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Mom - dad ke Jane ke bad an anju bhi chod kr chli gyi
Who shaitan lok m khusiyan manayi ja rhe h
Dekhte h unki khusiyan kb tk rhti h
To taqt k sath an kurbani bhi de di
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Who shaitan lok m khusiyan manayi ja rhe h
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Update - 94
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Update - 94
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Kahani Ab Tak -
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Keela - (Apni jagah se khade hokar-
-uski peeth thapthapate hue) - Shabash! Senapati.
Ab samaye aa gaya hai dusre plan ko anjaam dene ka.
Nablees - Jo aagya maharaj.
(Or idhar Rocky ke ghar me)
Main achanak apne bed se uth kar baith gaya
Mooommm Dadddddd
Leeza ekdam se uth kar baith gayi, or mujhe gale
laga liya.
Leeza - kya hua aapko?
Main - kuchh nahin bura sapna tha... Or main uska
Matha chumkar usko bahon me bharke phir se sone
ki koshish karne laga
-------------------
Ab Aage -
-------------------
Aaj Mom - Dad ko guzre hue pure 10 din ho
chuke hain,
Hamara poora bussiness Priya ke Dad yani
Phupha ji ne
Sambhal liya hai,
Sab kuchh sahi chalna shuru ho gaya hai,
par main mom -
Dad ko bohot miss karta hun,
Ham sabhi ne apne - apne school/ College
jana start kar diya hai.
Bas ek baat ajeeb hui hai, jis din se main vapas aaya hun,
Mujhe Pallavi dikhai nahin di, Na vo ek baar
bhi college aayi.
Uske ghar par bhi Tala latka hua tha,
uske bare me kisi ko kuchh bhi pata nahin
hai, Raju zyadatar mere sath hi rehta hai,
or Mariya (Raju's sister) gaw me hamne jo
nayi company start ki thi, wo uska kaam dekhti hai, vahin shift ho gayi hai,
bas phone par baaten ho jati hain.
Anjalika ne bhi koi baat nahin ki hai us din se,
na hi wo mujhe apne aas - paas kabhi mehsoos hui.
Dada - dadi or chacha - chachi hamse roz baat karte hain,
Pata nahin Mansi ko kya hua hai
wo mujhse thoda kati - kati si
rehne lagi hai, par main sab kuchh jaldi hi theek kar dunga.
Sheetal or uski mummy ko maine request
karke apne sath hi shift karva liya hai,
or sakshi bhi ab hamare hi sath rehti hai.
or mere hi sath college jati hai.
Meri neend subha 6 baje khuli,
Leeza mere hi paas so rahi thi,
Sote time badi hi cute lagti thi, maine uske
fule - fule galon oar kis kiya, jisse vo
kasmasane lagi, mere chehre par
muskaan aa gayi,
Maine uski avaz dekar uthaya usne
dhire se apni aakhen kholin,
Maine uske mathe par kiss kar liya,
wo bhi muskurate hue uth kar baith gayi,
Main - Good Morning Jaan.
Leeza - Good Morning, Aaj bohot dino baad itni pyari subha hui hai,
pata nahin kab se miss kar rahi thi.
(Wo muskurate hue boli)
Main - achchha ab mujhe coffee nahin pilaogi.
Wo uth kar chali gayi, or mere liye coffee bana kar le ayi.
Maine coffee pee or fresh hone washroom
me chala gaya,
Bahar aaya to bed par kapde rakhe hue the,
Par leeza vahan par nahin thi,
shayad bakiyon ko uthane gayi hogi.
Main fatafat tayyar hua, or jaldi - jaldi me car lekar nikal gaya.
Raste me maine fresh flower khareede,
or pohoch gaya Mom - Dad ki samadhi par,
Maine flowers unki samadhi par rakhe or bola -
Happy Anniversary Mom & Dad
Phir main vahin par baith gaya, or unse dheron baaten karne laga.
Waise to main yahan aata rehta tha,
par aaj kuchh special din tha,
Isi liye subha sabse pehle mom - dad ke paas aa gaya.
