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Mai puri kosis karunga ki 1 Tarik Tak naya Update post kar du.
Ab naye update se story puri mere hisab se chlegi. To ab se week me ek hi update aaya karega. Kosis karunga ki Kam din me bhi update de du.
Aur sbs important baat is story me actual me sex nahi hai. To mi aap logo se puchna chta hu ki kya mi story me sex add Karu ya jise story chal Rahi hai waise chlne du.
nd ab se mujhe apne update par Kam se Kam 60 likes cahiye hi cahiye.
 
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UPDATE NO - 01
ATHARVA YADAV​



Hose me aane ke kuch Minutes k baad Atharva Yadav ko sb kuch smjh me aane laga.


Atharva Yadav kud se " Calender ki hisab se Ye Saint Origin world ka 3486 year hai. Mujhe mare hue 100 year se bhi jyada ho chuka hai. "
" Atharva Yadav ! Mera name Atharva Yadav hai. "
" 100 year ke baad aakhir mera punarjanm kyu hua hai ? "


Ji ha dosto ye Hmari story ka Hero Atharva Yadav hai. Jo ki 100 year phle Saint Origin world ka greatest Saint tha. Isne Sky ko bich se cut karke hmari duniya ke hamesa se band pade door ko break kr diya tha. Jisase Hmari duniya ke logo ke liye ek naye Universe ka rasta open ho gaya jo ki Immortal Realm kahlata hai. Lakin aisa karne ke dauran use apne body ke blood ki last drop tak ko kimat ke roop me cukani padi thi. Atharva ne kabhi bhi nahi socha tha ki wo kabhi bhi 100 year baad reborn hoga.


Fir Atharva ne apna sir uthaya aur mehsoos Kiya ki wo ek andhere, tutey huye kamre mein hai. Us kamre ki har diwar mein cracks they aur gate bahar se band tha. Usey andaja ho chuka tha ki uska kidnap ho Gaya hai.


Atharva ne gate ke doosri taraf kisi ki Bahar baat karte huye sauna.


" Brother yong, wo mayor Ka eklauta beta hai. Mayor usse bahut pyar karta hai, bhale hi wo useless hai. Agar mayor ko is baare mein pata Chala to hum barbaad ho jayenge. "


Is room ke Bahar 2 strong ladke khade they, Jinme se ek ka face chinta se bhara hua tha. Yeh Fragrant Sky city mein ek sunsaan jagah thi. Aam Dino mein Yaha koi aata jaata nahi tha.


" Darne ki koi baat nahi hai iske baare mein kisiko pata nahi chalega, mayor Ko bhi nahi. Iske alawa, is Atharva ka khoon pine ke baad hum turant hi Fragrant Sky City chod denge. Shuang mujhe pata hai tum apni baaki ki jindagi kisi looser ki Tarah nahi nikalana chahte. "


Yong ne ye baat shuang Ko ek cruel face ke sath kahi.


Yong ki baat sunne ke baad Shuang ke face se chinta ke bhaaw chale gaye, aur ab Uske face pe bhi same cruelty aa gayi thi jo Yong ke face pe thi.


Shuang " Jab se Atharva paida hua hai, tabse usey kayi Tarah ki achi pills di gayi hai, lekin wo abhi bhi QI JING Realm ke 1st stage pe hi hai. Lekin wo pills agar humey di gayi Hoti to hum abhi QI HAI Realm tak pahuch gaye hotey. Yaha tak ki MORTAL CORE Realm mein pahuchna bhi impossible nahi Hota."


Yong " Wo pills uspar barbaad ho gayi hai, kyu na wo humey in Sab Ka Anand lene de. Chalo koi nahi 3 din aur wait karte hai. Jab CLEANSING PILL uski body ki sabhi Impurities ko saaf Kar dengi, Uske baad hum uska khoon piyenge aur apni strength badhayenge. "


Atharva ne undono ki poori baat sun li thi aur ye Sab baate sunne ke baad Atharva ke face pe Uske pichle janam ki yaade samane aa gayi aur Uske face pe bhi ek cruel smile aa gayi.


Atharva " Dreaming about drinking my blood, tmdono ko to pine ke liye mera pishab milega. "


Atharva ne apni yaadast pe jor Diya aur usne paya ki Bahar 2 log kon they ! Ye dono hi mayor ke mansion ke Guards they. Aur dono hi usey nuksaan pahuchane aur uska khoon piney ke sapne dekh rahe they.


Atharva ke face darr aur chinta ke koi bhaaw nahi they, past mein ek Greatest SAINT hone ki wajah se usne countless dangerous battle ladi thi, iske alawa uski body ki impurities Ko dur karne ke liye jo pills di gayi thi, Uske proper effective hone mein 3 din Ka time tha. 3 Din baad Uske pass ek opportunity hogi fight back karne ki.


Bahar ke dono Guards ko ignore karte huye Atharva ne apni body ko janchana Suru Kar Diya aur apni body ke apndar itni saari PILLS ki Dekh Kar wo excited ho Gaya.


Atharva " Is body Ka Father Apne bete Ko achi PILLS khilana janta haï lekin ye nahi janta ki Uske bete ki body itni saari PILLS ko absorb nahi Kar sakti.
Saari PILLS is body mein jama ho gayi hai, thode din baad ye body khatam ho jaati. Lekin mere liye ye body aur PILLS kamaal ki hai. "


Atharva apni jagah pe uth ke baith Gaya. Wo apni past life mein ek Greatest SAINT tha, Uske liye in PILLS ko Absorb Karna baaye hath Ka khel tha.


Atharva " In dono Guards ne mujhe CLEANSING PILL bhi khilayi hai, lekin ye in high level PILLS par koi asar nahi karengi. "


Thodi der usne apni past life ki memories check ki aur usey ek aisi skill Yaad aayi jo kisi bhi PILLS ki Puri strength ko absorb Kar sakti hai, aur usne wo skill use Karni Suru Kar di.


Jaise hi Atharva ne apni skill use Karni start Kari waise hi, Uske ander stored PILLS ki power uski body ke chaaro taraf ghumne lagi, aur uski body badi tezi se us power ko absorb karne lagi.


PILLS ne uski body, blood, skin, bones ko refine Karna Suru Kar diya, Sab Kuch refine ho Raha tha sath-2 CLEANSING PILL ne bhi apna kaam start Kar diya tha jiski wajah se Atharva ki body ki IMPURITIES bhi khatam hone lagi thi.


Pichle 10 Saal mein usne jitni bhi PILLS khayi thi, wo bahut hi strong thi. Atharva ki body kisi bhi Treasure se Kam nahi thi. Isme koi surprise nahi tha ki ye 2 Guards usey nuksaan pahuchana chahte hai.


Atharva ke face pe ek smile thi ye PILLS lagataar Uski body ko refine kiye jaa rahi thi, usey Strong Bana rahi thi.


Level Up!

Atharva QI JING REALM ke 2nd stage pe pahuch Gaya tha. Keval ek ghante mein usne BREAKTHROUGH Kar liya tha.


QI JING REALM 3rd stage

4th stage

5th stage

Yaha tak BREAKTHROUGH Kar liye tha Atharva ne sirf ek din mein.


Uski body mein bhut saari PILLS abhi bhi jama thi, bhale hi wo QI JING REALM ke 5th stage pe pahuch Gaya tha lekin abhi tak usne sirf half hi PILLS use ki thi.


Wahi Bahar ki taraf Yong aur Shuang lagatar excited ho rahe they, aur badi hi besabri se 3 din pure hone ka intezaar kar rahe they.


Shuang " Brother Yong, Pura 1 din ho Gaya hai, kya humey usey abhi marke uska blood le lena Chahiye, aur Yaha se nikal jaana chahiye ?"


Yong "Nahi abhi uski body mein IMPURITIES hai Jo ki 3 din mein khatam hogi, tab tak humey wait karna hoga."


Room ke andar, Atharva abhi bhi meditation pose mein baitha tha aur Level Up hone pe enjoy Kar raha tha. SAINT ORIGIN UNIVERSE mein har koi Martial Arts practice karta tha, ek Baar koi human QI JING REALM KE 9th stage pe pahuch jaaye to wo apni DANTIAN mein QI HAI banane mein able ho jaate hai. QI HAI REALM pahuchne ke baad aate hai MORTAL CORE REALM, THE HEAVENLY CORE REALM, and THE DIVINE CORE REALM. Log inhe FOUNDATION 5 Levels bhi kehte hai.


