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uski baate kafi rahasyamayi thi,
idhar raj ko dimaag utni hi door me ghoomane ki vajah se chakra raha hai,
udhar neha ka dar se haalat kharab hai,
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SAAJAN
UPDATE-198​

Vo jor se chillate cheekhte huye piche ki taraf bhagi lekin darr aur khauf se thar thar kampte uske pair bhagne me uska sath nahi de paye jisse vo piche ki taraf dhadam se gir gayi…..niche girte hi uska sir kisi nukili cheez se takra gaya….ek baar phir se vo dard aur khauf se cheekh uthi.

Neha (dard se cheekhte huye)—aaaaaaaaaaaaa……..marrrrr…..gayiiiiiii…….raaaajjjjjjj……bachaooooooo

Usne turant apne hath ko sir me dard wali jagah par lagaya….aur dard se phir chilla uthi…..dard se karahte huye usne apna hath aage kiya to uska hath khoon se sana hua tha.

Neha ne dard bhare chehre se darte darte apni nazar ko utha kar samne dekha to chounk gayi...kyon ki kuch der pahle jaha ek bhayanak aurat khadi thi, ab vaha par koi nahi tha.

Idhar main sabhi ko awaz lagata hua har jagah qile me talash karne laga ki tabhi meri ankho ne kuch aisa dekha ki main usko dekhte hi chounk gaya.

Ab Aage…….

Meri ankho ke samne vaisa hi ek kamra dikhayi diya jaisa ki maine behosh hone ke dauran dekha tha….main ab iss asmanjas me fas gaya ki pahle iss kamre ko check karu ya phir sab ko talash karne ka kaam karu…?

Raj (chounk kar mann me)—Ye kamra to bilkul vaisa hi hai…..akhir ye kamra mujhe behosh hone ke baad kyo dikhayi diya tha….? Kuch na kuch raaz to avashya hi hai iss kamre ke andar…..to kya vo sabhi drishya jo bhi mujhe behosh hone ke baad dikhayi diye hain, unn sabhi ka kuch rahasya hai….? Kya vo sabhi iss tilismi jagah se hi sambandhit hain….? Vo ajib sa dikhne wala bhayanak jeev koun tha…..? kya usne mujhe sirf yahi dikhane ke liye hi behosh kiya tha ya phir ye sab koi tilism ka mayajaal hai…..? kya karu, pahle iss kamre ki talashi le kar iska raaz janne ki koshish karu ya phir sab ki khoj karu……? Pahle sab ko dekh leta hu…kahi kisi badi musibat me na phans gayi ho…?

Maine sabko pahle bachane ka faisla kar ke unki talash karne me jut gaya…..uss kamre ko ek nazar dekhte huye main aage badh gaya….main ghum phir kar ussi sidhi ke paas pahuch gaya jaha par uss kamre se mujhe kuch tamra patra mile the aur niche utarne par hum shisha lagi khidki wale room me pahuch gaye the.

Iss baar main yaha vaha mudne ki bajaye sidhe unn sidhyo se hote huye niche utarta gaya….lagbhag 50 sidhiya utarne ke pashchat mujhe ek kund dikhayi diya.

Dhyan se dekhne par maine jana ki isme bhi niche jane ke liye sidhiya bani huyi hain….main savdhani se uss kund ki sidhiya utarne laga.

Mera khyal tha ki yaha bhi vaise hi badbu bhara vatavaran hoga, garmi aur har oor dhool ki parat jama hogi aur ho sakta hai ki vo jagah kide makodo se bhi bhari padi ho.... ?

Magar mere iss khyal ke vipreet jaise hi niche pahucha to vaha ek dam saaf safayi thi, jaise ki uss jagah par koi rahta ho, dhool ka kahi namo nishan tak nahi tha aur na hi hawa band jaan padti thi....haa, andhakar jarur itna gahra tha ki vaha ki kisi bhi cheez ka dikhayi dena lagbhag namumkin tha...lekin meri kundalini jagrit hone ki vajah se koi dikkat pesh nahi aa rahi thi kuch bhi dekhne me...vaha ka farsh ek dam saman aur bilkul saaf suthra tha.

Vaha bana ek kamra jo niche se upar tak chikne pattharo se bana hua tha, aur jiski lambayi choudayi bahut kam thi upar mile kamro ki tulna me.

Main charo taraf ghum ghum kar dekhne laga ki vaha kaha kya hai.... ? purab taraf ke kone me pahucha to vaha chhat ke sath latakti huyi ek zanjeer dikhayi di, jiske sath lal kapde me bandhi huyi ek gathri latak rahi thi…..uttar ki taraf lakdi ke bane do bade bade box rakhe dikhayi diye....pashchim taraf ke kone me kamre ki satah me kuye ki tarah ka ek gaddha sa nazar aaya, jiske upar jaal pada hua tha.

