Adultery THUKRA KE MERA PYAAR

[Sahil97]

Vo chun nahi rahi chun chuki hai bas ab usko udne do hawa me han kabhi kabhi uske Mann me daubt jarur dalna ke kahi kuch galat to nahi ho raha or story dekh kar lagta hai ke dhokha pahle vidhayak ki side se milega rachna kyoki vidhayak bhi jhoot bol kar or bholu ka credit kha kar hi rachna ko lapet raha hai or pelega bhi jo better bhi hai ke vo andar se toot jayegi usko pata chalega ke Paisa important hai par sab kuch nahi or ijjat se badh kar to bilkul bhi nahi or fir pachtayegi... Par ek kahwat hai ke fir pachtaye hot kya jab chidiya chug gayi khet to khet to vidhayak chug lega fir bholu ke pas jayegi looti hui tab bholu kya karega vo to already kai baar isharon me samjha chuka to baad me to rachna ki charo taraf se bajna taye hai.... Baki aisi orat ya mard samaj me hote hai jo hawas or paiso ke chakar me pariwar khatam kar dete hai bhugtana bachon ko padta hai

 

[THE snjv]

uske peechey mai bhi chal diya neechey aake dekha toh haal mey kaafi bheed aa chuki thi__

maine dekha vidhayak ne rachna ko ishare se apni taraf bulaya mai hall ke sabse peechey jnha thoda andhera par itna nhi ki koi khada ho wo dikhe na par abb mere kandhey jhuke hue bilkul nahi the main ab comfortably khada hua aur uss ki baatain sunne ke liye betaab tha__

tabhi ek reportar ne bola__

Reportar- sir aap kuch bolna chahenge iss nek kaam ke liye..

vidhayak-- haa haa wo mera bhi baccha h bacche jaisa hee toh h__ like family jab mujhe meri accountant miss rachna jee ne bataya ki wo kissss hadd tak paresaan h tab maine aage badh ke unki saari samasya apni khud ki samsya lagi aap toh jaante hee hai ki mujhe samaaj seva aur nekk kaam karne mey kitni khushi milti h.

tabhi dusra reportar bola__

reportar 2-- hamne toh suna hai aapne bina kuch poochey 10 lakh rupaye de diye miss rachna ke bacchey ke ilaaz ke liye

vidhayak -- haa aap log toh jante hee hai paise kitne important hote h usse kya kuch nahi ho sakta miss rachna ke bete ka ilaaz ho gaya kisi ki khwahishen poori ho jaati h isiliye paise sabko kamaane chahiye__ tabhi maine miss rachna ko ek flat gift karne ka faisla kiya h aur uske pati ko ek acchi naukri taaki wo apni biwi aur bacchey ka behtar tareeke se khayal rakh sake..

iss baat pe haal mey taliyaa bajne lagi rachna toh ye sunn ke phooli nahi sama rahi thi jis tareeke se wo vidhayak ko abhi dekh rahi thi usse mujhe andhaja ho gaya tha wo kya soch rahi hogi__

Uske baad aur kuch sawaalon hue par maine unn logo ko hee dekh raha tha jab bhi vidhyak kuch bolta toh wo apna ek hath rachna ke kandho pe zarur rakhta tha aur jab wo bolta toh rachna meri taraf ghurti aankhon se dekhne lagti__

tabhi jo bheed ke sabse peechey mgr mujhse thodi door pe kuch log baithey theyy unn se ek bol raha tha kya mast jodi h na vudhayak aur miss rachna ki__

tabhi mujhe mere kandho pe ek hath ke hone ka ahsaas hua_ wo nana sahab theyy..


tabhi kuch time vidhayak ka phone baja usne sabse thoda time manga aur side hatke call uthayi usne socha usse kisi mantri ne badhayi dene ke liye call kiya h par jaise jaise wo call sunn raha tha vaise vaise uske chehre ke bhaav badal rahe theyy__

tabhi usne deewar pe zor se mukka maara aur thoda dheere se chillaya __

vidhayak-- haraamkhoro kaise hua ye kaise __ tum sab jaantey ho na ye mere liye kitna keemti project tha kuch bhi karo muje wo chahiye kisi ko khareedo ya kisi ko maar do par wo mujhe laake do nahi toh aaj tum sab ka aakhiri din h mai aa raha hoon__

jaise hee usne phone kata vaise hee wo phir apne role mey aa gaya__

aur sab se jaane ke liye kaha__ par wo bechain bahot tha wo aaspaas nazar ghumaa ke dekh raha tha __

aakhir kiski itni himmat ho gayi jo mujhse takraane ynha aa gaya kaun h __ tabhi uski nazar mujhse takraayi meri shaant aur muskurati aankhain dekh ke ek pal ko wo soch mey padd gaya__

vidhayak khud se badbadaya-- nahi nahi ye toh ek mamooli gym trainer iss nalle ke bas ka kuch nahi zarur iss ke peechey opposition ka hath hoga haa unka hee hath hoga..