QI JING REALM 5th stage pe pahuchne ke baad bhi Atharva nahi ruka, wo lagataar PILLS ko refine kiye jaa raha tha, halanki Level Up hone ki Speed ab kaafi slow ho gayi thi.


2 Din baad, Atharva ne Apne andar ki saari PILLS ko refine Kar liya tha aur 8th Level ke peak par pahuch Gaya tha. Keval ek step dur tha 9th Level ke.


Atharva " Maine 3 din mein 8th level ke peak tak BREAKTHROUGH Kar liya hai, Lagta hai is body ki yahi limit hai. "


Atharva bilkul saant Sikh Raha tha, agar Yaha koi dusra person hota jisne 3 din mein 1st Level se 8th level tak BREAKTHROUGH Kiya ho, to uski khusi Ka koi thikana nahi hota. Lekin Atharva ke liye ek Sab normal tha usne apni past Life mein isse bhi Jada achivement hasil Kiya tha. Sach kahu to wo apni past life mein ek MONSTER ya DEVIL se Kam nahi tha.


" Haha, khoon pine Ka samay aa Gaya hai."


Jaise hi room Ka gate open hua waise hi usne dono Guards ko haste huye ye kehte huye suna, Jo Kuch hi moments mein Atharva ke saamne aa gaye they.


Atharva niche se utha aur bina ek bhi second gawaye usne apni QI ko dono Hatho mein flow karwaya Aur dono Guards ke pait mein punch jad diye. Wo dono Kuch samajh paate isse pehle wo dono pich ki taraf udte huye gire.


Wo dono beshak Mayor ke Mansion ke Guards they lekin unka level abhi tak sirf 6th hi tha, isliye wo Atharva ke koi match nahi they.


Atharva apni back se dhool jhadte huye un dono Guards ki taraf chal pada, usey pata tha ki Uske punch mein kitni takat hai ab wo dono nahi uthenge. Yong aur Shuang dono niche pait pakadar pade they, unki aankho mein dar aur surprise ke mile Jule bhaaw they.


"Impossible, tum level one pe they, tum 3 din mein Level 8th pe kaise aa sakte ho?"


Yong chaunk Gaya tha, Mayor ke mansion ke Guard ke roop mein wo Atharva ko ache se janta tha, Atharva ek useless person tha Jo nature se bhi acha nahi tha, wo Apne Father ki power Ka galat istemaal karta tha, wo Apne Father ke bina Kuch nahi tha, lekin ab Ka haal Dekh ke dono Guards ko apni aankho pe vishwas nahi ho Raha tha. Unhe lag Raha tha Jaise unke saamne koi different person khada hai.


Atharva " Tum dono ki himmat kaise huyi Mera kidnap karne ki, mujhe batao tumhe aisa karne ke liye kisne kaha tha. "



Atharva ne Yong ki aur ghoor ke Dekha, wo koi pagal nahi tha Atharva ko pata tha ye low level Guards Kabhi bhi usko harm nahi pahucha sakte, jab tak koi inse aisa karne ko na kahe.


Yong "nahi-2 humey aisa karne ke liye kisi ne nahi kaha, wo to hum dono hi they Jo apka blood Pina chahte they. "


Atharva " Kyuki tum mujhe sach nahi batana chahte ho to, ab tumhe koi doosra mauka nahi milega. "



Atharva ne itna bolke ek step aage liya aur apni QI ko Apne hath mein flow karwate huye Yong ke skull ke upper pure force se strike Kiya, jisse Yong ki skull explode ho Gayi aur uska blood kisi fountain ki tarah Bahar nikalne laga Jo ki Atharva ke upper bhi gir Raha tha.


Atharva, Yong ki body ki taraf dekhte hue "Main doosra mauka nahi deta. "


Atharva aise behave Kar Raha tha Jaise Kuch hua hi na ho, usne apni past life mein isse bhi Jada bloody death Dekhi thi, isliye usey koi farak Nahi pad Raha tha.


Shuang ko Apne sir pe maut mandrati nazar aa rahi thi, wo koi brave person Nahi tha na hi usne aisa scene Kabhi Dekha tha. Uska chehra pila pad chuka tha aur wo dar ke maare kaamp Raha tha.


Atharva "ab tumhari baari, tum batao aisa karne ke liye kisne kaha tha? "


Atharva ne Shuang ki taraf mudte huye pucha.


Shuang dar se kapte hue " no-one Master, kisi ne bhi Nahi kaha, please meri jindagi baksh dijiye. "


Shuang ko bhut dar lag Raha tha, Jo Uske saamne khada tha wo usey Kahi se bhi uska Young Master Nahi lag Raha tha. Jis Tarah se Atharva ne yang ko maara wo bhut cruel tha.


Atharva " Abhi bhi sach Nahi batana chahte ho, koi baat Nahi main tumhe Nahi maarunga. Mujhe ek technique pata hai jisse jab tak Heart stop na ho tab tak person ki death Nahi Hoti, main ye technique tumpe use karunga, fir tumhari dono aankhey, kidney, liver Bahar nikal lunga, tumhar dono hath kaat dunga aur dono legs alag Kar dunga body se. Tab main tumhe tumhari body ke andar Ka ek ek part nikal ke dikhaunga, Uske baad main tumhar Heart nikalunga, agar tum strong huye to apna dhadakta hua Heart Dekh paaoge."


Itna kehne ke baad Atharva ke face pe evil smile aa Gayi AUR wo Shuang ki taraf badha hi tha ki.


Shuang " batata hu.... batata hu... "


Shuang ke puri body se pasine nikalne lage they, usey Atharva ki aankho mein sirf death dikh rahi thi aur Atharva ek Devil.


Atharva "jaldi karo, mere patience Ka test mat lo. "


Shuang " young Master ne humey ye Sab karne ke liye kaha tha aur unhone hi humey CLEANSING PILL Di thi. "


" Sohan ! "


Atharva ki memories mein ye naam familiar tha. Ye Sohan, Atharva ke Father Ka sautela beta tha. Kyuki Atharva bachpan se kamjor tha to Uske Father ne Sohan ko adopt Kar liye tha. Lekin Atharva ki memories mein Sohan hamesa se Atharva ki Care karta tha chahe Atharva Kuch bhi Kare aur wo hamesa se hi Atharva Ki har sahi galat kaam mein help karta tha.


Atharva " Sohan Mujhe kyu maarna Chahta hai? "


Shuang " Mayor ne apko itni kimti PILLS khilayi hai, isliye Sohan jealous hai aapse aur wo nafrat karta haï aapse. Agar aapko Kuch ho jaata hai to Yadav Family Ka ek-matr sakshm Leader ban Jayega wo. aur sabse badi baat kal Jadhav Family aur Yadav Family ke bich engagement day hai. Agar aap mar jaoge to wo Jadhav Family ki beti se Shaadi Kar payega."


Shuang ne dar ke maare Atharva ko Sab Kuch bata Diya.


Atharva " to ye baat hai. "


Atharva ke face ek gambhir smile thi. Jadhav Family Fragrant Sky City ki ek powerful Family hai. Wo business industry mein to number one pe they. Yaha tak ki Mayor bhi unhe sidhe-2 provoke Nahi Kar sakte they. Aur agar YADAV FAMILY aur JADHAV Family ek doosre ke Saath connection Bana rahe hai, to ye bahut badi beneficial baat thi dono Families ke liye.



Sohan bhut hi tez aur cunning hai, agar wo Atharva se Bada hota to ab tak Atharva mar chuka hota. Lekin ab situation bilkul different hai, The GREATEST SAINT ab is body ke andar hai, Sohan ko ab sirf DEATH hi milegi aur Kuch nahi.


Shuang " Young Master ab to Maine aapko Sab Kuch bata Diya hai, ab to Mujhe maaf Kar dijiye. "


Shuang, Atharva ke pairo mein girke gidgidane laga.

