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Itna time kgf bana deti me.....jokes a prat sir....waiting foe next or dekhte ha kal kya leka aate ha jisko likhne pe aap itna time le rahe hUpdate 9 likhana start kar diya hai
Parso tak aa jayega
Jarur aap kgf bna deti, but main to ek sadharan sa reader hu jo achanak se writer ban betha.Itna time kgf bana deti me.....jokes a prat sir....waiting foe next or dekhte ha kal kya leka aate ha jisko likhne pe aap itna time le rahe h

What an update sirji....apun to hill gyi....waiting for next update
Nice update
Mast update bhai
Lovely update JAIY bhai
Mast update
Behtreen update
Vaise to bhai update bahut hi jyada acha tha lekin jo Chanda ke saath hua vo padh kar mujhe bilkul bhi acha ni laga Chanda ke saath itna bura ni hona chahiye tha bhale hi shadi uski uske marji ke Bina ho gai lekin pati sahi milna chahiye tha
Baki aapki abhi tak story bahut hi achi lagi
Superb update JAIY Bhai
Feeling sorry for Chanda par lagta hai iska bhi story mein aagey kuch connection hoga
Wait n watch
Galat kiya tumne chanda ke sath bahot galat kiya phir bhi jo hota hai ache ke liye hota hai waise Update mast tha
I feel you chanda galat kiya writer ne tumhare sath
Awesome update bhai
Minister longo ko jab apni kursi jaane ka khatra dikhta h tow police walo ki gaand m danda kerte h ab commissioner ko ultimatum de dia ek hafte ka dekhte h kia hota h suman ko kuch clue Mila tow h dekhte kia woh usske zariye qatil tak pahoch paati h
Chanda ki Shaadi jisse huwi h lagta h woh yaha laker use galat dhandha kerwane wala h dekhte h kia hota h
Badhiya shaandar update
Waiting for next update
Romanchak. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki
Bahut jabardast start hai bhai
Itna time kgf bana deti me.....jokes a prat sir....waiting foe next or dekhte ha kal kya leka aate ha jisko likhne pe aap itna time le rahe h
Ye kya suspense hai bhau
Update 9 Posted pls read and give your precious reviewsWaiting for next update
Intazzar ka fal bhot hi sawdist diya ha aapne...lajwab matlb kabile tarif tera khani likhna....Update 9
'The Brutal Encounter'
Komal bahut khush thi, finally vo movie dekhne jaa rhi thi. Samar ne Sugandha ko convince kar liya tha bahar jane ke liye.
Sugandha ne sirf iss shart ke sath jane ki izazat di ki Samar bhi unke sath jayega.
Teeno car me bethe the, Aage Samar Car drive kar rha tha, uske side me komal thi aur piche sanjana baithi hui thi.
Samar - Teri vajah se meri neend khrab hogi.
Komal -
Sanjana shanti se baithi thi,
Sanjana apne man me sochti hai,.. (Kitne close hai ye dono, komal kitna pareshan karti hai ise, phir bhi kuch nhi kehta. Uss din kaise bachaya tha Samar ne...varna uss din to choti... main bhi to time pe nahi pahuchi thi...lekin vo pahuch gya tha... Kya vo mujhe bhi bachayega, agar kabhi main aise khatre me fasi to...)
Sanjana's self - Kyu bachayega tujhe, tu to usse baat bhi nahi karti... Uski ragging bhi karvane ki koshish ki thi...
Apni hi antaratma ki ye baat sunke vo udas ho gyi...
Samar car ke mirror se Sanjana ko dekh rha tha...
Samar - Didi? Kya hua...aap kuch udas lag rahi ho?
Sanjana - Hmm? Nhi kuch nhi... main thik hu.
Sanjana's self - Hayyy main mar jawa... Nhi yarr bacha bhi sakta hai... Pakka tujhpe fida hai vo... Kaise teri udasi 2 second me bhanp li. Bacha lega tu musibat me pad to sahi...
Sanjana - (man me) chup karo... harr baar ek hi bakwas... Kab kaha usne pyar karta hai mujse...
Sanjana's self - Are ye baat kehne vali nhi hoti... aankho ko padha jata hai...
'Naino ki to baat Naina jane hai,
Sapno ke Raaz to Naina jane hai.'
Sanjana kuch nhi bolti.
Raat ke 8:45 ho gye the, movie ka show 9:00 ka tha, abhi movie shuru hone me 15 minute the. Teeno log Mall me pahuchte hai, Samar car park karke Komal aur Sanjana ke sath Theater ke counter pe pahuchta hai aur teen tickets leta hai.
Movie animated thi lekin kafi log dekhne aaye the. Samar ticket lekar chalne lagta hai to.
Komal - Bhai!
Samar - Kya hai
Komal - Popcorn to lelo
Samar - Samar popcorn bucket leta hai sath me komal ke liye colddrink bhi. Samar ne apne liye li nhi thi aur sanjana ne bhi mna kar diya tha.
Samar - hmm, lut macha rkhi hai 2000 ka bill bana diya ye 400 g popcorn aur colddrink ka.
Komal - ab chalo bhai, kya late karaoge.
Teeno log ek sath movie hall me chale jate hai, night show tha lekin phir bhi bheed achi khasi thi. Almost seats bhari hui thi.
Komal - dekha aap dono ne, keh rahe the ki animated movie hai kon dekhta hai. Kitni bheed hai yahan, itne old log bhi aaye hai. Stupid both of you.
Sanjana - komal, language..
Komal Samar se popcorn aur colddrink leke aur sanjana ko jibh dikha ke apni seat par bhag jati hai.