tabhi rachna mere paas aayi__nana sahab thoda peechey chale gaye..

rachna -- dekh rahe ho bholu vidhayak ji hampe kitne mehrbaan h abb hame uss khandar jaise ghar mey rahne ki koi zarurat nahi hogi__ aur tum bhi apne soch badlo aur zamaane ke sath chalna seekho__

mai uski baat sunn ke uske bilkul kareeb aa gaya__ rachna ne jaise meri aankhain padd lii ho wo thoda sahem see gayi_

me-- haa rachna vidhayak tumpe kuch jyada hee mehrbaan h__ aur koi bhi kisi ke liye itna sab free mey nahi karta__ ummeed karta hoon jab isska bill aayega tum usse chuka paao hahh

thodi time ko rachna ne socha ki bholu ko uspe sakk ho gaya h__ aur wo apni nakami ko chipaane ke liye ye sab bol raha h

rachna-- kitni ghatiya soch hai tumhari __ wo bhale aadmi hamari madad kar rahe hai wo ek neta h samaj sewak h aur tum itna ganda sochte ho hamare baare mey meri tumhari soch pe hee ghin aati h..

tabhi peechey se vidhayak aata h__

vidhayak-- chalo miss rachna mai tumhe ghar chodd du__

rachna -- haa sir ynha mera abb vaise bhi dum ghutne laga h chaliye

tabhi nana mere paas aaye aur mai bass rachna ko hee dekh raha tha__ usne ek baar bhi peechey mudd ke nahi dekha tha__

nana sahab-- hukum hamne ek door toh kaat dii hai__ aap kaho toh saari jameen hee kheench lu inki..

me-- nahi nana sahab udne do abhi inn logo kyuki jab mai inke neechey se jameen kheenchunga tab inko sirf narak se bhi bhattar zameen naseeb hogi..

mai wnha se seedha apne bete ke paas aa gaya__

apne bete ke mathey ko chum ke__

me-- beta tumhari maa ne toh apna saudaa kar diya par tera baap poori baaji hee palat dega__

udhar jab vidhayak rachna ko chod ke wapas apne addey pe pahuncha toh jaate hee usne apni gun se apne 2 aadmiyo ko goli maar dee__

vidhayak-- samne aao mere nikkamo samne aao

tabhi kai log dusre room se dheere dheere nikal ke uske samne aane lage__

ek bola-- sir maaf kardo hum nakam rahe hum kaam nahi kar paaye

vidhayak-- nahi kar paaye par kyu

usne uss aadmi ki ek taang pe fire kar diya jisse wo bilbilata hua wnhi peechey gir gaya aur zoro se chillane laga.. Tabhi vidhayak uske paas aaya

vidhayak-- abb Tujhe ahsaas ho raha hoga ki muje kaisa lag raha h janta bhi h uss project ki kitni keemat thi poore 120 crore wo aaims project paane ke liye maine 4 logo ko jaan se maar diya aur tu kah raha h mai naakam ho gaya__ Tu bolta mai naakam ho gaya hum kya hota h

tabhi wo dusro ki taraf gaya__ usne apni gun wapas rakh lii__

vidhayak-- kaun h wo jisne mujhse takkar lene kii zurrat ki kiski maut aayi h

Dusra aadmi-- sir hamne pata kiya h koi "" Holding company "" Se ye sab kar rhaa h unka kahna h hum kisi aise ke sath kaam nahi kar sakte jiske links blacklisted companies se ho par iske peechey kaun hai mai uska pata nahi laga paaya aur lagana bhi muskil h__

vidhayak ne gusse se beech mey kaanch ki table pe rakhe pot ko utha ke ussi table pe patak diya__

aur zor se chillate hue wnhi paas mey pade sofe pe baith gaya__ kaun h wo kaun h

idhar nana sahab..

sumer singh -- hamara agla kaam kya hoga hukum

Me-- aap apne unn aadmiyo se kaho jo uss vidhayak ke ynha h unse kaho ki wo unn politician ke ynha aana jaana badha de jo iss vidhayak ko support karte h phir abhi wo vidhayak do teen din issi sadme se nahi nikal paayega tab tak usse dusra jhatka mil jayega aur saari details secret hee rakhna __

abb aap jaiye ynha se par hoshiyaari se aaj mujhe chain se sona h baaki uss ki marji..

