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Ritesh – saale maine teri jaan le lunga pehle kyun nahini bataya .


Ritesh RB ko maarne ke liye uske gardan ko pakadta hai ..

Ritesh- yeh kya hai be

Ritesh apna mobile ka light uss jagha pe maarta hai .

Ritesh- aabe yeh khoon kanha se nikal raha hai be ..

RB – chal yanah se jaldi .
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Ab Aage

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Dono uske baad wanah se nikal ke sidha hostel aate hain .

Ritesh- aabe sahi maine jaad khoon nikal raha hai kya hua be .

RB – aabe upar se gira gaya

Ritesh- teri hi jada chul machi thi na building chadne ki ab bhugat .

RB – aabe pehle isse saaf karne ka ki jugaad kar abhi to khoon ruk gaya hai sukar hai ki piche ki traf hai agar vicky kopata chala to bohat bada kand h jayeg a.

Ritesh- sala tere ko to sirf gali padega par mujhe to wo maar ke halat kharab kardega .

Ritesh jaake pani wagera laake RB ka sar saaf karta hai aur itna bada ghaw nahini tha to filhaal ke liye ointment laga deta hai .

Ritesh- chalo filhaal ke liye tension gayee .

RB – thanks yaar bacha liya tune aaj

Ritesh- thanks se yaad aaya sale behn ke ****** kya tha wo

RB – aare kis bare maine baat kar raha hai ? aabe upar se uth dard ho raha hai .

Ritesh- tu ache se jaanta hai maine kis bare maine bol raha hoon to jada natak mat kar wo ladki anita kya chakar hai uska .

RB – kya hua uth apehle .

Ritesh – sale tu apne faide ke liye mera bali chada raha tha wanha pe .

RB – han tujhe kya probllem hai tu hi din bhar ladki ladki karta phirta hai ab dost ke natir itna toh kar hi sakta hoon .

Ritesh- sala tere ko itni padi hai na tu khud jhuk jaa mere saamne wo dimag kha gayee uss kch time maine .

RB – waise ladki kaisi thi pasand aayi ..

Ritesh- aabe ladki thi koi laddu nahin thi ki do minute maine taste karke bata doon ki achi thi ya buri .

RB – kya baat hai sala tu aaj itni gehrai maine utar ke gehrio gehri baaten kar raha hai tere upar suit nahnin kar raha hai ..

Ritesh – matalb kya hai tera .

RB – wo chod kya bola tu usse .

Ritesh – kuch bolne hi kanha di usne bas bak bak karte hi jaarahi thi .

RB – acha ji .

Ritesh – waise tujhe kaise pata chala wo mujhe pasand karti hai .

RB – beta tu abhi bachha hai thoda bada ho jaa phir bataunga .

Ritesh – wo gyan mat chod .. bata mujhe .

RB – iss maine pata karne wali baat hai agar tu class maine khud ladkiyon ke taraf dekhne ke badle ye dekhta ki kon tuhe dekh raha hai to tu asani se jaan sakta tha .

Ritesh – sahi hai .. aur sal amaine yanha itne din se pareshan ghoom raha hoon ki ek bhi ladki dekhti tak nahini .

RB- yehi toh farak hai bea hamesha tharak ke chakar maine rahoge to tumahare pass aane ko hota hai wo bhi na pass aayegi ..gyan le le kaam aayeg .

Ritesh- soory baba agar itna hi gyan hai to khud ke upar bhi istemaal karlete .. aap to dil se pyar kar rahe the phir bhi aap ke munh pe laat maarke lomdiya gayee na .

RB -………..

Ritesh – ohh shit sorry bhai maaf karna flow flow maine bol gaya .

RB – hmm par tu keh to sahi raha ha na .



Tabhi room ka door khulta hai aur vicky andar aata hai .

Vicky- aabe kya hua aur tu RB ke saamne hath kyun jodke bteha hai kasam ram aur hanumaan lag rahe ho .

Ritesh – aur tu ravan ruk abhi tere gand maine teer maarta hoon .

Sabhi hasne lag jaate hain .

RB – waise kanah gaya tha .

Vicky – yanhi market kuch kaam tha ..

RB – dipika ke sath

Vicky – nahini kyun

Ritesh – le beta jhut mat bol sale mere 200 liye the 1 mahina ho gaye wapas nahini kiya aur sala gf ke upar kharcah karne se piche nahini hat raha hai .