Sanjana - ye ladki bhi naa, din par din bigadti jaa rahi hai.
Sanjana bolti hai to sochti hai ki samar koi jawab dega. Lekin Samar to hall ko dekhne me lga hua tha.
Sanjana - Samar! Kya dekh rhe ho.
Samar - dekh rahi hai aap Didi. Itni bheed hai lekin ladkiya bahut kam hai almost naa ke barabar. I think ye bhi uss killer ke dar ki vajah se hai.
Sach me hall me 5-6 ladkiya hi thi. Baki sab aadmi hi the.
Sanjana - Haa
Samar - aaiye Didi komal ke pass chalte hai.
Ye dono jaa hi rhe hote hai ki
Sanjana - Ahh... Samar!
Samar - Ji
Sanjana - vo main keh rahi thi ki...ki... Tum mujhe didi mat kaha kro.
Samar - Haaa? lekin aap meri didi hai naa to mein kya kahu.
Sanjana - tum mujhe naam se bulaya kro.
Samar - nhi, aap mujhse badi hai. Main aapka naam nhi le skta.
Sanjana - kyu divya bhi to tumse badi hai aur Payal vo bhi tumse badi hai unka to naam lete ho tum.
Samar - vo... vo... lekin maa kya kahengi agar main aapka naam lunga to.
Sanjana - Maa kuch nhi kahengi. Unhe main bol dungi. Thik hai.
Samar - thik hai main koshish karunga.
Ye kehkar dono komal ke pass hi jakar beth jatein hai, jo maje se movie dekh rahi thi aur jor jor se hans rahi thi.
Use aise dekhkar Sanjana aur Samar ke chehre bhi khil uthte hai.
Movie dekhkar ye log bahar aate hai to komal restaurant chalne ki jidd karne lagti hai.
Sanjana - komal ye kya baat hui, movie dekh li naa ab chal. Aur ghar se khake to aayi hai. Kitna khayegi.
Komal - ek ek burger hi to hai Di. Chalo na Bhai, Pls.
Samar - acha chal, tera ye pls kisi din maa se pitwayega mujhe. Unhone jaldi aane ko kaha tha aur tu late karva degi.
Komal -
Phir ye teeno mall ke hi restaurant me jate hai aur burger order karte hai. Ab komal burger tak to rukti nhi to ice cream bhi manga li. Isi tarah inhe 12:30 ho gye.
Finally ye log ghar ke liye nikalte hai. Komal to kha pikar sone lagi thi to majburan samar ko use apni goud me uthakar car tak lana pada. Komal ko piche sulakar. Sanjana aur Samar aage Beth jate hai aur ghar ke liye nikal jate hai. Neend to Sanjana ko bhi aa rahi thi aur Samar ko bhi. Lekin Samar ka control tha apni nind par to ise koi problem nhi thi car chalane me.
Samar - kya hua aapko bhi nind aa rahi hai, aap bhi so jaiye ghar pahunchkar utha dunga aapko.
Sanjana - Haa, aaj bahut late kara diya isne.
Sanjana bhi so jati hai aur samar car ghar ki taraf dauda deta hai.
Raste me police ki nakabandi bahut thi, jagah jagah check post bani hui thi. Suman ke order par almost sabhi police valo ko night duty karni padh rahi thi.
Samar ki car check post par pahuchati hai to police uski car rokti hai.
Inspector - kahan se aa rhe ho itni raat ko.
Samar - Sir, movie dekhne gye the, ab ghar jaa rhe hai.
Inspector ne jab car me do ladkiyon ko sote hue dekha to use samar par shak hua.
Ofcourse is vakt har kisi ko shak ki nigaho se dekha jaa rha tha. Killer koi bhi aur kahi bhi ho skta tha.
Inspector - acha, jara bahar aao.
Samar - bahar aate hue, kya baat hai sir. hame late ho rha hai. Aap jaldi documents dekhiye aur hame jane dijiye.
Inspector - hame mat sikhao apna kaam karna, kya naam hai tumhara aur ye dono ladkiya kon hai. Kahi inhe behosh karke to nhi le jaa rhe.
Samar - Sir, jara thik se baat kijiye. Behne hai meri vo. Movie dekh ke aa rhe the, thak gyi hai isliye so rahi hai.
Inspector - mujhe tameez sikha rha hai, chahu to abhi andar kar du, behne hai to jagao unko. dekhe sach bol rha hai yaa jhuth.
Samar - maine kaha na vo so rahi hai, ye lijiye mera ID card, dekh lijiye naam. Unhe jagane ki jarurat nhi hai.
Inspector - acha to tum aise nhi manoge, abhi btata hu.
Inme behes ho hi rahi thi ki itne me,
Suman - kya baat hai tiwari. Itna time kyu lag rha hai, checking me.
Inspector Tiwari - Mam ye ladka cooperate nhi kar rha. hamne bola ki vo ladki kon hai unhe jagao to badtameezi kar rha hai.
Suman - Kyu ladke, kya problem hai. Police ke sath badtamiji kar rhe ho.
Samar - Mam badtameezi maine nhi aapke police inspector ne ki hai. Main to pura sath de rha hu. Yahi jail me dalne ki dhamki de rhe hai.
Suman - acha, vo ladkiyan kon hai. Unse baat karao hamari.
Itne me sanjana jaag chuki thi, vo car ke bahar aati hai.
Sanjana - kya hua mam, koi baat hai kya.
Suman - Tum iske sath ho. Abhi kahan ja rhe ho.
Sanjana -yes mam, abhi hum ghar ja rhe hai.
