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Yes! Evidently! Damian actually provided Pavan's info to Aadesh. And, so he immediately took action and beat the shit outta him. Garofano's words now make sense.So the noose around Veer's neck has started tightening. The boy system holder had first approached Dexter and has now also approached Aadesh. Veer's mole Pawan has been caught and neutralised. Not only that, Balhaar has also been engaged and is trying to save his business. How true are Garofano's words,
<'Ek baat yaad rakhna, Veer. Ek advise ke roop me ise lelo. Jab bhi tumhe lage ki kuch baatein sense nahi bana rahi. Jab bhi tumhe lage ki tumhare aas-paas kuch aisi cheezein ghatit ho rahi hai jinke baare me tum pata nahi laga paa rahe. Koi bhi anhoni, koi bhi buri cheezein, kuch sadharan se hatt ke...! Toh hamesha yaad rakhna! Woh kaam... Ek system holder ka ho sakta hai.'>
Even with such high intelligence, you cannot pin point anything when there's so much going on and you actually don't have any clue about it.Now why did Rebecca send Divya to Mumbai, looks like to spy on Veer, without Divya becoming aware of it. Also, it will make veer weak and his attention diverted, to save Divya in case of any harm coming to Divya, a situation which Rebecca can easily create. Veer with his intelligence at such high level, also Pari, should have guessed it, specially with Garofano's warning.
That's why it takes some time for the update to arrive after I write 'editing.' This is what I do at those last moments before posting it. If I happen to get the apt image, I upload it. If I don't, I just don't.The sparks flying across Divya and Ava were very interesting. The best part were the img and gif, really catching the mood of the models as per narrative. Really appreciate the hard work gone behind it, which makes the story look so real
If you enjoyed it, I can throw a few short scenes of them conversing time to time. Just let me know.The reconciliation between Karan and Kritika was very sweet, now their bonding has become stronger, with confession of love from both sides.
If you know Nidhi, then you know the answer what she'll do next. If you don't know what she'll do, you need to learn more about her personality.Mrs. Tiwari has tried her best to antagonise Nidhi, may be she is right in her own way. But Nidhi stood firm defending Veer. However, such ill-advice from a gospel-monger do affect the listhener, we may find Nidhi becomming more cold towards Veer. Hope it works the other way, seeing the pure love between Juhi and Veer.
It's obvious that Bhavna doesn't know anything about it right now. She only saw Tejal's sullen mood and she knew that something did happen. The only thing that can cause Tej to be like this can either be her periods or Veer. Bhavna knew something must have happened between Veer and Tejal. So, once Veer was home, she gently gave him a nod and gestured him to go and talk to Tej. To which, Veer nodded and she immediately came to realise that she was right. She guessed correctly.The chemistry and love between Tejal and Veer has now come out in open. Strange is that Bhavana pushed Veer towards it. May be she is totally blind to this type of love and was only helping Veer to stop Tejal from leaving, that too for 3 years.
Yes. Very true. No one but some avid readers like you point out these details. But, only I know what preparations are made before and while writing an update.The detailing of 'Yarnia' was very interesting. How much effort and planning goes behind starting an industry was very well explained. Again these small details, like Louis dropping French words, makes the story so real.
We'll see. Things are not looking good for Veer right now. And, I'm saying this ... The author himself. So, you can take a guess that something is about to happen. The major problem is... Veer doesn't know anything about what's going on behind his back. And, that's why it's scary.Now another murder, in Mumbai. I am sure the Boy will drop some hints to link Veer for these murders. Things are really bocoming complicated for Veer. Hope, they target only Veers's Food Trucks and Hotel Prestige and leave Yarnia.
Yes. Still, it's better to use 'Camouflage' than doing nothing at least.It will be interesting to see when Kaera and Ava model for Yarnia, and Sonia will always do what Kaera does to compete with her. Also, Ava has to be very careful. she has revealed her identity to hotel staff, now she has to use 'Camouflage.' in public, and also in her photos so that any system holder does not know about her that she is also a system holder. The only point is that Rebecca, the Boy and Mr. X already know that Ava is a system holder
Jab tum log target poora karoge!𝙒𝙤𝙡𝙛𝙮 𝙗𝙝𝙖𝙞 𝙪𝙥𝙙𝙖𝙩𝙚 𝙠𝙖𝙗 𝙩𝙖𝙠 𝙖𝙖𝙮𝙚𝙜𝙖 𝙗𝙖𝙩𝙖 𝙙𝙤
179 and 3 others so far...Jab tum log target poora karoge!![]()
Reacting nothing was much better than reacting haha to it.Liking the update without reading it, so the target can be completed and the reader can get the next update soon.
Maine aapki sari updates ko like kar diye hain halanki maine abhi tak sirf 175 updates padhe hain.Reacting nothing was much better than reacting haha to it.![]()
Pehle padh to lete manMaine aapki sari updates ko like kar diye hain halanki maine abhi tak sirf 175 updates padhe hain.
Maine story jitni bhi padhi hai is forum ki sabse best story hai....aur sayad aisi story phir kabhi dekhni na mile dubara.Pehle padh to lete man![]()
Story Kahan bhagi ja rahi hai padh lunga. .....jab time aayega waise meri cutie Juhi ka kya haal hai story me aap kuchh bata sakte ho?Pehle padh to lete man![]()