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[Itachi_Uchiha]

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[andyking302]

UPDATE NO - 08
The Six Solar Finger​

Ek evil smile ke sath Suraj Atharva ke saamne aake khada hogya.


Atharva " Kya tum taiyar ho Suraj ? "
" Agar nahi to tumhe ek aur mauka deta hu main. "


Suraj " Tum majak kar rahe ho kya? "
" Tum jaise ke sath fight karne ke liye mujhe prepare hone ki jaroorat nahi. "


SLAP!


Jaise hi Suraj ne bolna band kiya waise sabhi ko ek loud sound sunayi diya. Crowd ne bas Atharva ko apni jagah se disappear hote dekha aur fir Suraj ko slap karte huye. Ek slap se hi Suraj niche gir gaya.


Silence!
Ek dum Silence!
Crowd ne pehle Suraj ko dekha jisse khada nahi hoya jaa raha tha aur fir unhone shocking expression se Atharva ko dekha.


" Fuck ! Kisne kaha tha ye ki Young Master QI JING Realm ke 1st level ka useless fool hai. "
" Young Master ke single slap se hi ye Suraj niche gir gaya jisse khada bhi nahi hoya jaa raha. "
" Kon kehta hai Young Master useless hai ? "


" Awesome….., kya Atharva abhi tak apni true strength hide karke rakhe huye tha ? "


" Kya ye hamare Young Master hai ? "
" Ye ek dum different person lag rahe hai. "


Puri Crowd aur YADAV Family ke Guards mein is tarah ki baaate hone lagi thi.


Suraj " Impossible, aise nahi ho sakta? Tumne mujhe kaise haraya ? "


Jisey sabse jyada shock laga tha wo Suraj tha, jo abhi bhi ground pe leta hua tha aur sir bhaari ho raha tha. Atharva ke ek Slap ne usey weak bana diya tha uske body ke andar ki Yuan Power ek dum mess ban chuki thi. Uske paas hilne tak ki strength nahi thi.


2 Young man jaldi se aaye aur unhone Suraj ko sahara deke uthaya, in dono ke hi face pe dare huye expression they.


Bet ko yaad karke to Suraj ko marne ka mann kar raha tha agar wo bina Bet ke ladta to uski reputation down hoti lekin Bet ki wajah se puri Family ki insult ho jaayegi.


Atharva " Chang "


Chang piche se bhaagta hua aaya aur Atharva ke saamne sir jhuka ke bola.


Chang " young Master aapki kya wish hai ? "


Jabse Atharva ne Chang ko 10 Gold coins diye hai tabse Chang ko lagta hai ki Atharva bhut kind hearted hai.


Atharva " Tum is Casket ko JADHAV Family ki Sedan Chair pe rakhne mein meri madad karo. Fir inka picha karke dekho ki ye Casket leke jaate hai ya nahi agar nahi leke jaate to aaj se JADHAV Family ke members bastards ke naam se jaane jaayenge. "


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye kaha.


Blergh!


Suraj ko to ye sunte hi khun ki Vomit ho gayi aur wahi behosh ho gaya. Suraj is time badi dikkat mein tha agar wo Casket leke wapis jaata hai to Karamchand uski body se uski Skin alag kar dega. Aur agar nahi leke jaata hai to City ke sabhi log JADHAV Family ko bastard kahenge. Chahe wo kuch bhi kare lekin Karamchand usko Jinda nahi chodega.


Chang " Yes, Young Master. "


Chang ko fark nahi padta tha kisi se bhi usko to bas apne Young Master ko khus karna tha. Usne soch liya tha aaj ke baad wo Atharva ka har ek order follow karega bina refuse kiye.


Haaa!


Ek loud shout ke sath Chang ne wo bhaari Casket apne Shoulder pe rakh liya. QI JING Realm ke 6th level pe hone se ek Bhaari Casket uthana uske liye easy tha.


Bina kuch kahe aur sune Chang ne wo Casket Jiya jaha baithi thi uske bagal mein rakh diya. Jiya jor se ro rahi thi Apne husband ka Casket dekh ke jo usey aur bhi jyada ugly bana raha tha.


Atharva " Suraj tum log jis kaam ke liye aaye they ab wo pura hua, isliye jaldi se yaha se niklo aur wedding Ceremony ko aage badhao. Aaj se YADAV Family ki kisi bhi Property pe JADHAV Family ka koi bhi member welcome nahi hai. Aur tum jo mujhse haar gaye ho, aaj ke baad mujhe apna face mat dikhana, agar kabhi dikha to tumhe wahi pitna suru kardunga aur itna pitunga ki tumhari Mother bhi tumhara Face nahi pehchaan paayegi. Now, Get Lost ! "


Finally, JADHAV Family ki parade jaha se aayi thi usi taraf wapis Chali gayi wo bhi sirf ek Casket ke sath. Jitni khusi se ye log aaye they. Usse jyada dukh mein ye log wapis jaa rahe they.


Rumors aur discussion puri Fragrant Sky City mein suney jaa sakte they. Jo do Families ke bich mein Conflict tha ab wo another level pe pahuch chuka tha. Sabko pata tha ab Fragrant Sky City ke peaceful din jaane waale hai aur ye jab tak waapis nahi aayenge jab tak ek Family jeet nahi jaati.


Jabse YADAV Family aur JADHAV Family ke relationship kharab huye they us din se hi Kailashnath ek dum busy ho gaya tha. Kailashnath Family ke paas bahut saari properties thi jinme Mansions, Elixir shop, Commerce Chamber aur bhut si chize aati thi. Aur inme se jyadatar properties ko Sohan sambhalta tha. Ab Sohan to mar chuka tha isliye sab kuch Kailashnath ko akele hi sambhalna pad Raha tha.


Atharva us incident ke baad apne Mansion se bahar na aane ka faisla kiya tha. Atharva dusre logo se jyada aage ki sochta tha, uske paas ek simple tarika tha apne enemies ko harane ka aur wo thi Strength. Ye aisa world hai jaha pe Jo Strong hai uski sab respect karenge aur sabse jyada Strong hai usko log follow karenge chahe wo galat ho ya sahi.


Har ek single Warrior ke liye Cultivation talent aur Combat talent bhut jaroori hai. Atharva ne The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karna start Kar diya tha jo usko doosro se jyada strength deti thi. Lekin Cultivation Skill sirf Foundation hoti hai aur ek Great Warrior banne ke liye usko Bahut achi Combat Skills ki jarurat padegi.


Saint Origin Universe mein Cultivation Skills ke jaise hi Combat Skills bhi Four part mein divide hai
1. Mortal
2. Earth
3. Heaven
4. Saint
Aur ye each level bhi 3 levels mein divide hai Low, Medium, High.


QI JING Realm sirf ek Foundation realm hai ek person QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough karne ke baad hi Combat Skill ko practice kar sakta hai. Lekin Atharva doosro se different tha uske paas several Combat Skill ko practice karne ka experience tha. Aur The Dragon Transformation Skill usko normal person se jyada Yuan Energy provide karti thi, isliye filhal QI HAI Realm ke early stage ke Warrior Atharva ka koi match nahi they.


QI JING Realm ke Warrior isliye Combat Skills practice nahi kar paate they kyuki unke paas enough Yuan Power nahi hoti thi Skill ko support karne ki. Lekin Atharva ki story different thi.


Past Life mein Atharva ne Jo Combat Skill Practice ki thi wo thi ' Nine Solar Energy ' jo ki ek Saint level ki thi aur is Skill ko Atharva ne khud hi banaya tha apne liye. Ye bahut hi powerful Skill thi jo surroundings mein se energy collect karke User ko Great benefit provide karwati thi.


Is Combat Skill ko practice karne ke liye Ek strong body aur huge amount of QI energy chahiye. Joki bhut difficult hai achieve karna.


Past Life mein Atharva ne The Dragon Transformation Skill ki jagah Xuan Yuan naam ki skill Cultivate ki thi jo body ko bhut jyada Vital energy QI deti hai. Lekin iske baad bhi wo apni past life mein Nine Solar Energies Combat Skill ke Full potential ko use nahi kar paya tha.


