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Romance Zindgi.....Ek Rahasaya

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mohit98075 said:
UPDATE-4


......fir adde ki taraf hum dono chal diye......jaha abhi intzaar kar raha tha.........hum dono ka.........

AAB AAGE

Adde par phuch kar dekha to abhi akle-2 duva uda raha tha...
mai-aur abhi lagta hai bahut der se aakle-2 dhu uda raha hai......chal hume bhi de...fir humne ek-2 gold flake liya....dua udate huye apne zindgi ke kuch pal kam karne lage....aur apne pro. ke bare me discussion karne lage.......ant me ja ke ye faishla hua ki aaj raat ka pro. vikky ke from house par rakhege....sab yaha se nikal kar ghar jayege aur ghar par jake bolege aaj raat vikky ke from house par rukana hai.....uske baad vikky apni car leke aayega jisse hum tino from house jayge.......
(hume jab pine ka pro. hota to hum dophar me pite the taki sham ko ghar jane se pahle nasha utar jaye aur uske baad apne muh ke smell katam karne ke liye kai parkar ke ajibo-garib nukse apnate taki ghar me hamri jo image hai vo karab na ho...agar raat ka pro. hota to hamre vikky babu ka from house jindabaad hota kyuki na ghar jane ki tansion hoti na kuch ajibogrrib nukse apnane ki tansion......vikky ka from house jyda tahar kali rahta tha....uski dekh-rek karne ke liye ramu rahta hai jo hamri rang me kabhi bang nahi dalta....sahar se 15-20 km ki duri par tha jaha hum jyadatar cuttiyo me time bitate the isliye ghar wale nahi tokte the)
fir vaha se antim kash mar kar hum ghar ki taraf chal diye raste me maine appu ke liye chocolate liya..... ghar pahuchkar maa ko vikky ke from house jane ki bat batai....uske baad chal gaya apne room me tohde der aaram karne....appu school se aakar mere room me aai mushe khana khane ke liye uthya...maine use chocolate diya .......fir fresh hokar niche gaya..... bapujaan bhi aaj jald hi ghar aa gaye the....fir sabne khana khaya....uske baad maa ne mere pro. ke bare me bataya.....sabne jane ki anumati dedi......fir hum aapas me hasi mazak karte rahe.....kab shaam ho gayi malum nahi chala....sham ko vikky apni car lekar aaya ....fir ghar walo ko bata kar nikal diye car se abhi ke ghar....abhi ko pick karke......nikal diye from house ki taraf...jaha ramu humra wait kar raha tha......from house phuch kar humne ramu ko samano ki list diya.....jo kuch ek gante ke aandar ramu ne sare samman lekar aa gaya......fir humne ek-2 saman ko likal kar table par sajaya................
do full vat69 ke botal........6kingfisher ki ken.......ice ke tukde.......namkin......do roasted chiken.....teen sishe ki gilash.......
maine vat69 ki botal uthai....uske upar ka lock todkar dakkan kola.....teno gilash mai barabar pemane banaya.....ice ka tukda sabne apne-2 gilash me dala......gilash ko uthya hum tino ne .....fir do-teen bund niche gira ke bagwan ji ko bhog lagaya.....teno gilash aapas me jaam se jaam takraye..........
..........cheerios everyone :daru:............


to be continued....
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bewda party nashe me hai sab bewde nikle tharki login:normie:
 
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Casinar said:
padh liya pehla update bhai,
Mohit bhai bura mat maanna kyunke main hamesha eise hi review deta hoon jo ghalat dikhta hai wo batata hoon
to in the whole update acha hai magar yaar shuru karte hi yeh padhne ko mila
"Aaj finelley intermidiyat ka exam katham hua.
Mohit bhai finelley kia hota hai bhai? Finally eise likha jata hai yaar!
aur intermidiyat kia hota hai bhai? intermediate hota hai bhai :D
mai collage se bahar nikal kar bike stand ke pass
bhai collage photos ke hote hein yahan college likhna tha yaar :banghead:
Hum teen(3) logitya yaar hai bachpan se
yahan aap ka matlab shayad langotia hai nah? :hmm:
tino jo krate sath karte cahe vo acche kam ho ya bure
tinon jo KARTE hein ya krate hein bhai??
eise bahot bahot errors hein bhai please proof read karke post kiya karo yaar...padhne mein takliff hoti hai.... words ko read karne mein mushkil hota hai.....
please naraaz mat hona jo dikha wo bataya....
weise kahani ki shuruwaat se samajh mein agaya keisi story hai to padhuga zaroor magar eise mistakes bhade pade milenge to ho sakta hai padhna chorr dun.... so please khayaal rakhna update post karne se pehle check zaroor karna mohit bhai :hug:
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Haa kuch-2 jagah spelling mistakes hai...kyuki jab type karne jata to Kai Auto correction me Chala jata uske baad check na karta Mai aur Kai mere type karne me nikal jata .... Ye purane update the unko na dekha Mai vese hi post kar Diya jesa tha :D
9 update tak kaam Chala lo Bhai Jo aaj se aayega usko dekh kar post karuga...baad me purane update bhi thik karuga ....
Vese :thanks: padhne ke liye
 
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Casinar said:
yeh update bhi padha bhai, bahut takliff se padha
Hum do hamre do walo familey hai total char logo ki
yaar familey kia hota hai yaar? family eise likhte hein yaar :banghead:
kuad ki transport company hai ka jis vajah se
kia yeh sentence sahi hai mohit bhai?
meri body kafi maintrain hai jo ki bapujan ki kipra se
bhai kipra se ya kripa se? Aur maintrain nahin MAINTAIN hota hai bhai
bachpan se unho mujhe kafi kuch sikaya mashal art,apna bachav karna
bhai marshal art nahin hota martial art hota hai
ghar ke bare me bata du 2 manizla makan
Mohit bhai 2 manizla ya manzila? :hmm:
niche flore ek guest room,ek ma-babujaan ka room,ek store room, ek kichen upper ke flore par do room
bhai FLOOR eise likhte hai yaar, shukar hai guest to sahu likha hai aap ne, aur bhai KITCHEN eise likhte hein yaar :sigh:
aur bhi seikron eise mistakes hai mohit bhai ab batao kia saare updates eise likhe hue hein? mujhe bahot time lagega padhne mein agar eisa likha hua hai sabhi updates ko to!!!!
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Jo upper kaha yaha bhi vahi mistakes hai.. jaldi type karne me ho gaya+ Auto correction me ...
Aage ke update me sudhar karta hu jaldi hi
 
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Aakash9877 said:
Both Update 8 and Update 9 were very good updates. You have written the story very beautifully. Mohit is trying to become a hero in front of those goons, and he also succeeds. Well Mohit did a great job. Tell the history of Arjun Singh. Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...:heart::heart::heart:
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Arjun Singh ki history me abhi kafi time hai..
:thanks: agla update jald hi post karta hu
 
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