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Romance >>> Too Young !! Too Old (Completed) <<<

Naina

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Hahaha hahaha itni subah subah update kaun maangta hai re baba... 😂😂😂😂

Abhi chal chalav me hun... Aur raste se baithe baithe aaram se comment reply kar sakta hun so main kar raha... Kaam par nikla hun .. aur kuchh baten bina kahe poori kar dete hain jab feel hota nahi update de dena chahiye ... Wo bhi bina demand kiye...

Upar se kaam shuru hua hai reserve updates khali hote gaye to update me gape aa jayenge... Ab se sirf 2 din hi to likh pata hun sat aur saunday
Vyas vs Som :waiting:
aur haan jeet Vyas ki ho taaki logo pata chale ki nasha karna sehat ke liye hanikarak hai :booze:
 

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Lata wahin round table par apna sar rakh kar phoot phoot kar rone lagi... "Tu pahle kyon nahi aaya Som. Kyon sab se dur gaya tha. Tujhe mehsus nahi hua kya hum kitne dard me hain."


Som, Lata ke chehre se aanshu saaf karte... "Mishrayan ji abhi aa gaya hun na... Rona band karo"…


Lata:- Aaj mera beta hota to mujhe itna dard jhelna nahi padta na..
So emotional scene 😭....
Som:- Beta bahar naukri kar raha hota tab kya karti? Apni galti nahi dekho. Sia se baat hoti thi na, usse kyon na kuchh batayi?


Lata:- Uss bacchi se main kya kahti... Bula leti usse England se... Kahti tera bhai nakara hai isliye tu meri paresaniyan samajh. Aur wo yahan kyon nahi aayi.. Bharat laut to aayi hai...


Som:- Fir se bhawuk. Sab kuchh jante huye bhi.... Sia kyon nahi aayegi kya aap ko pata nahi ya Diksha ko pata nahi...


Lata:- Topic change mat kar... Mishra ji yadi faansi laga lete to sirf tu jimmedar hota...
Matbal sia aur shimala me kuchh to bada sa lafada hai...are mishrain ji kahe chinta Kar rahi hai neta ji khud ko fansi laga le itna kamjor thodi honge...agar itna hi kamjor hote to mp mla na ban pate...so chill lata ji...
Som:- Aap ka matlab hai Diksha jo company chhod jayegi usse…


Lata:- Company hum dono ke naam par hai.. Diksha ki kaise hui...
Aapki istory me ye company ka owner hona aam baat hai ...aur 1000 - 2000 carore ki sampati hona aur aam baat...
Som:- Daru pini hai…


Lata:- Chhi chhi... Tujhe shrm nahi aati aisi baat puchhte...


Som:- To jao na.. yahan abhi pine ka programe hai..


Lata:- Jab itna bol hi diya hai beta to thik hai laa glass, main bhi tere sath hi baith kar aaj pi hi leti hun..
Ek bewada sabko bewada bana deta hai..ye suna tha aaj dekh bhi liya...
Lata:- Maine apne damad ki jo supadi dee thi wo kaam kab hoga?


Som:- Ye ek aur naya drama. 2 din hai shadi me. Kabhi bhi pakad lunga. Chup, poori baat pahle suno. Pakadne se pahle bula lunga. Matter close ab bhago jaldi
Ek pal ko aisa laga ki pranshu bhi golmal ke chakkar me Amit ki tarah...
Pranshu:- But first day, jab tum dono mile the to mom ne tumhe thappad lagaya tha...


Diksha:- Ristedaron ke kalejon ko thandak pahunchane ke liye…


Pranshu:- Aur wo papa ji ka gussa...


Diksha:- Duffer, har kisi ke liye seperatel
Matbal pranshu ka chutiya Kat gaya...kaha wo soch rha hoga ki ham to hero hai Jo relatives ke samane diksha ke paksh me akele khada rha..but yaha to mamala hi Ulta hai...bechara pranshu...
Lata, Som ko aise aankhen dikhayi mano kha jayegi. Som isharon me hi shant rahne ke liye bol diya. Itne me Diksha wahan se chali gayi. Uske jate hi Lata kuchh ishara karne lagi aur Som na me sar hilane laga... 3-4 baar aise hi repeat hota raha...


Pranshu:- Kya hua aap dono ye isharon isharon me kya kah rahe ho...


Lata:- Dekh puchh liya isne...


Som:- Mishrayan ji pagal ho gayi ho...


Pranshu:- What Mishrayan...


Lata, Pranshu ke reaction ko ignore karti…. "Main hi shuru karti hun"…


Som:- Pagal ruko... Main karta hun...


Pranshu:- I think mujhe yahan nahi hona chahiye… Kuchh bhi samjh me nahi aa raha hai.