Kuchh time vahan bitane ke baad main
vapas ghar pohcha,
Sakshi tayyar baithi thi, college jane ke liye.
Maine sab ke sath breakfast kiya,
sabhi ne shanti se breakfast kiya,
Jab se mom dad hame chhodkar gaye the
tabh se sab kuchh change sa ho gaya tha,
pehle jaisi masti to ab khatam hi ho gayi thi,
Koi aapas me baat karta bhi tha wo bhi sirf
matlab ki baat hoti thi.
Khair breakfast khatam karke main or sakshi
college ke liye nikal pade,
(In Car)
Sakshi - Bhai or kitne din aisa chalta rahega ?
Main - to tu hi bata main kya karun?
Sakshi (ek gehri saans chhodkar) - aap ghar
ke ekloute mard ho,
Aap ko hi sab sambhalna padega. Sab se
baat karo, ghar ka mahol bigad chuka hai,
use apko hi sambhalna hoga, varna sab
barbad ho jayega.
Main - keh to tu theek rahi hai, chal main hi
kuchh sochta hun.
Baat karte - karte ham college pohoch gaye.
Maine car park ki or ham sidha apni - apni
class me chale gaye.
Main Raju ke paas jakar baith gaya, or usse
baaten karne laga,
Kyonki class start hone me abhi time tha.
College ke baad sakshi ke sath main ghar aa
gaya,
Mansi, Priya or sheetal ghar par aa chuki thin,
Liza to ghar par hi rehti thi.
Main fresh hokar dining table par pohcha, Liza ne khana serve kiya maine or sakshi ne
sath me lunch kiya. Baaki sab kha chuke the.
Lunch karke main Mansi se milne uske room
me chal diya.
Or uska door knock kiya.
Mansi (andar se) - kon hai?
Main - main hun.
Mansi - abhi main busy hun baad me aana.
Ye sunkar mera dil jalkar reh gaya,
par main aaj sab sahi karne ka sochkar
aaya tha.
Main door ko kholte hue andar chala gaya,
Wo ulti letakr Lapy me kuchh kar rahi thi.
Usne mujhe gusse se ghoor kar dekha.
Mansi (gusee se)- kya aapko manners nahin
hai,
is ghar me kya ab privacy bhi nahin bachi,
Mere kahon me aansu aa gaye, par main
usse behes karne nahin aya tha.
Main - (dheere se) - Tu to meri jaan hua karti
thi, mujhse pyar karti thi, phir aisa kya hua jo
mujhse nafrat karne lagi?
Mansi - aap mere room se abhi nikal jaiyye,
varna achchha nahin hoga.
Main - main javaab liye bagair nahin jaunga.
Mansi (uthkar baithte hue)- sunna hi chahte
ho to suno,
Mom Dad ki mout ke zimmedaar tum ho,
tumhari vajha se wo aaj hamare beech nahin
hain, bolo kya javaab hai iska apke paas?
(Uski aakhon se aansu Tap - Tap girne lage)
Main kuchh nahin bol pa raha tha,
mera sar niche jhuk gaya tha.,
Or aansu beh rahe the.
Mansi - or oopar se aap unse badla lena
chahte ho, ye kaise bhool gaye ki jin logon
ne ek hi vaar se mom - dad ko hamse chheen liya,
Wo hame bhi maar sakte hain.
Main - main aisa nahin hone dunga.
Mansi (zor se chilla kar) - Jab mom - dad par
unhone vaar kiya tha, tabh kya kar liya aapne,
tabh kahan gayin thin apki shaktiyan.
Main (uski taraf dekhte hue)- mujhe koi badla
nahin lena, jo tu bolegi waisa hi hoga,
mujhe kuchh nahin chahiye bas tu vapas aa ja,
Varna main seh nahin paunga. Main tujhse
bheekh mangta hun.