Aur dakshin ki taraf ghum kar deekha to deewar ke sath safed patthar ka ek singhasan nazar aaya, jis par baithi aadam kad ki murti ko gaur se dekhne ke liye jaise hi uske karib pahucha to chounk gaya.

Kyon ki jisko maine murti samjha tha vo koi patthar ki murat nahi balki ek jeeti jagti nazuk aurat thi, jo apni badi badi ankho se ek tak mujhe hi dekhe ja rahi thi.

Aisi sunsan,sab taraf se band, shapit aur tilismi jagah me kisi aurat ki moujudgi hairat aur choukane wali baat to thi hi jabki iss jagah to koi darr aur khauf se kabhi aata jata bhi nahi hai.

Raj—ye, tum koun ho..... ?

Ek gamgeen hasi uske patle hotho par doud gayi...kintu usne mere sawal ka koi jawab nahi diya.....balki jawab dene ki jagah ulta apna sawal daag diya.

Vo—kahiye saajan, kya aap ko mujhse kuch kahna hai..... ?

Mera to dimag hi chakra gaya....iss vichitra jagah me koi aurat dekhne ko milegi, pahle to yahi asha nahi ho sakti thi… upar se vah meri jani pahchani hogi ya mera naam le kar pukaregi, ye aur bhi achambhit karne wali baat thi...main itna tajjub me dooba hua tha ki muh se koi awaz hi nahi nikal rahi thi lekin phir kisi tarah se khud ko sambhala maine.

Raj—tum koun ho aur kis liye yaha baithi ho.... ? aur tumne mera naam kaise jana..... ?

Mere sawal par Vo pahle ki hi tarah sookhi sookhi hasi hasne lagi….mujhe to ab ye pagal lagne lagi thi ya phir mujhe banane ki koshish kar rahi hai, yahi sochne laga main.

Vo—main chahe koi bhi hu....aap meri fikra chhod dijiye saajan aur aap ko yaha jo kaam hai, usko jaldi hi poora kar daliye...kyon ki agar der karenge to vah kam phir nahi ho sakega jiske liye aap yaha aaye hain.

Raj (shocked)—kya tum janti ho ki hum yaha koun se kaam ke liye aaye hain...... ?

Vo—hmmmm....bahut achchi tarah.

Aur phir vo iss tarah upar ki oor dekhne lagi jaise ki usko upar se kisi tarah ki koi aahat mili ho…..aur tabhi sach much mujhe bhi upar aati huyi kuch awaz sunayi padi.

Maine aati huyi unn awazo par gaur kiya to aisa mahsoos hua jaise ki kayi log aapas me baatcheet kar rahe hain... mujhe ashcharya hua to thoda piche hat kar sidhi ke paas ja kar main upar ki oor dekhne laga.

Magar siway kuch logo ke chalne phirne ki aahat ke aur kuch bhi sunayi nahi diya...ye dekh mera ashcharya aur bhi badha aur kuch ashanka bhi hone lagi to maine uss aurat ki fikra chhod kar sidhiyo par chadhte huye upar ki oor badh gaya.

Jis samay akhiri sidhi tay kar ke maine kund ke bahar apna sir nikala to yeh dekh mujhe ashcharya hua ki vaha to koi bhi nahi tha.

Raj (mann me)—kahi vo payal didi vagairah to nahi thi jo mujhe khojte huye yaha tak aayi ho.... ? itna jaldi vo awaze kaha gayab ho gayi.... ? lekin itne andhere me didi vagairah ka yaha tak aana lagbhag namumkin hi lagta hai... ? ab pahle iss aurat ko hi dekh leta hu ki ye vastav me hai koun…..?

Jab upar aane par mujhe koi dikhayi nahi diya to main vapis pahle ki tarah sidhya utar kar kund ke andar aa gaya jaha singhasan par baithi uss aurat ne mujhe tajjub me daal diya tha.

Magar yaha aa kar to mera ashcharya aur badh gaya, kyon ki ab vo singhasan khali tha…..aur uss aurat ka vaha koi naamo nishan tak nahi tha.

Raj (mann me)—iss charo taraf se band jagah se koi admi kis tarah aur kaha gayab ho sakta hai... ? kahi yaha par koi chhipi huyi surang ya phir koi gupt rasta to nahi hai....jisse vo aurat yaha se bhag gayi ho.... ?

