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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,426 82.9%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.6%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 231 13.4%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 36 2.1%

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Werewolf

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So the noose around Veer's neck has started tightening. The boy system holder had first approached Dexter and has now also approached Aadesh. Veer's mole Pawan has been caught and neutralised. Not only that, Balhaar has also been engaged and is trying to save his business. How true are Garofano's words,

<'Ek baat yaad rakhna, Veer. Ek advise ke roop me ise lelo. Jab bhi tumhe lage ki kuch baatein sense nahi bana rahi. Jab bhi tumhe lage ki tumhare aas-paas kuch aisi cheezein ghatit ho rahi hai jinke baare me tum pata nahi laga paa rahe. Koi bhi anhoni, koi bhi buri cheezein, kuch sadharan se hatt ke...! Toh hamesha yaad rakhna! Woh kaam... Ek system holder ka ho sakta hai.'>
Yes! Evidently! Damian actually provided Pavan's info to Aadesh. And, so he immediately took action and beat the shit outta him. Garofano's words now make sense.
Now why did Rebecca send Divya to Mumbai, looks like to spy on Veer, without Divya becoming aware of it. Also, it will make veer weak and his attention diverted, to save Divya in case of any harm coming to Divya, a situation which Rebecca can easily create. Veer with his intelligence at such high level, also Pari, should have guessed it, specially with Garofano's warning.
Even with such high intelligence, you cannot pin point anything when there's so much going on and you actually don't have any clue about it.

Veer does keeping everything in consideration though. He has not neglected anything so far. He just needs more clues. After all, we all know what Veer is capable of. His IQ is something else. Just wait and watch. He was able to decipher Rebecca's planning in the China town arc. He pin pointed that Rebecca was the one who hypnotised China's goverment official. He actually decoded her entire plan.

But the thing is... He was late. He was too occupied with other things which resulted in Rebecca's succession.
The sparks flying across Divya and Ava were very interesting. The best part were the img and gif, really catching the mood of the models as per narrative. Really appreciate the hard work gone behind it, which makes the story look so real
That's why it takes some time for the update to arrive after I write 'editing.' This is what I do at those last moments before posting it. If I happen to get the apt image, I upload it. If I don't, I just don't.
The reconciliation between Karan and Kritika was very sweet, now their bonding has become stronger, with confession of love from both sides.
If you enjoyed it, I can throw a few short scenes of them conversing time to time. Just let me know.
Mrs. Tiwari has tried her best to antagonise Nidhi, may be she is right in her own way. But Nidhi stood firm defending Veer. However, such ill-advice from a gospel-monger do affect the listhener, we may find Nidhi becomming more cold towards Veer. Hope it works the other way, seeing the pure love between Juhi and Veer.
If you know Nidhi, then you know the answer what she'll do next. If you don't know what she'll do, you need to learn more about her personality. :D And, if you're wondering the opposite of her action then you might need to revisit her scenes to actually understand her. :D
The chemistry and love between Tejal and Veer has now come out in open. Strange is that Bhavana pushed Veer towards it. May be she is totally blind to this type of love and was only helping Veer to stop Tejal from leaving, that too for 3 years.
It's obvious that Bhavna doesn't know anything about it right now. She only saw Tejal's sullen mood and she knew that something did happen. The only thing that can cause Tej to be like this can either be her periods or Veer. Bhavna knew something must have happened between Veer and Tejal. So, once Veer was home, she gently gave him a nod and gestured him to go and talk to Tej. To which, Veer nodded and she immediately came to realise that she was right. She guessed correctly.
The detailing of 'Yarnia' was very interesting. How much effort and planning goes behind starting an industry was very well explained. Again these small details, like Louis dropping French words, makes the story so real.
Yes. Very true. No one but some avid readers like you point out these details. But, only I know what preparations are made before and while writing an update.
Now another murder, in Mumbai. I am sure the Boy will drop some hints to link Veer for these murders. Things are really bocoming complicated for Veer. Hope, they target only Veers's Food Trucks and Hotel Prestige and leave Yarnia.
We'll see. Things are not looking good for Veer right now. And, I'm saying this ... The author himself. So, you can take a guess that something is about to happen. The major problem is... Veer doesn't know anything about what's going on behind his back. And, that's why it's scary.
It will be interesting to see when Kaera and Ava model for Yarnia, and Sonia will always do what Kaera does to compete with her. Also, Ava has to be very careful. she has revealed her identity to hotel staff, now she has to use 'Camouflage.' in public, and also in her photos so that any system holder does not know about her that she is also a system holder. The only point is that Rebecca, the Boy and Mr. X already know that Ava is a system holder
Yes. Still, it's better to use 'Camouflage' than doing nothing at least.

Thanks a lot for this wonderful revo. Only a few of you are here who keep me motivated all the time. These revos are the reasons why I write. No writer writes for himself. When someone says that I'm writing for myself. Don't believe him. A writer writes because he wants his work to be acknowledged. He may say that he writes for himself and don't care about the readers. It's actually a false statement. Because, a writer cannot feel his own work. So, it's pure stupidity when someone says I write for myself.

If you can't even feel it like others do, why are you keeping it for yourself then? We write so that our work can get acknowledgement. Acknowledgment gives us the confidence. Confidence brings out the motivation and urge to write something down. And, then the skill of the writer produces the quality content.

So, thanks for these revos you guys give. It keeps me motivated. Keep supporting as usual. ✨
 

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Jab tum log target poora karoge! :dazed:
 

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Update 185 was something which I didn't expect.... I mean... The arrival of Bhanu Pratap's son.... I didn't even think that he might come later in the story... I thought everything was over.

I see now what you are trying to play here... You are bringing each potential enemy from the past and trying to corner Veer... Nd it's really making me anxious now ...

Rajat... Dhananjay... Trisha's police force is also behind him... Well eventually she'll come to know about Veer... Dexter the assassin... Aadesh... Unavailability of Balhaar.... This situation is too scary...

I'm not worried about Veer... He can handle these puny goons without batting an eye on them... But... There is his family... Kavya... Nidhi... Juhi... Arohi... Tej... Bhavna... Shweta.... Bhumika .. Ragini nd all... They are the ones who are making me worried....

🥶 You said this arc is for Nidhi... Don't you dare do anything with Nidhi... My heart won't be able to take it at all.... 🥹

I don't want to see her suffer anymore... I don't want to say anything now. The next couple of updates might give us an idea where this is going...

Thank you for the update. Please keep writing like this... 🩷
 

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Liking the update without reading it, so the target can be completed and the reader can get the next update soon.

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Reacting nothing was much better than reacting haha to it. :redface:
 

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