Fantasy The Asura System

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𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐩𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝟒𝟒 𝐭𝐨 𝟒𝟖 𝐡𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐛𝐞𝐞𝐧 𝐩𝐮𝐛𝐥𝐢𝐬𝐡𝐞𝐝. 𝐏𝐥𝐞𝐚𝐬𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝, 𝐞𝐧𝐣𝐨𝐲, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐝𝐨𝐧’𝐭 𝐟𝐨𝐫𝐠𝐞𝐭 𝐭𝐨 𝐥𝐞𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐚 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞.

 

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Chapter 17
Sone ka Shehar aur Neelami ki Jung​

Assassin ke hamle ke agli subah, Aryan ne faisla kiya ki wo haath par haath rakh kar nahi baithega. Us Assassin ke paas se jo Storage Ring mili thi, usme kaafi saare Spirit Stones aur weapons thay.
"Inhe bech kar main apne liye defensive gear khareed sakta hoon," Aryan ne socha. "Dark Moon Sect wapis aayega, aur agli baar wo puri taiyaari ke saath aayenge."
Aryan ne Kaalu (Dragon) ko apne kapdon ke andar chupaya (jo abhi bhi chota hone ka natak kar sakta tha) aur Sect se nikal kar 'Surya Nagar' ki taraf chal diya.
Surya Nagar (The City of Sun)
Yeh shehar Surya Sect ke bilkul neeche basa hua tha. Yeh koi mamooli gaon nahi, balki ek maha-nagar (metropolis) tha.
Jaise hi Aryan shehar ke bade darwaze se andar ghusa, uska swagat shor-sharabe aur khushboo ne kiya.
Sadkon par safed patthar lage thay. Har taraf dukanein saji thin.
Kahin 'Spirit Weapons' ban rahe thay jinki Tann-Tann ki awaaz aa rahi thi.
Kahin 'Alchemist' apni dawaaiyan bech rahe thay jinme se ajeeb rang ka dhuaan nikal raha tha.
Hawa mein bhune hue maas (meat) aur exotic masalon ki khushboo tair rahi thi.
Sadkon par har tarah ke log thay—yoddha (warriors) jinhone badi talwarein tangi thin, ameer vyapari (merchants) jo palki (palanquin) mein ja rahe thay, aur gareeb log jo rasta maang rahe thay.
Aryan bheed ko cheerte hue shehar ke sabse unche aur shandaar building ke saamne pahuncha: "The Grand Treasure Pavilion."
Yeh building poori tarah sone aur laal lakdi se bani thi. Iske bahar 10 guards khade thay jo Earth Realm ke thay.
"Zara ka headquarters..." Aryan ne building ko dekh kar seeti bajayi. "Madam toh kaafi ameer nikli."
Treasure Pavilion - VIP Room
Aryan ko seedha VIP room mein le jaya gaya kyunki usne Zara ka diya hua 'Black Gold Card' dikhaya tha.
Kamra makhmal (velvet) ke pardon se saja tha. Beech mein ek crystal table thi.
Darwaza khula aur Zara andar aayi.
Aaj Zara ka look kisi 'Maharani' se kam nahi tha.
Usne ek Black Silk Saree pehni thi jispar sone ki kadhai (embroidery) thi. Saree ka fabric itna patla aur smooth tha ki wo uske curves par paani ki tarah behta tha. Usne apne baalon ko ek loose bun mein bandha tha, aur kaanon mein lambe heere (diamond) ke jhumke pehne thay.
Jab wo chalti thi, toh uski payal ki chan-chan kisi music jaisi lagti thi.
"Aryan!" Zara ki aankhein chamak uthin. Wo aage aayi aur Aryan ke gale lagi. Uski khushboo—gulab aur vanilla ka mix—Aryan ke dimaag par chadne lagi.