(Ye kehte hue main ghutno ke bal baith kar
rone laga)
Mansi mere paas ayi or mukhe utha kar apne
gale se laga kar rone lagi, ham dono ke man
me ek gubbar sa tha, shayad vo ab nikal
raha tha.
Mansi (mujhse alag hokar)- mujhe vachan
dijiye, ke aap ab kisi shakti ka istimal nahin
karoge, or koi badla nahin loge.
Main - main tere sar ki kasam khakar bolta
hun, jo tu bolegi vaisa hi karunga.
Mansi (mere gaal par kiss karke ruhasi awaz
me)- mera janu bhai.
Main rote hue bhi hasne laga,
or uska chehra pakad kar har jagah paglon
ki tarhan se kiss karne laga.
Main - bohot miss kiya hai maine tujhe,
I love you jaan
(Main uske aansu saaf karte hue bola)
Ab in aankhon me ek bhi aansu nahin aana chahiye.
Mansi (apna chehra meri chhati se ragadte
hue)- hmmmm
Main - chal priya ke paas chalte hain,
wo bechari hamari vajha se udas hai.
Mansi - Bhai Sorry,
Main - wo kis liye?
Mansi - wo maine aapko mom - dad ki mout ka ......
(Ye kehte hue uske phir se aansu nikalne lage)
Main (usko tight hug karke) - Manu, maine
tujhe mana kiya tha na, ke ab ek bhi aansu
nahin nikalna chahiye, bhool ja wo sab ab
bas ham or hamari family.....
Mansi (apne aansu saaf karte hue) - chaliye
priya ke paas jana hai na,
Main muskurate hue uske sath priya ke room
ki taraf chal diya.
Tabhi mere phone ki ghanti baji -
Raju (phone par)- Bhai - Bhai, Pallavi ka pata
chal gaya.......##########№###### vahan
par hai###
Main - theek hai main dekhta hun.
chuke hain,
Hamara poora bussiness Priya ke Dad yani
Phupha ji ne
Sambhal liya hai,
Sab kuchh sahi chalna shuru ho gaya hai,
par main mom -
Dad ko bohot miss karta hun,
Ham sabhi ne apne - apne school/ College
jana start kar diya hai.
Bas ek baat ajeeb hui hai, jis din se main vapas aaya hun,
Mujhe Pallavi dikhai nahin di, Na vo ek baar
bhi college aayi.
Uske ghar par bhi Tala latka hua tha,
uske bare me kisi ko kuchh bhi pata nahin
hai, Raju zyadatar mere sath hi rehta hai,
or Mariya (Raju's sister) gaw me hamne jo
nayi company start ki thi, wo uska kaam dekhti hai, vahin shift ho gayi hai,
bas phone par baaten ho jati hain.
Anjalika ne bhi koi baat nahin ki hai us din se,
na hi wo mujhe apne aas - paas kabhi mehsoos hui.
Dada - dadi or chacha - chachi hamse roz baat karte hain,
Pata nahin Mansi ko kya hua hai
wo mujhse thoda kati - kati si
rehne lagi hai, par main sab kuchh jaldi hi theek kar dunga.
Sheetal or uski mummy ko maine request
karke apne sath hi shift karva liya hai,
or sakshi bhi ab hamare hi sath rehti hai.
or mere hi sath college jati hai.
Meri neend subha 6 baje khuli,
Leeza mere hi paas so rahi thi,
Sote time badi hi cute lagti thi, maine uske
fule - fule galon oar kis kiya, jisse vo
kasmasane lagi, mere chehre par
muskaan aa gayi,
Maine uski avaz dekar uthaya usne
dhire se apni aakhen kholin,
Maine uske mathe par kiss kar liya,
wo bhi muskurate hue uth kar baith gayi,
Main - Good Morning Jaan.
Leeza - Good Morning, Aaj bohot dino baad itni pyari subha hui hai,
pata nahin kab se miss kar rahi thi.
(Wo muskurate hue boli)
Main - achchha ab mujhe coffee nahin pilaogi.
Wo uth kar chali gayi, or mere liye coffee bana kar le ayi.
