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Story ki female lead kise hona chahiye???

  • Shanaya

    Votes: 23 76.7%
  • Ishita

    Votes: 11 36.7%
  • Jahnvi

    Votes: 7 23.3%

  • Total voters
    30

Vk248517

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"nahi y ye galat hai" akshay bola

"aur koi raasta nahi hai" prakash bola

"lekin k khoon" akshay bola

"saala tujhe teri item ke Saamne thok kar gaya aur tu me me kar raha hai, waise baldev ka poora support rahega, tujhe pata hai na uski pohunch kitni hai?"prakash bola

" lekin fir bhi"akshay bola

"soch le, us harami ne sabke Saamne teri maa chod di" prakash bola

Akshay soch me pad gaya tha, lekin us insult ko kaise bhulega, us Chinal jahnvi ka ex boyfriend ne sabke Saamne aisi maari....

"thik hai prakash, I'm in" akshay bola


Ab sab ko sahi karna hoga, jab tak baldev ka Saath Hai, ye machhar kuch nahi kar payenge. Sabse pehle us karan ko fir uski item sally ko aur baad me Daniel aur kingshuk. Sab ke sab marenge saale
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"Arey ye to wahi ladka hai" Pooja boli

"Haan wahi hai, lafango ki kami thodi hai India me" shanaya boli

Dono jogging kar rahe the park me jahan aaya hua tha apna daily routine poora karne kingshuk

"guilty feel kyun kar raha hai yaar, waise bhi she deservedly it" apne sipper se Paani Peete hue Dan bola

"nahi yaar it's just doesn't feel good" kingshuk bola

"oye teri, wo dekh" bol Dan ne shanaya ki aur dikhaya

Hoy shorts me shanaya ka gorapan aur khil raha tha aur uska gussail chehra uski khoobsoori ko aur nikhar raha tha

"ye ladki...."bolte bolte ruk gaya kingshuk, uske dil ki dhadkanein badne lagi thi
Hadh hai,jab bhi uske dil ki dhadkan badhti hai kuch na kuch ulta seedha hota rehta hai

" chal chal chalte hai, bohut hua "kingshuk bola

" Kamaal hai yaar, ek round bhi nahi hua, fir wo chaat waale bhaiyya ka sprouts bhi to khana hai "bol Dan ki nazren Pooja par gai.

Pooja ne ek nazar dekha Dan ko lekin fir usne nazrein ghuma li

" arrr tu unke peeche kyun ja raha hai?? "Dan ghabra haya

Wahi to, kyun ja raha hai us gussail aurat ke peeche, lekin kingshuk ko jaise uske sharir ya pair par control nahi tha

THAPPP

" ah.. "shanaya gir padi

" s sorry wo mai m mai "kingshuk ko samajh me nahi a raha tha ki kya kare kya na kare, fir se dhakka mara tha usne

" dekh kar nahi chal sakte idiot "Pooja ne shanaya ko sambhalte hue uthaya

" l lagi to nahi"bol kingshuk aage a raha tha ki shanaya ne rok liya

"oh fir se tum?? Tum jaise manchalo ko ache se jaanti hoon mai, dekh liya Pooja. Tu na kehti thi us din wo tujhe bachane ke liye kooda tha aur dhakka diya tha" shanaya boli

Pooja chup thi, kingshuk ne dhakka maar zaroor tha shanaya ko lekin uske bawajood wo sorry par sorry bole ja raha tha, dekhne par bura bhi nahi lagta

"chal Pooja" shanaya boli aur poojayko lekar jaane lagi

"sorry shannu aage se nahi hoga" bol kingshuk ne dono haatho se apna muh band kar liya aur wapas daud kar bhaga

Shanaya statue ho gayi thi

"shannu jab tak mai hoon, tujhe kuch hone nahi dunga"

Usne palat kar wapas dekha to kingshuk bhaag chuka tha

"chala gaya wo, waise pata nahi kyun lagta hai uski is baar bhi galti nahi thi" Pooja boli

