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A hero can kill someone to save the world...

but a villain can destroy the world to save one...


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Ronit - beta dekh rhi ho kitni bheed hai.... ticket nhi milega..... q bhai ticket milega kya.....


Driver - koshish karunga sir.....


Ronit - theek hai yeh lo paise 3 ticket le lena.....


Phir driver ne paise le liye aur luggage gaadi se nikaalke andar le ke chala gaya.... aur uske peeche ronit, vandana aur sanjana bhiiii....ghar ke andar driver ne luggage wahan rakh diya.....


itne main ghar ka caretaker wahan aa gaya.... saath main uski wife bhi thi..... (ronit ne yahan pe india ke 2 logon ka rakha hua tha ghar ki dekhbhaal ke liye.....Rakhi aur Ajay) rakhi turant kitchen main chali gayi kuch khane pine ki cheez Lane......


Ajay - namaste sir.....


Ronit - namaste..... kaise ho ajay.....


Ajay - theeek hun malik..... aapka jaise hi call aaya maine yahan ki saaf safai karwa di thi aur sab zaroorat ka samaan mangwa liya tha.....


Ronit - goood.... bahut acha kiya.....


Ajay - maalik bahut dino se main apne ghar apne bharat nahi gaya hun..... agar aapki anumati ho toh main 1 hafte ke liye chala jaun......


Ronit - theeek hai ajay chale jao.... waise bhi ham log abhi kuch din yahin rukenge.....


Ajay - theeek hai.....


Ronit - lekin jldiii aane ki koshish karna......


Ajay - bsss 1 hafte main aa jayenge maalik.....


itne main ajay ki dharampatni rakhi ne naasta table pe laga diya.... aur ronit vandana and sanjana naasta karne lage......


Ronit - tum log jao ajay..... packing kro main sham ki ticket kara deta hun.....


Ajay - theek hai.....


phir ajay aur rakhi apne room ki taraf chale jate hain jo main door ke paas tha..... unke jaate hi......


Vandana - unko india q bhej rhe hain abhi..... khana main banaungiiii kya......


Ronit - vandu dekho woh log kitne saalon se yahan hai.... unka bhi mnnnn karta hoga ki kuch din apni family ke saath bitayen......


Sanjana - hnnn papa sahi kaha..... waise mummy aao tension mat lo main saare kaam kar dungi..... theeeek hai.....


Vandana - aaaj tak apna ek kapda toh dhula nhi hai..... saare kaaam kregi.... huhhhh....


Sanjana - papa.....


Ronit - vandana jab tak yeh sikhegiii nhiiii toh kar kaise payegiiii kuch...... aur phir shadi ke baad ise taane sunne ko milenge...... tum iski help karna aise yeh bhi khana banana aur dusre kaaam karna seekh jayegi......


Vandana - theeek hai jiiii.....


abhi yeh log baatein kar hi rhe the ki woh driver andar aaya aur ronit ke paas aake use ticket dene laga.....


Driver - yeh lijiye sir bahut mushqil se mile hain..... yahan par villain ka bahut craze hai.... islie bahut jyada bheed thi ticket line main.....


Sanjana - ohhh acha..... waise yeh villain hai kaun....


Driver - kehte hain ki yeh india main delhi se hai.... bahut deadly fighter pichli baar isne apne opponents ko koi mauka hi nahi diya tha..... aur kuch hi der main maar dala tha.....


Sanjana /vandana - uffff.... aisi bhi fight hoti hai kya jisme jaan se hi maar dete hain.....


Ronit - aur nhiii toh kiya..... tum logke sunke hi rongte khade ho gaye..... isiliye mana kar rha tha ticket lene ko.....mujhe pata tha tum log nahi dekh paogi.....


Sanjana - nhiiii paa main dekhungi.....


Ronit - theeek hai.....


Phir woh driver wahan se chala gaya..... aur idhar yeh log bhi apne rooms main chal diye rest krne.........


idhar aditya manohar ke ghar main batha hua soch rha tha ki manohar bhai ko abhi us venky ka naam nahi bataunga use pakad ke seedha bhai ke saamne haazir karunga.......agar naam bata diya uska toh bhai kehenge ki pakad ke q nahi laaya use aur phir ho skata hai gusse main mujhe bhi maar den.....


thori der main manohar stairs se neeche ki aur aata hua dikhayi diya..... aditya apni jagah pe khada ho gaya...... manohar paas aaya uske aur usko baithne ka ishara karke khud bhi baith gaya ek sofe pe......


Manohar - toh kya pata chala aditya......


Aditya - bhai maine court pahunchke us advocate ke baare main pata lagaya phir pata chala ki uska naam rameshwar hai aur pahunch gaya uske chamber main...... jahan ja ke main usse mila toh usne bataya ek call aaya tha uske paas aur usi ne aisa karne ko kaha tha......


Manohar - kuch naaam waam bataya tha usne.....


Aditya - nhiiii bhai naaam usko bhi nahi pata hai.... maine usko yeh case ladne ko mana kar dia hai..... aur usse bola maine ki usko phone kar aur yahan milne ko bula..... rameshwar ne kaha tha jaise hi woh aane ko kehega sabse pehle mujhe hi khabar karega......


Manohar - theeek hai..... us rameshwar par nazar rakhna aur jald se jald jisne case kiya tha usko mere saamne hazir kana.... samajh gaye.....


Aditya - hnnnn bhai aisa hi hoga......


Phir aditya wahan se uthke bahar aa gaya....... bahar halka halka andhera hone laga tha...... woh jaise hi bahar nikla achanak woh kisi se takra gaya..... saamne dekha toh vikram tha......


Aditya - kya hua vikram bhai kahan khoye hue ho.....


Vikram - kahin nahi yrrrr..... bsss bhai ke paas ja rha tha...itne main tum aa gaye saamne se......


Aditya - theeek hai jao......


vikram ne Aditya se jhoot bol diya tha lekin woh abhi soch main gum tha ki bhai ko kya jawaaab dun..... yahi sochte hue woh manohar ke paas aake chupchaap khada ho gaya......


Manohar - kya hua.... khade hi rahoge ya baithoge bhiiiiii......


yeh sunke vikram baith jaata hai lekin uske chehre pe chinta ki lakeer saaf dikh rhi thi.....


Manohar - kya hua kuch preshan dikh rhe ho.....


Vikram - hnnnn bhai baat hi kuch aisi hai..... main agra aur delhi gaya tha avinash ki talaash main jahan jaake pata chala ki avinash ko kisi ne maar diya hai.....


Manohar - aur drugs ka kya hua......


Vikram - bhai hmne avinash ke dono addon par chaanbeen ki lekin hame thora sa bhi drugs nahi mila phir hame delhi main avinash ka partner mila usne bataya ki unlogon ne avinash ko maaarke drugs ko jala diya tha......


drugs jalne ki baaat sunkar manohar bahut gussa aaya uski aankhein laal ho gayi usne uthke vikram ke gale ko pakad ke zor se dabane laga......


Manohar -behnchod tu jaaanta hai ki mere drugs ko kisne jalaya phir bhi tu use maarke aane ke bajaaay mujhe aakar yeh bata rha hai ki mera drugs usne jala diya....


vikram ki aankhein aankhein bahar aane lagi thi yeh dekhke manohar ne uski gardan ko chor diya..... vikram khaanste hue apni saansein durust karne laga.....


Vikram - bhai main use maarke hi aata lekin mere paaas wahan bande kam the aur hathiyaar bhi nahi the..... islie yahan se lene aaya tha......


Manohar - yeh baaat pehle nahi bata sakta tha..... jab mar jaata tab batata.... ab jaa jiski bhi zaroorat ho le ke jaa....


yeh sunke vikram wahan se jaane laga abhi woh door ke paas pahuncha tha ki manohar phir bol para aur woh piche dekhne laga.....