Atharva ne usey niche se uthaya aur uski chest mein hath daalke uska Heart Bahar nikal liye jo abhi beat ho Raha tha, ye usne itni fast Kiya tha ki Shuang ki body ki feel tak Nahi hua, Lekin Kuch hi second mein uski body niche gir Gayi aur Atharva ne wo Heart wahi Gira Diya.


Atharva, Shuang ki body ko dekhte hue " lo Kar Diya maaf. "




TO BE CONTINUED....






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UPDATE NO - 01 post kar diya hai dosto.
Aap sabhi logo ko itna jarur kahunga bhale hi aapne ye story read kr li hai phle hi, lakin ek baar meri story starting se jarur read kariyega quoi story ke almost sare characters ke name change honge aur sath hi me thode bahut changes aur rahenge.
 
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UPDATE NO - 01
ATHARVA YADAV​



Hose me aane ke kuch Minutes k baad Atharva Yadav ko sb kuch smjh me aane laga.


Atharva Yadav kud se " Calender ki hisab se Ye Saint Origin world ka 3486 year hai. Mujhe mare hue 100 year se bhi jyada ho chuka hai. "
" Atharva Yadav ! Mera name Atharva Yadav hai. "
" 100 year ke baad aakhir mera punarjanm kyu hua hai ? "


Ji ha dosto ye Hmari story ka Hero Atharva Yadav hai. Jo ki 100 year phle Saint Origin world ka greatest Saint tha. Isne Sky ko bich se cut karke hmari duniya ke hamesa se band pade door ko break kr diya tha. Jisase Hmari duniya ke logo ke liye ek naye Universe ka rasta open ho gaya jo ki Immortal Realm kahlata hai. Lakin aisa karne ke dauran use apne body ke blood ki last drop tak ko kimat ke roop me cukani padi thi. Atharva ne kabhi bhi nahi socha tha ki wo kabhi bhi 100 year baad reborn hoga.


Fir Atharva ne apna sir uthaya aur mehsoos Kiya ki wo ek andhere, tutey huye kamre mein hai. Us kamre ki har diwar mein cracks they aur gate bahar se band tha. Usey andaja ho chuka tha ki uska kidnap ho Gaya hai.


Atharva ne gate ke doosri taraf kisi ki Bahar baat karte huye sauna.


" Brother yong, wo mayor Ka eklauta beta hai. Mayor usse bahut pyar karta hai, bhale hi wo useless hai. Agar mayor ko is baare mein pata Chala to hum barbaad ho jayenge. "


Is room ke Bahar 2 strong ladke khade they, Jinme se ek ka face chinta se bhara hua tha. Yeh Fragrant Sky city mein ek sunsaan jagah thi. Aam Dino mein Yaha koi aata jaata nahi tha.


" Darne ki koi baat nahi hai iske baare mein kisiko pata nahi chalega, mayor Ko bhi nahi. Iske alawa, is Atharva ka khoon pine ke baad hum turant hi Fragrant Sky City chod denge. Shuang mujhe pata hai tum apni baaki ki jindagi kisi looser ki Tarah nahi nikalana chahte. "


Yong ne ye baat shuang Ko ek cruel face ke sath kahi.


Yong ki baat sunne ke baad Shuang ke face se chinta ke bhaaw chale gaye, aur ab Uske face pe bhi same cruelty aa gayi thi jo Yong ke face pe thi.


Shuang " Jab se Atharva paida hua hai, tabse usey kayi Tarah ki achi pills di gayi hai, lekin wo abhi bhi QI JING Realm ke 1st stage pe hi hai. Lekin wo pills agar humey di gayi Hoti to hum abhi QI HAI Realm tak pahuch gaye hotey. Yaha tak ki MORTAL CORE Realm mein pahuchna bhi impossible nahi Hota."


Yong " Wo pills uspar barbaad ho gayi hai, kyu na wo humey in Sab Ka Anand lene de. Chalo koi nahi 3 din aur wait karte hai. Jab CLEANSING PILL uski body ki sabhi Impurities ko saaf Kar dengi, Uske baad hum uska khoon piyenge aur apni strength badhayenge. "


Atharva ne undono ki poori baat sun li thi aur ye Sab baate sunne ke baad Atharva ke face pe Uske pichle janam ki yaade samane aa gayi aur Uske face pe bhi ek cruel smile aa gayi.


Atharva " Dreaming about drinking my blood, tmdono ko to pine ke liye mera pishab milega. "


Atharva ne apni yaadast pe jor Diya aur usne paya ki Bahar 2 log kon they ! Ye dono hi mayor ke mansion ke Guards they. Aur dono hi usey nuksaan pahuchane aur uska khoon piney ke sapne dekh rahe they.


Atharva ke face darr aur chinta ke koi bhaaw nahi they, past mein ek Greatest SAINT hone ki wajah se usne countless dangerous battle ladi thi, iske alawa uski body ki impurities Ko dur karne ke liye jo pills di gayi thi, Uske proper effective hone mein 3 din Ka time tha. 3 Din baad Uske pass ek opportunity hogi fight back karne ki.


Bahar ke dono Guards ko ignore karte huye Atharva ne apni body ko janchana Suru Kar Diya aur apni body ke apndar itni saari PILLS ki Dekh Kar wo excited ho Gaya.


Atharva " Is body Ka Father Apne bete Ko achi PILLS khilana janta haï lekin ye nahi janta ki Uske bete ki body itni saari PILLS ko absorb nahi Kar sakti.
Saari PILLS is body mein jama ho gayi hai, thode din baad ye body khatam ho jaati. Lekin mere liye ye body aur PILLS kamaal ki hai. "


Atharva apni jagah pe uth ke baith Gaya. Wo apni past life mein ek Greatest SAINT tha, Uske liye in PILLS ko Absorb Karna baaye hath Ka khel tha.


Atharva " In dono Guards ne mujhe CLEANSING PILL bhi khilayi hai, lekin ye in high level PILLS par koi asar nahi karengi. "


Thodi der usne apni past life ki memories check ki aur usey ek aisi skill Yaad aayi jo kisi bhi PILLS ki Puri strength ko absorb Kar sakti hai, aur usne wo skill use Karni Suru Kar di.


Jaise hi Atharva ne apni skill use Karni start Kari waise hi, Uske ander stored PILLS ki power uski body ke chaaro taraf ghumne lagi, aur uski body badi tezi se us power ko absorb karne lagi.


PILLS ne uski body, blood, skin, bones ko refine Karna Suru Kar diya, Sab Kuch refine ho Raha tha sath-2 CLEANSING PILL ne bhi apna kaam start Kar diya tha jiski wajah se Atharva ki body ki IMPURITIES bhi khatam hone lagi thi.


Pichle 10 Saal mein usne jitni bhi PILLS khayi thi, wo bahut hi strong thi. Atharva ki body kisi bhi Treasure se Kam nahi thi. Isme koi surprise nahi tha ki ye 2 Guards usey nuksaan pahuchana chahte hai.


Atharva ke face pe ek smile thi ye PILLS lagataar Uski body ko refine kiye jaa rahi thi, usey Strong Bana rahi thi.


Level Up!

Atharva QI JING REALM ke 2nd stage pe pahuch Gaya tha. Keval ek ghante mein usne BREAKTHROUGH Kar liya tha.


QI JING REALM 3rd stage

4th stage

5th stage

Yaha tak BREAKTHROUGH Kar liye tha Atharva ne sirf ek din mein.


Uski body mein bhut saari PILLS abhi bhi jama thi, bhale hi wo QI JING REALM ke 5th stage pe pahuch Gaya tha lekin abhi tak usne sirf half hi PILLS use ki thi.


Wahi Bahar ki taraf Yong aur Shuang lagatar excited ho rahe they, aur badi hi besabri se 3 din pure hone ka intezaar kar rahe they.


Shuang " Brother Yong, Pura 1 din ho Gaya hai, kya humey usey abhi marke uska blood le lena Chahiye, aur Yaha se nikal jaana chahiye ?"


Yong "Nahi abhi uski body mein IMPURITIES hai Jo ki 3 din mein khatam hogi, tab tak humey wait karna hoga."


