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Itachi_Uchiha

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Mai puri kosis karunga ki 1 Tarik Tak naya Update post kar du.
Ab naye update se story puri mere hisab se chlegi. To ab se week me ek hi update aaya karega. Kosis karunga ki Kam din me bhi update de du.
Aur sbs important baat is story me actual me sex nahi hai. To mi aap logo se puchna chta hu ki kya mi story me sex add Karu ya jise story chal Rahi hai waise chlne du.
nd ab se mujhe apne update par Kam se Kam 60 likes cahiye hi cahiye.
 
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PEERLESS GENIUS




“ Bhut saari Pills khaane se Alchemist ban jaana....Impossible. "


Trio ko abhi bhi believe nahi tha Atharva pe, halanki Atharva unhe kaafi serious lag raha raha tha.


Jai “ Thik hai, chalo Young Master ki Alchemist Skill bhi dekh lete ha i”


Jai ne haste huye kaha aur Atharva ko Furnace room ki taraf le jaane laga. Un sab ke paas Young Master ko accompany karne ka kafi time tha, kyuki Pill Business to abhi band hi tha unka. Furnace room pass mein hi tha aur bilkul Pill Shop ke middle mein bhi. Furnace room ki walls thick, heavy stones se bani huyi thi. Alchemists ke alawa is room mein kisi ko bhi andar jaane ki permission nahi thi.


Jai “ young Master, Furnace aur fire ready hai aur 3 Restoration Pill banane ke ingredients bhi ready hai. ”


Jai ne ek smile ke sath kaha.


Atharva “ Okay, tum log bahar hi wait karo, main akele hi Pill Concoct karunga. ”


Atharva apni baat khatam karte hi Furnace room mein enter kar gaya aur apne piche usne heavy stone door bhi band kar diya.


“ Sir aapko yakeen hai kya Young Master sach mein Pill Concot karna jaante hai ? ”


Skiny old man ne pucha.


Jai “ Kya tumhe main koi fool lagta hu ? "
" Ek Alchemist banne mein Soul ki Strength sabse important cheez hoti hai. Young Master kaafi change ho gaye, ek useless fool se ek Genius mein. Lekin agar tum mujhse kaho ki wo apne Soul ki strength ko badha sakte hai, to main Bet laga sakta hu ki ye Imossible hai. ”


Ek Soul ko na dekha jaa sakta hai na hi touch kiya jaa sakta hai, lekin ye body ka sabse important part hai aur Soul hi source hai jaha se Alchemy ki jaa sakti hai.


Sabke paas Soul hoti hai aur ek Alchemist banne ke liye person ko apne Soul ki Strength ko badhana padta hai. Jisey na dekha jaa sakta hai aur naa hi touch kiya jaa sakta hai uski strength ko unleash karna bhut difficult hai. Aur yahi reason hai Saint Origin Universe mein countable Alchemist hi hai.


Atharva apni Past life mein ek excellent Alchemist tha. Halanki wo 100 years pehle mar gaya tha aur isliye uski Soul ko kaafi damage huya tha, lekin usne usi time ek secret Skill ko use karke apni Soul ko 100 years future mein ek ladke ki Soul ke sath merge kar diya tha. Aur isiliye wo ab bhi jo similar level ke person hai unse jyada Soul ki strength ko unleash kar sakta tha.


Furnace room mein Atharva ne apne saamne rakhi Bronze Furnace ko dekhte huye sir hillaya.


Atharva “ Kitni Poor aur low quality ki Furnace hai. Mujhe khud hi Ground Fire ko control karna hoga. Ye kitna troublesome hai. ”


Furnace Room ki banawat aur Furnace ki placement ek dum sahi jagah aur sahi tarike se hone chahiye. Example ke liye jo uske saamne Bronze Furnace thi wo aisi jagah located thi jaha se ground fire ko control karne me asani ho. Halanki jo uske saamne Bronze Furnace thi wo sirf Ground fire ko hi use kar sakti thi, jiski quality bhut jyada kam thi. Ground fire sirf ek step upper hoti hai Normal fire se, yaha tak ki beast flame bhi isse better quality ki hoti hai.


Soul aur Fire ki strength Alchemist ke liye bhut important hoti hai. Ek bronze Furnace aur ground fire ka use sirf low level alchemist hi karte hai. Apni past life mein ek three types ki fire ko control kar sakta tha aur kisi Furnace ki jaroorat bhi nahi padti thi Pill Concoct karne mein.


Lekin ab koi past nahi tha, abhi uski current strength ke according usko bhi Furnace use karni padegi.


Furnace ke paas mein hi 3 Restoration Pill Concoct karne ke liye efficient ingredient they. Atharva ne estimate laga liya tha ki wo itne ingredients mein araam se 10 Pill Concoct kar dega.


Usne apna hath hillaya aur ek invisible yuan Power ne ek ingredient ka portion pakda aur Furnace mein daal diya.


Impurities ko hatana pehla step hota jab aap Pill Concoct kar rahe ho. Agar bahar jo trio unhone agar dekh liya hota jo Atharva abhi kar raha hai to unke jabde nikal ke ground pe gir jaate. Pill Concoct karne mein jo pehla step hota hai wo sabse hardest step hota hai, isiliye hi kayi saari Pills apne full potential tak nahi pahuch paati. Impurities ko hatane ke liye person ko slowly-2 time spend karna chahiye, agar aap ek sath saare ingredients ko ek sath Furnace mein daalke unki impurities hatate ho to aapke paas precise control hona chahiye.


