Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

[Zas23]

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[X MAN]

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[Ameer Khan Khan]

kaha gum hogaye ho writer bhai update kab tak ajaye ga intezaar horaha hai

 

[FRIDAY]

Suraj dub ga ya,
Sham ho ga ya,
Chand nikal aya,
Din bit ga ya,
Ek nayi subah aya,
Magar update abhi lapatah hai.

 

[sonukale]

Waiting for next update

 

[Amit rox]

Bhai bura matt manna ek baat kahu to idhar jo bhi writer hai me unse anurodha karta hun ki jab app ko story lihkne ki ichha ho to pehele app sab ek paper ya fir apne laptop ya mobile pe likhe aur jab story ka the end ho jaye uske baad story ko post karo .isse ye hoga ke app ne story to complete kar chuke honge to post to jarur karenge aur hum sab ache se padhenge .aur dusri baat kuch writer dusro ke story ko follow karke lihkte hain jaise unka story kuch aise start hoga ex-hero ka janam fir uske ander power aana fir school aur iss beach baki family ka intro fir heroine aur uske baad collage ,collage ka ragging fir dusman fir nayi dost fir girlfriend bas uske baad koi update hi nahi aata .
Aur baki kuch writer ka same hoga magar usme thoda jayada fighting ya fir jayada love story , family drama hota hai
Fir uske baad writer sab suspense dene me lag jate hain aur khud ushi suspense me hi atak jate hain aur aage ka story lihk nehi pate hain.
Fir bahana aata hai
1.mera exam suru ho gaya
2.mere ghar me shadi hai
3.me out of city hun
4.meeting ke liye bahar gaya tha
5.tabiyat thik nahi hai
Etc
Aur jante ho dosto ye sab esi super hero wali story me jayada hota hai.
Dosto ab app sab khud hi boliye ye sahi hai ya galat .
Aur ek baat jante ho dosto ye pe ek reader jab waiting lihk lihk ke paresan ho jata hai aur kuch mere jaisa bolne laga ta hai to kuch readers aate hain aur bolte hain bhai bolna easy hai writer apna kimti waqt nikal ke hamare liye lihk raha hai aur tum support nahi kar rahe ho are kya ghanta support karenge story me update to aata nahi ab support kisse kare.
Aur kuch kahte hain khud lihko, are hum to yaha readers hai jisko lihkna chaiye vo to lihk hi nahi raha hai.
And last me agar app sab writer ki prosnal problem itni hai to story start hi kyun karte ho. mat lihka karo koi hum thodi na jabardasti kar rahe hain.
Agar galti se story start kar diya hai to ab aage aata hi nahi hai to sorry kahe ke band kar do na kyun sab readers ko aake waiting lihkna na pade.
Ye sab jo mene bola koi personal nahi lega sab writers ke liye hai.

 

[anandsngh12]

Bhai bura matt manna ek baat kahu to idhar jo bhi writer hai me unse anurodha karta hun ki jab app ko story lihkne ki ichha ho to pehele app sab ek paper ya fir apne laptop ya mobile pe likhe aur jab story ka the end ho jaye uske baad story ko post karo .isse ye hoga ke app ne story to complete kar chuke honge to post to jarur karenge aur hum sab ache se padhenge .aur dusri baat kuch writer dusro ke story ko follow karke lihkte hain jaise unka story kuch aise start hoga ex-hero ka janam fir uske ander power aana fir school aur iss beach baki family ka intro fir heroine aur uske baad collage ,collage ka ragging fir dusman fir nayi dost fir girlfriend bas uske baad koi update hi nahi aata .
Aur baki kuch writer ka same hoga magar usme thoda jayada fighting ya fir jayada love story , family drama hota hai
Fir uske baad writer sab suspense dene me lag jate hain aur khud ushi suspense me hi atak jate hain aur aage ka story lihk nehi pate hain.
Fir bahana aata hai
1.mera exam suru ho gaya
2.mere ghar me shadi hai
3.me out of city hun
4.meeting ke liye bahar gaya tha
5.tabiyat thik nahi hai
Etc
Aur jante ho dosto ye sab esi super hero wali story me jayada hota hai.
Dosto ab app sab khud hi boliye ye sahi hai ya galat .
Aur ek baat jante ho dosto ye pe ek reader jab waiting lihk lihk ke paresan ho jata hai aur kuch mere jaisa bolne laga ta hai to kuch readers aate hain aur bolte hain bhai bolna easy hai writer apna kimti waqt nikal ke hamare liye lihk raha hai aur tum support nahi kar rahe ho are kya ghanta support karenge story me update to aata nahi ab support kisse kare.
Aur kuch kahte hain khud lihko, are hum to yaha readers hai jisko lihkna chaiye vo to lihk hi nahi raha hai.
And last me agar app sab writer ki prosnal problem itni hai to story start hi kyun karte ho. mat lihka karo koi hum thodi na jabardasti kar rahe hain.
Agar galti se story start kar diya hai to ab aage aata hi nahi hai to sorry kahe ke band kar do na kyun sab readers ko aake waiting lihkna na pade.
Ye sab jo mene bola koi personal nahi lega sab writers ke liye hai.

Bahut bahut shukriya bhai apna kimti review dene ke liye.
Apka kahna sahi ho bhi sakta hai aur nahi bhi ho sakta.
Kisi ki life me pareshaniya kisi ko bata kar nahi aati hain bhai
Yaha koi apna future nahi janta hai ki agle pal uske sath kya hone wala hai.
Ho sakta hai ki shayad aap jante ho...?
Koi bhi writer apni story ko bina vajah beech me nahi chhodta hai.
Har ek ki apni personal life hoti hai bhai.
Aap khud hi socho bhai ki agar aap ke ghar me koi problem aa jaye to kya aap story read karne aaoge uss problem ko ignore kar ke...? ya phir pahle apni problem solve karoge....?
Zindagi me sukh dukh ka aana jana laga rahta hai bhai.
Vaise hi updates bhi hain...agar kabhi break aa jaye to nirash mat ho jaiye
Har raat ke baad subah hoti hai aur subah ke baad phir se raat..phir subah..phir raat
Ye prakriya Anavarat satat chalti rahti hai

So, keep Enjoy having free mind.

 

[anandsngh12]

Update Will Come Late Night After Saajan.

 

[Raguhalkal]

Haaaasshhhhhh agaye aap kaha chale gaye the bhai khair ate hi dhamaka kar diya thank you bhai aapki jo bi problum ho wo jaldi se nipat jaye yahi mera dua hai bhagavan se

 

[Zas23]

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