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𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐩𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝟒𝟒 𝐭𝐨 𝟒𝟖 𝐡𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐛𝐞𝐞𝐧 𝐩𝐮𝐛𝐥𝐢𝐬𝐡𝐞𝐝. 𝐏𝐥𝐞𝐚𝐬𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝, 𝐞𝐧𝐣𝐨𝐲, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐝𝐨𝐧’𝐭 𝐟𝐨𝐫𝐠𝐞𝐭 𝐭𝐨 𝐥𝐞𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐚 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞.

 

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Chapter 15
Kitabon ka Khazana aur Ek Purana Raaz​

Core Peak par Aryan ki subah ek alag hi andaaz mein hui.
"Meow... ROAR!"
Aryan ki neend Kaalu (Dragon) ki awaaz se khuli. Kaalu ne kitchen mein rakha hua 10 kilo 'Spirit Meat' (jo Aryan ne pure hafte ke liye mangwaya tha) ek hi baar mein kha liya tha aur ab Aryan ke bistar par kood raha tha.
"Oye bhukkad!" Aryan ne takiya fek kar maara. "Wo pure hafte ka rashan tha! Ab kya hum hawa khayenge?"
Kaalu ne masoomiyat se Aryan ko dekha aur apni poonch hilayi, jaise keh raha ho, "Main toh baccha hoon, mujhe maaf kar do."
Aryan ne sar pakad liya. "System, yeh dragon paala hai ya safed haathi? Iska kharcha uthate-uthate main wapis gareeb ho jaunga."
Lekin shikayat karne ka waqt nahi tha. Aryan taiyaar hua. Aaj uska pehla din tha jab wo 'Scripture Pavilion' (Sect Library) jaane wala tha.
Core Disciples hone ka sabse bada fayda ye tha ki wo Library ki 2nd aur 3rd Floor par ja sakte thay, jahan powerful techniques rakhi hoti thin. Aryan ko abhi sirf talwaar chalana aata tha (Shadow Fang), lekin uske paas koi dhang ki Movement Skill (bhaagne/udne ki kala) nahi thi.
Surya Sect Library - Scripture Pavilion
Library ek bohot badi 5-manzila imaarat thi. Yahan har waqt disciples ki bheed rehti thi.
Jab Aryan wahan pahuncha, toh mahaul thoda ajeeb ho gaya. Jo disciples wahan khade thay, wo Aryan ko dekh kar piche hatne lage aur fusfusane lage.
"Dekho, yeh wahi hai... Asura Aryan."
"Suna hai isne Vikram ka Dantian tod diya?"
"Isse door raho, yeh paagal hai."
Aryan ne in baaton ko ignore kiya aur seedha darwaze ki taraf badha.
Darwaze par do Guards khade thay. Unhone Aryan ko roka.
"Ruko. Apna Token dikhao."
Aryan ne apni jeb se Purple Token (Core Disciple ID) nikaal kar dikhaya.
Guards ne token dekha aur turant jhuk gaye. "Maaf karna Senior Brother Aryan. Aap andar ja sakte hain."
Aryan shaan se andar ghusa.
Library ke andar hazaron kitaabein thin.
* Floor 1: Common Techniques (Basic).
* Floor 2: Spirit Rank Techniques (Advanced).
* Floor 3: Earth Rank Techniques (Rare - Sirf Elders aur Top Disciples ke liye).
Aryan seedha seedhiyan chadh kar Floor 2 par gaya.
Wahan kaafi shanti thi. Kuch Core Disciples wahan padh rahe thay. Aryan shelf check karne laga.
* "Fire Fist Technique" - Nah, boring hai.
* "Water Shield" - Defensive hai, mujhe attacking chahiye.
* "Monkey Jump" - Naam hi bekaar hai.
Aryan kuch dhoond hi raha tha ki ek ajeeb si kitab par uski nazar padi. Yeh kitab shelf ke sabse kone mein padi thi, aur uspar dhool jami hui thi. Kitab ka cover kaala tha aur phata hua tha.
Aryan ne use uthaya aur dhool jhaadi.
Title padha: "Shadow Walk (Adhura/Incomplete)"
Jaise hi Aryan ne kitab kholi, System ka notification aaya.