Atharva ne apni Soul Power ka ek strong force sidhe Furnace mein bheja aur continue apne dono hatho se sign banane laga. Uske continue hand sign se ground fire bhi ek dum Soul Force ki tarah Furnace mein enter kar gayi. Ye sab itna smoothly ho raha tha jaise Atharva ne ye sab thousand baar pehle bhi kiya ho. Kuch hi minutes mein jo ingredients mein jo impurities thi wo jaa chuki thi, sirf ingredients ke essence hi bach tha.


Next step tha wo in essence ko merge karke Pill form karne ka, ye Atharva ke liye sabse easy job thi kyuki RestorationPill Sirf Mortal level ki thi aur wo inhe aankh bandh karke bhi merge kar sakta tha.


Kuch minutes baad usne sabhi Pills ko form kar liya aur fir ek loud shout ke sath usne apni Yuan power ko Furnace ke andar bhejke Pills ko bahar nikal liya aur apne hath mein pakad liya. Jo Restoration pill Atharva ke hath mein thi smooth aur perfectly Round thi aur glow bhi kar rahi thi. Puri Pill me impurities hone ka koi hint tak nahi tha aur ye proof tha ki ye 100% effectiveness wali Restoration pills hai.


Ingredient ke itne se portion se hi 10 Pills concoct kar li thi, Atharva is outcome se kaafi satisfied tha. 100% effectiveness RestorationPills wo bhi sirf 20 minutes mein wo bhi 100% success rate ke sath, agar Fragrant Sky City mein ye baat koi sunle to wo wahi shock ki wajah se mar jaayega.


“ 100% effectiveness Pill wo bhi first try mein wo log shock se hi na mar jaaye, mujhe cover ke liye kuch damaged Pills bhi concoct kar leni chahiye. ”


Smile karte huye usne apna hath hillaya aur ingredients ka doosra portion bhi furnace mein bhej diya.


Kuch minutes baad,


Boom!

Ek explosion sound hua jisey sunke pehle to Jai aur dono alchemist shock huye aur fir jor se hasne lag gaye.


“ Furnace explode ho gayi. ”


“ ye to normal hai. Jab maine Alchemy start ki thi to maine hundred se bhi jyada Furnace explode ki thi. ”


“ Chalo andar jaake check karte hai. ”


Trio ne gate ko dhakka dete huye khola aur dekha ki Atharva Furnace ke paas depressed khada hai.


“ Young Master, depressed mat hoiye. Furnace ka explode ho jaana normal hai, lekin mere opinion mein aapko Pills Concoct karne mein apne energy aur time waste nahi karna chahiye. ”


Fat old man ne Atharva ko comfort karte huye kaha.


“ Young Master, humey pata hai aap Pill Shop ke liye worried ho, lekin Pill Concot karna itna asaan kaam nahi hai. "


Jai ne bhi Atharva ka shoulder thapthapte huye kaha.


Atharva “ Uncle Jai, halanki Furnace explode ho gayi, lekin maine kuch Restoration pill produce ki hai. ”


“ Young Master aap majak kar rahe hai na. ek baar Furnace explode ho jaaye to uske andar ke saare ingredients khatam ho jaate hai. Explosion mein Pills produce karna impossible hai. ”


Skinny old man ne Atharva ko chedte huye kaha. Atharva ne bina kuch kahe apni mutthi ko khola to uske palm mein 3 white Pills jo ke marble ke size ki thi wo dikhi.


Trio ek dum se stunned ho chuke they unke face ki smile ek dum se froze ho gayi. Unke jitna koi bhi experienced ho to wo aram se bata sakta hai ki jo Pills Atharva ke Palm pe rakhi hai wo recently produce ki gayi hai. Pills thi wo ek warm feeling de rahi thi jo sign tha ki ye abhi Furnace se bahar nikli hai.


“ No way, furnace explode hone pe bhi tumne Pills produce kar di. ”


Trio ki aankhe ek dum chaudi ho gayi thi. Un teeno ne ek ek Pill li aur carefully examine karne lage. Restoration pills ek energy Pill hai jo warrior ko Cultivate karte time chahiye hoti hai. Restoration pills jo Atharva ne concoct ki thi wo smooth aur round thi, in Pills mein bilkul thodi se impurities thi jo prove kar rahi thi ki effectiveness low nahi hai.


“ ye… ye to 70% effectiveness Pill hai. ”


Fat old man chillaya.


“ Ye sach mein 70% effectiveness wali Pills hai, jo Pills hum produce karte they uske ek grade high hai. Lekin ye kaise possible hai. ”


Skinny old man ke face pe disbelief wala look tha. Jo wo dekh raha tha usey wo bilkul bhi accept nahi kar paa raha tha.


“ Young Master, ye Pills kya aapne khudse ye Pills produce ki hai ? ”


Jai ko bhi believe nahi ho raha tha.