Vicky –aare keh raha hoon na kuch kaam se gaya tha dipika ke sath nahin yakeen na aata to phon ekarke puch le .

Ritesh – haan wo to maine karunga hi par sale tu jhut bolne se pehle apne honth pe lage lipstic to hata deta ..

Vicky jaldi se apne honth ko ponchne lagta hai .

Iss se dekh ke RB aur ritesh jo se hasne lagte hain ..

Vicky – kya hua .

RB – kuch nahini isne teri chutiya kaat diya ..kuch nhaini laga tha par tune khud prove kardiya ki tu dipika ke sath gaya tha ..

Vicky- kya saale teri to ..

Vicky pass maine pada pillow pakad ke vicky ke traaf fekta hai par vicky hath se usse dur kar deta hai wo pillow jaake RB ke sar lagti ahi .

RB ke munh se halki si sishki nikal jaati hai .

Vicky – kya awaaz tha yeh .. RB tune karhaya kya .

RB – kanha nahin to .

Vicky – jhut mat bol maine suna hai teri hi awaz thi kya hua .

RB – kuch nahini

Vicky – mere aankh maine dekh ke bol ..

RB – aare kuch na hua .

Vicky- meri kasam kha ke bol .

RB – aare bol raha hun na wo thodi si chot aaye thi bas jada koi baat nahini hai .

Vicky –kya hua hai dikha pehle ..

RB –aare kuch nahini tu khamokhan aise tension le raha hai .

Vicky – dikha chup chap .

Vicky aake RB ka chor detkhta hai .

Vicky- kaise hua ye aur jhoot bolne ka sochna bhi mat .

Phir RB uuse sab kuch bata deta .

Vicky- tujhe baat samajh maine aati hai jab mana kiya tha ek jagha betha nahini jata tujhe 5 din maine exam hai ye nahini ki beth ke padhlun nahini sir ko jake bijaat hona hai building chadna hai aur gir ke sar fudwana hai .agar hath maine chot lag jata to socha hai exam kaise deta .

RB – aare gussa kyun ho raha hai bola na tujhe sirf aakhir baar ke liye gaya tha .. mujhe jo jaanna tha ur jo puchna tha maine pooch liya . ab aage se usse baat kabhi nahini karunga .

Vicky- kasam kha kar bol tera koi bharosha nahini tu kal phir mood badal de.

RB – dekh teri kasam nahin khata kyun ki pata nahini maine usse compltely baat kiye bina reh paunga ki nahini par kosis jarur karunga ki aaj se baat na karun .

Vicky RB ko gale se laga deta hai .

Vicky- bhai tu itna hi bol diya yehi bohata hai .

Ritesh- wo wo aabe salon pehle mujhe sirf doubt tha ab sure ho gaya sala tum dono gay ho sala itna koi couples bhi aapas maine nahini chipakte hain jitna tum chipak rahe ho .. hat maine jaa raha hoon bahar barna tum salo mujhe bhi apne tarah bana doge .

Vicky- haan jaa jaa ab tujhe kya jarurat hamari tujhe to Anita mil gayee hai na chipakne ke liy e.

Ritesh- tujhe kaise pata be iss bare maine RB ne batya .

Vicky- beta aadhe college ko pata chal chuka hai ki tu girls hostel pe gaya tha Anita se milne ..

Ritesh- pagal hai kya be abhi aadha ghanta bhi na hua .

Vicky- beta tera naya naya pala pada ladkiyon se pata chal jayega dhire ki wo kya karsakti hai ..

Ritesh- sala par ye khabar kyun jab kuch hua hi nahin aur yeh sab to iss RB kakiya dhara tha .

Vicky- wo baat ye hai beta Anita tujhe bohat pyar karti hai ab tujhe koi aur najar na daale issliye wo sab kopehle hi batadiya ye khabar se ki aage koi tere pe try na maare .

Ritesh- hey bhagwaan matlab kal se koi ladki chara nahini dalegi .

Vicky- haan pehle to jaise tere aage piche hi ghoom rahe tha na sare ladki .

Aise hi doston ki masti majak maine kuch der batein karte hain phir book pakad ke beth jate hain kyun ki exam sirf kuch hi din bache the .

Wanhi dusre aur dipika jab room maine aati hai to swati ko phone pe kisi se gusse maine baat karte hue sunti hai .