Ting!
[Hidden Technique Detected!]
[Name: Shadow Walk (Ancient Rank - Broken)]
[Description: Yeh technique hazaaron saal pehle 'Shadow Asura' ne banayi thi. Isse user parchhayi (shadow) mein gayab ho sakta hai aur space mein teleport kar sakta hai.]
[Status: Incomplete. Missing last 3 pages.]
[Do you want to restore it using 5000 System Points?]
Aryan ki aankhein chamak uthin. "5000 points? Mere paas tournament jeetne ke baad 10,000 points pade hain. Yeh toh lottery lag gayi!"
Aryan kitab lekar counter par gaya.
Counter par ek boodha aadmi baitha tha—Elder Bookworm. Wo so rahe thay.
"Elder, mujhe yeh issue karwani hai," Aryan ne kaha.
Elder ne ek aankh kholi aur kitab dekhi.
"Shadow Walk?" Elder ne Aryan ko ghoora. "Bache, yeh kitab pichle 50 saal se yahan padi hai. Jo bhi isse seekhne ki koshish karta hai, wo paagal ho jata hai ya uske pair kaam karna band kar dete hain. Yeh 'Cursed' (shraapit) hai. Koi aur le lo."
Aryan muskuraya. "Fikar mat kijiye Elder. Mujhe khatron se khelne ka shauk hai."
Elder ne sar hilaya. "Tumhari marzi. Agar pair toot gaye toh mere paas mat aana."
Aryan kitab lekar bahar aane laga.
Tabhi, seedhiyon par kisi ne uska rasta roka.
Teen ladke khade thay. Unki uniform Aryan se bhi zyada fancy thi. Beech wala ladka lamba tha aur uske haath mein ek pankha (fan) tha.
Yeh Raj tha. Core Disciple Rank 5.
"Toh tu hai naya 'Genius' Aryan?" Raj ne pankha band karke Aryan ki chhati par lagaya. "Suna hai tune Vikram ko haraya. Lekin Vikram toh bas Outer Sect ka king tha. Yahan Core Peak par, humara raaj chalta hai."
Aryan ne shanti se Raj ka pankha hataya. "Raasta do. Mujhe training karni hai."
Raj hasa. "Itni jaldi? Pehle 'Tax' toh bharta ja. Yahan naye disciples ko apne seniors ko 100 Spirit Stones dene padte hain 'Protection Fee' ke naam par."
Aryan ne aas-paas dekha. Library mein sab log tamasha dekhne lage thay.
"Protection Fee?" Aryan ne Raj ke kareeb jakar, uski aankhon mein dekha.
Aryan ne apni Asura Aura ka bas 1% release kiya.
Achanak Raj ko aisa laga jaise uske saamne koi insaan nahi, balki ek bhookha shair (lion) khada hai. Raj ke shareer se pasina nikalne laga. Uski taangein kaanpne lagi.
Aryan ne Raj ke kaan mein whisper kiya:
"Main Vikram nahi hoon. Aur na hi main koi shareef aadmi hoon. Agar agli baar mere raaste mein aaye... toh main tumhara pankha todunga, aur haath bhi."
Aryan piche hata aur apni Aura wapis kheench li.
Raj wahin zameen par gir gaya, saansein phooli hui. Uske saathi bhi darr ke maare piche hat gaye.
Aryan bina piche mude chala gaya.
Library ke upar wali balcony se, Elder Bookworm yeh sab dekh rahe thay. Unki aankhon mein ek chamak thi.
"Asura Aura... aur Shadow Walk technique... Yeh ladka aam nahi hai. Shayad... shayad wohi hai jiska intezaar humein sadiyon se tha."
Aryan ka Mansion
Ghar pahunch kar Aryan ne seedha darwaza band kiya.
"System! Restore the Book!"
Ting!
[Deducting 5000 Points...]
[Restoring... 100%]
Aryan ke haath mein jo phati hui kitab thi, wo achanak nayi jaisi ho gayi. Uske pages golden light mein chamakne lage.
Title badal gaya: "Divine Art: Void Shadow Steps."
Aryan ne pehla page padha.
"Jo parchhayi ko apna dost bana le, use roshni bhi nahi pakad sakti."
Aryan muskuraya.
"Ab maza aayega. Agle kuch din, main gayab hona seekhunga."

