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Incest Vihaan Aur Ashita - Bhai Behen ki kahani - Exclusively written for XFORUM(COMPLETED)

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Donon ko maa aksar ek saath nehlaate school jaane se pehle. Aur eisa bhi hota weekends mein, ke Vivaan aur Ashita ek saath maa ke bina bhi bath lete. Bathroom mein bahot shor sharaba hota jab donon ek saath paaye jaate. Bahut masti karte donon bathroom mein. Paani se khelte ek dusre ke baal nochte, huladh machaate the.

Kyunke Ashita ke lambe baal the maa ussko sar tak nahin nehlaati thi har subha ko school jaane se pehle balke hafte mein sirf ek baar usski baal dhoti thi. Aur Vihaan to sar se paon tak nahata tha ek saath same bathroom mein to Ashita naraaz hoti thi ke kyun ussko sar se nahin nahane diya jata, aur iss par Vihaan ussko cherrta ke wo sar tak nahin naha paayi! Maa samjhati ke usske lambe baal hai aur sukhne mein waqt lagega, wo bimaar ho sakti hai iss liye ussko har roz baal nahin dhona chahiye…..

Ab kyunke Saath nahate waqt Vivaan ne dekh liya tha ke kiss tarah se usski maa Ashita ke baal dhote hein iss liye weekends par jab donon ek saath nahate maa ke bina to Vihaan Ashita ko nehlata aur usske baal dhota jeise usski maa dhoti hai taake usske enkhon mein saboon nah jaaye nahin to wo bahot chilaati thi enkhon mein sabun ke jaane se….

Aur aakhir mein baap ne ek naya bed kharida unn donon ke liye jissko dusre room mein lagaya gaya aur wo room inn donon ke bedroom ban gaye. Magar shuru mein sirf Vihaan sota tha apne bed par raat ko Ashita apne mummy papa ke saath rehti thi magar Ashita rone lagi yeh kehkar ke ussko bhi new bed par sona hai Vihaan ke saath. Tab Vihaan 12 saal ka ho gaya tha aur Ashita 8 ka. Ashita nahin rehna chahti thi apne bhai ke baghair. Donon saath school jaate, saath wapas aate, saath homeworks karte, saath TV dekhte aur saath sone jaate. Donon ke taste bhi bahot milte julte the, serial passand aaye to donon ko ek hi, gana passand aaye to bhi donon ke favourite ek hi the, hero aur heroine jo Vihaan ke favourite the wohi Ashita ke bi favourite hote.

School mein tiffin lejata to sirf Vihaan, ussi ke paas Ashita ka tiffin hota tha aur break mein donon ek saath khana khate the. Classes to alag the donon ke kyunke Vihaan bade class mein tha aur 4 saal chhoti Ashita niche ke class mein thi magar har break mein ashita daud kar Vihaan ke paas jaati aur donon hamesha ek saath dikhte school ke compound mein.

Jab Vihaan 15 saal ka hua to apne papa se mobile ki mang karne laga kyunke usske har dost ke paas mobiles the. Ghar ki tang haalat ko dekh kar jab usske papa ne samjhaya ke mushkil hai ek mobile kharidna uss haalat mein. To Ashita jo tab sirf 11 saal kit hi ussne badi asaani se apne papa se keh diya ke hire purchase mein to kharid sakte hein har dukaan mein hire purchase mein milti hai mobile.

Anirud, jo Vihaan ke papa ka naam tha ussko kabhi bhi hire purchase wala idea passand nahin tha. Ussne kabhi bhi zindagi mein kuch bhi credit par nahin kharida tha aaj tak, aur ab lagne laga ke bachchon ke khatir ussko wo karna padega.

Anirud raat ko apni patni, Suman se iss baare mein baat kar raha tha ke ab ussko hire purchase par mobile kharidna padega Vihaan ke liye. Suman ne kaha ke ussko shaayad ab Naukri kar leni chahiye kyunke ab bache bade ho gaye hein.

Suman ziada padhi likhi to nahin thi, haan English bol leti thi, aur sab kuch padh bhi sakti thi magar higher education wali nahin thi, magar silaayi achi karti thi par shaadi ke bad bache hone ke baad sirf ghar ke kaam kaaj mein lagi hui thi…..

Jahan Anirud kaam karta tha wahan usske bank ke kuch karib ek naya boutik open hua tha aur usski maalkin ne Anirud ki bank se loan ka bandobast kiya tha.

To dusre din Anirud uss boutik ke malkin se milne gaya apni wife ke liye Naukri ki talaash mein. Kyunke boutik ke malkin Anirud ko jaanta tha ussne jab jaana ke Suman ko silaayi aati hai to ussne kaha ke aksar eisa hota hai ke jab koyi ladi ek suit kharidti hai to uss mein adjustment karna padhta hai, wahin boutik mein machine bhi hai aur seene ka sab samaan bhi maujood hai to kia Suman wo kar sakti hai… baaki din bhar boutik ki dekh bhal aur customers ko attend bhi kar paegi….

To iss tarah se Suman bhi kaam par lag gayi.

Vihaan ko achah nahin laga ke usski maa kaam karne lagi aur ladka kuch khudaar tha to ussne apne papa se kaha ke ussko mobile nahin chahiye hire purchase par kuch nahin kharidna hoga ussko.

Ab Vihaan computer class mein bahut tez tha. Ghar par usske papa ke laptop par kaam karta tha matlab school works karne ke liye apne papa ke laptop istemaal karta tha, magar ussko laptop bhi apni personal chahiye tha.

To Vihaan ne kiya yeh ke ek deal kiya internet café ki owner se ke hafte mein 4 din wo shaam ko 4 se lekar raat 11 baje tak usske har computer issues ko solve karega. Kaam to bahot saare hote hein ek internet café mein jahan 30 se ziada computer hote hein har kissi ek computer mein kuch nah kuch issues hota rehta hai din bhar.

To iss tarah se Vihaan ko part time job mil gaya karne ko. Maa baap bahot khush hue ke unnka beta kitna khudaar aur helpful hai.

Jinn dinon ko Vihaan kaam par jata school se wapas ane ke baad Ashita ko akeli ghar mein achcha nahin lagta to ussne ek din Vihaan se kaha, “bhai mujhe bhi apne saath lechalo nah apne job par!” Ashita tab 12 saal ki ho gayi thi aur Vihaan 16 ki.