Lekin is Life mein Atharva The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate kar raha tha, jo Xuan Yuan Skill se powerful hai. Har ek Red Dragon Mark ke sath uske bhut jyada amount mein Vital energy QI milegi aur iske sath wo is life mein Nine Solar Energies ko full potential ke sath use kar paayega.


Atharva " Too bad, main sirf QI JING REALM mein hu aur Nine Solar Energies is World ki sabse Strong Combat Skill hai. Even Divine Core Realm ke Warrior bhi is Skill ko practice nahi kar sakte. "


{ 5 Foundational Realm
1. QI JING REALM (9 Level hai)
2. QI HAI REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
3. MORTAL CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
4. HEAVENLY CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
5. DIVINE CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)

ISKE BAAD AATE HAI MAIN REALM JO UPPER 5 HAI WO SIRF FOUNDATION HAI.

6. COMBAT SOUL REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
7. COMBAT KING REALM (First Grade to 9th Grade)
8. COMBAT EMPEROR REALM (First Grade to 9th Grade)
9. SAINT REALM (Minor, Great ) }


" Main abhi ke liye Nine Solar Energies ko practice nahi kar sakta. Lekin mein Six Solar Fingers Combat Skill ko practice kar sakta hu jo ki Nine Solar Energies Skill ka hi ek part hai. Six Solar Fingers Nine Solar Energies ka Foundation hai aur Six Solar Finger ko ek High Earth Level ki skill kaha jaa sakta hai. "


Atharva ne apne face pe ek smile liye ye socha. Puri Fragrant Sky City mein ek bhi Earth Level ki Combat Skills nahi thi, isliye yaha pe koi bhi Six Solar Fingers ko halke mein nahi le sakta tha.


Six Solar Finger mein Six Style they. Har ek Finger ki power alag Level pe thi jaha First Finger kisi bhi Stone ko bilkul Crush kar sakti thi wahi Sixth Finger kisi Mountain ko bilkul wipe kar sakti thi.


Next 3 din Atharva Six Solar Fingers ko practice karta raha bina apne Mansion se bahar nikle. Aur Kailashnath bhi bhut jyada busy ho gaya tha business manage karne mein ki uske paas Atharva ko disturb karne ka time nahi tha.


In 3 dino mein Atharva ne saara time The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne mein aur Six Solar Fingers ko practice karne mein lagaya. Is combination se uski Vital Energy QI se bharne lagi thi.


In 3 dino mein Atharva QI JING Realm ke ek dum peak pe pahuch gaya tha. Bas ek step dur tha QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough karne se. Jo ek Red Dragon Mark form hua tha wo bhi bas Complete hone hi wala tha. Uske punch ki strength 5000 pound se 8000 pound ki ho gayi thi jo kisi bhi Early QI HAI REALM ke warrior ki nahi hoti.


Haaa!


Garden mein Atharva ek black Robe pehene khada tha aur usne jor se chillate huye apni Finger se ek Golden Ray release ki jo lightning speed se uske Finger tips se nikli thi.


Bam!


Wo Golden Ray waha pe rakhe ek bade se stone ko cut karte karte huye nikal gayi. Jaha se Golden Ray ne Stone ko Cut kiya tha waha pe smoke nikalne laga tha. Agar Fragrant Sky City mein koi is Attack ko dekh leta to pagal ho jaata.


" Main abhi sirf ek Finger hi use kar sakta hu Six Solar Fingers mein se aur abhi bhi ye First Finger ka full potential nahi tha. Aur is Attack mein meri body ki saari Yuan Energy khatam ho gayi. "


Atharva abhi paseeno mein bheeg raha tha aur weak feel kar raha tha attack karne ke baad aur jo attack tha wo bhi First Finger ke real potential ka half tha. Halanki ye powerful dikh raha tha lekin full power se bhut dur tha pura potentiel use karne ke liye aur practice ki jarurat padegi.


Ye bhi badi baat thi ki Atharva First Finger use kar paa raha tha. Kyuki SiX Solar Fingers ek High Earth Level ki Combat Skill thi ek QI JING aur QI HAI Realm ke Warrior itna bhi nahi kar sakte they.


Atharva ne Apne bag se Ek Restoration Pill nikal aur usko apne muh mein daal liya jisse uski Yuan Energy waapis pehle ke Level pe aa gayi. Restoration Pill ek aisi Pill thi jiski jarurat har ek warrior ko padti thi chahe wo koi se bhi realm mein ho. Fragrant Sky City mein Restoration Pill ki kimat 100 Silver Coins thi.


" Is Restoration Pill ki effectiveness sirf 60% hai baaki 40% impurities hai. Rubbish! "


Atharva ne khud se sochte huye apna sir hillaya. Mayor Mansion mein jo Restoration Pill thi wo sabse low Quality ki thi. Uske liye 60% effectiveness wali Restoration Pill kisi garbage se kam nahi thi.


Knock! Knock! Knock!


Atharva ko pehle se hi pata tha ye Kailashnath hi hai, isliye usne apna Door khola to usey Kailashnath ka worried face dikha.


Kailashnath " Atharva tumne fir improvement ki hai. "



Atharva ki QI sense karke Kailashnath ke worried face pe thodi si smile aa gayi thi. Sirf 3 din mein Atharva QI JING Realm ke 9th Level se ek dum peak pe aa gaya tha jaha wo kabhi bhi Breakthrough kar sakta tha QI HAI Realm ke Early stage mein.





TO BE CONTINUED....

Excellent fantastic fabulous update bhai

Ye atharva to din jaise जा rahe hey vaise hi ohh apni stage uper जा raha hey....

 

[andyking302]

UPDATE NO - 09
ALCHEMIST​

Atharva “ Father aap worried lag rahe hain? Kya hua ? ”


Kamalnath “ Aao andar chal ke baat karte hai. ”


Kamalnath aur Atharva dono andar ki taraf chal ke aa gaye. Room ke andar dono father aur son ek dusre ke aamne saamne baithe they.


Kamalnath “ Atharva tumhe pata hona chahiye ki Fragrant Sky City mein humare bhut se business hai, lekin jo sabse jyada money produce karta hai wo Pill Concocting ka hai. ”


{ Pill Concocting matlab jaha pill banayi jaati hai. }


Atharva “ Haa mujhe pata hai. ”


Atharva ne apna sir hillate huye jawab diya. Ek warrior ke liye pills ki supply se jada jaroori kuch nahi hota. Fragrant Sky City mein chahe wo JADHAV Family ho ya YADHAV Family dono ko sabse jyada money Pills ke business mein hi milta tha.


Kamalnath “ Hamara Pill Concocting ka business JADHAV Family ki wajah se bhut jyada affected hua hai, aur hum ab bhut badi musibat mein hai. ”


Kamalnath ne ek worried look ke sath kaha.


Atharva “ Father, exactly kya ho raha hai ? ”


Kamalnath “ JADHAV Family ne 70% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills Concoct karne wala master hire kiya hai. Wahi hamari shops mein jitni bhi Pills hai wo sab 60% effectiveness wali hai. Unhone ek baar Pills bechna start kiya to humara business hi band ho jaayega. Agar JADHAV Family ne puri Fragrant Sky City ko unki Pills se khush kar diya to hamari Family ka to is City mein rukna bhi muskil ho jaayega. ”


Atharva ko ab samajh mein aa raha tha ki uske Father itne worried kyu hai. Pill business khatre mein tha lekin Atharva ko is baat se koi farak nahi pada tha. Balki wo to khus tha kyuki apni past life mein Ek Great Warrior hone ke sath usko bhut saari chizo ka experience tha jinme se Pills Concoct karna bhi ek tha. Usne ek baar to 90% effectiveness ke sath Saint level ki Pill bhi Concoct ki thi. Restoration Pill ek basic Pill hai aur wo easily thousand pills concoct kar sakta hai wo bhi 100% effectiveness ke sath. Atharva apne past life ke experience ke sath easily JADHAV Family ko business se bahar kar sakta hai.


