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Update:-14
Raat ke takriban 1 baje sab ki night to good ho gayi lekin shayad Som ke liye ye raat kuchh jyada hi lambi hone wali thi. Jis Jugnu ka naam Som ke sath lagaatar joda ja raha tha ek alag hi nafrat ki kahani rach chuka tha, jisme Som aur Diksha ke rishte ko bhi bhari mehfil me uchhalne ki taiyari poori ho chuki thi, taki Diksha aur uska poora parivar Som ko khud bahar ka rasta dikha de..
Sabha khatm karne ke baad Som jab chala aa raha tha, galti se ek baar fir Sugandha ke sath takkar ho gayi.
Sugandha ko takkar marne ke baad Som sorry kahta hua aage badh gaya… "Suno tum"… Som ulte paun wapas aaya… Sugandha usse ghurti hui ek thappad jadti hui… "Ab jao"
Som usse "thank you' kahte chala. Sugandha bhi chalte bani. Som ki najar achanak se ghadi par gayi. Raat ke 1 baje Sugandha reception se laut rahi thi ye baat uske dimag me strike kar gayi. Wo Sugandha ke pichhe gaya. Sugandha ko bhi laga ki koi uske pichhe aa raha hai, wo ruk kar pichhe mudi aur samne se Som ko aate huye dekh rahi thi.
Som:- Kya aap thik hain…
Sugandha:- Main tum jaise ladke ko apne pass dekhna bhi nahi chahti. Baat karna to bahut dur ki baat hai. Ghatiya insan jo apni maa ka na hua wo dusron ka kya hoga..
Itne me Sugandha ke 2 bhatije Mayank aur Roopam wahan pahunch gaye.… "Kaki kitni der laga dee. Nimbu mila…"
Sugandha:- Sorry beta 5 minute sirf iss aawara ke karan der ho gayi.
Roopam:- Kaki thik hai aap hall me jao aur Kalpesh bhaiya ko ye nibu pani do. Main Som sir ko kamre tak chhod aata hun, shayad inhe nimbu pani dene wala koi nahi…
Sugandha jaise hi wahan se hati, Roopam aur Mayank ke sath 4 ladke aur jut gaye…
Mayank:- Doston ye aawara humari Jugnu didi ke pichhe pada hai. Muh bacha kar maarna. Hone wali bhabhi ka ladla hai…
Som khada chup chpa unki suna aur chup chap wahan se jane laga. Som jaise hi apna kadam badhaya ek ladke ne paun me rassi fansa diya. Som ladkhada kar jaise hi gira, turant 2 ladke pith par chadh gaye aur 2 ladke jangh par baith kar uska paun baandh diya. Pith par wala ladka dono hath pichhe se bandh diya.
Som ko utha kar jaldi se uske kamre me le kar aaye. Kamre me lane ke baad uske muh me kapda daal kar chahre ke niche jahan marji wahan laat hath chalate….
Ek ladka Agni:- Tumhare hi tranee hai Som sir. Par kya karen jitni chhut Kalpna madam ne aap ko di thi utna hume na dee. Hum pakde jate hai.
Roopam:- Apne seniors aur teacher ko kaise maarte the sir akele aap. Hume na sikhaoge.
Sath ka ek ladka Aakash.… "Ye sala feku, charsi. Akele iske baap ki aukaad na apne sath wale ko maar le, senior aur teacher ko maarta tha. Sala feku…"
Mayank:- Ye chutiya 5-6 ladkon ke group se maarta hoga aur rowdy akela bana tha.
Agni…. "Aaj hum bhi to apne senior ko maar rahe hain. Sala aise hi maarta tha aur kaise marega. Chutiye ne akele maarne ka aisa hawa failaya tha ki iske chakkar me seniors se ulti pitai hui thi."