Vihaan ne jawaab diya, “tu paagal hai kia ri? Raat ko 11 baje tak mere sath uss internet café mein kia karegi tu?”

Ashita: “chalo thik hai, main shaam ko 6 baje wapas ajaungi, 4 se 6 baje tak to tumhare saath reh sakti hoon wahan?!”

Donon mein behez hui aur Vihaan ne mana kiya. Baat maa baap tak gaye to maa baap ne bhi Ashita ko Vihaan ke saath jaane ko mana kiya.

Ashita ko khamosh hona pada magar munh phula liya.

Maa ne ek nayi almari kharide unn donon ke liye jo unn ke kamre mein lagaya gaya. Aur Vihaan aur Ashita ke sabhi kapre maa ne apne wale almari se nikaal kar uss naye almaari mein rakh diye aur donon ko dikha diya ke kiss ke kapde kaun si ward mein hein. Ashita ne chose kar liye ke right wala door usski hai aur left wala Vihaan ka. Vihaan ne accept kar liya.


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Ek din hua yeh ke Vihaan ne Ashita wale almari ki door ko open kiya to usske haath 3 bras lage chhote chhote, small size ke. Uss waqt Ashita nahane gayi thi aur maa baap donon kaam par chale gaye the aur school ki chhutti ke din the…..

Vihaan ko nahin pata tha ke Ashita bra bi use karne lagi hai….. assal mein ladki ki jism 12 saal ki umar mein kaafi badh jaati hai aur kuch ladkiyan ke breast nikal aate hein to Ashita ki maa ne wo sab bandobast kar diya tha Ashita ke liye… kayi ladkiyan ki to 10 saal ki umr mein hi breasts nikal aate hein, wo usski jism ki growth par depend karta hai….

To uss din ko Vihaan ne unn 3 bras ko examine kiya, haath mein lekar kaafi der tak dekhta raha…. Phir pata nahin kyun Vihaan ne teenon bra ko kiss kiya phir naak se lagaya aur unnko sungha…. Aur usska khada ho gaya!

Wo mann hi maan Ashita ki jism ko sochne laga, apne khayaalon mein Ashita ko saamne paaya aur ahiste se ussne apne zip khole aur apne lund par bra ko lagaya aur apne tanne hue lund par jeise hi ussne bra ragadhna chaha kamre ki darwaza khula aur Ashita daakhil hua!

Ashita ek dress mein thi, usske baal bheege hue the, paani ki boondein kuch chehre par to kuch usske baazuwon par dikh rahe the, ek tawliya se wo sar ko ek taraf jhukaaye hue apne baalon ko rub kar rahi thi. Kyunke usska sar ek taraf jhuka hua tha uss ne kuch nahin dekha ke Vihaan kia kar raha tha, to jhat se Vihaan ne apna zip upar kiya aur bra ko wapas rakha almari mein aur kamre se laal chehre ke saath nikla tez dil ki dhadkan ke sath…..

Phir kuch der baad woh wapas kamre mein aya jab Ashita bed par baithi hui thi. Hansste hue wo Ashita ko dekh raha tha. Ashita ne ussko hansste hue dekha to pucha, “kyun hanss rahe ho eise kia hua?”

Vihaan weie hi hansste hue almari ke paas gaya to mudhkar Ashita ussko nazron se follow karte hue phir pucha, “are hua kia bhai hanss kyun rahe ho?”

Tab tak Vihaan almari ka darwaza khol ke Ashita ke bras ko haath mein lekar Ashita ko dikhaate hue kaha, “tum kab se yeh use karne lagi ri?!”

Ashita laal chehre ke saath jhat se uthkar wahan gayi aur chilaate hue kaha, “tum meri wali door kyun open kar rahe ho chorro isse, yeh tumhara nahin hai chorro nah!!” ab donon ne bras ko haath mein thaame hue the aur Vihaan zoron se hansste jaa raha tha. To Ashita ne bras ko chorr diya aur munh phula kar wapas bed par baith gayi.

Vihaan bras ko haath mein liye usske paas gaya aur pyar se kaha, “iss mein naraz hone wali kia baat hai bhala hmm?” Ashita ne sar niche jhukaya hua tha zameen dekhte hue. Vihaan ne kaha,

“hamamre beech kabhi koyi secret raha hai kia? Bol? Kyun mujhse chupaati hai? Bhala kab se tu bra use karne lagi aur mujhe pata bhi nahin chala? Bata nah kab se use kar rahi hai bra tu?!”

Sar jhukaaye hue hi Ashita ne kaha, “last year se. mummy ne kharide the.!”

Vihaan ne usske gaal par haath ferrte hue kaha, “sirf teen hein? Abhi tumne ek pehna hua hai kia?”

Ashita ne nah mein sar hillaya.

Vihaan: “kyun? Abhi kyun nahin pehna hai phir?”

Ashita ne ek halka sa muskurahat mein kaha, “nah, ghar par nahin pehenti hoon, school jaati hoon tab pehenti hoon mummy ne kaha!”

To vihaan ne kaha, “ek white hai, ek black aur ek pink, buss yehi 3 hein?

Ashita ne Vihaan ke haath se bras chhiinte hue wapas rakhne gayi yeh kehte, “haan buss teen hi hein abhi; mummy ne kaha next month aur 3 kharidegi.”

Vihaan Ashita ko upar se niche tak nihaarte hue kaha,

“tu kitni jaldi itni badi ho gayi ri mujhe pata hi nahin chala aur ek baat bolun kia?!”

Almari ka darwaza bandh karte hue Ashita mudhkar Vihaan ko dekhte hue pucha, “kia?”

Vihaan ne muskuraate hue kaha, “tu bahot hot aur sexy bhi dikhne lagi hai mujhe ab!”