Ye khyal mann me panapte hi maine har taraf dhyan se dekhna shuru kar diya....aur mera ye khyal sahi nikla bhi... uss singhasan ki bagal ki deewar me mujhe ek bahut hi chhoti surang ka nicha sa muhana nazar aaya jo iss tarah se bana hua tha ki singhasan par baithne wala vyakti sahaj hi uss raste se utar kar ja sakta tha.

Patthar ki ek silli (tiles jaisi) apni jagah se hat kar niche ki taraf jhooli huyi thi.....aur vaha ek tang (sankra) rasta dikhayi pad raha tha.

Raj (mann me)—iss surang me ghus kar dekhu kya ki andar ab kya naya tamasha yaha dekhne ko milta hai….? Lekin pahle apni sab dilrubao ki khoj khabar to le lu…pata nahi kaha bhatak rahi hain ye….? Ye qila waqayi me bahut rahasyamayi hai.

Issi tarah ki baate mann me sochte vicharte huye main palat kar kund ki sidhiya chadhte huye upar ki oor chal diya… magar akhiri sidhi par pahuchne se pahle hi mujhe punah ruk jana pada…..kisi ki chhaya mujhe uss kund par dikhayi di thi aisa jaise ki koi jhuk kar niche ki taraf dekh raha ho.

Waqt jaise jaise badh raha tha, vaha ka vatavaran utni hi tezi se badal raha tha….qile ke bahar aas maan me jor jor se bijli kadak rahi thi…’’kadddd-kadddddd……..kaddd-kadddddd’’…

Aapas me milte badal raat ke andhere me roshni bichhate huye yahi darsha rahe the ki jald hi koi toofan yaha kadam rakhne wala hai.

Vahi ek andhere kamre me neha idhar se udhar bhatak rahi thi….kisi bachche ki tarah ro rahi thi vo….tabhi usse raj ki yaad aate hi vo aur bhi jor jor se phoot phoot ke rone lagi….ankho me aaye anshu ko kisi tarah se saaf karte huye vo khadi huyi

Neha (rote huye)—raaajjjjjjjj………..raaaajjjjjjjjjj

Neha cheekhti rahi lekin uss band andhere kamre me uski ye awaz goonjti rahi …..jise sunne ke liye raj vaha tha hi nahi……lekin neha ko ye kaha pata tha ki uske theek piche koi khada hua hai….jise neha ke dil me aisa darr aur khauf dekh kar behad khushi ho rahi thi.

Neha besudh hoti huyi poori ankhe khol kar anjne me hi uski taraf palat kar aage badhne lagi aur phir uske kano me kisi ke fusfusane ki awaze sunayi dene lagi.

Kisi ki awaz sunte hi uske dil me darr aur badh gaya…..tabhi vo awaz itni nazdeek aa gayi ki usko aisa lagne laga ki koi uske kaan me kuch kah raha hai.

Chalte chalte vo phir se kisi cheez se takra kar niche uske upar gir gayi….tabhi ek baar phir se kamre me roshni phail gayi aur jaise hi neha ki nazar apne samne padi cheez par gayi to uski ruh kaamp gayi.

Kyon ki vo iss samay jiske upar giri huyi thi vo ek taza kshat vikshat laash thi kisi ki….jiski ek ankh, aadhi naak, ek kaan, ek hath aur ek pair kata hua vahi pada tha….pet ka maans poora bahar nikla hua tha….jise ki kisi ne usko abhi abhi noch noch ke khaya ho.

Neha (cheekh kar)—aaaaaaaaa,,,nahiiiiiiiiii……raaaajjjjjjjjjjjjj

Neha uske upar se uth kar haal behaal ho kar bahar ki taraf bhagi aur idhar uss laash ne apni ankhe khol di..aur uth kar neha ke piche chal diya ek pair se hi.

Vahi hospital me doctor ne veer ko dubara se dawayi ki parchi likh kar diya aur sath hi unn medicines ko jo mrinal samet layi thi unko vapis counter par loutane ko kaha.

Veer—ok thanks doctor…main abhi aaya

Mrinal—ye balatkari, ruk main bhi chalti hu….tera kya bharosa vaha pahuchte hi kisi ka balatkar karne lag gaya to…?

Veer—nahi koi jarurat nahi hai tumhe jane ki…yahi ruko..main lata hu

Lekin mrinal kaha manne wali thi…vo veer ke piche piche chal di….sanyog se vahi doctor raste me dikh gaya aur shayad usne bhi dono ko dekh liya tha….dekhte hi vo turant palat ke andar cabin me ghus gaya.

Mrinal (mann me)—maine itni mehnat se achchi achchi dawayi layi thi aur ye dok ghar ne unko vapis kar diya…khud ko bahut hoshiyar samajhti hai ye…..isko maza chakhana padega.