Shanaya chup chaap Pooja ko lekar chali gayi

Wahi kingshuk gusse me tha, dheere dheere uska sharir par control kam ho raha hai
Ye heart jab se laga hua hai uske Ander har din har Waqt ek yudh sa chalta rehta hai, kal hi usne akshay ke saath wo kiya jo shayad sapne me bhi nahi karta

Itna bura nahi hai wo, lekin fir Daniel aur karan se dosti karne ki pehel bhi us dil ne ki thi jiske dhadkan se wo har Waqt ghabraya hua hota hai
Pata nahi kab khatam hoga ye sab

"bohut jald khatam hoga kingshuk, us din tum raaj karoge is rakshas ki jagah"

Wahi awaz thi
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Ek anjan purane building par

"ye raha levelfield ki kamai" bol baldev ne ek bada sa bag Saamne rakh diya ek shaks ke Saamne

"poore 60 lakh hai na??" shaks ne poocha

"is baar sirf 30 lakh...."

THADDDDD

Ek kick se door ja gira baldev

"madarchod, kamai hamesha utna kiya kar jitna bola gaya hai" shaks bola baldev ke baal apne haath me bheench kar

"kya kare bhai??" ek aadmi ne us shaks ko bola

"jis haath se laya hai usko to saza dena hi hai" shaks bola to ek aadmi ne hockey stick uchal di shaks ki taraf

Shaks ne use lapak liya aur

TTHANNNNNNNNNKKKKKKK

"MAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH" gala faad kar chillaya baldev
Haath toot chuka tha

"ye trailer tha darling, agle baar chadawa utna Lana jitna bola gaya ho, chal bhaag" bol shaks us bag ko lekar andhere me gayab ho gaya
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"saale teri wajah se" shamsher ne apne sar par haath rakha

"par kya karein??" baldev apne toote haath par plaster rakh kar bola

"kya karein ka matlab??agar unke demand poore nahi hue to ye bike ye paisa ye ladkiyan parties ye sab kaise hoga??" shamsher ne baldev ka collar pakad kar bola

"lekin humari problems bhi to dekhiye, police aur narcotics to hai hi Saath me saale ab ye excise wale bhi peeche pad gaye" baldev bola

"dekho baldev, agar hum unki kasauti par khare nahi utre to.... Tum apne haath ka haal dekh hi rahe ho" shamsher bola

"pata nahi, aajkal log dar nahi rahe oopar se wo saale harami gurukul ke launde saale..." gusse se baldev bola

"gurukul?? Wo piddi sa school?? Koun hai wahan ka hero" shamsher ne poocha

"hai ek chutiya aapko pata hai, wo khushi ka bhai kingshuk" baldev bola

"saale ek landed se nahi lad sakte tum log??" shamsher ne poocha

"ab wo Lagda nahi raha, pata nahi kaise sab theek ho gaya" baldev bola

Shamsher chup raha, use pata tha ki uske hamle se kingshuk lagbhag khatam sa ho gaya tha, lekin jiska haath uske sar par tha usne shamsher ko bacha liya, lekin use andaza bhi nahi tha ki wo doodh peeta ladka aaj unke naak ka nasoor banega

"uske group ko todna hoga bhai" baldev bola

"hmm ok jo karna hai karo, mujhe ab hamara dhanda badhana hai, gurukul ke ladko ko active karo" shamsher bola

"aur suna hai ek item aayi hai gurukul ke school me" baldev ne poocha

CHATAAAAKKKKKKKK

"bhai??" hairan reh gaya baldev

"bhool kar bhi uska Naam na lena, tujhe pata bhi hai koun hai wo??" kaampte hue bola shamsher

"s sorry, waise ek ladki shanaya ne bhi admission liya hai hamare school me" baldev bola

"us kamini par nazar rakh, aur jo aayi hai gurukul me us par ladko ka guard laga, kisi ne agar us ladki ko dekha bhi uski aankh noch lena" shamsher bola

