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Story ke part 1 & part 2 ki story Puri Tarah alag hai
Ek taraf part 1 earth per ki story hai
To dusri taraf part 2 me other Planet ke Sath Sath supernatural power bhi hai

dono story ke 2-3 character hi same hai Baki sab different Hero & Heroine bhi





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Ab tak aap logon Ne padha ki ---
S1 & S2 ne vahan liquid taiyar kar liya tha jisse a super human yah super villain banaya ja sake. Aur vah dono us liquid ko lekar vahan se nikal Gaye.

Ab aage---
S1 & S2 is waqt lab se nikalkar city Ki Tarah jaane lage. Main to yah batana hi bhul gaya vah dono paidal Nahin car se ja rahe hai. Jaise hi vah shahar me Aaye road par ek board laga hua tha jis par likha tha
(HARIDWAR 0 KM..)
Yani ki vah dono Haridwar shahar ja rahe the chaliye ab story ke taraf chalte Hain

S1-tumhen pata hai na hamen kahan jaana hai
S2-mujhe pahle Se Hi pata hai aur main usse bhi vahan bula liya hai
S2-tum ek bar us liquid ko nikal Kar Dekh lo vah surakshit hai ya nahin
(Is waqt S2 car chala raha tha)
S1 Ne vah liquid nikal kar Dekha
S1-han sab sahi hai
S2-use surakshit Rakh do abhi tak humne sirf ek hi bottle liquid banai hai

Abhi yah log car chala rahe the ki achanak mausam kharab ho gaya aur thodi dur per kahin bijali giri jisse sadak per bhagdar machal Gaye jis Karan Kai vahan(gariyo) ka santulan kho Gaya jisme se ek truck tha achanak huye is ghatna se S1 & S2 pareshan ho gaye abhi vah kuchh karne hi vale the ki ek truck aakar unki car se takra Gaya jiske liye vah donon taiyar Nahin the. In dono ka itna bhayanak accident hua tha ki unka bachna namumkin lag raha tha. Are in sabhi baton mein to main us liquid ko hi bhul gaya
Abhi ka accident jahan hua tha vah ek bridge tha Jaise hi unke car ka accident hua vah liquid S1 ke hath se chhut gai S2 us liquid ko dobara pakdta usse pahle hi vah liquid bridge Ke niche gir gai

Dusri taraf
Papa jab vah dawa lekar medical store se bahar hai usi samay vahan bhi mausam kharab ho gai aur thodi hi dur per kahin bijali giri ISI chakkar mein papa paidal hi dawa lekar hospital ki taraf daure yah vahi samay tha jab vah accident hua tha abhi papa Kisi bridge Ke neeche Se ja hi rahe the ki dawa ke thaili mein hua liquid aakar giri Jo S1 ke hath chhutti thi. Jab papa hospital pahunche Tu vahan doctor kuchh pareshan lag rahe the
Dr- achcha Hoga aap jaldi aa gaye Bansal Sahab
Laiye vah dawa mujhe dijiye
Itna kakkar doctor ne us thaili se dawa nikali liya lekin yah kya doctor ke haath mein to vah liquid ki botal hai
Doctor ne iis baat ki taraf jyada dhyan nahin diya aur us liquid ko sui mein dalkar maa ke andar inject Kar Diya. Wali liquid Maa Se hote hue direct mujhme inject ho Gaya.
Thodi der ke bad vaha Mera janm hua aur doctor daurkar bahar Aaya
Dr-Mubarak ho Bansal Sahab aap ko beta hua Hai
Papa is baat se itne Khush hue hain ki unhone pure hospital mein mithaai batwa di

Dusri taraf
Jab Dada ko yah pata Chala ki mera janm hone wala hai tab Sara parivar Mumbai se Haridwar ke liye Nikal Gaya
Dada
Sadi
Didi
Chacha, Chachi, Unke bacche
Aur
Bua, Fufa, Unke bacche
Abhi story me inka jyada role Nahi hai
Aaj lagbhag ek sal bad papa mummy didi ko dekh rahe the
Didi is waqt lagbhag 3 sal ki thi unhen to kuchh samajh Nahin a raha tha bus itna pata tha ki unka koi bhai Aaya Hai
Iis waqt sara parivar bahut khush tha kyunki main parivar ka pahla ladka tha
Chacha aur bua ko ek ek betiyan hui thi