Atharva “ Father aap chinta mat kijiye, main kal Pill Shop pe visit karunga. ”


Kamalnath ne apna sir sehmati mein hillaya, halanki usey koi idea nahi tha ki Atharva Pill Shop pe kyu visit karna chahta hai ?


Atharva “ Father is Cultivation Skill ko dekho agar ye aapko fit hoti hai kya ? ”


Atharva ne ye bolte huye Kamalnath ko ek golden Paper de diya.


“ Cultivation Skill ! ”


Kamalnath ne surprise hote huye wo Paper Atharva ke hath se le liya aur usko curiosity ke sath dekhne lage.


“ Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill. ”


Ek ek single word ko padhte waqt Kamalnath ki aankhe badi hoti chali gayi. Kuch aur words padhte hi wo ek dum excited ho gaye. Jab unhone puri Script khatam ki to unke hath bhi shake ho rahe they jaise ye chota sa Paper ka Weight Thousand Pound ka ho.


Kamalnath “ Atharva tumne ye itni achi Cultivation Skill kaha se obtain ki ? ”


Kamalnath bhut jyada excited tha, script dekhne ke baad bhi usey ye nahi pata tha ki ye Cultivation Skill konse Level ki hai, lekin wo koi idiot nahi tha. Wo asani se bata sakta tha ki Ye Cultivation Skill uski current Cultivation Skill se bhut jyada Powerful aur Superior hai. Ye Xuan Yuan Skill puri Fragrant Sky City mein kisi bhi cheez se compare nahi ho sakti thi. Yaha tak ki QI Province mein bhi iske level ki skill koi nahi hogi.


Ye script Atharva ne likhi thi. Apni Past Life mein Atharva isi Skill ko Cultivate karke the Greatest Saint bana tha, lekin ab uske pass The Dragon Transformation Skill hai to usey Xuan Yuan Skill ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. Kamalnath ko ye Skill de dena ek dum appropriate decision tha.


Atharva “ Father, ek Great Master ne mujhe ye skill di thi, agar aapko pasand hai to aap is Skill ko Cultivate karna start kar do. ”


Agar Kamalnath abhi se ye Skill Cultivate karna suru kar deta hai to usey 2 month mein MORTAL CORE Realm mein Breakthrough karne mein koi dikkat nahi hogi.


Agar Kamalnath ko pata chal jata ki jo Skill usne pakad rakhi hai wo Saint Level ki hai to wo khusi se hi mar jaata. Isiliye Atharva ne Kamalnath ko purposely Skill ka Level nahi bataya.


Kamalnath bilkul apne thoughts mein kho chukka tha usne to abhi se hi Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill ko study karna suru kar diya tha. Wo is Skill se bhut jyada attract ho gaya tha aur wo khud ko apne thoughts se bahar bhi nahi nikal pa raha tha. Achanak hi wo pura pasine mein bheeg gaya aur aisa lagne laga ki wo abhi behosh ho jaayega. Ye sab sirf ek Minute ke andar hua tha jabse usne Skill study karna suru kiya tha.


Atharva “ Father. "


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye Kamalnath ko jagaya jo khudke thoughts mein hi kho chukka tha. Kamalnath sirf QI HAI Realm ke peak par tha aur uska talent bhi ordinary hi tha. Wo bhut tezi se Saint Level ki Cultivation Skill ko use kar raha tha isiliye aisa hua tha. Apne mouth se dhua nikalte huye Kamalnath ne Cultivation karna band kar diya aur tab usey realise hua ki wo ek dum exhausted hai.


Kamalnath “ Atharva ye Skill bhut powerful hai aur tumhare Dad ke paas limited talent hai, isiliye Cultivation ko rokna mere liye bhut hard ho gaya tha. "


Atharva “ Dad itni powerful Skill ko Cultivate karne mein time aur effort lagta hai. Aap isko bhut slowly-2 study kar sakte ho. ”


Kamalnath “ Beta tum ek dum sahi keh rahe ho, main QI HAI Realm ka warrior hu lekin fir bhi tumhari mental capacity mujhse jyada hai. Aisa lagta hai mera beta mujhse pehle hi bada ho gaya hai. Tumhara bhut acha Future hoga. Hahahhaha. ”


Kamalnath ko yaha se bhejne ke baad Atharva firse The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne laga, ye Skill Xuan Yuan skill se bhut powerfull hai. Agar Atharva ke paas apni past life ke 1000 years ka experience nahi hota to wo bilkul bhi aise result nahi nikal paata jaise uske paas ab hai.


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

NEXT MORNING
PILL SHOP


Next Morning, Atharva ne ek clean Black Colour ka Robe pehna aur Mayor Mansion se nikal gaya. Usne apne hath mein ek Fan pakad rakha tha, apni smile aur bright eyes ki wajah se wo bhut handsome lag raha tha.


Pill Shop hi, wo YADHAV Family ka sabse important business tha aur wo Mayor Mansion se jyada dur bhi nahi tha. Atharva 15 minutes mein Pill Shop ke front door ke saamne pahuch gaya. Ye badi classical building thi jaise ordinary Pills building hoti hai. Pills ka strong Aroma door ke bahar bhi smell kiya jaa sakta tha.


“ Aap aa gaye Young Master. ”


“ Oh talented and handsome Young Master, aapke looks bhut gorgeous hai. Aap koi Mortal to lagte hi nahi ho, aisa lagta hai jaise aap Heavens se utre huye Angel ho. ”


Jo 2 guard Shop ke bahar khade they wo Atharva ko salute maarte huye uski tareef kiye jaa rahe they. Past mein bhi wo Atharva ko aise hi salute karte they aur tareef bhi aise hi karte they, lekin ab fark itna tha ki inki aankho mein sach mein respect thi.


Atharva “ Not bad, jaao aur jaake treasurey se 10 silver coins collect kar lo, lekin aage se mere saamne aisa bilkul bhi mat karna. ”


Fir Ek hath back pe aur ek hath mein Fan pakde huye Atharva Pill Shop ke andar chala gaya.


“ Apki jai ho Young Master. ”



Dono guards ne chillake kaha.
Pill Shop YADHAV Family ka main business tha lekin fir bhi yaha jyada guards nahi they. Kyuki Pill shop ke jo incharge they wo Jay tha, jo sirf ek alchemist hi nahi balki QI HAI Realm ke mid level ka warrior tha. Secondly Pill shop Mayor Mansion se jyada dur nahi thi. Agar yaha kuch hota bhi hai to Mansion se immediately help aa sakti thi.


Pill Shop ke meeting room mein 3 old man baithe they jinke face depressed aur clueless they. Jo 3 old man they wo teeno hi apni fifties mein they aur unhone grey robe pehna hua tha. Unme se ek fat tha aur ek bhut skinny. Jo old man bich mein baitha tha uski average body thi aur wo hi is Pill Shop ka incharge Jay tha. Jai hai wo Kamalnath ka best friend aur ye koi bhi bata sakta hai kyuki family member na hone ke bawjood Kamalnath ne usey Pill Shop ka incharge bana rakha hai.


“ Uncle Jay, aapke face pe ye depressed look bilkul suit nahi karta. ”


Atharva ne andar aate huye kaha. Trio Atharva ko dekhte hi apni seat se khade ho gaye.


Jai “ Young master aap yaha kyu aaye hai ? ”


Jai ko chodke koi bhi alchemist past mein Atharva se baat nahi karta tha, lekin jo 3 din pehle hua usko dekhke sabke mind badal gaye they.



Atharva “ Uncle Jai, Dad ne mujhe bataya hai ki JADHAV Family ne ek alchemist hire kiya hai jo 70% effectiveness ke sath restoration pill concoct kar sakta hai. ”


Atharva ne wahi pe rakhi huyi ek chair pe baithte huye kaha.


Jai “ Young Master, aapko ye bhi pata hai. Humne last kuch dino mein koi bhi restoration pill sell nahi ki hai. Hamari abilities limited hai aur hum 70% effectiveness wali pill banane ki ability nahi rakhte.”


Atharva “ don’t give up uncle, main aapko aise person se milwaunga jo 70% effectiveness se jayada effectiveness wala pill concoct kar sakta hai. ”


Jai “ What ? "
" Young master aise kisi ko jaante hai. ”


Jai ne khus hote huye kaha.