"Tum zinda ho?" Zara ne piche hat kar Aryan ka chehra thama. "Maine suna kal raat Core Peak par ek Assassin aaya tha."
Aryan ne Zara ka haath pakda aur muskuraaya. "Choti-moti pareshani thi. Sambhal liya. Waise tum aaj katal karne ke mood mein lag rahi ho... mera matlab, bohot sundar lag rahi ho."
Zara hansi, aur wo hansi kamre mein ghanti ki tarah goonji. "Flirt karna seekh gaye ho. Acha hai. Batao, aaj kaise aana hua?"
Aryan ne table par Assassin ka saamaan rakh diya. "Yeh kuch kooda-kabaada hai. Ise bech kar mujhe 'Spirit Stones' chahiye. Aur mujhe ek Defensive Armor chahiye jo Earth Realm ka attack rok sake."
Zara ne saamaan check kiya. "Hmm, yeh weapons achi quality ke hain. Dark Moon Sect ka maal lagta hai." Usne Aryan ko ek serious look diya par sawaal nahi pucha.
"Iske badle main tumhe 50,000 Spirit Stones de sakti hoon," Zara ne kaha. "Lekin Armor ke liye... tumhe mere saath aana padega."
"Kahan?"
"Aaj raat 'Golden Lotus Auction House' mein ek neelami (auction) hai," Zara ki aankhon mein ek vyapari ki chamak thi. "Wahan ek 'Black Turtle Armor' bikne wala hai. Wo tumhare liye perfect rahega. Lekin..."
"Lekin kya?"
"Lekin wahan shehar ke saare 'Young Masters' (ameer bigde baap ke bete) aane wale hain. Wahan cheezein mehngi bikengi. Kya tumhare paas utna paisa hai?"
Aryan ne apni chair par piche tek lagayi aur smirk kiya.
"Mere paas paisa ho na ho... mere paas tum ho. Kya meri 'Business Partner' mujhe udhaar nahi degi?"
Zara ne Aryan ki naak kheench li. "Tum bohot chalaak ho. Theek hai, chalo taiyaar ho jao. Aaj raat hum tehelka machayenge."
The Golden Lotus Auction House
Raat ke waqt, Auction House lights se jagmaga raha tha.
Yahan entry sirf invitation se thi.
Aryan aur Zara jab ek aalishan bagghi (carriage) se utre, toh sabki nazrein unpar ruk gayin. Zara ki khubsurti aur Aryan ka 'Cold Asura Aura'—dono ek power couple lag rahe thay.
"Dekho, wo Treasure Pavilion ki Zara hai!"
"Uske saath kaun hai? Naya lover?"
"Shh! Wo Aryan hai, Surya Sect ka Rising Star."
Dono andar gaye aur VIP Box Number 3 mein baithe. Yahan se poora stage saaf dikhta tha.
Niche hall mein hazaron log baithe thay.
Tabhi, VIP Box Number 1 ka parda hila.
Wahan ek ladka baitha tha jisne safed aur sunehre (gold) kapde pehne thay. Uske haath mein sharab ka glass tha aur uske dono taraf do sundar ladkiyan baithi thin jo use angoor (grapes) khila rahi thin.
Yeh tha Kunal. Surya Nagar ke City Lord ka beta. Ek number ka ghamandi aur ayyash insaan.
Kunal ki nazar Zara par padi. Uski aankhon mein hawas (lust) saaf dikhi. Fir usne Aryan ko Zara ke paas baithe dekha, aur uska chehra gusse se laal ho gaya.
"Wo kachra kaun hai jo meri Zara ke saath baitha hai?" Kunal ne gusse mein glass tod diya.
Usi waqt Auction shuru hua.
Stage par ek host aaya.
"Ladies and Gentlemen! Aaj ki pehli item hai—Fire Serpent Sword! Bidding start hoti hai 5,000 stones se!"
Bidding chalti rahi. Aryan shant baitha tha. Use in choti cheezon mein interest nahi tha.
Aadhe ghante baad, Host ne ek nayi cheez dikhayi.
