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Sci-FI [{RAJ - VIRAJ (Hero/Devil - Two In One) (Complete)} {RAJ - VIRAJ --- Two In One (Mystery Of The Snow Mountain Of Himlistan) (Running)}]

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Story ke part 1 & part 2 ki story Puri Tarah alag hai
Ek taraf part 1 earth per ki story hai
To dusri taraf part 2 me other Planet ke Sath Sath supernatural power bhi hai

dono story ke 2-3 character hi same hai Baki sab different Hero & Heroine bhi





RAJ - VIRAJ (Hero/Devil - Two In One) (Complete) PDF





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Pdf dala hai :ecs:
PDF se padhne mein mazza aata hai naa flow tutega naa pages change karne ka naa hi comments hote hai...
Ab aate hai story pe...
:sigh: kaise Maa Baap hai ye apni 2 saal ki beti ko chod ke chale gaye Haridwar uss bete ke liye jo hoga yaa nahi ye bhi pata nahi tha... :sigh: old minded log...

Ek aur baat batao ye Mahashant ko jyun pata hoga ki Raj ke Dada ji ke pass kitni property hai.. :hinthint2: Baba naa hue parttime CA ho gaye wo :lol:

Wapas se inhi Maa Baap pe aate nahi nahi sali puri family hi ajeeb hai...arre Beti ko bhi Haridwar rakh lete wo bhi naa hua...usko de diya uski chachi ko jo intro padhne se lag raha hai koi chant type aurat hai...pakka julam karegi us choti si bacchi pe...
Bahut galat pariwar hai ye...
Chalo abhi tak itni hi padhi aur iss pariwar ki harkat dekh ke raha nahi gaya to comment karne aa gaya....

Har ek story ki pdf banane ka usko padhne mein accha lagta hai comment bhi milte rahenge 2-3update ke ek saath :D

:congrats: for completeing story
Kya Maa hai ye matlab samajh nahi aa raha kuch kya hi bolu iske baare mein....aisi ek aur Maa mili thi ek story mein Arhaan -Mohhabat ya Nafrat.. ussi ki tarah iski bhi halat ho to mazza aayega bas milla mat dene Maa aur bacchon ko...

Ye Baba kon hai Ganja phukke baitha hai kya...sala Maa Baap to hai hi ajeeb par ye to Baba tha naa Mahashant ..isko thodi akal honi chahiye thi naa....3rd child aane wala hai aur Santosh chomu Pinki ko London meeting ke liye leke jaane wala hai...aur ye Baba usko jaan eke liye bhi bol raha hai... :sigh:

Kuch bhi ho Maa Baap nahi sali puri Family ka character hi ajeeb banaya hai...bc ek Maa Baap hai jo bacche karte hai aur fir ek saal tak usko dekhne ke baad 2nd wale ki planning karne lag jaate hai...pahli wali badi ho hi jaayegi...dusra hua to 3rd time ki taiyaari... Aise to sayad janwar bhi naa ho...

Pahle jab padha to laga ki beta beti mein fark maante hai ye family wale...par ab.. chutiya family hai...salo ko Hitler ke concentration camp mein bhej dena chahiye maar do sabko...
:sigh:
Haad hai matlab jis bete ke liye ye dono rukko Haridwar mein apni Beti tak dedi...ab usko hi bhul gaye.. :sigh:

Dada bhi chutiya hi lagta hai par abhi wahi hai jisko yaad hai uske pahle waaris ke baare mein...dekhte hai kya hota hai...

:applause: great updates upto update number 2
Brother story pura read kariye Sare sawalo ke jawab mil jayenge
Otherwise
Mata pita beti ko Chod Kar Haridwar Gaye to bete ke khawais me and beti ko bhi Apne parivar ke paas hi choda to family member unki najar me baroshe ke kayak the

And London gaye the business ke kaam se aur Raj Haridwar se bahar Nahi Ka Sakta tha isliye Kuch samay ke liye use ashram me choda
And mahasant, dadaji aur Gupta uncle tino ek time me best friend the aur dadaji in par bahut bharosa karte the isliye sirf in dono ko hi property ka pata hai dadaji ke alawa
 
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Pdf dala hai :ecs:
PDF se padhne mein mazza aata hai naa flow tutega naa pages change karne ka naa hi comments hote hai...
Ab aate hai story pe...
:sigh: kaise Maa Baap hai ye apni 2 saal ki beti ko chod ke chale gaye Haridwar uss bete ke liye jo hoga yaa nahi ye bhi pata nahi tha... :sigh: old minded log...

Ek aur baat batao ye Mahashant ko jyun pata hoga ki Raj ke Dada ji ke pass kitni property hai.. :hinthint2: Baba naa hue parttime CA ho gaye wo :lol:

Wapas se inhi Maa Baap pe aate nahi nahi sali puri family hi ajeeb hai...arre Beti ko bhi Haridwar rakh lete wo bhi naa hua...usko de diya uski chachi ko jo intro padhne se lag raha hai koi chant type aurat hai...pakka julam karegi us choti si bacchi pe...
Bahut galat pariwar hai ye...
Chalo abhi tak itni hi padhi aur iss pariwar ki harkat dekh ke raha nahi gaya to comment karne aa gaya....

