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Update 109

Sabhi log surkchhit us jagah se nikal kr hotal pahucha gye the sabhi log ek kamre me baithe huye the .

Mai : aap log ye bataiye ki aap log in aatankvadiyo ke chungal me fase kaise .

Suman : vo humlog kasmir ki vadiyo me ghum rhe the to thoda jayda hi andhera ho gya tha or humara guide bhi rasta bhatak gya tha hum log ek taraf ja rhe ki aachanak hume kuch aatankvadiyo ne gun dikhakar hume apne sath lekar chale gye vo to achchha hua ki tum sahi samay pr aa gye Varna to vo hume mar hi dalte.

Mai : chalo thik ab aap log aaram kro subah hume niklna bhi hai.

Chachi : vo to thik hai pr tumne bataya nhi ki ye ladki kon hai.

Mai : ohh Mai to batana bhul hi gya tha lekin us se pahle aap logo ko ek vada karna hoga ki ye bat aap logo ke bich hi rhegi samay aane pr Mai hi ye bat batauga.

Sabhi ek sath : ha hum vada karte hai ki ye bat humare bich hi rhegi .

Mai : ye rambha hai Meri patni ,jab Mai apni sakti ki khoj me gya tha inke sath meri sadi Hui or jante ho inke pita Kon hai, Chachi sayad aapko nhi malum hoga ye vhi baba ji ki beti hai jinhone maa ko beta prapt karne ke liye vandevi ke pass bheja tha or unhone be hi mera namkaran bhi kiya tha ye usi baba ji ki beti hai unhone hi kha tha ki humara vivah pahle se hi tay tha, to Maine bhi Sadi kr li .

Suman : ha Bhai babaji ki he bat sahi hoti hai or tum is bat ko ghar valo se chupana kyo chahte ho..

Mai : oh Didi bat ko samjho ghar me batauga to tarah tarah ke saval puchhenge ki tu vha kyo gya hum logo ko bhi bataya hota vagera vagera ,or Mai abhi apne bare me nhi bata sakta ghar valo ko .

Chachi : Chalo thik hai ab aaram kro apne apne room me subha jana bhi hai or ha koi bhi aatankvadi vali ghatna ki bat ghar me koi nhi krega nhi to hume fir kabhi aise ghumne jane nhi denge ok.

Sabhi : ok...

Uske bad hum logo ne adjust KR ke aaram kiya or subah hote hi breakfast KR ke nikal gye staction ki taraf fir vha se apne se apne ghar aa gye raste me kuch khas nhi hua bs unlogo ko apni Journey ke bare me bataya ek bat Maine unse chhipa li ki maine sneha se bhi Sadi kr ki hai .

Hum khusi khusi apne ghar aa gye ghar pr sabhi bado ne humare tour ke bare me puchha to jis jis ko JoJo achchha lga vo sab batate gye ,ghar pr Maine rambha ka introduction friend ke Roop me kraya or bataya ki ye hume vhi mili or hum sath me hi dehradun vapas jayenge.

Fir vhi Hall me hum sab bat krte huye baithe huye the .
Mai : maa Mai parso dehradun vapas ja rha hu or is bar sneha didi ko apne sath lekar jana chahta hu.

Maa - beta tum padhai kroge vaha sneha kya kregi jakar.


Mai : maa jane dijiye na fir kabhi mouka mile ya na mile kuch mahino bad to mera exam hai or exam hote hi hum turant vapas aa jayenge.

Maa : thik hai le jana apni Didi ko ab khus .

Fir hum sabhi ne sath me khana khaya or fir sone chale gye .
Rambha sneha didi ke sath hi so gyi Mai pahle choti chachi ko ek bar khus Kiya fir sari raat suman didi ke sath maja luta or unke sath hi so gya.

Ab aaiye ek najar dehradun ki taraf krte hai.

Jab mujhe kavya me ghar se nikal jane ko kha us samay bua Ghar pr nhi thi jab bus ghar me aayi tab mujhe pukarne lgi .

Bua : tiger tiger kha ho dekho mai tumhare liye kya lekar aayi hu.

Tabhi Kavita apne maa ke pass aayi.

Bua : Kavita beta ja tiger ko thoda bula la.

Pr Kavita ne koi javab nhi diya or vhi khadi.
Bua : ja na ab khadi khadi mera muh kya dekh rhi hai.

Kavita : maa vo... Maa vo...

Bua : kya vo vo lga rakha hai sidhe se bata na , kya khi gya hua hai?

Tabhi samita bhi aa jati hai .....

Samita : Bhabhi aap mere sath chaliye aapko kuch batana hai .