Atharva “ Haan maine hi ki hai. ”


“ Young master kya aapne pehle kabhi koi Pill concoct ki hai ? ”


Atharva “ Nahi kabhi nahi. ”


“ Young Master, kya ye sach mein aapka first time tha ? ”


Atharva “ Haan! ”


“ Young Master, kya main puch sakta hu ki aapka current level kya hai ? ”


Atharva “ QI JING Realm 9th Level. ”


Trio ka blood almost unke muh se bahar aane ko ho gaya tha. Atharva ko dekhte huye har bitte time ke sath unki aankhe chaudi hoti jaa rahi thi. Unki aankho se aansoo niklne ko ho gaye they, unhe aisa lag raha tha jaise unhone apni entire life waste kar di ho.


Soul ki power bhut important hoti hai Pill Concoct karne mein, lekin ek person ka Cultivation level bhi utna hi important hota hai. Jo Pill Concoct karne ki process hoti hai wo bhut jaldi person ki Yuan energy khatam kar deti hai. QI HAI level se pehle ek Alchemist banna almost impossible hai kyuki isse low level ke person ke paas enough Yuan power nahi hoti puri Process complete karne ke liye. Wahi Atharva ne 70% effectiveness wali Restoration pill concoct kar di thi wo first attempt mein.


“ Young Master, main janna chahta hu ki aapne ye kaise kiya ? ”


Jai ne ye sawal pucha aur baaki dono old man bhi bade utawle ho rahe they answer sunne ke liye.


Atharva “ Maine bataya to tha jab aap bhut saari Pills khaate ho to naturally aapko pata laga jata hai Pill Concoct kaise karni hai. ”


Atharva ne apne kandhe hillate huye kaha. Wo kisi ko bhi nahi bata sakta ki uska rebirth hua hai aur bata bhi dega to koi believe nahi karega balki uspe hasenge aur. Sabko pata hai ki usne bhut Pills consume kar rakhi hai to abhi ke liye ye good reason tha.


“ What the fuck ! ”


Trio ke mouth se almost blood bahar aane ko ho gaya tha.


Atharva “ Uncle Jai, mujhe abhi bhut acha feel ho raha hai. Main ek baar aur Pill Concoct karne ke liye ready hu. Abhi jo explosion hua usse mujhe kuch insights mile hai. Mujhe feel ho raha hai ki main is baar easily 100% effectiveness wali Pill Concoct kar dunga. ”


Ye baat bolte huye Atharva ne bina kuch suney un teeno ko Furnace room se bahar nikal diya.


Furnace room ke bahar trio ke face pe mix emotions they. Unhe pehle laga tha ki Atharva sirf fun ke liye yaha aaya hai, unhe bilkul andaja nahi tha ki Atharva pehli baar mein 70% effectiveness wali Pill Concoct kar lega.


“ Sir, main pehle kehta tha ki is world mein koi Genius nahi hai. Main galat tha. ”


Skinny old man ne kaha.


“ Impossible, fark nahi padta Young master kitne bhi bade Genius ho, lekin 100% effectiveness Pills majak hai. ”


Jai aur Fat old man ne ek sath bola aur fir sir hillane lage.


Saint Origin Universe mein different levels ke Alchemists hai :- Mortal, Earth, Heaven, Saint Level. Ek Alchemist ka level uske Pills ki qualities se pata nahi lagta hta balki uski Soul ki strength aur Cultivation Level se ek Alchemist ki level ka pata lagta tha. Ek Earth Level Alchemist ke liye bhi 100% effectiveness Pills produce karna kaafi difficult hota hai.


Half hour Furnace room mein spend karne ke baad Atharva ne heavy stone door ko open kiya aur bahar aa gaya.


“ Young Master, Pill produce ho gayi kya ? ”


Jai ne curiously pucha.


Atharva “ Yes, main ek Genius hu jiske paas god given talent hai jo doosro ko nahi milta. Maine apne second attempt mein 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills produce ki hai. ”


Atharva ne itna bolte hi trio ki taraf 3 Pills trow kar di. Trio ne bhi jaldi se Pills Catch ki aur Carefully examine karne lage aur fir ek doosre ki taraf shock hoke dekhne lage.


“ 100% effectiveness Pills, oh my god. Ye color ye Pill ki strength, ye sach mein 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pill hai. ”


Fat Old man ne chillate huye kaha, wahi skinny old man ki aankhe gol gol ghumne lagi usko khada hone mein dikkat ho rahi thi, wo kabhi ground pe gir sakta tha. Wo bilkul bhi ye accept kar paa rahe they kyuki ye bilkul unbelievable tha.


“ Young Master koi Genius nahi hai. Wo ek Peerless Genius hai jo thousand years mein ek baar paida hota hai. Aise talent ko koi word describe nahi kar sakte. ”










TO BE CONTINUED……..


 

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UPDATE NO - 10 post kar diya hai dosto.
Note :- Mere is Update par 15 like jldi se pure kijiye aur next update mai turant Upload kar dunga.
Warna like pure nahi hue to UPADTE apne timings se to aate hi rahenge.
 
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UPDATE NO - 10
PEERLESS GENIUS




“ Bhut saari Pills khaane se Alchemist ban jaana....Impossible. "


Trio ko abhi bhi believe nahi tha Atharva pe, halanki Atharva unhe kaafi serious lag raha raha tha.


Jai “ Thik hai, chalo Young Master ki Alchemist Skill bhi dekh lete ha i”


Jai ne haste huye kaha aur Atharva ko Furnace room ki taraf le jaane laga. Un sab ke paas Young Master ko accompany karne ka kafi time tha, kyuki Pill Business to abhi band hi tha unka. Furnace room pass mein hi tha aur bilkul Pill Shop ke middle mein bhi. Furnace room ki walls thick, heavy stones se bani huyi thi. Alchemists ke alawa is room mein kisi ko bhi andar jaane ki permission nahi thi.