To be continued…………….

very good update casi bro. just loved it.
The days they were bathing together i can relate and imagine how much fun they were both having and how much noise they would be making in the bathroom. it is something i have lived so can relate to that very well. its great fun indeed. And that bonds both of them together.
so the mother Suman and Father Anirud both are working now to reach both ends for the family and above all even Vihaan started doing part-time job, thats great. well thought of casi bro. very nice going.
see this is enough to show how far Ashita is attached to her brother that she also wants to go with him at his workplace. so cute.
The best part comes when a new wardrobe is put into their room and vihaan checks Ashita's ward to find her bras.... thats the start of the teenager's curiosity towards his younger sister's clothes and you have very well thought of all that. wonderfully written and described.
He was about to masturbate but Ashita got in suddenly which made him shocked and he ran away...
now then the conversation which took place between them is just superb.
I feel you could have described Ashita's feelings and reaction a little bit more when his bro is asking such things with her....
but still it was very good, we could imagine how ashita should have reacted to him.
you stopped at a point where we need to know what Ashita replied to his last words.... :D
great update my dear, loved it and dil maange MORE AND MORE.....
Waiting for today's update bro
 
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Update 2 Their Closeness

Donon ko maa aksar ek saath nehlaate school jaane se pehle. Aur eisa bhi hota weekends mein, ke Vivaan aur Ashita ek saath maa ke bina bhi bath lete. Bathroom mein bahot shor sharaba hota jab donon ek saath paaye jaate. Bahut masti karte donon bathroom mein. Paani se khelte ek dusre ke baal nochte, huladh machaate the.

Kyunke Ashita ke lambe baal the maa ussko sar tak nahin nehlaati thi har subha ko school jaane se pehle balke hafte mein sirf ek baar usski baal dhoti thi. Aur Vihaan to sar se paon tak nahata tha ek saath same bathroom mein to Ashita naraaz hoti thi ke kyun ussko sar se nahin nahane diya jata, aur iss par Vihaan ussko cherrta ke wo sar tak nahin naha paayi! Maa samjhati ke usske lambe baal hai aur sukhne mein waqt lagega, wo bimaar ho sakti hai iss liye ussko har roz baal nahin dhona chahiye…..

Ab kyunke Saath nahate waqt Vivaan ne dekh liya tha ke kiss tarah se usski maa Ashita ke baal dhote hein iss liye weekends par jab donon ek saath nahate maa ke bina to Vihaan Ashita ko nehlata aur usske baal dhota jeise usski maa dhoti hai taake usske enkhon mein saboon nah jaaye nahin to wo bahot chilaati thi enkhon mein sabun ke jaane se….

Aur aakhir mein baap ne ek naya bed kharida unn donon ke liye jissko dusre room mein lagaya gaya aur wo room inn donon ke bedroom ban gaye. Magar shuru mein sirf Vihaan sota tha apne bed par raat ko Ashita apne mummy papa ke saath rehti thi magar Ashita rone lagi yeh kehkar ke ussko bhi new bed par sona hai Vihaan ke saath. Tab Vihaan 12 saal ka ho gaya tha aur Ashita 8 ka. Ashita nahin rehna chahti thi apne bhai ke baghair. Donon saath school jaate, saath wapas aate, saath homeworks karte, saath TV dekhte aur saath sone jaate. Donon ke taste bhi bahot milte julte the, serial passand aaye to donon ko ek hi, gana passand aaye to bhi donon ke favourite ek hi the, hero aur heroine jo Vihaan ke favourite the wohi Ashita ke bi favourite hote.

School mein tiffin lejata to sirf Vihaan, ussi ke paas Ashita ka tiffin hota tha aur break mein donon ek saath khana khate the. Classes to alag the donon ke kyunke Vihaan bade class mein tha aur 4 saal chhoti Ashita niche ke class mein thi magar har break mein ashita daud kar Vihaan ke paas jaati aur donon hamesha ek saath dikhte school ke compound mein.

Jab Vihaan 15 saal ka hua to apne papa se mobile ki mang karne laga kyunke usske har dost ke paas mobiles the. Ghar ki tang haalat ko dekh kar jab usske papa ne samjhaya ke mushkil hai ek mobile kharidna uss haalat mein. To Ashita jo tab sirf 11 saal kit hi ussne badi asaani se apne papa se keh diya ke hire purchase mein to kharid sakte hein har dukaan mein hire purchase mein milti hai mobile.

Anirud, jo Vihaan ke papa ka naam tha ussko kabhi bhi hire purchase wala idea passand nahin tha. Ussne kabhi bhi zindagi mein kuch bhi credit par nahin kharida tha aaj tak, aur ab lagne laga ke bachchon ke khatir ussko wo karna padega.

Anirud raat ko apni patni, Suman se iss baare mein baat kar raha tha ke ab ussko hire purchase par mobile kharidna padega Vihaan ke liye. Suman ne kaha ke ussko shaayad ab Naukri kar leni chahiye kyunke ab bache bade ho gaye hein.

Suman ziada padhi likhi to nahin thi, haan English bol leti thi, aur sab kuch padh bhi sakti thi magar higher education wali nahin thi, magar silaayi achi karti thi par shaadi ke bad bache hone ke baad sirf ghar ke kaam kaaj mein lagi hui thi…..

Jahan Anirud kaam karta tha wahan usske bank ke kuch karib ek naya boutik open hua tha aur usski maalkin ne Anirud ki bank se loan ka bandobast kiya tha.

To dusre din Anirud uss boutik ke malkin se milne gaya apni wife ke liye Naukri ki talaash mein. Kyunke boutik ke malkin Anirud ko jaanta tha ussne jab jaana ke Suman ko silaayi aati hai to ussne kaha ke aksar eisa hota hai ke jab koyi ladi ek suit kharidti hai to uss mein adjustment karna padhta hai, wahin boutik mein machine bhi hai aur seene ka sab samaan bhi maujood hai to kia Suman wo kar sakti hai… baaki din bhar boutik ki dekh bhal aur customers ko attend bhi kar paegi….

To iss tarah se Suman bhi kaam par lag gayi.

Vihaan ko achah nahin laga ke usski maa kaam karne lagi aur ladka kuch khudaar tha to ussne apne papa se kaha ke ussko mobile nahin chahiye hire purchase par kuch nahin kharidna hoga ussko.

Ab Vihaan computer class mein bahut tez tha. Ghar par usske papa ke laptop par kaam karta tha matlab school works karne ke liye apne papa ke laptop istemaal karta tha, magar ussko laptop bhi apni personal chahiye tha.

To Vihaan ne kiya yeh ke ek deal kiya internet café ki owner se ke hafte mein 4 din wo shaam ko 4 se lekar raat 11 baje tak usske har computer issues ko solve karega. Kaam to bahot saare hote hein ek internet café mein jahan 30 se ziada computer hote hein har kissi ek computer mein kuch nah kuch issues hota rehta hai din bhar.

To iss tarah se Vihaan ko part time job mil gaya karne ko. Maa baap bahot khush hue ke unnka beta kitna khudaar aur helpful hai.