Dipika- wo madam dhire dhire aur bhi kai log rehte hain yanha kya sab ke kaan kharab karogi chila chila ke .

Swati- mujhe farak nahini padta agar koi parehsani hai to kaan maine ear bud laga de .

Swati phone pe – maine kuch nahini jaanti ab aur maine ye torture nahini jhel paungi kisi bhi tarha se sika koi ilaaz karna padega .

Uske baad swati phone bed pe fek deti hai aur bed pe beth jati hai .

Dipika – kis pe gussaye hue bthi hai aaj phir.

Swati – aur kon hai ek hi badtamiz hai jo mera jindegi main kanta ban betha hai . “RB “

Dipika- kya baat hai pehle to bada pyaar aarakha tha uspe aaj ek dum se badtamiz tere se jada late to girgit rang badalti hai .

Swati- mere ko kyun suna rahi hai maine kya kiya wo aake mujhe pareshan karta hai ek baar maine baat samjh maine nahni aati . itna bolne ke baad bhi besharam ki tarha aake aise baat karta hai mano jaise kuch jaanta hi na ho .. aaj din maine itna kuch hua phir bhi wo building chad ke yanah room maine ghus aaya tha .

Dipika- kya RB yanah aaya tha wo bhi building chad ke . wo pagal hai kya abhi bhi uske ghaw thik se bahare nahini hai .. bade muskil se exam dene ke layak hua hai uspar aise harqat agar kuch ho jata to

Swati- ho jata to ho jata cha hota kam se kuch din ke liye usse jhelna to nahini padta waise gira tha itne upar se abhi kam se kam exam tak toh shakl nahin dekhna padeg a.. kash tang toot gaya ho .

Sipika- like seriously swati tu aise bol bhi kaise sakti hai .. you know what maine khamkhan tere se baat karke sar kyun fod rahi hoon .. tujhe jo bolna hai bol par yaad rakh bhagwaan sab dekh raha hai bohat pachateygi tu ..

Swati- tu meri dost hai ya uski

Dipika- dosti ha ha ha kya mast joke kaha tune .. kabhi ye question khud se puch tujhe answer mil jayegi .

Uske baad dipika wanha se bahar balkony maine chali jati hai aur RB ko phone karke uski haal poochti hai aur bohat sunati hai aise harqat ke liye .

Agle din RB chup chap aake colege ke dustbin saaf karta hai waise toh jada students nahin the par phir bhi kyun ki ek toh RB seniour tha upar se usko kafi jaante the to sab shock hoke usse dekh rahe the . bohat se juniour aur uske dost aake usee man kiya par wo nahini mana .. apne kaan maine earphone laga ke usne saare dustbin saaf karne lag gaya .

Tabhi principal wanha aata hai RB ko wanha dekh ke uske pass aa jata hai .

Principal – toh kya naam tha tumhara .

RB piche ke taraf dekhta hai principal ko apne piche khada dekh apne kaan se earphone nikalta hai .

RB – morning sir .mera naam RB hai .

Principal- to tumhe yaad tha ki maine tumhe punishment diya tha

RB – haan sir ..

Principal- par itne jaldi aane ki kya jaldi thi baad maine kar dete .

RB – sir wo exam ke liya padhna tha abhi hostel maine breakfast nahini bana tha .. ( exam ke chalte final year ke sare students hostel maine hi rehte the to breakfast pehle juniours ko mil raha tha ) to socha wnah bethne se acha yanha aake ye kardoon baran baad maine padhai ke liye time na hoga .

Prinipal- acha maine suna tha kuch din pehle tumhara accident hua tha ab kaisa hai .

RB – sahi hai sir ..

Principal- yanha aao betho tumse kuch baat karna hai .

RB – kya sir ?

Principal – betho

Dono pass ke ek bench maine beth jatte hain . abhi class suru hogaya tha freashers ka to bhid na ki barabar thi ground maine .

RB – haan sir bataiye kya

Principal- tumhara tayari kaise chal rahii hai exam ke liye . exam de to paoge na koi dikkat toh nahini hai .

RB – nahni sir koi problem nahin hai .. jada tar maine cover kar liya hoon exam acha jayega .

Principal- tumhe pata hai maine tumhe kyun kaha a dust bin saaf karne ko .

RB – nahini sir .par meri koi galti nahini thi .uss sooraj ne

Principal- shut up .. kya sooraj .. galti tumhari thi ye baat pehle maan lo aur dimag maine daal lo .