Manohar - agar aise hi wapas aa gaya.... toh tujhe main zinda jala dunga.... maarke aana ya marke aana.....


Vikram - thik hai bhai......


Aur phir vikram bahar chala gaya..... agle din sham main venky ki flight newyork main land hui..... woh log airport se bahar nikale hi the ki tabhi wahan venky ka trainer aake unke paas khada ho gaya......


trainer - welcome again in newyork ViLLAiN.....



Aaj ke liye itna hi.....
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agle din sham main venky ki flight newyork main land hui..... woh log airport se bahar nikale hi the ki tabhi wahan venky ka trainer aake unke paas khada ho gaya......


trainer - welcome again in newyork ViLLAiN........


phir woh aage badhke aaya aur venky ko gale laga liya......


Trainer - kahan chaloge mere ghar rukoge ya michael ke hi ghar main..... mera ghar club ke saamne hi hai..... tumhare lie aasani hogi.....


main - tunhare hi ghar pe deher lete hai.....waise fight kitne time hai....


Trainer - 10 baje hai.....


main - abhi 7 baj rhe hain..... jldi chalo mujhe warmup bhi karna hai thora.....


ham log ek gaadi main baith gayi aur gaadi chal di.....


Main - waise guruji fighter kahan ka hai......


Trainer - pichli baaar jise tumne maara tha yeh usi ka bhai hai..... yeh apne bhai se jyada khatarnaak hai bahut furteela bhi hai..... bach ke rehna usse......


Main - guruji aap mujhe bharosa rakhiye.... bhagwaan ne chaha toh main use hara dunga..... waise aapko kya lagta hai main usse kamzor hun.....


Trainer - main yeh nahi keh rha ki tum kamzor ho lekin agar tum kal aate toh tumhe thora time mil jaata aur main apne bandon se fight karake warmup bhi kara deta aur tum thora rest bhi kar lete ..... lekin aaj tumhe waqt hi nahi milega qki thori der main hi fight shuru ho jaegi......


Main - acha yeh baat hai..... waise aap tension na lo..... main 2 din pehle ek fight ladke aaya hun....


trainer - acha.....


itne main hi trainer ka ghar aa gaya aur saamne hi club tha abhi se wahan kaafi jyada crowd tha.....nisha kajal aur michael andar chale gaye the.... main wahan khada ho ke idhar udhar ka nazara dekhne laga..... tabhi crowd main khade kuch logon ki nazar mujhpe gayi....... tabhi wahan shor shuru ho gaya.......


ViLLAiN .... ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN...... ViLLAiN........ ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN......


Yeh shor sunke sanjana bhi apni balcony main aa gayi thi lekin uske aane se pehle main michael ke saath ghar ke andar chala gaya tha..... us club ke gurads ne unlogon ko kisi tarah rokke wapas club ki taraf bhej diya...... crowd ke wapas jaate hi sanjana bhi rooom main aa gayi.....


Idhar main ghar main aaya toh trainer ki patni sabko unka rooom dikhane lagi... sab apne apne room main chale gaye.....main trainer ke paas aaya....


main - justin.......(trainer ka name justin hai)


Justin - hnnnn venky bolo....


Main - ring main kitte time jaana hai..... 9:50 pe......


Justin - hnnnn.....


Main - theek hai 9:30 pe chalenge thori der warmup kar lunga....


Justin - theeek hai......


phir justin bahar chala jaata hai..... aur main nisha ke room ki taraf jahan nisha rahul ke kapde change kr rhi thi.......


Nisha - dekho venky ache se ladna tumhe kuch hoga toh nahi.....


Main - areee mujhe kuch nahi hoga.....


Nisha - thik hai jldi fight khatm karna.... saamne wale ko koi moka hi mat dena tumhe maarne ka.....


main - hnnn baba.....


phir maine rahul ko pakda aur bed le let gaya.... aur rahul ko apne seene se laga ke apne upar lita liya...... woh totli jubaan main mujhe papa papa kehne laga..... maine pyaar se uske gaal pe kiss kr lia.... itne main nisha bhi mere ek haath pe sir rakhke let gayi........ aur phir mere baalon main haath pherne lagi.....


main - kya hua aaj mood bana hai kya......


Nisha - pata nhiiii.....


itna kehke woh uth ke wahan se chali gayi...... maine rahul ko paas main lita diya.... aur apna mobile nikaal ke use on kiya..... maine wifi se mobile connect hi kiya tha ki WhatsApp par message aane lage.....


ek message rameshwar ka bhi tha maine use reply kar diya ki 4din main aaunga milne..... mohini ke bhi bahut se message the lekin maine unhe dekhe bina mobile off kar diya...... aur phir maine socha thori der so leta hun.......


dusri taraf aditya aur vikram apne apne addon ki taraf nikal gaye...... vikram ne apne adde par pahuncha toh sab log kaam main busy the..... woh boss ke room main chala gaya..... boss shayad bathroom main tha qki paani ki aawaz aa rhi thi islie woh wahin baith gaya..... aur intezaar karne laga.... thori der main boss ne bathroom ka darwaza khola aur saamne vikram ko baithe dekha......


boss - areee aap kab aaye bhai.....


vikram - abhich thori der pehle jab tu naha rha tha......


Boss - koi kaaam tha kya.....


Vikram - yeh bata woh kahan gaya gai..... aur kab ayega.....


Boss - mere ko yeh toh pata hai ki woh newyork gaya hua hai....lekin yeh nahi oata ki wapas delhi ayeha ya kahin aur jayega..... qki aaj tak mujhe uska asli thikaana nahi pata..... lekin itna zaroor pata hai ki woh mumbai main kahin rehta hai....


Vikram - yeh toh badi problem ho gayi..... Mumbai main use kahan kahan dhundenge......(mnnn main) ek kaam karta hun aditya ko bhi apne saath Mumbai leke chalta hun qki use mumbai ke baare main sab pata hai.... aaj hi usse milke baaat karta hun.... yeh sahi rehega.....)


Vikram - theeek hai.... main tumhe bataunga ki kab chalna hai mumbai....


Boss - theeek hai....


Phir vikram wahan se nikal jaata hai aditya ke ghar ki taraf..... wahin aditya apne ghar pahunchta hai aur rameshwar ko call laga deta.... call pick hote hi rameshwar bol parta.....


Rameshwar - hello.... kaun....


Aditya - tera hello gaya maa chudane.... yeh bata us venky ka kuch pata chala ki nahi kab ayega tujhse milne....


Rameshwar - abhi uska message aaya tha thori der pehle keh rha tha 4 din baad ayega woh yahan milne.....


Aditya - theeek hai jaise hi woh aaye mujhe call kar dena.....


Udhar venky so rha tha ki tabhi use laga use koi jaga rha hai usne apni aankhein kholi toh saamne kajal thi.....


Main - kya hua kajal.....


Kajal - hoga kya.... Justin aaya hai tunhe bula raha hai....


Main - time kitna hua hai....


Kajal - 9:40....


main - areeee yrrrr...... bahut late ho gaya..... pehle q nahi jagaya mujhe......


Kajal - 10 minutes se jaga rhi hun lekin tum uthne ka naam hi nahi le rahe the..... ab utho jaldi.....


Phir main jldise utha aur muh haath dhoke apne kapde change kiye aur apne bag se face mask nikaal ke bahar aa gyaa......


Justin - kya yrrr itni der laga di ab toh warmup ka bhi moka nahi hai.....


Main - koi baaat nahi chalo.....



phir maine apna mask lagaya chehre pe aur phir main nisha rahul kajal michael aur justin chal diye club ke back door ki taraf...... andar se bahut tez aawaaz aa rhi thi..........


ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN...... ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN.... ViLLAiN.... ViLLAinnnnnnnnnn......





aaj ke lie itna hi.....

continued.....
Bahot behtareen shaandaar
Update bhai zaberdast
 

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phir maine apna mask lagaya chehre pe aur phir main nisha rahul kajal michael aur justin chal diye club ke back door ki taraf...... andar se bahut tez aawaaz aa rhi thi..........


ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN...... ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN.... ViLLAiN.... ViLLAinnnnnnnnnn......


main piche ke gate se club ke andar aaya.... wahan ka nazara dekhke...... behenchod kitne log hain...... phir justin baaki sabko leke upar chala gaya.... main aur michael ring ki taraf chal pade tabhi wahan kisi ne ringlight mere upar focus ki aur audience mujhe dekhke mera naam zor zor se pookarne lagi...


main chalte hue ring ke andar aaya aur saamne khade fighter ko dekhne laga behnchod saand maafik dikh rha tha...... kuch log xavier xavier bhi chilla rahe the jisse mujhe pata chala ho na ho is saand ka naam hi xavier......maine apni pehli fight main jisko maar diya tha xavier usi ka chota bhai hai....


Lekin behnchod yeh apne bhai se bhi jyada takatwar aur lamba chauda tha.....xavier ki height kmsekam 6.11 fit thi.... … khair aapko ek baar phir bata dun ki......


Yeh free style death match fighting..... Free styke isliye kehte hai qki isme koi rules nhiiii matlab chahe jaise maaro.... lekin yeh nhi ki behnchod gun leke aaye aur maarke jeet gaye.... bssss haath pair se jahan chaho maar sakte ho koi rokthaam nahi hai........


Aur death match islie kehte hain qki behnchod fight main saamne wale ko jaan se maardo ya khud hi mar jao..... hnnn agar saamne wala chahe toh maaf kar sakta hai lekin aaj tak kisi ne maaf nahi kiya hai kisi ko bhi.....


main ring ke andar beech main jaake khada ho gaya..... udhar corner main khada xavier bhi mere paas aake khada ho gaya..... uski aankhen gusse main laal ho rhi thi....


Xavier - you kill my brother..... main tumhe tadpaa tadpaa ke maarunga.... tu apni jaan ke bheeg mangega tab bhi nahi chorunga.....


main - woh toh waqt batayega.....lekin tu tension mat le tujhe bhi tere bhai ki tarah upar pahuncha dunga.....


mera itna kehna tha ki xavier ne ek paunch maarne ke lie apna uthaya tha ki itne main refree wahan aa gaya aur uska haath pakad liya.....


Refree - sabr kro..... abhi moka milega maarne aur maar khane ka.....


phir xavier ne apna haath niche kar lia..... phir refree ne ham dono ko aamne saamne khada kar diya.....

Refree - are you ready for fight.....


Ham dono ne saath main hi yes kaha......


Refree - OK lets fight ……………


refree ke fight kehte hi Xavier ne mujhe ek punch mara aur main jaake ring se jaake takraya ..... idhar refree bhi ring ke bahar nikal gaya tha.... aur ring poori tareeke se band ho gayi thi kahin se bhi bahar nikalne ki jagah nahi thi.....


main ring se jaise hi takraaaya xavier mere paas aa gaya tha aur usne hawa main jump laga ke mere muh par ek flying kick maari jisse mere muh se khun aa gaya.... usne mujhe maarne ke liye abki brrr phir piche se jump lagayi hi thi ki main yeh dekh gaya aur apni jagah se hat gaya..... jisse uski yeh jump vyarth chali gayi..... aur woh apna santulan barkaraar nahi rakh paya aur zameen main gir pada.....


main jldi se utha aur uske khade hote hi main jump karke seedha uske muh par punch maara jisse woh ek baar phir se zameen se ja takraaya......lekin woh girte hi turant khada ho gaya..... tab mujhe laga ki yeh aasani se nahi harega.... woh jaise hi khada hua maine uske chest par punch maarne ke liye jaise hi jump lagake uske paas aaya usne mera punch padne se pehle bahut hi tezi ke saath apne haaath se mere chest pe punch maar diya..... main uchalkar door ja gira.....


phir xavier ne wahin se jump lagake mere upar aake gira..... behnchod jaanwar jaisa tha xavier uske mere upar girte hi mujhe gaand faad dard hua..... ab mujhe apni maut nazar aane lagi thi..... main kisi tarah khada hua..... yeh achi baat thi ki uske mere uoar girne ke baawazood mujhe jyada chot nahi aayi thi.....


main abhi khada hi hua tha ki xavier ne roman reigns maafik hawa main uchalke mere thopde par ek punch maara jiski wajah se mere mask toh nikal hi gaya tha saath me main jaake lohe ki jaaliyon se bane ring se jake takraaya.....


mere girte hi xavier mere paas aaya aur ek ke baad kayi saari punches maaarta raha meri back main jisse mujhe halka dard hone laga tha..... lekin mujhe jaise us maarse koi vaasta hi nahi tha..... qki mujhe saamne baithi hui apni vandana didi dikh gayi thi.... main unhe hi dekhta rha..... phir mera dhyaan toota jab xavier ne mujhe upar uthaya aur phir phenk diya jaaliyon main....... yeh dekhke nisha aur kajal ka toh bura haaal tha.... nisha toh rone lagi thi......kajal ka bhi aisa hi kuch haaal tha...... wahin sanjana ke saath woh driver bhi baitha hua tha.....


sanjana - tum toh bahut tareef kar rhe the villain ki.....


Driver - pata nahi aaj kya ho gaya ise.... waise abhi fight khatm nhiii huiiiii hai....


Sanjana - hnnnn....


idhar mere girte hi Michael dod ke mere paas aaya woh ring ke bahar hi tha.....


Michael - bhai utho jldi......


Main - abe uth raha hun.... tu pehle sun tere peeche 10th row main sanjana aur uski family baithi hai unpar dhyaan rakhna ki kahan jaati hai woh.....


Michael - theeek hai bhai..... bhai ab jldi se fight khatm kro.....


main - behnchod ab bahut hua.... ab ise tapkane ka time aa gaya hai.....


mere muh par khun laga hua tha jisse mujhe abbhi koi pehchaan na pata..... mujhe khada dekh xavier meri taraf aaya maine turant ek jump maari aur uske sir le ek zordaar punch maara woh jaake ring se takraya...... aur turant khada ho gaya....


maine ishare se use apne paas bulaya woh gusse main mujhe maarke ke liye meri taraf bhaga aur jaise hi usne mujhe punch maarne ki koshish ki maine uska punch apne ek haath se block kiya aur dusre haath se poori taqat se uske chest pe ek takatwar punch maara jiski wajah se woh niche jaake gira..... lekin punch itna zordaar tha ki use uthne main time lagta aur maine yeh mauka nahi gawaya aur uske pet pe jaake baith gaya aur uske chest pe punches ki bochaar kar di..... uske muh khun aa gaya tha aur dard ke maare chillaye ja rha tha..... jab usse aur dard bardaasht nahi hua usne zameen par haath patak ke apni haar swikaar kar li.....


ab yeh mere upar tha ki main use maaf kar dun ya maar dun.....tabhi bheed se ek aurat bhaag ke ring ke paas aayi aur haath jod kar kehne lagi plzzz mere pati ko maaf kar do...... maine uske aansoo dekh ke xavier ko maaf kar diya...... aur uske upar se hat gaya aur haath ke ishare se use le jaane ko bola..... mera itna ishara karte hi wahan shor shuru ho gaya..... phir refree mere paas aaya aur mera haath utha ke mujhe jeeta hua goshit kar diya..... tabhi michael ring main aaya maine usse toliya liya aur muh saaf karte hue bahar aaya.....


Main - michael ab nazar rakh unpar....


Michael - ok.....


phir jis side sanjana and family baithi hui thi us side aakar maine apna toliya apne face se hataya..... waise hi sanjana ki nazar mujhpe gayi...... main neeche baith hue logon se handshake kar rha tha...... sanjana gabrakar apni mom se kheni lagi......


Sanjana - maa neeche dekho.... villain hi venky hai.....