 

[ayush01111]

uske peechey mai bhi chal diya neechey aake dekha toh haal mey kaafi bheed aa chuki thi__

maine dekha vidhayak ne rachna ko ishare se apni taraf bulaya mai hall ke sabse peechey jnha thoda andhera par itna nhi ki koi khada ho wo dikhe na par abb mere kandhey jhuke hue bilkul nahi the main ab comfortably khada hua aur uss ki baatain sunne ke liye betaab tha__

tabhi ek reportar ne bola__

Reportar- sir aap kuch bolna chahenge iss nek kaam ke liye..

vidhayak-- haa haa wo mera bhi baccha h bacche jaisa hee toh h__ like family jab mujhe meri accountant miss rachna jee ne bataya ki wo kissss hadd tak paresaan h tab maine aage badh ke unki saari samasya apni khud ki samsya lagi aap toh jaante hee hai ki mujhe samaaj seva aur nekk kaam karne mey kitni khushi milti h.

tabhi dusra reportar bola__

reportar 2-- hamne toh suna hai aapne bina kuch poochey 10 lakh rupaye de diye miss rachna ke bacchey ke ilaaz ke liye

vidhayak -- haa aap log toh jante hee hai paise kitne important hote h usse kya kuch nahi ho sakta miss rachna ke bete ka ilaaz ho gaya kisi ki khwahishen poori ho jaati h isiliye paise sabko kamaane chahiye__ tabhi maine miss rachna ko ek flat gift karne ka faisla kiya h aur uske pati ko ek acchi naukri taaki wo apni biwi aur bacchey ka behtar tareeke se khayal rakh sake..

iss baat pe haal mey taliyaa bajne lagi rachna toh ye sunn ke phooli nahi sama rahi thi jis tareeke se wo vidhayak ko abhi dekh rahi thi usse mujhe andhaja ho gaya tha wo kya soch rahi hogi__

Uske baad aur kuch sawaalon hue par maine unn logo ko hee dekh raha tha jab bhi vidhyak kuch bolta toh wo apna ek hath rachna ke kandho pe zarur rakhta tha aur jab wo bolta toh rachna meri taraf ghurti aankhon se dekhne lagti__

tabhi jo bheed ke sabse peechey mgr mujhse thodi door pe kuch log baithey theyy unn se ek bol raha tha kya mast jodi h na vudhayak aur miss rachna ki__

tabhi mujhe mere kandho pe ek hath ke hone ka ahsaas hua_ wo nana sahab theyy..


tabhi kuch time vidhayak ka phone baja usne sabse thoda time manga aur side hatke call uthayi usne socha usse kisi mantri ne badhayi dene ke liye call kiya h par jaise jaise wo call sunn raha tha vaise vaise uske chehre ke bhaav badal rahe theyy__

tabhi usne deewar pe zor se mukka maara aur thoda dheere se chillaya __

vidhayak-- haraamkhoro kaise hua ye kaise __ tum sab jaantey ho na ye mere liye kitna keemti project tha kuch bhi karo muje wo chahiye kisi ko khareedo ya kisi ko maar do par wo mujhe laake do nahi toh aaj tum sab ka aakhiri din h mai aa raha hoon__

jaise hee usne phone kata vaise hee wo phir apne role mey aa gaya__

aur sab se jaane ke liye kaha__ par wo bechain bahot tha wo aaspaas nazar ghumaa ke dekh raha tha __

aakhir kiski itni himmat ho gayi jo mujhse takraane ynha aa gaya kaun h __ tabhi uski nazar mujhse takraayi meri shaant aur muskurati aankhain dekh ke ek pal ko wo soch mey padd gaya__

vidhayak khud se badbadaya-- nahi nahi ye toh ek mamooli gym trainer iss nalle ke bas ka kuch nahi zarur iss ke peechey opposition ka hath hoga haa unka hee hath hoga..

tabhi rachna mere paas aayi__nana sahab thoda peechey chale gaye..