Ek servant tray lekar aaya jispar ek kaale rang ka chest-plate (kavach) rakha tha. Wo purana lag raha tha, lekin usme se ek heavy earth energy nikal rahi thi.
"Yeh hai Black Turtle Armor," Host ne chillaya. "Yeh Earth Realm Level 5 tak ka hamla rok sakta hai! Starting bid: 20,000 Spirit Stones!"
Aryan seedha ho kar baith gaya. "Yehi chahiye mujhe."
Niche se awaazein aayi:
"21,000!"
"25,000!"
Aryan ne mic uthaya aur shanti se bola: "40,000."
Poora hall chup ho gaya. Seedha double price?
Kunal (Box 1 mein) ne Aryan ki awaaz suni. Usne apne mic mein kaha:
"50,000."
Aryan ne Zara ki taraf dekha. Zara ne sar hilaya (Go ahead).
Aryan: "60,000."
Kunal gusse mein khada ho gaya. Koi usse takkar le raha hai?
Kunal: "70,000! Aur suno ladke, agar tumne iske aage bola, toh City Lord ka dushman ban jaoge."
Yeh khuli dhamki thi. Log Aryan ki taraf dekhne lage. Kya wo dar jayega?
Aryan ne mic on kiya aur hasa.
"City Lord ka beta ho ya Emperor ka... Auction mein sirf Paisa bolta hai, Papa ka naam nahi. 80,000!"
Hall mein Ooohhhh ki awaaz goonj gayi. Kisi ne Kunal ki beizzati kar di!
Kunal ka ego hurt ho gaya. "Tu... Tu janta nahi main kaun hoon! 1 Lakh (100,000) Spirit Stones!"
Yeh Armor ki asli keemat se bohot zyada tha.
Zara ne Aryan ke kaan mein kaha, "Aryan, yeh armor itna mehenga nahi hai. Chhod do."
Aryan muskuraaya. "Main khareedne ke liye bid nahi kar raha, main uska nuksaan karwane ke liye kar raha hoon."
Aryan ne wapis mic uthaya: "1 Lakh 10 Hazaar!"
Kunal paagal ho gaya. "1.5 Lakh! (150,000)!"
Aryan ne turant mic rakh diya aur host ki taraf dekh kar bola:
"Sold! Mubarak ho Kunal ji. Itna mehnga kabaada khareedne ke liye taaliyaan!"
Poore hall mein log hasne lage. Kunal ko ehsaas hua ki Aryan ne use bewakoof banaya hai. Usne 50 hazar ki cheez 1.5 Lakh mein khareedi.
Kunal ne Aryan ki taraf ungli ki. "Tu... Tu aaj zinda bahar nahi jayega!"
Tabhi Host ne aakhri item announce ki.
"Deviyon aur Sajjano... Aaj ki sabse khaas cheez. Ek anjaan Kala Patthar (Black Meteorite Metal). Isse koi nahi pighla paya, lekin isme se Asura energy nikalti hai."
Aryan ke andar Asura Bloodline uchhalne lagi.
[System Alert: Upgrade Material Detected for Shadow Fang!]
[Must Buy!]
Aryan ki aankhein serious ho gayin. Armor gaya bhaad mein. Yeh patthar zaroori hai.
Host: "Starting bid: 10,000."
Aryan: "50,000."
Kunal ne socha, 'Ab meri baari badla lene ki.'
Kunal: "60,000!"
Aryan ne Zara ki taraf dekha. "Zara, mujhe yeh chahiye. Har haal mein."
Zara ne Aryan ka haath thama. "Agar chahiye, toh milega."
Zara ne mic uthaya aur apni seductive par powerful awaaz mein bola:
"Treasure Pavilion ki taraf se... 2 Lakh (200,000) Spirit Stones!"
Kunal chup ho gaya. 2 Lakh uske paas bhi nahi thay (kyunki usne armor mein paise uda diye thay).
Host ne hammer mara. "Sold to Lady Zara!"
Aryan ne chain ki saans li.
Lekin Kunal ki aankhon mein ab sirf gussa nahi, Khoon (Murder) tha.
Kunal ne apne guards se kaha: "Bahar intezaar karo. Jaise hi wo shehar se bahar nikle... use maar dena. Aur Zara ko
mere paas lana."
Aryan aur Zara Auction se bahar nikle, anjaan ki bahar maut unka intezaar kar rahi hai.