Room ke andar, Atharva abhi bhi meditation pose mein baitha tha aur Level Up hone pe enjoy Kar raha tha. SAINT ORIGIN UNIVERSE mein har koi Martial Arts practice karta tha, ek Baar koi human QI JING REALM KE 9th stage pe pahuch jaaye to wo apni DANTIAN mein QI HAI banane mein able ho jaate hai. QI HAI REALM pahuchne ke baad aate hai MORTAL CORE REALM, THE HEAVENLY CORE REALM, and THE DIVINE CORE REALM. Log inhe FOUNDATION 5 Levels bhi kehte hai.


QI JING REALM 5th stage pe pahuchne ke baad bhi Atharva nahi ruka, wo lagataar PILLS ko refine kiye jaa raha tha, halanki Level Up hone ki Speed ab kaafi slow ho gayi thi.


2 Din baad, Atharva ne Apne andar ki saari PILLS ko refine Kar liya tha aur 8th Level ke peak par pahuch Gaya tha. Keval ek step dur tha 9th Level ke.


Atharva " Maine 3 din mein 8th level ke peak tak BREAKTHROUGH Kar liya hai, Lagta hai is body ki yahi limit hai. "


Atharva bilkul saant Sikh Raha tha, agar Yaha koi dusra person hota jisne 3 din mein 1st Level se 8th level tak BREAKTHROUGH Kiya ho, to uski khusi Ka koi thikana nahi hota. Lekin Atharva ke liye ek Sab normal tha usne apni past Life mein isse bhi Jada achivement hasil Kiya tha. Sach kahu to wo apni past life mein ek MONSTER ya DEVIL se Kam nahi tha.


" Haha, khoon pine Ka samay aa Gaya hai."


Jaise hi room Ka gate open hua waise hi usne dono Guards ko haste huye ye kehte huye suna, Jo Kuch hi moments mein Atharva ke saamne aa gaye they.


Atharva niche se utha aur bina ek bhi second gawaye usne apni QI ko dono Hatho mein flow karwaya Aur dono Guards ke pait mein punch jad diye. Wo dono Kuch samajh paate isse pehle wo dono pich ki taraf udte huye gire.


Wo dono beshak Mayor ke Mansion ke Guards they lekin unka level abhi tak sirf 6th hi tha, isliye wo Atharva ke koi match nahi they.


Atharva apni back se dhool jhadte huye un dono Guards ki taraf chal pada, usey pata tha ki Uske punch mein kitni takat hai ab wo dono nahi uthenge. Yong aur Shuang dono niche pait pakadar pade they, unki aankho mein dar aur surprise ke mile Jule bhaaw they.


"Impossible, tum level one pe they, tum 3 din mein Level 8th pe kaise aa sakte ho?"


Yong chaunk Gaya tha, Mayor ke mansion ke Guard ke roop mein wo Atharva ko ache se janta tha, Atharva ek useless person tha Jo nature se bhi acha nahi tha, wo Apne Father ki power Ka galat istemaal karta tha, wo Apne Father ke bina Kuch nahi tha, lekin ab Ka haal Dekh ke dono Guards ko apni aankho pe vishwas nahi ho Raha tha. Unhe lag Raha tha Jaise unke saamne koi different person khada hai.


Atharva " Tum dono ki himmat kaise huyi Mera kidnap karne ki, mujhe batao tumhe aisa karne ke liye kisne kaha tha. "



Atharva ne Yong ki aur ghoor ke Dekha, wo koi pagal nahi tha Atharva ko pata tha ye low level Guards Kabhi bhi usko harm nahi pahucha sakte, jab tak koi inse aisa karne ko na kahe.


Yong "nahi-2 humey aisa karne ke liye kisi ne nahi kaha, wo to hum dono hi they Jo apka blood Pina chahte they. "


Atharva " Kyuki tum mujhe sach nahi batana chahte ho to, ab tumhe koi doosra mauka nahi milega. "



Atharva ne itna bolke ek step aage liya aur apni QI ko Apne hath mein flow karwate huye Yong ke skull ke upper pure force se strike Kiya, jisse Yong ki skull explode ho Gayi aur uska blood kisi fountain ki tarah Bahar nikalne laga Jo ki Atharva ke upper bhi gir Raha tha.


Atharva, Yong ki body ki taraf dekhte hue "Main doosra mauka nahi deta. "


Atharva aise behave Kar Raha tha Jaise Kuch hua hi na ho, usne apni past life mein isse bhi Jada bloody death Dekhi thi, isliye usey koi farak Nahi pad Raha tha.


Shuang ko Apne sir pe maut mandrati nazar aa rahi thi, wo koi brave person Nahi tha na hi usne aisa scene Kabhi Dekha tha. Uska chehra pila pad chuka tha aur wo dar ke maare kaamp Raha tha.


Atharva "ab tumhari baari, tum batao aisa karne ke liye kisne kaha tha? "


Atharva ne Shuang ki taraf mudte huye pucha.


Shuang dar se kapte hue " no-one Master, kisi ne bhi Nahi kaha, please meri jindagi baksh dijiye. "


Shuang ko bhut dar lag Raha tha, Jo Uske saamne khada tha wo usey Kahi se bhi uska Young Master Nahi lag Raha tha. Jis Tarah se Atharva ne yang ko maara wo bhut cruel tha.


Atharva " Abhi bhi sach Nahi batana chahte ho, koi baat Nahi main tumhe Nahi maarunga. Mujhe ek technique pata hai jisse jab tak Heart stop na ho tab tak person ki death Nahi Hoti, main ye technique tumpe use karunga, fir tumhari dono aankhey, kidney, liver Bahar nikal lunga, tumhar dono hath kaat dunga aur dono legs alag Kar dunga body se. Tab main tumhe tumhari body ke andar Ka ek ek part nikal ke dikhaunga, Uske baad main tumhar Heart nikalunga, agar tum strong huye to apna dhadakta hua Heart Dekh paaoge."


Itna kehne ke baad Atharva ke face pe evil smile aa Gayi AUR wo Shuang ki taraf badha hi tha ki.


Shuang " batata hu.... batata hu... "


Shuang ke puri body se pasine nikalne lage they, usey Atharva ki aankho mein sirf death dikh rahi thi aur Atharva ek Devil.


Atharva "jaldi karo, mere patience Ka test mat lo. "


Shuang " young Master ne humey ye Sab karne ke liye kaha tha aur unhone hi humey CLEANSING PILL Di thi. "


" Sohan ! "


Atharva ki memories mein ye naam familiar tha. Ye Sohan, Atharva ke Father Ka sautela beta tha. Kyuki Atharva bachpan se kamjor tha to Uske Father ne Sohan ko adopt Kar liye tha. Lekin Atharva ki memories mein Sohan hamesa se Atharva ki Care karta tha chahe Atharva Kuch bhi Kare aur wo hamesa se hi Atharva Ki har sahi galat kaam mein help karta tha.


Atharva " Sohan Mujhe kyu maarna Chahta hai? "


Shuang " Mayor ne apko itni kimti PILLS khilayi hai, isliye Sohan jealous hai aapse aur wo nafrat karta haï aapse. Agar aapko Kuch ho jaata hai to Yadav Family Ka ek-matr sakshm Leader ban Jayega wo. aur sabse badi baat kal Jadhav Family aur Yadav Family ke bich engagement day hai. Agar aap mar jaoge to wo Jadhav Family ki beti se Shaadi Kar payega."


Shuang ne dar ke maare Atharva ko Sab Kuch bata Diya.


Atharva " to ye baat hai. "


Atharva ke face ek gambhir smile thi. Jadhav Family Fragrant Sky City ki ek powerful Family hai. Wo business industry mein to number one pe they. Yaha tak ki Mayor bhi unhe sidhe-2 provoke Nahi Kar sakte they. Aur agar YADAV FAMILY aur JADHAV Family ek doosre ke Saath connection Bana rahe hai, to ye bahut badi beneficial baat thi dono Families ke liye.



Sohan bhut hi tez aur cunning hai, agar wo Atharva se Bada hota to ab tak Atharva mar chuka hota. Lekin ab situation bilkul different hai, The GREATEST SAINT ab is body ke andar hai, Sohan ko ab sirf DEATH hi milegi aur Kuch nahi.


Shuang " Young Master ab to Maine aapko Sab Kuch bata Diya hai, ab to Mujhe maaf Kar dijiye. "


Shuang, Atharva ke pairo mein girke gidgidane laga.