Suman - hmm, thik hai uss ladki se bhi hame baat karni hai.
Samar - ho gyi naa baat aapki, use jagana jaruri nhi hai.
Suman - kya jaruri hai kya nhi ye hum dekh lenge.
Sanjana - (Samar ko rokte hue) ok mam abhi jagati hu use.
Sanjana komal ko uthati hai, to vo uthti nhi hai. kehti hai ki Samar ko police ne pakad liya, komal ek jhatke me uth jaati hai aur bahar aa jati hai. Uski ye harkat dekhke ek baar to Suman bhi hans deti hai.
Suman - Tum iske sath ho? Kon lagta hai ye tumhara.
Komal - kya mam inki car me hu to inke sath hi hongi naa, aur ye mere bhai hai.
Suman - thik hai, tum log jaa skte ho, lekin itni raat ko bahar nikalana safe nhi hai.
Jante nhi abhi bahar bahut khatra hai.
Komal - hame kuch nhi hoga, bhai hai na hamare sath. Uss killer ko to aise hi patak de mere bhaiya.
Sanjana komal ko khich kar le jati hai, aur samar bhi car me bethkar ghar ke liye nikal leta hai.
Sanjana - chup karke beth, bahut chapad chapad karti hai.
Ye teeno ghar jaa hi rahe the 15-20 minute ki duri par hi ghar tha. Ki itne me ek baar phir Samar car rokta hai.
Sanjana - kya hua?
Samar - Sadak par shayad koi aadmi pada hai, lagta hai accident hua hai.
Sanjana - Itni raat ko accident, sadak to bilkul khali hai koi traffic nhi hai.
Samar - Aap car me hi bethiye me dekh kar aata hu.
Samar car se utarkar uss body ke paas jane lagta hai jo sadak ke bicho bich padhi thi. Uska chehra dusri taraf tha isliye Samar ko dikhai nhi de rha tha. Uss body ke paas pahunchkar samar aawaz deta hai.
Samar - Hello, kya aap thik hai, kya aap mujhe sun paa rhe hai.
Vahan se koi jawab na aata dekhkar samar uss body ke paas pahuchta hai aur use hilata hai to bhi koi reaction nhi hota.
Lagta hai serious accident hai ambulance ko call karna padega, ye kehkar jaise hi samar uss aadmi ka chehra apni taraf karta hai, ek pal me vo aadmi tezi se uthkar samar ke chehre par kuch dhuaan jaisa chhodta hai, shayad kisi tarah ki gas.
Samar me liye ye hamla unexpected tha, uss gas se uski aankho me jalan hone lagi thi. Vo abhi kuch samajh pata ki itne me hi uss aadmi ne ek penchkas se samar ke kandhe par hamla kiya, hamla itna tez tha ki vo penchkas samar ke kandhe se hokar uski haddi chirte hue uske armpit se bahar nikal gya. Samar ki ek jordar chikh vahan gunj gyi.
Car me se jab Sanjana ne ye dekha to vo ek dum chikhi aur Car se bahar nikal aayi, uski chikh se komal bhi jaag gyi thi aur turant vo bahar aa gyi.
Jab sanjana aur komal ne dekha ki ek aadmi samar par hamla kar raha hai. Vo dono jor se chikh padi, aur bhagte hue samar ki taraf aane lagi.
Uss aadmi ne itne me hi ek aur hamla samar ke pet me kiya aur pura penchkas sar ke pet me utar diya. Uss gas ke asar ke karan samar kuch kar nhi paa rha tha.
Komal - Bhaiiiii.
Sanjana - Samarrrr.
Ye dono jaise hi samar ke paas pahuchati vo aadmi khada ho gya aur unki taraf ek bhanayak muskaan ke sath dekh rha tha. Jab komal aur Sanjana ne uska chehra dekha to unki to jaise jaan hi atak gyi.
Vo ek joker ka makeup kiye hue tha aur itna bhayanak lag rha tha ki kisi ki bhi saans atak jaye. Samar niche pada dard se tadap raha tha. Uski aankho me bahut jyada jalan ho rahi thi. Uske sharir me kampan hone laga tha aur sharir sunn pad rha tha.
Vo aadmi sanjana aur komal ki taraf badhne laga
darkar dono piche hone lagi. Uss aadmi ne apni kamar me se ek bada sa chaku nikala jisse gosht kata jata hai. Aur unki aur badhne laga.
Sanjana - (komal ka hath majbooti se pakad leti hai. Aur use apne piche chipa leti hai) Aage mat badhna vrna acha nhi hoga. Kon ho tum kya kiya tumne samar ke sath.
Komal bahut jyada dar gyi thi, samne vo aadmi maut ki tarah chalkar aa rha tha to sadak par samar buri halat me karah raha tha. Use samar ki bhi chinta ho rahi thi.
Sanjana - Komal, tu bhag yahan se.
Komal - (rote hue)nhi me bhai ko chhodkar nhi jaungi. Bhaiiii.
Sanjana - dekho aage mat bhdana vrna me mar dungi tumhe.
Vo aadmi sanjana ki baat sunkar pagalo ki tarah hasne lagta hai.
Aadmi - hahhhhhh, hahhhhhh tum ladkiya sab pagal hoti ho. Maut se kon bacha hai. Aaj to maja aayega. 2-2 khubsurat ladkiyon ke khun se nahaunga.
Komal aur Sanjana ka dar ye baat sunkar aur kai guna badh gya.
Sanjana - koooo. koooon to tum.
Aadmi - tum sab ladkiya pagal hi hoti ho... News nahi dekhti... clown ko nhi pehchanti.