rachna -- dekh rahe ho bholu vidhayak ji hampe kitne mehrbaan h abb hame uss khandar jaise ghar mey rahne ki koi zarurat nahi hogi__ aur tum bhi apne soch badlo aur zamaane ke sath chalna seekho__

mai uski baat sunn ke uske bilkul kareeb aa gaya__ rachna ne jaise meri aankhain padd lii ho wo thoda sahem see gayi_

me-- haa rachna vidhayak tumpe kuch jyada hee mehrbaan h__ aur koi bhi kisi ke liye itna sab free mey nahi karta__ ummeed karta hoon jab isska bill aayega tum usse chuka paao hahh

thodi time ko rachna ne socha ki bholu ko uspe sakk ho gaya h__ aur wo apni nakami ko chipaane ke liye ye sab bol raha h

rachna-- kitni ghatiya soch hai tumhari __ wo bhale aadmi hamari madad kar rahe hai wo ek neta h samaj sewak h aur tum itna ganda sochte ho hamare baare mey meri tumhari soch pe hee ghin aati h..

tabhi peechey se vidhayak aata h__

vidhayak-- chalo miss rachna mai tumhe ghar chodd du__

rachna -- haa sir ynha mera abb vaise bhi dum ghutne laga h chaliye

tabhi nana mere paas aaye aur mai bass rachna ko hee dekh raha tha__ usne ek baar bhi peechey mudd ke nahi dekha tha__

nana sahab-- hukum hamne ek door toh kaat dii hai__ aap kaho toh saari jameen hee kheench lu inki..

me-- nahi nana sahab udne do abhi inn logo kyuki jab mai inke neechey se jameen kheenchunga tab inko sirf narak se bhi bhattar zameen naseeb hogi..

mai wnha se seedha apne bete ke paas aa gaya__

apne bete ke mathey ko chum ke__

me-- beta tumhari maa ne toh apna saudaa kar diya par tera baap poori baaji hee palat dega__

udhar jab vidhayak rachna ko chod ke wapas apne addey pe pahuncha toh jaate hee usne apni gun se apne 2 aadmiyo ko goli maar dee__

vidhayak-- samne aao mere nikkamo samne aao

tabhi kai log dusre room se dheere dheere nikal ke uske samne aane lage__

ek bola-- sir maaf kardo hum nakam rahe hum kaam nahi kar paaye

vidhayak-- nahi kar paaye par kyu

usne uss aadmi ki ek taang pe fire kar diya jisse wo bilbilata hua wnhi peechey gir gaya aur zoro se chillane laga.. Tabhi vidhayak uske paas aaya

vidhayak-- abb Tujhe ahsaas ho raha hoga ki muje kaisa lag raha h janta bhi h uss project ki kitni keemat thi poore 120 crore wo aaims project paane ke liye maine 4 logo ko jaan se maar diya aur tu kah raha h mai naakam ho gaya__ Tu bolta mai naakam ho gaya hum kya hota h

tabhi wo dusro ki taraf gaya__ usne apni gun wapas rakh lii__

vidhayak-- kaun h wo jisne mujhse takkar lene kii zurrat ki kiski maut aayi h

Dusra aadmi-- sir hamne pata kiya h koi "" Holding company "" Se ye sab kar rhaa h unka kahna h hum kisi aise ke sath kaam nahi kar sakte jiske links blacklisted companies se ho par iske peechey kaun hai mai uska pata nahi laga paaya aur lagana bhi muskil h__

vidhayak ne gusse se beech mey kaanch ki table pe rakhe pot ko utha ke ussi table pe patak diya__

aur zor se chillate hue wnhi paas mey pade sofe pe baith gaya__ kaun h wo kaun h

idhar nana sahab..

sumer singh -- hamara agla kaam kya hoga hukum

Me-- aap apne unn aadmiyo se kaho jo uss vidhayak ke ynha h unse kaho ki wo unn politician ke ynha aana jaana badha de jo iss vidhayak ko support karte h phir abhi wo vidhayak do teen din issi sadme se nahi nikal paayega tab tak usse dusra jhatka mil jayega aur saari details secret hee rakhna __

abb aap jaiye ynha se par hoshiyaari se aaj mujhe chain se sona h baaki uss ki marji..