Atharva ne usey niche se uthaya aur uski chest mein hath daalke uska Heart Bahar nikal liye jo abhi beat ho Raha tha, ye usne itni fast Kiya tha ki Shuang ki body ki feel tak Nahi hua, Lekin Kuch hi second mein uski body niche gir Gayi aur Atharva ne wo Heart wahi Gira Diya.


Atharva, Shuang ki body ko dekhte hue " lo Kar Diya maaf. "




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UPDATE NO - 01
ATHARVA YADAV​



Hose me aane ke kuch Minutes k baad Atharva Yadav ko sb kuch smjh me aane laga.


Atharva Yadav kud se " Calender ki hisab se Ye Saint Origin world ka 3486 year hai. Mujhe mare hue 100 year se bhi jyada ho chuka hai. "
" Atharva Yadav ! Mera name Atharva Yadav hai. "
" 100 year ke baad aakhir mera punarjanm kyu hua hai ? "


Ji ha dosto ye Hmari story ka Hero Atharva Yadav hai. Jo ki 100 year phle Saint Origin world ka greatest Saint tha. Isne Sky ko bich se cut karke hmari duniya ke hamesa se band pade door ko break kr diya tha. Jisase Hmari duniya ke logo ke liye ek naye Universe ka rasta open ho gaya jo ki Immortal Realm kahlata hai. Lakin aisa karne ke dauran use apne body ke blood ki last drop tak ko kimat ke roop me cukani padi thi. Atharva ne kabhi bhi nahi socha tha ki wo kabhi bhi 100 year baad reborn hoga.


Fir Atharva ne apna sir uthaya aur mehsoos Kiya ki wo ek andhere, tutey huye kamre mein hai. Us kamre ki har diwar mein cracks they aur gate bahar se band tha. Usey andaja ho chuka tha ki uska kidnap ho Gaya hai.


Atharva ne gate ke doosri taraf kisi ki Bahar baat karte huye sauna.


" Brother yong, wo mayor Ka eklauta beta hai. Mayor usse bahut pyar karta hai, bhale hi wo useless hai. Agar mayor ko is baare mein pata Chala to hum barbaad ho jayenge. "


Is room ke Bahar 2 strong ladke khade they, Jinme se ek ka face chinta se bhara hua tha. Yeh Fragrant Sky city mein ek sunsaan jagah thi. Aam Dino mein Yaha koi aata jaata nahi tha.


" Darne ki koi baat nahi hai iske baare mein kisiko pata nahi chalega, mayor Ko bhi nahi. Iske alawa, is Atharva ka khoon pine ke baad hum turant hi Fragrant Sky City chod denge. Shuang mujhe pata hai tum apni baaki ki jindagi kisi looser ki Tarah nahi nikalana chahte. "


Yong ne ye baat shuang Ko ek cruel face ke sath kahi.


Yong ki baat sunne ke baad Shuang ke face se chinta ke bhaaw chale gaye, aur ab Uske face pe bhi same cruelty aa gayi thi jo Yong ke face pe thi.


Shuang " Jab se Atharva paida hua hai, tabse usey kayi Tarah ki achi pills di gayi hai, lekin wo abhi bhi QI JING Realm ke 1st stage pe hi hai. Lekin wo pills agar humey di gayi Hoti to hum abhi QI HAI Realm tak pahuch gaye hotey. Yaha tak ki MORTAL CORE Realm mein pahuchna bhi impossible nahi Hota."


Yong " Wo pills uspar barbaad ho gayi hai, kyu na wo humey in Sab Ka Anand lene de. Chalo koi nahi 3 din aur wait karte hai. Jab CLEANSING PILL uski body ki sabhi Impurities ko saaf Kar dengi, Uske baad hum uska khoon piyenge aur apni strength badhayenge. "


Atharva ne undono ki poori baat sun li thi aur ye Sab baate sunne ke baad Atharva ke face pe Uske pichle janam ki yaade samane aa gayi aur Uske face pe bhi ek cruel smile aa gayi.


Atharva " Dreaming about drinking my blood, tmdono ko to pine ke liye mera pishab milega. "


Atharva ne apni yaadast pe jor Diya aur usne paya ki Bahar 2 log kon they ! Ye dono hi mayor ke mansion ke Guards they. Aur dono hi usey nuksaan pahuchane aur uska khoon piney ke sapne dekh rahe they.


Atharva ke face darr aur chinta ke koi bhaaw nahi they, past mein ek Greatest SAINT hone ki wajah se usne countless dangerous battle ladi thi, iske alawa uski body ki impurities Ko dur karne ke liye jo pills di gayi thi, Uske proper effective hone mein 3 din Ka time tha. 3 Din baad Uske pass ek opportunity hogi fight back karne ki.


Bahar ke dono Guards ko ignore karte huye Atharva ne apni body ko janchana Suru Kar Diya aur apni body ke apndar itni saari PILLS ki Dekh Kar wo excited ho Gaya.


Atharva " Is body Ka Father Apne bete Ko achi PILLS khilana janta haï lekin ye nahi janta ki Uske bete ki body itni saari PILLS ko absorb nahi Kar sakti.
Saari PILLS is body mein jama ho gayi hai, thode din baad ye body khatam ho jaati. Lekin mere liye ye body aur PILLS kamaal ki hai. "


Atharva apni jagah pe uth ke baith Gaya. Wo apni past life mein ek Greatest SAINT tha, Uske liye in PILLS ko Absorb Karna baaye hath Ka khel tha.


Atharva " In dono Guards ne mujhe CLEANSING PILL bhi khilayi hai, lekin ye in high level PILLS par koi asar nahi karengi. "


Thodi der usne apni past life ki memories check ki aur usey ek aisi skill Yaad aayi jo kisi bhi PILLS ki Puri strength ko absorb Kar sakti hai, aur usne wo skill use Karni Suru Kar di.


Jaise hi Atharva ne apni skill use Karni start Kari waise hi, Uske ander stored PILLS ki power uski body ke chaaro taraf ghumne lagi, aur uski body badi tezi se us power ko absorb karne lagi.


PILLS ne uski body, blood, skin, bones ko refine Karna Suru Kar diya, Sab Kuch refine ho Raha tha sath-2 CLEANSING PILL ne bhi apna kaam start Kar diya tha jiski wajah se Atharva ki body ki IMPURITIES bhi khatam hone lagi thi.


Pichle 10 Saal mein usne jitni bhi PILLS khayi thi, wo bahut hi strong thi. Atharva ki body kisi bhi Treasure se Kam nahi thi. Isme koi surprise nahi tha ki ye 2 Guards usey nuksaan pahuchana chahte hai.


Atharva ke face pe ek smile thi ye PILLS lagataar Uski body ko refine kiye jaa rahi thi, usey Strong Bana rahi thi.


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Atharva QI JING REALM ke 2nd stage pe pahuch Gaya tha. Keval ek ghante mein usne BREAKTHROUGH Kar liya tha.


QI JING REALM 3rd stage

4th stage

5th stage

Yaha tak BREAKTHROUGH Kar liye tha Atharva ne sirf ek din mein.


Uski body mein bhut saari PILLS abhi bhi jama thi, bhale hi wo QI JING REALM ke 5th stage pe pahuch Gaya tha lekin abhi tak usne sirf half hi PILLS use ki thi.


Wahi Bahar ki taraf Yong aur Shuang lagatar excited ho rahe they, aur badi hi besabri se 3 din pure hone ka intezaar kar rahe they.


Shuang " Brother Yong, Pura 1 din ho Gaya hai, kya humey usey abhi marke uska blood le lena Chahiye, aur Yaha se nikal jaana chahiye ?"


Yong "Nahi abhi uski body mein IMPURITIES hai Jo ki 3 din mein khatam hogi, tab tak humey wait karna hoga."


Room ke andar, Atharva abhi bhi meditation pose mein baitha tha aur Level Up hone pe enjoy Kar raha tha. SAINT ORIGIN UNIVERSE mein har koi Martial Arts practice karta tha, ek Baar koi human QI JING REALM KE 9th stage pe pahuch jaaye to wo apni DANTIAN mein QI HAI banane mein able ho jaate hai. QI HAI REALM pahuchne ke baad aate hai MORTAL CORE REALM, THE HEAVENLY CORE REALM, and THE DIVINE CORE REALM. Log inhe FOUNDATION 5 Levels bhi kehte hai.