Aa jao mere pass mujhe tumse pyar karna hai tumhare khun se nahana hai.
Samar - Sanjanaaaaa... bhago komal ko lekar...jao...
Sanjana samar ki baat sunti hai aur komal ko khichkar car ki taraf le chalti hai.
Vo killer bhi unke piche aane lagta hai, sanjana komal ko car me baithati hai aur car start karne lagti hai lekin car start nhi hoti..vo baar baar chabi dalkar start karti hai lekin koi fayda nhi...
Vo killer unki taraf badh rha tha aur komal ko dar se halat bigadti jaa rahi thi, dar to sanjana ko bhi bahut lag rha tha...
Komal - Didi...bhaiya ko bacha lo
Sanjana - For God sake start hona... Haa komal hum bacha lenge..car lekar samar ko usme bitha lenge... Start you fucking damnit car.
Sanjana phir chabhi ghumati hai. aur car start ho jati hai. Uski soch thi ki car ko turant samar ke paas lekar jayegi aur use bithakar yahan se turant niklegi.
Lekin tab tak Clown aa chuka tha, car start hote hi usne ek jor ka mukka komal vali side window par mara aur kanch todkar komal ka gala pakad liya.
Komal - Diiiiiii.
Komal ko dekhkar sanjana komal ko bachane ki koshish karne lagi isi vajah se car ka balance bigada aur car tazi se street pole se jakar takra kar ruk gyi.
Jhatke ki vajah se Clown dur jakar gira.
Lekin komal bhi dar aur sar par chit lagne se behosh hi gyi.
Sanjana ko bhi halki chot aayi, lekin uski parvah krne ka vakt nhi tha. Usne komal ko behosh dekha, car ko start krne ki koshish ki to vo khrab ho chuki thi aur start nhi ho rahi thi. Vo jaldi se bahar aayi aur komal ko uthane ki koshish karne lagi.
Sanjana - komal, komal uth,choti uth jaa pls.
Komal behosh thi, lekin clown phir se uth khada hua, ab vo sanjana ki taraf aa rha tha, sanjana ka uspe koi dhyan nhi tha.
Udhar kuch dur samar gira hua tha uski halat bahut kharab thi. Uski body khub se bhar gyi thi. Aankhe kholna mushkil ho rha tha, aur behoshi aane ko thi, uski aankhe band hone lagi.
Sugandha - Thik hai, lekin tum bhi inke sath jaoge. Vrna main inhe nhi jane dungi.
Samar - thik hai maa.
Sugandha - Aur inka khyal rakhna, tumhare bharose hi jane de rahi hu. Aur apna bhi.
Samar - Haa Maa, kuch nhi hone dunga me. Aap tension mat lo.
Samar ek dum se aakhe kholta hai,,,
Nhi maa kuch nhi hoga komal ko.
Samar apni puri jaan lagakar uthne ki koshish karta hai. Uske kandhe aur pet me betahasha dard ho rha tha.
Lekin vo khada hota hai aur samne uss killer ko dekhta hai jo ab sanjana ki taraf badh rha tha. Samar ko sab kuch dhundhla nazar aa rha tha vo uske pair bhi ladkhada rahe the. Lekin vo phir bhi aage badhta hai.
Clown sanjana ke bilkul piche pahuch gya tha. Sanjana ki iska bilkul aabhas nhi tha ki uske piche uski mout khadi hai. Vo komal ki fikr me thi.
Clown apne hath me vahi chaku lekar uske sar par vaar krne vala tha. Ek hamla aur uske sar ke do tukde hona lazim tha.
Jaise hi usne sanjana par vaar kiya, samar ne uske khanjar ko hawa me hi rok liya. Khanjar itna tez tha ki Samar ke hath me se mano khun ki nadi beh chali ho.
Samar ka khun behkar niche girne laga jahan sanjana thi. Uska khun sanjana ki maang ko bharne laga.
Uska khun uski maang se hote hue uske chehre par aa raha tha.
Samar ne apni puri takat se Clown ki chhati par ek punch mara jisse clown ki ek pasli tut gayi. Vo do kadam dur jakar gira. Sanjana ne piche dekha to uske samne Samar khada hua tha.
Samar - Uske chehre ko pakdte hue kuch nhi hoga aapko. Sanajana ke chehre par iss vakt me bhi ek ummid bhari muskan aa gyi.
Sanjana - Samarrrrrr
Sanjana chillayi, kyoki clown ek baar phir uthkar samar par vaar krne aaya tha, lekin is baar vo kamyab nhi hua.
Samar turant niche ko hua aur apni gardan par vaar hone se bachaya.
Phir usne bethe hue hi usi penchkas se Clown ki jagh par vaar kiya. Mahol me ek jordar chikh gunj gyi. Is baar ye chikh clown ki thi. Samar ne ek aur vaar clown ki aankh par kiya aur uski ek aankh phod di. Clown dard se tadapne laga.
Samar ek baar phir uspar vaar karta ki itne me clown ne vahi chaku usko fek kar mara jo sidha aakar samar ki chati par laga, samar ne apni chati se vi chaku nikala aur clown ke hath par vaar kiya aur ek hi vaar me uski sidhe hath ki 4 ungliyan kaat di.
Clown bhyanak dhang se chikha. Dono ki hi halat bahut buri ho chuki thi.
Samar ne clown ke sar par ek punch mara ab ye ladai hatho ki ladai ban chuki thi. Samar gas ke asar ki vajah se unconscious hone laga tha lekin phir bhi vo ladh rha tha.
