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Fantasy Karmyudh ( Completed )

gOlDy

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Karmyudh
ye meri nayi story ka title hai, jaisa ki aap logo se promise kiya tha ki jald likhunga aur is baar apni fav. fantasy story likhunga. to hazir hai. pichhli story jo ki maine bataya tha copy paste kar raha tha, kinhi kaarno se poori nahi ho paayi to uska full story ka pdf link maine apne signature me add kar diya hai, jo dost padh rahe they yahan se poora padh sakte hain. aur sath hi ummid karta hu aap sabhi ne jo pyaar aur hausla afzaai pichhli stories me mujhe di is story me bhi continue rahegi . waise bhi isme mujhe aap logo k sath ki adhik jarurat padegi kyoki ye shayad ek lambi story banne ja raha hai. so jude rahe, have a nice day.


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UPDATE 1

“Aaahhh… mera sir…” main jaise neend se jaagte hi bhayankar peeda mehsoos kar rha tha. Sab dhundhla sa najar aa raha tha. kuch palo baad jab najar ne kaam karna shuru kiya to maine charo aur dekha. Main shayad hospital ke bistar par tha kyoki paas hi ek doctor aur nurse khade they.

“how are you feeling young man” shayad Dr ne poochha.

“ahhh.. sir fata jaa rha hai mera, kahan hoon main” maine karahti awaz me jawab diya.

“Central hospital *******” ye jawab nurse ne diya.

“aaahhh…. M… main yahan… yahan kaise aaya… mujhe kya hua hai” maine poocha.

“tumhe nahi pata, kya hua tha tumhare sath” doctor ne jawab me ulta sawal daag diya.

“main yahan…. Aaahhh… main kaise…. Mujhe yaad nahi aa raha… ufff… mai… mera naam…, mera naam kya hai”

“relax youngman, tum ek lambi behoshi se uthe ho thoda rest karo abhi jyada stress mat lo” kehte hue dr ne ek injection laga diya aur main fir se neend me doobta chala gya.

Next morning

main jab jaaga saamne wall clock 6.30 am ka time dikha rahi thi, ab dard kaafi kam tha, mujhe fir sab yaad na aane se bechaini si hone lagi, maine charo aur najar daudayi to pas main baithi nurse dikhi, maine use awaz lagakar paani maanga. Pani piker maine usse poocha, “main kaun hu yahan kaise aaya, mujhe kuch yaad kyon nahi aa raha.”

Wo boli “abhi dr saab aa rahe hain wahi jawaab denge tumhe.”

“mujhe fresh hona hai” main bola, mujhe thodi kamjori feel ho rahi thi.

“main wardboy ko bhejti hoon” kehkar wo bahar chali gayi, thodi der me ek wardboy aaya aur mujhe fresh wagerah karwaya. Fresh hoke main bed par adhleta hua firse apna ateet yaad karne ki koshish karne laga. Par sab bekaar…

Aakhir kaun hoon main, yahan kaise aaya..

Dr ko apne room me aate hue dekh kar main thoda sidha hone ki koshish karne laga.

Dr. - “so youngman , how are you feeling now.”

Me- “much better dr., par mujhe kuch yaad kyo aa raha hai”

Dr. – “well you got a serious accident jisme tumhare sir par chot lagi thi, tum almost 2 mahine se coma me they. Isiliye shayad kuch yaad nahi aa raha, thoda stress kam lo, jaldi sab yaad aa jayega.”

Me - “Aur abhi jab main bathroom me tha maine apne face par bhi kayi nishaan dekhe.”

Dr – “actually accident me kayi chote tumhaare face par bhi aayi thi unhi k daag hain” Fir thoda ruk kar bole “waise maine tumhari family ko inform kar diya hai wo aate hi honge”

“family” maine dohraya, “aap jante hain unhe, kaun hain wo, mera… mera naam kya hai.”

“thakur ajay pratap” ek bhaari awaz sunkar maine us taraf najar ghumayi to dekha ek roabdaar banda jo shayad 45 se 50 saal ka hoga, darwaje pe khada tha, pehnaave se koi raees lag raha tha.
 

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UPDATE 1

“Aaahhh… mera sir…” main jaise neend se jaagte hi bhayankar peeda mehsoos kar rha tha. Sab dhundhla sa najar aa raha tha. kuch palo baad jab najar ne kaam karna shuru kiya to maine charo aur dekha. Main shayad hospital ke bistar par tha kyoki paas hi ek doctor aur nurse khade they.

“how are you feeling young man” shayad Dr ne poochha.

“ahhh.. sir fata jaa rha hai mera, kahan hoon main” maine karahti awaz me jawab diya.

“Central hospital *******” ye jawab nurse ne diya.

“aaahhh…. M… main yahan… yahan kaise aaya… mujhe kya hua hai” maine poocha.

“tumhe nahi pata, kya hua tha tumhare sath” doctor ne jawab me ulta sawal daag diya.

“main yahan…. Aaahhh… main kaise…. Mujhe yaad nahi aa raha… ufff… mai… mera naam…, mera naam kya hai”

“relax youngman, tum ek lambi behoshi se uthe ho thoda rest karo abhi jyada stress mat lo” kehte hue dr ne ek injection laga diya aur main fir se neend me doobta chala gya.

Next morning

main jab jaaga saamne wall clock 6.30 am ka time dikha rahi thi, ab dard kaafi kam tha, mujhe fir sab yaad na aane se bechaini si hone lagi, maine charo aur najar daudayi to pas main baithi nurse dikhi, maine use awaz lagakar paani maanga. Pani piker maine usse poocha, “main kaun hu yahan kaise aaya, mujhe kuch yaad kyon nahi aa raha.”

Wo boli “abhi dr saab aa rahe hain wahi jawaab denge tumhe.”

“mujhe fresh hona hai” main bola, mujhe thodi kamjori feel ho rahi thi.

“main wardboy ko bhejti hoon” kehkar wo bahar chali gayi, thodi der me ek wardboy aaya aur mujhe fresh wagerah karwaya. Fresh hoke main bed par adhleta hua firse apna ateet yaad karne ki koshish karne laga. Par sab bekaar…

Aakhir kaun hoon main, yahan kaise aaya..

Dr ko apne room me aate hue dekh kar main thoda sidha hone ki koshish karne laga.

Dr. - “so youngman , how are you feeling now.”

Me- “much better dr., par mujhe kuch yaad kyo aa raha hai”

Dr. – “well you got a serious accident jisme tumhare sir par chot lagi thi, tum almost 2 mahine se coma me they. Isiliye shayad kuch yaad nahi aa raha, thoda stress kam lo, jaldi sab yaad aa jayega.”

Me - “Aur abhi jab main bathroom me tha maine apne face par bhi kayi nishaan dekhe.”

Dr – “actually accident me kayi chote tumhaare face par bhi aayi thi unhi k daag hain” Fir thoda ruk kar bole “waise maine tumhari family ko inform kar diya hai wo aate hi honge”

“family” maine dohraya, “aap jante hain unhe, kaun hain wo, mera… mera naam kya hai.”


“thakur ajay pratap” ek bhaari awaz sunkar maine us taraf najar ghumayi to dekha ek roabdaar banda jo shayad 45 se 50 saal ka hoga, darwaje pe khada tha, pehnaave se koi raees lag raha tha.
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