Roopam:- Maar sale ko. Ek to dagabaaj group ka creadit akela liya. Upar se sale ka huliya to dekh. Chindi chor. Jugnu didi ko pata raha hai… Sala 2 din se mauka dhundh rahe the… Lekin kabhi akele hi na rahe… Bhabhi ke sath hi rahta aur uske baad kamra lock…
Sabhi ladke bol bhi rahe the aur farsh par lita kar usse maar bhi rahe the. 11th, 12 th me sabhi padhne wale ladke the. Khud se 8-9 sal senior student se pite ja rahe the. Lagbhag adhmari si haalat thi Som ki. Sabhi ladke video record bhi kar rahe the aur dialogues ke sath maarna bhi jari tha. Poori tarah se maarne ke baad Som ko wahin bandha chhod kar nikal gaye.
Unke jate hi Som ne kisi tarah khud ko azad kiya. Call kar ke reception se ek staff ko bulwaya aur thande barf ki sikai chalti rahi. Shukr tha ki kahin koi haddi fracture nahi thi.
Subah der tak jab Som Diksha ke pass nahi pahuncha, Diksha chinta me uske kamre ke pass pahunchi. 3-4 baar khat khatayi, lekin Som ne darwaja nahi khola. Diksha hotel staff ko bula kar uss kamre ka darwaja khulwa kar ander aayi. Ander Som sukoon se leta hua tha.
Diksha uske sar ke pass baith kar uske chehre ko dhyan se dekhne lagi. Pyar se uske balon par hath chalati… "Som uth na. Sommm"..
Som apni aankhen khol kar dekha. Fir aakhen mund kar muskurate huye… "Teri menhdi hai na. Yahan kya kar rahi hai"
Diksha:- Kuchh din tak to mere pass itna rah ki lagne lage pichhla poora gape maintain ho gaya. Mann nahi lag raha tere bina. Uth na Som…
Som:- Menhdi to ladies karyakarm hai na. Wahan mujhe allowed karenge kya…
Diskha:- Hoo .. nude aur strip show chalega kya jo ladkon ko allowed na karenge. Aur yadi aise shows chal rahe hote to mere Purusom Malhotra ji sab ko char thappad lagate kahte… Kya kahta….
Som, hanste huye… "Bloody bitches"
Diskha:- Achha Som tu ab tak virgin hai ya fir…
Som, kuchh der khamosh rahne ke baad.. Virgin…
Diksha:- Som tujhe ladki me intrest kyon nahi…??
Som:- Tujh me nahi hai kya? Ya tu khud ko ladki nahi manti…?
Diksha:- Meri baat alag hai. We grow like brother and sister grow. Bus thodi freedom hai ki main tujh se apni un problems or moments ko bhi share kar sakti hun jo brother se share nahi kar sakti. But I am talking about negative sex attraction… Wo completely nil hai. Aise akele kab tak rahega… Teri chinta hoti hai. Bahut jyada.…
Som:- Main teri shadi enjoy karne aaya hun. Rahi baat teri chinta ki to tere rahte main kabhi akele ho sakta hun kya? Kya shadi ke baad hi ek insan khush rah sakta hai ya uska akelapan dur hoga.
Diskha:- Baton me uljha mat..
Som:- Sorry main kisi point ko proof nahi kar raha. Bus ek baat ka jawab de de… Kya jabardasti meri shadi kar dene se teri chinta dur hogi ya mera koi official pata ho….
Diskha:- Official adress with phone number aur jis ladki se kahun milne, milega. Date karega… pasand aa gayi to baat aage badhayenge.. that's my wedding gift..
Som:- Diya tera wedding gift. Chal ab smile kar…
Diskha:- Simile kya lafter deti hun… Achha Som tujhe Jugnu kaisi lagti hai…
Som:- Jugnu ke liye mujhe 6 ladke kal raat bandh kar maare hain…
Diksha:- Juniors
Som:- Haan, super juniors..
Diksha:- Sorry shayad main reason hun. Mujhe unke samne school ke seniors ki pitai ki baat nahi karni chahiye thi…
Som:- Kya ho gaya hai in ladkon ko. Khud ko proof karne ke liye bandh kar pit rahe hain.
Diksha:- Tujhe kahan kahan chot lagi hai..?