Maine coffee pee or fresh hone washroom
me chala gaya,
Bahar aaya to bed par kapde rakhe hue the,
Par leeza vahan par nahin thi,
shayad bakiyon ko uthane gayi hogi.
Main fatafat tayyar hua, or jaldi - jaldi me car lekar nikal gaya.
Raste me maine fresh flower khareede,
or pohoch gaya Mom - Dad ki samadhi par,
Maine flowers unki samadhi par rakhe or bola -
Happy Anniversary Mom & Dad
Phir main vahin par baith gaya, or unse dheron baaten karne laga.
Waise to main yahan aata rehta tha,
par aaj kuchh special din tha,
Isi liye subha sabse pehle mom - dad ke paas aa gaya.
Kuchh time vahan bitane ke baad main
vapas ghar pohcha,
Sakshi tayyar baithi thi, college jane ke liye.
Maine sab ke sath breakfast kiya,
sabhi ne shanti se breakfast kiya,
Jab se mom dad hame chhodkar gaye the
tabh se sab kuchh change sa ho gaya tha,
pehle jaisi masti to ab khatam hi ho gayi thi,
Koi aapas me baat karta bhi tha wo bhi sirf
matlab ki baat hoti thi.
Khair breakfast khatam karke main or sakshi
college ke liye nikal pade,
(In Car)
Sakshi - Bhai or kitne din aisa chalta rahega ?
Main - to tu hi bata main kya karun?
Sakshi (ek gehri saans chhodkar) - aap ghar
ke ekloute mard ho,
Aap ko hi sab sambhalna padega. Sab se
baat karo, ghar ka mahol bigad chuka hai,
use apko hi sambhalna hoga, varna sab
barbad ho jayega.
Main - keh to tu theek rahi hai, chal main hi
kuchh sochta hun.
Baat karte - karte ham college pohoch gaye.
Maine car park ki or ham sidha apni - apni
class me chale gaye.
Main Raju ke paas jakar baith gaya, or usse
baaten karne laga,
Kyonki class start hone me abhi time tha.
College ke baad sakshi ke sath main ghar aa
gaya,
Mansi, Priya or sheetal ghar par aa chuki thin,
Liza to ghar par hi rehti thi.
Main fresh hokar dining table par pohcha, Liza ne khana serve kiya maine or sakshi ne
sath me lunch kiya. Baaki sab kha chuke the.
Lunch karke main Mansi se milne uske room
me chal diya.
Or uska door knock kiya.
Mansi (andar se) - kon hai?
Main - main hun.
Mansi - abhi main busy hun baad me aana.
Ye sunkar mera dil jalkar reh gaya,
par main aaj sab sahi karne ka sochkar
aaya tha.
Main door ko kholte hue andar chala gaya,
Wo ulti letakr Lapy me kuchh kar rahi thi.
Usne mujhe gusse se ghoor kar dekha.
Mansi (gusee se)- kya aapko manners nahin
hai,
is ghar me kya ab privacy bhi nahin bachi,
Mere kahon me aansu aa gaye, par main
usse behes karne nahin aya tha.
Main - (dheere se) - Tu to meri jaan hua karti
thi, mujhse pyar karti thi, phir aisa kya hua jo
mujhse nafrat karne lagi?
Mansi - aap mere room se abhi nikal jaiyye,
varna achchha nahin hoga.
Main - main javaab liye bagair nahin jaunga.
Mansi (uthkar baithte hue)- sunna hi chahte
ho to suno,
Mom Dad ki mout ke zimmedaar tum ho,
tumhari vajha se wo aaj hamare beech nahin
hain, bolo kya javaab hai iska apke paas?
(Uski aakhon se aansu Tap - Tap girne lage)
Main kuchh nahin bol pa raha tha,
mera sar niche jhuk gaya tha.,
Or aansu beh rahe the.
Mansi - or oopar se aap unse badla lena
chahte ho, ye kaise bhool gaye ki jin logon
ne ek hi vaar se mom - dad ko hamse chheen liya,
Wo hame bhi maar sakte hain.