“ kaha hai wo alchemist ? "
" Agar wo hamari help karne ke liye taiyar hai to hum bilkul bhi disrespect show nahi karenge. ”


Fat man ne serious hote huye kaha.


Atharva “ Tum logo ko wo person dur lag raha hai, lekin wo tumhare bilkul saamne hi to hai. ”


Apne fan ko fold karte huye Atharva khada ho gaya.


“ What ? "
" Young master, kya tum khud ke baare mein hi to nahi keh rahe ho ? ”


Fat old man ne surprise hote huye Atharva se pucha. Baaki dono ka bhi same reaction tha.


Atharva “ Haa, main hi wo alchemist hu. ”


Hahhahahaha……


Jaise hi Atharva ne jawab diya waise hi trio ek dum jor se hasne lage.


Jai ” Young master aap pills concoct karna chahte ho ? "
" Majak karna band karo, sabko pata hai aap sirf pills consume karne mein ache ho naaki pills concoct karne mein. "


Atharva “ Uncle Jai mujhe itna bhi kam mat samjho. Wo kahawat hai na doctor wo hi banta hai jo sabse jyada bimar raha ho. Lekin mere liye alag hai ‘ acha alchemist wo hi banta hai jisne bahut saari pills consume ki ho. ’”


Trio ek baar firse hasne laga.


“ agar pills consume karne se hi log alchemist bante to abhi tak Saint Origin mein sabhi Alchemist hote. Ab aap yaha se jaao aur humey koi solution nikalne mein disturb mat karo. ”


Atharva “ Lagta hai tum log mujpe vishwas nahi karoge jab tak main tumhe apni ability na dikha du. Lets go, mujhe furnace room mein le chalo. ”


Apni sleeves ko uppar chahdate huye Atharva aise act kar raha tha jaise wo kuch bada karne wala ho. Trio ne Atharva ko dekha, unhe aisa bilkul bhi nahi laga ki wo majak kar raha hai. Kya wo sach mein itni pills consume karke alchemist ban gaya hai?









TO BE CONTINUED …….

शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann

 

[అరుణ్ కుమార్]

Nice update bro

 

[Adarsh8815]

UPDATE NO - 09
ALCHEMIST​

Atharva “ Father aap worried lag rahe hain? Kya hua ? ”


Kamalnath “ Aao andar chal ke baat karte hai. ”


Kamalnath aur Atharva dono andar ki taraf chal ke aa gaye. Room ke andar dono father aur son ek dusre ke aamne saamne baithe they.


Kamalnath “ Atharva tumhe pata hona chahiye ki Fragrant Sky City mein humare bhut se business hai, lekin jo sabse jyada money produce karta hai wo Pill Concocting ka hai. ”


{ Pill Concocting matlab jaha pill banayi jaati hai. }


Atharva “ Haa mujhe pata hai. ”


Atharva ne apna sir hillate huye jawab diya. Ek warrior ke liye pills ki supply se jada jaroori kuch nahi hota. Fragrant Sky City mein chahe wo JADHAV Family ho ya YADHAV Family dono ko sabse jyada money Pills ke business mein hi milta tha.


Kamalnath “ Hamara Pill Concocting ka business JADHAV Family ki wajah se bhut jyada affected hua hai, aur hum ab bhut badi musibat mein hai. ”


Kamalnath ne ek worried look ke sath kaha.


Atharva “ Father, exactly kya ho raha hai ? ”


Kamalnath “ JADHAV Family ne 70% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills Concoct karne wala master hire kiya hai. Wahi hamari shops mein jitni bhi Pills hai wo sab 60% effectiveness wali hai. Unhone ek baar Pills bechna start kiya to humara business hi band ho jaayega. Agar JADHAV Family ne puri Fragrant Sky City ko unki Pills se khush kar diya to hamari Family ka to is City mein rukna bhi muskil ho jaayega. ”


Atharva ko ab samajh mein aa raha tha ki uske Father itne worried kyu hai. Pill business khatre mein tha lekin Atharva ko is baat se koi farak nahi pada tha. Balki wo to khus tha kyuki apni past life mein Ek Great Warrior hone ke sath usko bhut saari chizo ka experience tha jinme se Pills Concoct karna bhi ek tha. Usne ek baar to 90% effectiveness ke sath Saint level ki Pill bhi Concoct ki thi. Restoration Pill ek basic Pill hai aur wo easily thousand pills concoct kar sakta hai wo bhi 100% effectiveness ke sath. Atharva apne past life ke experience ke sath easily JADHAV Family ko business se bahar kar sakta hai.


Atharva “ Father aap chinta mat kijiye, main kal Pill Shop pe visit karunga. ”


Kamalnath ne apna sir sehmati mein hillaya, halanki usey koi idea nahi tha ki Atharva Pill Shop pe kyu visit karna chahta hai ?


Atharva “ Father is Cultivation Skill ko dekho agar ye aapko fit hoti hai kya ? ”


Atharva ne ye bolte huye Kamalnath ko ek golden Paper de diya.


“ Cultivation Skill ! ”


Kamalnath ne surprise hote huye wo Paper Atharva ke hath se le liya aur usko curiosity ke sath dekhne lage.


“ Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill. ”


Ek ek single word ko padhte waqt Kamalnath ki aankhe badi hoti chali gayi. Kuch aur words padhte hi wo ek dum excited ho gaye. Jab unhone puri Script khatam ki to unke hath bhi shake ho rahe they jaise ye chota sa Paper ka Weight Thousand Pound ka ho.


Kamalnath “ Atharva tumne ye itni achi Cultivation Skill kaha se obtain ki ? ”


Kamalnath bhut jyada excited tha, script dekhne ke baad bhi usey ye nahi pata tha ki ye Cultivation Skill konse Level ki hai, lekin wo koi idiot nahi tha. Wo asani se bata sakta tha ki Ye Cultivation Skill uski current Cultivation Skill se bhut jyada Powerful aur Superior hai. Ye Xuan Yuan Skill puri Fragrant Sky City mein kisi bhi cheez se compare nahi ho sakti thi. Yaha tak ki QI Province mein bhi iske level ki skill koi nahi hogi.


Ye script Atharva ne likhi thi. Apni Past Life mein Atharva isi Skill ko Cultivate karke the Greatest Saint bana tha, lekin ab uske pass The Dragon Transformation Skill hai to usey Xuan Yuan Skill ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. Kamalnath ko ye Skill de dena ek dum appropriate decision tha.


Atharva “ Father, ek Great Master ne mujhe ye skill di thi, agar aapko pasand hai to aap is Skill ko Cultivate karna start kar do. ”


Agar Kamalnath abhi se ye Skill Cultivate karna suru kar deta hai to usey 2 month mein MORTAL CORE Realm mein Breakthrough karne mein koi dikkat nahi hogi.


Agar Kamalnath ko pata chal jata ki jo Skill usne pakad rakhi hai wo Saint Level ki hai to wo khusi se hi mar jaata. Isiliye Atharva ne Kamalnath ko purposely Skill ka Level nahi bataya.


Kamalnath bilkul apne thoughts mein kho chukka tha usne to abhi se hi Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill ko study karna suru kar diya tha. Wo is Skill se bhut jyada attract ho gaya tha aur wo khud ko apne thoughts se bahar bhi nahi nikal pa raha tha. Achanak hi wo pura pasine mein bheeg gaya aur aisa lagne laga ki wo abhi behosh ho jaayega. Ye sab sirf ek Minute ke andar hua tha jabse usne Skill study karna suru kiya tha.


Atharva “ Father. "


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye Kamalnath ko jagaya jo khudke thoughts mein hi kho chukka tha. Kamalnath sirf QI HAI Realm ke peak par tha aur uska talent bhi ordinary hi tha. Wo bhut tezi se Saint Level ki Cultivation Skill ko use kar raha tha isiliye aisa hua tha. Apne mouth se dhua nikalte huye Kamalnath ne Cultivation karna band kar diya aur tab usey realise hua ki wo ek dum exhausted hai.


