Thriller Haivannnn........

[Nky]

Great update bhai

 

[Akil]

Vishwas ke subconcious mind mein aakhir chal kya raha hai? Aur doctors hairaan kyon hue?
Woh khabri un dono ki safety ke liye aaya tha ya sirf baldev ke parents aur priya ki safety ke liye? Aur abhi bhi yeh nahin saaf hua ki woh log the kaun aur unki kya dushmani thi vishwas se?

 

[kamdev99008]

kisi ki jaan lene ke bad pachhtane wale ko mafi................kya sahi hai

kuchh ideologist ki nazar mein ho sakti hai................. meri nazar mein nahin

seema aur baldev ko unke gumahon ki bharpur saza milni chahiye
bas maut nahin milne di jaye

dekhte hain abhi kya hua vishwas ke subconcious mind ki wajah se

update jaldi dena

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

Nice update

 

[Aryanv]

Update 51

(Note:- dosto jisne pahla flashback nahi padha ho!!! Update 25 to 32 tak padh lijiye taki aapko pata chale...)

Is waqt thakur parivar pura hospital me tha..
Yani papa ,maa, Aur Prem..

Aur aandar mera ilaj chal raha tha...

Vese to Mai puri tarah thik tha.. Lekin khun jyada bah gaya tha.. Jiski vajah se kabhi sansen bhot jor se chalti to kabhi bhot dhimi chalti..

Dr meri sanson ko durast karne ki kosis kar rahe the ki..

Usi waqt mere dimag ne kaam karna band kar diya..

Yani coma me ja chuka tha..

Aur Mari sanshen thik tarah se nahi chal rahi thi.. Dr ko kus bhi smj me nahi aa raha tha..

Ab Mai hospital kese pahuncha??? To chalo thoda pise chalte he...

Maa Aur papa bs aapne hi socho me gum the..

Unko jese kisi baat ka hosh hi nahi tha...

Phone pe ring pe ring baj rahi thi lekin un KO vo bhi pata nahi chal raha tha..

Aakhir phone ne bhi bajna band kar diya..

Lekin vo to usi haal me hi bethe huye sabki bato KO yaad kar rahe the..

Khaskar meri bato KO...

Vo aapni socho me yunhi rahte lekin kus waqt baad Prem ghar pe aata he..

Jo 2 Dino se aapne kisi dost ke ghar tha...

Vo aate hi Maa Aur papa KO aavaz lagate he..

Jab koi aavaz nahi aata to vo Maa Aur papa ke room me jata he jaha vo Maa papa KO dekhta he..

Vo Maa ke pass jakar Maa KO khandhe se hilakar bulata he..

Prem... Maa ... Maa...

Maa..(hosh me aakar) ha kya hua???

Prem.... Kabse aavaz de raha hu.. Lekin aap log kus bol q nahi rahe ho???

Maa... Kus nahi.. Vo sodo tum kab aaye???

Prem.... Bs abhi aaya???

Prem...(Maa-papa ke chahere ki Aur dekhkar) aap do no ro rahe the kya???

Papa.... Nahi to beta???

Prem... Fir aapki aankho me aanshu q he?? Aur thodi suji huyi bhi he???

Papa....(hadbadaht me).. Vo... Vo... Kus nahi...
Tum... Aapne room me jao!!!

Prem...OK... Vese priya kaha he???

Maa... Vo.. To... Vo... Aapne dost ke ghar gayi he!! Ab tum jao..

Prem...OK..vese bhi bhot thak gaya hu...

Maa... Tum Jake aaram Karo....

Fir Prem aapne room me chale jate he...

Prem ke Jane ke baad..

Maa.... Hume ek baar unko phone karke mafi magni chahiye..

Papa.... Aese vo humare call risive nahi karenge...

Maa... To fir kya kare?? Muje abhi bhi unki kahi huyi bate hi dimag me ghum rahi he..

Papa... Hum abhi ganv niklte he... Vaha jakar hum unse mafi mang lenge...

Maa....kya meri Maa Aur aapke Maa Aur pitaji Hume maaf karenge????

Papa... Ha .. Vo Hume jarur maaf karenge!!

Maa.... Myje nahi lagta????

Papa.... Viswas.. Vo hi Hume mafi dilvayega sabse...

Maa.... Ha mere bete ke kahne pe vo sab Hume maaf kar denge..

Papa.... Kash hum aapne bete KO smj pate???

Maa.... Us KO pata hone par bhi ki kheer me zahar he fir bhi vo us KO mera pyar smjkar pi gaya!!

Papa.... Aur humne itna bada gunah kar diya!!!

Maa... Bs ab bhot ho chuka... Me usko ab Maa ka pyar jarur dungi... Jiski hamesha se us KO talap thi..

Papa... Hum vo Maa-baap banke sabko dikhayenge jiski viswas KO tammanna thi...

Maa....to fir chalte he... Mujse ab aapne bete ki duri bardast nahi hoti.. Vo log Jo kahenge vo karungi.. Lekin bs muje mere bete ke pass rahne de..

Papa.... Tum sahi kahti ho... Ab hum humesha ganv me hi rahenge.. Is sahar KO sod denge.. Aur aapne bete ke pass hi rahenge..