Clown uspar bhari padh rha tha. Ladte ladte ye road ke kinare aa chuke the. Road ke side me ek bada naala behta tha.
Samar ne ek akhir baar apni puri takat lagai aur clown ka hath pakadkar modh diya aur phir use uthakar usi naale me fek diya. Clown ki ek jordar chikh gunji aur phir har taraf Shanti cha gyi.
Sanjana daudkar Samar ke pass aayi.
Sanjana - Samarrrr..., Uski halat dekhkar vo bahut ghabra gyi thi... Main..Main ambulance bulati hu.. kuch nhi hoga samar tumhe..
Samar - Ahhhhh... Komal...Komal kaisi hai...
Samar ko saans lene me taklif ho rahi thi...uska pura shareer khun se bheega hua tha...
Aur vo behosh hokar gir pada.
Sanjana jaldi se car me jakar Sugandha ko phone karti hai...
Sugandha ek hi ring me phone utha leti hai....
Sugandha - kaha ho tum sab mene jaldi aane ke liye kaha tha naa... mera dil kitna ghabra raha hai.
Sanjana - (rote hue) MaaSamar aur Komal...
To be continued
Awesome update bhaiUpdate 9
'The Brutal Encounter'
Komal bahut khush thi, finally vo movie dekhne jaa rhi thi. Samar ne Sugandha ko convince kar liya tha bahar jane ke liye.
Sugandha ne sirf iss shart ke sath jane ki izazat di ki Samar bhi unke sath jayega.
Teeno car me bethe the, Aage Samar Car drive kar rha tha, uske side me komal thi aur piche sanjana baithi hui thi.
Samar - Teri vajah se meri neend khrab hogi.
Komal -
Sanjana shanti se baithi thi,
Sanjana apne man me sochti hai,.. (Kitne close hai ye dono, komal kitna pareshan karti hai ise, phir bhi kuch nhi kehta. Uss din kaise bachaya tha Samar ne...varna uss din to choti... main bhi to time pe nahi pahuchi thi...lekin vo pahuch gya tha... Kya vo mujhe bhi bachayega, agar kabhi main aise khatre me fasi to...)
Sanjana's self - Kyu bachayega tujhe, tu to usse baat bhi nahi karti... Uski ragging bhi karvane ki koshish ki thi...
Apni hi antaratma ki ye baat sunke vo udas ho gyi...
Samar car ke mirror se Sanjana ko dekh rha tha...
Samar - Didi? Kya hua...aap kuch udas lag rahi ho?
Sanjana - Hmm? Nhi kuch nhi... main thik hu.
Sanjana's self - Hayyy main mar jawa... Nhi yarr bacha bhi sakta hai... Pakka tujhpe fida hai vo... Kaise teri udasi 2 second me bhanp li. Bacha lega tu musibat me pad to sahi...
Sanjana - (man me) chup karo... harr baar ek hi bakwas... Kab kaha usne pyar karta hai mujse...
Sanjana's self - Are ye baat kehne vali nhi hoti... aankho ko padha jata hai...
'Naino ki to baat Naina jane hai,
Sapno ke Raaz to Naina jane hai.'
Sanjana kuch nhi bolti.
Raat ke 8:45 ho gye the, movie ka show 9:00 ka tha, abhi movie shuru hone me 15 minute the. Teeno log Mall me pahuchte hai, Samar car park karke Komal aur Sanjana ke sath Theater ke counter pe pahuchta hai aur teen tickets leta hai.
Movie animated thi lekin kafi log dekhne aaye the. Samar ticket lekar chalne lagta hai to.
Komal - Bhai!
Samar - Kya hai
Komal - Popcorn to lelo
Samar - Samar popcorn bucket leta hai sath me komal ke liye colddrink bhi. Samar ne apne liye li nhi thi aur sanjana ne bhi mna kar diya tha.
Samar - hmm, lut macha rkhi hai 2000 ka bill bana diya ye 400 g popcorn aur colddrink ka.
Komal - ab chalo bhai, kya late karaoge.
Teeno log ek sath movie hall me chale jate hai, night show tha lekin phir bhi bheed achi khasi thi. Almost seats bhari hui thi.
Komal - dekha aap dono ne, keh rahe the ki animated movie hai kon dekhta hai. Kitni bheed hai yahan, itne old log bhi aaye hai. Stupid both of you.
Sanjana - komal, language..
Komal Samar se popcorn aur colddrink leke aur sanjana ko jibh dikha ke apni seat par bhag jati hai.
Sanjana - ye ladki bhi naa, din par din bigadti jaa rahi hai.
Sanjana bolti hai to sochti hai ki samar koi jawab dega. Lekin Samar to hall ko dekhne me lga hua tha.
Sanjana - Samar! Kya dekh rhe ho.
Samar - dekh rahi hai aap Didi. Itni bheed hai lekin ladkiya bahut kam hai almost naa ke barabar. I think ye bhi uss killer ke dar ki vajah se hai.
Sach me hall me 5-6 ladkiya hi thi. Baki sab aadmi hi the.
Sanjana - Haa
Samar - aaiye Didi komal ke pass chalte hai.
Ye dono jaa hi rhe hote hai ki
Sanjana - Ahh... Samar!
Samar - Ji
Sanjana - vo main keh rahi thi ki...ki... Tum mujhe didi mat kaha kro.
Samar - Haaa? lekin aap meri didi hai naa to mein kya kahu.
Sanjana - tum mujhe naam se bulaya kro.
Samar - nhi, aap mujhse badi hai. Main aapka naam nhi le skta.