Counter par pahuchte hi veer ne unn dawayi lo return kar diya aur naya parcha pakda diya…lekin jaise hi dukan wale ne veer ke sath mrinal ko dekha to turant chair se uth kar hath jod liya.

Vo—madam jo bhi chahiye…aap nikal lo….aap ke liye sab free hai.

Mrinal (ankhe dikhate huye)—kya kaha tune….? Mujhe farri (free) hai ….? Gaali deta hai…ruk abhi batati hu tujhe.

Veer (sir pakad ke)—hey bhagwan…ye ladki bhi na….! ye…mrinallll nahiii..rukkk jaa….nahiii

Mrinal turant counter kud kar andar ghus gayi aur veer ke mana karte karte usne dukan wale ki gardan pakad ke ghasit liya….vo usko kaan ke niche bajane hi wali thi ki tabhi veer ne jaldi se usko pakad liya aur ek kaand hote hote rah gaya.

Mrinal (kuch utha kar)—ye kya hai….?

Vo—ye fevi quick hai.

Mrinal—achcha achcha, samajh gayi…..ye fuyi quyi hai….

Veer—chal ab yaha se..

Mrinal—thoda ruk na.....ye kabutar.....ye fuyi quyi ko kaise khate hain.... ?

Vo (shocked)—ye kuch bhi chipkane ke kaam me aata hai.

Mrinal—isse sab kuch chipak jayega na….?

Vo (picha chhudane ke liye)—bilkul

Mrinal—to phir theek hai…..chal balatkari….(mann me)—ab batati hu uss dok tarrrr ko.

Vahi mandir me chanchal abhi bhi rote huye bhagwan se vinti karne me lagi huyi thi jabki vidhya band kamre me akeli baithi anshu baha rahi thi...

Achanak uski nazar samne rakhe dressing table ke kaanch par gayi to uski dhadkan hi jaise rukne ko ho gayi…kaanch par kuch dhundhla dhundhla sa jhil mila raha tha…..aur bhi achanak uss mirror me ek chehra ubharne laga dhire dhire……..jaise hi vo chehra spast naar aaya jo ki bahut hi bayanak chehra nazar aa raha tha…..usko dekhte hi vidhya ki jor se dahshat ke maare cheekh nikal gayi…..vo jo bhi tha shayad iss samay uske piche khada tha.

Ye ehsaas hote hi uski ruh andar tak kaamp gayi…..vidhya ke poore jism me darr aur khauf se sihran doud gayi…uske hath pair thar tharane lage.

Darte darte usne kisi tarah himmat kar ke apni gardan ko piche ghumane lagi…….

Friends, Tilism ek makdi ke jaal ki tarah hota hai, ki agar uss jaal me koi jeev fas gaya to itni jaldi nahi nikal sakta...vo agar ek jaal se niklega to turant dusre jaal me fas jayega...aise hi karte huye vo faste nikalte, faste nikalte huye hi uss jaal se bahar aa sakta hai..ek dam se bahar nahi nikal sakta.

Jaisa ki aap sabhi jante hain ki ye Qila Tilismi hone ke sath hi sath abhishapit bhi hai..qile se sambandhit nagar aur uss nagar ke aas paas tak insan aur janwar to kya koi ped poudha tak jivit nahi hain...Sadiyo se vo nagar veeran hai...jaha koi jane ki sochta bhi nahi, uss nagar ke paas se bhi nahi gujarta....agar aise me hero is tilism ko itna jaldi tod dega to qile ke baare me kahi gayi baate galat sabit ho jayengi....vo ek dusre ko charitarth nahi karengi. aisa lagega jaise ki tilism bahut kamjor tha jisko raj ne ek jhatke me hi tod diya...agar aisa ho jata hai tab to qila aur vo nagar aaj tak veeran nahi hona chahiye tha.

Anyway, ye sab maine isliye kaha hai kyon ki kayi mitro ka sochna hai ki main qile ke matter ko lamba khich raha hu...lekin aisa karna kahani aur uss vishay me kahe gaye vaktavya ko charitarth karne ke uddeshya se hai.

Agle do teen updates me Qile se jude sabhi rahasyo se parda uth jayega...Tab tak mera sabhi se anurodh hai ki vo apne antah sthal me dhairya aur dheeraj banaye rakhe.

"Dhanyawad...Shubh Ratri"

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SAAJAN
UPDATE-198​

Vo jor se chillate cheekhte huye piche ki taraf bhagi lekin darr aur khauf se thar thar kampte uske pair bhagne me uska sath nahi de paye jisse vo piche ki taraf dhadam se gir gayi…..niche girte hi uska sir kisi nukili cheez se takra gaya….ek baar phir se vo dard aur khauf se cheekh uthi.