Main - main aisa nahin hone dunga.
Mansi (zor se chilla kar) - Jab mom - dad par
unhone vaar kiya tha, tabh kya kar liya aapne,
tabh kahan gayin thin apki shaktiyan.
Main (uski taraf dekhte hue)- mujhe koi badla
nahin lena, jo tu bolegi waisa hi hoga,
mujhe kuchh nahin chahiye bas tu vapas aa ja,
Varna main seh nahin paunga. Main tujhse
bheekh mangta hun.
(Ye kehte hue main ghutno ke bal baith kar
rone laga)
Mansi mere paas ayi or mukhe utha kar apne
gale se laga kar rone lagi, ham dono ke man
me ek gubbar sa tha, shayad vo ab nikal
raha tha.
Mansi (mujhse alag hokar)- mujhe vachan
dijiye, ke aap ab kisi shakti ka istimal nahin
karoge, or koi badla nahin loge.
Main - main tere sar ki kasam khakar bolta
hun, jo tu bolegi vaisa hi karunga.
Mansi (mere gaal par kiss karke ruhasi awaz
me)- mera janu bhai.
Main rote hue bhi hasne laga,
or uska chehra pakad kar har jagah paglon
ki tarhan se kiss karne laga.
Main - bohot miss kiya hai maine tujhe,
I love you jaan
(Main uske aansu saaf karte hue bola)
Ab in aankhon me ek bhi aansu nahin aana chahiye.
Mansi (apna chehra meri chhati se ragadte
hue)- hmmmm
Main - chal priya ke paas chalte hain,
wo bechari hamari vajha se udas hai.
Mansi - Bhai Sorry,
Main - wo kis liye?
Mansi - wo maine aapko mom - dad ki mout ka ......
(Ye kehte hue uske phir se aansu nikalne lage)
Main (usko tight hug karke) - Manu, maine
tujhe mana kiya tha na, ke ab ek bhi aansu
nahin nikalna chahiye, bhool ja wo sab ab
bas ham or hamari family.....
Mansi (apne aansu saaf karte hue) - chaliye
priya ke paas jana hai na,
Main muskurate hue uske sath priya ke room
ki taraf chal diya.
Tabhi mere phone ki ghanti baji -
Raju (phone par)- Bhai - Bhai, Pallavi ka pata
chal gaya.......##########№###### vahan
par hai###
Main - theek hai main dekhta hun.
To... Be... Continue
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Update - 94
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Kahani Ab Tak -
---------------------------
Keela - (Apni jagah se khade hokar-
-uski peeth thapthapate hue) - Shabash! Senapati.
Ab samaye aa gaya hai dusre plan ko anjaam dene ka.
Nablees - Jo aagya maharaj.
(Or idhar Rocky ke ghar me)
Main achanak apne bed se uth kar baith gaya
Mooommm Dadddddd
Leeza ekdam se uth kar baith gayi, or mujhe gale
laga liya.
Leeza - kya hua aapko?
Main - kuchh nahin bura sapna tha... Or main uska
Matha chumkar usko bahon me bharke phir se sone
ki koshish karne laga
-------------------
Ab Aage -
-------------------
Aaj Mom - Dad ko guzre hue pure 10 din ho
chuke hain,
Hamara poora bussiness Priya ke Dad yani
Phupha ji ne
Sambhal liya hai,
Sab kuchh sahi chalna shuru ho gaya hai,
par main mom -
Dad ko bohot miss karta hun,
Ham sabhi ne apne - apne school/ College
jana start kar diya hai.
Bas ek baat ajeeb hui hai, jis din se main vapas aaya hun,
Mujhe Pallavi dikhai nahin di, Na vo ek baar
bhi college aayi.
Uske ghar par bhi Tala latka hua tha,
uske bare me kisi ko kuchh bhi pata nahin
hai, Raju zyadatar mere sath hi rehta hai,
or Mariya (Raju's sister) gaw me hamne jo
nayi company start ki thi, wo uska kaam dekhti hai, vahin shift ho gayi hai,
bas phone par baaten ho jati hain.
