Thriller Haivannnn........

[Rush__24]

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Fir bhi kosis karunga...
Jo ho paya to de dunga..
Qki ek suspension dalna chahta hu..
Jo kahani ke suruat me hi socha tha..
Lekin kis tarah rakhu vo nahi soch pa raha hu...
Bs vo likh du.. Fir update pura ho Jaye ga...

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[Aryanv]

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[Black water]

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[ShivaRam]

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[DiNu DraCula]

Update 50

Flashback counties....

Is waqt Mai, priya Aur Dada-Dadi ganv ki Aur ja rage the aapni car se...

Koi kus nahi bol raha tha...

Qki aaj Jo hua tha.. Vo sabke liye aaghatjanak tha..

Qki Maa-baap ne aapne bete KO Marne ki kosis ki thi...

Priya bhi ab yaha nahi rahna chahti thi.. Bs usko aapne Bhai ki jindgi chahiye thi.. Jisko yaha khatra tha.. Vo bhi aapne Maa-baap se..

Nani Aur mami to pahle hi nikal chuke the..

Maa Aur papa is waqt.aapne hi ghar me bethe huye aapne kiye huye karmo pe ro rahe the..

Qki aaj un logo ne aapne bache to kho diye Aur sath me aapne Maa-baap bhi..

Lekin ab Rone se bhi kya fayda.. Jab aap aapna sabkus aapne hi kiye huye karm ki vajah se kho de..

Lekin kahi Aur ek sajish chal rahi thi..

Aur vaha 4 log Bethe huye baat kar rahe the... Un me se 1 unka leader bhi tha...

Aadmi 1.... Bhai vo log hospital se nikal chuke he..

Leader... Aur bich raste me ek jagah raste ke side me hi gahri khayi he.. Vahi truck se unki car KO thokar mar kar unki car KO khayi me faikdo...

Aadmi 2... Ji Bhai aesa hi hoga...

Leader... Dhyan se Karna...

Aadmi 1.. Ji Bhai...

Aadmi 2... Bhai un logo ko khatam karne se aapka fayda to hone vala he.. Lekin big boss ka kya fayda he..

Leader...(gusse se) Vo b.boss KO malum!! Agar Marne ka shaukh ho to tum jakar pus sakte ho...

Aadmi 2... Sorry Bhai...

Leader... Shukar Mano ki me tha.. Boss hote to tum soch bhi nahi sakte tumhara kya hall hota???

Aadmi 1... Bhai humara truck nikal chuka he.. Hum log bhi niklte he...

Leader.... Bada hi kismat vala he vo ladka.. Isliye puri tarah se check Karna... Na Jane kitni baar kosis kar chuka hu... Lekin har baar vo Bach jata he.. Aur upar se Jo Marne jate he vo lautte bhi nahi..

Leader... Isliye is baar tum logo KO bhej raha hu.. Koi to he Jo usko bacha raha he... Isliye plan ke mutabik hi kaam Karna...

Aadmi3... Ji Bhai.. Is baar koi garbad nahi hogi!!! Bharosha rakhiye hum pe...

Ye log aapna plan bana rahe the..

Is baat se aanjan ki ek anjan shaksh inki bate sun raha tha...

Aur vo turant vaha se nikalkar ... Dur jakar baar baar kisiko call kar raha tha..

Lekin samne se koi call risive hi nahi kar raha tha.. Is baat se vo insan bhot tnsn me aa jata he...

Shaksh... Muje hi kus karna padega... Muje kisi bhi haal me un sabki jaan bachani hi padegi..

Vo turant aapni car ke beth ke nikal jata he...

Aur hum log bhi shanti se ja rahe the... Is baat se anjan ki.

Aage humari maut humara intzaar kar rahi thi.. Ab kiski maut hogi Aur kiski nahi vo to waqt hi tay karega..

Lekin maut ka jaal jarur tha aage..

Abhi hum yahi koi 50 km city se dur aa Gaye the..

Ab khayi ke part vala jungle suru ho chuka tha...

Humare aage bhi ek truck tha... Aur pise bhi ek truck aa raha tha...

Tabhi pise vala truck side me aa jata he..

Aur is tarah hone se dadaji KO sak ho jata he...

Lekin jab tak kus karte usse pahle hi side me chal raha truck humari car KO takkar Marta he..

Lekin dadaji ne thodi car ghuma li thi.. Isliye car KO jyada takkar to nahi lagi thi...

Lekin car ghumkar khayi vale jungle ki Aur ho gayi thi.

Aur takkar pise lagi thi..

Juski vajah se muje Aur priya KO jyada chot aayi thi.

Dadaji jungle ki Aur car KO le Jane lagte he..

Yahi dadaji ki sabse badi galti sabit huyi...

Vo 2 truck to thide aage nikal Gaye..