Jai “ young Master, Furnace aur fire ready hai aur 3 Restoration Pill banane ke ingredients bhi ready hai. ”


Jai ne ek smile ke sath kaha.


Atharva “ Okay, tum log bahar hi wait karo, main akele hi Pill Concoct karunga. ”


Atharva apni baat khatam karte hi Furnace room mein enter kar gaya aur apne piche usne heavy stone door bhi band kar diya.


“ Sir aapko yakeen hai kya Young Master sach mein Pill Concot karna jaante hai ? ”


Skiny old man ne pucha.


Jai “ Kya tumhe main koi fool lagta hu ? "
" Ek Alchemist banne mein Soul ki Strength sabse important cheez hoti hai. Young Master kaafi change ho gaye, ek useless fool se ek Genius mein. Lekin agar tum mujhse kaho ki wo apne Soul ki strength ko badha sakte hai, to main Bet laga sakta hu ki ye Imossible hai. ”


Ek Soul ko na dekha jaa sakta hai na hi touch kiya jaa sakta hai, lekin ye body ka sabse important part hai aur Soul hi source hai jaha se Alchemy ki jaa sakti hai.


Sabke paas Soul hoti hai aur ek Alchemist banne ke liye person ko apne Soul ki Strength ko badhana padta hai. Jisey na dekha jaa sakta hai aur naa hi touch kiya jaa sakta hai uski strength ko unleash karna bhut difficult hai. Aur yahi reason hai Saint Origin Universe mein countable Alchemist hi hai.


Atharva apni Past life mein ek excellent Alchemist tha. Halanki wo 100 years pehle mar gaya tha aur isliye uski Soul ko kaafi damage huya tha, lekin usne usi time ek secret Skill ko use karke apni Soul ko 100 years future mein ek ladke ki Soul ke sath merge kar diya tha. Aur isiliye wo ab bhi jo similar level ke person hai unse jyada Soul ki strength ko unleash kar sakta tha.


Furnace room mein Atharva ne apne saamne rakhi Bronze Furnace ko dekhte huye sir hillaya.


Atharva “ Kitni Poor aur low quality ki Furnace hai. Mujhe khud hi Ground Fire ko control karna hoga. Ye kitna troublesome hai. ”


Furnace Room ki banawat aur Furnace ki placement ek dum sahi jagah aur sahi tarike se hone chahiye. Example ke liye jo uske saamne Bronze Furnace thi wo aisi jagah located thi jaha se ground fire ko control karne me asani ho. Halanki jo uske saamne Bronze Furnace thi wo sirf Ground fire ko hi use kar sakti thi, jiski quality bhut jyada kam thi. Ground fire sirf ek step upper hoti hai Normal fire se, yaha tak ki beast flame bhi isse better quality ki hoti hai.


Soul aur Fire ki strength Alchemist ke liye bhut important hoti hai. Ek bronze Furnace aur ground fire ka use sirf low level alchemist hi karte hai. Apni past life mein ek three types ki fire ko control kar sakta tha aur kisi Furnace ki jaroorat bhi nahi padti thi Pill Concoct karne mein.


Lekin ab koi past nahi tha, abhi uski current strength ke according usko bhi Furnace use karni padegi.


Furnace ke paas mein hi 3 Restoration Pill Concoct karne ke liye efficient ingredient they. Atharva ne estimate laga liya tha ki wo itne ingredients mein araam se 10 Pill Concoct kar dega.


Usne apna hath hillaya aur ek invisible yuan Power ne ek ingredient ka portion pakda aur Furnace mein daal diya.


Impurities ko hatana pehla step hota jab aap Pill Concoct kar rahe ho. Agar bahar jo trio unhone agar dekh liya hota jo Atharva abhi kar raha hai to unke jabde nikal ke ground pe gir jaate. Pill Concoct karne mein jo pehla step hota hai wo sabse hardest step hota hai, isiliye hi kayi saari Pills apne full potential tak nahi pahuch paati. Impurities ko hatane ke liye person ko slowly-2 time spend karna chahiye, agar aap ek sath saare ingredients ko ek sath Furnace mein daalke unki impurities hatate ho to aapke paas precise control hona chahiye.


Atharva ne apni Soul Power ka ek strong force sidhe Furnace mein bheja aur continue apne dono hatho se sign banane laga. Uske continue hand sign se ground fire bhi ek dum Soul Force ki tarah Furnace mein enter kar gayi. Ye sab itna smoothly ho raha tha jaise Atharva ne ye sab thousand baar pehle bhi kiya ho. Kuch hi minutes mein jo ingredients mein jo impurities thi wo jaa chuki thi, sirf ingredients ke essence hi bach tha.


Next step tha wo in essence ko merge karke Pill form karne ka, ye Atharva ke liye sabse easy job thi kyuki RestorationPill Sirf Mortal level ki thi aur wo inhe aankh bandh karke bhi merge kar sakta tha.


Kuch minutes baad usne sabhi Pills ko form kar liya aur fir ek loud shout ke sath usne apni Yuan power ko Furnace ke andar bhejke Pills ko bahar nikal liya aur apne hath mein pakad liya. Jo Restoration pill Atharva ke hath mein thi smooth aur perfectly Round thi aur glow bhi kar rahi thi. Puri Pill me impurities hone ka koi hint tak nahi tha aur ye proof tha ki ye 100% effectiveness wali Restoration pills hai.