Anjalika ne bhi koi baat nahin ki hai us din se,
na hi wo mujhe apne aas - paas kabhi mehsoos hui.
Dada - dadi or chacha - chachi hamse roz baat karte hain,
Pata nahin Mansi ko kya hua hai
wo mujhse thoda kati - kati si
rehne lagi hai, par main sab kuchh jaldi hi theek kar dunga.
Sheetal or uski mummy ko maine request
karke apne sath hi shift karva liya hai,
or sakshi bhi ab hamare hi sath rehti hai.
or mere hi sath college jati hai.
Meri neend subha 6 baje khuli,
Leeza mere hi paas so rahi thi,
Sote time badi hi cute lagti thi, maine uske
fule - fule galon oar kis kiya, jisse vo
kasmasane lagi, mere chehre par
muskaan aa gayi,
Maine uski avaz dekar uthaya usne
dhire se apni aakhen kholin,
Maine uske mathe par kiss kar liya,
wo bhi muskurate hue uth kar baith gayi,
Main - Good Morning Jaan.
Leeza - Good Morning, Aaj bohot dino baad itni pyari subha hui hai,
pata nahin kab se miss kar rahi thi.
(Wo muskurate hue boli)
Main - achchha ab mujhe coffee nahin pilaogi.
Wo uth kar chali gayi, or mere liye coffee bana kar le ayi.
Maine coffee pee or fresh hone washroom
me chala gaya,
Bahar aaya to bed par kapde rakhe hue the,
Par leeza vahan par nahin thi,
shayad bakiyon ko uthane gayi hogi.
Main fatafat tayyar hua, or jaldi - jaldi me car lekar nikal gaya.
Raste me maine fresh flower khareede,
or pohoch gaya Mom - Dad ki samadhi par,
Maine flowers unki samadhi par rakhe or bola -
Happy Anniversary Mom & Dad
Phir main vahin par baith gaya, or unse dheron baaten karne laga.
Waise to main yahan aata rehta tha,
par aaj kuchh special din tha,
Isi liye subha sabse pehle mom - dad ke paas aa gaya.
Kuchh time vahan bitane ke baad main
vapas ghar pohcha,
Sakshi tayyar baithi thi, college jane ke liye.
Maine sab ke sath breakfast kiya,
sabhi ne shanti se breakfast kiya,
Jab se mom dad hame chhodkar gaye the
tabh se sab kuchh change sa ho gaya tha,
pehle jaisi masti to ab khatam hi ho gayi thi,
Koi aapas me baat karta bhi tha wo bhi sirf
matlab ki baat hoti thi.
Khair breakfast khatam karke main or sakshi
college ke liye nikal pade,
(In Car)
Sakshi - Bhai or kitne din aisa chalta rahega ?
Main - to tu hi bata main kya karun?
Sakshi (ek gehri saans chhodkar) - aap ghar
ke ekloute mard ho,
Aap ko hi sab sambhalna padega. Sab se
baat karo, ghar ka mahol bigad chuka hai,
use apko hi sambhalna hoga, varna sab
barbad ho jayega.
Main - keh to tu theek rahi hai, chal main hi
kuchh sochta hun.
Baat karte - karte ham college pohoch gaye.
Maine car park ki or ham sidha apni - apni
class me chale gaye.
Main Raju ke paas jakar baith gaya, or usse
baaten karne laga,
Kyonki class start hone me abhi time tha.
College ke baad sakshi ke sath main ghar aa
gaya,
Mansi, Priya or sheetal ghar par aa chuki thin,
Liza to ghar par hi rehti thi.
Main fresh hokar dining table par pohcha, Liza ne khana serve kiya maine or sakshi ne
sath me lunch kiya. Baaki sab kha chuke the.
Lunch karke main Mansi se milne uske room
me chal diya.
Or uska door knock kiya.