 

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Nice update

 

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Chapter 17
Sone ka Shehar aur Neelami ki Jung​

Assassin ke hamle ke agli subah, Aryan ne faisla kiya ki wo haath par haath rakh kar nahi baithega. Us Assassin ke paas se jo Storage Ring mili thi, usme kaafi saare Spirit Stones aur weapons thay.
"Inhe bech kar main apne liye defensive gear khareed sakta hoon," Aryan ne socha. "Dark Moon Sect wapis aayega, aur agli baar wo puri taiyaari ke saath aayenge."
Aryan ne Kaalu (Dragon) ko apne kapdon ke andar chupaya (jo abhi bhi chota hone ka natak kar sakta tha) aur Sect se nikal kar 'Surya Nagar' ki taraf chal diya.
Surya Nagar (The City of Sun)
Yeh shehar Surya Sect ke bilkul neeche basa hua tha. Yeh koi mamooli gaon nahi, balki ek maha-nagar (metropolis) tha.
Jaise hi Aryan shehar ke bade darwaze se andar ghusa, uska swagat shor-sharabe aur khushboo ne kiya.
Sadkon par safed patthar lage thay. Har taraf dukanein saji thin.
Kahin 'Spirit Weapons' ban rahe thay jinki Tann-Tann ki awaaz aa rahi thi.
Kahin 'Alchemist' apni dawaaiyan bech rahe thay jinme se ajeeb rang ka dhuaan nikal raha tha.
Hawa mein bhune hue maas (meat) aur exotic masalon ki khushboo tair rahi thi.
Sadkon par har tarah ke log thay—yoddha (warriors) jinhone badi talwarein tangi thin, ameer vyapari (merchants) jo palki (palanquin) mein ja rahe thay, aur gareeb log jo rasta maang rahe thay.
Aryan bheed ko cheerte hue shehar ke sabse unche aur shandaar building ke saamne pahuncha: "The Grand Treasure Pavilion."
Yeh building poori tarah sone aur laal lakdi se bani thi. Iske bahar 10 guards khade thay jo Earth Realm ke thay.
"Zara ka headquarters..." Aryan ne building ko dekh kar seeti bajayi. "Madam toh kaafi ameer nikli."
Treasure Pavilion - VIP Room
Aryan ko seedha VIP room mein le jaya gaya kyunki usne Zara ka diya hua 'Black Gold Card' dikhaya tha.
Kamra makhmal (velvet) ke pardon se saja tha. Beech mein ek crystal table thi.
Darwaza khula aur Zara andar aayi.
Aaj Zara ka look kisi 'Maharani' se kam nahi tha.
Usne ek Black Silk Saree pehni thi jispar sone ki kadhai (embroidery) thi. Saree ka fabric itna patla aur smooth tha ki wo uske curves par paani ki tarah behta tha. Usne apne baalon ko ek loose bun mein bandha tha, aur kaanon mein lambe heere (diamond) ke jhumke pehne thay.
Jab wo chalti thi, toh uski payal ki chan-chan kisi music jaisi lagti thi.
"Aryan!" Zara ki aankhein chamak uthin. Wo aage aayi aur Aryan ke gale lagi. Uski khushboo—gulab aur vanilla ka mix—Aryan ke dimaag par chadne lagi.
"Tum zinda ho?" Zara ne piche hat kar Aryan ka chehra thama. "Maine suna kal raat Core Peak par ek Assassin aaya tha."
Aryan ne Zara ka haath pakda aur muskuraaya. "Choti-moti pareshani thi. Sambhal liya. Waise tum aaj katal karne ke mood mein lag rahi ho... mera matlab, bohot sundar lag rahi ho."