QI JING REALM 5th stage pe pahuchne ke baad bhi Atharva nahi ruka, wo lagataar PILLS ko refine kiye jaa raha tha, halanki Level Up hone ki Speed ab kaafi slow ho gayi thi.


2 Din baad, Atharva ne Apne andar ki saari PILLS ko refine Kar liya tha aur 8th Level ke peak par pahuch Gaya tha. Keval ek step dur tha 9th Level ke.


Atharva " Maine 3 din mein 8th level ke peak tak BREAKTHROUGH Kar liya hai, Lagta hai is body ki yahi limit hai. "


Atharva bilkul saant Sikh Raha tha, agar Yaha koi dusra person hota jisne 3 din mein 1st Level se 8th level tak BREAKTHROUGH Kiya ho, to uski khusi Ka koi thikana nahi hota. Lekin Atharva ke liye ek Sab normal tha usne apni past Life mein isse bhi Jada achivement hasil Kiya tha. Sach kahu to wo apni past life mein ek MONSTER ya DEVIL se Kam nahi tha.


" Haha, khoon pine Ka samay aa Gaya hai."


Jaise hi room Ka gate open hua waise hi usne dono Guards ko haste huye ye kehte huye suna, Jo Kuch hi moments mein Atharva ke saamne aa gaye they.


Atharva niche se utha aur bina ek bhi second gawaye usne apni QI ko dono Hatho mein flow karwaya Aur dono Guards ke pait mein punch jad diye. Wo dono Kuch samajh paate isse pehle wo dono pich ki taraf udte huye gire.


Wo dono beshak Mayor ke Mansion ke Guards they lekin unka level abhi tak sirf 6th hi tha, isliye wo Atharva ke koi match nahi they.


Atharva apni back se dhool jhadte huye un dono Guards ki taraf chal pada, usey pata tha ki Uske punch mein kitni takat hai ab wo dono nahi uthenge. Yong aur Shuang dono niche pait pakadar pade they, unki aankho mein dar aur surprise ke mile Jule bhaaw they.


"Impossible, tum level one pe they, tum 3 din mein Level 8th pe kaise aa sakte ho?"


Yong chaunk Gaya tha, Mayor ke mansion ke Guard ke roop mein wo Atharva ko ache se janta tha, Atharva ek useless person tha Jo nature se bhi acha nahi tha, wo Apne Father ki power Ka galat istemaal karta tha, wo Apne Father ke bina Kuch nahi tha, lekin ab Ka haal Dekh ke dono Guards ko apni aankho pe vishwas nahi ho Raha tha. Unhe lag Raha tha Jaise unke saamne koi different person khada hai.


Atharva " Tum dono ki himmat kaise huyi Mera kidnap karne ki, mujhe batao tumhe aisa karne ke liye kisne kaha tha. "



Atharva ne Yong ki aur ghoor ke Dekha, wo koi pagal nahi tha Atharva ko pata tha ye low level Guards Kabhi bhi usko harm nahi pahucha sakte, jab tak koi inse aisa karne ko na kahe.


Yong "nahi-2 humey aisa karne ke liye kisi ne nahi kaha, wo to hum dono hi they Jo apka blood Pina chahte they. "


Atharva " Kyuki tum mujhe sach nahi batana chahte ho to, ab tumhe koi doosra mauka nahi milega. "



Atharva ne itna bolke ek step aage liya aur apni QI ko Apne hath mein flow karwate huye Yong ke skull ke upper pure force se strike Kiya, jisse Yong ki skull explode ho Gayi aur uska blood kisi fountain ki tarah Bahar nikalne laga Jo ki Atharva ke upper bhi gir Raha tha.


Atharva, Yong ki body ki taraf dekhte hue "Main doosra mauka nahi deta. "


Atharva aise behave Kar Raha tha Jaise Kuch hua hi na ho, usne apni past life mein isse bhi Jada bloody death Dekhi thi, isliye usey koi farak Nahi pad Raha tha.


Shuang ko Apne sir pe maut mandrati nazar aa rahi thi, wo koi brave person Nahi tha na hi usne aisa scene Kabhi Dekha tha. Uska chehra pila pad chuka tha aur wo dar ke maare kaamp Raha tha.


Atharva "ab tumhari baari, tum batao aisa karne ke liye kisne kaha tha? "


Atharva ne Shuang ki taraf mudte huye pucha.


Shuang dar se kapte hue " no-one Master, kisi ne bhi Nahi kaha, please meri jindagi baksh dijiye. "


Shuang ko bhut dar lag Raha tha, Jo Uske saamne khada tha wo usey Kahi se bhi uska Young Master Nahi lag Raha tha. Jis Tarah se Atharva ne yang ko maara wo bhut cruel tha.


Atharva " Abhi bhi sach Nahi batana chahte ho, koi baat Nahi main tumhe Nahi maarunga. Mujhe ek technique pata hai jisse jab tak Heart stop na ho tab tak person ki death Nahi Hoti, main ye technique tumpe use karunga, fir tumhari dono aankhey, kidney, liver Bahar nikal lunga, tumhar dono hath kaat dunga aur dono legs alag Kar dunga body se. Tab main tumhe tumhari body ke andar Ka ek ek part nikal ke dikhaunga, Uske baad main tumhar Heart nikalunga, agar tum strong huye to apna dhadakta hua Heart Dekh paaoge."


Itna kehne ke baad Atharva ke face pe evil smile aa Gayi AUR wo Shuang ki taraf badha hi tha ki.


Shuang " batata hu.... batata hu... "


Shuang ke puri body se pasine nikalne lage they, usey Atharva ki aankho mein sirf death dikh rahi thi aur Atharva ek Devil.


Atharva "jaldi karo, mere patience Ka test mat lo. "


Shuang " young Master ne humey ye Sab karne ke liye kaha tha aur unhone hi humey CLEANSING PILL Di thi. "


" Sohan ! "


Atharva ki memories mein ye naam familiar tha. Ye Sohan, Atharva ke Father Ka sautela beta tha. Kyuki Atharva bachpan se kamjor tha to Uske Father ne Sohan ko adopt Kar liye tha. Lekin Atharva ki memories mein Sohan hamesa se Atharva ki Care karta tha chahe Atharva Kuch bhi Kare aur wo hamesa se hi Atharva Ki har sahi galat kaam mein help karta tha.


Atharva " Sohan Mujhe kyu maarna Chahta hai? "


Shuang " Mayor ne apko itni kimti PILLS khilayi hai, isliye Sohan jealous hai aapse aur wo nafrat karta haï aapse. Agar aapko Kuch ho jaata hai to Yadav Family Ka ek-matr sakshm Leader ban Jayega wo. aur sabse badi baat kal Jadhav Family aur Yadav Family ke bich engagement day hai. Agar aap mar jaoge to wo Jadhav Family ki beti se Shaadi Kar payega."


Shuang ne dar ke maare Atharva ko Sab Kuch bata Diya.


Atharva " to ye baat hai. "


Atharva ke face ek gambhir smile thi. Jadhav Family Fragrant Sky City ki ek powerful Family hai. Wo business industry mein to number one pe they. Yaha tak ki Mayor bhi unhe sidhe-2 provoke Nahi Kar sakte they. Aur agar YADAV FAMILY aur JADHAV Family ek doosre ke Saath connection Bana rahe hai, to ye bahut badi beneficial baat thi dono Families ke liye.



Sohan bhut hi tez aur cunning hai, agar wo Atharva se Bada hota to ab tak Atharva mar chuka hota. Lekin ab situation bilkul different hai, The GREATEST SAINT ab is body ke andar hai, Sohan ko ab sirf DEATH hi milegi aur Kuch nahi.


Shuang " Young Master ab to Maine aapko Sab Kuch bata Diya hai, ab to Mujhe maaf Kar dijiye. "


Shuang, Atharva ke pairo mein girke gidgidane laga.

Atharva ne usey niche se uthaya aur uski chest mein hath daalke uska Heart Bahar nikal liye jo abhi beat ho Raha tha, ye usne itni fast Kiya tha ki Shuang ki body ki feel tak Nahi hua, Lekin Kuch hi second mein uski body niche gir Gayi aur Atharva ne wo Heart wahi Gira Diya.