Ingredient ke itne se portion se hi 10 Pills concoct kar li thi, Atharva is outcome se kaafi satisfied tha. 100% effectiveness RestorationPills wo bhi sirf 20 minutes mein wo bhi 100% success rate ke sath, agar Fragrant Sky City mein ye baat koi sunle to wo wahi shock ki wajah se mar jaayega.


“ 100% effectiveness Pill wo bhi first try mein wo log shock se hi na mar jaaye, mujhe cover ke liye kuch damaged Pills bhi concoct kar leni chahiye. ”


Smile karte huye usne apna hath hillaya aur ingredients ka doosra portion bhi furnace mein bhej diya.


Kuch minutes baad,



Boom!

Ek explosion sound hua jisey sunke pehle to Jai aur dono alchemist shock huye aur fir jor se hasne lag gaye.


“ Furnace explode ho gayi. ”


“ ye to normal hai. Jab maine Alchemy start ki thi to maine hundred se bhi jyada Furnace explode ki thi. ”


“ Chalo andar jaake check karte hai. ”


Trio ne gate ko dhakka dete huye khola aur dekha ki Atharva Furnace ke paas depressed khada hai.


“ Young Master, depressed mat hoiye. Furnace ka explode ho jaana normal hai, lekin mere opinion mein aapko Pills Concoct karne mein apne energy aur time waste nahi karna chahiye. ”


Fat old man ne Atharva ko comfort karte huye kaha.


“ Young Master, humey pata hai aap Pill Shop ke liye worried ho, lekin Pill Concot karna itna asaan kaam nahi hai. "


Jai ne bhi Atharva ka shoulder thapthapte huye kaha.


Atharva “ Uncle Jai, halanki Furnace explode ho gayi, lekin maine kuch Restoration pill produce ki hai. ”


“ Young Master aap majak kar rahe hai na. ek baar Furnace explode ho jaaye to uske andar ke saare ingredients khatam ho jaate hai. Explosion mein Pills produce karna impossible hai. ”


Skinny old man ne Atharva ko chedte huye kaha. Atharva ne bina kuch kahe apni mutthi ko khola to uske palm mein 3 white Pills jo ke marble ke size ki thi wo dikhi.


Trio ek dum se stunned ho chuke they unke face ki smile ek dum se froze ho gayi. Unke jitna koi bhi experienced ho to wo aram se bata sakta hai ki jo Pills Atharva ke Palm pe rakhi hai wo recently produce ki gayi hai. Pills thi wo ek warm feeling de rahi thi jo sign tha ki ye abhi Furnace se bahar nikli hai.


“ No way, furnace explode hone pe bhi tumne Pills produce kar di. ”


Trio ki aankhe ek dum chaudi ho gayi thi. Un teeno ne ek ek Pill li aur carefully examine karne lage. Restoration pills ek energy Pill hai jo warrior ko Cultivate karte time chahiye hoti hai. Restoration pills jo Atharva ne concoct ki thi wo smooth aur round thi, in Pills mein bilkul thodi se impurities thi jo prove kar rahi thi ki effectiveness low nahi hai.


“ ye… ye to 70% effectiveness Pill hai. ”


Fat old man chillaya.


“ Ye sach mein 70% effectiveness wali Pills hai, jo Pills hum produce karte they uske ek grade high hai. Lekin ye kaise possible hai. ”


Skinny old man ke face pe disbelief wala look tha. Jo wo dekh raha tha usey wo bilkul bhi accept nahi kar paa raha tha.


“ Young Master, ye Pills kya aapne khudse ye Pills produce ki hai ? ”


Jai ko bhi believe nahi ho raha tha.


Atharva “ Haan maine hi ki hai. ”


“ Young master kya aapne pehle kabhi koi Pill concoct ki hai ? ”


Atharva “ Nahi kabhi nahi. ”


“ Young Master, kya ye sach mein aapka first time tha ? ”


Atharva “ Haan! ”


“ Young Master, kya main puch sakta hu ki aapka current level kya hai ? ”


Atharva “ QI JING Realm 9th Level. ”


Trio ka blood almost unke muh se bahar aane ko ho gaya tha. Atharva ko dekhte huye har bitte time ke sath unki aankhe chaudi hoti jaa rahi thi. Unki aankho se aansoo niklne ko ho gaye they, unhe aisa lag raha tha jaise unhone apni entire life waste kar di ho.


Soul ki power bhut important hoti hai Pill Concoct karne mein, lekin ek person ka Cultivation level bhi utna hi important hota hai. Jo Pill Concoct karne ki process hoti hai wo bhut jaldi person ki Yuan energy khatam kar deti hai. QI HAI level se pehle ek Alchemist banna almost impossible hai kyuki isse low level ke person ke paas enough Yuan power nahi hoti puri Process complete karne ke liye. Wahi Atharva ne 70% effectiveness wali Restoration pill concoct kar di thi wo first attempt mein.


“ Young Master, main janna chahta hu ki aapne ye kaise kiya ? ”


Jai ne ye sawal pucha aur baaki dono old man bhi bade utawle ho rahe they answer sunne ke liye.


