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Anshu Jiya ki manodasha bakhubhi samjh gayi par wo boli kuchh nahi balki 2 din baad hone wali Jiya ke b'day party ki taiyari karne me jut gayi . Use Jiya ko besh keemti gift jo dena tha .

Doosri taraf Anshu ko khamosh dekh Jiya ko laga ki ya to Anshu ko uski problem samjh nahi aayi ya use koi dilchaspi nahi hai . Jiya ki bechaini jas ki tas rah gayi to usne aaj akele yani khud ke sath time spend karne ka socha . waise bhi jab pyar , ishq hota hai to banda na apna rah jata hai na kisi aur ka . Upar se Jiya to khud se hi poonchh rahi thi ki kahi " ye ishq to nahi hai " par koi jawaab nahi tha uske paas .


Jiya khamosh si jheel ke kinare baithi apni halat par kabhi hasti kabhi roti apne dupatte ke kone se khel rahi thi . Ye jinda dil aur naisargik najaron se labrej jheel bhi aaj use neeras lag rahi thi . Kayi jode wahan baahon me baahein dale ishq ki rangeen galiyon me khoye the , na jane kyu ye sab dekh Jiya ko chidh si hone lagi to wo wapas laut aayi .


Agle do din bhi Jiya ke bechaini me beete . Use to ye bhi yaad nahi tha ki aaj uska birthday hai . Raat 12 baje Anshu ne Jiya ko bahar chalne ke liye bola ,


Anshu - Jiya chal thoda mere sath ,


Jiya - baap re itni raat ko par kahan ?


Anshu - meri masi bimar hain yaar , admitted hain ,


Jiya - omg ye kya ho gaya , par Anshu tune kabhi bataya nahi ki teri masi bhi hain ?


Anshu - kyu nahi honi chahiye thi ?


Jiya - sorry mera wo matlab nahi tha . Chal .

Jiya simple se lower top me thi us wakt .


Anshu - inn kapdon me ?


Jiya - uff to kya Hospital jane ke liye party ke kapde pahnu ?


Anshu - tu chal bahan .

Anshu Jiya ko lekar cab se seedhe ek club me pahunchi . Jiya uske peechhe to chal rahi thi par kafi pareshan thi .


Jiya - club me admitted hain teri masi ?


Anshu - tujhe mujh par bharosa hai ?


Jiya - hmm,


Anshu - peechhe aa mere .

Dono ladkiyan party hall me pahunchi jahan unke sare dost maujood the . Jiya ki to khushi ka thikana nahi raha . Tabhi shruti ek pyari si red colour ki party gown lekar aayi .

Jiya - ye sab karne ki kya jarurat thi yaar ?


Shruti - kyu nahi thi jarurat b'girl , chalo mai tumko taiyar kar doon tumhare is behad khas din ke liye .


Jiya - itna bhi khas din nahi hai yaar ,


Shruti - ye to mai party khatm hone ke baad punchhungi baby kyu ki real surprise to abb bhi parde me hai .


Jiya - hai kya surprise yaar mujhe bahut ajeeb lag raha hai .


Shurti - 10 min aur wait kar lo dear .


Jiya - uff itna suspence koi rakhta hai kya ?

Jiya ko 10 min ke andar Shruti ne ready kar diya . Dono party hall me aa gayi . Yummy sa cake bhi aa gaya . Jiya bahut excited lag rahi thi tabhi Anshu ne uske kaan me kaha ,


Anshu - mera gift kaisa laga ?


Jiya - bahut pyara , thank you so much yaar for this amazing party .


Anshu - gift ki taraf to tune dekha hi nahi , badi door se mangwaya hai ,

Anshu ne Jiya ke kaan me kaha aur haal ke door ki ore ishara kiya . Samne Tarun khada tha . uska bag abb bhi kandhe par tha to jahir si baat thi ki wo seedha airport se yahi aa raha tha . Jiya ki bolti wapas band ho gayi . Saanse tez ho gayi , heartbeat rajdhani express ko bhi pichhe chhodni lagi . Tarun Jiya ke bilkul paas akar khada ho gaya . uske baad kareeb do ghante ki party me Jiya khamosh rahi aur najre chura kar Tarun ko dekhti rahi . Uske galon par faila gulabi rang uski khushi bayaan kar raha tha .

Party khatm hone ke baad sirf Tarun , Jiya aur uski saheliyan bachi . Sabhi bahar aa gaye to Anshu ne Tarun se poonchha ,


Anshu - stay kahan karoge ?


Tarun - cousin ko bulaya hai 15 min baad aa jayega . Tum logon ko hostel drop karte huye nikal jaunga .


Anshu - ok to tum dono tab tak baatein kao mai aur Shruti lounge me hain .

Anshu Jiya ko aankh mar kar chali gayi , Jiya ka dil joron se dhadak utha . Aaj wo pahli baar kisi ladke se is tarah aadhi raat ko tanhai me baat karne wali thi .



Tarun - Happy Birthday Jiya .


Jiya - tthhanx .....( ghabra kar )


Tarun - mujhse itna ghabrati kyu ho ?