Som:- Minior internal injury hai. Aaj subah-subah hospital se full check-up karva kar aaya tha. Jyada gadbad hoti to fir hafte din aage teri shadi le jata lekin poora enjoy kar ke jata. Hat ab chalte hain… teri menhdi bhi to hai… Woohoo.. abhi hum dono 2 peg lagayenge aur fir… Yoo masti time..
Diksha:- No, mujhe kayi tarah ke pooja par baithna hoga. Alag alag rashmen hongi…
Som:- Chal thik hai. Tu ja main aaya..
Diksha:- Jaldi aana re Purusom
Som:- Main chidha dunga to rone lagegi…
Diksha:- Aaj aur kal mat rulana please…
Diksha wahan se nikal gayi. Som bhi taiyar ho kar pahunch gaya. Lawn ke ek hisse me hi menhdi program rakha gaya tha. Ek kinare ladke wale dusre kinare ladki wale. Diksha, Som ko apne pass hi bithayi. Rashmen nibhayi ja rahi thi aur Diksha, Som ke kandhe se sar tika kar itne dhimi baat kar rahi thi ki hath me haldi lagane wale tak uski baat nahi sun pa rahe the. Ek ghanta bita hoga jab dulhe paksh ke, dulhe ke rishte ke bhai-bahan ek sath pahunche the. Shayad mahol jamane ke liye liitle-little le kar aaye hon. Ladke walon ke side se jor se hooting ke sath comments shuru ho gaye…
"Hone wali bhabhi, dahej me ek bun puppi la rahi hai kya? Hath hi nahi chhod rahi ye to."
"Bhabhi to sir tikaye muskura'kar kitne pyar se baat kar rahi. Hum se kabhi baten kar leti bhabhi"
"Kyon Som sir fit dikh rahe hain kafi. Lagta hai raat ko achhi exercise hui hai"
"Aaj to Som sir bhi menhdi lagayenge. Kyon sir"
"Raat ko suna tha muh tootne bach gaya tha. Itna gaanja kyon foonkte ho sar. Saste nashe ka concept aap ko hi dekh kar aaya hoga."
"Are itne salon tak school me chipke rahe dono.. ab to chhod do bhabhi. Thoda humare bhai ka bhi khyal rahkho"
"Waise bechare humare Som sir, apni ex ko khud apne hatho se vida karenge.. Kaleja hona chahiye"..
"Humare bhai ki kismat. Pahla dulha hoga jo Dulhan ke ex boyfriend ko uske pass baithna allowed bhi kiya hai aur ek aakhri baar dono ke emotion share karne ka mauka de rahe"
"Mujhe to lagta hai ek couple ne apna relation safe karne ke liye ek filmy dosti ka concept develope kiya hai. Kya kahti ho bhabhi, direct bf bol deti, hum sab ke bhi hain… ab to chhod do…"
Ek ke baad lagataar comments aane lage the. Sabhi teenagers hansi mazak me kuchh jyada hi ander ghus gaye. Paranshu kuchh bolne ko hua tab Diksha usse kuchh na react karne ka ishara kar rahi dee. Ladka paksh wale hans kar un ladke ladkiyon ko protsahit karte huye kah rahe the, "ye bus fun hai aur mazak ka jawab mazak me de. Hume Diksha aur Som ke bare me koi galat feeling nahi"…
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Ishq ki mauj mein aa
Aaja behne ke liye
Tu zaroori, zaroori sa hai
Mujhko zinda rehne ke liye
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Update:-15
Diksha samajh rahi thi ki ye comments kis refrence me aa rahe the. Gussa to usse khub aaya, lekin chehre se bhavna jahir na karti…
Diksha:- Kuchh to bol Som. Kewal wahi bol rahe hain. Bejjati ho jayegi…
Som:- Lekin main kya bolun…
Diksha:- Jo bhi bol, unke kaleje me aisi aag lag jani chahiye ki tujhe maarne ke liye fir se vyakul ho jaye…
Som, Diksha ke gaal ko thap-thapate huye khada ho gaya. Comments aur hooting ab bhi jari the…
"Hello kids. I m your Som sir. Diksha mujh se boli……"
"Kyon sir wahi bolegi to aap bolenge warna bolne nahi aata hai kya"… Ladkon walon ke ore se bich me kisi ne bola…
"Bolne ka yahi matlab na, tum mujhe koso, galiyan do, tarifen karo ya apni aap biti sunao, ye sab bakwas hai mere liye. Jaise main abhi kar raha hun aur tum sab sun rahe ho. Isse hi bolna kahte ho na"
Ladke paksh se ek ladki… "Mature nahi hai na sir jo desh ki politics discuss kare. Sab aise hi baat karte hain"..
