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Haha baba kumar vishwash ki poetry bhi padhta hSAAJAN
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Raj—Jara dhyan se sochiye…Jis raaz ko sadiyo se aaj tak koi nahi jaan paya…jis raaz se aaj tak har koi anjan hai kya vo itni saralta se hasil hoga……
Payal—Jarur koi bahut hi bada rahasya hai ye.
Raj—aisa hi kuch samajh lo
Idhar hum baate karne me mashgul the udhar nani akele hi gufa me ghumne nikal gayi…aise hi ghumte huye ek jagah pahuchi ..tabhi unhe laga ki koi unke piche khada hai….ye mahsoos hote hi unke rongte khade ho gaye
Darte darte vo kisi tarah palti aur phir palatate hi kuch dekh kar jor se cheekh uthi...
‘’Rajjjj se to tummmm bach gayiiii magar ab mujhse tumhe koun bachayegaaa....hahahahaha’’
Ab Aage.......
Nani ki cheekh sun kar hum unki taraf bhage, maine dekha vaha payal didi kulhadi upar kiye huyi thi aur nani ankhe band kar ke chillaye ja rahi thi.
Raj—didi, stop it
Payal—nahi...main iss fasad ki jad ko kaat kar rahungi, tabhi mujhe chain ayega.
Nani (meri taraf bhagte huye)—Rajj...mujhe bachaa le iss payal se....ye mujhe akele pa kar kabhi bhi maar sakti hai main kal hi apne ghar chali jaungi
Raj—apko kahi jane ki jarurat nahi hai....didi aisa kuch nahi karengi
Payal—main aisa hi karungi
Raj—maine apko apni kasam di thi na ki aap nani ko kuch nahi karogi....Theek hai jab meri kasam ki koi value hi nahi hai aap ki nazaro me to phir jo apka mann aaye vo karo, main koun hota hu apko kuch kahne wala.
Payal (tadap kar)—Rajj...aisa mat bolll.....teri kasam to main sapne me bhi nahi tod sakti….lekin tujhe koi kuch kahta hai to mujhse bardast nahi hota..main kya karu….?…ab se tu jaisa rahne ko kahega main rahungi, kisi ko kuch bhi nahi bolungi....lekin pls tu mujh se muh mat mod....agar tu hi mujhse rooth jayega to main jee kar kya karungi...apni is kulhadi se main khud ka hi gala kaat lungi.
Itna bolte bolte payal didi ka gala bhar aaya aur ankhe chhalak aayi....mujhe kuch ehsaas hote hi unki taraf mud gaya aur unki dard aur tadap se bhari ankhe dekh kar mera hriday bhi unke dard se jud kar tadap utha.
Neha—Raj kyo rula raha hai meri bachchi ko..... ? hum sab jante hain ki tujhe vo kitna chahti hai....chal ja use shant kar jaldi se....varna usse maarne ke liye kisi kulhadi ki jarurat nahi padegi vo vaise hi yo hi rote rote hi mar jayegi.
Neha chachi ki baat sun kar mai jaldi se payal didi ke paas ja kar unhe khich ke apne seene se laga liya....meri chhati se lagte hi payal didi joro se bifar uthi....maine dono hatho me unka chehra thaam kar unke anshuo ko pine laga.
Raj—khabardar jo ab ek bhi boond pani vyarth me bahaya to....ye bahut anmol moti hain…..inhe aise hi bekar mat bahne diya karo.
Payal (sisakte huye)—to phir tu mujhse rootha kyo tha...... ? tu hi to rulata hai mujhe……meri har khushi, har gum tujh se hi to judi hain…..tu rooth gaya to ek pal ke liye mujhe aisa lagne laga jaise ki meri saanse hi tham jayengi… mere hriday ne spandan karna hi band kar diya ho jaise……bhale hi poori duniya mujh se rooth jaye to mujhe koyi parwah nahi magar tu mat naraz hua kar rajj mujh se.
Raj (khud se chipka kar)—Bhala main apse naraz ho sakta hu kabhi….? Aap, paridhi didi aur ruchi didi mere hriday ka tukda ho…..phir kabhi aisa kuch mat sochna.
Payal didi mere seene se chipak gayi aur nani aur chachi ke samne hi unhone bekhayali me mujhe hotho par kiss karne lagi….paridhi didi ek tak mujhe dekhe ja rahi thi, maine unhe dekh kar apni baahe khol di to vo bhi bhag kar tezi se meri agosh me simat gayi aur vo mujhe sab ke samne hi chumne lagi.
Dono ko mujhe aise chumte huye dekh kar neha chachi aur nani ki to ankhe hi phat padi kintu unhone koi bhi tika tippani nahi ki….kuch der aise hi chumma chati ke baad jab mahaul me shanti aa gayi to maine dono ko alag kiya.
