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Adultery THUKRA KE MERA PYAAR
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Aap sab ii mat sochna ki jo hotstar pe iss naam ki series aayi thi mai usse hii ynha likhunga iss kahani ka aisi kisi cheezon se koi matlab nahi h __ mai apni pichli kahani se thoda hesitate ho gaya tha isiliye kuch naya likhne ka socha vaise kahani as usual typical kahaniyon jaisi hii hai mai ye nahi kahunga ki mai ek dum hatke likh raha hu bas likhna h toh likh raha hu __
kahani ka kisi se koi lena dena nahi h__ kisi ko hurt karna bilkul bhi mind mey nahi h toh baraye mehrbaani bas kahani ko kahani ki tarah hi le bas aur chill maaro__
kahani ka kisi se koi lena dena nahi h__ kisi ko hurt karna bilkul bhi mind mey nahi h toh baraye mehrbaani bas kahani ko kahani ki tarah hi le bas aur chill maaro__
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bholu --( real name vivek singh chauhan par abhi ke liye bholu) jo abhi 34 ka hai aur ek biwi aur ek baccha h beta 6 year ka..
rachna bholu ki biwi aur ek bete ki maa bete ka naam veer
baaki ke characters aage kahani mey aate jaayenge intro deta jaunga__
back to present__
k.. Ky.. Kyaa ye aap kya kah rahi h doctor roji ye such nahi ho sakta abhi wo hai hii kitna bada aur abhi se usse itni badi beemaari plz
plz aap kahiye jo aap kah rahi h wo sab jhoot h doctor mdm mera dil baitha jaa raha h aisa lag raha h jaise kisi ne mujhe ek kursi pe baandh diya h aur ek polithin se mere poore ser ko baandh diya ho jisse meri jaan jaise nikal rahi h.
ye baat sun ke doctor roji ko zara si bhi hairaani nahi hui wo abhi chair pe baithte hue aur jo table pe report padi thi usse utha ke khol ke mere samne daaltey hue..
dr roji-- ye dekhiye Mr. Bholu ye aapke bete ki heart ki report h mai aapse bhala kyu mazak karne lagi__mai toh bas itna kah rahi hu jitna aap time waist karoge iss matter ko na samjhne mey utna hii time jaa rhaa hai aapke bete ke paas se toh meri baat pe dhyaan dijiye aur jitna jaldi ho sake 15 laakh ka intzaam kijiye__
me-- mere haath se file choot gayi 15 laakh ye bolte hue meri jubaan sookh gayi aur mera sir jhuk gaya__
dr roji-- Mr bholu aapke bete ke dil mey ched h jiski open heart surgery jitni jaldi ho sake utni jaldi ho jaani chahiye balki mai toh hairaan hoon ki aapne ab tak apne bete ko hospital mey admit kyu nahi kiya kya aap apne bete pyar nahi karte..
Uski baat sunte hii meri sharir ki ek ek nas fadak gayi aur mai ek jhatke mey utha meri aankhon mey khoon utar aaya tha tabhi wo boli..
dr roji-- ye aggression aap apne bete ko thik karne aur uski surgery karwaane mey lagaiye toh hii thik rahega abb aap jaa sakte h mujhe aur bhi logo ko dekhna h plz leave
usne mujhe wnha se aise dutkaara jaise hum logo ki unki nazar mey koi value hii nahi h kya such mey inn logo ke paas dil nahi hota __
meri toh aisi haalat ho gayi thi ki road pe aane ke baad mujhe aaspaas ka shor sharaba sunaai hii nahi de raha tha sunai bas uss doctor ki baatein hii de rahi thi__ ki mujhe mere bete ko bachana h..
