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Haa ek story start ki thi lekin usi time xp close ho gayi...isko complete karne ke baad usko bhi pura karuga
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UPDATE-13
roshni-sach dadu......
dadaji-much meri gudiya...(aur roshni gale lag jati hai)
sabhi dada poti ka payar dekh rahe the......
AB AAGE-
Uske baad sabhi hasi kushi dadaji ke room se chale jate hai........shaam ko ek party rakhi jati hai ese hi ye din bit jata hai.......agle din subah sabhi haal me baithe the......
dadaji(roshani se)-kis collage me addmission lena hai humri gudiya ko....
roshani-dadu bhai jis engnieeing collage me usi me......sath me kirru bhi mere sath usi collage me addmission legi.....
dadaji-chalo acchi baat tino bacche ek collage me hoge to......addmission ke liye me baat karluga.....
roshani-dadu me entance exam nikal kar addmission karna chaugi.....na ki source par dadu.....
dadaji-gudiya ka jo aadesh ho vahi hoga...aur arman sahab aapka padai hi chal raha hai ya kuch aur...
arman-nahi dadaji padai hi chal rahi hai..
roshani kirru jese dadaji ji armaan ki baat sunti hai dono hasne lagti hai....
dadaji-kya hua tum dono has kyu rahe ho.....
dono arman ko dekhkar aakho se puchti hai bata du kya....arman vinti bare najaro se dekhata hai....
roshani-kuch nahi dadu kiru ne kuch kaha usi par hasi aa gayi....
kirru ne jab aapna naam suna to usko hichaki aa gayi sochne lagi dadaji puch nahi le kya kahi......aur roshni ki taraf gusse se dekhne lagi......magar dadaji ne kuch nahi kaha to rahat mahsus ki.....
dadaji-thik hai...aur rajveer kirru ke papa se bat karke sari vayvasta karne ke liye kah dena....
rajveer-kal hi bat kar liya tha pitaji....jab aapne roshani ki jane ki permission dedi thi.......
dadaji-chalo acchi bat hai......
uske bad sabhi aapne room ki taraf chal diye....roshani ke room me pahuchte hi kirru takiya utha ke roshani ko marne lagi.......
kirru-aaj to tu gayi gudiya ki bacchi mere hatho se.....
roshani ne bhi ek takiya utha liya aur dono me takiyo ka yudha suru ho gaya.....aur pure room ruiyo ke vajah se safad ho gaya aur thode der baad dono thakkar bad par letkar lambi-2 sase lene lagi....thode der ese lete rahne ke baad.....
roshani-aaj to tujhe dara diya na humesha sabse kahti hai mai kisi se nahi darti....huuu
kirru-bus tere dadaji ko dekhkar dar lagta hai warna mai aaj tak kisi se nahi dari.....delhi chal rahi hai na uske baad jalwe dekhna mai kya bala hu......accho-2 ko nani yaad dilai hu....
roshani-hehehehe vah to dekhkar malum chalta yu kitno ki nani yaad dilai hogi...yaha to dekh chuki ab delhi me dekhna rah gaya hai ki kiran singh kis aafat ki pudiya ka naam hai.....hehehe
kirru-ab to chal rahi to tujhe bhi malum chal jayega....vese jis collage me hum addmission ke liye ja rahe vaha par mai ne suna hai collage me ek gang hai jo kafi mashoor aur badnam bhi hai......usme ek bahut bade don ka ladka bhi hai jo us gang ka leadar hai jo kai baar fail bhi ho chuka hai lekin aapne baap ke dum par tika hua hai.....aur arman bhai bhi vsi ladke ke sath rahte hai.....
roshani-kya arman bhai ese ladke ke sath rahte aaj to vah gaye abhi jakar dadu ko batati hu.......
kirru-are meri maa sant ho ja tujse koi bat bhi batna gunah hai koi bat puri sunti nahi aur kud padti hai...pahle meri bat to sun le uske bad kuch kahna...
roshani-ha bol kya kahna hai...
kirru-mene kaha ki bat suni hai koi dekhi nahi agar ye bat galat hui to......aur tu chali dadaji ke pass aur hum to addmission ke bad jab collage jayege tab malum chal hi jayega kon si bat sahi kon si bat galat.....aur agar sahi hui to tu aur tere dadaji jindabaad hai hi arman bhai ki kabhar lene ke liye.....
roshani-thik hai jesa tu kah rahi hai vesa hi hoga agar bat sahi hui na arman bhai to gaye....
kirru-chal sant ho ja meri gudiya rani....
fir thode der idhar-udhar ki bate karke dono aaram karne lagi.......
ese hi hasi kushi kuch din bit gaya aur entrance exam kuch din pahle roshani,kirru aur arman sath me nikal gaye delhi ke liye.......