Raj—chalo ab samay mat barbad karo…..hame uss aboojh paheli ko bhi to boojhna hai abhi…..vaise didi aap nani ke piche kab gayi thi…?
Payal—mujhe shaq tha ki kahi inhone tumhe yaha ka pata bata kar phasane ka koi chaal na kheli ho….isliye meri nazar in par hi jami huyi thi….jab ye tum se alag ho kar idhar udhar ghumne lagi to maine bhi picha karte huye vaha pahuch gayi ki agar kuch gadbad kiya to vahi kaat dungi.
Raj—hmmmm to ye baat hai……khair chalo paheli ko dekhte hain.
Paridhi—haa chalo
Neha (mann me)—kahi maa ji baat sach to nahi….? Payal aur paridhi dono kaise besharam ho kar raj ko choom rahi thi vo bhi uske hoth par, aisa kiss kisi bahan ka to nahi ho sakta……lekin raj hai bhi to kitna sundar, usme har vo khoobi hai jo ek ladki apne jeevan sathi me dhoodti hai….hum sab to paridhi ko mritpray hi samajh chuke the kintu raj ne usko naya jeevan diya, mujhe meri beti se mila diya aur maa ji ne , chheee….mujhe raj par hi bharosa karna chahiye tha.
Paridhi—kaha kho gayi mummy…..?
Neha—hnnn….kahi nahi bas yo hi.
Nani—kaha se yaha aa gayi main....ab to bahar bhi nahi nikal sakte.
Paridhi—lekin in shabdo a kya arth hai….?
Raj—pata nahi…….lekin jo bhi likha hai uska sambandh iss sher ke mukhoute se avashya hi sambandhit hona chahiye tabhi uske niche likha hai.
Maine uss sher ko dekhte huye uss par hath phirane laga charo taraf……kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha tha…aise hi hath pherte huye achanak jaise hi maine uski ek ankh par ungli ghumayi to jaise vaha bhookamp aa gaya…..ghad ghadahat ki joro se awaz hone lagi…..hum sabhi hairan rah gaye ki achanak ye kya hone laga.
Lekin agle hi pal hamare ashcharya ki seema hi nahi rahi jab hamne dekha ki sher ki uss ankh se jiske upar meri ungli dab gayi thi vaha se ek roshni nikal kar samne ki deewar par takrane lagi.
Jaise jaise roshni deewar se takarati ja rahi thi vaha par ek dwar dhire dhire khulta ja raha tha…hum sab hatprabh ho kar iss drishya ko sirf kisi mook darshak ki bhanti dekhe ja rahe the…..neha chachi aur nani ke liye to ye ghatna kisi avishvashniya se lagne wale khwab se kam nahi thi.
Jaise hi sher ki ankh se roshni nikalni band huyi to vo mukhouta vaha se gayab ho gaya…….sab ek baar phir se chounk gaye….maine samne ki deewar par nazar doudayi to vaha par ab ek chhota sa dwar ban chuka tha, jyada chouda to nahi kintu itna avashya tha ki ek baar me ek admi nikal sakta tha usme se ho kar.
Payal—yee kaise ho gaya….? Kya kiya tha tumne…?
Raj—maine kuch nahi kiya vo sab to apne aap hi ho gaya….dekho ab hame aage jane ka rasta bhi mil gaya hai.. to adhik vilamb karna uchit nahi hai.
Neha—haa chalo…ab aage chalte hain
Raj—sab ek ek kar ke dwar se andar pravesh karna.
Sabse pahle maine uss chhote dwar se ghus kar andar gaya….baki sab bhi mera anusharan karte huye kramshah ek ke baad ek dwar se ho kar andar aa gaye.
Sab ke andar aate hi vo dwar punah band ho gaya jaise ki vaha kabhi aane jane ka koi rasta tha hi nahi…..aage ekdam ghana andhera tha….hath ko hath nazar nahi aa raha tha.
Neha—Yaha to roshni bilkul nahi hai…..aise andhere me hum aage kaise ja sakte hain….?
Raj—baat to sahi hai apki….lekin hame aage badhna to padega hi……sab ek dusre ka hath pakad lo aur mere sath sath badhte raho….kahi na kahi kinara bhi mil hi jayega.
Sab mera hath pakad ke sath me chalne lage…..abhi hum kuch hi door gaye honge ki tabhi hamare pairo ko lohe ki moti moti zanjeero ne jakad liya.
Lohe ki salakhe itni bhari thi ki ek kadam bhi aage badha pana dubhar ho gaya…..sab darr ke maare mujhse joro se chipak gayi….maine kafi jor lagaya un bediyo se picha chhudane ka kintu sabhi prayas bekar ho gaye.
Payal—ye kya nayi musibat hai, raj….?