Atharva, Shuang ki body ko dekhte hue " lo Kar Diya maaf. "




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UPDATE NO - 01
ATHARVA YADAV​



Hose me aane ke kuch Minutes k baad Atharva Yadav ko sb kuch smjh me aane laga.


Atharva Yadav kud se " Calender ki hisab se Ye Saint Origin world ka 3486 year hai. Mujhe mare hue 100 year se bhi jyada ho chuka hai. "
" Atharva Yadav ! Mera name Atharva Yadav hai. "
" 100 year ke baad aakhir mera punarjanm kyu hua hai ? "


Ji ha dosto ye Hmari story ka Hero Atharva Yadav hai. Jo ki 100 year phle Saint Origin world ka greatest Saint tha. Isne Sky ko bich se cut karke hmari duniya ke hamesa se band pade door ko break kr diya tha. Jisase Hmari duniya ke logo ke liye ek naye Universe ka rasta open ho gaya jo ki Immortal Realm kahlata hai. Lakin aisa karne ke dauran use apne body ke blood ki last drop tak ko kimat ke roop me cukani padi thi. Atharva ne kabhi bhi nahi socha tha ki wo kabhi bhi 100 year baad reborn hoga.


Fir Atharva ne apna sir uthaya aur mehsoos Kiya ki wo ek andhere, tutey huye kamre mein hai. Us kamre ki har diwar mein cracks they aur gate bahar se band tha. Usey andaja ho chuka tha ki uska kidnap ho Gaya hai.


Atharva ne gate ke doosri taraf kisi ki Bahar baat karte huye sauna.


" Brother yong, wo mayor Ka eklauta beta hai. Mayor usse bahut pyar karta hai, bhale hi wo useless hai. Agar mayor ko is baare mein pata Chala to hum barbaad ho jayenge. "


Is room ke Bahar 2 strong ladke khade they, Jinme se ek ka face chinta se bhara hua tha. Yeh Fragrant Sky city mein ek sunsaan jagah thi. Aam Dino mein Yaha koi aata jaata nahi tha.


" Darne ki koi baat nahi hai iske baare mein kisiko pata nahi chalega, mayor Ko bhi nahi. Iske alawa, is Atharva ka khoon pine ke baad hum turant hi Fragrant Sky City chod denge. Shuang mujhe pata hai tum apni baaki ki jindagi kisi looser ki Tarah nahi nikalana chahte. "


Yong ne ye baat shuang Ko ek cruel face ke sath kahi.


Yong ki baat sunne ke baad Shuang ke face se chinta ke bhaaw chale gaye, aur ab Uske face pe bhi same cruelty aa gayi thi jo Yong ke face pe thi.


Shuang " Jab se Atharva paida hua hai, tabse usey kayi Tarah ki achi pills di gayi hai, lekin wo abhi bhi QI JING Realm ke 1st stage pe hi hai. Lekin wo pills agar humey di gayi Hoti to hum abhi QI HAI Realm tak pahuch gaye hotey. Yaha tak ki MORTAL CORE Realm mein pahuchna bhi impossible nahi Hota."


Yong " Wo pills uspar barbaad ho gayi hai, kyu na wo humey in Sab Ka Anand lene de. Chalo koi nahi 3 din aur wait karte hai. Jab CLEANSING PILL uski body ki sabhi Impurities ko saaf Kar dengi, Uske baad hum uska khoon piyenge aur apni strength badhayenge. "


Atharva ne undono ki poori baat sun li thi aur ye Sab baate sunne ke baad Atharva ke face pe Uske pichle janam ki yaade samane aa gayi aur Uske face pe bhi ek cruel smile aa gayi.


Atharva " Dreaming about drinking my blood, tmdono ko to pine ke liye mera pishab milega. "


Atharva ne apni yaadast pe jor Diya aur usne paya ki Bahar 2 log kon they ! Ye dono hi mayor ke mansion ke Guards they. Aur dono hi usey nuksaan pahuchane aur uska khoon piney ke sapne dekh rahe they.


Atharva ke face darr aur chinta ke koi bhaaw nahi they, past mein ek Greatest SAINT hone ki wajah se usne countless dangerous battle ladi thi, iske alawa uski body ki impurities Ko dur karne ke liye jo pills di gayi thi, Uske proper effective hone mein 3 din Ka time tha. 3 Din baad Uske pass ek opportunity hogi fight back karne ki.


Bahar ke dono Guards ko ignore karte huye Atharva ne apni body ko janchana Suru Kar Diya aur apni body ke apndar itni saari PILLS ki Dekh Kar wo excited ho Gaya.


Atharva " Is body Ka Father Apne bete Ko achi PILLS khilana janta haï lekin ye nahi janta ki Uske bete ki body itni saari PILLS ko absorb nahi Kar sakti.
Saari PILLS is body mein jama ho gayi hai, thode din baad ye body khatam ho jaati. Lekin mere liye ye body aur PILLS kamaal ki hai. "


Atharva apni jagah pe uth ke baith Gaya. Wo apni past life mein ek Greatest SAINT tha, Uske liye in PILLS ko Absorb Karna baaye hath Ka khel tha.


Atharva " In dono Guards ne mujhe CLEANSING PILL bhi khilayi hai, lekin ye in high level PILLS par koi asar nahi karengi. "


Thodi der usne apni past life ki memories check ki aur usey ek aisi skill Yaad aayi jo kisi bhi PILLS ki Puri strength ko absorb Kar sakti hai, aur usne wo skill use Karni Suru Kar di.


Jaise hi Atharva ne apni skill use Karni start Kari waise hi, Uske ander stored PILLS ki power uski body ke chaaro taraf ghumne lagi, aur uski body badi tezi se us power ko absorb karne lagi.


PILLS ne uski body, blood, skin, bones ko refine Karna Suru Kar diya, Sab Kuch refine ho Raha tha sath-2 CLEANSING PILL ne bhi apna kaam start Kar diya tha jiski wajah se Atharva ki body ki IMPURITIES bhi khatam hone lagi thi.


Pichle 10 Saal mein usne jitni bhi PILLS khayi thi, wo bahut hi strong thi. Atharva ki body kisi bhi Treasure se Kam nahi thi. Isme koi surprise nahi tha ki ye 2 Guards usey nuksaan pahuchana chahte hai.


Atharva ke face pe ek smile thi ye PILLS lagataar Uski body ko refine kiye jaa rahi thi, usey Strong Bana rahi thi.


Level Up!

Atharva QI JING REALM ke 2nd stage pe pahuch Gaya tha. Keval ek ghante mein usne BREAKTHROUGH Kar liya tha.


QI JING REALM 3rd stage

4th stage

5th stage

Yaha tak BREAKTHROUGH Kar liye tha Atharva ne sirf ek din mein.


Uski body mein bhut saari PILLS abhi bhi jama thi, bhale hi wo QI JING REALM ke 5th stage pe pahuch Gaya tha lekin abhi tak usne sirf half hi PILLS use ki thi.


Wahi Bahar ki taraf Yong aur Shuang lagatar excited ho rahe they, aur badi hi besabri se 3 din pure hone ka intezaar kar rahe they.


Shuang " Brother Yong, Pura 1 din ho Gaya hai, kya humey usey abhi marke uska blood le lena Chahiye, aur Yaha se nikal jaana chahiye ?"


Yong "Nahi abhi uski body mein IMPURITIES hai Jo ki 3 din mein khatam hogi, tab tak humey wait karna hoga."


Room ke andar, Atharva abhi bhi meditation pose mein baitha tha aur Level Up hone pe enjoy Kar raha tha. SAINT ORIGIN UNIVERSE mein har koi Martial Arts practice karta tha, ek Baar koi human QI JING REALM KE 9th stage pe pahuch jaaye to wo apni DANTIAN mein QI HAI banane mein able ho jaate hai. QI HAI REALM pahuchne ke baad aate hai MORTAL CORE REALM, THE HEAVENLY CORE REALM, and THE DIVINE CORE REALM. Log inhe FOUNDATION 5 Levels bhi kehte hai.