Chaliye ab story Ki Taraf chalte Hai
Aaj mera naamkaran hona hai aur mahaSant khud iis din hamare ghar Aaye hai

mahashant ne jab meri kundli banaye To thoda pareshan ho Gaye
M.S-Iis balak ke upar khud Hari Ka hath hai, iske upar Kisi Ka bus Nahin chalega, yah khud apna raja hoga, aaj se iska naam Raj hai
M.S-lekin ek bahut badi pareshani utpann ho gai hai
Dada-kya pareshani hai Guruji
M.S-iske upar sani ka drishti dosh hai
Dada-iska koi upay Hai Guruji
M.S-Iis Ka ek hi upay hai is balak ko 18 varsh Tak Haridwar mein hi rahana padega yadi iis beach vah yahan se bahar jata hai To iski mrutyu bhi ho sakti hai.

Pahle to sab bahut pareshan ho Gaye lekin Soch vichar karne ke baad ek nirnay nikala
Pura parivar wapas Mumbai Jayega
Papa ne didi ko Chacha Ko dekar kaha ki aaj se yah aapki hi beti hai ise bahut pyar karega ham is kabhi kabhi milane Aaya Karenge didi ko to kuchh samajh hi nahin aa raha tha ki yahan per kya ho raha hai unhone to Chacha chachi Ko hi apna Mata pita mana tha
Dekhte hi dekhte kuchh dinon mein pura parivar Mumbai Chala Gaya

Ab Haridwar mein papa Maa aur Mai rah Gaye. Bachpan Se Hi vah donon mujhe bahut pyar karte the saptah me ek bar mahashant bhi hamare ghar aate Hain
Abhi mai sirf 7 mahine ka hi hua tha ki maa dobara pregnant ho gai jab doctor ne maa ka checkup Kiya tab unhone bataya ki maa do mahine se pregnant hai
Papa ne bare mein jab dadaji ko bataya tab vah bahut khush Hun main aur Haridwar ham logon se milane bhi FIR kuchh din Rakh Kar chale Gaye

Kuchh dinon baad papa Maa ki aur care karne lage dheere dheere maa bhi mujh per kam dhyan dene lagi. Jab aapka koi yah baat bata Chali tab unhone mere liye ek Aaya (naukrani) ko Rakh liya. Jo Mera dhyan Sahi tarike Se rakhne lage.

Abhi yah sab chal hi raha tha ki papa ke London Wale business me bahut badi meeting hone Wali thi Jis me Papa aur maa ko bhi shamil hona Jis din yah baat papa ko pata chali use din mahashankh hamare ghar Aaye hue the.

Papa-Guruji mujhe aur Raj ke maa Ko Kuch Dino Ke liye London jana hai mujhe samajh Nahin aa raha hai Ki main kya Karu
MS-ismein sochne ki kya baat hai kuchh dinon ke liye tum Raj Ko hamare aashram mein Rakh do vaha iska Sahi tarike se palan hoga aur vaise bhi iska dhyan rakhne ke liye Aaya(naukrani) to hai hi

Papa ko mahashant ka sujhav ekadam Sahi laga jiske baad unhone mujhe aashram me rakh Diya aur khud maa ke sath London chale gaye
London mein meeting successful rahi aur unhen bahut bada deal Mila jiske Karan unhen kuchh samay Tak London mein Hi rahana pada dekhte hi dekhte unke liye business bahut jaruri ho Gaya aur vah mujhe lagbhag bhul hi gaye the kuchh mahinon baad ma ne judva bacchon ko janm Diya ek ladka aur ek ladki iske bare mein jab unhone Apne Ghar par bataya tab Dada ji Ne unhe badhai Di

main is waqt 1.5 sal ka hun aur mujhe ab sabhi bhul chuke the shivay dadaji ke

Aaj ke liye itna hi
Next update me janenge ki use liquid ka mere upar kya asar hota Hai
Nice update bhai
Raj ko janme hue 7 mahina hua hai aur uska maa firse 2 mahine pregnant hai kuchh jaldi nahin hogaya
 
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Ab tak aap logon Ne padha ki ---
S1 & S2 ne vahan liquid taiyar kar liya tha jisse a super human yah super villain banaya ja sake. Aur vah dono us liquid ko lekar vahan se nikal Gaye.