Vandana - kya.?.?.?


vandana ne jaise hi niche dekha woh dekh ke hairaan reh gayi qki jisse bachne ke lie itni door aayi thi.....woh saamne hi khada tha..... tabhi maine achanak apni nazar upar ki jise dekhke unlogon ne apna muh chupa liya..... main unhe andhekha karte hue back door ki taraf chal diya.... jahan nisha aur kajal khadi thi main wahan se justin ke ghar chala gaya.......


idhar sanjana aur vandana jldi jldi chal rhi thi ronit bhi hairaan tha ki aakhir hua kya...... woh log apne ghar ko pahunchi aur andar dakhil ho gayi......idhar micahel ne unhe jaaate hue dekha......aur wapas aa gaya justin ke ghar......


Ronit - kya hua tum log itna dari hui q ho.....


Vandana - tumne venky ko nahi dekha kya.???


ronit - kahan tha venky??


Sanjana - villain hi toh venky tha papa......


Ronit - kya??


idhar Michael ne mujhe aake bataya ki woh log saamne wale ghar main hain main turant chal diya..... abhi ronit ne kya hi kaha tha..... ki piche se darwaza khulne ki aahat hui woh sab piche mudke dekhne lage piche main khada tha michael ke saath.......


Main - pooori family eksaath ikhatta hai aaj..... kya baat hai.....


Ronit - aao venky.... baitho.....


Main - hnnnn baithne hi toh aaya tha main yahan..... main yahan yeh pata karne aaya hun ki brrr brrr mujhe maarne ki koshish q kar rhe ho tum log.....


Vandana - sunna chahte ho q maarna chahti hun tumhe toh suno.....


main - lekin shuru se sab batana.......


Vandana - hnnnn shuru se hi bataungi.......



aaaj ke liye itna hi.....

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well..action laba lab ek aur behtareen update..hmm... kaafi ghamasan fight huyi dono ke bich...haalanki xavier pehle bhari pata venky pe.... upar se venky ne apni bahan ko dekh fighting se focus hat gaya... isika faida uthake xavier tut pata tha uspe lekin venky aise kaise haar jaata... finally venky ne khud ko sambhala aur tut pata us xavier pe.... waise wo jaan se hi maar deta xavier ko ...par xavier ki biwi ko minnate karte dekh chhod diya ushe....
Really ek action ka mahol banane mein aap mahir hai...

So aakhiri kar dono bhai bahan aamne saamne baithe the ....
ab jaake ye baat saamne aayegi ki akhir aisa kya hua jiske chalte vandana venky ki jaan lene pe utaru ho gayi hai.... aakhir galti kis ki hai aur saza kisko dena chaahti hai...

Shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
 
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phir maine apna mask lagaya chehre pe aur phir main nisha rahul kajal michael aur justin chal diye club ke back door ki taraf...... andar se bahut tez aawaaz aa rhi thi..........


ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN...... ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN.... ViLLAiN.... ViLLAinnnnnnnnnn......


main piche ke gate se club ke andar aaya.... wahan ka nazara dekhke...... behenchod kitne log hain...... phir justin baaki sabko leke upar chala gaya.... main aur michael ring ki taraf chal pade tabhi wahan kisi ne ringlight mere upar focus ki aur audience mujhe dekhke mera naam zor zor se pookarne lagi...


main chalte hue ring ke andar aaya aur saamne khade fighter ko dekhne laga behnchod saand maafik dikh rha tha...... kuch log xavier xavier bhi chilla rahe the jisse mujhe pata chala ho na ho is saand ka naam hi xavier......maine apni pehli fight main jisko maar diya tha xavier usi ka chota bhai hai....


Lekin behnchod yeh apne bhai se bhi jyada takatwar aur lamba chauda tha.....xavier ki height kmsekam 6.11 fit thi.... … khair aapko ek baar phir bata dun ki......


Yeh free style death match fighting..... Free styke isliye kehte hai qki isme koi rules nhiiii matlab chahe jaise maaro.... lekin yeh nhi ki behnchod gun leke aaye aur maarke jeet gaye.... bssss haath pair se jahan chaho maar sakte ho koi rokthaam nahi hai........


Aur death match islie kehte hain qki behnchod fight main saamne wale ko jaan se maardo ya khud hi mar jao..... hnnn agar saamne wala chahe toh maaf kar sakta hai lekin aaj tak kisi ne maaf nahi kiya hai kisi ko bhi.....


main ring ke andar beech main jaake khada ho gaya..... udhar corner main khada xavier bhi mere paas aake khada ho gaya..... uski aankhen gusse main laal ho rhi thi....


Xavier - you kill my brother..... main tumhe tadpaa tadpaa ke maarunga.... tu apni jaan ke bheeg mangega tab bhi nahi chorunga.....


main - woh toh waqt batayega.....lekin tu tension mat le tujhe bhi tere bhai ki tarah upar pahuncha dunga.....


mera itna kehna tha ki xavier ne ek paunch maarne ke lie apna uthaya tha ki itne main refree wahan aa gaya aur uska haath pakad liya.....


Refree - sabr kro..... abhi moka milega maarne aur maar khane ka.....


phir xavier ne apna haath niche kar lia..... phir refree ne ham dono ko aamne saamne khada kar diya.....

Refree - are you ready for fight.....


Ham dono ne saath main hi yes kaha......


Refree - OK lets fight ……………


refree ke fight kehte hi Xavier ne mujhe ek punch mara aur main jaake ring se jaake takraya ..... idhar refree bhi ring ke bahar nikal gaya tha.... aur ring poori tareeke se band ho gayi thi kahin se bhi bahar nikalne ki jagah nahi thi.....


main ring se jaise hi takraaaya xavier mere paas aa gaya tha aur usne hawa main jump laga ke mere muh par ek flying kick maari jisse mere muh se khun aa gaya.... usne mujhe maarne ke liye abki brrr phir piche se jump lagayi hi thi ki main yeh dekh gaya aur apni jagah se hat gaya..... jisse uski yeh jump vyarth chali gayi..... aur woh apna santulan barkaraar nahi rakh paya aur zameen main gir pada.....


main jldi se utha aur uske khade hote hi main jump karke seedha uske muh par punch maara jisse woh ek baar phir se zameen se ja takraaya......lekin woh girte hi turant khada ho gaya..... tab mujhe laga ki yeh aasani se nahi harega.... woh jaise hi khada hua maine uske chest par punch maarne ke liye jaise hi jump lagake uske paas aaya usne mera punch padne se pehle bahut hi tezi ke saath apne haaath se mere chest pe punch maar diya..... main uchalkar door ja gira.....


phir xavier ne wahin se jump lagake mere upar aake gira..... behnchod jaanwar jaisa tha xavier uske mere upar girte hi mujhe gaand faad dard hua..... ab mujhe apni maut nazar aane lagi thi..... main kisi tarah khada hua..... yeh achi baat thi ki uske mere uoar girne ke baawazood mujhe jyada chot nahi aayi thi.....


main abhi khada hi hua tha ki xavier ne roman reigns maafik hawa main uchalke mere thopde par ek punch maara jiski wajah se mere mask toh nikal hi gaya tha saath me main jaake lohe ki jaaliyon se bane ring se jake takraaya.....


mere girte hi xavier mere paas aaya aur ek ke baad kayi saari punches maaarta raha meri back main jisse mujhe halka dard hone laga tha..... lekin mujhe jaise us maarse koi vaasta hi nahi tha..... qki mujhe saamne baithi hui apni vandana didi dikh gayi thi.... main unhe hi dekhta rha..... phir mera dhyaan toota jab xavier ne mujhe upar uthaya aur phir phenk diya jaaliyon main....... yeh dekhke nisha aur kajal ka toh bura haaal tha.... nisha toh rone lagi thi......kajal ka bhi aisa hi kuch haaal tha...... wahin sanjana ke saath woh driver bhi baitha hua tha.....


sanjana - tum toh bahut tareef kar rhe the villain ki.....