QI JING REALM 5th stage pe pahuchne ke baad bhi Atharva nahi ruka, wo lagataar PILLS ko refine kiye jaa raha tha, halanki Level Up hone ki Speed ab kaafi slow ho gayi thi.


2 Din baad, Atharva ne Apne andar ki saari PILLS ko refine Kar liya tha aur 8th Level ke peak par pahuch Gaya tha. Keval ek step dur tha 9th Level ke.


Atharva " Maine 3 din mein 8th level ke peak tak BREAKTHROUGH Kar liya hai, Lagta hai is body ki yahi limit hai. "


Atharva bilkul saant Sikh Raha tha, agar Yaha koi dusra person hota jisne 3 din mein 1st Level se 8th level tak BREAKTHROUGH Kiya ho, to uski khusi Ka koi thikana nahi hota. Lekin Atharva ke liye ek Sab normal tha usne apni past Life mein isse bhi Jada achivement hasil Kiya tha. Sach kahu to wo apni past life mein ek MONSTER ya DEVIL se Kam nahi tha.


" Haha, khoon pine Ka samay aa Gaya hai."


Jaise hi room Ka gate open hua waise hi usne dono Guards ko haste huye ye kehte huye suna, Jo Kuch hi moments mein Atharva ke saamne aa gaye they.


Atharva niche se utha aur bina ek bhi second gawaye usne apni QI ko dono Hatho mein flow karwaya Aur dono Guards ke pait mein punch jad diye. Wo dono Kuch samajh paate isse pehle wo dono pich ki taraf udte huye gire.


Wo dono beshak Mayor ke Mansion ke Guards they lekin unka level abhi tak sirf 6th hi tha, isliye wo Atharva ke koi match nahi they.


Atharva apni back se dhool jhadte huye un dono Guards ki taraf chal pada, usey pata tha ki Uske punch mein kitni takat hai ab wo dono nahi uthenge. Yong aur Shuang dono niche pait pakadar pade they, unki aankho mein dar aur surprise ke mile Jule bhaaw they.


"Impossible, tum level one pe they, tum 3 din mein Level 8th pe kaise aa sakte ho?"


Yong chaunk Gaya tha, Mayor ke mansion ke Guard ke roop mein wo Atharva ko ache se janta tha, Atharva ek useless person tha Jo nature se bhi acha nahi tha, wo Apne Father ki power Ka galat istemaal karta tha, wo Apne Father ke bina Kuch nahi tha, lekin ab Ka haal Dekh ke dono Guards ko apni aankho pe vishwas nahi ho Raha tha. Unhe lag Raha tha Jaise unke saamne koi different person khada hai.


Atharva " Tum dono ki himmat kaise huyi Mera kidnap karne ki, mujhe batao tumhe aisa karne ke liye kisne kaha tha. "



Atharva ne Yong ki aur ghoor ke Dekha, wo koi pagal nahi tha Atharva ko pata tha ye low level Guards Kabhi bhi usko harm nahi pahucha sakte, jab tak koi inse aisa karne ko na kahe.


Yong "nahi-2 humey aisa karne ke liye kisi ne nahi kaha, wo to hum dono hi they Jo apka blood Pina chahte they. "


Atharva " Kyuki tum mujhe sach nahi batana chahte ho to, ab tumhe koi doosra mauka nahi milega. "



Atharva ne itna bolke ek step aage liya aur apni QI ko Apne hath mein flow karwate huye Yong ke skull ke upper pure force se strike Kiya, jisse Yong ki skull explode ho Gayi aur uska blood kisi fountain ki tarah Bahar nikalne laga Jo ki Atharva ke upper bhi gir Raha tha.


Atharva, Yong ki body ki taraf dekhte hue "Main doosra mauka nahi deta. "


Atharva aise behave Kar Raha tha Jaise Kuch hua hi na ho, usne apni past life mein isse bhi Jada bloody death Dekhi thi, isliye usey koi farak Nahi pad Raha tha.


Shuang ko Apne sir pe maut mandrati nazar aa rahi thi, wo koi brave person Nahi tha na hi usne aisa scene Kabhi Dekha tha. Uska chehra pila pad chuka tha aur wo dar ke maare kaamp Raha tha.


Atharva "ab tumhari baari, tum batao aisa karne ke liye kisne kaha tha? "


Atharva ne Shuang ki taraf mudte huye pucha.


Shuang dar se kapte hue " no-one Master, kisi ne bhi Nahi kaha, please meri jindagi baksh dijiye. "


Shuang ko bhut dar lag Raha tha, Jo Uske saamne khada tha wo usey Kahi se bhi uska Young Master Nahi lag Raha tha. Jis Tarah se Atharva ne yang ko maara wo bhut cruel tha.


Atharva " Abhi bhi sach Nahi batana chahte ho, koi baat Nahi main tumhe Nahi maarunga. Mujhe ek technique pata hai jisse jab tak Heart stop na ho tab tak person ki death Nahi Hoti, main ye technique tumpe use karunga, fir tumhari dono aankhey, kidney, liver Bahar nikal lunga, tumhar dono hath kaat dunga aur dono legs alag Kar dunga body se. Tab main tumhe tumhari body ke andar Ka ek ek part nikal ke dikhaunga, Uske baad main tumhar Heart nikalunga, agar tum strong huye to apna dhadakta hua Heart Dekh paaoge."


Itna kehne ke baad Atharva ke face pe evil smile aa Gayi AUR wo Shuang ki taraf badha hi tha ki.


Shuang " batata hu.... batata hu... "


Shuang ke puri body se pasine nikalne lage they, usey Atharva ki aankho mein sirf death dikh rahi thi aur Atharva ek Devil.


Atharva "jaldi karo, mere patience Ka test mat lo. "


Shuang " young Master ne humey ye Sab karne ke liye kaha tha aur unhone hi humey CLEANSING PILL Di thi. "


" Sohan ! "


Atharva ki memories mein ye naam familiar tha. Ye Sohan, Atharva ke Father Ka sautela beta tha. Kyuki Atharva bachpan se kamjor tha to Uske Father ne Sohan ko adopt Kar liye tha. Lekin Atharva ki memories mein Sohan hamesa se Atharva ki Care karta tha chahe Atharva Kuch bhi Kare aur wo hamesa se hi Atharva Ki har sahi galat kaam mein help karta tha.


Atharva " Sohan Mujhe kyu maarna Chahta hai? "


Shuang " Mayor ne apko itni kimti PILLS khilayi hai, isliye Sohan jealous hai aapse aur wo nafrat karta haï aapse. Agar aapko Kuch ho jaata hai to Yadav Family Ka ek-matr sakshm Leader ban Jayega wo. aur sabse badi baat kal Jadhav Family aur Yadav Family ke bich engagement day hai. Agar aap mar jaoge to wo Jadhav Family ki beti se Shaadi Kar payega."


Shuang ne dar ke maare Atharva ko Sab Kuch bata Diya.


Atharva " to ye baat hai. "


Atharva ke face ek gambhir smile thi. Jadhav Family Fragrant Sky City ki ek powerful Family hai. Wo business industry mein to number one pe they. Yaha tak ki Mayor bhi unhe sidhe-2 provoke Nahi Kar sakte they. Aur agar YADAV FAMILY aur JADHAV Family ek doosre ke Saath connection Bana rahe hai, to ye bahut badi beneficial baat thi dono Families ke liye.



Sohan bhut hi tez aur cunning hai, agar wo Atharva se Bada hota to ab tak Atharva mar chuka hota. Lekin ab situation bilkul different hai, The GREATEST SAINT ab is body ke andar hai, Sohan ko ab sirf DEATH hi milegi aur Kuch nahi.


Shuang " Young Master ab to Maine aapko Sab Kuch bata Diya hai, ab to Mujhe maaf Kar dijiye. "


Shuang, Atharva ke pairo mein girke gidgidane laga.

Atharva ne usey niche se uthaya aur uski chest mein hath daalke uska Heart Bahar nikal liye jo abhi beat ho Raha tha, ye usne itni fast Kiya tha ki Shuang ki body ki feel tak Nahi hua, Lekin Kuch hi second mein uski body niche gir Gayi aur Atharva ne wo Heart wahi Gira Diya.


Atharva, Shuang ki body ko dekhte hue " lo Kar Diya maaf. "




TO BE CONTINUED....






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