Atharva “ Maine bataya to tha jab aap bhut saari Pills khaate ho to naturally aapko pata laga jata hai Pill Concoct kaise karni hai. ”


Atharva ne apne kandhe hillate huye kaha. Wo kisi ko bhi nahi bata sakta ki uska rebirth hua hai aur bata bhi dega to koi believe nahi karega balki uspe hasenge aur. Sabko pata hai ki usne bhut Pills consume kar rakhi hai to abhi ke liye ye good reason tha.


“ What the fuck ! ”


Trio ke mouth se almost blood bahar aane ko ho gaya tha.


Atharva “ Uncle Jai, mujhe abhi bhut acha feel ho raha hai. Main ek baar aur Pill Concoct karne ke liye ready hu. Abhi jo explosion hua usse mujhe kuch insights mile hai. Mujhe feel ho raha hai ki main is baar easily 100% effectiveness wali Pill Concoct kar dunga. ”


Ye baat bolte huye Atharva ne bina kuch suney un teeno ko Furnace room se bahar nikal diya.


Furnace room ke bahar trio ke face pe mix emotions they. Unhe pehle laga tha ki Atharva sirf fun ke liye yaha aaya hai, unhe bilkul andaja nahi tha ki Atharva pehli baar mein 70% effectiveness wali Pill Concoct kar lega.


“ Sir, main pehle kehta tha ki is world mein koi Genius nahi hai. Main galat tha. ”


Skinny old man ne kaha.


“ Impossible, fark nahi padta Young master kitne bhi bade Genius ho, lekin 100% effectiveness Pills majak hai. ”


Jai aur Fat old man ne ek sath bola aur fir sir hillane lage.


Saint Origin Universe mein different levels ke Alchemists hai :- Mortal, Earth, Heaven, Saint Level. Ek Alchemist ka level uske Pills ki qualities se pata nahi lagta hta balki uski Soul ki strength aur Cultivation Level se ek Alchemist ki level ka pata lagta tha. Ek Earth Level Alchemist ke liye bhi 100% effectiveness Pills produce karna kaafi difficult hota hai.


Half hour Furnace room mein spend karne ke baad Atharva ne heavy stone door ko open kiya aur bahar aa gaya.


“ Young Master, Pill produce ho gayi kya ? ”


Jai ne curiously pucha.


Atharva “ Yes, main ek Genius hu jiske paas god given talent hai jo doosro ko nahi milta. Maine apne second attempt mein 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills produce ki hai. ”


Atharva ne itna bolte hi trio ki taraf 3 Pills trow kar di. Trio ne bhi jaldi se Pills Catch ki aur Carefully examine karne lage aur fir ek doosre ki taraf shock hoke dekhne lage.


“ 100% effectiveness Pills, oh my god. Ye color ye Pill ki strength, ye sach mein 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pill hai. ”


Fat Old man ne chillate huye kaha, wahi skinny old man ki aankhe gol gol ghumne lagi usko khada hone mein dikkat ho rahi thi, wo kabhi ground pe gir sakta tha. Wo bilkul bhi ye accept kar paa rahe they kyuki ye bilkul unbelievable tha.


“ Young Master koi Genius nahi hai. Wo ek Peerless Genius hai jo thousand years mein ek baar paida hota hai. Aise talent ko koi word describe nahi kar sakte. ”











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Atharva “ Father aap worried lag rahe hain? Kya hua ? ”


Kamalnath “ Aao andar chal ke baat karte hai. ”


Kamalnath aur Atharva dono andar ki taraf chal ke aa gaye. Room ke andar dono father aur son ek dusre ke aamne saamne baithe they.


Kamalnath “ Atharva tumhe pata hona chahiye ki Fragrant Sky City mein humare bhut se business hai, lekin jo sabse jyada money produce karta hai wo Pill Concocting ka hai. ”


{ Pill Concocting matlab jaha pill banayi jaati hai. }


Atharva “ Haa mujhe pata hai. ”


Atharva ne apna sir hillate huye jawab diya. Ek warrior ke liye pills ki supply se jada jaroori kuch nahi hota. Fragrant Sky City mein chahe wo JADHAV Family ho ya YADHAV Family dono ko sabse jyada money Pills ke business mein hi milta tha.


Kamalnath “ Hamara Pill Concocting ka business JADHAV Family ki wajah se bhut jyada affected hua hai, aur hum ab bhut badi musibat mein hai. ”


Kamalnath ne ek worried look ke sath kaha.


Atharva “ Father, exactly kya ho raha hai ? ”


Kamalnath “ JADHAV Family ne 70% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills Concoct karne wala master hire kiya hai. Wahi hamari shops mein jitni bhi Pills hai wo sab 60% effectiveness wali hai. Unhone ek baar Pills bechna start kiya to humara business hi band ho jaayega. Agar JADHAV Family ne puri Fragrant Sky City ko unki Pills se khush kar diya to hamari Family ka to is City mein rukna bhi muskil ho jaayega. ”


Atharva ko ab samajh mein aa raha tha ki uske Father itne worried kyu hai. Pill business khatre mein tha lekin Atharva ko is baat se koi farak nahi pada tha. Balki wo to khus tha kyuki apni past life mein Ek Great Warrior hone ke sath usko bhut saari chizo ka experience tha jinme se Pills Concoct karna bhi ek tha. Usne ek baar to 90% effectiveness ke sath Saint level ki Pill bhi Concoct ki thi. Restoration Pill ek basic Pill hai aur wo easily thousand pills concoct kar sakta hai wo bhi 100% effectiveness ke sath. Atharva apne past life ke experience ke sath easily JADHAV Family ko business se bahar kar sakta hai.


