Incest Shukriya Zindagi

[Naik]

Fantastic update brother keep posting
Waiting your next update
Thank you

 

[ShaitaanRaja]

Fantastic update brother keep posting
Waiting your next update
Thank you

Shukriya bhai keep reading keep supporting

 

[ShaitaanRaja]

Nice update

Waiting for new updates

Nice update

Thanks agala jaldi

 

[ShaitaanRaja]

UPDATE 8

Rajesh - haa aur kitab ko padhana jaruri nahi hai balki uss sai sikhana jaruri hai ki woh humare kis kaam aane waali hai

Edhar Meri classes khatam hui Kaafi thaka saa lag raha mai

Sherya - kaya hua

Mai - yaar kaafi time sai soya nahi thik sai

Sherya - toh jaao aur araam sai aachi si deep sleep lo

Jai - haa waise bhi aaj essko aachi need aayegi

Jai ke muh sai sun kaar thoda saa chauka mai par baaki sab hasnai lage

Shikha - toh shaam ko milega ki nahi

Mai - haa uth gaya toh

Shikha - kitana soyega yaar tunne kaha thaa ki vapas akar hum sabko party dega aur didi ki party mai hume bula ke kudh gayab thaa

Mai - chaloo aacha essi bahanai sherya ko bhi party de denge kyu sherya aa jaaogi ******** restro

Sherya - why not offcourse

Mai shikha ko gaale laga ke - see you at 6:30

Usske baad mai aram sai akar phele kahana kahaya aur phir soo gaya

Jab utha toh 6 bej gaye the

Mai jaldi jaldi ready hua aur sabske saath nikla

Sunny - Aachaa aaj ess time kaise sona huaa bhai

Mai - kuch nahi chhote bhaut thak gaya tha

ohh saayad batana bhul gaya sunny humsai junior hai

Sunny - hmmm aacha waise aaj kuch hua hai kaya baade kush dikh rahe hoo

Vishal has ke - abbe bhai nai gf bana li bataya bhi

Mai - kaya yaar vishu tuh bhi kuch bhi bolata hai

Bunny - haa sahi toh bol raha hai ek mahine yehi gayab thaa lagata hai

Mai - nahi be woh bus didi ke saath gaya thaa tabhi mulakat hui baaki kuch khaas nahi

Jai soch ke - accha ek din mai ussnai apna class tak change karwa liya

Mai - yaar usska man hai toh karwa liyaa

Vishal - yeh bhodu hi rahega

hum shikha ke ghar ke nicche hum sabani awaaz maari shikha

andar

Shikha home intro

Rohan thakur - shikha's Big Brother

Dhermandra thakur - shikha 's Dad

Sushmita thakur - shikha's Mom

Rohan - loo aa gaye tumhare gang waale

Sushmita thakur - jaldi jaa warana sab aase hi chillate rahenge

Aur haa aapko bata doo shikha and her family have very close relations with my family