Ab aage---
S1 & S2 is waqt lab se nikalkar city Ki Tarah jaane lage. Main to yah batana hi bhul gaya vah dono paidal Nahin car se ja rahe hai. Jaise hi vah shahar me Aaye road par ek board laga hua tha jis par likha tha
(HARIDWAR 0 KM..)
Yani ki vah dono Haridwar shahar ja rahe the chaliye ab story ke taraf chalte Hain

S1-tumhen pata hai na hamen kahan jaana hai
S2-mujhe pahle Se Hi pata hai aur main usse bhi vahan bula liya hai
S2-tum ek bar us liquid ko nikal Kar Dekh lo vah surakshit hai ya nahin
(Is waqt S2 car chala raha tha)
S1 Ne vah liquid nikal kar Dekha
S1-han sab sahi hai
S2-use surakshit Rakh do abhi tak humne sirf ek hi bottle liquid banai hai

Abhi yah log car chala rahe the ki achanak mausam kharab ho gaya aur thodi dur per kahin bijali giri jisse sadak per bhagdar machal Gaye jis Karan Kai vahan(gariyo) ka santulan kho Gaya jisme se ek truck tha achanak huye is ghatna se S1 & S2 pareshan ho gaye abhi vah kuchh karne hi vale the ki ek truck aakar unki car se takra Gaya jiske liye vah donon taiyar Nahin the. In dono ka itna bhayanak accident hua tha ki unka bachna namumkin lag raha tha. Are in sabhi baton mein to main us liquid ko hi bhul gaya
Abhi ka accident jahan hua tha vah ek bridge tha Jaise hi unke car ka accident hua vah liquid S1 ke hath se chhut gai S2 us liquid ko dobara pakdta usse pahle hi vah liquid bridge Ke niche gir gai

Dusri taraf
Papa jab vah dawa lekar medical store se bahar hai usi samay vahan bhi mausam kharab ho gai aur thodi hi dur per kahin bijali giri ISI chakkar mein papa paidal hi dawa lekar hospital ki taraf daure yah vahi samay tha jab vah accident hua tha abhi papa Kisi bridge Ke neeche Se ja hi rahe the ki dawa ke thaili mein hua liquid aakar giri Jo S1 ke hath chhutti thi. Jab papa hospital pahunche Tu vahan doctor kuchh pareshan lag rahe the
Dr- achcha Hoga aap jaldi aa gaye Bansal Sahab
Laiye vah dawa mujhe dijiye
Itna kakkar doctor ne us thaili se dawa nikali liya lekin yah kya doctor ke haath mein to vah liquid ki botal hai
Doctor ne iis baat ki taraf jyada dhyan nahin diya aur us liquid ko sui mein dalkar maa ke andar inject Kar Diya. Wali liquid Maa Se hote hue direct mujhme inject ho Gaya.
Thodi der ke bad vaha Mera janm hua aur doctor daurkar bahar Aaya
Dr-Mubarak ho Bansal Sahab aap ko beta hua Hai
Papa is baat se itne Khush hue hain ki unhone pure hospital mein mithaai batwa di

Dusri taraf
Jab Dada ko yah pata Chala ki mera janm hone wala hai tab Sara parivar Mumbai se Haridwar ke liye Nikal Gaya
Dada
Sadi
Didi
Chacha, Chachi, Unke bacche
Aur
Bua, Fufa, Unke bacche
Abhi story me inka jyada role Nahi hai
Aaj lagbhag ek sal bad papa mummy didi ko dekh rahe the
Didi is waqt lagbhag 3 sal ki thi unhen to kuchh samajh Nahin a raha tha bus itna pata tha ki unka koi bhai Aaya Hai
Iis waqt sara parivar bahut khush tha kyunki main parivar ka pahla ladka tha
Chacha aur bua ko ek ek betiyan hui thi

Chaliye ab story Ki Taraf chalte Hai
Aaj mera naamkaran hona hai aur mahaSant khud iis din hamare ghar Aaye hai

mahashant ne jab meri kundli banaye To thoda pareshan ho Gaye
M.S-Iis balak ke upar khud Hari Ka hath hai, iske upar Kisi Ka bus Nahin chalega, yah khud apna raja hoga, aaj se iska naam Raj hai
M.S-lekin ek bahut badi pareshani utpann ho gai hai
Dada-kya pareshani hai Guruji
M.S-iske upar sani ka drishti dosh hai
Dada-iska koi upay Hai Guruji
M.S-Iis Ka ek hi upay hai is balak ko 18 varsh Tak Haridwar mein hi rahana padega yadi iis beach vah yahan se bahar jata hai To iski mrutyu bhi ho sakti hai.

