Romance TANHAI KE SAHARE

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HI,
Bhai log ye meri peheli story hogi .abhi bhi complete draft nahini banaya hai maine par post karneka soch raha hun plz mujhe batana kaisa lag raha he ..aaj tak sirf story read kiya he . kasam se mujhe to adha function bhi nahini pata ki kaise post aur usse edit hota he .par try karne maine kya rakha he . pata bohat galtiyan hogi par aap logo mujhe bata dena plz ki kya galti he aur mujhe kya sudharni he ..

Character Introduction

• RB (story hero.par ye alag RB he maine nahini hun .maine sirf naam laga diya apna waise bhi na hi sakal hero jaisi he na hi koi character ,comedian jada lagta hu.)
• Swati Dibang(han yehi he wo jiske liye itna lamba story likhna pad raha he i mean story heroine )
• Sushil Dibang(swati"s father , hitler sala )
• Sarita DIbang(bole toh hero ki sashumaa "honewali")
• Sachin Dibang& Sourabh Dibang( sala relation wala nahini re .Bhai log a wo bale Sala he jise dekh ke sab ku munh se sirf yehi nikalta he "chal bsdk" .unfortunately swati's brother )
• vikram(vicky, RB ka best friend kuch jada hi handsome aur utna bada wala **** bhi he apne aap ko teesmaar khan ka baap samajh ta he par hamesha moonh ki khata he )

Ab ye mat poochna ki hero ki parents ki details kyun nahin he . aare bhai jab story maine hero ka hi dhang ka 10 -12 dailogue nahini honge to uske parents ke details kyun diya jaye .baki jaroorat padne pe details de denge usmaine kya he .

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TANHAI KE SAHARE

Update No 1


Jindegi aur pyar do aise shabd he jinka asli matlab aaj tak koi nahini jaan paya . Koi pyar ko jindegi ke liye kurbaan kardeta he toh koi jindegi ko pyar ke liye ,par inlogon se bhi kharab naseeb un logon ka hota he jo naki jindegi ko chod pate haine na hi pyar ko . Ye kahani bhi aise hi do pyar karne walonki he naki pyar ko chun paye na hi jindegi . shayad ye line galat bhi ho sakti he aur ye sab naseeb ka khel ho sak ta he .

Delhi ka ek sunsana area road ke kinare ek ladki ki aankh khulti he badi muskil maine wo dekh paa rahi thi kuch dhundla dhudla dikhne bhi laga tha . december ka mahina tha to kohra toh bohat tha , wo ladki apni halat ka jayeja le rahi thi ki kanha he kyun he aur andhere maine iss halat maine road side maine khud ko paake akele ladki ki halat kya ho sakti he ye toh sabdo maine bhi bayan nahini kiya ja sakta .

Dhire dhire usse sab yaad aane lagta he ki kaise nashe ki halat maine apne doston ke sath party ke baad aate time achanak unlogon ke bich jgada suru hogaya . Ek toh full nashe ki halt maine tun upar se jhagda jo ki thodi der maine hata payee ka roop le liya phir sab blamk jab hosh aaya toh road ke kinare .

Kisi tarha wo apne halat ko thik karke beth jati he aur apne phone aur clutch dhoondni lagti he par natoh usse phone milta he nahi clutch . kuch der waise hi bethne ke baad wo khadi hoti he toh uski chikh nikal jatti he uski per maine bohat chot lagi hoti he aur uss se khadi bhi nahini ho jaa rahi hoti he ,kisi tarah wo road ke pass aati he aur bas khusk aankhon se road ke dono aur dekhti he ki usse koi gadi mil jaye aur wo lift le sake . Apni puri jindegi ki flash back uske samne wanhi khadi khadi chalne lagti he wo kya thi aur aaj ky aban gayee he . Maa Sarita aur Pita Sushil DIwang ki ladli beti , apni dono bhai sourabh aur sachin ki ladli behna “SWATI DIWANG “ .
maa baap ke paas paison ki koi kami nahini he toh jahir bat he ki bachpan se kafi lad se badhi he .bachpan se sapna tha uski ki jindegi ko apane hisab se jeena he society se hat ke apne dil maine jo aaye wo karna he . Par phir bhi hamesha down to earth rehene wali dusron ki khayal karne wali sweet & perfect ladki . par wo kanha sochi thi ki jindegi aaj usse ek selfish ,drug addict ,don’t care attitude wali ladki bana degi . wo bhi khud bhi na janti thi ki ye jindegi ko usne chuna ya ye ayash life style ne usse .yehi sab uske aankon ke samne se gujar rahe the . aaj pehli baar usse apne jindegi pe saram aari thi ya pehli baar wo pane andar jhank rahi thi . Iss halat maine wo aaj dekh paa rahi thi ki akela hona kya hota he dusron ko dard dena kya hota he . shayad isiliye aaj kisiko uski phikar nahinihe jo usse aadhi rat ko dhunde ki wo kanha gayee he kya hua he , phone kare ,gali de ,haq jataye .