"Kisi anjaan se to nahi karte na usse pakad kar. Som sir ka ek close Diksha hai aur Som sir ke pass itna waqt nahi ki ek Diksha se poori baat kar le, fir kyon ummid lagaye baithe ho ki Som sir kisi ko aa kar tokega. Basically isse clarification kahte hain jo tum jaise faltu log sun'na pasand karte ho, ki wo falana kyon aisa karta hai ya kyon aisa nahi karta?
"Bich me kisi ko rok kar chilla kar apni baat rakh rahe… Basically tum logon ko itne faltu baat karne ki aadat ho gayi hai ki apne bolne ke mauke par faltu ki bakwas karoge. Aur jab tumhari baton ka jaise hi jawab milna shuru hoga tab tumhe yaad aata hai ki ohhh mera ye point rah gaya."
"Hello over smart babies, ek baar me jab 20 log mil kar kisi ko gher rahe the tab point dimag me nahi aaya jo dusre ke point sun ne ke baad tumhe baat yaad aa rahi. Itne faltu ho gaye ki tumhare faltu dimag me point tab yaad aa rahe hain jab koi bolna shuru kiya. Wo bhi uss insan ki baat sun kar tumhe point yaad aa rahe jiske liye nafrat dikha rahe the. Kitna faltu ho gaye ho. Madam yahan hoti to chhadi se maar kar chamdi udher deti"
"Aur ye chilla kar bich me baat katna ko kya over smartness samjhte ho. Bahut jyada smartness dikhane ke chakkar me khud ko certify kar rahe ho ki dekh lo kitne faltu hai hum. Ummid hai ab khud ko faltu sabit nahi karoge"..
"Back to the point mere dost ne kaha kuchh to bolo. Hum ladki walon ki bejjati ho rahi hai. Ab tum logon ki tarah main kaun sa aisa faltu teasing pados dun jo bhid ko sun'ne me achha lage. Khair, dimag in mamlon me itna nahi chalta. Mujhe facts kahne aate hain aur main facts hi kahta hun. Koi mathematician ho to haath utha dena shayad aage jaroorat pade."
"Bahut sal pahle main boarding school me aaya tha. Kafi dara hua sa aur jo bahri outlook hota hai wo bilkul aaj ki tarah hi uss umr me bhi tha. Boarding ke pahle din se hi ek miss ko rakha gaya tha hume ready kar ke class me bhejne ke liye. Miss Rosa, usne apne hath khade kar diye. Kalpna madam ne bhi unhe bol diya tha… "Leave that child. Jaise rahta hai rahne do"
"Maine bilkul shuru se shuru kiya hai lekin quick glimps lenge poore facts par. So mere huliye ki wajah se koi ek student nahi tha, jo mere pass aa kar baithe. Sabhi gardian un 7 din ke demo class me, jahan unhe dikhaya jata tha ki aap ke bacche aap ke bagair kaise honge boarding school me. Un 7 din me koi bhi parent ne apne bacche ko mere pass baithne ke liye allowed nahi kiya. They usually said… "Dirty boy.. ganda ladka hai wo, uske pass mat jao"
"5 din tak mera bench khali tha 6th day Mishra ji aur Mishrayan ji ki ladki, chhoti Diksha ne class me entry li thi. Mujhe aaj bhi acche se yaad hai. Chhoti Diksha… Class ke gate se khadi ho kar kahti hai… "Yahan koi bolta kyon nahi"… Madam ne Diksha se kaha tha, "koi nahi bolta to tum bol lo lekin kisi ek bench par baithne ke baad"…
"Bahut se bench ab bhi khali the jahan parent ko apne bacche ke liye koi sutaible sathi na mile to single bench par bitha do, aage unki destiny school me kaun dost banta hai ya unki kismat me single bench hi likha hai. 1st class me hi har bench par 3-4 students the."