Har ek story ki pdf banane ka usko padhne mein accha lagta hai comment bhi milte rahenge 2-3update ke ek saath :D

:congrats: for completeing story
Kya Maa hai ye matlab samajh nahi aa raha kuch kya hi bolu iske baare mein....aisi ek aur Maa mili thi ek story mein Arhaan -Mohhabat ya Nafrat.. ussi ki tarah iski bhi halat ho to mazza aayega bas milla mat dene Maa aur bacchon ko...

Ye Baba kon hai Ganja phukke baitha hai kya...sala Maa Baap to hai hi ajeeb par ye to Baba tha naa Mahashant ..isko thodi akal honi chahiye thi naa....3rd child aane wala hai aur Santosh chomu Pinki ko London meeting ke liye leke jaane wala hai...aur ye Baba usko jaan eke liye bhi bol raha hai... :sigh:

Kuch bhi ho Maa Baap nahi sali puri Family ka character hi ajeeb banaya hai...bc ek Maa Baap hai jo bacche karte hai aur fir ek saal tak usko dekhne ke baad 2nd wale ki planning karne lag jaate hai...pahli wali badi ho hi jaayegi...dusra hua to 3rd time ki taiyaari... Aise to sayad janwar bhi naa ho...

Pahle jab padha to laga ki beta beti mein fark maante hai ye family wale...par ab.. chutiya family hai...salo ko Hitler ke concentration camp mein bhej dena chahiye maar do sabko...
:sigh:
Haad hai matlab jis bete ke liye ye dono rukko Haridwar mein apni Beti tak dedi...ab usko hi bhul gaye.. :sigh:

Dada bhi chutiya hi lagta hai par abhi wahi hai jisko yaad hai uske pahle waaris ke baare mein...dekhte hai kya hota hai...

:applause: great updates upto update number 2
Story padh Kar aise hi comment jarur kijiega
Next part ke update me jarur in bato Ka dhyan dunga
 

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Brother story pura read kariye Sare sawalo ke jawab mil jayenge
Otherwise
Mata pita beti ko Chod Kar Haridwar Gaye to bete ke khawais me and beti ko bhi Apne parivar ke paas hi choda to family member unki najar me baroshe ke kayak the

And London gaye the business ke kaam se aur Raj Haridwar se bahar Nahi Ka Sakta tha isliye Kuch samay ke liye use ashram me choda
And mahasant, dadaji aur Gupta uncle tino ek time me best friend the aur dadaji in par bahut bharosa karte the isliye sirf in dono ko hi property ka pata hai dadaji ke alawa
Fir bhi yaar chahe kitna bhi bharosha kyun naa ho aise kon chod ke jaata hai aur wo to Raj ko bhul hi gaye abhi padh raha hai apan dekhta hai kaise Maa Baap ko sabak sikhate hai unke bacche
Agar nahi sabak sikhaya hoga to thoda sa bura lagega...
Story mast hai aisi hi stories likhte rahne ka
 

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Fir bhi yaar chahe kitna bhi bharosha kyun naa ho aise kon chod ke jaata hai aur wo to Raj ko bhul hi gaye abhi padh raha hai apan dekhta hai kaise Maa Baap ko sabak sikhate hai unke bacche
Agar nahi sabak sikhaya hoga to thoda sa bura lagega...
Story mast hai aisi hi stories likhte rahne ka
Brother first part me update 6-7 tak Bina jayada soche samne likh diya but Uske baad ke update Ka short note taiyar Kiya tha jis Karan story bich me Kuch din close Kar Diya tha
Otherwise
Abhi second part ke story Ke short note taiyar Kar Raha hu jis Karan update post Nahi Kar Raha hu

2nd part 1-2 November se start Hoga
And usme mai aapki bato Ka dhyan rakhunga
Otherwise
Thanks for supporting
And jaha Tak baroshe ki baat hai ham generally family member per bharosa kar sakte hain Ek limit time tak jis Karan dad ne apne family member per bharosa Kiya
Aur jahan tak baat rahi had Se jyada bharosa ka to vah andh vishwas hota Hai

Bharosa To Har Kisi per Kiya ja sakta hai lekin andh vishwas kabhi bhi kisi per nahin karna chahie it's true

Otherwise

Next part 18-19 update Ka Nahi hoga

Usme earth ke sath sath Ek other planet ka role hai second part minimum 40-50 update ka aayega maximum 60-70 update tak
 
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INTRODUCTION

Himlistan
Ambika-Last Queen of Himlistan
Bhairav(villain)-Husband of Ambika,


Himjam
Abhinav-First King of Himjam
Prithvi Raj-King of Himjam(Dad)
Ruprati- Queen of Himjam (Mom)
Viraj(Hero)-Prince of Himjam
Divya-Princess of Himjam

Viraj Friend's Group
Viraj
Divya
Abhi-Son of Kulguru
Suraj-Son of Senapati

Sona-Daughter of Senapati


Stantam
Bhairav-king of Stantam
Sanjana- Wife of Bhairav
Nisha-Daughter of Bhairav
Deva-Son of Bhairav
Rati-Deva
ki Judva Bahan(2 min
chhoti)


Earth
Raj-1st part Hero
Neha-Wife of Raj(dead)
Aarav-Son of Raj (dead)
Mahi(Heroine)-Daughter of Raj
Ansh-Mahi Ka muh bola pita
Anshu-Mahi Ka muh bola maa

Mahi Friend's Group
Mahi
Ravi
Kabir
Rani

Shikha
 
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Bhai bahut fast fwd mode me chalayi story, aisa laga imp notes padh rha tha story k, subject aur theme mast they first part k, next aur bhi romanchak lag rha h.
 
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