"wo hai koun waise??" baldev ne poocha

"shhhhh" bas itna bola shamsher

"baqt badal raha hai, Naya leadership waisa nahi hai jaisa pehle tha, sambhal kar kaam kar aur apne ladko ko sambhal kar rakh" bol kar shamsher chala gaya bike lekar
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Kingshuk apne section se bahar aakar section b ki aur jaane laga, gopal ka section tha wo aur gopal se kuch notes lene the, padhai par uska dhyan wapas aane laga tha, concentration improve hone lagi thi aur sab kuch behrat tarike se samajhne laga tha, lekin ghoom fir kar baat wahi

Uska dimag kabhi kabhi control se bahar ho Jaata hai

"gopal?? Are kaisa hai??" kingshuk ne poocha

"shhh shhh chup mere bhai chup" gopal gidgidane laga

"kya hua ki....."

CHATAKKKKKKKKKK

Kingshuk ka chehra ghoom gaya ek taraf, chashma gir gaya neeche

"how dare disrespect me??" ek ladki ki awaz aayi to kingshuk ne apna chashma uthate hue dekha

Ghutno se bhi oopar skirt pehen kar ek ladki Saamne khadi thi

"jo bhi ho tum ab se mujhe hamesha respect...." ladki statue ban gayi kingshuk ko dekh kar

Oh itna handsome sa ladka.kahan tha ye ladka???

"excuse me mai..." kingshuk bhi bolte bolte ruk gaya

"respect....." ladki bas itna hi bol paayi aur collar pakad liya kingshuk ka fir kuch der baad dhakka de diya kingshuk ko

"ahem aage se dhyan rakhna idiot" bol badi ada ke saath apni saheliyon ko lekar chali gayi

"ghamandi hai, aur bigdail bhi. Baap trustee hai gurukul aur levelfield ka" gopal bola

"hmm hame kya, aaj tu bhi aana gym me" kingshuk bola

"mai Jaake kya karunga??" gopal bola

"are masti karenge" kingshuk bola aur chala gaya

Jaate Waqt ek nazar us khoobsoorat ladki ki aur dekha usne, gopal ki baat ekdum sahi hai
Ladki bigdail aur ghamandi type hai

"are gopal?? Tujhe kab se dhoond raha hoon"

"nitin??? Kya hua??? Are wah naya watch??" gopal ne poocha

"Haan ab mujhe ek ek aise khel ke baare me pata chala hai jisme paisa hi paisa hai" nitin bola

"dhat sab natak hai" gopal bola

"OK believe nahi karta na??chal aaja" bol nitin idhar udhar dekh kar gopal ko canteen me le gaya

"dekh ye dekh" bol nitin ne ek aap dikhaya

"ab hame in numbers ko set karne hote hai, chal tu try maar" nitin bola

"n nahi yaar tu mujh par ye sab.... Nahi" gopal bola

"meri taraf se, hara to mera jimma aur jeeta to tu le ja paise" bol nitin ne phone badhaya gopal ki aur

TING

"Kya baat hai, jeet gaya tu. Fir try kar" nitin bola aur gopal na chahte hue bhi khel gaya baazi

TING

"fir jeeta" nitin bola

"ye app hai kya app store me??" gopal ne poocha

"nahi re, ise link ke saath download karna hota hai, mai daal dunga tere phone par" bol nitin ne instal kar diya app

"all the best bro" nitin bola to gopal haste hue bye bol apne class ki aur chal pada

Gopal ke jaate hi nitin ne phone kiya

"Haan fans gaya ek, phone par nitin bol kar phone Kaat daala usne
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" madam.... Madam...... "dauda hua baldev aaya tha gurukul me

" ye nautanki idhar kya kar raha hai?"Daniel sach me chaunk gaya baldev ko dekh kar

" pata nahi yaar, tune gopal ko dekha kuch zyada hi phone par ghusa hua hai aaj kal?? "kingshuk ne poocha aur bander ki tarah nachte hue baldev ko dekhne laga jo us nakchadi aur ghamandi ladki ke peeche ghoom raha tha

" ye is ladki ka kya scene hai yaar?? Poori duniya peeche padi hui hai"karan ne poocha is baar

"Haan Haan dekh lo, sab ladke ek jaise hi to hote hai" sally gusse se classroom ke bahar chali gayi