Som:- Sir ek minute yahan pass baith jaeye...


Pranshu jaise hi uske karib baitha, Som uske gale ki tie ko fanda bana'kar khinch diya aur sar ko table se chipka diya. Pranshu chhatpata raha tha, wo chilla na paye isliye uska muh band kar diya... 20 second dum ghutne ki haalat me rakha fir Som ne chhod diya...
In this situation pranshu in his mind...
Bechara pranshu...
Lata:- Mere paitrik khandan me kewal gunde hi paida liye the. UP ke dabang Mishra jamindar family. Meri kismat, Mishra ji jaise sudhh aadmi se shadi hui. Abhi kal Diksha ke mama aayenge to samjh jaoge uska nanihal..


Som:- Itni boundry baandhni jaroori hai kya? Abhi main kuchh bol dunga to muh chhota
Matbal yaha par some was rock.. public shock...
Lata Mishra, Pranshu ko dekh kar shant rahne ka ishara karti... "Mera beta hai to hua na Mishra... Point par aati hun... Yadi meri beti ko jarra bhi taklif hui to tumhe chhod'kar, tumhara poora khandan gayab ho jayega, aur tumhe sirf jinda chhodenge. Bistar par tumhe sari umr paal lenge... Isliye."


Pranshu:- Isliye mujhe sasur ji kahte the ki Neta ke naam se kewal bhay ka mahol paida kiya gaya hai. Asli neta kaun hai wo samjh jaoge...


Lata:- Sahi samjhe... Mishra ji ki mujh se shadi na hui hoti na to uska bada bhai aur uske khud ke maa-baap kab ka katora pakda kar nikal dete... Pariwar me balance hona chahiye... Kya samjhe..


Pranshu:- Haan haan samjh gaya...


Lata:- Kya samjhe??


Pranshu:- Yahi ki meri kaki (Sugandha) sach kahti hai... Ladki aur uske papa ko chhod'kar tera poora sasural mental hai aur sabse jyada mental aur awara wo Som hai...


Som:- Mishrayan ji thoda daring wala lagta hai. Bina dare bol gaya. Pass kar dete hain... Suno Pranshu babu.... We are family. Yahan koi ek rota hai to dard sabko hota hai... Isliye khushi share karo ki na karo..
Ye pranshu to jigarwala nikla yaar ...ise to koi fark hi nhi pada..
Lata:- Mama to nahi hi bulayega, jyada deep ghusoge to papa bolna sikha dungi, chalega na
Jab khud ki sasu maa aisa bol rhi hai to duniya ka kya kahana...kahi aisa na ho ki pranshu hi Mama ban Jaye😅..
Lata:- To apni kaki ki ladki Jugnu se iske rishte ki baat kar...
Som to most eligible bachalour ka khitab apne naam kiya hua hai...
Diksha ki maa Lata, apni beti ko aate dekh uth gayi. Som ke chehre par hath ferti pyar se uske gaal ko chumti, dhime se uske kano me kahne lagi….


"Wo dono (Amit aur Madhurima) mere ghar me the. Humare sath hanse, bole parivar me sadasya ki tarah rahe aur ander hi anader apne yojna par kaam karte rahe. Jab tak baat mere samjh me aati tab tak bahut der ho chuki thi. Sab kand ho chuka tha aur main nahi chahti thi ki mera beta kisi se badla le. Isliye khud me hi santosh kar lee ki jo gaya usse jane do, jo bacha hai usse hi bacha leti hun. Bahut toot gaye the Mishra ji, par Diksha ne sab sambhal liya."


"Lekin dekh, jis din un dono (Amit aur Madurima) ne Diksha se phone par baat kari, ussi din maine apne bete ko sab bata diya. Bataya tha ki nahi. Tune mujh se kaha shadi par kewal dhyan dene aur fir maine palat kar un dono ke bare me socha tak nahi. Isliye tu dil chhota na kar. Shayad upar wala hum sab ke hausle ka imtihaan le rahe the aur hum sab distinction se pass kar liya. Shadi se fursat hoti hun to apni bacchi se milne aaungi."


Lata Mishra apni baat kah kar uthi aur pyar se Pranshu ke chehre par hath ferne lagi. Pranshu bhi chutki lete puchhne laga… "Mammi ji chupke se kya baat kar gayi. Mujhe sun'ne tak nahi di."
Som ko ye sab baate pata hai lata ji..aur kahe usse guilty feel karwa rhi hai...
Diksha ki maa muskurati hui pyar se Pranshu ke sar par hath ferti hui nikal gayi. Diksha samne se Amit aur Madhurima ko le kar aa rahi thi. Amit aur Madhurima ke chehre aise lag rahe the mano bomb par bitha kar hasne bol diya ho. Dari sahmi si hansi. Paanchon ke peg ban'ne lage...


