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Gana bhi na gawaa dun... Ye bandhan to pyar ka bandhan hai... Janmo ka ye sangam hai..Vyas ko Som ka jijja banana hi hoga ju kophir Som Vyas ke aage piche ji jija, ji jija karta phirega
Phir Som be like
Jo jija bolenge wohi Som karega![]()
Mujhe bas intezaar hai to Vyas aur Sia ke pyar ki suruwat ki.. Phir to wo Som ka bacha bhi darta darta phire apne jijje Vyas seGana bhi na gawaa dun... Ye bandhan to pyar ka bandhan hai... Janmo ka ye sangam hai..
Lekin mujhe Vyas the great ko Jackie Shroff ke rup mein imagine karne mein kafi taklif ho raha hey.....Vyas ko Som ka jijja banana hi hoga ju kophir Som Vyas ke aage piche ji jija, ji jija karta phirega
Phir Som be like
Jo jija bolenge wohi Som karega![]()
Aap bhi hain ... Kya gf ne kasam de rakhi hai ki batao hi na nain ki kahani padh rahe...Lekin mujhe Vyas the great ko Jackie Shroff ke rup mein imagine karne mein kafi taklif ho raha hey.....
Som fir bhi Salu ke rup mein chalega.......

Your story is so so good mere paas words hi nehi rahete ki kuch tippani (comments ) karne ke liye. Is liye chup chap padhta rahta hun. Yeh forum mein every day Som and Vyas ke liye hin ata hun sachi mein.....Aap bhi hain ... Kya gf ne kasam de rakhi hai ki batao hi na nain ki kahani padh rahe...
Pahle to aise na the...![]()
Your words keep my energy high... Bus itna hi kahna hai... Kuchh bhi likhiye achha lagegaYour story is so so good mere paas words hi nehi rahete ki kuch tippani (comments ) karne ke liye. Is liye chup chap padhta rahta hun. Yeh forum mein every day Som and Vyas ke liye hin ata hun sachi mein.....

Titishukriya
acchee anubhav kya rahe?
new story ke liye badhai


Kabhi kabhi to comedy likhta hun

Chhota... Ideal word main 1800 se 2000 rakha hai... Extended 2300 word ka diya... Fir bhi chhota... Lag raha...Are yrrrr itna mast update magar utna hi chota![]()