Fantasy RISHI the SAVIOR(BEING EVIL)

[lover585]

awesome update

 

[Harry rocks]

Or agar aap ni ker sakti plot change to koi baat ni m ignore ker lunga story kyunki m ese plot wali story ni padh sakta jisme mere religion ko galat tarike se show kiya ho

 

[Aarif]

Sab se pehlay toh

Or Start bohat achi ki hai ap ne or dosra halaahal toh aik zeehar ((vish)) poison hai aik jahan tak Maine padha hai kyu k jab amrit manthan k doran jab Dev or aasur amrit paana chahte thay toh tab nikla tha jesay mahadev ne piya tha kyu k Usay peena asuro ne tha par kisi ne bhi peenay se mana kiya tha na toh Dev pee rahay thay or na aasur or dosri bar jab Devi chaya KO phaika gaya tha halaahal k aik kounwe main tab usay aik garabvati thi toh us ki pait main pal rhi us ki beti ne piya tha bhadra tha nam or rahi bat plot ki toh jesa ap ne socha hai wesa he likhay kyu k ap har aik reader KO khush nhi rakh sakte jitna bhi bada writer kyu naa ho har kisi KO khush nhi rakh sakta hai kyu k sab ka apna aik alag point of view hai story padha ne ka..

 

[Mast fakir]

I am agree with u .Bas is main jayda sex mat dalna romantic scene thik hai .

 

[Johnboy11]

Good update.
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[anrohit]

Awesome Update ....

 

[·.·★ R♥I♥S♥H♥U♥ ★·.·]

Very nice update

Thnx for ur review..
Hope aage ki kahani b aapko aise he pasand aaye..
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[·.·★ R♥I♥S♥H♥U♥ ★·.·]

zabardast update..
Or agar ap kuch words english k use kartay ho toh kuch zada masla nahi hai..
Waysay update acha tha or itna smj aa gaya hai k stori incest based hai..
Ab wait hai hiro k born honay ka..

Thnx for ur review..
Kosis puri rahegi qki meri hindi jada achhi nai hea..
Fir b try karungi..
N story sirf incest nai hogi uske siwa b bohot kuch hoga..
Hope aage ki kahani b aapko aise he pasand aaye..
Keep commenting..
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[·.·★ R♥I♥S♥H♥U♥ ★·.·]

Ha mane padha h mane shiv mahapuran rigved sab padhe h jisko aapne ultimate power bataya h vo mahadev ka hi nirakar rup h shiv k jab nirakar hote h tab unhe sadashiv ya parabrahm bola jata h or jab srishti ki rachna k waqt un parabrahm ne sharir dharan kiya wo sadashiv se aakar dharan ker mahadev hue or unki shakti thi mata aadishakti jinhone aakar dharan n ker mata parvati bani or kisi bhi kitab me aapke jesa varnan ni h kyunki mane bahut research ki h in sab pe 10 salo m

Ha mere jaisa varnan ni hoga kisi b book mea..
Qki ye ek fantasy story hea..
Or yaha par post ho rahi sabi fantasy story me kuch na kuch hoga he aisa jo ved puran se alag ho ya viprit ho..
Aap aage ki story parkar dekho..
Ki aapko sayi lage ya nai..
Qki plot change karna possible nai hea..
Aage aapke marji story read kare ya nai..

 

[·.·★ R♥I♥S♥H♥U♥ ★·.·]

Good update.
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Keep posting.
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Thnx for ur review..
Hope aage ki kahani b aapko aise he pasand aaye..
Keep commenting..
Keep supporting.