Jinn dinon ko Vihaan kaam par jata school se wapas ane ke baad Ashita ko akeli ghar mein achcha nahin lagta to ussne ek din Vihaan se kaha, “bhai mujhe bhi apne saath lechalo nah apne job par!” Ashita tab 12 saal ki ho gayi thi aur Vihaan 16 ki.

Vihaan ne jawaab diya, “tu paagal hai kia ri? Raat ko 11 baje tak mere sath uss internet café mein kia karegi tu?”

Ashita: “chalo thik hai, main shaam ko 6 baje wapas ajaungi, 4 se 6 baje tak to tumhare saath reh sakti hoon wahan?!”

Donon mein behez hui aur Vihaan ne mana kiya. Baat maa baap tak gaye to maa baap ne bhi Ashita ko Vihaan ke saath jaane ko mana kiya.

Ashita ko khamosh hona pada magar munh phula liya.

Maa ne ek nayi almari kharide unn donon ke liye jo unn ke kamre mein lagaya gaya. Aur Vihaan aur Ashita ke sabhi kapre maa ne apne wale almari se nikaal kar uss naye almaari mein rakh diye aur donon ko dikha diya ke kiss ke kapde kaun si ward mein hein. Ashita ne chose kar liye ke right wala door usski hai aur left wala Vihaan ka. Vihaan ne accept kar liya.


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Ek din hua yeh ke Vihaan ne Ashita wale almari ki door ko open kiya to usske haath 3 bras lage chhote chhote, small size ke. Uss waqt Ashita nahane gayi thi aur maa baap donon kaam par chale gaye the aur school ki chhutti ke din the…..

Vihaan ko nahin pata tha ke Ashita bra bi use karne lagi hai….. assal mein ladki ki jism 12 saal ki umar mein kaafi badh jaati hai aur kuch ladkiyan ke breast nikal aate hein to Ashita ki maa ne wo sab bandobast kar diya tha Ashita ke liye… kayi ladkiyan ki to 10 saal ki umr mein hi breasts nikal aate hein, wo usski jism ki growth par depend karta hai….

To uss din ko Vihaan ne unn 3 bras ko examine kiya, haath mein lekar kaafi der tak dekhta raha…. Phir pata nahin kyun Vihaan ne teenon bra ko kiss kiya phir naak se lagaya aur unnko sungha…. Aur usska khada ho gaya!

Wo mann hi maan Ashita ki jism ko sochne laga, apne khayaalon mein Ashita ko saamne paaya aur ahiste se ussne apne zip khole aur apne lund par bra ko lagaya aur apne tanne hue lund par jeise hi ussne bra ragadhna chaha kamre ki darwaza khula aur Ashita daakhil hua!

Ashita ek dress mein thi, usske baal bheege hue the, paani ki boondein kuch chehre par to kuch usske baazuwon par dikh rahe the, ek tawliya se wo sar ko ek taraf jhukaaye hue apne baalon ko rub kar rahi thi. Kyunke usska sar ek taraf jhuka hua tha uss ne kuch nahin dekha ke Vihaan kia kar raha tha, to jhat se Vihaan ne apna zip upar kiya aur bra ko wapas rakha almari mein aur kamre se laal chehre ke saath nikla tez dil ki dhadkan ke sath…..

Phir kuch der baad woh wapas kamre mein aya jab Ashita bed par baithi hui thi. Hansste hue wo Ashita ko dekh raha tha. Ashita ne ussko hansste hue dekha to pucha, “kyun hanss rahe ho eise kia hua?”

Vihaan weie hi hansste hue almari ke paas gaya to mudhkar Ashita ussko nazron se follow karte hue phir pucha, “are hua kia bhai hanss kyun rahe ho?”

Tab tak Vihaan almari ka darwaza khol ke Ashita ke bras ko haath mein lekar Ashita ko dikhaate hue kaha, “tum kab se yeh use karne lagi ri?!”

Ashita laal chehre ke saath jhat se uthkar wahan gayi aur chilaate hue kaha, “tum meri wali door kyun open kar rahe ho chorro isse, yeh tumhara nahin hai chorro nah!!” ab donon ne bras ko haath mein thaame hue the aur Vihaan zoron se hansste jaa raha tha. To Ashita ne bras ko chorr diya aur munh phula kar wapas bed par baith gayi.

Vihaan bras ko haath mein liye usske paas gaya aur pyar se kaha, “iss mein naraz hone wali kia baat hai bhala hmm?” Ashita ne sar niche jhukaya hua tha zameen dekhte hue. Vihaan ne kaha,

“hamamre beech kabhi koyi secret raha hai kia? Bol? Kyun mujhse chupaati hai? Bhala kab se tu bra use karne lagi aur mujhe pata bhi nahin chala? Bata nah kab se use kar rahi hai bra tu?!”

Sar jhukaaye hue hi Ashita ne kaha, “last year se. mummy ne kharide the.!”

Vihaan ne usske gaal par haath ferrte hue kaha, “sirf teen hein? Abhi tumne ek pehna hua hai kia?”

Ashita ne nah mein sar hillaya.

Vihaan: “kyun? Abhi kyun nahin pehna hai phir?”

Ashita ne ek halka sa muskurahat mein kaha, “nah, ghar par nahin pehenti hoon, school jaati hoon tab pehenti hoon mummy ne kaha!”

To vihaan ne kaha, “ek white hai, ek black aur ek pink, buss yehi 3 hein?

Ashita ne Vihaan ke haath se bras chhiinte hue wapas rakhne gayi yeh kehte, “haan buss teen hi hein abhi; mummy ne kaha next month aur 3 kharidegi.”

Vihaan Ashita ko upar se niche tak nihaarte hue kaha,

“tu kitni jaldi itni badi ho gayi ri mujhe pata hi nahin chala aur ek baat bolun kia?!”

Almari ka darwaza bandh karte hue Ashita mudhkar Vihaan ko dekhte hue pucha, “kia?”

Vihaan ne muskuraate hue kaha, “tu bahot hot aur sexy bhi dikhne lagi hai mujhe ab!”

To be continued…………….

very very nice and lovely update Casinar ji.
mujhe behad passand aayi.
you have given quite a good scope to their relationship which keeps growing and all the situations you have created suits too well between them and the whole family.
the ending part is very interesting and arouses curiosity in different ways.
I am eager to know how you are going to develop this ahead and i know you will do wonders.
so eagerly waiting for the coming update.
 