Mansi (andar se) - kon hai?
Main - main hun.
Mansi - abhi main busy hun baad me aana.
Ye sunkar mera dil jalkar reh gaya,
par main aaj sab sahi karne ka sochkar
aaya tha.
Main door ko kholte hue andar chala gaya,
Wo ulti letakr Lapy me kuchh kar rahi thi.
Usne mujhe gusse se ghoor kar dekha.
Mansi (gusee se)- kya aapko manners nahin
hai,
is ghar me kya ab privacy bhi nahin bachi,
Mere kahon me aansu aa gaye, par main
usse behes karne nahin aya tha.
Main - (dheere se) - Tu to meri jaan hua karti
thi, mujhse pyar karti thi, phir aisa kya hua jo
mujhse nafrat karne lagi?
Mansi - aap mere room se abhi nikal jaiyye,
varna achchha nahin hoga.
Main - main javaab liye bagair nahin jaunga.
Mansi (uthkar baithte hue)- sunna hi chahte
ho to suno,
Mom Dad ki mout ke zimmedaar tum ho,
tumhari vajha se wo aaj hamare beech nahin
hain, bolo kya javaab hai iska apke paas?
(Uski aakhon se aansu Tap - Tap girne lage)
Main kuchh nahin bol pa raha tha,
mera sar niche jhuk gaya tha.,
Or aansu beh rahe the.
Mansi - or oopar se aap unse badla lena
chahte ho, ye kaise bhool gaye ki jin logon
ne ek hi vaar se mom - dad ko hamse chheen liya,
Wo hame bhi maar sakte hain.
Main - main aisa nahin hone dunga.
Mansi (zor se chilla kar) - Jab mom - dad par
unhone vaar kiya tha, tabh kya kar liya aapne,
tabh kahan gayin thin apki shaktiyan.
Main (uski taraf dekhte hue)- mujhe koi badla
nahin lena, jo tu bolegi waisa hi hoga,
mujhe kuchh nahin chahiye bas tu vapas aa ja,
Varna main seh nahin paunga. Main tujhse
bheekh mangta hun.
(Ye kehte hue main ghutno ke bal baith kar
rone laga)
Mansi mere paas ayi or mukhe utha kar apne
gale se laga kar rone lagi, ham dono ke man
me ek gubbar sa tha, shayad vo ab nikal
raha tha.
Mansi (mujhse alag hokar)- mujhe vachan
dijiye, ke aap ab kisi shakti ka istimal nahin
karoge, or koi badla nahin loge.
Main - main tere sar ki kasam khakar bolta
hun, jo tu bolegi vaisa hi karunga.
Mansi (mere gaal par kiss karke ruhasi awaz
me)- mera janu bhai.
Main rote hue bhi hasne laga,
or uska chehra pakad kar har jagah paglon
ki tarhan se kiss karne laga.
Main - bohot miss kiya hai maine tujhe,
I love you jaan
(Main uske aansu saaf karte hue bola)
Ab in aankhon me ek bhi aansu nahin aana chahiye.
Mansi (apna chehra meri chhati se ragadte
hue)- hmmmm
Main - chal priya ke paas chalte hain,
wo bechari hamari vajha se udas hai.
Mansi - Bhai Sorry,
Main - wo kis liye?
Mansi - wo maine aapko mom - dad ki mout ka ......
(Ye kehte hue uske phir se aansu nikalne lage)
Main (usko tight hug karke) - Manu, maine
tujhe mana kiya tha na, ke ab ek bhi aansu
nahin nikalna chahiye, bhool ja wo sab ab
bas ham or hamari family.....
Mansi (apne aansu saaf karte hue) - chaliye
priya ke paas jana hai na,
Main muskurate hue uske sath priya ke room
ki taraf chal diya.
Tabhi mere phone ki ghanti baji -
Raju (phone par)- Bhai - Bhai, Pallavi ka pata
chal gaya.......##########№###### vahan
par hai###
Main - theek hai main dekhta hun.
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