Bua : pahle Mujhe ye batao ki tiger kha hai kya Ghar pr nhi hai?

Samita : ha vo abhi ghar pr nhi hai ab aaiye mere sath.

Samita sita ko lekar apne room me jati hai or door lock kr deti hai .

Sita : ab bol samita bat kya hai?

Samita : bhabhi Mai AAP se Jo bhi puchungi us ka sahi sahi javab dena, ye aapke pet me Jo bachcha pal rha hai us ka baap Kon hai .

Sita : ye kaise kaise saval puch rhi ho samita.

Samita : Bhabhi Maine Jo pucha hai uska sahi sahi javab dijiye.
Sita kuch nhi bol rhi thi or pichhe palat kr khadi ho jati hai .

Samita : Bhabhi aap ko chehra chupane ki jarurat nhi hai mujhe malum hai fir bhi Mai aapke muh se sunna chahti hu.

Sita palat jati hai lekin sir jhuka hua hi tha or vo sankoch kr vo dhire se javab deti hai.

Sita : mere pet me pal the bachche ka baap.... Tiger..... Hai.

Samita : bs bhabhi mujhe yhi sunna tha mujhe bhi aapko bahut kuch batana hai.

Pr sita kuch bhi nhi bolti hai

Samita : bhabhi aapko pata hai meri sadi ho chuki hai.

Sita : Kya ? Tune Sadi kr li hai lekin kb the r ladka Kon hai .

Samita : bhabhi us ladke ko AAP janti hai kyo ki vo ladka koi or nhi.... Tiger.....hai....




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Shaandaar update Bhai Maza aa Gaya padk.bus ye update time se ate rahe to story ka maza doogna ho jata hai.jab story m lamba gap ho jaye to story bhul jati hai qki or bhi story hai .sab ka plot mind m mix ho jata hai.by the way waiting for next update on time.
 

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Sita : Kya ? Tune Sadi kr li hai lekin kb the r ladka Kon hai .

Samita : bhabhi us ladke ko AAP janti hai kyo ki vo ladka koi or nhi.... Tiger.....hai...

Sita : kya bol rhi ho kuch hos bhi hai.

Samita : bhabhi ye sahi hai hum logo ne mandir me sadi kr ki thi .

Sita : pr tu aisa kaise kr sakti hai tu us se badi hai or samjhdar bhi hai fir kyo .

Samita : bhabhi aap ne kyo tiger ke bachche ko apne pet me pal kr rakha hua hai or use hi kyo chuna aap be sambandh banane ke liye.

Sita : dekh samita iske bahut se karan hai pahla ek to tumhara Bhai hamesa bahar rahte hai Meri bhi Kuch ichchha hoti hai to Mai kha jati bahar khi jati to badnami ka dar tha.
Dusra bete ki chah , tiger ke bad se humare khandan me ab bete hi honge isliye Maine aisa kiya or sabse bada karan kud tiger hai pata nhi aisa kya jadu hai uske pas ki mai uske taraf khichi chali gyi or ye sab ho gya.

Samita : bs bhabhi yhi Karan mujhme bhi Lagu hua Mai to uske aankho me dud hi gyi lekin sadi ke liye khud tiger be hi mujhe kha tha vo koi aam aadmi nhi hai anokha hai humara tiger .
Sita : Chalo thik hai Mai bat karungi bhaiya bhabhi se tumhare riste ke liye .
Samita : bhabhi abhi bhi Kuch or batana Baki hai.
Sita : ha bolo.

Samita : bhabhi humari tarah Kavita or kavya bhi tiger se pyar karti hai .
Sita : Kya ?

Samita : ha bhabhi or jab AAP bahar gyi hui thi tab tiger or Mai Dono sex kr rhe the to Dono ne dekh liya or dono ne tiger ko bura bhala bol kr ghar se nikal jane ko kah diya, lekin tiger ne unhe pahle hi bata diya tha ki uske or bhi logo ke sath sambandh hai fir bhi kavya ko manjur nhi tha.

Sita ko thoda is bat se dhakka laga or vo vhi bed pr baith jati hai dhakka to lagna hi tha ek hi ghar me uske pith pichhe itna kuch ho rha tha or use pata bhi nhi chala.

Sita dhire se bolti hai : ab tiger kha hai .
Samita : bhabhi vo abhi apne ghar gya hua hai .
Sita : kya usne kya bataya hoga apne ghar me use yha se kyo nikala gya hai .
Samita : bhabhi tiger samjhdar hai usne aisa kuch bhi nhi bataya hoga vo to yha se nikalne ke bad bhi apni padhai ke liye apne kisi dost ke ghar ruka hua tha aap befikar rhiye.