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Update 1 The early days of life

Vihaan 4 saal ka tha jab Ashita paida hui. Vihaan ko tab Ashita passand nahin thi. Wo iss liye ke Vihaan ko ek chota bhai chahiye tha behen nahin. Ussne munh phula kar chehra bana liya tha aur Ashita ke taraf dekhta hi nahin tha.

Maa baap ke laakh samjhaane, behlaane, phusslaane ke bawajud Vihaan ek kone mein rehta aur ek taraf dekhta rehta. Jab kabhi Ashita ki rone ki awaaz aati to Vihaan apne donon kaanon par apna haath daba kar ghar se baahar bhaag jaata.

Donon maa baap ko fikar rehta ke pata nahin kab Vivaan Ashita ko accept karega. Bahot dinon tak eisa chala. Vihaan apne aap mein khoye hue se rehte. Wo bhi bacha tha aur sab ek hi kamre mein raat ko sote the, Vihaan pichle 4 saalon se apne papa aur mummy ke saath hi sota tha, aur ab Ashita ke paida hone ke baad, Vihaan ne uss bed ko share karne se inkaar kiya. Ussne kaha wo akele soyega ek dusre bed par. Dusra bed to tha hi nahin, aur sirf do kamre wala chota sa ghar tha jiss mein toilet, bathroom aur kitchen alag se jude hue the ek wall separation se. Beech mein ek corridor tha jo donon room ko separate karte the. Saamne ek chota sa living tha jissko apna lounge kehte the sab. Lounge se corridor mein hokar donon taraf mein ek ek karma tha phir kitchen corridor end hone ke baad, aur right mein toilet aur bathroom the.

Ab dusra room khaali tha, sirf ek chota sa mez aur chair hua karta tha uss mein. Ziada paisa bhi nahin tha ke ek naya bed kharida jaa sake unn dinon ko. Baap mamooli bank ka mulazim, mahine bhar ka tankhwa se ghar ki ration, vegetables, electricity bill, paani ka bill, internet connection inn sab ke expenses se mahina ka tankhwa end ho jata tha kuch bachta hi nahin tha. To naye bed kharidne ka sawaal hi nahin paida hua balke donon maa baap ne yeh socha ke ab Vihaan ko maternal school mein dakhil kar dena chahiye.

To raat ko unn dinon Vihaan dusre kamre mein jaakar uss table par ek chaadar laga kar so jata tha. Maa baap donon ko bahut afsos hota usski uss rawayye se. Ek blanket se ussko baap jaakar odha deta aur baar baar raat ko ussko dekhne jaate donon baari baari. Jab bhi raat mein Ashita jaagti tab Ashita ko pilaane ke baad maa uss kamre mein Vihaan ko dekhne jaati.

Chand hafton ke baad baap ne Vihaan ka daakhila kara diya maternal school mein. Itne dinon mein Vihaan ne ek baar bhi Ashita ke chehre ko nahin dekha tha. Maa ko darr tha ke kahin Vihaan Ashita ko akele paakar ussko choat nah pahunchayein, ussko kahin maare nahin, inn sab baton ko sochkar hi ussko school mein daakhil karwaya gaya.

Ab uss school mein nursery wale hissa bhi tha, jahan parents apne babies ko chorr kar kaam karne chale jaate aur shaam ko kaam se wapas nikalne ke baad wahan se babies ko le jaate. Aur woh bagal wale kamre mein the jahan Vihaan ki class thi…. Aksar iss class ke bache uss nursery ke babies ko dekhne aur unn se khelne ko jaate the…. Ab uss school ke teachers aur helpers school ke bachchon ko iss liye unn babies se ghulne milne dete taake babies ko eisa lage ke unnke paas khelne wale chote bachche bhi hein……

To Vihaan apne class se jab babies ke rone ki awaaz sunta to ussko apne ghar mein Ashita ki rone wali awaaz sunaayi deta. Ab, jab baaki ke bache babies se khelne ko jaate to Vihaan heyraan rehta ke keise yeh sab bache itne chote babies se khelne ko jaate hein; iss tarah ek din ek bache ko follow karte hue Vihaan bhi uss nursery mein gaya jahan bahot saare babies the cradles mein.

Vihaan darwaaze par satt kar khade unn sab cradles mein babies ke taraf dekh rahe the apne ek ungli ko chusste hue. Ek helper ne ek baby ko haath mein liye hue dood pila rahi thi bottle se aur ek bache ko apne paas bulaya aur uss bache ko dood wali bottle diya aur baby ko pilaane ko kaha. Vihaan dekh raha tha aur ussne uss baby ke chehre ko dekha. Ussko baby bahot cute laga. Wo ro nahin rahi thi buss araam se bottle ke nipple se dood pee rahi thi. Uss lady ne Vihaan ko dekha aur apne paas bulaya magar Vihaan ne sar hillaate hue nah kaha aur wapas apne class mein bhaag gaya.

Uss din ko school se ghar wapas ane ke baad Vihaan ne chhup chhup kar Ashita ko jhaanka jab wo bed par so rahi thi. Maa uss waqt kitchen mein thi aur Vihaan Ashita ko ghurr raha tha. Himat karke wo ahiste ahiste bed ke tarah badha aur kaafi paas jaa kar Ashita ko dekhne laga.

Maa ne kitchen se awaaz diya, “kahan ho Vihaan beta? Kia kar rahe ho?!”

Vihaan Ashita ko dekhte hue itna khayaalon mein dooba hua tha ke ussko apni maa ki awaaz sunaayi nahin di, to maa ka dil zor se dhadka yeh soch kar ke kahin Vihaan Ashita ko kuch kar nah dein aur wo jaldi se kamre ke taraf badhi….

Kamre ke darwaaze ke paas aakar dekha ke bed ke paas khada Vihaan Ashita ko araam se dekh raha tha bed par. Maa wahin ruk gayi aur kuch der khadi dekhti rahi ke Vihaan kia karega. Yeh pehli baar thi kayi mahinon ke baad jab Vihaan ko Ashita ko dekhte hue paaya tha maa ne. Maa ki enkhen bhar aayi ussko uss tarah se Ashita ko dekhte hue dekh kar. Vihaan bahot pyar bhari nazron se dekh raha tha Ashita ko. Lag raha tha ke wo ussko apne baahon mein lena chah rahe ho jeise. Vihaan bed ke itne karib chala gaya tha aur lagta tha wo apna haath badhaane wala hai Ashita ko chhune ke liye, magar maa ko darr bhi lag rahi thi ke Vihaan kahin Ashita ko maare nah! phir bhi wo khadi dekhti rahi, yeh jaanna chahti thi ke Vihaan kia karna chah raha hai.