mai apni hii udhedbun mey auto pe baith gaya aur usme baithe passengers jaise mere liye hai hii nahi kyuki mai apni hii duniya mey ghum tha tabhi mujhe aisa laga jaisi kisi ne mujhe zor se hilaaya ho.. Arre knha jana h tumhe aur kiraaya do jaldi
me-- haa haa
aur maine apni jeb mey hath dala paise ke sath jeb mey se ek do chillar theyy sath mey wo bhi nikal ke ussi auto mey gir gaye par maine uthaaye nahi__
me-- rupam colony ( maine bas itna hii kaha)
mai phir se apne sir ko peechey karke seat pe tek laga ke baith gaya__ kab ghar ka mod aa gaya pata hii nahi chala mujhe ghar aate aate raat ke 8 baj gaye they gali ek dum khaali padi thi ek do kuttey idhar udhar baithey hue theyy__
mai seedha apne ghar pahuncha aur ghar ke ander aake haal mey aake ek taraf padi khatiya pe aake baith gaya__ aur file wnhi mej pe rakh di aur uth ke apne bete ko dekhne chala gaya room ko halke se khol ke dekha toh veer apni maa se chipka so raha tha maine bhi ander naa jaake wapas laut ke aake khatiya pe aise hii late gaya aur bas ek hii baat mere muhh se nikli ( mere bete mai tujhe kuch nahi hone dunga)
rachna bholu ki biwi aur ek bete ki maa bete ka naam veer
baaki ke characters aage kahani mey aate jaayenge intro deta jaunga__
back to present__
k.. Ky.. Kyaa ye aap kya kah rahi h doctor roji ye such nahi ho sakta abhi wo hai hii kitna bada aur abhi se usse itni badi beemaari plz
plz aap kahiye jo aap kah rahi h wo sab jhoot h doctor mdm mera dil baitha jaa raha h aisa lag raha h jaise kisi ne mujhe ek kursi pe baandh diya h aur ek polithin se mere poore ser ko baandh diya ho jisse meri jaan jaise nikal rahi h. ye baat sun ke doctor roji ko zara si bhi hairaani nahi hui wo abhi chair pe baithte hue aur jo table pe report padi thi usse utha ke khol ke mere samne daaltey hue..
dr roji-- ye dekhiye Mr. Bholu ye aapke bete ki heart ki report h mai aapse bhala kyu mazak karne lagi__mai toh bas itna kah rahi hu jitna aap time waist karoge iss matter ko na samjhne mey utna hii time jaa rhaa hai aapke bete ke paas se toh meri baat pe dhyaan dijiye aur jitna jaldi ho sake 15 laakh ka intzaam kijiye__
me-- mere haath se file choot gayi 15 laakh ye bolte hue meri jubaan sookh gayi aur mera sir jhuk gaya__
dr roji-- Mr bholu aapke bete ke dil mey ched h jiski open heart surgery jitni jaldi ho sake utni jaldi ho jaani chahiye balki mai toh hairaan hoon ki aapne ab tak apne bete ko hospital mey admit kyu nahi kiya kya aap apne bete pyar nahi karte..
Uski baat sunte hii meri sharir ki ek ek nas fadak gayi aur mai ek jhatke mey utha meri aankhon mey khoon utar aaya tha tabhi wo boli..
dr roji-- ye aggression aap apne bete ko thik karne aur uski surgery karwaane mey lagaiye toh hii thik rahega abb aap jaa sakte h mujhe aur bhi logo ko dekhna h plz leave
usne mujhe wnha se aise dutkaara jaise hum logo ki unki nazar mey koi value hii nahi h kya such mey inn logo ke paas dil nahi hota __
meri toh aisi haalat ho gayi thi ki road pe aane ke baad mujhe aaspaas ka shor sharaba sunaai hii nahi de raha tha sunai bas uss doctor ki baatein hii de rahi thi__ ki mujhe mere bete ko bachana h..