Zara hansi, aur wo hansi kamre mein ghanti ki tarah goonji. "Flirt karna seekh gaye ho. Acha hai. Batao, aaj kaise aana hua?"
Aryan ne table par Assassin ka saamaan rakh diya. "Yeh kuch kooda-kabaada hai. Ise bech kar mujhe 'Spirit Stones' chahiye. Aur mujhe ek Defensive Armor chahiye jo Earth Realm ka attack rok sake."
Zara ne saamaan check kiya. "Hmm, yeh weapons achi quality ke hain. Dark Moon Sect ka maal lagta hai." Usne Aryan ko ek serious look diya par sawaal nahi pucha.
"Iske badle main tumhe 50,000 Spirit Stones de sakti hoon," Zara ne kaha. "Lekin Armor ke liye... tumhe mere saath aana padega."
"Kahan?"
"Aaj raat 'Golden Lotus Auction House' mein ek neelami (auction) hai," Zara ki aankhon mein ek vyapari ki chamak thi. "Wahan ek 'Black Turtle Armor' bikne wala hai. Wo tumhare liye perfect rahega. Lekin..."
"Lekin kya?"
"Lekin wahan shehar ke saare 'Young Masters' (ameer bigde baap ke bete) aane wale hain. Wahan cheezein mehngi bikengi. Kya tumhare paas utna paisa hai?"
Aryan ne apni chair par piche tek lagayi aur smirk kiya.
"Mere paas paisa ho na ho... mere paas tum ho. Kya meri 'Business Partner' mujhe udhaar nahi degi?"
Zara ne Aryan ki naak kheench li. "Tum bohot chalaak ho. Theek hai, chalo taiyaar ho jao. Aaj raat hum tehelka machayenge."
The Golden Lotus Auction House
Raat ke waqt, Auction House lights se jagmaga raha tha.
Yahan entry sirf invitation se thi.
Aryan aur Zara jab ek aalishan bagghi (carriage) se utre, toh sabki nazrein unpar ruk gayin. Zara ki khubsurti aur Aryan ka 'Cold Asura Aura'—dono ek power couple lag rahe thay.
"Dekho, wo Treasure Pavilion ki Zara hai!"
"Uske saath kaun hai? Naya lover?"
"Shh! Wo Aryan hai, Surya Sect ka Rising Star."
Dono andar gaye aur VIP Box Number 3 mein baithe. Yahan se poora stage saaf dikhta tha.
Niche hall mein hazaron log baithe thay.
Tabhi, VIP Box Number 1 ka parda hila.
Wahan ek ladka baitha tha jisne safed aur sunehre (gold) kapde pehne thay. Uske haath mein sharab ka glass tha aur uske dono taraf do sundar ladkiyan baithi thin jo use angoor (grapes) khila rahi thin.
Yeh tha Kunal. Surya Nagar ke City Lord ka beta. Ek number ka ghamandi aur ayyash insaan.
Kunal ki nazar Zara par padi. Uski aankhon mein hawas (lust) saaf dikhi. Fir usne Aryan ko Zara ke paas baithe dekha, aur uska chehra gusse se laal ho gaya.
"Wo kachra kaun hai jo meri Zara ke saath baitha hai?" Kunal ne gusse mein glass tod diya.
Usi waqt Auction shuru hua.
Stage par ek host aaya.
"Ladies and Gentlemen! Aaj ki pehli item hai—Fire Serpent Sword! Bidding start hoti hai 5,000 stones se!"
Bidding chalti rahi. Aryan shant baitha tha. Use in choti cheezon mein interest nahi tha.
Aadhe ghante baad, Host ne ek nayi cheez dikhayi.
Ek servant tray lekar aaya jispar ek kaale rang ka chest-plate (kavach) rakha tha. Wo purana lag raha tha, lekin usme se ek heavy earth energy nikal rahi thi.
"Yeh hai Black Turtle Armor," Host ne chillaya. "Yeh Earth Realm Level 5 tak ka hamla rok sakta hai! Starting bid: 20,000 Spirit Stones!"