Diksha:- Yaar sabhi couple me hai... Siway Som ke. Prince can you do something…


Amit:- Disco hai kya jo couple ki jaroorat hogi..


Diksha, chhota sa muh banati… "Sorry thoda stupid tha na ye."


Som:- Kuchh jyada hi. Kya kahenge .. ek ladke ko pine ke liye ek ladki ki company chahiye… anyone please…


Diksha:- Ya, bolne ke baad samjh me aaya... Khair, ye toast... Mere bestie Som ke naam... Prince please abhi hum close nahi hai so don't feel it baby.. jab humari kahani aage badhegi tab iss line ko adjust kar lenge…


Pranshu:- Ya I know honey... Tum itna explain kyon karti ho...


Diksha, Pranshu ke aankhon me dekhti... "You are the best Pranshu. Main shuru se janti thi papa mere liye best hi chunege..."
As usual dosto ke bich ki baate...
Pranshu:- Second best... First to koi aur tha…


Diksha:- At least you don't say like that, please...
Launde ke man me bhi ye baat hai ki I am a second choice of diksha's father...isiliye ye baat munh se nikal gaya....
Madhurima:- Agar ye one to one chat ho gayi ho to hum toast kar len... Ek ne to pina shuru bhi kar diya...


Diskha, Som ko ghurne lagi... Som hawa me glass uthate... "I am very happy… bus karan na puchho aur jaam takra do"


Lambi si mehfil lagi thi. Ek poora khushnuma sa mahol tha. Som, Diksha ka hansta chehra dekh kar ander se kafi khush tha. Pranshu ka vyavhaar bhi dil ko utna hi sukoon dene wala tha. Kahin se ek jarra aisa nahi ki wo dikhane matr ke liye formality kar raha ho, jo aamuman har naya rishta judne ke purv hota hai. 2-3 ghante me aaram se 3-4 peg lene ke baad sabhi ek dusre ko good night bol kar wahan se nikal gaye.


Raat ke takriban 1 baje sab ki night to good ho gayi lekin shayad Som ke liye ye raat kuchh jyada hi lambi hone wali thi. Jis Jugnu ka naam Som ke sath lagaatar joda ja raha tha ek alag hi nafrat ki kahani rach chuka tha, jisme Som aur Diksha ke rishte ko bhi bhari mehfil me uchhalne ki taiyari poori ho chuki thi, taki Diksha aur uska poora parivar Som ko khud bahar ka rasta dikha de.
Ab dekhate hai kaun Naya dushman aa gaya ..ya Amit aur madhurima hi koi sajish rach rahi hai...but I think Jo bhi hai usse som aur diksha ke family relation ki Puri jankari nhi hai...nhi to wo aisa kadam hargij nhi uthate...
 

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nice update ..to som ko mishrayan ne bataya tha amit aur madhurima ke baare me ..

lata ne pranshu ki achche se parakh kar li 😁..
lata ke pariwar me sab gunde hi hai ,sirf pati aur ladki hi shant swabhaw wale hai ..

lata ka vyavhaar ek maa ki tarah hi hai som ke saath 😍..
aur lata bhi daring wali hai ,sidha uthake laane ko keh diyaa jugnu ko 🤣🤣..

amit aur madhurima ki hawa tight hai par dikha nahi rahe 😁..

aur ye kaun hai jo nafrat me planning kar raha hai som ko yaha se bhagane ki dekhte hai 🤔🤔..

Jesssss aapne jo bhi likha hai wo sat pratisat satya likha hai aur satya ke siwa kuchh na likha hai.... Bus aakhri ke sawal ... Ab sawal to sawal hote hai nutural back ground ke ... Baharhaal abhi hi pata chal jayega ki kya hua aur kya nahi...
 

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Sala MAUT ke darshan karne ke baad bhi parshu jis tarah se vyavhar Kiya wakai kabile tarif hai.
Sir ji kaun sa kirdar is kahani ka achchha nahin hai? ek chhota se chhota role wala bhi apani chhap chhoda hai. Pichhale update me Mishra ji aur Diksha lajwab lage to aaj mishrain aur parshu ne dil jeeta.
Aur ye saajish karne se baaj kyo nahi aate log.
Abhi madam aana baki hai :D ... Kalpna madam ke liye bhi kuchh shabd bacha kar rakhe ... Baharhaal bola to tha slow romance likhunga iss baar wahi likh raha hun... Enjoy to kar rahe hain e khali apne emotion me jarra khul ke bata dijiye ... Aur thankooo very much :hug:
 
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