Pahle to sab bahut pareshan ho Gaye lekin Soch vichar karne ke baad ek nirnay nikala
Pura parivar wapas Mumbai Jayega
Papa ne didi ko Chacha Ko dekar kaha ki aaj se yah aapki hi beti hai ise bahut pyar karega ham is kabhi kabhi milane Aaya Karenge didi ko to kuchh samajh hi nahin aa raha tha ki yahan per kya ho raha hai unhone to Chacha chachi Ko hi apna Mata pita mana tha
Dekhte hi dekhte kuchh dinon mein pura parivar Mumbai Chala Gaya

Ab Haridwar mein papa Maa aur Mai rah Gaye. Bachpan Se Hi vah donon mujhe bahut pyar karte the saptah me ek bar mahashant bhi hamare ghar aate Hain
Abhi mai sirf 7 mahine ka hi hua tha ki maa dobara pregnant ho gai jab doctor ne maa ka checkup Kiya tab unhone bataya ki maa do mahine se pregnant hai
Papa ne bare mein jab dadaji ko bataya tab vah bahut khush Hun main aur Haridwar ham logon se milane bhi FIR kuchh din Rakh Kar chale Gaye

Kuchh dinon baad papa Maa ki aur care karne lage dheere dheere maa bhi mujh per kam dhyan dene lagi. Jab aapka koi yah baat bata Chali tab unhone mere liye ek Aaya (naukrani) ko Rakh liya. Jo Mera dhyan Sahi tarike Se rakhne lage.

Abhi yah sab chal hi raha tha ki papa ke London Wale business me bahut badi meeting hone Wali thi Jis me Papa aur maa ko bhi shamil hona Jis din yah baat papa ko pata chali use din mahashankh hamare ghar Aaye hue the.

Papa-Guruji mujhe aur Raj ke maa Ko Kuch Dino Ke liye London jana hai mujhe samajh Nahin aa raha hai Ki main kya Karu
MS-ismein sochne ki kya baat hai kuchh dinon ke liye tum Raj Ko hamare aashram mein Rakh do vaha iska Sahi tarike se palan hoga aur vaise bhi iska dhyan rakhne ke liye Aaya(naukrani) to hai hi

Papa ko mahashant ka sujhav ekadam Sahi laga jiske baad unhone mujhe aashram me rakh Diya aur khud maa ke sath London chale gaye
London mein meeting successful rahi aur unhen bahut bada deal Mila jiske Karan unhen kuchh samay Tak London mein Hi rahana pada dekhte hi dekhte unke liye business bahut jaruri ho Gaya aur vah mujhe lagbhag bhul hi gaye the kuchh mahinon baad ma ne judva bacchon ko janm Diya ek ladka aur ek ladki iske bare mein jab unhone Apne Ghar par bataya tab Dada ji Ne unhe badhai Di

main is waqt 1.5 sal ka hun aur mujhe ab sabhi bhul chuke the shivay dadaji ke

Aaj ke liye itna hi
Next update me janenge ki use liquid ka mere upar kya asar hota Hai
Update 2 posted
 

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Ab tak aap logon Ne padha ki ---
S1 & S2 ne vahan liquid taiyar kar liya tha jisse a super human yah super villain banaya ja sake. Aur vah dono us liquid ko lekar vahan se nikal Gaye.