mai apni hii udhedbun mey auto pe baith gaya aur usme baithe passengers jaise mere liye hai hii nahi kyuki mai apni hii duniya mey ghum tha tabhi mujhe aisa laga jaisi kisi ne mujhe zor se hilaaya ho.. Arre knha jana h tumhe aur kiraaya do jaldi
me-- haa haa
aur maine apni jeb mey hath dala paise ke sath jeb mey se ek do chillar theyy sath mey wo bhi nikal ke ussi auto mey gir gaye par maine uthaaye nahi__
me-- rupam colony ( maine bas itna hii kaha)
mai phir se apne sir ko peechey karke seat pe tek laga ke baith gaya__ kab ghar ka mod aa gaya pata hii nahi chala mujhe ghar aate aate raat ke 8 baj gaye they gali ek dum khaali padi thi ek do kuttey idhar udhar baithey hue theyy__
mai seedha apne ghar pahuncha aur ghar ke ander aake haal mey aake ek taraf padi khatiya pe aake baith gaya__ aur file wnhi mej pe rakh di aur uth ke apne bete ko dekhne chala gaya room ko halke se khol ke dekha toh veer apni maa se chipka so raha tha maine bhi ander naa jaake wapas laut ke aake khatiya pe aise hii late gaya aur bas ek hii baat mere muhh se nikli ( mere bete mai tujhe kuch nahi hone dunga)
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maine thakavat ke chaltey aankh band toh ki thi par neend meri aankhon se kosho door thi..
mai wnha se utha aur ghar ke bahar aa gaya vaise toh mera ghar 2manzila ek badi developed city mey h __
vaise 2 manzila toh nahi kah sakte kyuki ghar ke nechey besment h aur upar ghar isiliye aur besment mey mera gym club h jiske gate ko khol ke mai ander aaya mai apne sapne ko dekh ke ander hii ander toot raha tha kyuki gym mey ab 5-6 log hii aate theyy kyuki aadhey se jyada equipment kharab pade theyy jinme jung lagni suru ho chuki thi..
maine agar isse benchu bhi toh kitna hii milega aur kaun hii itna ghaatey ka sauda karega __ mai vanhi padi ek table pe phir se late gaya__ aur meri aankhon se aansuon ne apna rasta bana liya __
mera beta mere jeene ka sahara aur mai itni jaldi haar nahi maan sakta mujhe kuch na kuch toh karna hii hoga..
kya karu... Kya karu... Kaise karu.... Uparwale abb tera hii sahara h..
aur mai ussi table pe sikud gaya __ par meri aankh jab khuli jab mujhe zoro ki khadbad sunai dii__
maine aankh khol ke dekha toh rachna wnha padi chairs ko utha utha ke idhar udhar phenk rahi thi__
jab usne mujhe utha hua dekha toh wo mera paas aayi aur wo report mere muh par phenkte hue boli__
rachna-- kaam na kaaj ke meri kamai pe palte ho ye kya h kyaa h yeeee..
usne almost apni poori taqat se cheekhtey hue kaha__
Me-- dekho rachna tum itna chillao mat tumahari tabiyat bigad jayegi__ mai tumhe raat mey batane wala tha par tum aur veer chain se so rahe theyy toh maine tumhe nahi bataya __ tum chinta bilkul mat karo mai hamare bete ko kuch nahi hone dunga__
rachna-- hamare __ seriously ohh myy God __ apne kaho apneeee___ main isiliye computers mey gold medalist nahi hun ki mai aisi zindagi jiyu__apne ghar ko chodkar maine ye tumahre sath ye seelan wali sadi zindagi nahi sochi thi __ aaj meri frendz poori duniya ghoom rahi h aur mai mai ynha tumhare sath emi ki zindagi jee rahi hu__ aur kaise karoge tum sab thik haa yee yee joooo tumne gym khola hai naa loan leke khola h maheene ki saari salary uski kisto mey hiii chali jaati h__ dekho mujhe job ke liye late ho raha h tum kya karoge mujhe nahi pata __ chori karo daka daalo loot maar karo par mujhe mera beta thik chahiye nahi toh mai tumhara wo haal karungi __ chiiii mujhe baat hii nahi karni tumse__
aur wo mujhe jitna bhi jo bhi suna sakti thi suna ke chali gayi__