Vihaan ne apni ek ungli ko munh mein liye hue chusste hue ghurr raha tha apni baby behen ko jo neendh mein thi. Aur ussne apne ek peyr ko bed ke upar kiya aur ziada nazdik se Ashita ko dekhne laga tab maa ko aur bhi darr laga aur andar daakhil ho gayi yeh kehte hue, “hmm tum apni behen ko goad mein lena chahte ho Vihaan?!”

Magar jeise hi Vihaan ne apne maa ki awaaz suna woh jhat se bed se utar kar bhaagte hue dusre kamre mein chala gaya.

Maa ko bahot fikar hui uss manzar ko dekh kar. Woh sirf yeh soch rahi thi ke Vihaan Ashaita ko zaroor takliff pahunchata agar wo andar nahin aati to.

Raat ko ussne Vihaan ke papa ko sab kuch bataya to baap ne kaha ke ho sakta hai ab Vihaan Ashita ke karib ane ki koshish kar raha hai, ho sakta hai ab woh ussko accept karne laga hai, ussko chorr dena chahiye tha, yeh dekhna tha ke wo karta kia aakhir.

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Baaki dinon ko school mein Vihaan kayi baar babies ke room mein jaate. Ussne kayi babies ke gaal ko chhuwa, hath se sehlaaya, aur pyar se sab ko dekha, unn babies mein ladke aur ladkiyaan bhi the. Ek baar ek teacher ne baby ko pilaate waqt Vihaan ko botal diya aur baby ko pilaane ko kaha jo Vihaan ne kiya. Aur baby ne thoda doodh munh se baahar feinka to Vihaan chilaaya, “nahin pee rahi hai, ugal rahi hai wapas!” to teacher ne hansste hue baby ka munh poncha aur kaha ke ugal nahin rahi hai girr rahi hai kyunke ziada upar uthaya hua hai botal ko ussne.

Ghar wapas ane ke baad Vihaan phir gaya Ashita ko bed par dekhne. Maa ussi ke intezaar mein thi aur wahin darwaze ke paas chhup kar khadi dekhne lagi ke wo kia karega. Maa ko heyraani hui dekh kar ke Vihaan ne bade pyar se Ashita ke gaal par apna haath ferra. Maa ki enkhen bhar aayi aur apne enkh ponchte hue muskurakar kaha, “kyun re, tu chhup chhup kar kyun apni behen se pyar karta hai?!”

Iss baar Vihaan nahin bhaga, wahin bed ke paas khada raha aur sar jhuka liya niche. Maa usske karib aayi aur ussko goad mein lekar kaha, “dekh kitni pyari hai nah? hmm? Tu iss se pyar karta hai nah bol?”

Vihaan ne sar ko haan mein hillaya. Maa ne ussko zor se seene se lagaate hue kaha, “are mera bacha mujhe bahot Khushi hui aaj.” To Vihaan ne kaha, “aaj school mein main ne ek eisi hi baby ko botal se doodh pilaya!”

Tab maa ne jaldi se botal wale doodh tayyaar kiya aur Ashita ko jagaya aur Vihaan ko pilaane ko diya. School mein to baby cradle mein lete hue doodh piya tha magar yahan par maa ne Ashita ko Vihaan ke goad mein rakh diya aur hath mein botal de diya aur pilaane ko kaha… Vihaan ne apne komal haathon mein apni choti behen ko liye ussko doodh pilaane laga aur muskuraate hue usske chehre mein dekhte hue kaha, “abhi dekhna ugal degi doodh ko agar main ne botal ko ziada upar uthaya to!”

Maa ne hansste hue kaha, “are wah, tujhe to ab bahot kuch pata hai babies ke baare mein!”

Aur Vihaan ne dekha ke Ashita apni choti choti enkhon se ussko dekh rahi hai doodh peete hue phir achanak Ashita ki nanhi si haat ke Vihaan ka haath pakar liya to Vihaan zor se chilaaya, “maa issne mera haath pakar liya bolo mere haath chorrne ko dekho issne keise mera haath pakra hua hai aur mujhe ghurr rahi hai !!!”

Maa ne hansste hue kaha, “are to kia hua? Wo bhi tumse pyar karti hai ussko pata hai ke tu usska bhai hai issi liye ussne tera haath pakra……”

To iss tarah se Vihaan ne Ashita ko accept kiya aur uss se apni behen se pyar hua aur uss din ke baad wo wapas bed par sone laga sabke saath, khaas kar Ashita ke paas sota raat ko, Ashita roti to maa se pehle Vihaan jaagta aur Ashita ko khamosh karta…..

Aur din guzarte gaye aur Donon Ashita aur Vihaan badhte gaye aur donon ek dusre ke baghair reh nahin paate….. school se wapas aate hi Vihaan sabse pehle Ashita se milta, uss se khelta, usske saath pura waqt beetata……

Aur jab Vihaan 10 saal ka hua to Ashita same school mein apne bhai ke saath subha nikalti jaane ke liye aur donon saath wapas ghar aate…….

To be continued…………..

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Donon ko maa aksar ek saath nehlaate school jaane se pehle. Aur eisa bhi hota weekends mein, ke Vivaan aur Ashita ek saath maa ke bina bhi bath lete. Bathroom mein bahot shor sharaba hota jab donon ek saath paaye jaate. Bahut masti karte donon bathroom mein. Paani se khelte ek dusre ke baal nochte, huladh machaate the.

Kyunke Ashita ke lambe baal the maa ussko sar tak nahin nehlaati thi har subha ko school jaane se pehle balke hafte mein sirf ek baar usski baal dhoti thi. Aur Vihaan to sar se paon tak nahata tha ek saath same bathroom mein to Ashita naraaz hoti thi ke kyun ussko sar se nahin nahane diya jata, aur iss par Vihaan ussko cherrta ke wo sar tak nahin naha paayi! Maa samjhati ke usske lambe baal hai aur sukhne mein waqt lagega, wo bimaar ho sakti hai iss liye ussko har roz baal nahin dhona chahiye…..

Ab kyunke Saath nahate waqt Vivaan ne dekh liya tha ke kiss tarah se usski maa Ashita ke baal dhote hein iss liye weekends par jab donon ek saath nahate maa ke bina to Vihaan Ashita ko nehlata aur usske baal dhota jeise usski maa dhoti hai taake usske enkhon mein saboon nah jaaye nahin to wo bahot chilaati thi enkhon mein sabun ke jaane se….