Ab aage---
S1 & S2 is waqt lab se nikalkar city Ki Tarah jaane lage. Main to yah batana hi bhul gaya vah dono paidal Nahin car se ja rahe hai. Jaise hi vah shahar me Aaye road par ek board laga hua tha jis par likha tha
(HARIDWAR 0 KM..)
Yani ki vah dono Haridwar shahar ja rahe the chaliye ab story ke taraf chalte Hain

S1-tumhen pata hai na hamen kahan jaana hai
S2-mujhe pahle Se Hi pata hai aur main usse bhi vahan bula liya hai
S2-tum ek bar us liquid ko nikal Kar Dekh lo vah surakshit hai ya nahin
(Is waqt S2 car chala raha tha)
S1 Ne vah liquid nikal kar Dekha
S1-han sab sahi hai
S2-use surakshit Rakh do abhi tak humne sirf ek hi bottle liquid banai hai

Abhi yah log car chala rahe the ki achanak mausam kharab ho gaya aur thodi dur per kahin bijali giri jisse sadak per bhagdar machal Gaye jis Karan Kai vahan(gariyo) ka santulan kho Gaya jisme se ek truck tha achanak huye is ghatna se S1 & S2 pareshan ho gaye abhi vah kuchh karne hi vale the ki ek truck aakar unki car se takra Gaya jiske liye vah donon taiyar Nahin the. In dono ka itna bhayanak accident hua tha ki unka bachna namumkin lag raha tha. Are in sabhi baton mein to main us liquid ko hi bhul gaya
Abhi ka accident jahan hua tha vah ek bridge tha Jaise hi unke car ka accident hua vah liquid S1 ke hath se chhut gai S2 us liquid ko dobara pakdta usse pahle hi vah liquid bridge Ke niche gir gai

Dusri taraf
Papa jab vah dawa lekar medical store se bahar hai usi samay vahan bhi mausam kharab ho gai aur thodi hi dur per kahin bijali giri ISI chakkar mein papa paidal hi dawa lekar hospital ki taraf daure yah vahi samay tha jab vah accident hua tha abhi papa Kisi bridge Ke neeche Se ja hi rahe the ki dawa ke thaili mein hua liquid aakar giri Jo S1 ke hath chhutti thi. Jab papa hospital pahunche Tu vahan doctor kuchh pareshan lag rahe the
Dr- achcha Hoga aap jaldi aa gaye Bansal Sahab
Laiye vah dawa mujhe dijiye
Itna kakkar doctor ne us thaili se dawa nikali liya lekin yah kya doctor ke haath mein to vah liquid ki botal hai
Doctor ne iis baat ki taraf jyada dhyan nahin diya aur us liquid ko sui mein dalkar maa ke andar inject Kar Diya. Wali liquid Maa Se hote hue direct mujhme inject ho Gaya.
Thodi der ke bad vaha Mera janm hua aur doctor daurkar bahar Aaya
Dr-Mubarak ho Bansal Sahab aap ko beta hua Hai
Papa is baat se itne Khush hue hain ki unhone pure hospital mein mithaai batwa di

Dusri taraf
Jab Dada ko yah pata Chala ki mera janm hone wala hai tab Sara parivar Mumbai se Haridwar ke liye Nikal Gaya
Dada
Sadi
Didi
Chacha, Chachi, Unke bacche
Aur
Bua, Fufa, Unke bacche
Abhi story me inka jyada role Nahi hai
Aaj lagbhag ek sal bad papa mummy didi ko dekh rahe the
Didi is waqt lagbhag 3 sal ki thi unhen to kuchh samajh Nahin a raha tha bus itna pata tha ki unka koi bhai Aaya Hai
Iis waqt sara parivar bahut khush tha kyunki main parivar ka pahla ladka tha
Chacha aur bua ko ek ek betiyan hui thi

Chaliye ab story Ki Taraf chalte Hai
Aaj mera naamkaran hona hai aur mahaSant khud iis din hamare ghar Aaye hai

mahashant ne jab meri kundli banaye To thoda pareshan ho Gaye
M.S-Iis balak ke upar khud Hari Ka hath hai, iske upar Kisi Ka bus Nahin chalega, yah khud apna raja hoga, aaj se iska naam Raj hai
M.S-lekin ek bahut badi pareshani utpann ho gai hai
Dada-kya pareshani hai Guruji
M.S-iske upar sani ka drishti dosh hai
Dada-iska koi upay Hai Guruji
M.S-Iis Ka ek hi upay hai is balak ko 18 varsh Tak Haridwar mein hi rahana padega yadi iis beach vah yahan se bahar jata hai To iski mrutyu bhi ho sakti hai.