Atharva “ Father aap chinta mat kijiye, main kal Pill Shop pe visit karunga. ”


Kamalnath ne apna sir sehmati mein hillaya, halanki usey koi idea nahi tha ki Atharva Pill Shop pe kyu visit karna chahta hai ?


Atharva “ Father is Cultivation Skill ko dekho agar ye aapko fit hoti hai kya ? ”


Atharva ne ye bolte huye Kamalnath ko ek golden Paper de diya.


“ Cultivation Skill ! ”


Kamalnath ne surprise hote huye wo Paper Atharva ke hath se le liya aur usko curiosity ke sath dekhne lage.


“ Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill. ”


Ek ek single word ko padhte waqt Kamalnath ki aankhe badi hoti chali gayi. Kuch aur words padhte hi wo ek dum excited ho gaye. Jab unhone puri Script khatam ki to unke hath bhi shake ho rahe they jaise ye chota sa Paper ka Weight Thousand Pound ka ho.


Kamalnath “ Atharva tumne ye itni achi Cultivation Skill kaha se obtain ki ? ”


Kamalnath bhut jyada excited tha, script dekhne ke baad bhi usey ye nahi pata tha ki ye Cultivation Skill konse Level ki hai, lekin wo koi idiot nahi tha. Wo asani se bata sakta tha ki Ye Cultivation Skill uski current Cultivation Skill se bhut jyada Powerful aur Superior hai. Ye Xuan Yuan Skill puri Fragrant Sky City mein kisi bhi cheez se compare nahi ho sakti thi. Yaha tak ki QI Province mein bhi iske level ki skill koi nahi hogi.


Ye script Atharva ne likhi thi. Apni Past Life mein Atharva isi Skill ko Cultivate karke the Greatest Saint bana tha, lekin ab uske pass The Dragon Transformation Skill hai to usey Xuan Yuan Skill ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. Kamalnath ko ye Skill de dena ek dum appropriate decision tha.


Atharva “ Father, ek Great Master ne mujhe ye skill di thi, agar aapko pasand hai to aap is Skill ko Cultivate karna start kar do. ”


Agar Kamalnath abhi se ye Skill Cultivate karna suru kar deta hai to usey 2 month mein MORTAL CORE Realm mein Breakthrough karne mein koi dikkat nahi hogi.


Agar Kamalnath ko pata chal jata ki jo Skill usne pakad rakhi hai wo Saint Level ki hai to wo khusi se hi mar jaata. Isiliye Atharva ne Kamalnath ko purposely Skill ka Level nahi bataya.


Kamalnath bilkul apne thoughts mein kho chukka tha usne to abhi se hi Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill ko study karna suru kar diya tha. Wo is Skill se bhut jyada attract ho gaya tha aur wo khud ko apne thoughts se bahar bhi nahi nikal pa raha tha. Achanak hi wo pura pasine mein bheeg gaya aur aisa lagne laga ki wo abhi behosh ho jaayega. Ye sab sirf ek Minute ke andar hua tha jabse usne Skill study karna suru kiya tha.


Atharva “ Father. "


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye Kamalnath ko jagaya jo khudke thoughts mein hi kho chukka tha. Kamalnath sirf QI HAI Realm ke peak par tha aur uska talent bhi ordinary hi tha. Wo bhut tezi se Saint Level ki Cultivation Skill ko use kar raha tha isiliye aisa hua tha. Apne mouth se dhua nikalte huye Kamalnath ne Cultivation karna band kar diya aur tab usey realise hua ki wo ek dum exhausted hai.


Kamalnath “ Atharva ye Skill bhut powerful hai aur tumhare Dad ke paas limited talent hai, isiliye Cultivation ko rokna mere liye bhut hard ho gaya tha. "


Atharva “ Dad itni powerful Skill ko Cultivate karne mein time aur effort lagta hai. Aap isko bhut slowly-2 study kar sakte ho. ”


Kamalnath “ Beta tum ek dum sahi keh rahe ho, main QI HAI Realm ka warrior hu lekin fir bhi tumhari mental capacity mujhse jyada hai. Aisa lagta hai mera beta mujhse pehle hi bada ho gaya hai. Tumhara bhut acha Future hoga. Hahahhaha. ”


Kamalnath ko yaha se bhejne ke baad Atharva firse The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne laga, ye Skill Xuan Yuan skill se bhut powerfull hai. Agar Atharva ke paas apni past life ke 1000 years ka experience nahi hota to wo bilkul bhi aise result nahi nikal paata jaise uske paas ab hai.



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NEXT MORNING
PILL SHOP



Next Morning, Atharva ne ek clean Black Colour ka Robe pehna aur Mayor Mansion se nikal gaya. Usne apne hath mein ek Fan pakad rakha tha, apni smile aur bright eyes ki wajah se wo bhut handsome lag raha tha.


Pill Shop hi, wo YADHAV Family ka sabse important business tha aur wo Mayor Mansion se jyada dur bhi nahi tha. Atharva 15 minutes mein Pill Shop ke front door ke saamne pahuch gaya. Ye badi classical building thi jaise ordinary Pills building hoti hai. Pills ka strong Aroma door ke bahar bhi smell kiya jaa sakta tha.