Kamalnath “ Atharva ye Skill bhut powerful hai aur tumhare Dad ke paas limited talent hai, isiliye Cultivation ko rokna mere liye bhut hard ho gaya tha. "


Atharva “ Dad itni powerful Skill ko Cultivate karne mein time aur effort lagta hai. Aap isko bhut slowly-2 study kar sakte ho. ”


Kamalnath “ Beta tum ek dum sahi keh rahe ho, main QI HAI Realm ka warrior hu lekin fir bhi tumhari mental capacity mujhse jyada hai. Aisa lagta hai mera beta mujhse pehle hi bada ho gaya hai. Tumhara bhut acha Future hoga. Hahahhaha. ”


Kamalnath ko yaha se bhejne ke baad Atharva firse The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne laga, ye Skill Xuan Yuan skill se bhut powerfull hai. Agar Atharva ke paas apni past life ke 1000 years ka experience nahi hota to wo bilkul bhi aise result nahi nikal paata jaise uske paas ab hai.


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

NEXT MORNING
PILL SHOP


Next Morning, Atharva ne ek clean Black Colour ka Robe pehna aur Mayor Mansion se nikal gaya. Usne apne hath mein ek Fan pakad rakha tha, apni smile aur bright eyes ki wajah se wo bhut handsome lag raha tha.


Pill Shop hi, wo YADHAV Family ka sabse important business tha aur wo Mayor Mansion se jyada dur bhi nahi tha. Atharva 15 minutes mein Pill Shop ke front door ke saamne pahuch gaya. Ye badi classical building thi jaise ordinary Pills building hoti hai. Pills ka strong Aroma door ke bahar bhi smell kiya jaa sakta tha.


“ Aap aa gaye Young Master. ”


“ Oh talented and handsome Young Master, aapke looks bhut gorgeous hai. Aap koi Mortal to lagte hi nahi ho, aisa lagta hai jaise aap Heavens se utre huye Angel ho. ”


Jo 2 guard Shop ke bahar khade they wo Atharva ko salute maarte huye uski tareef kiye jaa rahe they. Past mein bhi wo Atharva ko aise hi salute karte they aur tareef bhi aise hi karte they, lekin ab fark itna tha ki inki aankho mein sach mein respect thi.


Atharva “ Not bad, jaao aur jaake treasurey se 10 silver coins collect kar lo, lekin aage se mere saamne aisa bilkul bhi mat karna. ”


Fir Ek hath back pe aur ek hath mein Fan pakde huye Atharva Pill Shop ke andar chala gaya.


“ Apki jai ho Young Master. ”



Dono guards ne chillake kaha.
Pill Shop YADHAV Family ka main business tha lekin fir bhi yaha jyada guards nahi they. Kyuki Pill shop ke jo incharge they wo Jay tha, jo sirf ek alchemist hi nahi balki QI HAI Realm ke mid level ka warrior tha. Secondly Pill shop Mayor Mansion se jyada dur nahi thi. Agar yaha kuch hota bhi hai to Mansion se immediately help aa sakti thi.


Pill Shop ke meeting room mein 3 old man baithe they jinke face depressed aur clueless they. Jo 3 old man they wo teeno hi apni fifties mein they aur unhone grey robe pehna hua tha. Unme se ek fat tha aur ek bhut skinny. Jo old man bich mein baitha tha uski average body thi aur wo hi is Pill Shop ka incharge Jay tha. Jai hai wo Kamalnath ka best friend aur ye koi bhi bata sakta hai kyuki family member na hone ke bawjood Kamalnath ne usey Pill Shop ka incharge bana rakha hai.


“ Uncle Jay, aapke face pe ye depressed look bilkul suit nahi karta. ”


Atharva ne andar aate huye kaha. Trio Atharva ko dekhte hi apni seat se khade ho gaye.


Jai “ Young master aap yaha kyu aaye hai ? ”


Jai ko chodke koi bhi alchemist past mein Atharva se baat nahi karta tha, lekin jo 3 din pehle hua usko dekhke sabke mind badal gaye they.



Atharva “ Uncle Jai, Dad ne mujhe bataya hai ki JADHAV Family ne ek alchemist hire kiya hai jo 70% effectiveness ke sath restoration pill concoct kar sakta hai. ”


Atharva ne wahi pe rakhi huyi ek chair pe baithte huye kaha.


Jai “ Young Master, aapko ye bhi pata hai. Humne last kuch dino mein koi bhi restoration pill sell nahi ki hai. Hamari abilities limited hai aur hum 70% effectiveness wali pill banane ki ability nahi rakhte.”


Atharva “ don’t give up uncle, main aapko aise person se milwaunga jo 70% effectiveness se jayada effectiveness wala pill concoct kar sakta hai. ”


Jai “ What ? "
" Young master aise kisi ko jaante hai. ”


Jai ne khus hote huye kaha.


“ kaha hai wo alchemist ? "
" Agar wo hamari help karne ke liye taiyar hai to hum bilkul bhi disrespect show nahi karenge. ”


Fat man ne serious hote huye kaha.


Atharva “ Tum logo ko wo person dur lag raha hai, lekin wo tumhare bilkul saamne hi to hai. ”


Apne fan ko fold karte huye Atharva khada ho gaya.


“ What ? "
" Young master, kya tum khud ke baare mein hi to nahi keh rahe ho ? ”


Fat old man ne surprise hote huye Atharva se pucha. Baaki dono ka bhi same reaction tha.


Atharva “ Haa, main hi wo alchemist hu. ”


Hahhahahaha……


Jaise hi Atharva ne jawab diya waise hi trio ek dum jor se hasne lage.


Jai ” Young master aap pills concoct karna chahte ho ? "
" Majak karna band karo, sabko pata hai aap sirf pills consume karne mein ache ho naaki pills concoct karne mein. "


Atharva “ Uncle Jai mujhe itna bhi kam mat samjho. Wo kahawat hai na doctor wo hi banta hai jo sabse jyada bimar raha ho. Lekin mere liye alag hai ‘ acha alchemist wo hi banta hai jisne bahut saari pills consume ki ho. ’”


Trio ek baar firse hasne laga.


“ agar pills consume karne se hi log alchemist bante to abhi tak Saint Origin mein sabhi Alchemist hote. Ab aap yaha se jaao aur humey koi solution nikalne mein disturb mat karo. ”


Atharva “ Lagta hai tum log mujpe vishwas nahi karoge jab tak main tumhe apni ability na dikha du. Lets go, mujhe furnace room mein le chalo. ”


Apni sleeves ko uppar chahdate huye Atharva aise act kar raha tha jaise wo kuch bada karne wala ho. Trio ne Atharva ko dekha, unhe aisa bilkul bhi nahi laga ki wo majak kar raha hai. Kya wo sach mein itni pills consume karke alchemist ban gaya hai?









TO BE CONTINUED …….

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[Smith_15]

 

[piredeep singh Meena]

Nice

 

[Bhupinder Singh]

UPDATE NO - 09
ALCHEMIST​

Atharva “ Father aap worried lag rahe hain? Kya hua ? ”


Kamalnath “ Aao andar chal ke baat karte hai. ”


Kamalnath aur Atharva dono andar ki taraf chal ke aa gaye. Room ke andar dono father aur son ek dusre ke aamne saamne baithe they.


Kamalnath “ Atharva tumhe pata hona chahiye ki Fragrant Sky City mein humare bhut se business hai, lekin jo sabse jyada money produce karta hai wo Pill Concocting ka hai. ”


{ Pill Concocting matlab jaha pill banayi jaati hai. }


Atharva “ Haa mujhe pata hai. ”


Atharva ne apna sir hillate huye jawab diya. Ek warrior ke liye pills ki supply se jada jaroori kuch nahi hota. Fragrant Sky City mein chahe wo JADHAV Family ho ya YADHAV Family dono ko sabse jyada money Pills ke business mein hi milta tha.


Kamalnath “ Hamara Pill Concocting ka business JADHAV Family ki wajah se bhut jyada affected hua hai, aur hum ab bhut badi musibat mein hai. ”


Kamalnath ne ek worried look ke sath kaha.