Nani—ye zanjeerto bahut bhari hain…..kisne baandha hai hame….ab vo hame jinda nahi chhodega….mujhe abhi marna nahi hai……raj mujhe bacha lo.
Payal—haa tum kyo marogi…? Hum sabko maarne ke baad hi marogi tum….dyne kahi ki
Raj—didiii
Payal—sorry
Neha—raj ab kya kare….?
Paridhi—kisne pakda hame….?
Raj—cool down…mujhe kuch sochne do…….didi jara torch dena.
Payal—vo nahi jal rahi hai…..maine dwar se andar aate hi torch on karne ki koshish ki thi lekin vo bhi kaam nahi kar rahi hai, shayad battery khatam ho gayi ho.
Paridhi—meri torch bhi kaam nahi kar rahi
Nani—ab kya hoga..... ? kya hum maare jayenge..... ?
Payal—hum nahi sirf tum
Raj (has kar)—didi...pls
Payal—sorry again…..lekin iss budhiya ko bol do ki chup rahe.
Achanak sab joro se cheekhne lagi…..un zanjeero ne dono pairo ko vipreet disha me khichna shuru kar diya tha….jisse sabhi dard se tilmila gayi
Payal—rajjjj…..mere pair….ye kaha phas gaye….?
Neha—jaldi kuch kar rajjj….nahi to hamari tange phat jayengi
Paridhi—rajjj….kuch karrr….aaaaaaaaaa
Maine turant niche baith kar dono hatho me sab ki zanjeero ko lapet liya…..ab un sab ki zanjeero ka jor mere dono hatho me aa gaya…..vo lagatar khiche ja rahi thi aur main bilkul nakam hota ja raha tha.
Ek baar phir se jaise hi main kuch shithil hua to sab ke pair phailne lage…..ye dekh maine punah jor laga kar un salakho ko apni taraf khichne ki koshish ki lekin kewal aanshik der ke liye hi main unko rok paya….un salakho ko koi meri takat ke muqable duguni takat se apni oor khich raha tha, jiske karan ab main bhi thakan mahsoos karne laga tha.
Idhar ye sab chillaye ja rahi thi dard ki vajah se…..maine ab ki baar apni ankhe band kar ke dil aur dimag ko sthir kiya aur apni poori taqat ikatthi kar ke dono hatho me pakdi zanjeero ko ek jor ke jhatke se apni taraf khicha to vo salakhe kisi kate huye ped ke jaise apni jagah se ukhad kar bilkul nidhal ho gayi.
Aur agle hi pal waha charo taraf prakash hi prakash phail gaya…….jaise hi sabne apne charo oor nazar ghumayi to sabhi hairan rah gaye……hum kisi atyant manmohak sundar hare bhare baag me khade the….Jo charo taraf se khubsoorat hare bhare pahado se aachchhadit tha.
Uss baag ki ghata hi bahut shobhniya, chittakarshak aur nirali thi…..har tarah ke phal phool se lade ped the…hari hari ghaas thi jo kisi makhmal ke gadde ki tarah ekdam mulayam prateet hoti thi.
Payal—wow ! kitni beautiful jagah hai….bilkul swarg me aa gaye ho jaise.
Nani—kahi hum sach much me marr to nahi gaye aur swarg me pahuch gaye ho…..?
Payal—hum nahi kewal tum marogi aur swarg me nahi balki narak me jaogi
Neha—lekin raj ye sab kaisa chamatkar hai….? Vo salakhe kaha gayi ab... ? ye koun si jagah hai.... ?
Raj—ye sab Tilism ka mayajaal hai....hame aage chalna chahiye shayad yaha se hame koi agla surag mile.
Nani—kitne mithe phal hain, kya main ek kha lu..... ?
Payal—tere pet me kutte bulbula rahe honge….free ka maal dekh kar.
Raj—nahi, yahi ki kisi cheez ko hath mat lagana, ye sab mayajaal hai….hum kisi bhi nayi musibat me phas sakte hain.
Neha—aisa kuch adbhut Tilism bhi hota hai aaj ke jamane me….maine to kabhi kalpana bhi nahi ki thi.
Paridhi—raj theek kahta hai….hame yaha ki koi vastu ko hath nahi lagana chahiye.
Neha—Raj, ye Tilism hota kya hai…….?
Raj—Tilism arabian bhasa ka shabd hai jiska arth hai ‘Indrajalik Rachna’…..Gaade huye dhan aadi par banayi huyi sarp aadi ki bhayavani aakruti aur dawaao tatha lagn ke mel se bandha hua yantra…..iss yantra ko hi Tilism kahte hain.
Kahte hain ki tilism vahi vyakti taiyyar karta hai jiske paas bahut sara dhan ho aur uske koi vaaris na ho… prachin kaal me rajao ko jab tilism baandhne ki ichchha hoti thi to tantrik ikatthe kiye jate the….unhi logo dwara tilism baandhne ke liye jamin khodi jati thi….ussi jamin ke andar khajana rakh kar uske upar tilismi imarat banayi jati thi.
