha. Mene kandhe ki madad se kan par phone laga huaa. Or phone par hi gidgida raha tha.

Me ; yyy yes sir yesh sir.

Finally purani lakdii ki almari ke daraj me. Muje meri file mil gai. Mene turant hi file nikal kar kholi. Or data batana shuru kiya.

Me ; yesh sir yesh sir note kariye please.

Me unhe data bataya. Tab jakar meri jaan chhuti. Or boss ne bhi aage kuchh suna nahi or call cut kar diya. Mene bhi chen ki shans li. Bas me yahi soch raha tha agar aaj ye file nahi milti to boss meri bina tel ke mar leta. Mera name Veer he. Umar 28 sal. 5.11 ki hight.
Hamesha fit raheta hu. Kabhi kisi ladki pe na line mari. Na patane ki kosia ki. Kabhi ladkiyo se sidhi bat to nahi ki. Par apni biwiyo ki saheliyo se bahot suna he. Yaar jiju bahot Handsome he. Bat karwana. Ham to unki saliya he. Hamse bhala kya sharamana. Me apni wife ke alava kisi aur lady se jyada bate bahi karta.
Par yaha kahani meri nahi. Mere kisi apne ki he. Me khada huaa or file rakhne ke lie vahi daraj kholi. Muje us daraj me ek moti si dayri dikhai di. Muje thoda ajib laga. Mene bas 1st page dekha. Likha tha un dekhi kahani. Vo dayri kisiki he vo pata nahi chal raha tha.
Mene pahela panna palat kar dekha. Usme jisne bhi likha tha. Un sabdo me dard romanch, romance or becheni sab kuchh tha. Kya wards the. Dill khush ho gaya. Mene padhna shuru kiya.

Aaj Ashok ne paheli bar muje dekha. Hamari najre jese ekdusre ki najro se mano atak hi gai ho. Na me mushkura pai. Nahi najre hata pai. Par esa lag raha tha vo meri najro ko padh sakta he. Meri shase to mano ruk hi gai. Par fir bhi mere dill ki dhadkane muje saf mahesus ho rahi thi.
Sayad vahi hal Ashok ka bhi tha. Lekin Varsha ne ham dono ka dhyan toda. Or use khich kar lejane lagi. Vo dekh to muje rahi thi. Par kahe Ashok ko rahi thi. Varsha ke chahere par narajgi saf dikhai de rahi thi.

Varsha ; (naraj) Chalo Ashok. Aaj kal logo ko dusre ki thali me roti achhi nahi lagti.

Me soch me pad gaya. Ye name kahi suna huaa he. Ashok or Varsha. Par ye he kon. Fir muje khayal aaya. Meri wife kavita. Uske papa or mammy un dono ka yahi to name he. Ashok or Varsha. To ye dayri kisne likhi. Or mere ghar kese he. Kahi ye kavita ki dayri to nahi.
Meri biwi Kavita. Khubshurat or sadgi ki murat. Figar nahi bataunga. Kyo ki tum sab hawas ke bhukhe ho. Or muje meri biwi se bahot pyar he. Andha pyar. Par ye kahaniya kisne likhi. Ye kavita ki najare apne bap se mili hogi.
Or uski maa Varsha kavita se to bahot pyar karti thi. Aaj vo jinda nahi he. Par kavita apni mammy ke kisse bahot suna chuki thi. Vo kesi dikhti hogi. Mene unhe kabhi nahi dekha. Kyo ki jab kavita 18 sal ki hui tabhi uski maa gujar chuki thi. Me kabhi shapne me bhi Kavita ke bare me galat nahi soch shakta.
Vo college ke wakt se hi deewano ki tarah mujse pyar karti thi. Muje aaj bhi yaad he. Kavita class me khadi hui or bord pe likh diya. Kavita loves Veer.
Sabhi sock the. Ek to Kavita college ki sabse hot or beautiful ladki. Upar se ek amir maa bap ki loti aulad. Or mera bap ek sidha sadha kapdo ka selsman. Jo shaher shaher jakar kapdo ke sode karte the. Lekin Kavita nahi ho sakti.
Is kahani me Jawani ke pahele pyar ka ehsas ho raha tha. Bilkul vese jese mere or kavita ke pyar me huaa tha. Fir ye kahani he kiski. Mene dusra panna palta. Un sabdo me dard tha.