 

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Update No 2
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Ghar wale toh apne life style maine busy he unko iske life se koi matlab nahini he sir ek Maa jo rokti he jinki baat usssne aaj tak nahini suna . Han koi ho sakta tha uski bhi jindegi maine Jo sirf uski fikar kare ,jaroorat padne pe sath khade ho ke himmat de par ussne aaj tak itnoke dil ke sath jo khela tha kuchla tha to aaj koi iska friend bhi nahini tha . Han dost toh the wo sirf party aur club ke liye gam bantne ya shaulat dene ko nahini . aaj apne sare karma uske aankon se aansoo banke nikal rahe the .

Tabhi usse ek car aatihui dikhayi deti he . toh wo apni hath dikhake lift mangti he .wo car thodi dur jaake rukti he . Toh wo car ki aur badhti he tabhi door khulta he andar do aadmi the lagbhag 40-45 saal ke .toh swati unhe sari haal batati he aur aage bus stand tak ya main road tak chod deneki request karti he .

Tab wo dono aadmi usse bethne ko bolte hine aur kanha jaana he puch ke ,pine ke liye paani dete haine . Aaj ye normal bisleri bottle ki pani usse apne jindegi ki sabse pyaari aur swadist mitha lagta he . wo apne kismat pe has rahi thi ki kaise jo ladki aaj tak roti ki value pani ki value na jaan thi bhuk kya he pyaas kya he uski asli keemat pehchan thi. Par aaj simple pani ka bhi mehak rah tha aur mith mitha lag rah tha . bas aankh band karke wo ahi sab soch rahi thi kya iss se bhi bura uski jindegi ho sakti he ???


Jab aankh khulti he to apne aap ko wo kisi kamre maine chair se bandhi hui pati he .Ek pal ko usse lagta he wo sapna dekh rahi he par jab khud ko chimti katne ki koshish karne k liye apnihath uthati he to pata chlta he ki wo toh sach maine bandhi hui he . Pal bhar maine sab kuch uski aankh ke samne se gujar jata he .ab wo jaan jati he ki jis pani ki mehak ko wo apni beham samjh rahi thi wo actually sleeping pill mile hue the . tabhi samne ka gate khulta he qur phir light jalne ki roshni . hamesh club ki roshni ko dekhne wali aankhe aaj led aur tube light ki roshni se dar rahi thi .

 

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TANHAI KE SAHARE

Update No 1


Jindegi aur pyar do aise shabd he jinka asli matlab aaj tak koi nahini jaan paya . Koi pyar ko jindegi ke liye kurbaan kardeta he toh koi jindegi ko pyar ke liye ,par inlogon se bhi kharab naseeb un logon ka hota he jo naki jindegi ko chod pate haine na hi pyar ko . Ye kahani bhi aise hi do pyar karne walonki he naki pyar ko chun paye na hi jindegi . shayad ye line galat bhi ho sakti he aur ye sab naseeb ka khel ho sak ta he .

Delhi ka ek sunsana area road ke kinare ek ladki ki aankh khulti he badi muskil maine wo dekh paa rahi thi kuch dhundla dhudla dikhne bhi laga tha . december ka mahina tha to kohra toh bohat tha , wo ladki apni halat ka jayeja le rahi thi ki kanha he kyun he aur andhere maine iss halat maine road side maine khud ko paake akele ladki ki halat kya ho sakti he ye toh sabdo maine bhi bayan nahini kiya ja sakta .

Dhire dhire usse sab yaad aane lagta he ki kaise nashe ki halat maine apne doston ke sath party ke baad aate time achanak unlogon ke bich jgada suru hogaya . Ek toh full nashe ki halt maine tun upar se jhagda jo ki thodi der maine hata payee ka roop le liya phir sab blamk jab hosh aaya toh road ke kinare .