Tumhe kya lagta hai hum techer sare college maine jhak maarne aate hain hamare kaan maine kuch nahini aata ki kya ho raha hai kya nahini . hum sab jaante hain par hum jaan bujh kar chup rehte hain .. tumhe kya lagta hai mujhe nahin pata kya hua hai ..

aur yeh to shukar mano un logon ne tunhe mere pass le aaye ..barna soch sakte ho kya halat hota tumhara .

Ek baat hamesha yaad rakhan hamesha apne had maine raha karo apne bara bar walo se dosti aur dushmani agar karni bhi ho toh unse jinko tum baad maine handle kar sako .aur tum toh yeh dono bhul gaye .. maine tumhari personal life maine kuch nahin bolna chahata hoon wo tumhari marji hai .

par tum kal dekh liya na .. jis ladki ke liye tum yeh sab kar rahe ho uska kya jawab tha aur usne tumhe kya kya kaha .. wo swati dibang ahi .. unke parivaar ke khoon maine hhi ayaashi aur gunda gardi hai . yeh to shukar manao ki diwang sahab aur sachin dono ne tumhe abhi tak sahi salamat choda hua hai ..

aaj tum ek honhaar student ho tum padhai maine ache the par ab tum apni halat khud dekh sakte ho .. aur aaj jo tumhe maine karne ko diya hai ye tumhara future ho sakta hai agar tum abhi bhi haqiqat ko nahini maante ho .. tum unse jeet to nahini paoge par khud ko tabah kar doge .. agar man gaye tum jeet bhi gaye to milge kya wo ladki to tum ko nafrat karti hai .. meri baat samjah maine aaya

RB – haan sir .

Principal- to bas wohi baat dimag maine daalna jo hogaya usse dimag se nikaal do tumhe apni jindegi khud banani hai abhi ke waqt agar aise barbaad kardiya to pura jindegi kharab ho jayega .aur ho ske aaj jo yeh dustbin saaf karna as a punishment kar rahe ho wo tumhe aage life maine hamesha karna pade ..samajh gaye na meri baat .

RB - ji sir .

Principal- thik hai chalo maine nikalta hoon aur haan kal se yeh mat karna padhai karna thik hai acha results chahiye mujhe tumse thik hai .

RB – ji sir maine puri kosis karunga .

Uske baad principal wanhs se achale jaate hain .. RB wanhi beth ke sochta hai ki jo principal ne kaha wo kitna thik hai aur wo wakei maine apne life ke sath kya karraha hai . yeh sochte hue uske kal ki swati ki baat yaad aajati hai .

RB apne aankh se behta hua aansoo ponchta hai kaan maine earphone laga ke phir se dustbin saaf karne main lag jata hai..

Tabhi uske pith pe kuch takrata hua mehsoosh hota hai jab wo ghoom ke dekhta hai to suraj swati aur unke group wanha khada tha aur rajesh khali water bottle feka tha jo ki uske pith pe lag ke niche gira hua tha .

Rajesh – wo sorry my bad niche gir gaya maine to pakka nishane laga ke feka tha fir bhi dustbin maine nahini gaya .

Firdosh- aare kya pata bottle ko shayad dustbin se jada RB ka shakal pasand aa gaya isiliye uske pass chala gaya.

Radhika- waise dekha jaye to dono maine farak kya hai .

Iss baat pe sab hasne lag jaate hain .

Sooraj- aare RB bura kyun maan raha hai bottle hi toh hai uthake daal de dust bin maine .

RB ek smile karke bottle utahta hai aur sutbin ke anadr daal deta hai .

firdosh- wah wah kya sceen hai RB ji khud kachra uta rahe hain aisa sceen agar college ke shuruaat se dekhne ko milta to kya baat hoti .



rajesh- aare tension kyun le raha hai aaj nahini to kya aage do din aur bhi hai aur upar se RB tu ek kaam kar yehi kaam karna shuru karde acha paisa bhi kama lega .. tere aukat ke hisab se bohat hai ..

RB wanha se nikalne hi wala hota hai .ki rajesh usse rok deta hai .. aur apn epocket maine hath daale ke apna wallet nikalta hai aur uus se 500 ka note nikal ke RB ke hath maine deta ahi .