Driver - pata nahi aaj kya ho gaya ise.... waise abhi fight khatm nhiii huiiiii hai....


Sanjana - hnnnn....


idhar mere girte hi Michael dod ke mere paas aaya woh ring ke bahar hi tha.....


Michael - bhai utho jldi......


Main - abe uth raha hun.... tu pehle sun tere peeche 10th row main sanjana aur uski family baithi hai unpar dhyaan rakhna ki kahan jaati hai woh.....


Michael - theeek hai bhai..... bhai ab jldi se fight khatm kro.....


main - behnchod ab bahut hua.... ab ise tapkane ka time aa gaya hai.....


mere muh par khun laga hua tha jisse mujhe abbhi koi pehchaan na pata..... mujhe khada dekh xavier meri taraf aaya maine turant ek jump maari aur uske sir le ek zordaar punch maara woh jaake ring se takraya...... aur turant khada ho gaya....


maine ishare se use apne paas bulaya woh gusse main mujhe maarke ke liye meri taraf bhaga aur jaise hi usne mujhe punch maarne ki koshish ki maine uska punch apne ek haath se block kiya aur dusre haath se poori taqat se uske chest pe ek takatwar punch maara jiski wajah se woh niche jaake gira..... lekin punch itna zordaar tha ki use uthne main time lagta aur maine yeh mauka nahi gawaya aur uske pet pe jaake baith gaya aur uske chest pe punches ki bochaar kar di..... uske muh khun aa gaya tha aur dard ke maare chillaye ja rha tha..... jab usse aur dard bardaasht nahi hua usne zameen par haath patak ke apni haar swikaar kar li.....


ab yeh mere upar tha ki main use maaf kar dun ya maar dun.....tabhi bheed se ek aurat bhaag ke ring ke paas aayi aur haath jod kar kehne lagi plzzz mere pati ko maaf kar do...... maine uske aansoo dekh ke xavier ko maaf kar diya...... aur uske upar se hat gaya aur haath ke ishare se use le jaane ko bola..... mera itna ishara karte hi wahan shor shuru ho gaya..... phir refree mere paas aaya aur mera haath utha ke mujhe jeeta hua goshit kar diya..... tabhi michael ring main aaya maine usse toliya liya aur muh saaf karte hue bahar aaya.....


Main - michael ab nazar rakh unpar....


Michael - ok.....


phir jis side sanjana and family baithi hui thi us side aakar maine apna toliya apne face se hataya..... waise hi sanjana ki nazar mujhpe gayi...... main neeche baith hue logon se handshake kar rha tha...... sanjana gabrakar apni mom se kheni lagi......


Sanjana - maa neeche dekho.... villain hi venky hai.....


Vandana - kya.?.?.?


vandana ne jaise hi niche dekha woh dekh ke hairaan reh gayi qki jisse bachne ke lie itni door aayi thi.....woh saamne hi khada tha..... tabhi maine achanak apni nazar upar ki jise dekhke unlogon ne apna muh chupa liya..... main unhe andhekha karte hue back door ki taraf chal diya.... jahan nisha aur kajal khadi thi main wahan se justin ke ghar chala gaya.......


idhar sanjana aur vandana jldi jldi chal rhi thi ronit bhi hairaan tha ki aakhir hua kya...... woh log apne ghar ko pahunchi aur andar dakhil ho gayi......idhar micahel ne unhe jaaate hue dekha......aur wapas aa gaya justin ke ghar......


Ronit - kya hua tum log itna dari hui q ho.....


Vandana - tumne venky ko nahi dekha kya.???


ronit - kahan tha venky??


Sanjana - villain hi toh venky tha papa......


Ronit - kya??


idhar Michael ne mujhe aake bataya ki woh log saamne wale ghar main hain main turant chal diya..... abhi ronit ne kya hi kaha tha..... ki piche se darwaza khulne ki aahat hui woh sab piche mudke dekhne lage piche main khada tha michael ke saath.......


Main - pooori family eksaath ikhatta hai aaj..... kya baat hai.....


Ronit - aao venky.... baitho.....


Main - hnnnn baithne hi toh aaya tha main yahan..... main yahan yeh pata karne aaya hun ki brrr brrr mujhe maarne ki koshish q kar rhe ho tum log.....


Vandana - sunna chahte ho q maarna chahti hun tumhe toh suno.....


main - lekin shuru se sab batana.......


Vandana - hnnnn shuru se hi bataungi.......



aaaj ke liye itna hi.....

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Zaberdast fight thi
Venky n achcha kia Xavier ko maaf kerke ab uska ghamand bhi toot gaya hoga or ahsaas bhi ho gaya hoga ki yeh Deathfight h yaha badla lene k baare m nahi socha jata ya tow lado nahi ya fir lado tow fir maro
Dekhte h Vandana kia kahani sunati h kyon baar baar marne p tule hiwe h venky ko
Badhiya zaberdast shaandaar update bhai
 

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phir maine apna mask lagaya chehre pe aur phir main nisha rahul kajal michael aur justin chal diye club ke back door ki taraf...... andar se bahut tez aawaaz aa rhi thi..........


ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN...... ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN.... ViLLAiN.... ViLLAinnnnnnnnnn......


main piche ke gate se club ke andar aaya.... wahan ka nazara dekhke...... behenchod kitne log hain...... phir justin baaki sabko leke upar chala gaya.... main aur michael ring ki taraf chal pade tabhi wahan kisi ne ringlight mere upar focus ki aur audience mujhe dekhke mera naam zor zor se pookarne lagi...


main chalte hue ring ke andar aaya aur saamne khade fighter ko dekhne laga behnchod saand maafik dikh rha tha...... kuch log xavier xavier bhi chilla rahe the jisse mujhe pata chala ho na ho is saand ka naam hi xavier......maine apni pehli fight main jisko maar diya tha xavier usi ka chota bhai hai....


Lekin behnchod yeh apne bhai se bhi jyada takatwar aur lamba chauda tha.....xavier ki height kmsekam 6.11 fit thi.... … khair aapko ek baar phir bata dun ki......


Yeh free style death match fighting..... Free styke isliye kehte hai qki isme koi rules nhiiii matlab chahe jaise maaro.... lekin yeh nhi ki behnchod gun leke aaye aur maarke jeet gaye.... bssss haath pair se jahan chaho maar sakte ho koi rokthaam nahi hai........


Aur death match islie kehte hain qki behnchod fight main saamne wale ko jaan se maardo ya khud hi mar jao..... hnnn agar saamne wala chahe toh maaf kar sakta hai lekin aaj tak kisi ne maaf nahi kiya hai kisi ko bhi.....


main ring ke andar beech main jaake khada ho gaya..... udhar corner main khada xavier bhi mere paas aake khada ho gaya..... uski aankhen gusse main laal ho rhi thi....


Xavier - you kill my brother..... main tumhe tadpaa tadpaa ke maarunga.... tu apni jaan ke bheeg mangega tab bhi nahi chorunga.....


main - woh toh waqt batayega.....lekin tu tension mat le tujhe bhi tere bhai ki tarah upar pahuncha dunga.....


mera itna kehna tha ki xavier ne ek paunch maarne ke lie apna uthaya tha ki itne main refree wahan aa gaya aur uska haath pakad liya.....


Refree - sabr kro..... abhi moka milega maarne aur maar khane ka.....


phir xavier ne apna haath niche kar lia..... phir refree ne ham dono ko aamne saamne khada kar diya.....

Refree - are you ready for fight.....


Ham dono ne saath main hi yes kaha......