"Parent jane se pahle apne baby ke liye achhe doston ke group pahli class me hi de kar jana chahte the. Apne class aur society se match karne wale parent ke bache aamuman sath me ek bench par hote the. Pahli class me to kayi baar itne bench jud jate ki poora class hi sathi lagta tha aur unme hum jaisa koi bachha ho to single bench hi unki kismat thi"
"Chhoti Diksha pahli aisi ladki thi jo apne parent ke sath class nahi ghumi aur na hi unke parents ne ungli pakad kar apne choice ke student ke bench par bithaya apni beti ko. Wo poore class ghumi aur mere pass aa kar baith gayi, chhoti aur pyari Diksha. Baith kar mujhe bhinch kar gale lagayi chhoti Diksha. Gale lag kar mujh se kahi thi… "Mera naam Diksha Mishra hai, aur tumhara?"
"Ek parent ne dhime se Mishra ji se kaha, "Aap ki beti ek low class boy ke sath baithi hai. Aap 1st class kyon dekhte hain, agle 12 sal yahin rahne wale hain.".. Mishra ji ne muskura kar un mahasay ko jawab diya tha, "fir to meri bacchi iss umr se achhe descision lena sikh gayi hai"
"Mujhe kabhi nahi samjh me aaya unhone kyon aisa kaha. Haan lekin anubhavi insan hai kuchh soch kar hi kaha hoga. 24 ghante me se hum 16 ghante sath hote the. Bache 8 ghanton me sone se lekar har wo seperate kaam ho jate the jo hum sath nahi kar sakte."
"16 ghante, 365 din aur 12 sal.…. Chhota sa Som aur Chhoti si Diksha… Humare bich baap beti, maa beta ya bhai bahan jaisa rishta nahi, warna hume kabhi kisi ko samjhana nahi padta. Lata Mishra aur Kapendra Mishra ko aaj bhi wahi Diksha dikhti hogi, jaisa wo iss duniya me aayi. Haan shabdon me rahta hai badi ho gayi. Body aur physique ko dekh kar wo Diksha ko mazak me ya seriously, direct or indirect kuchh salikha sikha sakte hain. Ya maa beti me thode mazak ho sakta hai, lekin feeling me uss maa ke liye wo pahle din ki hi Diksha rahegi. Thik yahi Pranshu ke parent ke sath bhi hoga… Lekin Chhoti Diksha aur Chhota Som ye nahi samjha sakte kisi ko ki hum aaj bhi ek dusre ke liye chhote-chhote hain."
"Sorry thoda bhavuk ho gaya tha aur sab ke bich rah kar main bhi thoda bakwas karna sikh gaya hun. Facts par aata hun. 16 ghante 365 din aur 12 sal…. Itne waqt ka sath hai humara. Main facts par baat karta hun to facts bata dun. Koi calculate kar ke batayega kisi insan ke sath 1 din me 16 ghante bitao to 12 sal me wo kitne sal ka sath bana"
Kisi ne:- 8 sal
"Chalo isme bhi main 1 sal minus kar deta hun. Kabhi mujhe jana pada ho ya fir kabhi Diksha ko. Ab ek married couple ki life lete hain. 40 sal sath bita liye. Let's check ki in 40 salon me unhone kitna samay ek dusre ke sath bitaya. Aap payenge unke din ya raat ya kisi bhi waqt ke romance time ko chhod diya jaye to ek dusre ke sath muskil se poore din agar 2 ghante bitaye to strong bounding couples kahlate hain jo ki aaj kal rare hain. Social media aane ke baad to ab couple ke ek din ka total spending time 10 minute ka bhi nahi rah gaya hai. Mobile ka screen dekte dekhte romance time aa jata hai aur uss moment me jitni baten ho saki to ho saki"…
"I can say proudly, humare sath hone ka waqt itna lamba hai jitna waqt ek couple apne life time me apne sathi ke sath, purely utna waqt nahi bita pate. Baithkar wo utni der ek dusre se baat nahi kar sakte.