Atharva “ Father, exactly kya ho raha hai ? ”


Kamalnath “ JADHAV Family ne 70% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills Concoct karne wala master hire kiya hai. Wahi hamari shops mein jitni bhi Pills hai wo sab 60% effectiveness wali hai. Unhone ek baar Pills bechna start kiya to humara business hi band ho jaayega. Agar JADHAV Family ne puri Fragrant Sky City ko unki Pills se khush kar diya to hamari Family ka to is City mein rukna bhi muskil ho jaayega. ”


Atharva ko ab samajh mein aa raha tha ki uske Father itne worried kyu hai. Pill business khatre mein tha lekin Atharva ko is baat se koi farak nahi pada tha. Balki wo to khus tha kyuki apni past life mein Ek Great Warrior hone ke sath usko bhut saari chizo ka experience tha jinme se Pills Concoct karna bhi ek tha. Usne ek baar to 90% effectiveness ke sath Saint level ki Pill bhi Concoct ki thi. Restoration Pill ek basic Pill hai aur wo easily thousand pills concoct kar sakta hai wo bhi 100% effectiveness ke sath. Atharva apne past life ke experience ke sath easily JADHAV Family ko business se bahar kar sakta hai.


Atharva “ Father aap chinta mat kijiye, main kal Pill Shop pe visit karunga. ”


Kamalnath ne apna sir sehmati mein hillaya, halanki usey koi idea nahi tha ki Atharva Pill Shop pe kyu visit karna chahta hai ?


Atharva “ Father is Cultivation Skill ko dekho agar ye aapko fit hoti hai kya ? ”


Atharva ne ye bolte huye Kamalnath ko ek golden Paper de diya.


“ Cultivation Skill ! ”


Kamalnath ne surprise hote huye wo Paper Atharva ke hath se le liya aur usko curiosity ke sath dekhne lage.


“ Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill. ”


Ek ek single word ko padhte waqt Kamalnath ki aankhe badi hoti chali gayi. Kuch aur words padhte hi wo ek dum excited ho gaye. Jab unhone puri Script khatam ki to unke hath bhi shake ho rahe they jaise ye chota sa Paper ka Weight Thousand Pound ka ho.


Kamalnath “ Atharva tumne ye itni achi Cultivation Skill kaha se obtain ki ? ”


Kamalnath bhut jyada excited tha, script dekhne ke baad bhi usey ye nahi pata tha ki ye Cultivation Skill konse Level ki hai, lekin wo koi idiot nahi tha. Wo asani se bata sakta tha ki Ye Cultivation Skill uski current Cultivation Skill se bhut jyada Powerful aur Superior hai. Ye Xuan Yuan Skill puri Fragrant Sky City mein kisi bhi cheez se compare nahi ho sakti thi. Yaha tak ki QI Province mein bhi iske level ki skill koi nahi hogi.


Ye script Atharva ne likhi thi. Apni Past Life mein Atharva isi Skill ko Cultivate karke the Greatest Saint bana tha, lekin ab uske pass The Dragon Transformation Skill hai to usey Xuan Yuan Skill ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. Kamalnath ko ye Skill de dena ek dum appropriate decision tha.


Atharva “ Father, ek Great Master ne mujhe ye skill di thi, agar aapko pasand hai to aap is Skill ko Cultivate karna start kar do. ”


Agar Kamalnath abhi se ye Skill Cultivate karna suru kar deta hai to usey 2 month mein MORTAL CORE Realm mein Breakthrough karne mein koi dikkat nahi hogi.


Agar Kamalnath ko pata chal jata ki jo Skill usne pakad rakhi hai wo Saint Level ki hai to wo khusi se hi mar jaata. Isiliye Atharva ne Kamalnath ko purposely Skill ka Level nahi bataya.


Kamalnath bilkul apne thoughts mein kho chukka tha usne to abhi se hi Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill ko study karna suru kar diya tha. Wo is Skill se bhut jyada attract ho gaya tha aur wo khud ko apne thoughts se bahar bhi nahi nikal pa raha tha. Achanak hi wo pura pasine mein bheeg gaya aur aisa lagne laga ki wo abhi behosh ho jaayega. Ye sab sirf ek Minute ke andar hua tha jabse usne Skill study karna suru kiya tha.


Atharva “ Father. "


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye Kamalnath ko jagaya jo khudke thoughts mein hi kho chukka tha. Kamalnath sirf QI HAI Realm ke peak par tha aur uska talent bhi ordinary hi tha. Wo bhut tezi se Saint Level ki Cultivation Skill ko use kar raha tha isiliye aisa hua tha. Apne mouth se dhua nikalte huye Kamalnath ne Cultivation karna band kar diya aur tab usey realise hua ki wo ek dum exhausted hai.


Kamalnath “ Atharva ye Skill bhut powerful hai aur tumhare Dad ke paas limited talent hai, isiliye Cultivation ko rokna mere liye bhut hard ho gaya tha. "


Atharva “ Dad itni powerful Skill ko Cultivate karne mein time aur effort lagta hai. Aap isko bhut slowly-2 study kar sakte ho. ”


Kamalnath “ Beta tum ek dum sahi keh rahe ho, main QI HAI Realm ka warrior hu lekin fir bhi tumhari mental capacity mujhse jyada hai. Aisa lagta hai mera beta mujhse pehle hi bada ho gaya hai. Tumhara bhut acha Future hoga. Hahahhaha. ”


Kamalnath ko yaha se bhejne ke baad Atharva firse The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne laga, ye Skill Xuan Yuan skill se bhut powerfull hai. Agar Atharva ke paas apni past life ke 1000 years ka experience nahi hota to wo bilkul bhi aise result nahi nikal paata jaise uske paas ab hai.


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

NEXT MORNING
PILL SHOP


Next Morning, Atharva ne ek clean Black Colour ka Robe pehna aur Mayor Mansion se nikal gaya. Usne apne hath mein ek Fan pakad rakha tha, apni smile aur bright eyes ki wajah se wo bhut handsome lag raha tha.


Pill Shop hi, wo YADHAV Family ka sabse important business tha aur wo Mayor Mansion se jyada dur bhi nahi tha. Atharva 15 minutes mein Pill Shop ke front door ke saamne pahuch gaya. Ye badi classical building thi jaise ordinary Pills building hoti hai. Pills ka strong Aroma door ke bahar bhi smell kiya jaa sakta tha.


“ Aap aa gaye Young Master. ”


“ Oh talented and handsome Young Master, aapke looks bhut gorgeous hai. Aap koi Mortal to lagte hi nahi ho, aisa lagta hai jaise aap Heavens se utre huye Angel ho. ”


Jo 2 guard Shop ke bahar khade they wo Atharva ko salute maarte huye uski tareef kiye jaa rahe they. Past mein bhi wo Atharva ko aise hi salute karte they aur tareef bhi aise hi karte they, lekin ab fark itna tha ki inki aankho mein sach mein respect thi.


Atharva “ Not bad, jaao aur jaake treasurey se 10 silver coins collect kar lo, lekin aage se mere saamne aisa bilkul bhi mat karna. ”


Fir Ek hath back pe aur ek hath mein Fan pakde huye Atharva Pill Shop ke andar chala gaya.


“ Apki jai ho Young Master. ”



Dono guards ne chillake kaha.
Pill Shop YADHAV Family ka main business tha lekin fir bhi yaha jyada guards nahi they. Kyuki Pill shop ke jo incharge they wo Jay tha, jo sirf ek alchemist hi nahi balki QI HAI Realm ke mid level ka warrior tha. Secondly Pill shop Mayor Mansion se jyada dur nahi thi. Agar yaha kuch hota bhi hai to Mansion se immediately help aa sakti thi.


Pill Shop ke meeting room mein 3 old man baithe they jinke face depressed aur clueless they. Jo 3 old man they wo teeno hi apni fifties mein they aur unhone grey robe pehna hua tha. Unme se ek fat tha aur ek bhut skinny. Jo old man bich mein baitha tha uski average body thi aur wo hi is Pill Shop ka incharge Jay tha. Jai hai wo Kamalnath ka best friend aur ye koi bhi bata sakta hai kyuki family member na hone ke bawjood Kamalnath ne usey Pill Shop ka incharge bana rakha hai.