Keh do ye jhut hai vidhyak nahi cjod paya tension me please

 

[Skb21]

uske peechey mai bhi chal diya neechey aake dekha toh haal mey kaafi bheed aa chuki thi__

maine dekha vidhayak ne rachna ko ishare se apni taraf bulaya mai hall ke sabse peechey jnha thoda andhera par itna nhi ki koi khada ho wo dikhe na par abb mere kandhey jhuke hue bilkul nahi the main ab comfortably khada hua aur uss ki baatain sunne ke liye betaab tha__

tabhi ek reportar ne bola__

Reportar- sir aap kuch bolna chahenge iss nek kaam ke liye..

vidhayak-- haa haa wo mera bhi baccha h bacche jaisa hee toh h__ like family jab mujhe meri accountant miss rachna jee ne bataya ki wo kissss hadd tak paresaan h tab maine aage badh ke unki saari samasya apni khud ki samsya lagi aap toh jaante hee hai ki mujhe samaaj seva aur nekk kaam karne mey kitni khushi milti h.

tabhi dusra reportar bola__

reportar 2-- hamne toh suna hai aapne bina kuch poochey 10 lakh rupaye de diye miss rachna ke bacchey ke ilaaz ke liye

vidhayak -- haa aap log toh jante hee hai paise kitne important hote h usse kya kuch nahi ho sakta miss rachna ke bete ka ilaaz ho gaya kisi ki khwahishen poori ho jaati h isiliye paise sabko kamaane chahiye__ tabhi maine miss rachna ko ek flat gift karne ka faisla kiya h aur uske pati ko ek acchi naukri taaki wo apni biwi aur bacchey ka behtar tareeke se khayal rakh sake..

iss baat pe haal mey taliyaa bajne lagi rachna toh ye sunn ke phooli nahi sama rahi thi jis tareeke se wo vidhayak ko abhi dekh rahi thi usse mujhe andhaja ho gaya tha wo kya soch rahi hogi__

Uske baad aur kuch sawaalon hue par maine unn logo ko hee dekh raha tha jab bhi vidhyak kuch bolta toh wo apna ek hath rachna ke kandho pe zarur rakhta tha aur jab wo bolta toh rachna meri taraf ghurti aankhon se dekhne lagti__

tabhi jo bheed ke sabse peechey mgr mujhse thodi door pe kuch log baithey theyy unn se ek bol raha tha kya mast jodi h na vudhayak aur miss rachna ki__

tabhi mujhe mere kandho pe ek hath ke hone ka ahsaas hua_ wo nana sahab theyy..


tabhi kuch time vidhayak ka phone baja usne sabse thoda time manga aur side hatke call uthayi usne socha usse kisi mantri ne badhayi dene ke liye call kiya h par jaise jaise wo call sunn raha tha vaise vaise uske chehre ke bhaav badal rahe theyy__

tabhi usne deewar pe zor se mukka maara aur thoda dheere se chillaya __

vidhayak-- haraamkhoro kaise hua ye kaise __ tum sab jaantey ho na ye mere liye kitna keemti project tha kuch bhi karo muje wo chahiye kisi ko khareedo ya kisi ko maar do par wo mujhe laake do nahi toh aaj tum sab ka aakhiri din h mai aa raha hoon__

jaise hee usne phone kata vaise hee wo phir apne role mey aa gaya__

aur sab se jaane ke liye kaha__ par wo bechain bahot tha wo aaspaas nazar ghumaa ke dekh raha tha __

aakhir kiski itni himmat ho gayi jo mujhse takraane ynha aa gaya kaun h __ tabhi uski nazar mujhse takraayi meri shaant aur muskurati aankhain dekh ke ek pal ko wo soch mey padd gaya__

vidhayak khud se badbadaya-- nahi nahi ye toh ek mamooli gym trainer iss nalle ke bas ka kuch nahi zarur iss ke peechey opposition ka hath hoga haa unka hee hath hoga..

tabhi rachna mere paas aayi__nana sahab thoda peechey chale gaye..

rachna -- dekh rahe ho bholu vidhayak ji hampe kitne mehrbaan h abb hame uss khandar jaise ghar mey rahne ki koi zarurat nahi hogi__ aur tum bhi apne soch badlo aur zamaane ke sath chalna seekho__

mai uski baat sunn ke uske bilkul kareeb aa gaya__ rachna ne jaise meri aankhain padd lii ho wo thoda sahem see gayi_

me-- haa rachna vidhayak tumpe kuch jyada hee mehrbaan h__ aur koi bhi kisi ke liye itna sab free mey nahi karta__ ummeed karta hoon jab isska bill aayega tum usse chuka paao hahh

thodi time ko rachna ne socha ki bholu ko uspe sakk ho gaya h__ aur wo apni nakami ko chipaane ke liye ye sab bol raha h

rachna-- kitni ghatiya soch hai tumhari __ wo bhale aadmi hamari madad kar rahe hai wo ek neta h samaj sewak h aur tum itna ganda sochte ho hamare baare mey meri tumhari soch pe hee ghin aati h..