"Arey Sally Sally" peechey bhaga karan aur kingshuk ke saath Daniel hasne lag gaye

"please mujhe apni zindagi jeene do aur ye madam madam kehna band karo" ladki boli

"nahi matlab bhai ne bola hai ki kuch bhi zaroorat ho to hum hamesha khidmat me haazir rahenge" baldev apna daant dikhate hue bola

"Ok whatever" bol wo ladki aage badh gayi

"waise tune kya thappad khaane ka man bana liya hai sabse?? Pehle wo shanaya aur ab ye...." Daniel hasne laga

"shut up yaar" kingshuk fir se gopal ki aur dekhne laga, kya hua kya hai use???

"ishita ko kisi ki zaroorat nahi hai, ok so move" bol ishita Naam Ki ladki toofan ki tarah nikal gayi

"yess fir jeeta" gopal ki aankhen badi hoti gayi

Kingshuk ko gopal kuch ajeeb sa lag raha tha
 
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"saale teri wajah se" shamsher ne apne sar par haath rakha

"par kya karein??" baldev apne toote haath par plaster rakh kar bola

"kya karein ka matlab??agar unke demand poore nahi hue to ye bike ye paisa ye ladkiyan parties ye sab kaise hoga??" shamsher ne baldev ka collar pakad kar bola

"lekin humari problems bhi to dekhiye, police aur narcotics to hai hi Saath me saale ab ye excise wale bhi peeche pad gaye" baldev bola

"dekho baldev, agar hum unki kasauti par khare nahi utre to.... Tum apne haath ka haal dekh hi rahe ho" shamsher bola

"pata nahi, aajkal log dar nahi rahe oopar se wo saale harami gurukul ke launde saale..." gusse se baldev bola

"gurukul?? Wo piddi sa school?? Koun hai wahan ka hero" shamsher ne poocha

"hai ek chutiya aapko pata hai, wo khushi ka bhai kingshuk" baldev bola

"saale ek landed se nahi lad sakte tum log??" shamsher ne poocha

"ab wo Lagda nahi raha, pata nahi kaise sab theek ho gaya" baldev bola

Shamsher chup raha, use pata tha ki uske hamle se kingshuk lagbhag khatam sa ho gaya tha, lekin jiska haath uske sar par tha usne shamsher ko bacha liya, lekin use andaza bhi nahi tha ki wo doodh peeta ladka aaj unke naak ka nasoor banega

"uske group ko todna hoga bhai" baldev bola

"hmm ok jo karna hai karo, mujhe ab hamara dhanda badhana hai, gurukul ke ladko ko active karo" shamsher bola
मतलब ड्रग्स को स्कुल लेवल पर फ्लोट करना
एक हाथ तुड़वा बैठा पर फिर भी
लालच बुरी बला है दोस्त और ऊपर से ऐसी संगत
"aur suna hai ek item aayi hai gurukul ke school me" baldev ne poocha

CHATAAAAKKKKKKKK

"bhai??" hairan reh gaya baldev

"bhool kar bhi uska Naam na lena, tujhe pata bhi hai koun hai wo??" kaampte hue bola shamsher

"s sorry, waise ek ladki shanaya ne bhi admission liya hai hamare school me" baldev bola

"us kamini par nazar rakh, aur jo aayi hai gurukul me us par ladko ka guard laga, kisi ne agar us ladki ko dekha bhi uski aankh noch lena" shamsher bola

"wo hai koun waise??" baldev ne poocha

"shhhhh" bas itna bola shamsher

"baqt badal raha hai, Naya leadership waisa nahi hai jaisa pehle tha, sambhal kar kaam kar aur apne ladko ko sambhal kar rakh" bol kar shamsher chala gaya bike lekar
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हम्म मतलब कोई तगड़ी बैकग्राउंड वाली कि एंट्री हुई है
मुख्य हीरोइन तो शनाया है तो यह सेकेंड हीरोइन हो सकती है
Kingshuk apne section se bahar aakar section b ki aur jaane laga, gopal ka section tha wo aur gopal se kuch notes lene the, padhai par uska dhyan wapas aane laga tha, concentration improve hone lagi thi aur sab kuch behrat tarike se samajhne laga tha, lekin ghoom fir kar baat wahi

Uska dimag kabhi kabhi control se bahar ho Jaata hai

"gopal?? Are kaisa hai??" kingshuk ne poocha

"shhh shhh chup mere bhai chup" gopal gidgidane laga

"kya hua ki....."