Papa... Me Varsha KO bhi bula leta hu.. Kal subah hote hi hum yaha se ganv ke liye nikal jayenge...

Maa.... Ha aap ysko bhi bula lijiye...

Papa phone me hath me lekar phone ko unlock karte he to bhot si miss call thi.. Vo bhi unke khabri ki...

Papa...(man me) khabri ne itni call q ki??? Baad me us KO call karta hu..(fir kus sochkar) sayad kus emergency huyi to.. Usko hi pahle call karke baat kar leta hu...

Aesa sochkar vo khabri KO call karne lagte he...

2 ring me hi samne se call risive hoti he...

Lekin sirf ek hi word sunte he ki call cut ho jati he...

Papa....(man me) ye kya sirf ek shabd hi bola Aur call cut kar diya... Sayad kahi kisi problem me to nahi fas gaya... Kus to garbad lag rahi he.. Firse try karta hu..

Aesa bolke vo firse call karne lagte he.. Lekin is baar samne se call call cut ho jati he...

Papa firse call karne hi vale hote he ki msg tone bajti he..

To vo msj khabri ka hi tha..

Jisme likha tha ki...

" aapke bache viswas Aur priya ki jaan khatre me he.. Mene Jo location bheji he.. Vaha turant aapni police team ke sath aa jayiye.."

Ye padhte hi papa ke hath se phone niche gir jata he..

Maa KO jese hi phone niche girne ki aavaz aati he ki vo turant hi vapas palatkar Jo abhi room se bahar nikalkar Prem ke room ki aur Jane vali thi..

Vo vapas palatkar room me aati he.. Jaha dekhti he ki papa aese hi niche Bethe huye the Aur unka phone side me gira hua tha...

Maa KO kisi anhoni ki aasanka ho jati he.. Ki jarur kus to garbad huyi he..

Vo turant papa ke pass aakar unko hilakar hosh me lati he...

Maa.... Kya hua he??? Aur aap aese q Bethe he???

Papa... Vo... Vo... Viswas.... Vo.... Priya...

Maa... Ye kya kabhi viswas Aur kabhi priya bol rahe he.??? Kya hua he mere bacho KO???

Papa.... Vo...vo.....vo.... Unki jaan ko ......

Maa.... Kya hua he unki jaan KO???

Papa.... Vo unki jaan KO khatra he!!!

Maa....(chillake) kyaaaa?????

Maa.... Aapko kese pata????

Papa.... Abhi abhi mere khabri ka msg aaya tha!!

Ye sunke Maa stabdh ho jati he.. Tabhi jese unke kano me aavaze aane lagti he...

Maaaaaaaa........ Bacccchhhhoooo.....
Maaaaaaaa........baaaccccchhhhhooooo.....

Ye aavaze viswas Aur priya ki thi Jo un KO bachane KO kah rahi thi..

Maa turant khud KO sambhalkar.

Maa.... To fir yahan bethke kya kar rahe he... Jayiye humare bacho KO bachayiye... Yaha intzaar karte rahogi ki kab unki maut ho Jaye????

Papa....nahi....nahi.... Nahi aesa nahi ho sakta... Me aapne bacho KO kus nahi hone dunga....

Maa.... To fir yaha q bethe ho???? Jayiye jaldi kijiye..!!! Isse pahle kus anhoni ho Jaye....

Fir papa turant aapni police team KO call karke usi location pe bula lete he..

Aur vo khud bhi us jagah ke liye nikal jate he...

Vaha pahunchkar dekhte he ki road pe tyre ke Nisan the... Jo break lagne se huye the...

Papa turant aapni police team KO puri jagah search karne KO kahte he...

To vaha un he kus logo ki lashe milti he...

Tabhi ek inspector ki najar Prem Aur priya par padti he.. To vo turant papa KO vaha bulate he..

Jaha vo humari halat dekhkar Rone lagte he..
Kese bhi karke unko unki team sambhalti he...

Tabhi unko Dada Aur dadi ka khyal aata he...

Lekin puri jagah talash Karna par bhi unko kus nahi milta...

To vo niche khayi me dhudhne KO kahte he...

Lekin pahle unki team papa ko Hume hospital le Jane KO kahti he...

Aur papa Hume hospital le jate he...

Jaha is waqt mera Aur priya ka ilaj ho raha tha..

Dr ki team fir mere mind ka MRI karte he.. Jinse unko zatka lagta he.. Jaha mind puri tarah se kaam karna band kar deta he... tha.. Vahi mere mind ka dusra hissa puri tarah se kaam kar raha tha..

Yani kaha Jaye to main brain bilkul kaam nahi kar raha tha vahi subconscious brain puri tarah se kaam kar raha tha..

Dr ki kus samaj me hi nahi aa raha tha.. Tabhi meri aankhe aapne aap khulne lagi...

Fir Jo hua vo Dr ki team ne socha bhi nahi tha...

Fantastic update

 

[DiNu DraCula]

Update 52

Dr ki kus samaj me hi nahi aa raha tha.. Tabhi meri aankhe aapne aap khulne lagi...