Neha (dard se cheekhte huye)—aaaaaaaaaaaaa……..marrrrr…..gayiiiiiii…….raaaajjjjjjj……bachaooooooo

Usne turant apne hath ko sir me dard wali jagah par lagaya….aur dard se phir chilla uthi…..dard se karahte huye usne apna hath aage kiya to uska hath khoon se sana hua tha.

Neha ne dard bhare chehre se darte darte apni nazar ko utha kar samne dekha to chounk gayi...kyon ki kuch der pahle jaha ek bhayanak aurat khadi thi, ab vaha par koi nahi tha.

Idhar main sabhi ko awaz lagata hua har jagah qile me talash karne laga ki tabhi meri ankho ne kuch aisa dekha ki main usko dekhte hi chounk gaya.

Ab Aage…….

Meri ankho ke samne vaisa hi ek kamra dikhayi diya jaisa ki maine behosh hone ke dauran dekha tha….main ab iss asmanjas me fas gaya ki pahle iss kamre ko check karu ya phir sab ko talash karne ka kaam karu…?

Raj (chounk kar mann me)—Ye kamra to bilkul vaisa hi hai…..akhir ye kamra mujhe behosh hone ke baad kyo dikhayi diya tha….? Kuch na kuch raaz to avashya hi hai iss kamre ke andar…..to kya vo sabhi drishya jo bhi mujhe behosh hone ke baad dikhayi diye hain, unn sabhi ka kuch rahasya hai….? Kya vo sabhi iss tilismi jagah se hi sambandhit hain….? Vo ajib sa dikhne wala bhayanak jeev koun tha…..? kya usne mujhe sirf yahi dikhane ke liye hi behosh kiya tha ya phir ye sab koi tilism ka mayajaal hai…..? kya karu, pahle iss kamre ki talashi le kar iska raaz janne ki koshish karu ya phir sab ki khoj karu……? Pahle sab ko dekh leta hu…kahi kisi badi musibat me na phans gayi ho…?

Maine sabko pahle bachane ka faisla kar ke unki talash karne me jut gaya…..uss kamre ko ek nazar dekhte huye main aage badh gaya….main ghum phir kar ussi sidhi ke paas pahuch gaya jaha par uss kamre se mujhe kuch tamra patra mile the aur niche utarne par hum shisha lagi khidki wale room me pahuch gaye the.

Iss baar main yaha vaha mudne ki bajaye sidhe unn sidhyo se hote huye niche utarta gaya….lagbhag 50 sidhiya utarne ke pashchat mujhe ek kund dikhayi diya.

Dhyan se dekhne par maine jana ki isme bhi niche jane ke liye sidhiya bani huyi hain….main savdhani se uss kund ki sidhiya utarne laga.

Mera khyal tha ki yaha bhi vaise hi badbu bhara vatavaran hoga, garmi aur har oor dhool ki parat jama hogi aur ho sakta hai ki vo jagah kide makodo se bhi bhari padi ho.... ?

Magar mere iss khyal ke vipreet jaise hi niche pahucha to vaha ek dam saaf safayi thi, jaise ki uss jagah par koi rahta ho, dhool ka kahi namo nishan tak nahi tha aur na hi hawa band jaan padti thi....haa, andhakar jarur itna gahra tha ki vaha ki kisi bhi cheez ka dikhayi dena lagbhag namumkin tha...lekin meri kundalini jagrit hone ki vajah se koi dikkat pesh nahi aa rahi thi kuch bhi dekhne me...vaha ka farsh ek dam saman aur bilkul saaf suthra tha.

Vaha bana ek kamra jo niche se upar tak chikne pattharo se bana hua tha, aur jiski lambayi choudayi bahut kam thi upar mile kamro ki tulna me.

Main charo taraf ghum ghum kar dekhne laga ki vaha kaha kya hai.... ? purab taraf ke kone me pahucha to vaha chhat ke sath latakti huyi ek zanjeer dikhayi di, jiske sath lal kapde me bandhi huyi ek gathri latak rahi thi…..uttar ki taraf lakdi ke bane do bade bade box rakhe dikhayi diye....pashchim taraf ke kone me kamre ki satah me kuye ki tarah ka ek gaddha sa nazar aaya, jiske upar jaal pada hua tha.

Aur dakshin ki taraf ghum kar deekha to deewar ke sath safed patthar ka ek singhasan nazar aaya, jis par baithi aadam kad ki murti ko gaur se dekhne ke liye jaise hi uske karib pahucha to chounk gaya.