Sanjana - kyu divya bhi to tumse badi hai aur Payal vo bhi tumse badi hai unka to naam lete ho tum.
Samar - vo... vo... lekin maa kya kahengi agar main aapka naam lunga to.
Sanjana - Maa kuch nhi kahengi. Unhe main bol dungi. Thik hai.
Samar - thik hai main koshish karunga.
Ye kehkar dono komal ke pass hi jakar beth jatein hai, jo maje se movie dekh rahi thi aur jor jor se hans rahi thi.
Use aise dekhkar Sanjana aur Samar ke chehre bhi khil uthte hai.
Movie dekhkar ye log bahar aate hai to komal restaurant chalne ki jidd karne lagti hai.
Sanjana - komal ye kya baat hui, movie dekh li naa ab chal. Aur ghar se khake to aayi hai. Kitna khayegi.
Komal - ek ek burger hi to hai Di. Chalo na Bhai, Pls.
Samar - acha chal, tera ye pls kisi din maa se pitwayega mujhe. Unhone jaldi aane ko kaha tha aur tu late karva degi.
Komal -
Phir ye teeno mall ke hi restaurant me jate hai aur burger order karte hai. Ab komal burger tak to rukti nhi to ice cream bhi manga li. Isi tarah inhe 12:30 ho gye.
Finally ye log ghar ke liye nikalte hai. Komal to kha pikar sone lagi thi to majburan samar ko use apni goud me uthakar car tak lana pada. Komal ko piche sulakar. Sanjana aur Samar aage Beth jate hai aur ghar ke liye nikal jate hai. Neend to Sanjana ko bhi aa rahi thi aur Samar ko bhi. Lekin Samar ka control tha apni nind par to ise koi problem nhi thi car chalane me.
Samar - kya hua aapko bhi nind aa rahi hai, aap bhi so jaiye ghar pahunchkar utha dunga aapko.
Sanjana - Haa, aaj bahut late kara diya isne.
Sanjana bhi so jati hai aur samar car ghar ki taraf dauda deta hai.
Raste me police ki nakabandi bahut thi, jagah jagah check post bani hui thi. Suman ke order par almost sabhi police valo ko night duty karni padh rahi thi.
Samar ki car check post par pahuchati hai to police uski car rokti hai.
Inspector - kahan se aa rhe ho itni raat ko.
Samar - Sir, movie dekhne gye the, ab ghar jaa rhe hai.
Inspector ne jab car me do ladkiyon ko sote hue dekha to use samar par shak hua.
Ofcourse is vakt har kisi ko shak ki nigaho se dekha jaa rha tha. Killer koi bhi aur kahi bhi ho skta tha.
Inspector - acha, jara bahar aao.
Samar - bahar aate hue, kya baat hai sir. hame late ho rha hai. Aap jaldi documents dekhiye aur hame jane dijiye.
Inspector - hame mat sikhao apna kaam karna, kya naam hai tumhara aur ye dono ladkiya kon hai. Kahi inhe behosh karke to nhi le jaa rhe.
Samar - Sir, jara thik se baat kijiye. Behne hai meri vo. Movie dekh ke aa rhe the, thak gyi hai isliye so rahi hai.
Inspector - mujhe tameez sikha rha hai, chahu to abhi andar kar du, behne hai to jagao unko. dekhe sach bol rha hai yaa jhuth.
Samar - maine kaha na vo so rahi hai, ye lijiye mera ID card, dekh lijiye naam. Unhe jagane ki jarurat nhi hai.
Inspector - acha to tum aise nhi manoge, abhi btata hu.
Inme behes ho hi rahi thi ki itne me,
Suman - kya baat hai tiwari. Itna time kyu lag rha hai, checking me.
Inspector Tiwari - Mam ye ladka cooperate nhi kar rha. hamne bola ki vo ladki kon hai unhe jagao to badtameezi kar rha hai.
Suman - Kyu ladke, kya problem hai. Police ke sath badtamiji kar rhe ho.
Samar - Mam badtameezi maine nhi aapke police inspector ne ki hai. Main to pura sath de rha hu. Yahi jail me dalne ki dhamki de rhe hai.
Suman - acha, vo ladkiyan kon hai. Unse baat karao hamari.
Itne me sanjana jaag chuki thi, vo car ke bahar aati hai.
Sanjana - kya hua mam, koi baat hai kya.
Suman - Tum iske sath ho. Abhi kahan ja rhe ho.
Sanjana -yes mam, abhi hum ghar ja rhe hai.
Suman - hmm, thik hai uss ladki se bhi hame baat karni hai.
Samar - ho gyi naa baat aapki, use jagana jaruri nhi hai.
Suman - kya jaruri hai kya nhi ye hum dekh lenge.
Sanjana - (Samar ko rokte hue) ok mam abhi jagati hu use.
Sanjana komal ko uthati hai, to vo uthti nhi hai. kehti hai ki Samar ko police ne pakad liya, komal ek jhatke me uth jaati hai aur bahar aa jati hai. Uski ye harkat dekhke ek baar to Suman bhi hans deti hai.
Suman - Tum iske sath ho? Kon lagta hai ye tumhara.
Komal - kya mam inki car me hu to inke sath hi hongi naa, aur ye mere bhai hai.
Suman - thik hai, tum log jaa skte ho, lekin itni raat ko bahar nikalana safe nhi hai.
Jante nhi abhi bahar bahut khatra hai.
Komal - hame kuch nhi hoga, bhai hai na hamare sath. Uss killer ko to aise hi patak de mere bhaiya.
Sanjana komal ko khich kar le jati hai, aur samar bhi car me bethkar ghar ke liye nikal leta hai.