(dosto yaha par faltu ki chije skip karke aage bada raha hu story )
roshni-sach dadu......
dadaji-much meri gudiya...(aur roshni gale lag jati hai)
sabhi dada poti ka payar dekh rahe the......
AB AAGE-
Uske baad sabhi hasi kushi dadaji ke room se chale jate hai........shaam ko ek party rakhi jati hai ese hi ye din bit jata hai.......agle din subah sabhi haal me baithe the......
dadaji(roshani se)-kis collage me addmission lena hai humri gudiya ko....
roshani-dadu bhai jis engnieeing collage me usi me......sath me kirru bhi mere sath usi collage me addmission legi.....
dadaji-chalo acchi baat tino bacche ek collage me hoge to......addmission ke liye me baat karluga.....
roshani-dadu me entance exam nikal kar addmission karna chaugi.....na ki source par dadu.....
dadaji-gudiya ka jo aadesh ho vahi hoga...aur arman sahab aapka padai hi chal raha hai ya kuch aur...
arman-nahi dadaji padai hi chal rahi hai..
roshani kirru jese dadaji ji armaan ki baat sunti hai dono hasne lagti hai....
dadaji-kya hua tum dono has kyu rahe ho.....
dono arman ko dekhkar aakho se puchti hai bata du kya....arman vinti bare najaro se dekhata hai....
roshani-kuch nahi dadu kiru ne kuch kaha usi par hasi aa gayi....
kirru ne jab aapna naam suna to usko hichaki aa gayi sochne lagi dadaji puch nahi le kya kahi......aur roshni ki taraf gusse se dekhne lagi......magar dadaji ne kuch nahi kaha to rahat mahsus ki.....
dadaji-thik hai...aur rajveer kirru ke papa se bat karke sari vayvasta karne ke liye kah dena....
rajveer-kal hi bat kar liya tha pitaji....jab aapne roshani ki jane ki permission dedi thi.......
dadaji-chalo acchi bat hai......
uske bad sabhi aapne room ki taraf chal diye....roshani ke room me pahuchte hi kirru takiya utha ke roshani ko marne lagi.......
kirru-aaj to tu gayi gudiya ki bacchi mere hatho se.....
roshani ne bhi ek takiya utha liya aur dono me takiyo ka yudha suru ho gaya.....aur pure room ruiyo ke vajah se safad ho gaya aur thode der baad dono thakkar bad par letkar lambi-2 sase lene lagi....thode der ese lete rahne ke baad.....
roshani-aaj to tujhe dara diya na humesha sabse kahti hai mai kisi se nahi darti....huuu
kirru-bus tere dadaji ko dekhkar dar lagta hai warna mai aaj tak kisi se nahi dari.....delhi chal rahi hai na uske baad jalwe dekhna mai kya bala hu......accho-2 ko nani yaad dilai hu....
roshani-hehehehe vah to dekhkar malum chalta yu kitno ki nani yaad dilai hogi...yaha to dekh chuki ab delhi me dekhna rah gaya hai ki kiran singh kis aafat ki pudiya ka naam hai.....hehehe
kirru-ab to chal rahi to tujhe bhi malum chal jayega....vese jis collage me hum addmission ke liye ja rahe vaha par mai ne suna hai collage me ek gang hai jo kafi mashoor aur badnam bhi hai......usme ek bahut bade don ka ladka bhi hai jo us gang ka leadar hai jo kai baar fail bhi ho chuka hai lekin aapne baap ke dum par tika hua hai.....aur arman bhai bhi vsi ladke ke sath rahte hai.....
roshani-kya arman bhai ese ladke ke sath rahte aaj to vah gaye abhi jakar dadu ko batati hu.......
kirru-are meri maa sant ho ja tujse koi bat bhi batna gunah hai koi bat puri sunti nahi aur kud padti hai...pahle meri bat to sun le uske bad kuch kahna...
roshani-ha bol kya kahna hai...