Fir sita vha se uth kr bahar aati hai or jor se chilla kr kavya or Kavita ko bulati hai.

Kavya or Kavita : ha maa Kya hua.

Sita : tum dono ne tiger ko ghar chhod kr jane ko kyo kha kisne diya tum logo ko ye adhikar .

Kavya : maa aap tiger ke bare me Kuch nhi janti usne Jo kiya vo AAP bhi dekhti to aap bhi use ghar se nikal deti.

Sita : mujhe sab pata hai tiger ke bare me, samita ne mujhe sab kuch bata diya hai pahle tum dono ye batao ki tiger ne tum dono ko pahle kha ki vo tum dono se pyar karta hai .

Kavya : nhi Maine pahle kha tha.
Kavita : Maine bhi pahle hi kha tha.

Sita : or usne tum dono ko ye nhi bataya tha ki us ke or logo ke sath bhi sambandh hai .

Kavita : bataya tha maa.

Kavya : mujhe bhi bataya tha lekin mujhe uske sath kisi or ko dekhna pasand nhi .

Sita : to tumhe usi wakt mana karna tha jab tumhe pata chala ki tumhari bahan bhi us se pyar karti hai or tum Kavita tumhe to koi apatti nhi thi fir kya hua.

Dono bahano ke sir niche ho gye or juban pr tala lag gya tha.

Sita : vo ek anokha ladka hai puri duniya me dhundhne pr bhi uske jaisa nhi milega or agar tum logo sirf tumhare alawa kisi or ki taraf na dekhne vala ladka chahiye to tum dono ne thik kiya Mai samita ke bare me bat karungi bhaiya bhabhi se or tum logo ka koi Matlab nhi hona chahiye is bat se thik hai

Ye bol kr sita vha se chali gyi ,sita ke Jane ke bad Kavita bhi roti hui chali gyi bach gyi kavya Jo ab bhi kuch soch rhi thi .

Ab chalte hai tiger ke pass subah hui tiger huth kr fresh hone ke bad Hall me aata hai to dekhta hai family ke sabhi bade log TV pe najar gadaye huye hai pass jakar Mai bhi dekhta hu ki tv pe breaking news aa RHA tha ki parso raat me ek aadmi be hajaro ki sankhya me aatankvadiyo ko maar giraya hai or Jo jakhmi huye hai use army valo be pakad liya hai sutro se pata chala hai ek aadmi apni talvar se aatankvadiyo ko gajar muli ki tarah kat rha tha or goliya to uska kuch bigad hi nhi rhi thi ye log bada aatanki humla karne ke irade se kasmir me camp banakar ruke huye the.
Vha ki picture bhi dikhai ja rhi thi sach me bahut hi bhayanak najara tha.

Maa me to khun se sani laso ko dekh kr Chanel hi change kr diya.

Maa : aap log bhi kha subah subah khun kharaba dekh rhe ho.

Papa : ari bhaagvaan ye desh se juda mamla hai achchha hua ki us ne in aatankvadiyo ko maar diya nhi to vo humare dekh me aatank failate .

Papa meri taraf dekhte huye -

Papa : beta tum log bhi to kasmir me hi the itna bada kand ho gya tumlogo ko pata tha is bare me.

Mai : vo papa....

Maa : unlogo ko kya pata hoga vo log to ghumne gye the vha aatankvadiyo ko marne nhi.

Mai paani pi hi rha tha ki mera gala atak gya or mai khasne lga to maa be meri pith thapthpai .

Maa : aaram se piyo beta pani .

Rambha or sonam ye dekh kr muskura rhi thi or baki ke Jo log nhi jante the ki Maine un aatankvadi ko maar diya hai vo log mujhe hairani se dekh rhe the.

Chacha : or tiger beta aaj ka kya program hai.

Mai : kuch khas nhi hai chacha hi aaj rambha ko some sahar ghumaunga bs.
Chacha : beta thoda time nikal kr office ki taraf bhi aa jana tumhe humare office key staff we bhi milana hai.

Mai : ok chacha hi aa jaunga.

Sonam : bhai humlog bhi chale ke sath me .

Maa : koi jarurat nhi hai itne dino see college nhi gyi ho uska kya tiger ke sath koi nhi jayega tum log aaj college jaoge bs.

Sneha : Mai to aaj aaram karungi Bhai.
Uske bad hum sab ne sath me nasta kiya or uske bad papa or chacha log apne office ki taraf nikal gye baki sab bhi apne apne kam me lag gye ,thode der me hum bhi ready ho kr nikal gye apne bike or ghumne .




 
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