CHATAKKKKKKKKKK

Kingshuk ka chehra ghoom gaya ek taraf, chashma gir gaya neeche

"how dare disrespect me??" ek ladki ki awaz aayi to kingshuk ne apna chashma uthate hue dekha
अच्छा तो यह वह लड़की है
यार यह हो क्या रहा है
शनाया कभी बजा रही है और अभी यह लड़की
है कौन यार
Ghutno se bhi oopar skirt pehen kar ek ladki Saamne khadi thi

"jo bhi ho tum ab se mujhe hamesha respect...." ladki statue ban gayi kingshuk ko dekh kar

Oh itna handsome sa ladka.kahan tha ye ladka???
ओ तेरी लड़की के दिल में घंटी बजने लगी
"excuse me mai..." kingshuk bhi bolte bolte ruk gaya

"respect....." ladki bas itna hi bol paayi aur collar pakad liya kingshuk ka fir kuch der baad dhakka de diya kingshuk ko

"ahem aage se dhyan rakhna idiot" bol badi ada ke saath apni saheliyon ko lekar chali gayi
ओह यह घमंड
पता नहीं हुस्न के लिए है या अपने पीछे के बैकग्राउंड के लिए है
"ghamandi hai, aur bigdail bhi. Baap trustee hai gurukul aur levelfield ka" gopal bola

"hmm hame kya, aaj tu bhi aana gym me" kingshuk bola

"mai Jaake kya karunga??" gopal bola

"are masti karenge" kingshuk bola aur chala gaya

Jaate Waqt ek nazar us khoobsoorat ladki ki aur dekha usne, gopal ki baat ekdum sahi hai
Ladki bigdail aur ghamandi type hai

"are gopal?? Tujhe kab se dhoond raha hoon"

"nitin??? Kya hua??? Are wah naya watch??" gopal ne poocha

"Haan ab mujhe ek ek aise khel ke baare me pata chala hai jisme paisa hi paisa hai" nitin bola

"dhat sab natak hai" gopal bola

"OK believe nahi karta na??chal aaja" bol nitin idhar udhar dekh kar gopal ko canteen me le gaya

"dekh ye dekh" bol nitin ne ek aap dikhaya

"ab hame in numbers ko set karne hote hai, chal tu try maar" nitin bola

"n nahi yaar tu mujh par ye sab.... Nahi" gopal bola

"meri taraf se, hara to mera jimma aur jeeta to tu le ja paise" bol nitin ne phone badhaya gopal ki aur

TING

"Kya baat hai, jeet gaya tu. Fir try kar" nitin bola aur gopal na chahte hue bhi khel gaya baazi

TING

"fir jeeta" nitin bola

"ye app hai kya app store me??" gopal ne poocha

"nahi re, ise link ke saath download karna hota hai, mai daal dunga tere phone par" bol nitin ne instal kar diya app

"all the best bro" nitin bola to gopal haste hue bye bol apne class ki aur chal pada

Gopal ke jaate hi nitin ne phone kiya

"Haan fans gaya ek, phone par nitin bol kar phone Kaat daala usne
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ओह तो जुए वाली एप के जरिए नितिन ने गोपाल को फंसा दिया आखिर
अब देखना यह होगा बलदेव गोपाल को किंग्सुक से तोड़ पाता है या किंग्सुक उसे बचा पाता है
" madam.... Madam...... "dauda hua baldev aaya tha gurukul me

" ye nautanki idhar kya kar raha hai?"Daniel sach me chaunk gaya baldev ko dekh kar