tabhi peechey se vidhayak aata h__

vidhayak-- chalo miss rachna mai tumhe ghar chodd du__

rachna -- haa sir ynha mera abb vaise bhi dum ghutne laga h chaliye

tabhi nana mere paas aaye aur mai bass rachna ko hee dekh raha tha__ usne ek baar bhi peechey mudd ke nahi dekha tha__

nana sahab-- hukum hamne ek door toh kaat dii hai__ aap kaho toh saari jameen hee kheench lu inki..

me-- nahi nana sahab udne do abhi inn logo kyuki jab mai inke neechey se jameen kheenchunga tab inko sirf narak se bhi bhattar zameen naseeb hogi..

mai wnha se seedha apne bete ke paas aa gaya__

apne bete ke mathey ko chum ke__

me-- beta tumhari maa ne toh apna saudaa kar diya par tera baap poori baaji hee palat dega__

udhar jab vidhayak rachna ko chod ke wapas apne addey pe pahuncha toh jaate hee usne apni gun se apne 2 aadmiyo ko goli maar dee__

vidhayak-- samne aao mere nikkamo samne aao

tabhi kai log dusre room se dheere dheere nikal ke uske samne aane lage__

ek bola-- sir maaf kardo hum nakam rahe hum kaam nahi kar paaye

vidhayak-- nahi kar paaye par kyu

usne uss aadmi ki ek taang pe fire kar diya jisse wo bilbilata hua wnhi peechey gir gaya aur zoro se chillane laga.. Tabhi vidhayak uske paas aaya

vidhayak-- abb Tujhe ahsaas ho raha hoga ki muje kaisa lag raha h janta bhi h uss project ki kitni keemat thi poore 120 crore wo aaims project paane ke liye maine 4 logo ko jaan se maar diya aur tu kah raha h mai naakam ho gaya__ Tu bolta mai naakam ho gaya hum kya hota h

tabhi wo dusro ki taraf gaya__ usne apni gun wapas rakh lii__

vidhayak-- kaun h wo jisne mujhse takkar lene kii zurrat ki kiski maut aayi h

Dusra aadmi-- sir hamne pata kiya h koi "" Holding company "" Se ye sab kar rhaa h unka kahna h hum kisi aise ke sath kaam nahi kar sakte jiske links blacklisted companies se ho par iske peechey kaun hai mai uska pata nahi laga paaya aur lagana bhi muskil h__

vidhayak ne gusse se beech mey kaanch ki table pe rakhe pot ko utha ke ussi table pe patak diya__

aur zor se chillate hue wnhi paas mey pade sofe pe baith gaya__ kaun h wo kaun h

idhar nana sahab..

sumer singh -- hamara agla kaam kya hoga hukum

Me-- aap apne unn aadmiyo se kaho jo uss vidhayak ke ynha h unse kaho ki wo unn politician ke ynha aana jaana badha de jo iss vidhayak ko support karte h phir abhi wo vidhayak do teen din issi sadme se nahi nikal paayega tab tak usse dusra jhatka mil jayega aur saari details secret hee rakhna __

abb aap jaiye ynha se par hoshiyaari se aaj mujhe chain se sona h baaki uss ki marji..

Great work waiting for next

 

[THE snjv]

Keh do ye jhut hai vidhyak nahi cjod paya tension me please

Nahi chod paya par aage ka kaa pata chud jaaye

 

[ayush01111]

Nahi vidhayak jab jab rachna ke karib jay yab tab uske sath kand ho use dar lagna chaiye humare heto ke maal par hath saaf katna chata hai jab jab uska land khad ho uske sath kand ho or baith jay uska khada lund

Nahi chod paya par aage ka kaa pata chud jaaye

 

[Abirend31]

Hero main dum nahin hai

 

[buck]

Dono update shandar lajawab hai sir

 

[red_devil_98]

Writer bhai, story padhi aapki bohot acchi lagi.
Kirdaar ke emotion aur plot ko bohot hi bakhubi ke likha hai apne..

Jyada kuch kahna(criticism) nahi chahunga kyuki naa kuch khas bure elements hai abhi story mein aur story abhi shuru hi hui hai.

[Bas ek suggestion dena chahunga ek reader ke taur par(ignore kar sakte ho koi tension nahi hai) ki agar divorce karwana hai hero ka toh mla ke barbadi ke pahle karwane ke kosish kyuki isse rachna ke saare raste aur hope khatam ho jayenge ...]

 

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