Sanjana - chup karke beth, bahut chapad chapad karti hai.
Ye teeno ghar jaa hi rahe the 15-20 minute ki duri par hi ghar tha. Ki itne me ek baar phir Samar car rokta hai.
Sanjana - kya hua?
Samar - Sadak par shayad koi aadmi pada hai, lagta hai accident hua hai.
Sanjana - Itni raat ko accident, sadak to bilkul khali hai koi traffic nhi hai.
Samar - Aap car me hi bethiye me dekh kar aata hu.
Samar car se utarkar uss body ke paas jane lagta hai jo sadak ke bicho bich padhi thi. Uska chehra dusri taraf tha isliye Samar ko dikhai nhi de rha tha. Uss body ke paas pahunchkar samar aawaz deta hai.
Samar - Hello, kya aap thik hai, kya aap mujhe sun paa rhe hai.
Vahan se koi jawab na aata dekhkar samar uss body ke paas pahuchta hai aur use hilata hai to bhi koi reaction nhi hota.
Lagta hai serious accident hai ambulance ko call karna padega, ye kehkar jaise hi samar uss aadmi ka chehra apni taraf karta hai, ek pal me vo aadmi tezi se uthkar samar ke chehre par kuch dhuaan jaisa chhodta hai, shayad kisi tarah ki gas.
Samar me liye ye hamla unexpected tha, uss gas se uski aankho me jalan hone lagi thi. Vo abhi kuch samajh pata ki itne me hi uss aadmi ne ek penchkas se samar ke kandhe par hamla kiya, hamla itna tez tha ki vo penchkas samar ke kandhe se hokar uski haddi chirte hue uske armpit se bahar nikal gya. Samar ki ek jordar chikh vahan gunj gyi.
Car me se jab Sanjana ne ye dekha to vo ek dum chikhi aur Car se bahar nikal aayi, uski chikh se komal bhi jaag gyi thi aur turant vo bahar aa gyi.
Jab sanjana aur komal ne dekha ki ek aadmi samar par hamla kar raha hai. Vo dono jor se chikh padi, aur bhagte hue samar ki taraf aane lagi.
Uss aadmi ne itne me hi ek aur hamla samar ke pet me kiya aur pura penchkas sar ke pet me utar diya. Uss gas ke asar ke karan samar kuch kar nhi paa rha tha.
Komal - Bhaiiiii.
Sanjana - Samarrrr.
Ye dono jaise hi samar ke paas pahuchati vo aadmi khada ho gya aur unki taraf ek bhanayak muskaan ke sath dekh rha tha. Jab komal aur Sanjana ne uska chehra dekha to unki to jaise jaan hi atak gyi.
Vo ek joker ka makeup kiye hue tha aur itna bhayanak lag rha tha ki kisi ki bhi saans atak jaye. Samar niche pada dard se tadap raha tha. Uski aankho me bahut jyada jalan ho rahi thi. Uske sharir me kampan hone laga tha aur sharir sunn pad rha tha.
Vo aadmi sanjana aur komal ki taraf badhne laga
darkar dono piche hone lagi. Uss aadmi ne apni kamar me se ek bada sa chaku nikala jisse gosht kata jata hai. Aur unki aur badhne laga.
Sanjana - (komal ka hath majbooti se pakad leti hai. Aur use apne piche chipa leti hai) Aage mat badhna vrna acha nhi hoga. Kon ho tum kya kiya tumne samar ke sath.
Komal bahut jyada dar gyi thi, samne vo aadmi maut ki tarah chalkar aa rha tha to sadak par samar buri halat me karah raha tha. Use samar ki bhi chinta ho rahi thi.
Sanjana - Komal, tu bhag yahan se.
Komal - (rote hue)nhi me bhai ko chhodkar nhi jaungi. Bhaiiii.
Sanjana - dekho aage mat bhdana vrna me mar dungi tumhe.
Vo aadmi sanjana ki baat sunkar pagalo ki tarah hasne lagta hai.
Aadmi - hahhhhhh, hahhhhhh tum ladkiya sab pagal hoti ho. Maut se kon bacha hai. Aaj to maja aayega. 2-2 khubsurat ladkiyon ke khun se nahaunga.
Komal aur Sanjana ka dar ye baat sunkar aur kai guna badh gya.
Sanjana - koooo. koooon to tum.
Aadmi - tum sab ladkiya pagal hi hoti ho... News nahi dekhti... clown ko nhi pehchanti.
Aa jao mere pass mujhe tumse pyar karna hai tumhare khun se nahana hai.
Samar - Sanjanaaaaa... bhago komal ko lekar...jao...
Sanjana samar ki baat sunti hai aur komal ko khichkar car ki taraf le chalti hai.
Vo killer bhi unke piche aane lagta hai, sanjana komal ko car me baithati hai aur car start karne lagti hai lekin car start nhi hoti..vo baar baar chabi dalkar start karti hai lekin koi fayda nhi...
Vo killer unki taraf badh rha tha aur komal ko dar se halat bigadti jaa rahi thi, dar to sanjana ko bhi bahut lag rha tha...
Komal - Didi...bhaiya ko bacha lo
Sanjana - For God sake start hona... Haa komal hum bacha lenge..car lekar samar ko usme bitha lenge... Start you fucking damnit car.
Sanjana phir chabhi ghumati hai. aur car start ho jati hai. Uski soch thi ki car ko turant samar ke paas lekar jayegi aur use bithakar yahan se turant niklegi.