Kyon ki jisko maine murti samjha tha vo koi patthar ki murat nahi balki ek jeeti jagti nazuk aurat thi, jo apni badi badi ankho se ek tak mujhe hi dekhe ja rahi thi.

Aisi sunsan,sab taraf se band, shapit aur tilismi jagah me kisi aurat ki moujudgi hairat aur choukane wali baat to thi hi jabki iss jagah to koi darr aur khauf se kabhi aata jata bhi nahi hai.

Raj—ye, tum koun ho..... ?

Ek gamgeen hasi uske patle hotho par doud gayi...kintu usne mere sawal ka koi jawab nahi diya.....balki jawab dene ki jagah ulta apna sawal daag diya.

Vo—kahiye saajan, kya aap ko mujhse kuch kahna hai..... ?

Mera to dimag hi chakra gaya....iss vichitra jagah me koi aurat dekhne ko milegi, pahle to yahi asha nahi ho sakti thi… upar se vah meri jani pahchani hogi ya mera naam le kar pukaregi, ye aur bhi achambhit karne wali baat thi...main itna tajjub me dooba hua tha ki muh se koi awaz hi nahi nikal rahi thi lekin phir kisi tarah se khud ko sambhala maine.

Raj—tum koun ho aur kis liye yaha baithi ho.... ? aur tumne mera naam kaise jana..... ?

Mere sawal par Vo pahle ki hi tarah sookhi sookhi hasi hasne lagi….mujhe to ab ye pagal lagne lagi thi ya phir mujhe banane ki koshish kar rahi hai, yahi sochne laga main.

Vo—main chahe koi bhi hu....aap meri fikra chhod dijiye saajan aur aap ko yaha jo kaam hai, usko jaldi hi poora kar daliye...kyon ki agar der karenge to vah kam phir nahi ho sakega jiske liye aap yaha aaye hain.

Raj (shocked)—kya tum janti ho ki hum yaha koun se kaam ke liye aaye hain...... ?

Vo—hmmmm....bahut achchi tarah.

Aur phir vo iss tarah upar ki oor dekhne lagi jaise ki usko upar se kisi tarah ki koi aahat mili ho…..aur tabhi sach much mujhe bhi upar aati huyi kuch awaz sunayi padi.

Maine aati huyi unn awazo par gaur kiya to aisa mahsoos hua jaise ki kayi log aapas me baatcheet kar rahe hain... mujhe ashcharya hua to thoda piche hat kar sidhi ke paas ja kar main upar ki oor dekhne laga.

Magar siway kuch logo ke chalne phirne ki aahat ke aur kuch bhi sunayi nahi diya...ye dekh mera ashcharya aur bhi badha aur kuch ashanka bhi hone lagi to maine uss aurat ki fikra chhod kar sidhiyo par chadhte huye upar ki oor badh gaya.

Jis samay akhiri sidhi tay kar ke maine kund ke bahar apna sir nikala to yeh dekh mujhe ashcharya hua ki vaha to koi bhi nahi tha.

Raj (mann me)—kahi vo payal didi vagairah to nahi thi jo mujhe khojte huye yaha tak aayi ho.... ? itna jaldi vo awaze kaha gayab ho gayi.... ? lekin itne andhere me didi vagairah ka yaha tak aana lagbhag namumkin hi lagta hai... ? ab pahle iss aurat ko hi dekh leta hu ki ye vastav me hai koun…..?

Jab upar aane par mujhe koi dikhayi nahi diya to main vapis pahle ki tarah sidhya utar kar kund ke andar aa gaya jaha singhasan par baithi uss aurat ne mujhe tajjub me daal diya tha.

Magar yaha aa kar to mera ashcharya aur badh gaya, kyon ki ab vo singhasan khali tha…..aur uss aurat ka vaha koi naamo nishan tak nahi tha.

Raj (mann me)—iss charo taraf se band jagah se koi admi kis tarah aur kaha gayab ho sakta hai... ? kahi yaha par koi chhipi huyi surang ya phir koi gupt rasta to nahi hai....jisse vo aurat yaha se bhag gayi ho.... ?

Ye khyal mann me panapte hi maine har taraf dhyan se dekhna shuru kar diya....aur mera ye khyal sahi nikla bhi... uss singhasan ki bagal ki deewar me mujhe ek bahut hi chhoti surang ka nicha sa muhana nazar aaya jo iss tarah se bana hua tha ki singhasan par baithne wala vyakti sahaj hi uss raste se utar kar ja sakta tha.