Jiya - nnnahi pata mujhe .


Tarun - khud call nahi kar sakti thi mujhe ?


Jiya - aap ka number delete kar diya tha .


Tarun - Anshu se le leti ,


Jiya - khayal nahi aaya iska kyu ki mai bahut pareshan thi .


Tarun - mai bhi bahut pareshan tha ki mere " Pyaar wali pari sirf " mujhse hi itni khafa kyu hai ?


Jiya - iska jawaab mujhe khud nahi pata ki mai khafa thi ya inhi halaaton se bhag rahi thi jo beet rahe hain mujh par .


Tarun - mujhse gift nahi manga tumne ?


Jiya - gift se kya gift mangu ,

Jiya ne sharma kar kaha to uske chehre ki doodh si rangat gulabi ho gayi . Tarun ek baar aur fida ho gaya uski ada par . Tarun ne apne bag se ek box nikal kar Jiya ki Taraf badha diya .


Jiya - ye kya hai ?


Tarun - tumhara gift par ise yahan mat kholna please .


Jiya - bomb hai kya isme .


Tarun - usase bhi khatarnak .


Tarun aur Jiya baat kar hi rahe the tabhi ek ladki jo apni chal dhal se kafi nashe me lag rahi thi un dono ke samne aakar khadi ho gayi . Jiya kuchh samjh pati isase pahle hi uss ladki ne Tarun ka coller pakda aur boli ,


Girl - you cheater , liar , I will kill you .

itna kah kar wo ladki Tarun ke upar hi gir kar behosh ho gayi .
Jiya sakte me aa gayi jabki Tarun ke paseene chhot gaye .



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Naina

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Lo ji gayi bainsh pani mein. update starting se leke last tak pyar hi pyar , end mein takrar... ( ab jiya ush ladki ki dialog sunke aarti thode naa utaregi tarun ki)..
Btw yeh ladki thi koun jishne inke romance suru hone se pehle hi khatam kar di...... apni extraordinary dialogs se ....
Brilliant update writer sahab... Great going...
 
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Anshu Jiya ki manodasha bakhubhi samjh gayi par wo boli kuchh nahi balki 2 din baad hone wali Jiya ke b'day party ki taiyari karne me jut gayi . Use Jiya ko besh keemti gift jo dena tha .

Doosri taraf Anshu ko khamosh dekh Jiya ko laga ki ya to Anshu ko uski problem samjh nahi aayi ya use koi dilchaspi nahi hai . Jiya ki bechaini jas ki tas rah gayi to usne aaj akele yani khud ke sath time spend karne ka socha . waise bhi jab pyar , ishq hota hai to banda na apna rah jata hai na kisi aur ka . Upar se Jiya to khud se hi poonchh rahi thi ki kahi " ye ishq to nahi hai " par koi jawaab nahi tha uske paas .


Jiya khamosh si jheel ke kinare baithi apni halat par kabhi hasti kabhi roti apne dupatte ke kone se khel rahi thi . Ye jinda dil aur naisargik najaron se labrej jheel bhi aaj use neeras lag rahi thi . Kayi jode wahan baahon me baahein dale ishq ki rangeen galiyon me khoye the , na jane kyu ye sab dekh Jiya ko chidh si hone lagi to wo wapas laut aayi .


Agle do din bhi Jiya ke bechaini me beete . Use to ye bhi yaad nahi tha ki aaj uska birthday hai . Raat 12 baje Anshu ne Jiya ko bahar chalne ke liye bola ,


Anshu - Jiya chal thoda mere sath ,


Jiya - baap re itni raat ko par kahan ?


Anshu - meri masi bimar hain yaar , admitted hain ,


Jiya - omg ye kya ho gaya , par Anshu tune kabhi bataya nahi ki teri masi bhi hain ?


Anshu - kyu nahi honi chahiye thi ?


Jiya - sorry mera wo matlab nahi tha . Chal .

Jiya simple se lower top me thi us wakt .


Anshu - inn kapdon me ?


Jiya - uff to kya Hospital jane ke liye party ke kapde pahnu ?


Anshu - tu chal bahan .

Anshu Jiya ko lekar cab se seedhe ek club me pahunchi . Jiya uske peechhe to chal rahi thi par kafi pareshan thi .


Jiya - club me admitted hain teri masi ?


Anshu - tujhe mujh par bharosa hai ?


Jiya - hmm,


Anshu - peechhe aa mere .

Dono ladkiyan party hall me pahunchi jahan unke sare dost maujood the . Jiya ki to khushi ka thikana nahi raha . Tabhi shruti ek pyari si red colour ki party gown lekar aayi .

Jiya - ye sab karne ki kya jarurat thi yaar ?


Shruti - kyu nahi thi jarurat b'girl , chalo mai tumko taiyar kar doon tumhare is behad khas din ke liye .


Jiya - itna bhi khas din nahi hai yaar ,


Shruti - ye to mai party khatm hone ke baad punchhungi baby kyu ki real surprise to abb bhi parde me hai .


Jiya - hai kya surprise yaar mujhe bahut ajeeb lag raha hai .