Aryan seedha ho kar baith gaya. "Yehi chahiye mujhe."
Niche se awaazein aayi:
"21,000!"
"25,000!"
Aryan ne mic uthaya aur shanti se bola: "40,000."
Poora hall chup ho gaya. Seedha double price?
Kunal (Box 1 mein) ne Aryan ki awaaz suni. Usne apne mic mein kaha:
"50,000."
Aryan ne Zara ki taraf dekha. Zara ne sar hilaya (Go ahead).
Aryan: "60,000."
Kunal gusse mein khada ho gaya. Koi usse takkar le raha hai?
Kunal: "70,000! Aur suno ladke, agar tumne iske aage bola, toh City Lord ka dushman ban jaoge."
Yeh khuli dhamki thi. Log Aryan ki taraf dekhne lage. Kya wo dar jayega?
Aryan ne mic on kiya aur hasa.
"City Lord ka beta ho ya Emperor ka... Auction mein sirf Paisa bolta hai, Papa ka naam nahi. 80,000!"
Hall mein Ooohhhh ki awaaz goonj gayi. Kisi ne Kunal ki beizzati kar di!
Kunal ka ego hurt ho gaya. "Tu... Tu janta nahi main kaun hoon! 1 Lakh (100,000) Spirit Stones!"
Yeh Armor ki asli keemat se bohot zyada tha.
Zara ne Aryan ke kaan mein kaha, "Aryan, yeh armor itna mehenga nahi hai. Chhod do."
Aryan muskuraaya. "Main khareedne ke liye bid nahi kar raha, main uska nuksaan karwane ke liye kar raha hoon."
Aryan ne wapis mic uthaya: "1 Lakh 10 Hazaar!"
Kunal paagal ho gaya. "1.5 Lakh! (150,000)!"
Aryan ne turant mic rakh diya aur host ki taraf dekh kar bola:
"Sold! Mubarak ho Kunal ji. Itna mehnga kabaada khareedne ke liye taaliyaan!"
Poore hall mein log hasne lage. Kunal ko ehsaas hua ki Aryan ne use bewakoof banaya hai. Usne 50 hazar ki cheez 1.5 Lakh mein khareedi.
Kunal ne Aryan ki taraf ungli ki. "Tu... Tu aaj zinda bahar nahi jayega!"
Tabhi Host ne aakhri item announce ki.
"Deviyon aur Sajjano... Aaj ki sabse khaas cheez. Ek anjaan Kala Patthar (Black Meteorite Metal). Isse koi nahi pighla paya, lekin isme se Asura energy nikalti hai."
Aryan ke andar Asura Bloodline uchhalne lagi.
[System Alert: Upgrade Material Detected for Shadow Fang!]
[Must Buy!]
Aryan ki aankhein serious ho gayin. Armor gaya bhaad mein. Yeh patthar zaroori hai.
Host: "Starting bid: 10,000."
Aryan: "50,000."
Kunal ne socha, 'Ab meri baari badla lene ki.'
Kunal: "60,000!"
Aryan ne Zara ki taraf dekha. "Zara, mujhe yeh chahiye. Har haal mein."
Zara ne Aryan ka haath thama. "Agar chahiye, toh milega."
Zara ne mic uthaya aur apni seductive par powerful awaaz mein bola:
"Treasure Pavilion ki taraf se... 2 Lakh (200,000) Spirit Stones!"
Kunal chup ho gaya. 2 Lakh uske paas bhi nahi thay (kyunki usne armor mein paise uda diye thay).
Host ne hammer mara. "Sold to Lady Zara!"
Aryan ne chain ki saans li.
Lekin Kunal ki aankhon mein ab sirf gussa nahi, Khoon (Murder) tha.
Kunal ne apne guards se kaha: "Bahar intezaar karo. Jaise hi wo shehar se bahar nikle... use maar dena. Aur Zara ko
mere paas lana."
Aryan aur Zara Auction se bahar nikle, anjaan ki bahar maut unka intezaar kar rahi hai.

Fantastic update bro

 

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