Patthar ki ek silli (tiles jaisi) apni jagah se hat kar niche ki taraf jhooli huyi thi.....aur vaha ek tang (sankra) rasta dikhayi pad raha tha.

Raj (mann me)—iss surang me ghus kar dekhu kya ki andar ab kya naya tamasha yaha dekhne ko milta hai….? Lekin pahle apni sab dilrubao ki khoj khabar to le lu…pata nahi kaha bhatak rahi hain ye….? Ye qila waqayi me bahut rahasyamayi hai.

Issi tarah ki baate mann me sochte vicharte huye main palat kar kund ki sidhiya chadhte huye upar ki oor chal diya… magar akhiri sidhi par pahuchne se pahle hi mujhe punah ruk jana pada…..kisi ki chhaya mujhe uss kund par dikhayi di thi aisa jaise ki koi jhuk kar niche ki taraf dekh raha ho.

Waqt jaise jaise badh raha tha, vaha ka vatavaran utni hi tezi se badal raha tha….qile ke bahar aas maan me jor jor se bijli kadak rahi thi…’’kadddd-kadddddd……..kaddd-kadddddd’’…

Aapas me milte badal raat ke andhere me roshni bichhate huye yahi darsha rahe the ki jald hi koi toofan yaha kadam rakhne wala hai.

Vahi ek andhere kamre me neha idhar se udhar bhatak rahi thi….kisi bachche ki tarah ro rahi thi vo….tabhi usse raj ki yaad aate hi vo aur bhi jor jor se phoot phoot ke rone lagi….ankho me aaye anshu ko kisi tarah se saaf karte huye vo khadi huyi

Neha (rote huye)—raaajjjjjjjj………..raaaajjjjjjjjjj

Neha cheekhti rahi lekin uss band andhere kamre me uski ye awaz goonjti rahi …..jise sunne ke liye raj vaha tha hi nahi……lekin neha ko ye kaha pata tha ki uske theek piche koi khada hua hai….jise neha ke dil me aisa darr aur khauf dekh kar behad khushi ho rahi thi.

Neha besudh hoti huyi poori ankhe khol kar anjne me hi uski taraf palat kar aage badhne lagi aur phir uske kano me kisi ke fusfusane ki awaze sunayi dene lagi.

Kisi ki awaz sunte hi uske dil me darr aur badh gaya…..tabhi vo awaz itni nazdeek aa gayi ki usko aisa lagne laga ki koi uske kaan me kuch kah raha hai.

Chalte chalte vo phir se kisi cheez se takra kar niche uske upar gir gayi….tabhi ek baar phir se kamre me roshni phail gayi aur jaise hi neha ki nazar apne samne padi cheez par gayi to uski ruh kaamp gayi.

Kyon ki vo iss samay jiske upar giri huyi thi vo ek taza kshat vikshat laash thi kisi ki….jiski ek ankh, aadhi naak, ek kaan, ek hath aur ek pair kata hua vahi pada tha….pet ka maans poora bahar nikla hua tha….jise ki kisi ne usko abhi abhi noch noch ke khaya ho.

Neha (cheekh kar)—aaaaaaaaa,,,nahiiiiiiiiii……raaaajjjjjjjjjjjjj

Neha uske upar se uth kar haal behaal ho kar bahar ki taraf bhagi aur idhar uss laash ne apni ankhe khol di..aur uth kar neha ke piche chal diya ek pair se hi.

Vahi hospital me doctor ne veer ko dubara se dawayi ki parchi likh kar diya aur sath hi unn medicines ko jo mrinal samet layi thi unko vapis counter par loutane ko kaha.

Veer—ok thanks doctor…main abhi aaya

Mrinal—ye balatkari, ruk main bhi chalti hu….tera kya bharosa vaha pahuchte hi kisi ka balatkar karne lag gaya to…?

Veer—nahi koi jarurat nahi hai tumhe jane ki…yahi ruko..main lata hu

Lekin mrinal kaha manne wali thi…vo veer ke piche piche chal di….sanyog se vahi doctor raste me dikh gaya aur shayad usne bhi dono ko dekh liya tha….dekhte hi vo turant palat ke andar cabin me ghus gaya.

Mrinal (mann me)—maine itni mehnat se achchi achchi dawayi layi thi aur ye dok ghar ne unko vapis kar diya…khud ko bahut hoshiyar samajhti hai ye…..isko maza chakhana padega.

Counter par pahuchte hi veer ne unn dawayi lo return kar diya aur naya parcha pakda diya…lekin jaise hi dukan wale ne veer ke sath mrinal ko dekha to turant chair se uth kar hath jod liya.

Vo—madam jo bhi chahiye…aap nikal lo….aap ke liye sab free hai.