Shikha jaldi sai lipstick thik karate hue - haa mom bus jaa rahai huu

Dhermandra thakur has ke - yeh sid bhi naa kitana hala karata hai

hum horn bajaye jaa rahe the tabhi shikha bhagati hui aayi

Shikha - yaar tum sab kisi din maar padwoge mujhe

Jai - pakka lipstick laga rahi thi

Shikha mirror mai lipstick thik karati hai

Shikha meri bike par akar beth gayi

Vishal - aree yaar humnai kaya galati ki humari bike par koi bethata hi nahi hai

Shikha - he he soo funny dheere chalana shikha lee tab bethungi

Jai has ke - toh yeh kon saa bailgaadi chalata hai

Mai - oyee jai aaj kaya ho gaya hai subah sasate nashe toh nahi kar liye

Maine bike aage bahdate hue bola

Jai - aacha matalb mai kaya hamaesha shaant hi rahunga kaya

Vishal - aree tunne sherya ko call kiya ki nahi

Mai - yaar maine number nahi liya hai

Bunny - yaar tuh c hai kaya

Mai - oyeee ladaki ke samani gaali nahi

Vishal - haa haa aabe ladakiya aaj kal jada gaali dene lagi hai

Shikha ungli dikha ke - aeee vishal mai unn jaisi nahi huu

Vishal - sorry sorry maafi mujhe raat ko marana nahi bhutani ji

Mai - aabe chutiy........ mai ruk ke haath chhod ke mat chala

Shikha mere kandhe par haath rak kar - essi liye mai esske saath kabhi nahi aati

Bunny - waah bhai salah dene wala puri gaali de raha hai

Thodi hi der mai hun restro pahuch gaye

Bunny - waise yeh sherya hai kon yaar

Maine - ********* ltd ki owner ki daughter hai

Sab - what

Mai - kaya hua

Vishal - hmm tere liye toh koi baat nahi huamre liye toh hai naa

Shikha - abb toh sid hume bhul jaayega

Mai - haa waise tum kon ho madam

Sab hasani lage Shikha ko chhod kar

Shikha kaa muh gir gaya

Mai usske gaal koo hila ke - aeee pagal majak kar raha huu

Shikha has ke - mai bhi majak kar rahi hu hee hee

Tabhi waha ek car ruki aur ussmai sai sherya bahar aayi

Maine ussko haath deakar bulaya

Woh humare pass aayi

Sab - hi

Sherya - hi everyone

Shikha - phele apana number toh dee doo yaar

Sherya - ohh sorry yaar bhul gayi 90645*****

Mai - hmm abb chale andar gaye

hum sab aakar ek table par bethe aur waiter aaya

Waiter - welcome sir kaya laau aaj kuch special hai kaya

Mai - yehi samjah loo

Waiter - samajh gaya mai kaya kaya lana hai

Waiter - esska naam hai subham kaafi mast banada hai mere sai kaafi aache sai baat karata hai

Woh andar chala gaya



Mai - aacha toh sherya aaj tumhara first day hai humari eas chhote sai pariwar mai Toh apne baare mai kuch bataoo

Sherya has - thanks sbsai phele sid tumhe ki tum jaisa friend mila mujhe aur tumhre milate hi etnai saare aur friends aur mera intro hai usske baad ussnai apni family aur baaki baate batayi joh aap saba janate hai

Vishal - waise sherya sach mai tum jaise friend pakar hume bhi aacha laga

Jai - haa etnai jaldi tum frank hui hume lag raha kaafi phele sai hum sab dost hai

Shikha - chaloo aacha hua sherya ke aane sai ess group mai abb mera dimag kam kahaya jaayega

Sherya - aisa kaya hoata hai

Shikha - pucch mat yaar yeh sab nahi kab kon si baate lekar beth jaate hai

Mai - ohh bataoo ki maharani apni saari baate hum par naa daalo Sherya humari side hai kyu jai

Asal mai jab bhi ladayi hoti hai vishal bunny sunny aur shikha ek taraf ho jaate hai

Shikha sherya ko chiz ke apni taraf chich leti hai

Maine sherya ko apni taraf chich liya

Shikha - sid dekh aisa naa kar

Mai - oyee bus bus yeh humari side hogi samajhi

Sherya man mai - yeh sach mai lad rahe hai kaya

Vishal - abb bus karo be woh dar rahi ussko lag raha hai hum sach mai lad rahe hai

Maine sherya ko dekha toh maine sayd jada tezz pakad liya

Mai - usske chhod ke - i am soo sorry sherya soor sorry tumhe hurt nahi karana thaa

Sherya kuch soch ke mere haath ko pakad ke khicati hai - i am with sid and jai

Mai shikha ko muh chidata hua - naa naa lee lee le

Shikha ghusse jaisa muh bana ke - joker kahai kaa

Mai - chaloo abb sab majak chhodo aa gaya abb kahaoo aur bataoo meri padand aaj ki kaisi hai

Asal mai maine subham ko esshara kar diya kaya lana maine ek tarah ki cocktail dish kahata hu kabhi kabhi wahi managaya thaa

Sab nai ek niwala kahaya toh kahatam karni ke baad dakar lekar hi kuch bola

Sherya - what a lovely dish mai bhi yaha aayi kaafi baar par yeh maine kabhi nahi kahaya

Mai - abhi toh shuruwaat hai meri jaan aage aage dekho....kaya hotaa subham jara desert bhi laa yaar