“ Uncle Jay, aapke face pe ye depressed look bilkul suit nahi karta. ”


Atharva ne andar aate huye kaha. Trio Atharva ko dekhte hi apni seat se khade ho gaye.


Jai “ Young master aap yaha kyu aaye hai ? ”


Jai ko chodke koi bhi alchemist past mein Atharva se baat nahi karta tha, lekin jo 3 din pehle hua usko dekhke sabke mind badal gaye they.



Atharva “ Uncle Jai, Dad ne mujhe bataya hai ki JADHAV Family ne ek alchemist hire kiya hai jo 70% effectiveness ke sath restoration pill concoct kar sakta hai. ”


Atharva ne wahi pe rakhi huyi ek chair pe baithte huye kaha.


Jai “ Young Master, aapko ye bhi pata hai. Humne last kuch dino mein koi bhi restoration pill sell nahi ki hai. Hamari abilities limited hai aur hum 70% effectiveness wali pill banane ki ability nahi rakhte.”


Atharva “ don’t give up uncle, main aapko aise person se milwaunga jo 70% effectiveness se jayada effectiveness wala pill concoct kar sakta hai. ”


Jai “ What ? "
" Young master aise kisi ko jaante hai. ”


Jai ne khus hote huye kaha.


“ kaha hai wo alchemist ? "
" Agar wo hamari help karne ke liye taiyar hai to hum bilkul bhi disrespect show nahi karenge. ”


Fat man ne serious hote huye kaha.


Atharva “ Tum logo ko wo person dur lag raha hai, lekin wo tumhare bilkul saamne hi to hai. ”


Apne fan ko fold karte huye Atharva khada ho gaya.


“ What ? "
" Young master, kya tum khud ke baare mein hi to nahi keh rahe ho ? ”


Fat old man ne surprise hote huye Atharva se pucha. Baaki dono ka bhi same reaction tha.


Atharva “ Haa, main hi wo alchemist hu. ”


Hahhahahaha……


Jaise hi Atharva ne jawab diya waise hi trio ek dum jor se hasne lage.


Jai ” Young master aap pills concoct karna chahte ho ? "
" Majak karna band karo, sabko pata hai aap sirf pills consume karne mein ache ho naaki pills concoct karne mein. "


Atharva “ Uncle Jai mujhe itna bhi kam mat samjho. Wo kahawat hai na doctor wo hi banta hai jo sabse jyada bimar raha ho. Lekin mere liye alag hai ‘ acha alchemist wo hi banta hai jisne bahut saari pills consume ki ho. ’”


Trio ek baar firse hasne laga.


“ agar pills consume karne se hi log alchemist bante to abhi tak Saint Origin mein sabhi Alchemist hote. Ab aap yaha se jaao aur humey koi solution nikalne mein disturb mat karo. ”


Atharva “ Lagta hai tum log mujpe vishwas nahi karoge jab tak main tumhe apni ability na dikha du. Lets go, mujhe furnace room mein le chalo. ”


Apni sleeves ko uppar chahdate huye Atharva aise act kar raha tha jaise wo kuch bada karne wala ho. Trio ne Atharva ko dekha, unhe aisa bilkul bhi nahi laga ki wo majak kar raha hai. Kya wo sach mein itni pills consume karke alchemist ban gaya hai?









TO BE CONTINUED …….

Nice update

 

[Rohit1988]

UPDATE NO - 09
ALCHEMIST​

Atharva “ Father aap worried lag rahe hain? Kya hua ? ”


Kamalnath “ Aao andar chal ke baat karte hai. ”


Kamalnath aur Atharva dono andar ki taraf chal ke aa gaye. Room ke andar dono father aur son ek dusre ke aamne saamne baithe they.


Kamalnath “ Atharva tumhe pata hona chahiye ki Fragrant Sky City mein humare bhut se business hai, lekin jo sabse jyada money produce karta hai wo Pill Concocting ka hai. ”


{ Pill Concocting matlab jaha pill banayi jaati hai. }


Atharva “ Haa mujhe pata hai. ”


Atharva ne apna sir hillate huye jawab diya. Ek warrior ke liye pills ki supply se jada jaroori kuch nahi hota. Fragrant Sky City mein chahe wo JADHAV Family ho ya YADHAV Family dono ko sabse jyada money Pills ke business mein hi milta tha.


Kamalnath “ Hamara Pill Concocting ka business JADHAV Family ki wajah se bhut jyada affected hua hai, aur hum ab bhut badi musibat mein hai. ”


Kamalnath ne ek worried look ke sath kaha.


Atharva “ Father, exactly kya ho raha hai ? ”


Kamalnath “ JADHAV Family ne 70% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills Concoct karne wala master hire kiya hai. Wahi hamari shops mein jitni bhi Pills hai wo sab 60% effectiveness wali hai. Unhone ek baar Pills bechna start kiya to humara business hi band ho jaayega. Agar JADHAV Family ne puri Fragrant Sky City ko unki Pills se khush kar diya to hamari Family ka to is City mein rukna bhi muskil ho jaayega. ”


Atharva ko ab samajh mein aa raha tha ki uske Father itne worried kyu hai. Pill business khatre mein tha lekin Atharva ko is baat se koi farak nahi pada tha. Balki wo to khus tha kyuki apni past life mein Ek Great Warrior hone ke sath usko bhut saari chizo ka experience tha jinme se Pills Concoct karna bhi ek tha. Usne ek baar to 90% effectiveness ke sath Saint level ki Pill bhi Concoct ki thi. Restoration Pill ek basic Pill hai aur wo easily thousand pills concoct kar sakta hai wo bhi 100% effectiveness ke sath. Atharva apne past life ke experience ke sath easily JADHAV Family ko business se bahar kar sakta hai.


Atharva “ Father aap chinta mat kijiye, main kal Pill Shop pe visit karunga. ”


Kamalnath ne apna sir sehmati mein hillaya, halanki usey koi idea nahi tha ki Atharva Pill Shop pe kyu visit karna chahta hai ?


Atharva “ Father is Cultivation Skill ko dekho agar ye aapko fit hoti hai kya ? ”


Atharva ne ye bolte huye Kamalnath ko ek golden Paper de diya.


“ Cultivation Skill ! ”


Kamalnath ne surprise hote huye wo Paper Atharva ke hath se le liya aur usko curiosity ke sath dekhne lage.


“ Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill. ”


Ek ek single word ko padhte waqt Kamalnath ki aankhe badi hoti chali gayi. Kuch aur words padhte hi wo ek dum excited ho gaye. Jab unhone puri Script khatam ki to unke hath bhi shake ho rahe they jaise ye chota sa Paper ka Weight Thousand Pound ka ho.


Kamalnath “ Atharva tumne ye itni achi Cultivation Skill kaha se obtain ki ? ”


Kamalnath bhut jyada excited tha, script dekhne ke baad bhi usey ye nahi pata tha ki ye Cultivation Skill konse Level ki hai, lekin wo koi idiot nahi tha. Wo asani se bata sakta tha ki Ye Cultivation Skill uski current Cultivation Skill se bhut jyada Powerful aur Superior hai. Ye Xuan Yuan Skill puri Fragrant Sky City mein kisi bhi cheez se compare nahi ho sakti thi. Yaha tak ki QI Province mein bhi iske level ki skill koi nahi hogi.


Ye script Atharva ne likhi thi. Apni Past Life mein Atharva isi Skill ko Cultivate karke the Greatest Saint bana tha, lekin ab uske pass The Dragon Transformation Skill hai to usey Xuan Yuan Skill ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. Kamalnath ko ye Skill de dena ek dum appropriate decision tha.


Atharva “ Father, ek Great Master ne mujhe ye skill di thi, agar aapko pasand hai to aap is Skill ko Cultivate karna start kar do. ”


Agar Kamalnath abhi se ye Skill Cultivate karna suru kar deta hai to usey 2 month mein MORTAL CORE Realm mein Breakthrough karne mein koi dikkat nahi hogi.