Jyotishi, nahoomi, vaidhya, karigar aur tantrik log apni taqat ke mutabik uske chhipane ki bandish karte the magar iske sath hi uss admi ke nakshatra aur graho ka bhi khyal rakhte the jiske liye vah tilism taiyyar kiya gaya ho.
Nani—iska matlab yaha bhi bahut sara khajana chhupa hoga….? Hai na raj…?
Payal—tere marte hi vo khajana teri khaal ke andar thoons ke bhar doongi, le jana vahi apne sath…….huuuuh..khajana milega….yaha hum kya pata karne aaye hain aur iss budhiya ko khajane ki padi hai.
Paridhi—agar tilism kisi dhan ko chhupane ke liye banaya jata hai to phir hum to rajgarh ka raaz janne aaye hain iska tilism se sambandh kyo hai….?
Raj—Tilism har uss raaz ko chhupane ke liye taiyyar kiya jata hai jise koi jaan na sake bina uss tilism ko tode… kisi bhi tilism ko todne me jaan bhi ja sakti hai…..usme khatre hi khatre hote hain.
Neha—phir to koi tod hi nahi pata hoga tilism ko….?
Raj—nahi aisa nahi hai….tilism ko todne ke hints bhi diye jate hain sath hi…..ye tilism jiske liye taiyyar kiye jate hain usko inka tod bata diya jata hai…..khuda na khasta vo kabhi inko todne ka tarika bhul jaye to iske liye har kadam par hints diye jate the, kisi na kisi tilismi paheli ke jariye.
Abhi hum baate karte huye aage chal hi rahe the ki samne ek sadhu ko dekh kar vahi thithak gaye….vo apne aap se kuch badbadaye ja raha tha.
Payal—ye sadhu koun hai….aur yaha kaise….?
Raj—pata nahi...chalo chal kar dekhte hain
Hum sabhi chalte huye uss sadhu ke paas pahuch gaye.....pahle to vo hame dekh kar ghurta raha lekin kuch der pashchat vo phir se apni purani raag alaapne laga.
Raj—baba aap koun hain aur ye koun si jagah hai.... ?
Lekin vo meri baat ka jawab dene ki jagah kuch bolne laga.
Sadhu—Har oor shivam-satyam-sundar, har dishaa-dishaa me har har haiRaj—baba meri baat ka jawab dijiye….aap sunn to sakte hain na….?
Jad-chetan me abhivyakt satat, kankar-kankar me shankar hai…”
Ek do din me vo ikaraar kahaan aaegaa, har subah ek hee akhabaar kahaan aaegaa ,
Aaj jo baandhaa hai in me to bahal jaayenge,roj in baahon kaa tyohaar kahaan aaegaa…!!
Jo kiye hee naheen kabhee mainne , vo bhee vaade nibhaa rahaa hoon main.
Mujhase fir baat kar rahee hai vo, fir se baaton me aa rahaa hoon main !!
Apanon ke avarodh mile, har vakt ravaanee vahee rahee
Saanso men tufano kee rafataar purani vahi rahi !
Laakh sikhaayaa duniyaa ne, hamko bhee kaarobaar magar
Dhokhe khaate rahe aur mann kee nadani vahi rahi…!!
Toophani laharen hon . . . Ambar ke pahre hon . . .
Purvaa ke daaman par daag bahut gahre hon,
Saagar ke maanjhee mat man ko too haaranaa
Jeevan ke kram men jo khoyaa hai, paanaa hai . . .
Patjhar kaa matalab hai ki fir basnt aanaa hai !!
Sadhu—Panaho me jo aaya ho, To uss par vaar kya karna,Nani—mujhe to lagta hai ki ye sadhu pagal hai.
Jo dil hara hua ho, uss par adhikar kya karna,
Mohabbat ka maza to doobne ki kashmakash me hai,
Ho gar malum gahrayi to dariya paar kya karna ‼
Nazar me shokhiya, Labo par mohabbat ka tarana hai,
Meri ummid ki jad me abhi sara zamana hai,
Kayi jeete hain dil ke desh, par malum hai mujh ko.
Sikandar hu, mujhe ek roj khali hath jana hai…‼
Nani ne abhi itna kaha hi tha ki tabhi......
Payal (jor se cheekhte huye)—Raaaaajjjjjjjjjjjjj.........
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Bht mzzedar update tha bhai
Lekin 1st pheli tukke se solve karwana pasand nhi aaya hero ya unme se koi usko logical reason deke solve karta to or acha lagta
Baba bht intersinter character h
Itna bolta h mere jaisa to pichli baatein bhul jaae
Ab paridhi ne kya dekha intzaar rhega
Brilliant update
Keep rocking bhai