Rajesh- yeh le tune mera kachra utahya iska inaam aaj se tu yehi karega thik hai . maine janha janha kachra fekunga tu aake utayega roz aise hi paise milenge .

RB – rajesh dekh tu apna kaam kar aur mujhe apna karne de au apne paise apne pass hi rakh .aur aage se agar aise baat kiya na kasam se keh raha hoon acha nahini hoga ..

Swati- rajesh shyad usse utna paisa pasand nahini aaya ye lo swati apne clutch se 5000 nikal ke RB ke upar fekti hai .. yeh lo ab shyad yeh tumhe manjoor hoga na .. itna toh bohat hi hoga .

. tumhare jaise ke liye waise maine uss din keh rahi thi tumhare jaise ko mere ghar ke saamne guard rakhne ke liye ab mind change ab tumhe hamare ghar maine as swaeper rakhnugi .. tension na lo aur yeh paisa utha lo ho.

RB kuch der swati ko dekhta rehta hai uske aankh se ansoo ke boond beh rahe the par uske chehera pathar ke saamn ho chuka tha . RB wanha se mud ke jaane lagta hai .

Swati- aare le jo kyun itna nakhra kar arhe hho .. aur haan samjh gayee sirf paise hi nahini tumhe to ladkiyan ke jindegi ke sath bhi khelne ka shouq hai na .. tension na lo wo bhi tumhare liye college maine koi ladki jugad kardoongi .. paise ke liye apne gurur ko khatam karne wale insaan aaj kal kum nahini hai wase bhi ..

Swati wanah se aati hai niche pada ek note uthake RB ke pocket maine daal deti hai .. le jao isse apne liye na sahi jis maan ne tumhe har dusre ladki jism aur paise ke piche bhuke bhediye ke tarha jahapkan sikhaye uske liye kuch gifts le lena ..

RB swati ko apne se dur karta hai aur apne hath usse maarne ko utahat hai swati pani aankhe band kar deti hai . par RB bich maine hi rook jata hai . aur phir khud ke hi gaal pe jo se ek chata maar deta hai ..

Swati aankhe khol ke dekhti hai ..

RB – sahi nahini kiya tumne swati maine maanta hoon chahe jaan kar hui ho ya anjaane maine phir bhi uss galti ki jimmedari maine le raha hoon .. maine tum se maafi bhi mangi .. tumahare sooraj ke sath relation ke baad bhi tumahre liye intejaar kiya shyad jindegi bhar bhi karta .

par aaj tumhne meri maa ko jo bola hai na swati wo tumne sahi nahini kiya .. yeh jo hath utha tha na maine bohat hi aaram se tumahre gaal pe maar sakta tha .par meri maa ne mujhe yeh nahini sikhaya hai .. chalo tumhe meri skahal dekhne se hi problem hai na ..

thik hai ek baar exam aur practical khatam ho jaye .. kasam kahta hoon college ke baad kabhi tumhe apni skahal nahini dikahunga chahe kuch bhi kyun na ho .. aur haan baki raha paise ki baat to tumahri pase tumhi ko mubarak .. na mujhe kabhi tumhare paise maine koi dilchapsi tha na ab tum maine hai .. haan yeh ek note rakh raha hoon ..

ye mujhe yaad dilati rehegi ki maine jindegi maine kya galti ki thi .. by jindgi bha ke liye .. jiske sath bhi rehna khush rehna ..

RB wanha se mood ke nikalne lagta hai . aur pass se dustbin uathata hai aur aage badh jaata hai par thodi hi dur gaya hota hai ki Tabhi rajesh uske paas aajata hai ..

Rajesh – aare RB ji kanha chale kya hua aaj aapka andar ka shaktimaan kanha gaya ..

RB – rajesh mera rashta chod ..

Rajehs- aabe bata na yaar aisa kya kar leta hai tu sala pehle wo londiya barsha tere haar baat maan leti thi aur phir a swati .. waise chalo ab tere sath nahini hai . waise saali hai ek no ki ran*I Sali kal tak tere se ghoomti thi dekh aaj sooraj ke niche let ti hai .

waise sala suraj dimag maine kya gobara ghus gaya tha jo uss se shagai kar raha hai .. sala do mahine chod ke chod deta uske baad sala hum bhi thoda hath saaf kar lete .. na kya kehta hai ..