Kisi tarha wo apne halat ko thik karke beth jati he aur apne phone aur clutch dhoondni lagti he par natoh usse phone milta he nahi clutch . kuch der waise hi bethne ke baad wo khadi hoti he toh uski chikh nikal jatti he uski per maine bohat chot lagi hoti he aur uss se khadi bhi nahini ho jaa rahi hoti he ,kisi tarah wo road ke pass aati he aur bas khusk aankhon se road ke dono aur dekhti he ki usse koi gadi mil jaye aur wo lift le sake . Apni puri jindegi ki flash back uske samne wanhi khadi khadi chalne lagti he wo kya thi aur aaj ky aban gayee he . Maa Sarita aur Pita Sushil DIwang ki ladli beti , apni dono bhai sourabh aur sachin ki ladli behna “SWATI DIWANG “ .
maa baap ke paas paison ki koi kami nahini he toh jahir bat he ki bachpan se kafi lad se badhi he .bachpan se sapna tha uski ki jindegi ko apane hisab se jeena he society se hat ke apne dil maine jo aaye wo karna he . Par phir bhi hamesha down to earth rehene wali dusron ki khayal karne wali sweet & perfect ladki . par wo kanha sochi thi ki jindegi aaj usse ek selfish ,drug addict ,don’t care attitude wali ladki bana degi . wo bhi khud bhi na janti thi ki ye jindegi ko usne chuna ya ye ayash life style ne usse .yehi sab uske aankon ke samne se gujar rahe the . aaj pehli baar usse apne jindegi pe saram aari thi ya pehli baar wo pane andar jhank rahi thi . Iss halat maine wo aaj dekh paa rahi thi ki akela hona kya hota he dusron ko dard dena kya hota he . shayad isiliye aaj kisiko uski phikar nahinihe jo usse aadhi rat ko dhunde ki wo kanha gayee he kya hua he , phone kare ,gali de ,haq jataye .

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Update No 2
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Ghar wale toh apne life style maine busy he unko iske life se koi matlab nahini he sir ek Maa jo rokti he jinki baat usssne aaj tak nahini suna . Han koi ho sakta tha uski bhi jindegi maine Jo sirf uski fikar kare ,jaroorat padne pe sath khade ho ke himmat de par ussne aaj tak itnoke dil ke sath jo khela tha kuchla tha to aaj koi iska friend bhi nahini tha . Han dost toh the wo sirf party aur club ke liye gam bantne ya shaulat dene ko nahini . aaj apne sare karma uske aankon se aansoo banke nikal rahe the .

Tabhi usse ek car aatihui dikhayi deti he . toh wo apni hath dikhake lift mangti he .wo car thodi dur jaake rukti he . Toh wo car ki aur badhti he tabhi door khulta he andar do aadmi the lagbhag 40-45 saal ke .toh swati unhe sari haal batati he aur aage bus stand tak ya main road tak chod deneki request karti he .

Tab wo dono aadmi usse bethne ko bolte hine aur kanha jaana he puch ke ,pine ke liye paani dete haine . Aaj ye normal bisleri bottle ki pani usse apne jindegi ki sabse pyaari aur swadist mitha lagta he . wo apne kismat pe has rahi thi ki kaise jo ladki aaj tak roti ki value pani ki value na jaan thi bhuk kya he pyaas kya he uski asli keemat pehchan thi. Par aaj simple pani ka bhi mehak rah tha aur mith mitha lag rah tha . bas aankh band karke wo ahi sab soch rahi thi kya iss se bhi bura uski jindegi ho sakti he ???


Jab aankh khulti he to apne aap ko wo kisi kamre maine chair se bandhi hui pati he .Ek pal ko usse lagta he wo sapna dekh rahi he par jab khud ko chimti katne ki koshish karne k liye apnihath uthati he to pata chlta he ki wo toh sach maine bandhi hui he . Pal bhar maine sab kuch uski aankh ke samne se gujar jata he .ab wo jaan jati he ki jis pani ki mehak ko wo apni beham samjh rahi thi wo actually sleeping pill mile hue the . tabhi samne ka gate khulta he qur phir light jalne ki roshni . hamesh club ki roshni ko dekhne wali aankhe aaj led aur tube light ki roshni se dar rahi thi .

Ye update shayad unexpected laga ho kai readers ko, par jaisa bhi he, shuruat me he ek turnover jaisa he keep writing dude