Refree - OK lets fight ……………


refree ke fight kehte hi Xavier ne mujhe ek punch mara aur main jaake ring se jaake takraya ..... idhar refree bhi ring ke bahar nikal gaya tha.... aur ring poori tareeke se band ho gayi thi kahin se bhi bahar nikalne ki jagah nahi thi.....


main ring se jaise hi takraaaya xavier mere paas aa gaya tha aur usne hawa main jump laga ke mere muh par ek flying kick maari jisse mere muh se khun aa gaya.... usne mujhe maarne ke liye abki brrr phir piche se jump lagayi hi thi ki main yeh dekh gaya aur apni jagah se hat gaya..... jisse uski yeh jump vyarth chali gayi..... aur woh apna santulan barkaraar nahi rakh paya aur zameen main gir pada.....


main jldi se utha aur uske khade hote hi main jump karke seedha uske muh par punch maara jisse woh ek baar phir se zameen se ja takraaya......lekin woh girte hi turant khada ho gaya..... tab mujhe laga ki yeh aasani se nahi harega.... woh jaise hi khada hua maine uske chest par punch maarne ke liye jaise hi jump lagake uske paas aaya usne mera punch padne se pehle bahut hi tezi ke saath apne haaath se mere chest pe punch maar diya..... main uchalkar door ja gira.....


phir xavier ne wahin se jump lagake mere upar aake gira..... behnchod jaanwar jaisa tha xavier uske mere upar girte hi mujhe gaand faad dard hua..... ab mujhe apni maut nazar aane lagi thi..... main kisi tarah khada hua..... yeh achi baat thi ki uske mere uoar girne ke baawazood mujhe jyada chot nahi aayi thi.....


main abhi khada hi hua tha ki xavier ne roman reigns maafik hawa main uchalke mere thopde par ek punch maara jiski wajah se mere mask toh nikal hi gaya tha saath me main jaake lohe ki jaaliyon se bane ring se jake takraaya.....


mere girte hi xavier mere paas aaya aur ek ke baad kayi saari punches maaarta raha meri back main jisse mujhe halka dard hone laga tha..... lekin mujhe jaise us maarse koi vaasta hi nahi tha..... qki mujhe saamne baithi hui apni vandana didi dikh gayi thi.... main unhe hi dekhta rha..... phir mera dhyaan toota jab xavier ne mujhe upar uthaya aur phir phenk diya jaaliyon main....... yeh dekhke nisha aur kajal ka toh bura haaal tha.... nisha toh rone lagi thi......kajal ka bhi aisa hi kuch haaal tha...... wahin sanjana ke saath woh driver bhi baitha hua tha.....


sanjana - tum toh bahut tareef kar rhe the villain ki.....


Driver - pata nahi aaj kya ho gaya ise.... waise abhi fight khatm nhiii huiiiii hai....


Sanjana - hnnnn....


idhar mere girte hi Michael dod ke mere paas aaya woh ring ke bahar hi tha.....


Michael - bhai utho jldi......


Main - abe uth raha hun.... tu pehle sun tere peeche 10th row main sanjana aur uski family baithi hai unpar dhyaan rakhna ki kahan jaati hai woh.....


Michael - theeek hai bhai..... bhai ab jldi se fight khatm kro.....


main - behnchod ab bahut hua.... ab ise tapkane ka time aa gaya hai.....


mere muh par khun laga hua tha jisse mujhe abbhi koi pehchaan na pata..... mujhe khada dekh xavier meri taraf aaya maine turant ek jump maari aur uske sir le ek zordaar punch maara woh jaake ring se takraya...... aur turant khada ho gaya....


maine ishare se use apne paas bulaya woh gusse main mujhe maarke ke liye meri taraf bhaga aur jaise hi usne mujhe punch maarne ki koshish ki maine uska punch apne ek haath se block kiya aur dusre haath se poori taqat se uske chest pe ek takatwar punch maara jiski wajah se woh niche jaake gira..... lekin punch itna zordaar tha ki use uthne main time lagta aur maine yeh mauka nahi gawaya aur uske pet pe jaake baith gaya aur uske chest pe punches ki bochaar kar di..... uske muh khun aa gaya tha aur dard ke maare chillaye ja rha tha..... jab usse aur dard bardaasht nahi hua usne zameen par haath patak ke apni haar swikaar kar li.....


ab yeh mere upar tha ki main use maaf kar dun ya maar dun.....tabhi bheed se ek aurat bhaag ke ring ke paas aayi aur haath jod kar kehne lagi plzzz mere pati ko maaf kar do...... maine uske aansoo dekh ke xavier ko maaf kar diya...... aur uske upar se hat gaya aur haath ke ishare se use le jaane ko bola..... mera itna ishara karte hi wahan shor shuru ho gaya..... phir refree mere paas aaya aur mera haath utha ke mujhe jeeta hua goshit kar diya..... tabhi michael ring main aaya maine usse toliya liya aur muh saaf karte hue bahar aaya.....


Main - michael ab nazar rakh unpar....


Michael - ok.....


phir jis side sanjana and family baithi hui thi us side aakar maine apna toliya apne face se hataya..... waise hi sanjana ki nazar mujhpe gayi...... main neeche baith hue logon se handshake kar rha tha...... sanjana gabrakar apni mom se kheni lagi......


Sanjana - maa neeche dekho.... villain hi venky hai.....


Vandana - kya.?.?.?


vandana ne jaise hi niche dekha woh dekh ke hairaan reh gayi qki jisse bachne ke lie itni door aayi thi.....woh saamne hi khada tha..... tabhi maine achanak apni nazar upar ki jise dekhke unlogon ne apna muh chupa liya..... main unhe andhekha karte hue back door ki taraf chal diya.... jahan nisha aur kajal khadi thi main wahan se justin ke ghar chala gaya.......


idhar sanjana aur vandana jldi jldi chal rhi thi ronit bhi hairaan tha ki aakhir hua kya...... woh log apne ghar ko pahunchi aur andar dakhil ho gayi......idhar micahel ne unhe jaaate hue dekha......aur wapas aa gaya justin ke ghar......


Ronit - kya hua tum log itna dari hui q ho.....


Vandana - tumne venky ko nahi dekha kya.???


ronit - kahan tha venky??


Sanjana - villain hi toh venky tha papa......


Ronit - kya??


idhar Michael ne mujhe aake bataya ki woh log saamne wale ghar main hain main turant chal diya..... abhi ronit ne kya hi kaha tha..... ki piche se darwaza khulne ki aahat hui woh sab piche mudke dekhne lage piche main khada tha michael ke saath.......


Main - pooori family eksaath ikhatta hai aaj..... kya baat hai.....


Ronit - aao venky.... baitho.....


Main - hnnnn baithne hi toh aaya tha main yahan..... main yahan yeh pata karne aaya hun ki brrr brrr mujhe maarne ki koshish q kar rhe ho tum log.....


Vandana - sunna chahte ho q maarna chahti hun tumhe toh suno.....


main - lekin shuru se sab batana.......


Vandana - hnnnn shuru se hi bataungi.......



aaaj ke liye itna hi.....

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Fantastic y
 

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agle din sham main venky ki flight newyork main land hui..... woh log airport se bahar nikale hi the ki tabhi wahan venky ka trainer aake unke paas khada ho gaya......


trainer - welcome again in newyork ViLLAiN........


phir woh aage badhke aaya aur venky ko gale laga liya......


Trainer - kahan chaloge mere ghar rukoge ya michael ke hi ghar main..... mera ghar club ke saamne hi hai..... tumhare lie aasani hogi.....


main - tunhare hi ghar pe deher lete hai.....waise fight kitne time hai....


Trainer - 10 baje hai.....


main - abhi 7 baj rhe hain..... jldi chalo mujhe warmup bhi karna hai thora.....


ham log ek gaadi main baith gayi aur gaadi chal di.....


Main - waise guruji fighter kahan ka hai......


Trainer - pichli baaar jise tumne maara tha yeh usi ka bhai hai..... yeh apne bhai se jyada khatarnaak hai bahut furteela bhi hai..... bach ke rehna usse......


Main - guruji aap mujhe bharosa rakhiye.... bhagwaan ne chaha toh main use hara dunga..... waise aapko kya lagta hai main usse kamzor hun.....