Aaj Ashok mujse mafi mangne ke lie college gate par hi khada tha. Use dekhte hi mene apna sar niche kar liya. Par ashok ko dekhte hi mere dill ki dhadkane pata nahi kyo tez ho jati he. Jese ham dono ek dusre ke lie hi bane ho. Mere shapno ka rajkumar. Bilkul vesa jese dadi ki kahaniya sunte wakt me kalpna kiya karti thi.
6fut ki hight, chodi chhati. Gora lamba chahera, kale ghane bade bal. Or chal me rawangi.

Me sochme pad gaya. Ye sab shakal shurat ki tarif to Kavita ke papa ashok ki he. Par bal kale ghane. Aaj to vo budhe he. Safed bal. Matlab ye unki Jawani ke dino ki bat he. Matlab thank god. Ye kavita ne to nahi likha. Are ye kavita ki righting bhi nahi. Me bhi kitna chutiya hu.
Ye to socha tak nahi. Kavita muje kabhi dhokha nahi de sakti. To fir ye kisne likha. Mene ek or panna palta.

Me bhi Ashok ko jata dena chahti thi. ki tum bin meri jindgi rukne vali nahi he. Me jan buchkar mayank ka hath pakadkar Ashok ke samne se nikli. Par muje nahi malum tha ki Ashok mayank par hath uttha dega. Me chilati rahi. Or Asok mayank ke chahere par mukke barsata raha.

???? ; ashok ashok please use chhod do. Usne kuchh nahi kiya. Mammy kasham hamare bich kuchh nahi he.

ashok ne ghum kar meri gardan kash ke pakdi. Or dhakelte hue deewar tak le gaya. Use is tarah vehshi roop me pahele kabhi nahi dekha.

Ashok ; (gussa) tum sirf meri ho. Samzi. Agar kisi ne tumhara shapna bhi dekha to maa kasham.

Mene uska hath badi mushkil se hataya.

???? ; maa kasham kya? Tumhare Papa ko me chalbaz batchalan ladki lagti hu. Kya tum tumhare papa ke kilaf jakar mera hath pakad sakte ho bolo?? Mere sath shadi ke sath fere le shakte ho bolo. Or muje rokne vale hote kon ho.

Mene uski ankho me dekhte hue badi josh me bola. Par fir bhi me pighal gai. Ashok ne meri kamar pe hath rakh zatke se apni tataf khicha. Mere sar ke bal pakad kar kash ke apne hotho ko mere hoth par rakh diye. Meri ankhe band ho gai. Me hosh me aana hi nahi chahti thi. Par ashok ne muje zatak diya. Mere hatho se khoon nikal aaya.

Ashok ; (gussa josh) puri college ko pata he. Me tujse pyar karta hu. Or tuje nahi pata.

Ashok muje zatak kar chala gaya. Me use jate dekh mushkura utthi. bas uski yahi adah pe me fida ho jati hu. Ashok hi to meri jindgi ka pahela mard he. Jisne mere hotho ko chuma.

Me soch me pad gaya. Ye to Kavita ne college me. Mere sath bhi same esa hi kiya tha. Sir ne muje or kavita ko vo bord vali harkat ke lie suspend kiya. Or hame class se bahar nikal diya. Me kavita ka hath pakda or zatak kar uska face apni taraf kiya.

Me ; (gussa) dekho me tumhari tatah amir bap ki aulad nahi hu. Me yaha padhne aaya hu samaz gai.

Kavita bhi same ese hi muje dhakelte hue deewar tak lejake sata diya. Uski ankho me vo shararat vo halki nashili smaile. Kavita ne bhi mere sar ke bal pakde or upar hoti same vese hi mere hotho se apne hotth jod diye. Meri jindgi ki paheli kiss. Bahot nashili or jabardast. Josh se bhari.

Kavit ; (nashili ankhe, smaile, aavaj) pute college ko pata he. Kavita ka dill sirf veer ke lie dhadakta he. Or tumhr nahi pata.

Me soch rahe gaya. Kavita ke papa Adok or kavita dono ne apne pyar ke sath same. ye itfak nahi ho sakta. me bar bar panne palat raha tha. Usme se ek panna. Meri ankho se anshu le aaya.

Aaj Asok Varsha ki shadi he. Or ashok sharab ke nashe me. mere ghar ke darwaje tak aa gaya. Agar kisi ko pata chal gaya to mere bapu ki pagdi uchhal jaegi. Garib ese wakt pe ya to atmahatya kar leta he. Ya fir koi gunah kae ke jail. ese harib ghar tabah hi ho jate he. Me apne bapu ka sar nahi zuka sakti.
Me shadi ke jode me khadi Ashok ko upar se hi dekhte hue ro rahi thi. Tabhi vo badi si car ruki or ashok ke papa use le gae. Upar vale ne to hame ek dusre ke lie banayatha sayad. Par kismat ko ye manzur nahi tha.