kirru-mene kaha ki bat suni hai koi dekhi nahi agar ye bat galat hui to......aur tu chali dadaji ke pass aur hum to addmission ke bad jab collage jayege tab malum chal hi jayega kon si bat sahi kon si bat galat.....aur agar sahi hui to tu aur tere dadaji jindabaad hai hi arman bhai ki kabhar lene ke liye.....
roshani-thik hai jesa tu kah rahi hai vesa hi hoga agar bat sahi hui na arman bhai to gaye....
kirru-chal sant ho ja meri gudiya rani....
fir thode der idhar-udhar ki bate karke dono aaram karne lagi.......
ese hi hasi kushi kuch din bit gaya aur entrance exam kuch din pahle roshani,kirru aur arman sath me nikal gaye delhi ke liye.......
(dosto yaha par faltu ki chije skip karke aage bada raha hu story )
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UPDATE-14
ese hi hasi kushi kuch din bit gaya aur exam kuch din pahle roshani,kirru aur arman sath me nikal gaye delhi ke liye.......
AB AAGE-
intro
pankaj singh-kiran ke papa aur roshani ke mama.....ye delhi state ke dipti c.m. hai...kis type ke insaan hai aage pata chalega......(aage se story me naam na likhkar mamaji likha jayega)
sweta singh-kiran ki maa.....housewife hai ghar ka kam dekti hai...(inko mamiji likha jayega)
(dosto jitne bhi anye logo abhi tak aaye hai aaye hai sabhi ke bare me ek sath bata duga) ab aate hai story par.........
kiran ka ghar........
sabhi jaipur se nikal delhi kirru ke ghar pahuch gaye...ghar par is samay kewal kirru ki mom thi jo in sab ka sawagt kiya..thode der baad sabhi aaram karne aapne-2 room me chale gaye...armaan bhi mamaji ke ghar hi rahta hai....2din baad entance exam tha to roshani aur kirru ghar se kahi nahi...ghar par rahkar dono din bhar padai karte rahe....
entance exam ke din subah collage exam dene nikli to inke sath teen gaadi kali posak dhark army inko collage tak chodene gayi.....fir ye dono collage campus me jakar aapne-2 room ki traf jakar exam dene lagi....exam katam hone ke bad dono nikal kar collage gate ki taraf badne lagi......collage campus me jitne bhi ladke in dono ko dekha sabhi inke kubsurti koye rah gaye.....lekin dono aapne mai hi magan thi.....
(ye vahi din hai jab mohit bhi gate ke bahar kadha aapne dosto ka intzaar kar raha thaexam dekar gate ke bahar)
roshani aur kirru collage gate bahar nikali tabhi inko lene aaye kali posak dharak gauad inke pass aa gayi aur inke aage picche chale lagi....tabhi in dono ka dayan aapne bato se tab tuta jab ek gauad ne kuch kisi ladke se tej awaj me bat ki-abe aandha hai kaya dekh kar nahi chal sakta........
mohit-ha bhai abhi-2 kisi ne ko dekh kar andha sa ho gaya hu......
roshani aur kirru ki nazar us ladke ki hui to.....
kirru(dhire se boli ki kewal roshani sun sake)-dekh kese tujhe kese gur raha hai jaese aaj tak ladki nahi dekhi ho....
roshani mohit ki aakho me dekhte huye......
roshani-hmmm....
tabhi dusre gauad ne aapna muah kola-lagta hai pagal hai..........chal kinere ho ja.....
kirru-kya bat ek ladko ko aandha aur pagal bana diya...hehehe vese humri gudiya lag bhi ese rahi koi bhi pagal ho jaye....
mohit jab kinre ho jata hai sabhi aage car ki taraf nikal jate hai........ek gauad ne bich vali car ka gate kola.......dono car me baithne lage to roshani baithne se pahle piche ghum kar ek bar mohit ki taraf dekhi jo abhi bhi gure ja raha tha.....
roshani dhire se boli-pagal......carhre par muskan aa gaya.... aur car mai baith kar get band kar liya...
sabhi gaadiyo me baith gaye aur tino gaadiya sansanate huye aapni ghar ki aur nikal gayi........
ese kuch din roshani delhi rahkar aapne ghar jaipur aa gayi.......kuch din baad inter ke exam ka results aaya jisme roshani aapne state me 3position par thi....uske kuch din baad engnieeing entance ka bhi results me uska nikal gaya sabhi ghar wali roshani ke results se kush the.....ese hi kuch din nikalne aur wo din bhi aa gaya jab roshani delhi jakar aapne aage ki padai karni thi...kuad dadaji roshani ko delhi kirru ke ghar chodne gaye.........