Mrinal (ankhe dikhate huye)—kya kaha tune….? Mujhe farri (free) hai ….? Gaali deta hai…ruk abhi batati hu tujhe.

Veer (sir pakad ke)—hey bhagwan…ye ladki bhi na….! ye…mrinallll nahiii..rukkk jaa….nahiii

Mrinal turant counter kud kar andar ghus gayi aur veer ke mana karte karte usne dukan wale ki gardan pakad ke ghasit liya….vo usko kaan ke niche bajane hi wali thi ki tabhi veer ne jaldi se usko pakad liya aur ek kaand hote hote rah gaya.

Mrinal (kuch utha kar)—ye kya hai….?

Vo—ye fevi quick hai.

Mrinal—achcha achcha, samajh gayi…..ye fuyi quyi hai….

Veer—chal ab yaha se..

Mrinal—thoda ruk na.....ye kabutar.....ye fuyi quyi ko kaise khate hain.... ?

Vo (shocked)—ye kuch bhi chipkane ke kaam me aata hai.

Mrinal—isse sab kuch chipak jayega na….?

Vo (picha chhudane ke liye)—bilkul

Mrinal—to phir theek hai…..chal balatkari….(mann me)—ab batati hu uss dok tarrrr ko.

Vahi mandir me chanchal abhi bhi rote huye bhagwan se vinti karne me lagi huyi thi jabki vidhya band kamre me akeli baithi anshu baha rahi thi...

Achanak uski nazar samne rakhe dressing table ke kaanch par gayi to uski dhadkan hi jaise rukne ko ho gayi…kaanch par kuch dhundhla dhundhla sa jhil mila raha tha…..aur bhi achanak uss mirror me ek chehra ubharne laga dhire dhire……..jaise hi vo chehra spast naar aaya jo ki bahut hi bayanak chehra nazar aa raha tha…..usko dekhte hi vidhya ki jor se dahshat ke maare cheekh nikal gayi…..vo jo bhi tha shayad iss samay uske piche khada tha.

Ye ehsaas hote hi uski ruh andar tak kaamp gayi…..vidhya ke poore jism me darr aur khauf se sihran doud gayi…uske hath pair thar tharane lage.

Darte darte usne kisi tarah himmat kar ke apni gardan ko piche ghumane lagi…….

Friends, Tilism ek makdi ke jaal ki tarah hota hai, ki agar uss jaal me koi jeev fas gaya to itni jaldi nahi nikal sakta...vo agar ek jaal se niklega to turant dusre jaal me fas jayega...aise hi karte huye vo faste nikalte, faste nikalte huye hi uss jaal se bahar aa sakta hai..ek dam se bahar nahi nikal sakta.

Jaisa ki aap sabhi jante hain ki ye Qila Tilismi hone ke sath hi sath abhishapit bhi hai..qile se sambandhit nagar aur uss nagar ke aas paas tak insan aur janwar to kya koi ped poudha tak jivit nahi hain...Sadiyo se vo nagar veeran hai...jaha koi jane ki sochta bhi nahi, uss nagar ke paas se bhi nahi gujarta....agar aise me hero is tilism ko itna jaldi tod dega to qile ke baare me kahi gayi baate galat sabit ho jayengi....vo ek dusre ko charitarth nahi karengi. aisa lagega jaise ki tilism bahut kamjor tha jisko raj ne ek jhatke me hi tod diya...agar aisa ho jata hai tab to qila aur vo nagar aaj tak veeran nahi hona chahiye tha.

Anyway, ye sab maine isliye kaha hai kyon ki kayi mitro ka sochna hai ki main qile ke matter ko lamba khich raha hu...lekin aisa karna kahani aur uss vishay me kahe gaye vaktavya ko charitarth karne ke uddeshya se hai.

Agle do teen updates me Qile se jude sabhi rahasyo se parda uth jayega...Tab tak mera sabhi se anurodh hai ki vo apne antah sthal me dhairya aur dheeraj banaye rakhe.

"Dhanyawad...Shubh Ratri"

bhai bhai bhai
as usual best update
bhai aapne bikul shi h tilism kamzor nhi lagna chaiye
apne hisab se chalao qki full mazza aarha h ye tilism ka khel dekhne mein \
vo singhasan waali ladki kon thi ye bhi ek raaj h
or vidhya k saamne kon aagya??
mrinal ab kya karne wali h ??


ab rukna mushkil h
jaldi hi agla update de dena
besabri se intzaar rhega
brilliant update
keep rocking

 

[Sanju]

Mast update bhai tilism to sachme raj ki dimag kharab kar rahi hai aur ae mrinal to veer ki leni par tuli hui hai