Aur aakhir mein baap ne ek naya bed kharida unn donon ke liye jissko dusre room mein lagaya gaya aur wo room inn donon ke bedroom ban gaye. Magar shuru mein sirf Vihaan sota tha apne bed par raat ko Ashita apne mummy papa ke saath rehti thi magar Ashita rone lagi yeh kehkar ke ussko bhi new bed par sona hai Vihaan ke saath. Tab Vihaan 12 saal ka ho gaya tha aur Ashita 8 ka. Ashita nahin rehna chahti thi apne bhai ke baghair. Donon saath school jaate, saath wapas aate, saath homeworks karte, saath TV dekhte aur saath sone jaate. Donon ke taste bhi bahot milte julte the, serial passand aaye to donon ko ek hi, gana passand aaye to bhi donon ke favourite ek hi the, hero aur heroine jo Vihaan ke favourite the wohi Ashita ke bi favourite hote.

School mein tiffin lejata to sirf Vihaan, ussi ke paas Ashita ka tiffin hota tha aur break mein donon ek saath khana khate the. Classes to alag the donon ke kyunke Vihaan bade class mein tha aur 4 saal chhoti Ashita niche ke class mein thi magar har break mein ashita daud kar Vihaan ke paas jaati aur donon hamesha ek saath dikhte school ke compound mein.

Jab Vihaan 15 saal ka hua to apne papa se mobile ki mang karne laga kyunke usske har dost ke paas mobiles the. Ghar ki tang haalat ko dekh kar jab usske papa ne samjhaya ke mushkil hai ek mobile kharidna uss haalat mein. To Ashita jo tab sirf 11 saal kit hi ussne badi asaani se apne papa se keh diya ke hire purchase mein to kharid sakte hein har dukaan mein hire purchase mein milti hai mobile.

Anirud, jo Vihaan ke papa ka naam tha ussko kabhi bhi hire purchase wala idea passand nahin tha. Ussne kabhi bhi zindagi mein kuch bhi credit par nahin kharida tha aaj tak, aur ab lagne laga ke bachchon ke khatir ussko wo karna padega.

Anirud raat ko apni patni, Suman se iss baare mein baat kar raha tha ke ab ussko hire purchase par mobile kharidna padega Vihaan ke liye. Suman ne kaha ke ussko shaayad ab Naukri kar leni chahiye kyunke ab bache bade ho gaye hein.

Suman ziada padhi likhi to nahin thi, haan English bol leti thi, aur sab kuch padh bhi sakti thi magar higher education wali nahin thi, magar silaayi achi karti thi par shaadi ke bad bache hone ke baad sirf ghar ke kaam kaaj mein lagi hui thi…..

Jahan Anirud kaam karta tha wahan usske bank ke kuch karib ek naya boutik open hua tha aur usski maalkin ne Anirud ki bank se loan ka bandobast kiya tha.

To dusre din Anirud uss boutik ke malkin se milne gaya apni wife ke liye Naukri ki talaash mein. Kyunke boutik ke malkin Anirud ko jaanta tha ussne jab jaana ke Suman ko silaayi aati hai to ussne kaha ke aksar eisa hota hai ke jab koyi ladi ek suit kharidti hai to uss mein adjustment karna padhta hai, wahin boutik mein machine bhi hai aur seene ka sab samaan bhi maujood hai to kia Suman wo kar sakti hai… baaki din bhar boutik ki dekh bhal aur customers ko attend bhi kar paegi….

To iss tarah se Suman bhi kaam par lag gayi.

Vihaan ko achah nahin laga ke usski maa kaam karne lagi aur ladka kuch khudaar tha to ussne apne papa se kaha ke ussko mobile nahin chahiye hire purchase par kuch nahin kharidna hoga ussko.

Ab Vihaan computer class mein bahut tez tha. Ghar par usske papa ke laptop par kaam karta tha matlab school works karne ke liye apne papa ke laptop istemaal karta tha, magar ussko laptop bhi apni personal chahiye tha.

To Vihaan ne kiya yeh ke ek deal kiya internet café ki owner se ke hafte mein 4 din wo shaam ko 4 se lekar raat 11 baje tak usske har computer issues ko solve karega. Kaam to bahot saare hote hein ek internet café mein jahan 30 se ziada computer hote hein har kissi ek computer mein kuch nah kuch issues hota rehta hai din bhar.

To iss tarah se Vihaan ko part time job mil gaya karne ko. Maa baap bahot khush hue ke unnka beta kitna khudaar aur helpful hai.

Jinn dinon ko Vihaan kaam par jata school se wapas ane ke baad Ashita ko akeli ghar mein achcha nahin lagta to ussne ek din Vihaan se kaha, “bhai mujhe bhi apne saath lechalo nah apne job par!” Ashita tab 12 saal ki ho gayi thi aur Vihaan 16 ki.

Vihaan ne jawaab diya, “tu paagal hai kia ri? Raat ko 11 baje tak mere sath uss internet café mein kia karegi tu?”

Ashita: “chalo thik hai, main shaam ko 6 baje wapas ajaungi, 4 se 6 baje tak to tumhare saath reh sakti hoon wahan?!”

Donon mein behez hui aur Vihaan ne mana kiya. Baat maa baap tak gaye to maa baap ne bhi Ashita ko Vihaan ke saath jaane ko mana kiya.

Ashita ko khamosh hona pada magar munh phula liya.

Maa ne ek nayi almari kharide unn donon ke liye jo unn ke kamre mein lagaya gaya. Aur Vihaan aur Ashita ke sabhi kapre maa ne apne wale almari se nikaal kar uss naye almaari mein rakh diye aur donon ko dikha diya ke kiss ke kapde kaun si ward mein hein. Ashita ne chose kar liye ke right wala door usski hai aur left wala Vihaan ka. Vihaan ne accept kar liya.


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Ek din hua yeh ke Vihaan ne Ashita wale almari ki door ko open kiya to usske haath 3 bras lage chhote chhote, small size ke. Uss waqt Ashita nahane gayi thi aur maa baap donon kaam par chale gaye the aur school ki chhutti ke din the…..