(dosto ye update bor lagega lekin meri majburi mai jald se jald sabko collage pahuchana chata hu....ab aagle update me hero ko bhi delhi bejta hu....)
ese hi hasi kushi kuch din bit gaya aur exam kuch din pahle roshani,kirru aur arman sath me nikal gaye delhi ke liye.......
AB AAGE-
intro
pankaj singh-kiran ke papa aur roshani ke mama.....ye delhi state ke dipti c.m. hai...kis type ke insaan hai aage pata chalega......(aage se story me naam na likhkar mamaji likha jayega)
sweta singh-kiran ki maa.....housewife hai ghar ka kam dekti hai...(inko mamiji likha jayega)
(dosto jitne bhi anye logo abhi tak aaye hai aaye hai sabhi ke bare me ek sath bata duga) ab aate hai story par.........
kiran ka ghar........
sabhi jaipur se nikal delhi kirru ke ghar pahuch gaye...ghar par is samay kewal kirru ki mom thi jo in sab ka sawagt kiya..thode der baad sabhi aaram karne aapne-2 room me chale gaye...armaan bhi mamaji ke ghar hi rahta hai....2din baad entance exam tha to roshani aur kirru ghar se kahi nahi...ghar par rahkar dono din bhar padai karte rahe....
entance exam ke din subah collage exam dene nikli to inke sath teen gaadi kali posak dhark army inko collage tak chodene gayi.....fir ye dono collage campus me jakar aapne-2 room ki traf jakar exam dene lagi....exam katam hone ke bad dono nikal kar collage gate ki taraf badne lagi......collage campus me jitne bhi ladke in dono ko dekha sabhi inke kubsurti koye rah gaye.....lekin dono aapne mai hi magan thi.....
(ye vahi din hai jab mohit bhi gate ke bahar kadha aapne dosto ka intzaar kar raha thaexam dekar gate ke bahar)
roshani aur kirru collage gate bahar nikali tabhi inko lene aaye kali posak dharak gauad inke pass aa gayi aur inke aage picche chale lagi....tabhi in dono ka dayan aapne bato se tab tuta jab ek gauad ne kuch kisi ladke se tej awaj me bat ki-abe aandha hai kaya dekh kar nahi chal sakta........
mohit-ha bhai abhi-2 kisi ne ko dekh kar andha sa ho gaya hu......
roshani aur kirru ki nazar us ladke ki hui to.....
kirru(dhire se boli ki kewal roshani sun sake)-dekh kese tujhe kese gur raha hai jaese aaj tak ladki nahi dekhi ho....
roshani mohit ki aakho me dekhte huye......
roshani-hmmm....
tabhi dusre gauad ne aapna muah kola-lagta hai pagal hai..........chal kinere ho ja.....
kirru-kya bat ek ladko ko aandha aur pagal bana diya...hehehe vese humri gudiya lag bhi ese rahi koi bhi pagal ho jaye....
mohit jab kinre ho jata hai sabhi aage car ki taraf nikal jate hai........ek gauad ne bich vali car ka gate kola.......dono car me baithne lage to roshani baithne se pahle piche ghum kar ek bar mohit ki taraf dekhi jo abhi bhi gure ja raha tha.....
roshani dhire se boli-pagal......carhre par muskan aa gaya.... aur car mai baith kar get band kar liya...
sabhi gaadiyo me baith gaye aur tino gaadiya sansanate huye aapni ghar ki aur nikal gayi........
ese kuch din roshani delhi rahkar aapne ghar jaipur aa gayi.......kuch din baad inter ke exam ka results aaya jisme roshani aapne state me 3position par thi....uske kuch din baad engnieeing entance ka bhi results me uska nikal gaya sabhi ghar wali roshani ke results se kush the.....ese hi kuch din nikalne aur wo din bhi aa gaya jab roshani delhi jakar aapne aage ki padai karni thi...kuad dadaji roshani ko delhi kirru ke ghar chodne gaye.........
(dosto ye update bor lagega lekin meri majburi mai jald se jald sabko collage pahuchana chata hu....ab aagle update me hero ko bhi delhi bejta hu....)