Trainer - main yeh nahi keh rha ki tum kamzor ho lekin agar tum kal aate toh tumhe thora time mil jaata aur main apne bandon se fight karake warmup bhi kara deta aur tum thora rest bhi kar lete ..... lekin aaj tumhe waqt hi nahi milega qki thori der main hi fight shuru ho jaegi......


Main - acha yeh baat hai..... waise aap tension na lo..... main 2 din pehle ek fight ladke aaya hun....


trainer - acha.....


itne main hi trainer ka ghar aa gaya aur saamne hi club tha abhi se wahan kaafi jyada crowd tha.....nisha kajal aur michael andar chale gaye the.... main wahan khada ho ke idhar udhar ka nazara dekhne laga..... tabhi crowd main khade kuch logon ki nazar mujhpe gayi....... tabhi wahan shor shuru ho gaya.......


ViLLAiN .... ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN...... ViLLAiN........ ViLLAiN..... ViLLAiN......


Yeh shor sunke sanjana bhi apni balcony main aa gayi thi lekin uske aane se pehle main michael ke saath ghar ke andar chala gaya tha..... us club ke gurads ne unlogon ko kisi tarah rokke wapas club ki taraf bhej diya...... crowd ke wapas jaate hi sanjana bhi rooom main aa gayi.....


Idhar main ghar main aaya toh trainer ki patni sabko unka rooom dikhane lagi... sab apne apne room main chale gaye.....main trainer ke paas aaya....


main - justin.......(trainer ka name justin hai)


Justin - hnnnn venky bolo....


Main - ring main kitte time jaana hai..... 9:50 pe......


Justin - hnnnn.....


Main - theek hai 9:30 pe chalenge thori der warmup kar lunga....


Justin - theeek hai......


phir justin bahar chala jaata hai..... aur main nisha ke room ki taraf jahan nisha rahul ke kapde change kr rhi thi.......


Nisha - dekho venky ache se ladna tumhe kuch hoga toh nahi.....


Main - areee mujhe kuch nahi hoga.....


Nisha - thik hai jldi fight khatm karna.... saamne wale ko koi moka hi mat dena tumhe maarne ka.....


main - hnnn baba.....


phir maine rahul ko pakda aur bed le let gaya.... aur rahul ko apne seene se laga ke apne upar lita liya...... woh totli jubaan main mujhe papa papa kehne laga..... maine pyaar se uske gaal pe kiss kr lia.... itne main nisha bhi mere ek haath pe sir rakhke let gayi........ aur phir mere baalon main haath pherne lagi.....


main - kya hua aaj mood bana hai kya......


Nisha - pata nhiiii.....


itna kehke woh uth ke wahan se chali gayi...... maine rahul ko paas main lita diya.... aur apna mobile nikaal ke use on kiya..... maine wifi se mobile connect hi kiya tha ki WhatsApp par message aane lage.....


ek message rameshwar ka bhi tha maine use reply kar diya ki 4din main aaunga milne..... mohini ke bhi bahut se message the lekin maine unhe dekhe bina mobile off kar diya...... aur phir maine socha thori der so leta hun.......


dusri taraf aditya aur vikram apne apne addon ki taraf nikal gaye...... vikram ne apne adde par pahuncha toh sab log kaam main busy the..... woh boss ke room main chala gaya..... boss shayad bathroom main tha qki paani ki aawaz aa rhi thi islie woh wahin baith gaya..... aur intezaar karne laga.... thori der main boss ne bathroom ka darwaza khola aur saamne vikram ko baithe dekha......


boss - areee aap kab aaye bhai.....


vikram - abhich thori der pehle jab tu naha rha tha......


Boss - koi kaaam tha kya.....


Vikram - yeh bata woh kahan gaya gai..... aur kab ayega.....


Boss - mere ko yeh toh pata hai ki woh newyork gaya hua hai....lekin yeh nahi oata ki wapas delhi ayeha ya kahin aur jayega..... qki aaj tak mujhe uska asli thikaana nahi pata..... lekin itna zaroor pata hai ki woh mumbai main kahin rehta hai....


Vikram - yeh toh badi problem ho gayi..... Mumbai main use kahan kahan dhundenge......(mnnn main) ek kaam karta hun aditya ko bhi apne saath Mumbai leke chalta hun qki use mumbai ke baare main sab pata hai.... aaj hi usse milke baaat karta hun.... yeh sahi rehega.....)


Vikram - theeek hai.... main tumhe bataunga ki kab chalna hai mumbai....


Boss - theeek hai....


Phir vikram wahan se nikal jaata hai aditya ke ghar ki taraf..... wahin aditya apne ghar pahunchta hai aur rameshwar ko call laga deta.... call pick hote hi rameshwar bol parta.....


Rameshwar - hello.... kaun....


Aditya - tera hello gaya maa chudane.... yeh bata us venky ka kuch pata chala ki nahi kab ayega tujhse milne....


Rameshwar - abhi uska message aaya tha thori der pehle keh rha tha 4 din baad ayega woh yahan milne.....


Aditya - theeek hai jaise hi woh aaye mujhe call kar dena.....


Udhar venky so rha tha ki tabhi use laga use koi jaga rha hai usne apni aankhein kholi toh saamne kajal thi.....


Main - kya hua kajal.....


Kajal - hoga kya.... Justin aaya hai tunhe bula raha hai....


Main - time kitna hua hai....


Kajal - 9:40....


main - areeee yrrrr...... bahut late ho gaya..... pehle q nahi jagaya mujhe......


Kajal - 10 minutes se jaga rhi hun lekin tum uthne ka naam hi nahi le rahe the..... ab utho jaldi.....


Phir main jldise utha aur muh haath dhoke apne kapde change kiye aur apne bag se face mask nikaal ke bahar aa gyaa......


Justin - kya yrrr itni der laga di ab toh warmup ka bhi moka nahi hai.....


Main - koi baaat nahi chalo.....



phir maine apna mask lagaya chehre pe aur phir main nisha rahul kajal michael aur justin chal diye club ke back door ki taraf...... andar se bahut tez aawaaz aa rhi thi..........


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phir maine apna mask lagaya chehre pe aur phir main nisha rahul kajal michael aur justin chal diye club ke back door ki taraf...... andar se bahut tez aawaaz aa rhi thi..........


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main piche ke gate se club ke andar aaya.... wahan ka nazara dekhke...... behenchod kitne log hain...... phir justin baaki sabko leke upar chala gaya.... main aur michael ring ki taraf chal pade tabhi wahan kisi ne ringlight mere upar focus ki aur audience mujhe dekhke mera naam zor zor se pookarne lagi...


main chalte hue ring ke andar aaya aur saamne khade fighter ko dekhne laga behnchod saand maafik dikh rha tha...... kuch log xavier xavier bhi chilla rahe the jisse mujhe pata chala ho na ho is saand ka naam hi xavier......maine apni pehli fight main jisko maar diya tha xavier usi ka chota bhai hai....


Lekin behnchod yeh apne bhai se bhi jyada takatwar aur lamba chauda tha.....xavier ki height kmsekam 6.11 fit thi.... … khair aapko ek baar phir bata dun ki......


Yeh free style death match fighting..... Free styke isliye kehte hai qki isme koi rules nhiiii matlab chahe jaise maaro.... lekin yeh nhi ki behnchod gun leke aaye aur maarke jeet gaye.... bssss haath pair se jahan chaho maar sakte ho koi rokthaam nahi hai........


Aur death match islie kehte hain qki behnchod fight main saamne wale ko jaan se maardo ya khud hi mar jao..... hnnn agar saamne wala chahe toh maaf kar sakta hai lekin aaj tak kisi ne maaf nahi kiya hai kisi ko bhi.....


main ring ke andar beech main jaake khada ho gaya..... udhar corner main khada xavier bhi mere paas aake khada ho gaya..... uski aankhen gusse main laal ho rhi thi....