Meri ankho se anshu tap tap girne lage. Tabhi mere kandho pe do hath aae. Kavita pichhe se aai. Or muje baho me bhar liya. Me rote hue shaso ko kabu karte hue bola par meri shanse rote hue,atak hi gai.

Me ; aaa Kavita is ladki ne kitna dard zela hoga.

Kavita ne mere gal chum lie.

Kavita ; (smaile) or us ladke ashok ne.

Me soch tha. Matlab kavita ye kahani pahele hi pad chuki he.

Kavita ; are baba ese mat dekho. Ha ye kahani me pahele hi padh chuki hu. Or ye kahani mere papa ki he.

Me ; fir ye ladki kon he. Kya kya ye abhi jinda he???

Me jan ne ke lie badi utsukhta se kavita ki taraf dekhne laga. Kavita kuchh pal khamosh rahi.

Kavita ; (smaile) kya meri ek wish puri karoge???

Me kavita ko gor se dekhne laga. Uski chanchal ankhe mujse bahot kuchh kahena chahti thi. Kavita janti he. Meri khamoshi ka matlab ha he. Ye use bakhubi pata tha. Farsh par muje girakar vo mere pet par badi sexual andaz me beth gai. Uske isi dill fek pyar karne ki adah pe hi to me fida hu.

Kaivata ; (smaile) is ladki ko iska pyar nahi mila. Please aaj aap ashok ho. Or me vo ladki.

Me apne sar ke pichhe hath kiye mushkurate hue use dekhta raha.

Kavita ; (smaile shararat) achha. Bahot nasi aa rahi he tume.

Kavita meri taraf zuki. Mere sar ke bal pakade or sar ko thoda upar kar ke mere hotho par bade joshile andaz me hoth jod kar. Kiss karne lagi. Vo itni kash ke mere hotho ko chusne lagi ki mera nichla hoth fat gaya. Or khoon nikal aaya.

Vo mere pet par bethi badi joro se haf rahi thi.uski saree ka pallu sarak gaya. Uska seena joro se ful raha tha.

Me ; (sock) tum apne aap ko vo ladki nahi. Ashok ko mahesus kar rahi ho.

Pata nahi kavita ko kya huaa. Vo mujpar dobara zuki. Or mere shirt ke sare botons ko todte hue shirt fad diya.

Kavita ; (gussa josh) tum sirf meri ho samzi. Agar ab tum meri nahi hui to sari duniya ko aag laga dunga.

Me sab dekh kar sock tha. Kavita josh me khadi hui or ghaghre ke niche hath dalte hue. Apni panty utarne lagi. Me bhi apni panty ke huks khol raha tha. Par kavita ne mera hath zatak diya. Jese vo bahot gusse me ho. Usne huk ke sath ese khicha ki pant ki jeep khulke aage tak fat gai.
Kavita me esa pagalpan esa zununu me paheli bar dekh raha tha. Mere underwear ke ilastic ko usne hatho se kese fad diya. Usme itni takat kese aa gai. Par uska yahi josh muje jyada uttejit kar raha tha. Dono tange khole vo mere land par beth gai.

Kavita ; (ankhe band madhosh) ahhhhh sssss

Kavita jese tham gai. Me uske aage badhne ka intjar kar raha tha. Par kavita achanak ro padi.

Kavita ; (rote hue) meri maa ko please maf kardo veer. Vo apne kiye ki saja bhog chuki he. Vo tadap tadap ke mari he. Me tumhare hath jodti hu. Please meri maa ko maf kar do.

Jidgi me paheli bar use rote dekha. Yaha tak hamne bhag kar shadi ki. Tab bhi vo nahi roi thi. Mene use seene se laga liya. Vo ese hi mere seene se chipki rahi. Uske anshu mera seena bhigo rahe the.

Kavita ; (ankho me anshu) tum jan na chahte ho na. Vo ladki kon he. Kya name he uska.

Me uske sar ko sahela raha tha.

Me ; ha kavita. Us ladki ke sath kismat ne vakei bahot galat kiya. Kon thi vo???

Kavita ; sandhya......