Lekin puse aa rahe Aur 2 truck humara Pisa the..

Vo humari car ke pise aane lage..

Mai Aur priya to chot ki vajah se behish ho Gaye the...

Aur khayi bhi ab najdik thi...

To pahle dadaji pise humari taraf dekha.. Aur hum behosh the.. To vo turant dadi KO unki side ka pisla gate kholne KO kahte he..

Jab vo nahi ja pati to dadaji staring dadi KO pakdakar vo Bethe huye sit ko sleep mod me karte he..

Fir pisla side ka darvaza kholkar darvaze ke pass me tha to vo pahle muje car se nuche faikte he.. Aur fir priya KO.. Lekin priya ka sir ek patthar se takkrata he.. Unka ganv ka kasrati sarir aaj kaam aaya tha..

Dadaji turant sit ki sidhi kar dete he Aur dadi KO bhi car se dhakka de dete he..

Lekin ab der ho chuki thi..

Dada car sahit khayi me gir jate he.. Aur dadi bhi gahri khayi me girne lagti he...

Ye sab hua yani puri ghatna huyi sirf 5 minutes me....

Lekin vo do no truck vale bhi sambhal nahi pate jisse vo bhi trucks sahit gahri khayi me gurne lagte he...

Kus der baad vaha 3 log aaye..

Lekin usse pahle us anjan shaksh ne muje Aur priya ko uthakar aapni car ke paas la hi raha tha ki..

Usne kisi car ke aane ki aavaz suni.. Isliye usne turant muje Aur priya ko khayi ke pass thodi jyada zadiya thi.. Vaha supa diya..

Aur vo thoda aage dusri zadiya thi.. Vahi sup gaya..

Aadmi1...lagta he sab mar Gaye???

Aadmi2.... Ha lekin boss ne kaha tha ki.. Aaspass har jagah ek baar check jarur Karna...

Tab tak aage Jo truck nikal Chile the vo do no truck ke truck driver bhi aa Gaye...

Aadmi1... Vo dusre do truck kaha Gaye????

T.D1... Humne bhot bade dhamake ki aavaz suni thi.. Sayad us car KO khayi me girane me vo bhi gir Gaye hoge!!!

T.D2... Aur vese bhi ye jamin chikni he... To vo log control nahi kar PAYE hoge...

Ye abhi baat kar hi rahe the ki kahi se phone ring ki aavaz aati he...

Hua darasal ye tha ki.. Jisne Hume bachaya tha..

Vo subah se call kar raha tha.. Usi number se call aa gayi thi...

Us ring ki vajah se muje bhi thoda hosh aata he..

Lekin puri tarah se.. Muje har jagah dard bhi ho raha tha.. Aur khun bahne ki vajah se kamjori bhi thi..

Isliye mene sirf ek hi word suna tha... "Sarkar "

Aur Mai behosh ho gaya tha...

Vo anjan shaksh pahle to hadbadahat me call risive kar leta he..

Aur sarkar hi bolta he ki..

Jo log uski aavaz sun rahe the vo uski taraf hi aane lagte he..

To vo turant call cut karke dusri Aur daud laga deta he...

Jisse Jo log the vo mere najdik na pahunch PAYE...

(Ab to aap smj gaye hoge ki vo shaksh kaun he!!! Fir bhi bata deta hu.. Ki ye papa ka "khabri" tha.)

Aur fir vo log bhi us taraf uske pise daudne lagte.

Khabri aage Jake zadiyo pise chupkar papa ko msg kar deta he..

Lekin fir dubara call ring hota he..

Vo kus karta usse pahle hi.. Vo sare aadmi uske pass pahunch jata he..

Lekin abhi vo kus karte usse pahle vo salang lagakar ek aadmi ke munh pe mukka markar uspe chad jata he..

Lekin vaha ki jamin chikni hone ki vajah se do no fislkar khayi ke najdik pahunch jate he...

Tabhi khabri ke hath me us aadmi ki gun uske hath me aa jati he.. Jo uske back pe thi....

Vo turant gun hath me lekar uski taraf aa rahe dusre aadmio KO shut karne lagta he...

Aur vo sabko maar deta he..

Lekin in sabme Jo aadmi uske sath fislta hua aaya tha..

Uspe se iska dhyan hat gaya tha.. Vo aadmi sidha ek laat jama deta he.. Jisse khabri gir jata he..

Jisse vo vapas fislne lagta he.. Sath me vo aadmi bhi..

Qki khabri uska pair pakad leta he.. Jisse dono sidha khayi me gir jata he...

 

[DiNu DraCula]

Sorry dosto sort update ke liye...
Qki pura update copy paste karne ke chakkar me dilite ho gaya tha...
Isliye aaj subah update de nahi paya..

Is update me agar kus galti dikhe to maaf kar Dena...