Xavier - you kill my brother..... main tumhe tadpaa tadpaa ke maarunga.... tu apni jaan ke bheeg mangega tab bhi nahi chorunga.....


main - woh toh waqt batayega.....lekin tu tension mat le tujhe bhi tere bhai ki tarah upar pahuncha dunga.....


mera itna kehna tha ki xavier ne ek paunch maarne ke lie apna uthaya tha ki itne main refree wahan aa gaya aur uska haath pakad liya.....


Refree - sabr kro..... abhi moka milega maarne aur maar khane ka.....


phir xavier ne apna haath niche kar lia..... phir refree ne ham dono ko aamne saamne khada kar diya.....

Refree - are you ready for fight.....


Ham dono ne saath main hi yes kaha......


Refree - OK lets fight ……………


refree ke fight kehte hi Xavier ne mujhe ek punch mara aur main jaake ring se jaake takraya ..... idhar refree bhi ring ke bahar nikal gaya tha.... aur ring poori tareeke se band ho gayi thi kahin se bhi bahar nikalne ki jagah nahi thi.....


main ring se jaise hi takraaaya xavier mere paas aa gaya tha aur usne hawa main jump laga ke mere muh par ek flying kick maari jisse mere muh se khun aa gaya.... usne mujhe maarne ke liye abki brrr phir piche se jump lagayi hi thi ki main yeh dekh gaya aur apni jagah se hat gaya..... jisse uski yeh jump vyarth chali gayi..... aur woh apna santulan barkaraar nahi rakh paya aur zameen main gir pada.....


main jldi se utha aur uske khade hote hi main jump karke seedha uske muh par punch maara jisse woh ek baar phir se zameen se ja takraaya......lekin woh girte hi turant khada ho gaya..... tab mujhe laga ki yeh aasani se nahi harega.... woh jaise hi khada hua maine uske chest par punch maarne ke liye jaise hi jump lagake uske paas aaya usne mera punch padne se pehle bahut hi tezi ke saath apne haaath se mere chest pe punch maar diya..... main uchalkar door ja gira.....


phir xavier ne wahin se jump lagake mere upar aake gira..... behnchod jaanwar jaisa tha xavier uske mere upar girte hi mujhe gaand faad dard hua..... ab mujhe apni maut nazar aane lagi thi..... main kisi tarah khada hua..... yeh achi baat thi ki uske mere uoar girne ke baawazood mujhe jyada chot nahi aayi thi.....


main abhi khada hi hua tha ki xavier ne roman reigns maafik hawa main uchalke mere thopde par ek punch maara jiski wajah se mere mask toh nikal hi gaya tha saath me main jaake lohe ki jaaliyon se bane ring se jake takraaya.....


mere girte hi xavier mere paas aaya aur ek ke baad kayi saari punches maaarta raha meri back main jisse mujhe halka dard hone laga tha..... lekin mujhe jaise us maarse koi vaasta hi nahi tha..... qki mujhe saamne baithi hui apni vandana didi dikh gayi thi.... main unhe hi dekhta rha..... phir mera dhyaan toota jab xavier ne mujhe upar uthaya aur phir phenk diya jaaliyon main....... yeh dekhke nisha aur kajal ka toh bura haaal tha.... nisha toh rone lagi thi......kajal ka bhi aisa hi kuch haaal tha...... wahin sanjana ke saath woh driver bhi baitha hua tha.....


sanjana - tum toh bahut tareef kar rhe the villain ki.....


Driver - pata nahi aaj kya ho gaya ise.... waise abhi fight khatm nhiii huiiiii hai....


Sanjana - hnnnn....


idhar mere girte hi Michael dod ke mere paas aaya woh ring ke bahar hi tha.....


Michael - bhai utho jldi......


Main - abe uth raha hun.... tu pehle sun tere peeche 10th row main sanjana aur uski family baithi hai unpar dhyaan rakhna ki kahan jaati hai woh.....


Michael - theeek hai bhai..... bhai ab jldi se fight khatm kro.....


main - behnchod ab bahut hua.... ab ise tapkane ka time aa gaya hai.....


mere muh par khun laga hua tha jisse mujhe abbhi koi pehchaan na pata..... mujhe khada dekh xavier meri taraf aaya maine turant ek jump maari aur uske sir le ek zordaar punch maara woh jaake ring se takraya...... aur turant khada ho gaya....


maine ishare se use apne paas bulaya woh gusse main mujhe maarke ke liye meri taraf bhaga aur jaise hi usne mujhe punch maarne ki koshish ki maine uska punch apne ek haath se block kiya aur dusre haath se poori taqat se uske chest pe ek takatwar punch maara jiski wajah se woh niche jaake gira..... lekin punch itna zordaar tha ki use uthne main time lagta aur maine yeh mauka nahi gawaya aur uske pet pe jaake baith gaya aur uske chest pe punches ki bochaar kar di..... uske muh khun aa gaya tha aur dard ke maare chillaye ja rha tha..... jab usse aur dard bardaasht nahi hua usne zameen par haath patak ke apni haar swikaar kar li.....


ab yeh mere upar tha ki main use maaf kar dun ya maar dun.....tabhi bheed se ek aurat bhaag ke ring ke paas aayi aur haath jod kar kehne lagi plzzz mere pati ko maaf kar do...... maine uske aansoo dekh ke xavier ko maaf kar diya...... aur uske upar se hat gaya aur haath ke ishare se use le jaane ko bola..... mera itna ishara karte hi wahan shor shuru ho gaya..... phir refree mere paas aaya aur mera haath utha ke mujhe jeeta hua goshit kar diya..... tabhi michael ring main aaya maine usse toliya liya aur muh saaf karte hue bahar aaya.....


Main - michael ab nazar rakh unpar....


Michael - ok.....


phir jis side sanjana and family baithi hui thi us side aakar maine apna toliya apne face se hataya..... waise hi sanjana ki nazar mujhpe gayi...... main neeche baith hue logon se handshake kar rha tha...... sanjana gabrakar apni mom se kheni lagi......


Sanjana - maa neeche dekho.... villain hi venky hai.....


Vandana - kya.?.?.?


vandana ne jaise hi niche dekha woh dekh ke hairaan reh gayi qki jisse bachne ke lie itni door aayi thi.....woh saamne hi khada tha..... tabhi maine achanak apni nazar upar ki jise dekhke unlogon ne apna muh chupa liya..... main unhe andhekha karte hue back door ki taraf chal diya.... jahan nisha aur kajal khadi thi main wahan se justin ke ghar chala gaya.......


idhar sanjana aur vandana jldi jldi chal rhi thi ronit bhi hairaan tha ki aakhir hua kya...... woh log apne ghar ko pahunchi aur andar dakhil ho gayi......idhar micahel ne unhe jaaate hue dekha......aur wapas aa gaya justin ke ghar......


Ronit - kya hua tum log itna dari hui q ho.....


Vandana - tumne venky ko nahi dekha kya.???


ronit - kahan tha venky??


Sanjana - villain hi toh venky tha papa......


Ronit - kya??


idhar Michael ne mujhe aake bataya ki woh log saamne wale ghar main hain main turant chal diya..... abhi ronit ne kya hi kaha tha..... ki piche se darwaza khulne ki aahat hui woh sab piche mudke dekhne lage piche main khada tha michael ke saath.......


Main - pooori family eksaath ikhatta hai aaj..... kya baat hai.....


Ronit - aao venky.... baitho.....


Main - hnnnn baithne hi toh aaya tha main yahan..... main yahan yeh pata karne aaya hun ki brrr brrr mujhe maarne ki koshish q kar rhe ho tum log.....


Vandana - sunna chahte ho q maarna chahti hun tumhe toh suno.....


main - lekin shuru se sab batana.......


Vandana - hnnnn shuru se hi bataungi.......



aaaj ke liye itna hi.....

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