Pahle to sab bahut pareshan ho Gaye lekin Soch vichar karne ke baad ek nirnay nikala
Pura parivar wapas Mumbai Jayega
Papa ne didi ko Chacha Ko dekar kaha ki aaj se yah aapki hi beti hai ise bahut pyar karega ham is kabhi kabhi milane Aaya Karenge didi ko to kuchh samajh hi nahin aa raha tha ki yahan per kya ho raha hai unhone to Chacha chachi Ko hi apna Mata pita mana tha
Dekhte hi dekhte kuchh dinon mein pura parivar Mumbai Chala Gaya

Ab Haridwar mein papa Maa aur Mai rah Gaye. Bachpan Se Hi vah donon mujhe bahut pyar karte the saptah me ek bar mahashant bhi hamare ghar aate Hain
Abhi mai sirf 1 sal ka hi hua tha ki maa dobara pregnant ho gai jab doctor ne maa ka checkup Kiya tab unhone bataya ki maa pregnant hai
Papa ne iis bare mein jab dadaji ko bataya tab vah bahut khush Hun main aur Haridwar ham logon se milane bhi FIR kuchh din Rakh Kar chale Gaye

Kuchh dinon baad papa Maa ki aur care karne lage dheere dheere maa bhi mujh per kam dhyan dene lagi. Jab aapka koi yah baat bata Chali tab unhone mere liye ek Aaya (naukrani) ko Rakh liya. Jo Mera dhyan Sahi tarike Se rakhne lage.

Abhi yah sab chal hi raha tha ki papa ke London Wale business me bahut badi meeting hone Wali thi Jis me Papa aur maa ko bhi shamil hona Jis din yah baat papa ko pata chali use din mahashankh hamare ghar Aaye hue the.

Papa-Guruji mujhe aur Raj ke maa Ko Kuch Dino Ke liye London jana hai mujhe samajh Nahin aa raha hai Ki main kya Karu
MS-ismein sochne ki kya baat hai kuchh dinon ke liye tum Raj Ko hamare aashram mein Rakh do vaha iska Sahi tarike se palan hoga aur vaise bhi iska dhyan rakhne ke liye Aaya(naukrani) to hai hi

Papa ko mahashant ka sujhav ekadam Sahi laga jiske baad unhone mujhe aashram me rakh Diya aur khud maa ke sath London chale gaye
London mein meeting successful rahi aur unhen bahut bada deal Mila jiske Karan unhen kuchh samay Tak London mein Hi rahana pada dekhte hi dekhte unke liye business bahut jaruri ho Gaya aur vah mujhe lagbhag bhul hi gaye the kuchh mahinon baad ma ne judva bacchon ko janm Diya ek ladka aur ek ladki iske bare mein jab unhone Apne Ghar par bataya tab Dada ji Ne unhe badhai Di

main is waqt 2 sal ka hun aur mujhe ab sabhi bhul chuke the shivay dadaji ke

Aaj ke liye itna hi
Next update me janenge ki use liquid ka mere upar kya asar hota Hai
Acha scene darshya accident ka aur fir liquid ka hero mein inject hona aur uska janam,
Lekin uski behen ke sath bura kar rahe they ye log aur ab hero ko bhi bhul rahe aur iska saaf matlab hai hero mein nafrat janam legi jo in sab ke liye achi nahi hogi.

Brilliant update :claps:
 

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Acha scene darshya accident ka aur fir liquid ka hero mein inject hona aur uska janam,
Lekin uski behen ke sath bura kar rahe they ye log aur ab hero ko bhi bhul rahe aur iska saaf matlab hai hero mein nafrat janam legi jo in sab ke liye achi nahi hogi.