Subaham - bus ready ho rahi hai

Usske baad sabanai desert kahaya aur sab bahar nikale

Sab baate kar rahe the ki mom kaa call aaya

mai side mai chala gaya tha

Mai - hello mom kaisi hoo

Mom - kaise ho ke baache muh fula ke gaya thaa tab sai abhi tak time nahi milaa

Mai - sorry mom

Mom - aacha yeh bahi nai phir toh pareshan nahi kiyaa

Mai - no mom aap toh janati ho aapke liye woh jaan bhi de sakate hai

Mom - mere liye jaan naa bhi de toh thik par mere bete ke jaan ke picche kyu pada hai aur tunne kajal ko kyu bataya yeh sab

Mai - aree mom abb unnsai chupana sahi laga ess liye

Mom - hum woh hai kaha abhi

Mai - kaya matalb kaha hai

Mom - pata nahi 4 beje ki nikali abhi tak nahi aayi aur phone bhi band hai

Mai ghusse mai chilla ke - aur yeh abb mujhe bata rahi hoo aap

Mom - aree ghusaa kyu hota mujhe kudh tension ho rahi hai

Maine phone kata jaldi sai aur call kiya kisi ko

aur vapas sabke pass akar

Vishal - aare bhai kaya etna pareshan kyu ho raha hai

Mai - sherya hum sab tumhari car sai chale

Sherya gahbra kar - haa sure

Mia jaldi sai parking mai bahagta hua gaya

edhar

sherya - kaya hua

Jai - pakka didi ki koi baat hai etna pareshan tabhi hota hai woh

Mai car lekar aaya aur sabko betha ke nikala

Mai phir phone laga ke - abbe kaya saale mar gaye ho kaya etna time lag raha hai

udhar sai - bhai bus bus pata lagate hi batatat huu apni bus etna pata chala road number 675 ki tarf gayi thi car

Maine ek jhatke mai drift ki car aur full speed par bahaga di

​

 

[Sweet_Sinner]

अब तक बहुत ही अच्छी कहानी लिखी है। कहानी में कोई रुचि नहीं ले रहा है ये सोच के यदि आप कहानी बंद कर देगे । तो जिसे यह कहानी अच्छी लग रही है वो भी इस कहानी से वंचित रह जाएंगे । आप कहानी को पूरा करे , कई बार नई कहानी के शुरुआत में कम लोग पढ़ते है पर कहानी जैसे जैसे आगे बढ़ती है लोग पढ़ने लग जाते है और आपकी कहानी अभी तक तो तारीफ के काबिल है बाद की और भी अच्छी हो ।

 

[ShaitaanRaja]

अब तक बहुत ही अच्छी कहानी लिखी है। कहानी में कोई रुचि नहीं ले रहा है ये सोच के यदि आप कहानी बंद कर देगे । तो जिसे यह कहानी अच्छी लग रही है वो भी इस कहानी से वंचित रह जाएंगे । आप कहानी को पूरा करे , कई बार नई कहानी के शुरुआत में कम लोग पढ़ते है पर कहानी जैसे जैसे आगे बढ़ती है लोग पढ़ने लग जाते है और आपकी कहानी अभी तक तो तारीफ के काबिल है बाद की और भी अच्छी हो ।

Yeh Baat toh mai janata hi huu ki shuru mai views nhi aayenge chaloo koi ruchi le yaa naa lee likh toh rha huu Tarif ke liye shukriyaa agar yeh aaur kabile tarif lagi toh aage toh kaafi pasand aane waali hai

 

[Ritima]

Gr8 update. Mama ka role pata chal gaya. Or Hero to mst banda h dost ke sath bhi achi msti chal rahi thi. But ye lst mai kya hua? Koi gahra raj h. I think ye uske sis ke bf ka issue hoga jo ditch kar ke kidnap to nhi kiya? Ab ye to next update mai pata chelega. Tab kaise chalega. Yar suspens mai daal diya. Waiting next

 

[Ritima]

One of Best story i hv read on internet. Keep going. We all are with u.

 

[amita]

Bahut badhiya update

 

[Dev123]

Nice start...bhai