mai baith ke uss report wali file ko dekhte hue sochne laga __ sahi hii toh kah rahi thi maine hii usse ek acchi zindagi dene ka wada kiya tha par syd mai aaj uss wade ko nibhane mey nakamyaab sabit ho raha tha__
mai jhat se utha aur file uthayi aur ghar ki taraf chala jnha mera beta tha rachna toh duty chali gayi rah gaya tha toh mera baccha jab mai ghar gaya toh wo apne room mey so raha tha abb wo jyadatar sota hii rahta tha__
mai bahar padi kursi pe baith gaya aur sochne laga ki wo aur rachan kitne khush theyy__ jab shadi ke 2 saal baad veer unki zindagi mey aaya tha uski khushiyaan chauguni ho gayi thi par dedh saal ke ander hii uski khushiyon ko kisi ki nazar lagi jab veer khelte hue ek din gir pada toh rachna aur mai apne bete ko hospital le gaya jnha hame wo pata chala jisse hamari sari khusiyon hii mar gayi__ mere bete ke dil mey chedd tha jisse uss din usse pahla attack aaya tha__
tab se uski beemari mey jo paise aate gye wo sab lagte gaye ghar beemari aur aisi mental problem ke chalte rachna ki aaye din mujhse ladne lagi __ aur usne iske chalte job karni suru kardi ek software company mey aur uss din se meri rahi sahi saari khushiyaan hii mar gayi__ aur issi ke chalte aaj mere aur rachna mey sirf dikhawa hii bacha tha abb toh sirf wo veer ki maa hii thi __
hamare rooms bhi alag ho chuke theyy mai jyadatar apne gym mey hii rahta tha ussi mey sona kaam karna jiske chalte mai behad hii toot gaya__
par abb mujhe kuch toh karna h aakhir kaun meri madad karega __
kaafi sochne ke baad maine apne dost se madad maangne ki sochi haalanki usse mai paise liya hii karta tha par wo thode bahot hii hote theyy__
aaj mujhe bahot badi rakam chahiye__ jisske liye mere kadam uss taraf badh hii nahi rahe theyy__
par mujhe jaana toh thaa hii__isiliye maine ek baar phir apne bete ke paas gaya usse namm aankhon se dekhta raha aur uske maatheyy ko chum ke wnha se nikal aaya__
Aaj mai apne dost ke paas paidal hii chal pada iss gali se uss gaali ek chauraahe se dusre chauraahe ko paar karke mai uski building ke neechey pahuncha__
maine apne jeb se usse call ki
me-- hello hello umesh
umesh-- haa bholu bolo kya baat h
me--yrr mai teri building ke neechey khada hoon kya mai tujhse abhi mil sakta hoon mujhe bahot zaroori kaam h tumse dekh yrr mana mat karna__
umesh-- kaisi baat karte ho bholu bhala mai tumhe kaise mana kar sakta hoon__ mai aa rhaa hoon
mai wnha se utha aur ghar ke bahar aa gaya vaise toh mera ghar 2manzila ek badi developed city mey h __
vaise 2 manzila toh nahi kah sakte kyuki ghar ke nechey besment h aur upar ghar isiliye aur besment mey mera gym club h jiske gate ko khol ke mai ander aaya mai apne sapne ko dekh ke ander hii ander toot raha tha kyuki gym mey ab 5-6 log hii aate theyy kyuki aadhey se jyada equipment kharab pade theyy jinme jung lagni suru ho chuki thi..
maine agar isse benchu bhi toh kitna hii milega aur kaun hii itna ghaatey ka sauda karega __ mai vanhi padi ek table pe phir se late gaya__ aur meri aankhon se aansuon ne apna rasta bana liya __
mera beta mere jeene ka sahara aur mai itni jaldi haar nahi maan sakta mujhe kuch na kuch toh karna hii hoga..
kya karu... Kya karu... Kaise karu.... Uparwale abb tera hii sahara h..
aur mai ussi table pe sikud gaya __ par meri aankh jab khuli jab mujhe zoro ki khadbad sunai dii__
maine aankh khol ke dekha toh rachna wnha padi chairs ko utha utha ke idhar udhar phenk rahi thi__
jab usne mujhe utha hua dekha toh wo mera paas aayi aur wo report mere muh par phenkte hue boli__
rachna-- kaam na kaaj ke meri kamai pe palte ho ye kya h kyaa h yeeee..