" pata nahi yaar, tune gopal ko dekha kuch zyada hi phone par ghusa hua hai aaj kal?? "kingshuk ne poocha aur bander ki tarah nachte hue baldev ko dekhne laga jo us nakchadi aur ghamandi ladki ke peeche ghoom raha tha

" ye is ladki ka kya scene hai yaar?? Poori duniya peeche padi hui hai"karan ne poocha is baar

"Haan Haan dekh lo, sab ladke ek jaise hi to hote hai" sally gusse se classroom ke bahar chali gayi

"Arey Sally Sally" peechey bhaga karan aur kingshuk ke saath Daniel hasne lag gaye
हा हा हा
वॉयस ऑल्वेज बॉयस
शैली
गर्ल्स ऑल्वेज गर्ल्स
"please mujhe apni zindagi jeene do aur ye madam madam kehna band karo" ladki boli

"nahi matlab bhai ne bola hai ki kuch bhi zaroorat ho to hum hamesha khidmat me haazir rahenge" baldev apna daant dikhate hue bola

"Ok whatever" bol wo ladki aage badh gayi

"waise tune kya thappad khaane ka man bana liya hai sabse?? Pehle wo shanaya aur ab ye...." Daniel hasne laga
बिल्कुल सही सवाल किया है डैनियल ne
"shut up yaar" kingshuk fir se gopal ki aur dekhne laga, kya hua kya hai use???

"ishita ko kisi ki zaroorat nahi hai, ok so move" bol ishita Naam Ki ladki toofan ki tarah nikal gayi

"yess fir jeeta" gopal ki aankhen badi hoti gayi

Kingshuk ko gopal kuch ajeeb sa lag raha tha
तो आखिर किंग्सुक की नजर पड़ी गोपाल पर
इसके बाद किंग्सुक जरूर शमशेर एंड कंपनी को एक जोर का झटका देगा
क्यूंकि किंग्सुक के भीतर जो धड़क रहा है वह इन सब खेलों में माहिर होगा
ओवर ऑल Swaraj भाई क्या जबरदस्त अपडेट था
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Swaraj

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मतलब ड्रग्स को स्कुल लेवल पर फ्लोट करना
एक हाथ तुड़वा बैठा पर फिर भी
लालच बुरी बला है दोस्त और ऊपर से ऐसी संगत

हम्म मतलब कोई तगड़ी बैकग्राउंड वाली कि एंट्री हुई है
मुख्य हीरोइन तो शनाया है तो यह सेकेंड हीरोइन हो सकती है

अच्छा तो यह वह लड़की है
यार यह हो क्या रहा है
शनाया कभी बजा रही है और अभी यह लड़की
है कौन यार

ओ तेरी लड़की के दिल में घंटी बजने लगी

ओह यह घमंड
पता नहीं हुस्न के लिए है या अपने पीछे के बैकग्राउंड के लिए है

ओह तो जुए वाली एप के जरिए नितिन ने गोपाल को फंसा दिया आखिर
अब देखना यह होगा बलदेव गोपाल को किंग्सुक से तोड़ पाता है या किंग्सुक उसे बचा पाता है

हा हा हा
वॉयस ऑल्वेज बॉयस
शैली
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बिल्कुल सही सवाल किया है डैनियल ne

तो आखिर किंग्सुक की नजर पड़ी गोपाल पर
इसके बाद किंग्सुक जरूर शमशेर एंड कंपनी को एक जोर का झटका देगा
क्यूंकि किंग्सुक के भीतर जो धड़क रहा है वह इन सब खेलों में माहिर होगा
ओवर ऑल Swaraj भाई क्या जबरदस्त अपडेट था
प्रतीक्षा रहेगी अगले अपडेट की
Thanks bro,
Second lead koun hogi ye aap log decide kijiye
Shanaya ya ishita
Dono ka role alag hai aur personality bhi,
Kingshuk ko ek bada jhatka lagne wala hai jisse wo poora badal jayega
Rahi baat baldev ki to abhi kingshuk ko shamsher se nipatna hai aur bhi kai log honge jo usse taqatwar honge
Saath rahiye kingshuk ke transformation ke liye
 
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