Vihaan ko nahin pata tha ke Ashita bra bi use karne lagi hai….. assal mein ladki ki jism 12 saal ki umar mein kaafi badh jaati hai aur kuch ladkiyan ke breast nikal aate hein to Ashita ki maa ne wo sab bandobast kar diya tha Ashita ke liye… kayi ladkiyan ki to 10 saal ki umr mein hi breasts nikal aate hein, wo usski jism ki growth par depend karta hai….

To uss din ko Vihaan ne unn 3 bras ko examine kiya, haath mein lekar kaafi der tak dekhta raha…. Phir pata nahin kyun Vihaan ne teenon bra ko kiss kiya phir naak se lagaya aur unnko sungha…. Aur usska khada ho gaya!

Wo mann hi maan Ashita ki jism ko sochne laga, apne khayaalon mein Ashita ko saamne paaya aur ahiste se ussne apne zip khole aur apne lund par bra ko lagaya aur apne tanne hue lund par jeise hi ussne bra ragadhna chaha kamre ki darwaza khula aur Ashita daakhil hua!

Ashita ek dress mein thi, usske baal bheege hue the, paani ki boondein kuch chehre par to kuch usske baazuwon par dikh rahe the, ek tawliya se wo sar ko ek taraf jhukaaye hue apne baalon ko rub kar rahi thi. Kyunke usska sar ek taraf jhuka hua tha uss ne kuch nahin dekha ke Vihaan kia kar raha tha, to jhat se Vihaan ne apna zip upar kiya aur bra ko wapas rakha almari mein aur kamre se laal chehre ke saath nikla tez dil ki dhadkan ke sath…..

Phir kuch der baad woh wapas kamre mein aya jab Ashita bed par baithi hui thi. Hansste hue wo Ashita ko dekh raha tha. Ashita ne ussko hansste hue dekha to pucha, “kyun hanss rahe ho eise kia hua?”

Vihaan weie hi hansste hue almari ke paas gaya to mudhkar Ashita ussko nazron se follow karte hue phir pucha, “are hua kia bhai hanss kyun rahe ho?”

Tab tak Vihaan almari ka darwaza khol ke Ashita ke bras ko haath mein lekar Ashita ko dikhaate hue kaha, “tum kab se yeh use karne lagi ri?!”

Ashita laal chehre ke saath jhat se uthkar wahan gayi aur chilaate hue kaha, “tum meri wali door kyun open kar rahe ho chorro isse, yeh tumhara nahin hai chorro nah!!” ab donon ne bras ko haath mein thaame hue the aur Vihaan zoron se hansste jaa raha tha. To Ashita ne bras ko chorr diya aur munh phula kar wapas bed par baith gayi.

Vihaan bras ko haath mein liye usske paas gaya aur pyar se kaha, “iss mein naraz hone wali kia baat hai bhala hmm?” Ashita ne sar niche jhukaya hua tha zameen dekhte hue. Vihaan ne kaha,

“hamamre beech kabhi koyi secret raha hai kia? Bol? Kyun mujhse chupaati hai? Bhala kab se tu bra use karne lagi aur mujhe pata bhi nahin chala? Bata nah kab se use kar rahi hai bra tu?!”

Sar jhukaaye hue hi Ashita ne kaha, “last year se. mummy ne kharide the.!”

Vihaan ne usske gaal par haath ferrte hue kaha, “sirf teen hein? Abhi tumne ek pehna hua hai kia?”

Ashita ne nah mein sar hillaya.

Vihaan: “kyun? Abhi kyun nahin pehna hai phir?”

Ashita ne ek halka sa muskurahat mein kaha, “nah, ghar par nahin pehenti hoon, school jaati hoon tab pehenti hoon mummy ne kaha!”

To vihaan ne kaha, “ek white hai, ek black aur ek pink, buss yehi 3 hein?

Ashita ne Vihaan ke haath se bras chhiinte hue wapas rakhne gayi yeh kehte, “haan buss teen hi hein abhi; mummy ne kaha next month aur 3 kharidegi.”

Vihaan Ashita ko upar se niche tak nihaarte hue kaha,

“tu kitni jaldi itni badi ho gayi ri mujhe pata hi nahin chala aur ek baat bolun kia?!”

Almari ka darwaza bandh karte hue Ashita mudhkar Vihaan ko dekhte hue pucha, “kia?”

Vihaan ne muskuraate hue kaha, “tu bahot hot aur sexy bhi dikhne lagi hai mujhe ab!”

To be continued…………….


to good bhai, wonderful
bahut hi pyara sa update hai
bade armaan thi eisi kahani padhne ki aap ne pura kiya
thanks very much for this lovely story bhai
ab eagerness badhne lagi hai ke age kab kia keise hoga
jaldi jaldi update dete chalna casi bhai
 
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Bahut hi pyari shuruwat kiya hai bhai. Bade komalta se likha gaya hai iss update ko. Bilkool nahin lag raha k ye ek incest story hone wali hai. Iss mein pyar ka tadka laga rahega lag raha hai. Bhai eisi kahani ko padhne ka bada man tha saalon se. Aaj wo murad pura hone wala hai lagta hai iss kahani se.
Iss bhai behen k pyar mein doob kar rahunga main.
Jiyo casi bhai. Jiyo yaar eisi kahani hamare liye likhne k liye.
Ab Vihaan aur Ashita ko jaldi se bada karo aur maamla shuru keise hota hai wo sab jaanne ki betaabi badh rahi hai bhai. Kab agla, teesra aur chautha update aega abhi se hi bechaini hai.
Fatafat likho aur double ya tripple update post karo nah casi bhai.
Bahut bahut dil se aap ka shukriya bhai. :vhappy:
thanks very much for the appreciation Husein bhai :happy:
 

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No bhai mere kahne ka matlab aap nahi samjhe... Aapke do tin incest perfix me adaultry story ko dekh kar ye sawal kiya tha... Kyo ki mujhe laga as usual aapke jo incest ke naam pe adaultry hota hai iss liye mujhe laga ye incest(adaultry) hi hai kya... So kar diya question... Iss story ke naam se lag raha hai bahut achha pure incest hoga isme... lekin aap jo incest likhte hai usse mujhe dar lagta hai... Abb to isse padh kar hi review dunga...

chao bhai koyi baat nahin ..
magar yeh kia kaha aap ne ke ab isse padhkar hi review milega eisa to nahin hota nah bhai
har update ke baad ek comment ana chahiye... abhi do update par aap ke comments udhaar hai
aaj 3rd update ane wala hai matlab aap ke 3 commenst ane baaki hai abhi
main intezaar karunga aap apne opinion zarur dein
thanks
 
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