"Haan lekin, ek maa apne bacche ke sath iss se jyada waqt bitati hai. Wo ek din me romance time ko chhod kar, ghar ke kaam bhi karte rahti hai to bhi apne bacche ke sath hi rahti hai. Bacche jab bade ho jate hai, humari tumhari tarah young, to bhi time spend karna pasand karti hai…"
"So mere dost uss school me Diksha apne ek bacche ke sath 12 sal tak thi. Som apne ek bacche ke sath 12 sal tha. Main uska maa tha aur wo mere liye maa thi. Kisi ne kaha ki main rote huye apni ex-girlfriend ko vida karunga.''
"Sach kahun aisa hota to main apna ek toota realtion vida kar raha hota. Lekin abhi mere dost, apni aatma tumhare yahan vida karunga. Rona nahi aayega kya? Yes I am crying.. yes I will cry.. Ab to sukoon tabhi milega jab lagega ki haan Diksha khush hai… Kyonki Mishra aur Mushryan ji ki tarah meri dharkane bhi tej hai, iss baat ko lekar ki nayi jagah naye log aur culture bilkul alag hai, uske aage ka naya safar kaisa hoga?
"Yes I am crying. Kyonki aane wali zindgi me uski priority change ho jayegi. Naye safar me wo mujhe se alag ho jayegi. Ab main uski wo priority nahi rahunga, fir chahe baton se koi kitna bhi tasalli de de. Aa raha hai dost, Iss baat ko soch kar rona aa raha … yess I am caring.. I will cry.. Sorry .. aaj bhavnao me kuchh jyada hi bakwas ho gaya."
Som kahta raha rota raha. Diksha sunti rahi roti rahi. Khada ho kar apni baat kahne wala Som aadhe raste apni kahte-kahte niche biath raha. Baithi hui Diksha roti-roti apna sar Som ke god me rakh chuki thi. Ek kah raha tha dusri sun rahi thi aur aansuon se bhinge aankhon ke pichhe wahi 16X365X12 ki tasveeren chal rahi thi.
Na to wahan fir Diksha ruk payi aur na hi Som. Naa hi iske baad dono ek dusre ko face kar paye, isliye alag-alag rote rahe. 11.30 baje ki menhdi rashm lagbhag 4 baje shuru hui. Dono itna roye the ki aanken suj gayi thi. Lata Mishra ke hath dono ke sar par gaye. Kapendra Mishra dono ko puchkarte rahe. Ji bhar ro liye aur rone ke baad jaise hi uthe dono fir se sath me the.
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Ishq ki mauj mein aa
Aaja behne ke liye
Tu zaroori, zaroori sa hai
Mujhko zinda rehne ke liye
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Samajik dayero se pare tha ye update .is tarah ka jivan kathin hai behad kathin .
Sale kameene super junior itani jurrat. 
Agar kewal juganu ko lekar mara piti karte to bhi theek tha, bhai ke lihaj se chinta sahi hai, per school ki baat uchhal ker bahut galat kiya. In chirkuton ko to achchhe se inaki aukat dikhana chahiye. Lagta hai yaha madam ka role aham hone wala hai.
Ho sake to ek bar ragging wala scene dal dena, kasam se College ke group ragging ki yaadein taaza ho jayengi aur kaleje ko thandak bhi mil jaayegi. Sala senior se battamiji.
Agar kewal juganu ko lekar mara piti karte to bhi theek tha, bhai ke lihaj se chinta sahi hai, per school ki baat uchhal ker bahut galat kiya. In chirkuton ko to achchhe se inaki aukat dikhana chahiye. Lagta hai yaha madam ka role aham hone wala hai.
Ho sake to ek bar ragging wala scene dal dena, kasam se College ke group ragging ki yaadein taaza ho jayengi aur kaleje ko thandak bhi mil jaayegi. Sala senior se battamiji.
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Bahut hi emotional