“ Aap aa gaye Young Master. ”


“ Oh talented and handsome Young Master, aapke looks bhut gorgeous hai. Aap koi Mortal to lagte hi nahi ho, aisa lagta hai jaise aap Heavens se utre huye Angel ho. ”


Jo 2 guard Shop ke bahar khade they wo Atharva ko salute maarte huye uski tareef kiye jaa rahe they. Past mein bhi wo Atharva ko aise hi salute karte they aur tareef bhi aise hi karte they, lekin ab fark itna tha ki inki aankho mein sach mein respect thi.


Atharva “ Not bad, jaao aur jaake treasurey se 10 silver coins collect kar lo, lekin aage se mere saamne aisa bilkul bhi mat karna. ”


Fir Ek hath back pe aur ek hath mein Fan pakde huye Atharva Pill Shop ke andar chala gaya.


“ Apki jai ho Young Master. ”



Dono guards ne chillake kaha.

Pill Shop YADHAV Family ka main business tha lekin fir bhi yaha jyada guards nahi they. Kyuki Pill shop ke jo incharge they wo Jay tha, jo sirf ek alchemist hi nahi balki QI HAI Realm ke mid level ka warrior tha. Secondly Pill shop Mayor Mansion se jyada dur nahi thi. Agar yaha kuch hota bhi hai to Mansion se immediately help aa sakti thi.


Pill Shop ke meeting room mein 3 old man baithe they jinke face depressed aur clueless they. Jo 3 old man they wo teeno hi apni fifties mein they aur unhone grey robe pehna hua tha. Unme se ek fat tha aur ek bhut skinny. Jo old man bich mein baitha tha uski average body thi aur wo hi is Pill Shop ka incharge Jay tha. Jai hai wo Kamalnath ka best friend aur ye koi bhi bata sakta hai kyuki family member na hone ke bawjood Kamalnath ne usey Pill Shop ka incharge bana rakha hai.


“ Uncle Jay, aapke face pe ye depressed look bilkul suit nahi karta. ”


Atharva ne andar aate huye kaha. Trio Atharva ko dekhte hi apni seat se khade ho gaye.


Jai “ Young master aap yaha kyu aaye hai ? ”


Jai ko chodke koi bhi alchemist past mein Atharva se baat nahi karta tha, lekin jo 3 din pehle hua usko dekhke sabke mind badal gaye they.



Atharva “ Uncle Jai, Dad ne mujhe bataya hai ki JADHAV Family ne ek alchemist hire kiya hai jo 70% effectiveness ke sath restoration pill concoct kar sakta hai. ”


Atharva ne wahi pe rakhi huyi ek chair pe baithte huye kaha.


Jai “ Young Master, aapko ye bhi pata hai. Humne last kuch dino mein koi bhi restoration pill sell nahi ki hai. Hamari abilities limited hai aur hum 70% effectiveness wali pill banane ki ability nahi rakhte.”


Atharva “ don’t give up uncle, main aapko aise person se milwaunga jo 70% effectiveness se jayada effectiveness wala pill concoct kar sakta hai. ”


Jai “ What ? "
" Young master aise kisi ko jaante hai. ”


Jai ne khus hote huye kaha.


“ kaha hai wo alchemist ? "
" Agar wo hamari help karne ke liye taiyar hai to hum bilkul bhi disrespect show nahi karenge. ”


Fat man ne serious hote huye kaha.


Atharva “ Tum logo ko wo person dur lag raha hai, lekin wo tumhare bilkul saamne hi to hai. ”


Apne fan ko fold karte huye Atharva khada ho gaya.


“ What ? "
" Young master, kya tum khud ke baare mein hi to nahi keh rahe ho ? ”


Fat old man ne surprise hote huye Atharva se pucha. Baaki dono ka bhi same reaction tha.


Atharva “ Haa, main hi wo alchemist hu. ”


Hahhahahaha……


Jaise hi Atharva ne jawab diya waise hi trio ek dum jor se hasne lage.


Jai ” Young master aap pills concoct karna chahte ho ? "
" Majak karna band karo, sabko pata hai aap sirf pills consume karne mein ache ho naaki pills concoct karne mein. "


Atharva “ Uncle Jai mujhe itna bhi kam mat samjho. Wo kahawat hai na doctor wo hi banta hai jo sabse jyada bimar raha ho. Lekin mere liye alag hai ‘ acha alchemist wo hi banta hai jisne bahut saari pills consume ki ho. ’”


Trio ek baar firse hasne laga.


“ agar pills consume karne se hi log alchemist bante to abhi tak Saint Origin mein sabhi Alchemist hote. Ab aap yaha se jaao aur humey koi solution nikalne mein disturb mat karo. ”


Atharva “ Lagta hai tum log mujpe vishwas nahi karoge jab tak main tumhe apni ability na dikha du. Lets go, mujhe furnace room mein le chalo. ”


Apni sleeves ko uppar chahdate huye Atharva aise act kar raha tha jaise wo kuch bada karne wala ho. Trio ne Atharva ko dekha, unhe aisa bilkul bhi nahi laga ki wo majak kar raha hai. Kya wo sach mein itni pills consume karke alchemist ban gaya hai?










TO BE CONTINUED …….
Awesome update bhai
 
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