usne almost apni poori taqat se cheekhtey hue kaha__
Me-- dekho rachna tum itna chillao mat tumahari tabiyat bigad jayegi__ mai tumhe raat mey batane wala tha par tum aur veer chain se so rahe theyy toh maine tumhe nahi bataya __ tum chinta bilkul mat karo mai hamare bete ko kuch nahi hone dunga__
rachna-- hamare __ seriously ohh myy God __ apne kaho apneeee___ main isiliye computers mey gold medalist nahi hun ki mai aisi zindagi jiyu__apne ghar ko chodkar maine ye tumahre sath ye seelan wali sadi zindagi nahi sochi thi __ aaj meri frendz poori duniya ghoom rahi h aur mai mai ynha tumhare sath emi ki zindagi jee rahi hu__ aur kaise karoge tum sab thik haa yee yee joooo tumne gym khola hai naa loan leke khola h maheene ki saari salary uski kisto mey hiii chali jaati h__ dekho mujhe job ke liye late ho raha h tum kya karoge mujhe nahi pata __ chori karo daka daalo loot maar karo par mujhe mera beta thik chahiye nahi toh mai tumhara wo haal karungi __ chiiii mujhe baat hii nahi karni tumse__
aur wo mujhe jitna bhi jo bhi suna sakti thi suna ke chali gayi__
mai baith ke uss report wali file ko dekhte hue sochne laga __ sahi hii toh kah rahi thi maine hii usse ek acchi zindagi dene ka wada kiya tha par syd mai aaj uss wade ko nibhane mey nakamyaab sabit ho raha tha__
mai jhat se utha aur file uthayi aur ghar ki taraf chala jnha mera beta tha rachna toh duty chali gayi rah gaya tha toh mera baccha jab mai ghar gaya toh wo apne room mey so raha tha abb wo jyadatar sota hii rahta tha__
mai bahar padi kursi pe baith gaya aur sochne laga ki wo aur rachan kitne khush theyy__ jab shadi ke 2 saal baad veer unki zindagi mey aaya tha uski khushiyaan chauguni ho gayi thi par dedh saal ke ander hii uski khushiyon ko kisi ki nazar lagi jab veer khelte hue ek din gir pada toh rachna aur mai apne bete ko hospital le gaya jnha hame wo pata chala jisse hamari sari khusiyon hii mar gayi__ mere bete ke dil mey chedd tha jisse uss din usse pahla attack aaya tha__
tab se uski beemari mey jo paise aate gye wo sab lagte gaye ghar beemari aur aisi mental problem ke chalte rachna ki aaye din mujhse ladne lagi __ aur usne iske chalte job karni suru kardi ek software company mey aur uss din se meri rahi sahi saari khushiyaan hii mar gayi__ aur issi ke chalte aaj mere aur rachna mey sirf dikhawa hii bacha tha abb toh sirf wo veer ki maa hii thi __
hamare rooms bhi alag ho chuke theyy mai jyadatar apne gym mey hii rahta tha ussi mey sona kaam karna jiske chalte mai behad hii toot gaya__
par abb mujhe kuch toh karna h aakhir kaun meri madad karega __
kaafi sochne ke baad maine apne dost se madad maangne ki sochi haalanki usse mai paise liya hii karta tha par wo thode bahot hii hote theyy__
aaj mujhe bahot badi rakam chahiye__ jisske liye mere kadam uss taraf badh hii nahi rahe theyy__
par mujhe jaana toh thaa hii__isiliye maine ek baar phir apne bete ke paas gaya usse namm aankhon se dekhta raha aur uske maatheyy ko chum ke wnha se nikal aaya__
Aaj mai apne dost ke paas paidal hii chal pada iss gali se uss gaali ek chauraahe se dusre chauraahe ko paar karke mai uski building ke neechey pahuncha__
maine apne jeb se usse call ki
me-- hello hello umesh
umesh-- haa bholu bolo kya baat h
me--yrr mai teri building ke neechey khada hoon kya mai tujhse abhi mil sakta hoon mujhe bahot zaroori kaam h tumse dekh yrr mana mat karna__
umesh-- kaisi baat karte ho bholu bhala mai tumhe kaise mana kar sakta hoon__ mai aa rhaa hoon
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