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Chapter 16
Parchhayi ka Khel aur Andhere ka Mehmaan​

Aryan ka mansion shahar ke shor-sharabe se door, Core Peak ke kinare par tha. Raat ka sannata tha, aur chaand baadalon ke piche chupa hua tha.
Aryan apne training hall ke beechon-beech, zameen par palathi maar kar (cross-legged) baitha tha. Uske saamne wo golden-glow karti hui kitaab "Divine Art: Void Shadow Steps" hawa mein tair rahi thi.
[Training Phase: Step 1 - Merging with Darkness]
Aryan ki aankhein band thin. Wo apne andar ki 'Qi' (Prana Energy) ko mehsoos karne ki koshish kar raha tha.
"System ne kaha tha ki is technique ko seekhne ke liye mujhe apni Qi ko apne pairon ki 'Meridians' (naso) mein ulta (reverse) ghumana padega," Aryan ne socha. "Yeh khatarnak hai. Agar galti hui, toh pairon ki nasein phat sakti hain."
Aryan ne ek gehri saans li.
Usne apni neeli 'Spirit Qi' ko apne pet (Dantian) se nikaal kar dheere-dheere apni janghon (thighs) ki taraf dhakela.
Zzzzz...
Dard! Ek tez current jaisa dard uske pairon mein dauda. Aisa laga jaise hazaron suiyan (needles) ek saath chubha di gayi hon. Aryan ka sharir paseene se bheeg gaya, lekin usne process nahi roka.
"Focus Aryan... Dard bas dimaag ka waham hai," usne khud ko samjhaya.
Dheere-dheere, dard kam hone laga aur uski jagah ek Thandak (Coolness) ne le li.
Aryan ke pairon ke aas-paas jo parchhayi (shadow) thi, wo hilne lagi. Wo parchhayi paani ki tarah liquid ban gayi aur Aryan ke pairon par chadne lagi, jaise koi kala saanp ho.
Achanak, Aryan ne aankhein kholi. Uski aankhon mein ek kala dhuaan (black smoke) tair raha tha.
"Void Step!"
SWISH!
Aryan apni jagah se gayab ho gaya.
Koi awaaz nahi. Koi hawa ka jhonka nahi.
Wo seedha 10 meter door, kamre ke doosre kone mein prakat hua.
"Wow..." Aryan ne apne haath dekhe. "Main chala nahi... main fisla (slipped) space ke through. Yeh toh teleportation jaisa hai!"
Lekin khushi manane ka waqt nahi mila.
Grrrr...
Kamre ke kone mein so raha Kaalu (Dragon) achanak uth gaya. Uske kaan khade ho gaye aur wo darwaze ki taraf dekh kar ghurrane laga. Uske muh se halki aag nikal rahi thi.
Aryan turant alert ho gaya. Kaalu kabhi bina wajah nahi ghurrata.
"System? Koi hai kya?"
Ting!
[Warning: Hostile Intent Detected.]
[Enemy: 1 Person.]
[Location: Outside the Garden. Approaching fast.]
[Power Level: Early Earth Realm (Level 3)!]
Aryan ka dil dhadak utha. "Earth Realm? Level 3? Elder Shang ke level ka banda yahan kya kar raha hai?"
Aryan ne turant apni Shadow Fang sword uthayi aur battiyan (lights) bujha di.
"Agar wo takatwar hai, toh hume dimaag se ladna hoga."
Mansion ka Garden
Bahar ghana andhera tha. Hawa mein jhingur (crickets) ki awaaz thi.
Ek saya (shadow) mansion ki diwar se kood kar garden mein aaya. Usne kaale kapde pehne thay aur chehre par ek Safed Mask tha jis par koi chehra nahi bana tha (No-Face Mask).
Yeh ek professional Assassin tha.
Assassin ne hawa ko soongha. "Target yahi hai. Asura Bloodline... uska khoon bohot keemti hai."
Uske haath mein ek khnajar (dagger) tha jispar hara zehar (poison) laga tha. Wo bina kisi awaaz ke ghaas par chalta hua Aryan ke bedroom ki khidki ki taraf badha. Earth Realm cultivator hone ke naate, wo hawa mein apne kadam halka kar sakta tha.
Jaise hi wo khidki ke paas pahuncha aur andar koodne wala tha...
SHING!
Andhere mein se ek talwaar nikli, seedha uski gardan ki taraf.
Assassin experienced tha. Usne turant apne dagger se block kiya.
CLANG!
Chingariyan (sparks) udi.
Aryan andhere se bahar nikla, talwaar haath mein liye. "Bina invitation ke aana buri baat hai, Mehmaan ji."
Assassin ki aankhein mask ke piche hairan thin. 'Ek Spirit Awakening (Level 2) ke bache ne mujhe sense kar liya? Kaise?'
Assassin ne koi jawaab nahi diya. Wo piche hata aur hawa mein gayab ho gaya.
"Gayab?" Aryan ne idhar-udhar dekha.
[System Warning: Behind you!]
Aryan ne bina soche apni nayi technique use ki.
"Void Step!"
Aryan wahan se gayab hua.
Usi pal, Assassin ka khnajar wahan se guzra jahan Aryan ki gardan thi. Agar Aryan ek second bhi late hota, toh uska sar dhad se alag ho jata.