Ha kal mega update jarur dunga..
Qki agle update ka last part he..
Sirf first part likhna he...
Vo likhke kal de dunga..

 

[Black water]

Super fantastic update bhai

 

[Nky]

Update 50

Flashback counties....

Is waqt Mai, priya Aur Dada-Dadi ganv ki Aur ja rage the aapni car se...

Koi kus nahi bol raha tha...

Qki aaj Jo hua tha.. Vo sabke liye aaghatjanak tha..

Qki Maa-baap ne aapne bete KO Marne ki kosis ki thi...

Priya bhi ab yaha nahi rahna chahti thi.. Bs usko aapne Bhai ki jindgi chahiye thi.. Jisko yaha khatra tha.. Vo bhi aapne Maa-baap se..

Nani Aur mami to pahle hi nikal chuke the..

Maa Aur papa is waqt.aapne hi ghar me bethe huye aapne kiye huye karmo pe ro rahe the..

Qki aaj un logo ne aapne bache to kho diye Aur sath me aapne Maa-baap bhi..

Lekin ab Rone se bhi kya fayda.. Jab aap aapna sabkus aapne hi kiye huye karm ki vajah se kho de..

Lekin kahi Aur ek sajish chal rahi thi..

Aur vaha 4 log Bethe huye baat kar rahe the... Un me se 1 unka leader bhi tha...

Aadmi 1.... Bhai vo log hospital se nikal chuke he..

Leader... Aur bich raste me ek jagah raste ke side me hi gahri khayi he.. Vahi truck se unki car KO thokar mar kar unki car KO khayi me faikdo...

Aadmi 2... Ji Bhai aesa hi hoga...

Leader... Dhyan se Karna...

Aadmi 1.. Ji Bhai...

Aadmi 2... Bhai un logo ko khatam karne se aapka fayda to hone vala he.. Lekin big boss ka kya fayda he..

Leader...(gusse se) Vo b.boss KO malum!! Agar Marne ka shaukh ho to tum jakar pus sakte ho...

Aadmi 2... Sorry Bhai...

Leader... Shukar Mano ki me tha.. Boss hote to tum soch bhi nahi sakte tumhara kya hall hota???

Aadmi 1... Bhai humara truck nikal chuka he.. Hum log bhi niklte he...

Leader.... Bada hi kismat vala he vo ladka.. Isliye puri tarah se check Karna... Na Jane kitni baar kosis kar chuka hu... Lekin har baar vo Bach jata he.. Aur upar se Jo Marne jate he vo lautte bhi nahi..

Leader... Isliye is baar tum logo KO bhej raha hu.. Koi to he Jo usko bacha raha he... Isliye plan ke mutabik hi kaam Karna...

Aadmi3... Ji Bhai.. Is baar koi garbad nahi hogi!!! Bharosha rakhiye hum pe...

Ye log aapna plan bana rahe the..

Is baat se aanjan ki ek anjan shaksh inki bate sun raha tha...

Aur vo turant vaha se nikalkar ... Dur jakar baar baar kisiko call kar raha tha..

Lekin samne se koi call risive hi nahi kar raha tha.. Is baat se vo insan bhot tnsn me aa jata he...

Shaksh... Muje hi kus karna padega... Muje kisi bhi haal me un sabki jaan bachani hi padegi..

Vo turant aapni car ke beth ke nikal jata he...

Aur hum log bhi shanti se ja rahe the... Is baat se anjan ki.

Aage humari maut humara intzaar kar rahi thi.. Ab kiski maut hogi Aur kiski nahi vo to waqt hi tay karega..

Lekin maut ka jaal jarur tha aage..

Abhi hum yahi koi 50 km city se dur aa Gaye the..

Ab khayi ke part vala jungle suru ho chuka tha...

Humare aage bhi ek truck tha... Aur pise bhi ek truck aa raha tha...

Tabhi pise vala truck side me aa jata he..

Aur is tarah hone se dadaji KO sak ho jata he...

Lekin jab tak kus karte usse pahle hi side me chal raha truck humari car KO takkar Marta he..

Lekin dadaji ne thodi car ghuma li thi.. Isliye car KO jyada takkar to nahi lagi thi...

Lekin car ghumkar khayi vale jungle ki Aur ho gayi thi.

Aur takkar pise lagi thi..

Juski vajah se muje Aur priya KO jyada chot aayi thi.

Dadaji jungle ki Aur car KO le Jane lagte he..

Yahi dadaji ki sabse badi galti sabit huyi...

Vo 2 truck to thide aage nikal Gaye..

Lekin puse aa rahe Aur 2 truck humara Pisa the..

Vo humari car ke pise aane lage..

Mai Aur priya to chot ki vajah se behish ho Gaye the...

Aur khayi bhi ab najdik thi...