Shurti - 10 min aur wait kar lo dear .


Jiya - uff itna suspence koi rakhta hai kya ?

Jiya ko 10 min ke andar Shruti ne ready kar diya . Dono party hall me aa gayi . Yummy sa cake bhi aa gaya . Jiya bahut excited lag rahi thi tabhi Anshu ne uske kaan me kaha ,


Anshu - mera gift kaisa laga ?


Jiya - bahut pyara , thank you so much yaar for this amazing party .


Anshu - gift ki taraf to tune dekha hi nahi , badi door se mangwaya hai ,

Anshu ne Jiya ke kaan me kaha aur haal ke door ki ore ishara kiya . Samne Tarun khada tha . uska bag abb bhi kandhe par tha to jahir si baat thi ki wo seedha airport se yahi aa raha tha . Jiya ki bolti wapas band ho gayi . Saanse tez ho gayi , heartbeat rajdhani express ko bhi pichhe chhodni lagi . Tarun Jiya ke bilkul paas akar khada ho gaya . uske baad kareeb do ghante ki party me Jiya khamosh rahi aur najre chura kar Tarun ko dekhti rahi . Uske galon par faila gulabi rang uski khushi bayaan kar raha tha .

Party khatm hone ke baad sirf Tarun , Jiya aur uski saheliyan bachi . Sabhi bahar aa gaye to Anshu ne Tarun se poonchha ,


Anshu - stay kahan karoge ?


Tarun - cousin ko bulaya hai 15 min baad aa jayega . Tum logon ko hostel drop karte huye nikal jaunga .


Anshu - ok to tum dono tab tak baatein kao mai aur Shruti lounge me hain .

Anshu Jiya ko aankh mar kar chali gayi , Jiya ka dil joron se dhadak utha . Aaj wo pahli baar kisi ladke se is tarah aadhi raat ko tanhai me baat karne wali thi .



Tarun - Happy Birthday Jiya .


Jiya - tthhanx .....( ghabra kar )


Tarun - mujhse itna ghabrati kyu ho ?


Jiya - nnnahi pata mujhe .


Tarun - khud call nahi kar sakti thi mujhe ?


Jiya - aap ka number delete kar diya tha .


Tarun - Anshu se le leti ,


Jiya - khayal nahi aaya iska kyu ki mai bahut pareshan thi .


Tarun - mai bhi bahut pareshan tha ki mere " Pyaar wali pari sirf " mujhse hi itni khafa kyu hai ?


Jiya - iska jawaab mujhe khud nahi pata ki mai khafa thi ya inhi halaaton se bhag rahi thi jo beet rahe hain mujh par .


Tarun - mujhse gift nahi manga tumne ?


Jiya - gift se kya gift mangu ,

Jiya ne sharma kar kaha to uske chehre ki doodh si rangat gulabi ho gayi . Tarun ek baar aur fida ho gaya uski ada par . Tarun ne apne bag se ek box nikal kar Jiya ki Taraf badha diya .


Jiya - ye kya hai ?


Tarun - tumhara gift par ise yahan mat kholna please .


Jiya - bomb hai kya isme .


Tarun - usase bhi khatarnak .


Tarun aur Jiya baat kar hi rahe the tabhi ek ladki jo apni chal dhal se kafi nashe me lag rahi thi un dono ke samne aakar khadi ho gayi . Jiya kuchh samjh pati isase pahle hi uss ladki ne Tarun ka coller pakda aur boli ,


Girl - you cheater , liar , I will kill you .

itna kah kar wo ladki Tarun ke upar hi gir kar behosh ho gayi .
Jiya sakte me aa gayi jabki Tarun ke paseene chhot gaye .



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Bahot romantic update hai bhai. Jiss tarike se aap ne Jiya ki ghabrahat aur usski sharm o hayaa ko bayaan kiya hai wo mujhe bahot passand aya. Khaas kar do baar aap ne usski badalte rangat ka jiss tarah zikr kiya wo taarife kaabil hai.
Tarun aur Jiya ke beech ka chota sa vaartaalaab bhi kaafi romantic laga par turant kabaab mein haddi aakar ek bomb ki tarah girr pada to ab zaahir hai ke Jiya kuch aur hi samjhegi.
Superb update.
Ziada delay mat karna update dene mein varna readers ko follow karne ki jo maza ata hai nah wo tut jata hai, feeka par jata hai, peeche ke update ko wapas check karna padta hai k kia hua tha iss se pehle. Eisi kahani ko jald se jald update karna chahiye hota hai.
Thanks and keep going :thumbup:
 
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Notebook

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Lo ji gayi bainsh pani mein. update starting se leke last tak pyar hi pyar , end mein takrar... ( ab jiya ush ladki ki dialog sunke aarti thode naa utaregi tarun ki)..
Btw yeh ladki thi koun jishne inke romance suru hone se pehle hi khatam kar di...... apni extraordinary dialogs se ....
Brilliant update writer sahab... Great going...
uske dialogue me bhi kuchh chhipa hai jo ki bahut aham hai :D khair romance to hokar rahega par thode alag tarike se . Thanks for reading dost :yo:
 
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