Fir Jo hua vo Dr ki team ne socha bhi nahi tha...

Dr team abhi pahle sadme se bahar bhi nahi nikli thi ki kese ek insan thodi der pahle coma me tha.. Vo kus hi minutes me vapas hosh me aa chuka tha..

Abhi vo kus smj pate usse pahle hi Mai Jo bed pe leta hua tha.. Vo turant hi khada ho gaya...

Mai is waqt Dr Aur uski team KO dekh raha tha..

Lekin muje kus hosh nahi tha.. Qki mera dimag hi mere control me nahi tha..

Is waqt jese Mai hu hi nahi.. Lekin mujme koi Aur tha..

Tabhi mene side rakhe Dr ke aujar me se kenchi utha li.

Jo mere najdik Jo Dr khada tha.. Uske hath me maar deta hu..

Mai us Dr ke najdik jakar..

Mai...(bacche ki aavaz me) hihihihi... Ale..le.le.. Uncle aapko to chot lag gayi... Hihihihi.. Uncle... Uncle .... Ghoda baniye n!!!!

Mai.... (Bache ki aavaz me)Muje n ghode ki savari karni he.!!!

Dr2...(main Dr se)... Sir ye kya kar raha he Dr1 ke sath????

Abhi Dr kus jawab deta usse pahle Mai Dr2 ke pass pahunch kar..

Mere Jo hath me kenchi thi vo us Dr2 ke hath me mar deta hu...

Mai....(Dr2 ke munh pe ungli rakhkr)(bache ki aavaz me)shhhhh....... Uncle aapna boliye mat.. Muje bich me bolne vale pasand nahi...

Aur fir vapas Dr1 ke pass jakar..

Mai....(bache ki avaz me) uncle ... Plz... Aap ghoda baniye n muje ghode ki sawari karni he... Aur vo geet bhi gayiyega..

"Lakde ki Kathi,
Kathi pe ghoda
Ghode ki dum pe
Jo mara hathoda
(Ye kahke ek laat Dr1 ki pisvade pe maar deta hu aur bache ki aavaz me hashne lagta hu)
Ghoda dum dabake bhaga..
Hihihihihihihi...

Mai.... (Bache ki aavaz me) chaliye.... Chaliye..... Uncle ab ghoda baniye....

Abhi iske aage kus bolta usse pahle..(Jo sabne tay kiya tha isaro isaro me)

Sab milkar muje pakad lete he..

Lekin usse Mai Rone lagta hu...

Mai....(bache ki aavaz me Dr se) uncle... Plz... Muje sod dijiye n... Bhot dard ho raha he..

Jisse main Dr kus sochne lagte he meri baat Pe..

Dr2...(main Dr se) plz sir sodne KO mat kahna... Ye iska natak lagta he muje... Muje to ye bhot bada pagal lagta he.. Jo ek haivannn he..

Jese hi haivan shabd mere kano pe padta he...

Muje pata nahi kya hota he.???
Aur kaha se mujme taqat aati he..

Ki jor se chillake pure jor se sabki pakad se sut jata hu.. Aur meri vajah se Jo dhakka laga tha.

Usse sab alag alag jagah gir jate he..

Mai....(bache ki aavaz me)haivannnn.....(hath se tali bajate huye). Very good uncle... Bhot acha naam he... (Dr2 se) Mai ye naam rakh sakta hu...

Sab abhi huye hadse se shock me the.. Vo meri baat ka koi jawab nahi deta...

Jisse mera gussa badh raha tha...

Mai....(chillake bache ki aavaz me) meri baat ka jawab do....

Jab fir se koi jawab nahi deta to..

Mai Dr1 ki Aur kenchi leke badhne lagta hu.

Aur jese hi usko Marne KO hota hu ki.

Ek chikh sunayi deti he..

"Bhhaaaiiiiyyyyyyyaaaaaa"

Aur usi chikh ke sath mai hosh me aa jata hu...

Aur Mai Charo Aur dekhne lagta hu...

Mai..(man me) Mai kaha hu???? (Jab Charo Aur dekhta hu to) ye to hospital he... Lekin Mai yaha kese pahuncha??? Mai to(fir dimag me jese sab yaad aane lagta he)

Aur jese hi sab yaad aa jata he.. Usike sath Mai behosh ho jata hu...

Priya side

Priya KO sir pe chot jarur lagi thi.. Lekin bahri ghav jyada nahi tha...

Aur uska ilaj to turant ho gaya tha...

Jab Mai yaha tandav kar raha tha... Tabhi priya chikh ke sath uth jati he...

 

[DiNu DraCula]

10 Dino tak aapko adjust karna padega dosto...
Qki thoda personal kaam he us me busy hu...
Update jarur aayega..
Lekin bade update nahi de Santa..

 

[gOlDy]

10 Dino tak aapko adjust karna padega dosto...
Qki thoda personal kaam he us me busy hu...
Update jarur aayega..
Lekin bade update nahi de Santa..

No problem dear, pta h sabko dheere dheere lockdown khul rha h to pehle kaam dhandha fir ye sab.

 

[Shah40]

No problem bhai

 

[Black water]

Nice update