Me sock ho gaya. Mene kavita ke bal pakde or ham dono bethe ho gae. Vo tab bhi meri kamar me apni tange lapete vese hi meri god me thi.
Varsha or koi nahi. Meri vidhva maa he. Muje meri maa ke lie bahot taklif ho rahi thi. Me kavita se bahot pyar karta hu. Par pata bahi ab me kya Karu. Badla lu. Ya maf kardu. Kavita ki ankho me anshu the.

Kavita.; veer me tumse bahot pyar karti hu. Meri maa bahot tadap tadap kar mari. Lekin vo marne se pahele kahe kar gai. Mere hath jodkar. Me uska karz chuka du. Or mene tumhari mammy ko talash liya. Mene tumhe dekha or tumse pyar.....

Mene kash ke kavita ke sar ke bal pakde or zatak diya.

Kavita ; ssss ahh....

Me ; (gussa) to me ise tumhara pyar samzu ya hamdardi... Ha.

Me joro se kavita ke bal pakde hue tha. Use dard bhi ho raha tha.

Kavita ; (dard) ahhhh ssss mene apne man ke mandir me sirf tumhe bethaya he veer sssa ahh tumhi mera pahela or akhri pyar ho veer.

Mene kash ke uske hotho se apne hoth jod diye. Or kash ke use kiss kiya. Us bar uske nichle hotho se khoon nikal aaya. Jab hamare hoth alag hue. Ham dono haf rahe the. Kuchh pal bad ham dono mushkura utte.

Me ; (smaile hafna) tum janti ho. Hamare mammy papa ek dusre se kyo nahi mil pae.

Me kya jawab dunga. Ye jan ne ke lie kavita badi utshait thi. Vo mere or karib hui. Mera tana land ab bhi uski pyari si komal chit me hi tha

Kavita ; (smaile) kyo???

Me ; (smaile) kyo ki vo ham dono ko milana chahte the.

Kavita mujpar jor se tut padi. Me dobara girte hue late gaya. Me niche or vo upat. Hamare lips dobara jud gae.

The end.
​

Good one

Start was awesome एकदम प्रोफेशनल टाइप
बाद में सेक्स भी दिखाया, अकॉर्डिंग तो फोरम टू गुड

लेकिन लास्ट में नाम में बहुत सारा कंफ्यूजन कर दिया आपने, कौन किसी क्या बात कर रहा था वो एकदम गड़बड़झाला हो गया। एडिटिंग की कमी


ओवर ऑल 6.5/10

 

[_ABHAY]

Copy paste ke chakkar me wrong waali post ho gyi.

Are waise nhi galt samjh rahe ho do likha tha pehle yeh dusri naam daala tha sabme..

Qyuki woh mna kiya tha tiger ku naam daal aachi nhi lag rahi confusing hai mujhe bhi lga ab yaha kahi font mai dikkat aa rahi kahi size change nhi ho raha aadhe ghnte mai toh post hui toh bina check kiye daal hi khna khane chala gya tab tak bawaal mach gya

 

[Shetan]

Story mein romance kaha thaa. Title mein toh romance likh diya. Par story mein toh romance ka kuch dikha nhi. Dikha toh sirf sex.

Pehle yeh clear karo Veer ki sirf biwi hai yaa biwiyan. Dusra yeh clear karo Agar Varsha mar gayi hai toh aisa kyo likha Varsha meri vidhwa maa hai. Aur yeh Sandhya kaun hai.

Veer ne last mein kyaa kaha Ashok aur Sandhya nhi mil sake kyoki woh unndono ko milana chahte the. Matlab kuch bhi. Iss baat ka kuch sense hai.

Veer ne woh dairy padhte hue yeh kyo kaha ke kahi kavita use dhoka toh nhi de rahi hai. Kyaa kahi bhi dairy mein Kavita ka naam likha tha nhi naa toh usne aisa kyo kaha.

Dairy ka pehla page padhte hi Veer ko dukh dard romanch aur romance ke baare mein pata chal gaya. Kaiseeeeeee.

Iss kahani mein romance toh aapne dikhaya nhi aur romantic story jaisa kuch laga bhi nhi.

Mujhe laga tha pehli story se yeh better hogi par dono ek jaisi hi hai.

Yaar ye batao. Story me sex kaha dikha. Sex ki sirf kosis hi to thi. Baki bato ka conversation. Or aap ko pata nahi kyo painful romance nahi dikha.

Vo story me co cold ness or slave sex ki zalak socking andaz me samaz na aana banta he. par yaha aap ko romance nahi dikha???

Aap to badi tagdi bejati kar rahe ho. Meri type karne me problem he. kalam or pen me nahi. chitralekha aurato ki magazine me kavita name ke aricals padh lo yaar