Agar Kamalnath ko pata chal jata ki jo Skill usne pakad rakhi hai wo Saint Level ki hai to wo khusi se hi mar jaata. Isiliye Atharva ne Kamalnath ko purposely Skill ka Level nahi bataya.


Kamalnath bilkul apne thoughts mein kho chukka tha usne to abhi se hi Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill ko study karna suru kar diya tha. Wo is Skill se bhut jyada attract ho gaya tha aur wo khud ko apne thoughts se bahar bhi nahi nikal pa raha tha. Achanak hi wo pura pasine mein bheeg gaya aur aisa lagne laga ki wo abhi behosh ho jaayega. Ye sab sirf ek Minute ke andar hua tha jabse usne Skill study karna suru kiya tha.


Atharva “ Father. "


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye Kamalnath ko jagaya jo khudke thoughts mein hi kho chukka tha. Kamalnath sirf QI HAI Realm ke peak par tha aur uska talent bhi ordinary hi tha. Wo bhut tezi se Saint Level ki Cultivation Skill ko use kar raha tha isiliye aisa hua tha. Apne mouth se dhua nikalte huye Kamalnath ne Cultivation karna band kar diya aur tab usey realise hua ki wo ek dum exhausted hai.


Kamalnath “ Atharva ye Skill bhut powerful hai aur tumhare Dad ke paas limited talent hai, isiliye Cultivation ko rokna mere liye bhut hard ho gaya tha. "


Atharva “ Dad itni powerful Skill ko Cultivate karne mein time aur effort lagta hai. Aap isko bhut slowly-2 study kar sakte ho. ”


Kamalnath “ Beta tum ek dum sahi keh rahe ho, main QI HAI Realm ka warrior hu lekin fir bhi tumhari mental capacity mujhse jyada hai. Aisa lagta hai mera beta mujhse pehle hi bada ho gaya hai. Tumhara bhut acha Future hoga. Hahahhaha. ”


Kamalnath ko yaha se bhejne ke baad Atharva firse The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne laga, ye Skill Xuan Yuan skill se bhut powerfull hai. Agar Atharva ke paas apni past life ke 1000 years ka experience nahi hota to wo bilkul bhi aise result nahi nikal paata jaise uske paas ab hai.


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NEXT MORNING
PILL SHOP


Next Morning, Atharva ne ek clean Black Colour ka Robe pehna aur Mayor Mansion se nikal gaya. Usne apne hath mein ek Fan pakad rakha tha, apni smile aur bright eyes ki wajah se wo bhut handsome lag raha tha.


Pill Shop hi, wo YADHAV Family ka sabse important business tha aur wo Mayor Mansion se jyada dur bhi nahi tha. Atharva 15 minutes mein Pill Shop ke front door ke saamne pahuch gaya. Ye badi classical building thi jaise ordinary Pills building hoti hai. Pills ka strong Aroma door ke bahar bhi smell kiya jaa sakta tha.


“ Aap aa gaye Young Master. ”


“ Oh talented and handsome Young Master, aapke looks bhut gorgeous hai. Aap koi Mortal to lagte hi nahi ho, aisa lagta hai jaise aap Heavens se utre huye Angel ho. ”


Jo 2 guard Shop ke bahar khade they wo Atharva ko salute maarte huye uski tareef kiye jaa rahe they. Past mein bhi wo Atharva ko aise hi salute karte they aur tareef bhi aise hi karte they, lekin ab fark itna tha ki inki aankho mein sach mein respect thi.


Atharva “ Not bad, jaao aur jaake treasurey se 10 silver coins collect kar lo, lekin aage se mere saamne aisa bilkul bhi mat karna. ”


Fir Ek hath back pe aur ek hath mein Fan pakde huye Atharva Pill Shop ke andar chala gaya.


“ Apki jai ho Young Master. ”



Dono guards ne chillake kaha.
Pill Shop YADHAV Family ka main business tha lekin fir bhi yaha jyada guards nahi they. Kyuki Pill shop ke jo incharge they wo Jay tha, jo sirf ek alchemist hi nahi balki QI HAI Realm ke mid level ka warrior tha. Secondly Pill shop Mayor Mansion se jyada dur nahi thi. Agar yaha kuch hota bhi hai to Mansion se immediately help aa sakti thi.


Pill Shop ke meeting room mein 3 old man baithe they jinke face depressed aur clueless they. Jo 3 old man they wo teeno hi apni fifties mein they aur unhone grey robe pehna hua tha. Unme se ek fat tha aur ek bhut skinny. Jo old man bich mein baitha tha uski average body thi aur wo hi is Pill Shop ka incharge Jay tha. Jai hai wo Kamalnath ka best friend aur ye koi bhi bata sakta hai kyuki family member na hone ke bawjood Kamalnath ne usey Pill Shop ka incharge bana rakha hai.


“ Uncle Jay, aapke face pe ye depressed look bilkul suit nahi karta. ”


Atharva ne andar aate huye kaha. Trio Atharva ko dekhte hi apni seat se khade ho gaye.


Jai “ Young master aap yaha kyu aaye hai ? ”


Jai ko chodke koi bhi alchemist past mein Atharva se baat nahi karta tha, lekin jo 3 din pehle hua usko dekhke sabke mind badal gaye they.



Atharva “ Uncle Jai, Dad ne mujhe bataya hai ki JADHAV Family ne ek alchemist hire kiya hai jo 70% effectiveness ke sath restoration pill concoct kar sakta hai. ”


Atharva ne wahi pe rakhi huyi ek chair pe baithte huye kaha.


Jai “ Young Master, aapko ye bhi pata hai. Humne last kuch dino mein koi bhi restoration pill sell nahi ki hai. Hamari abilities limited hai aur hum 70% effectiveness wali pill banane ki ability nahi rakhte.”


Atharva “ don’t give up uncle, main aapko aise person se milwaunga jo 70% effectiveness se jayada effectiveness wala pill concoct kar sakta hai. ”


Jai “ What ? "
" Young master aise kisi ko jaante hai. ”


Jai ne khus hote huye kaha.


“ kaha hai wo alchemist ? "
" Agar wo hamari help karne ke liye taiyar hai to hum bilkul bhi disrespect show nahi karenge. ”


Fat man ne serious hote huye kaha.


Atharva “ Tum logo ko wo person dur lag raha hai, lekin wo tumhare bilkul saamne hi to hai. ”


Apne fan ko fold karte huye Atharva khada ho gaya.


“ What ? "
" Young master, kya tum khud ke baare mein hi to nahi keh rahe ho ? ”


Fat old man ne surprise hote huye Atharva se pucha. Baaki dono ka bhi same reaction tha.


Atharva “ Haa, main hi wo alchemist hu. ”


Hahhahahaha……


Jaise hi Atharva ne jawab diya waise hi trio ek dum jor se hasne lage.


Jai ” Young master aap pills concoct karna chahte ho ? "
" Majak karna band karo, sabko pata hai aap sirf pills consume karne mein ache ho naaki pills concoct karne mein. "


Atharva “ Uncle Jai mujhe itna bhi kam mat samjho. Wo kahawat hai na doctor wo hi banta hai jo sabse jyada bimar raha ho. Lekin mere liye alag hai ‘ acha alchemist wo hi banta hai jisne bahut saari pills consume ki ho. ’”


Trio ek baar firse hasne laga.


“ agar pills consume karne se hi log alchemist bante to abhi tak Saint Origin mein sabhi Alchemist hote. Ab aap yaha se jaao aur humey koi solution nikalne mein disturb mat karo. ”


Atharva “ Lagta hai tum log mujpe vishwas nahi karoge jab tak main tumhe apni ability na dikha du. Lets go, mujhe furnace room mein le chalo. ”


Apni sleeves ko uppar chahdate huye Atharva aise act kar raha tha jaise wo kuch bada karne wala ho. Trio ne Atharva ko dekha, unhe aisa bilkul bhi nahi laga ki wo majak kar raha hai. Kya wo sach mein itni pills consume karke alchemist ban gaya hai?









TO BE CONTINUED …….

Fantastic update bro

 

[Shanu]

Very nice story Bhai

 

[spritemathews]

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