RB piche ke tarf ghoomta hai .. aur rajesh ko gale se pakad leta hai .usko pass ke diwar se lagwa ke upar utwa diya .rb ke pakad rajesh ke gale maine itne tej ho gaya tha ki wo chatpatane laga .. tabhi sooraj aur uske dost wanha bhag ke aajate hain .

Sooraj usse chudane ko aage badhta hai .

RB – galti mat karna sooraj bhul se bhi yanha aane ki na hi tum maine se koi .. koi nahini aayega aaj hamare bich .

Firdosh- sale chod use ..

RB – pahle dekh le kanha kahad hai mujhe ghanta farak nahini padta mujhe kya hoga par tera khud dekhle ..

Tabhi vicky aur ritesh wanah aajate hain wo yeh sceen dekh ke rajesh ko RB se chudane ki kosis karte hain..

RB – vicky plz aaj nahini aaj yeh nahini bachega mere hath se ..

Ab tak rajesh ka chehera pura lal pad chuka tha aur sare bachhe bhi jaam ho gaye the ..

Aakhir kaar jab koi kuch na kar paya to swati ko hi saamne aana pada .

Swati – chod do usse

RB – tum bich maine mat aao swati issne bohat badi galti kardi hai tumhare bare maine galat bolke ..

Tabhi swati aake RB ke gaal pe kaske thapad lagati hai jis se RB sun ho jata hai aur uske pakad se rajesh nikal jata hai . firdosh usse wanah se side kar deta hai . uske abhi bhi saans nahni aa rahe the ..

Swati- faltu ke panga karke maja aata hai .

RB- ussne himamt kaise ki tumhare bare maine galat bolne ki .

Swati- to agar wo bolta bhi hai to tumhe kya .. tum kon hote ho .. tumhe ek baar maine samajh nahni aata ..jab boll diya hai ki ab kuch nahnii bacha hai to kyun khamaokhan mera izzat ki dhajiyan uda rahe ho ..

mere dil maien tumhare liye kuch nahini bacha hai to acha yehi hoga ki tum bhi apne andar jo jhute pyar rakha hua hai na usse khatam kardo ..?

RB – ha ha ha ha jhuta pyar ..kya kaha jhuta pyar .. sahi hai ek din shyad tumhe samajh aayega ki mera pyar jhuta tha ya sacha .. aur baki raha mere dil maine tumhare liye pyar khatam karne ka ..

To ek baat yaad rakhna swati pyar kabhi kisike liye khatam nahin hota . par kuch aur chiz hai jo uss pyar ko chota bana sakta hai pata hai kya “Nafrat “ .

jo ab mere dil maine tumhare liye bhar gayee hai aur shyada uss pyar se filhaal jada hi hai .. shyad tumhe meri baat samajh maine aagyee ho .. chalo chalta hoon . aur haan sooraj agar principal ke pass complain karna ho ya kuch iss baar tumhe recording karne ki jarurat nahini hai ye CCTv ke footage dikha dena .sir ko ..

RB sooraj ke pass aata hai aur soraj ko gale lagata hai . RB ke iss harqat se wanha khade sab hairat the ..

RB – pata hai tumhe abhi tak maine kyun kuch nahin kaha kyun ki tum dushron ke jaise girgit wali harqat nahini karte jo karna ya kehna hoata tum ne abhi tak saamne kaha hai .

. barna kuch log toh girgit ko bhi sarminda kar dein ..”chal vicky chalte hain ..kuch logon ke chehera se ab nafrat karna sikhna padega ..”
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Bahut badhiya update hai bhai.... To principle ne RB ko roj safai karne ka kam diya or sooraj kyu Rb ke liye ye kiya dekhte hai.....or swaty principle ko kya kaha......or ritesh or anita ke bich kya hua......or diary me swaty kya likh rahi thi....
Waiting for next update
Thanks bhai
 

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This was one of the best update of recent all. In this update RB treated himself as leading character and justified with his performance.
I think something very serious is happening internally. I think swati is living in two character, one which is shilown to everyone and other that we reader felt sometimes.
Overall brilliant update this was.
 

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Je baat yaar ab laga naa ke hero hai chutiya nahi. Aatmsamman bhi koi chees hoti hai. To college ka safar ka Ab ant aane wala hai. Isake baad swati ke Saath kya hua wo bhi batana, usaki Aisi halat kyo hui?
Aur RB ne usaki bahan ke Saath aisa kya kiya tha, Jisake chalte use Itna kuchh jhelana pada?
 
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