Aryan garden ke doosre kone mein prakat hua. Uski saansein phool gayi thin.
"Yeh fast hai. Bohot fast."
Assassin fir se Aryan ki taraf lapka. Is baar usne apni 'Earth Qi' release kar di. Zameen hilne lagi aur Assassin ki speed doguni (2x) ho gayi.
"Marr ja!" Assassin pehli baar bola. Uski awaaz fatte hue baans (bamboo) jaisi thi.
Aryan ke paas sochne ka waqt nahi tha. Seedhi takkar mein wo Earth Realm wale se nahi jeet sakta. Use apni nayi technique ka faayda uthana hoga.
Aryan ne apni aankhein band ki.
'Shadows... Shadows are my friends.'
Assassin ka khnajar Aryan ke dil ke paas pahuncha.
Lekin Aryan ne block nahi kiya. Wo... Parchhayi mein ghul gaya.
Assassin ka hamla hawa mein laga.
"Kya?!"
Isse pehle ki Assassin sambhal paata, Aryan uske piche ki parchhayi (shadow) se nikla.
"Asura Sword Art: Backstab!"
SQUELCH!
Aryan ne apni Shadow Fang Assassin ki peeth mein ghusa di.
Lekin Earth Realm cultivator ki body bohot strong hoti hai. Talwaar sirf 2 inch andar gayi aur muscles mein atak gayi.
Assassin chillaya aur ghoom kar Aryan ke chehre par ek laat (kick) maari.
BAM!
Aryan door ja gira. Uske muh se khoon nikal aaya.
"Shit... Iski skin toh patthar jaisi hai. Meri talwaar zyada andar nahi ja rahi."
Assassin ne apni peeth se khoon saaf kiya. Wo ab gusse mein tha.
"Ache tricks hain bache. Lekin power ka farak tricks se nahi bharta. Ab main tujhe tukdon mein kaatunga."
Assassin ne hawa mein haath uthaya. Uski Qi ikhatthi hokar ek bade Haath (Giant Hand) ki shakal lene lagi.
"Earth Crushing Palm!"
Aryan zameen par gira hua tha. Wo giant energy hand uske upar girne wala tha.
Agar ye laga, toh Aryan ki chutney ban jayegi.
[System Suggestion: Use Kaalu.]
Aryan ki aankhein chamki. "Oye haan! Bhukkad!"
Aryan ne seeti (whistle) bajayi.
Mansion ki chhat (roof) se ek chota kaala rocket launch hua.
Kaalu!
Kaalu ne hawa mein muh khola. Abhi wo chota tha, toh wo aag nahi fek sakta tha, lekin uske paas 'Void Dragon' ki ek special power thi.
"VOID BITE!"
Kaalu ne Assassin ke banaye hue us 'Giant Energy Hand' par daant gadaye aur... ek bada hissa kha gaya!
CRUNCH!
Energy ka wo haath hawa mein hi bikhar gaya.
Assassin ki aankhein phati reh gayin. "Mera attack... kha gaya? Yeh kaunsa janwar hai?!"
Is confusion ka faayda Aryan ne uthaya.
"Good boy Kaalu!"
Aryan ne apni aakhri bachi hui saari energy pairon mein daal di.
"Void Shadow Steps: Phantom Rush!"
Aryan ek hi pal mein Assassin ke saamne pahuncha. Is baar usne Assassin ki body par nahi, balki uski Gardan (Neck) par nishana lagaya jahan koi armor nahi tha.
Aur is baar Aryan ne apni Asura Aura (Fear) ko Assassin ki aankhon mein jhonk diya.
Assassin ek second ke liye darr se jam (freeze) gaya.
Aur wo ek second hi Aryan ko chahiye tha.
SHWING!
Ek clean cut.
Aryan Assassin ke piche land kiya. Wo ghutanon ke bal baith gaya, buri tarah haanf raha tha.
Piche, Assassin khada raha.
Fir dheere se... uska sar (head) apni jagah se khiska aur zameen par gir gaya.
THUD.
Assassin mar chuka tha.
Aryan zameen par let gaya. "Baap re... Earth Realm walon se ladna mazaak nahi hai."
Kaalu Aryan ke paas aaya aur uska chehra chatne laga.
Aryan ne use pyaar se sehlaya. "Tu toh hero nikla bhai. Kal tere liye double meat."
Aryan ne himmat karke utha aur Assassin ki body search ki. (Lootna zaroori hai).
Uski jeb se kuch Spirit Stones mile, ek zeher ki bottle mili, aur ek Kaala Token mila.
Us Token par ek nishaan bana tha: Ek toota hua Chaand (Broken Moon) aur uske piche ek Sanp (Snake).
[System Analysis]
[Item: Token of the 'Dark Moon Sect'.]
[Organization Type: Assassin Guild based in Central Empire.]
[Note: They are enemies of the Royal Asura Family.]
Aryan ne Token ko apni mutthi mein bheench liya.
"Toh unhe pata chal gaya hai ki main zinda hoon. Yeh sirf pehla Assassin tha. Ab aur aayenge."
Aryan ne aasmaan ki taraf dekha.
"Aane do. Jab tak wo aayenge, main unka swagat karne ke liye taiyaar rahunga."

 

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