To pahle dadaji pise humari taraf dekha.. Aur hum behosh the.. To vo turant dadi KO unki side ka pisla gate kholne KO kahte he..

Jab vo nahi ja pati to dadaji staring dadi KO pakdakar vo Bethe huye sit ko sleep mod me karte he..

Fir pisla side ka darvaza kholkar darvaze ke pass me tha to vo pahle muje car se nuche faikte he.. Aur fir priya KO.. Lekin priya ka sir ek patthar se takkrata he.. Unka ganv ka kasrati sarir aaj kaam aaya tha..

Dadaji turant sit ki sidhi kar dete he Aur dadi KO bhi car se dhakka de dete he..

Lekin ab der ho chuki thi..

Dada car sahit khayi me gir jate he.. Aur dadi bhi gahri khayi me girne lagti he...

Ye sab hua yani puri ghatna huyi sirf 5 minutes me....

Lekin vo do no truck vale bhi sambhal nahi pate jisse vo bhi trucks sahit gahri khayi me gurne lagte he...

Kus der baad vaha 3 log aaye..

Lekin usse pahle us anjan shaksh ne muje Aur priya ko uthakar aapni car ke paas la hi raha tha ki..

Usne kisi car ke aane ki aavaz suni.. Isliye usne turant muje Aur priya ko khayi ke pass thodi jyada zadiya thi.. Vaha supa diya..

Aur vo thoda aage dusri zadiya thi.. Vahi sup gaya..

Aadmi1...lagta he sab mar Gaye???

Aadmi2.... Ha lekin boss ne kaha tha ki.. Aaspass har jagah ek baar check jarur Karna...

Tab tak aage Jo truck nikal Chile the vo do no truck ke truck driver bhi aa Gaye...

Aadmi1... Vo dusre do truck kaha Gaye????

T.D1... Humne bhot bade dhamake ki aavaz suni thi.. Sayad us car KO khayi me girane me vo bhi gir Gaye hoge!!!

T.D2... Aur vese bhi ye jamin chikni he... To vo log control nahi kar PAYE hoge...

Ye abhi baat kar hi rahe the ki kahi se phone ring ki aavaz aati he...

Hua darasal ye tha ki.. Jisne Hume bachaya tha..

Vo subah se call kar raha tha.. Usi number se call aa gayi thi...

Us ring ki vajah se muje bhi thoda hosh aata he..

Lekin puri tarah se.. Muje har jagah dard bhi ho raha tha.. Aur khun bahne ki vajah se kamjori bhi thi..

Isliye mene sirf ek hi word suna tha... "Sarkar "

Aur Mai behosh ho gaya tha...

Vo anjan shaksh pahle to hadbadahat me call risive kar leta he..

Aur sarkar hi bolta he ki..

Jo log uski aavaz sun rahe the vo uski taraf hi aane lagte he..

To vo turant call cut karke dusri Aur daud laga deta he...

Jisse Jo log the vo mere najdik na pahunch PAYE...

(Ab to aap smj gaye hoge ki vo shaksh kaun he!!! Fir bhi bata deta hu.. Ki ye papa ka "khabri" tha.)

Aur fir vo log bhi us taraf uske pise daudne lagte.

Khabri aage Jake zadiyo pise chupkar papa ko msg kar deta he..

Lekin fir dubara call ring hota he..

Vo kus karta usse pahle hi.. Vo sare aadmi uske pass pahunch jata he..

Lekin abhi vo kus karte usse pahle vo salang lagakar ek aadmi ke munh pe mukka markar uspe chad jata he..

Lekin vaha ki jamin chikni hone ki vajah se do no fislkar khayi ke najdik pahunch jate he...

Tabhi khabri ke hath me us aadmi ki gun uske hath me aa jati he.. Jo uske back pe thi....

Vo turant gun hath me lekar uski taraf aa rahe dusre aadmio KO shut karne lagta he...

Aur vo sabko maar deta he..

Lekin in sabme Jo aadmi uske sath fislta hua aaya tha..

Uspe se iska dhyan hat gaya tha.. Vo aadmi sidha ek laat jama deta he.. Jisse khabri gir jata he..

Jisse vo vapas fislne lagta he.. Sath me vo aadmi bhi..

Qki khabri uska pair pakad leta he.. Jisse dono sidha khayi me gir jata he...

Nice update bhai

 

[Chinturocky]

Nice update

 

[Rush__24]

Sorry dosto sort update ke liye...
Qki pura update copy paste karne ke chakkar me dilite ho gaya tha...
Isliye aaj subah update de nahi paya..

Is update me agar kus galti dikhe to maaf kar Dena...

Ha kal mega update jarur dunga..
Qki agle update ka last part he..
Sirf first part likhna he...
Vo likhke kal de dunga..

Bohot badhiya update Bhai..... waiting for next update