Lekin tab tak Clown aa chuka tha, car start hote hi usne ek jor ka mukka komal vali side window par mara aur kanch todkar komal ka gala pakad liya.
Komal - Diiiiiii.
Komal ko dekhkar sanjana komal ko bachane ki koshish karne lagi isi vajah se car ka balance bigada aur car tazi se street pole se jakar takra kar ruk gyi.
Jhatke ki vajah se Clown dur jakar gira.
Lekin komal bhi dar aur sar par chit lagne se behosh hi gyi.
Sanjana ko bhi halki chot aayi, lekin uski parvah krne ka vakt nhi tha. Usne komal ko behosh dekha, car ko start krne ki koshish ki to vo khrab ho chuki thi aur start nhi ho rahi thi. Vo jaldi se bahar aayi aur komal ko uthane ki koshish karne lagi.
Sanjana - komal, komal uth,choti uth jaa pls.
Komal behosh thi, lekin clown phir se uth khada hua, ab vo sanjana ki taraf aa rha tha, sanjana ka uspe koi dhyan nhi tha.
Udhar kuch dur samar gira hua tha uski halat bahut kharab thi. Uski body khub se bhar gyi thi. Aankhe kholna mushkil ho rha tha, aur behoshi aane ko thi, uski aankhe band hone lagi.
Sugandha - Thik hai, lekin tum bhi inke sath jaoge. Vrna main inhe nhi jane dungi.
Samar - thik hai maa.
Sugandha - Aur inka khyal rakhna, tumhare bharose hi jane de rahi hu. Aur apna bhi.
Samar - Haa Maa, kuch nhi hone dunga me. Aap tension mat lo.
Samar ek dum se aakhe kholta hai,,,
Nhi maa kuch nhi hoga komal ko.
Samar apni puri jaan lagakar uthne ki koshish karta hai. Uske kandhe aur pet me betahasha dard ho rha tha.
Lekin vo khada hota hai aur samne uss killer ko dekhta hai jo ab sanjana ki taraf badh rha tha. Samar ko sab kuch dhundhla nazar aa rha tha vo uske pair bhi ladkhada rahe the. Lekin vo phir bhi aage badhta hai.
Clown sanjana ke bilkul piche pahuch gya tha. Sanjana ki iska bilkul aabhas nhi tha ki uske piche uski mout khadi hai. Vo komal ki fikr me thi.
Clown apne hath me vahi chaku lekar uske sar par vaar krne vala tha. Ek hamla aur uske sar ke do tukde hona lazim tha.
Jaise hi usne sanjana par vaar kiya, samar ne uske khanjar ko hawa me hi rok liya. Khanjar itna tez tha ki Samar ke hath me se mano khun ki nadi beh chali ho.
Samar ka khun behkar niche girne laga jahan sanjana thi. Uska khun sanjana ki maang ko bharne laga.
Uska khun uski maang se hote hue uske chehre par aa raha tha.
Samar ne apni puri takat se Clown ki chhati par ek punch mara jisse clown ki ek pasli tut gayi. Vo do kadam dur jakar gira. Sanjana ne piche dekha to uske samne Samar khada hua tha.
Samar - Uske chehre ko pakdte hue kuch nhi hoga aapko. Sanajana ke chehre par iss vakt me bhi ek ummid bhari muskan aa gyi.
Sanjana - Samarrrrrr
Sanjana chillayi, kyoki clown ek baar phir uthkar samar par vaar krne aaya tha, lekin is baar vo kamyab nhi hua.
Samar turant niche ko hua aur apni gardan par vaar hone se bachaya.
Phir usne bethe hue hi usi penchkas se Clown ki jagh par vaar kiya. Mahol me ek jordar chikh gunj gyi. Is baar ye chikh clown ki thi. Samar ne ek aur vaar clown ki aankh par kiya aur uski ek aankh phod di. Clown dard se tadapne laga.
Samar ek baar phir uspar vaar karta ki itne me clown ne vahi chaku usko fek kar mara jo sidha aakar samar ki chati par laga, samar ne apni chati se vi chaku nikala aur clown ke hath par vaar kiya aur ek hi vaar me uski sidhe hath ki 4 ungliyan kaat di.
Clown bhyanak dhang se chikha. Dono ki hi halat bahut buri ho chuki thi.
Samar ne clown ke sar par ek punch mara ab ye ladai hatho ki ladai ban chuki thi. Samar gas ke asar ki vajah se unconscious hone laga tha lekin phir bhi vo ladh rha tha.
Clown uspar bhari padh rha tha. Ladte ladte ye road ke kinare aa chuke the. Road ke side me ek bada naala behta tha.
Samar ne ek akhir baar apni puri takat lagai aur clown ka hath pakadkar modh diya aur phir use uthakar usi naale me fek diya. Clown ki ek jordar chikh gunji aur phir har taraf Shanti cha gyi.
Sanjana daudkar Samar ke pass aayi.
Sanjana - Samarrrr..., Uski halat dekhkar vo bahut ghabra gyi thi... Main..Main ambulance bulati hu.. kuch nhi hoga samar tumhe..
Samar - Ahhhhh... Komal...Komal kaisi hai...
Samar ko saans lene me taklif ho rahi thi...uska pura shareer khun se bheega hua tha...
Aur vo behosh hokar gir pada.
Sanjana jaldi se car me jakar Sugandha ko phone karti hai...
Sugandha ek hi ring me phone utha leti hai....
Sugandha - kaha ho tum sab mene jaldi aane ke liye kaha tha naa... mera dil kitna ghabra raha hai.
Sanjana - (rote hue) MaaSamar aur Komal...
To be continued