Thriller ATMAKAMI....Mindfuck Thriller(Completed)

[Yug Purush]

Waiting Bhai

Posted

Ok bro waiting

Done

Congratulations For restarting you story Ap ke story chorne ke baad main ne ye story parhi thi lekin jab us ka end nahi mila to pure 2 mahine Har site per check karta raha ke kanhi to complete ho gi lekin Afsoos ye storie Kanhi bhi complete nahi mili aj aisa feel ho raha hai jaise saalo se bichra Ashiq wapis mio gaya hai yaar sachi bohat khusi huwi Ab aur intezar nahi hota jaldi se story chapo excitement ke mare likha bhi nahi ja raha yaar ab shuru ker de bohat intezar karwaya hai lekin storie dobara shuru ker ke sab gile shikwe khatam ker diye hai ap ne Ab pata nahi kitni baad Xforum ke chakar lagao ga aj ke Story start huwi ya nahi huwi zada tarpai na bhai

Bahut bahut dhanyavaad bhai... bas aise hee review padh ke toh josh josh me atmakami likhna shuru kar diya aur fir aaj complete bhi kar diya.... aise hee josh dilate rahe

Intezarrrrr rahega bhaiya ji......

7 page bina update

Ho jata hai kabhi kabhi

Bhai woh story end bhi hui thi kya ??atmakami ability ya disorder last Mai hero ki halat kharab ho jati hai aur woh pagal ho jata hai aisa dikhaya hai

Halat kharab to shuru se hee thi bhai... baki pagal hua tha ya nahi... yahi story ka theme hai *ability or disorder*

And another thing, he is not pagal, bec he is not born usne avtar liya hai

One of my fav. Dialogue

 

[harshit1890]

823 panne

YYhn aunga ab sidhe padne ke baad ya aunga to comnt dekr nkal lunga warna koi na koi spoiler maar dega

 

[Yug Purush]

Changes honewale hai story Mai ya same wahi hai end bhi??

Ek baar already change kar chuka hu... 3 girls of my life se... abki baar change karta toh readers ban karwa dete

SGP bhai wapas aagaye
Atmakami ki ending padhne milegi ab
waiting for your story

Posted... read and review

Done

Yes samaj me nahi aa raha hai... Poll me pandey ji ka laundiya ka naam kyun hai

Pandey ji ki laundiya se inspired hoke angelina silva bani hai... toh bahut important hai pandey ji ki laundiya

Pdf daal dia re... ab raat kali hgi ise padh kar

Ekdum ... hariya kaku aapka hee reason... mera matlab review xb me dekhkar josh josh me atmakami start ki thi.... Thank you bhai

 

[Yug Purush]

823 panne

YYhn aunga ab sidhe padne ke baad ya aunga to comnt dekr nkal lunga warna koi na koi spoiler maar dega

kisi ne end bak diya .. toh khade armano par dhokha ho jayega...
.
Kisi ka reply karna bhool gaya hounga toh ... jaante hee ho kya karna hai...
Aur poll me vote karna na bhule...
Thank you all

 

[Genius]

 

[harshit1890]

Ekdum ... hariya kaku aapka hee reason... mera matlab review xb me dekhkar josh josh me atmakami start ki thi.... Thank you bhai

Gyani bhai, mei yahan bhi aisa hi karunga akar kyun ki mujhe pata hai mujhse raha nahi jayega
Apki soch arman ko lekar mere liye ek bahut badi inspiration hai ki banda reality ko reality nahi manta usko jis tarah dkhana likhna, mei fan hu apka thank you for writing this saga....

Ab to kuch update padne ke baad hi ayega apun

 

[Yug Purush]

Ye formality wale comment nahi

 

[harshit1890]

kisi ne end bak diya .. toh khade armano par dhokha ho jayega...
.
Kisi ka reply karna bhool gaya hounga toh ... jaante hee ho kya karna hai...
Aur poll me vote karna na bhule...
Thank you all

Isliye ankh band karke pehle post par jakar comment marunga... last page par na aunga
Apun vote de chuka hai

 

[Yug Purush]

Gyani bhai, mei yahan bhi aisa hi karunga akar kyun ki mujhe pata hai mujhse raha nahi jayega
Apki soch arman ko lekar mere liye ek bahut badi inspiration hai ki banda reality ko reality nahi manta usko jis tarah dkhana likhna, mei fan hu apka thank you for writing this saga....

Ab to kuch update padne ke baad hi ayega apun

Ab lagta hai ATMAKAMI-2 BHI likhwa doge kya

Isliye ankh band karke pehle post par jakar comment marunga... last page par na aunga
Apun vote de chuka hai

sajjano aur sajniyo... beech-beech me review dete rahe aur 1st post se de... you've been warned.

 

[harshit1890]

Ab lagta hai ATMAKAMI-2 BHI likhwa doge kya

sajjano aur sajniyo... beech-beech me review dete rahe aur 1st post se de... you've been warned.

are kya newswa de rahe ho ab to 2 bhi ayegi....