Brilliant update :claps:
Wo liquid human ke Soch par kaam Karti hai Soch good to super human Soch bad to super villain
Bahut jald villain Ka bhi jikr story me Hoga

Otherwise
Thanks brother
 

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UPDATE 3
Ab tak Apne padha ki---

Papa aur maa London chale gaye hain jahan unhen judva baccha hota Hai.
Sath mein yah bhi Jana ki ab sab log mujhe bhul chuke hain shivay Dada ji ke

Ab aage---
Aashram me mahasant mujhe Apne bacche Ki Taraf pyar karte hai.
Jab papa London gaye the to us waqt mei 1.5 sal Ka tha. Mahine me ek bar dadaji mujhse milane aate hai.
Jab mai 5 sal ka hua tabi mahasant Ne meri shiksha shuru kar diya ab mere dimag ka Vikas bhi hone laga tha.
Mere man me rah-rah kar ek hi prashn aata tha
Jab main 6 sal Ka hua tab main aam bacchon se jyada hoshiyar ho gaya tha


Ek bar dada ji mujhse Milne aaye

Mai-dadaji mere sabhi dost ke mummy papa hai mere mummy papa kahan hai
Dada ji ne jab yah baat suni to vah thode pareshan ho Gaya.

Dada-beta vah log kahin gaye hue isliye milane Nahin aa paate

Mai-lekin unhe mujhse milane aana chahie na

Dada-abhi tum yah sab baat Nahin samjhoge jab tum bade ho jaaoge tab main tumhen khud sab bata dunga
Aur iske baad is bare me koi bhi baat nahin hui.


Chaliye ab thodi apni shiksha per chalte Hain

Jab main 5 saal ka hua tab Se mai mahasant ko Guruji bolna shuru kar diya.
Guru ji Ne 5 sal ki avastha se mujhe dhyan lagana vyayam karna aur bhi bahut si baaton Ki shiksha dena shuru karne lage
Haridwar Ka sabse mashhur vidyalay hamare aashram mein Hi hai.
Yahan per admission lene ke liye bacchon ko exam pass karna padta hai.
Jab mai 6 sal ka hua tab guru ji Ne Mera admission usi vidyalay mein kaarvaya chauki mein aashram mein rahata tha isliye bahut Sare shikshak mujhe jante the.
Main pratidin subah 3 baje uthta hu aur 3:15 se 4:30 tak dhyan karta Hu Uske bad 2 ghante vyayam . FIR taiyar hokar 7:30 main vidyalay jata hu
Vidyalay se sham ko 3 baje chhutti hoti hai Uske bad fresh hokar Guruji ke pass jata hu Jo mujhe vedo aur purano Ki shiksha dete hai.

Guruji ka kahana hai ki adhunik jamane mein jitne bhi aavishkar hue hain yah jitni bhi bhasha bani hai un sabhi ka strot hamare ved aur puran Hain.
Dekhte hi dekhte main 10 sal Ka ho Gaya is bich maine ved aur puran Ki shiksha Puri kar li.

Jab mein 6 sal Ka tha tabhi se mujhe Apne andar bahut sari Shakti mahsus hoti thi
Kabhi Kabhi To aisa lagta tha ki koi mere andar chhupa hai vah bahar aana Chahta Hai lekin mujhe yah samajh Nahin aa raha tha ki yah mere sath kyon ho Raha Hai.

Jab main yah baat guru ji ko bataya tab Guruji ne mujhe bataya ki ya dhyan karne ka asar Hai.

(Kab Tak main bolata rahunga ab thodi writer ki bhi sun lete hain)
Writer-jab vah liquid Raj ke body mein Gaya To Raj iske liye Puri Tarah Se taiyar nahin tha
Jis Karan use liquid dheere dheere apna asar dikhane lagi.
Iske prabhav se Kabhi Kabhi Raj Ko gussa bhi aata jab Raj 10 sal ka hua tab aadhe liquid ko Raj ka sharir absorb (apna liya) kar liya lekin liquid ke Bache hue bhag Ko Nahin apna saka
Jis Karan raj par kabhi kabhi liquid ka asar ho jata tha. Jiske bare mein raj ko bhi pata nahin tha lekin aap bahut jald yah samasya khatm hone Wali hai.
Vahin dusri Taraf villain bhi Apne shaktiyon ko pahchanne wala tha)


Ab wapas meri Taraf aate Hain

Ab mei 10 sal Ka ho gaya hu mujhe ab Har hal mein Apne parivar ke bare mein Janna tha. Is bar jab dada ji aaye tab Maine unse poochh liya

Mai-Dada ji aaj aapko hamare parivar ke bare mein batana Hi padega

Dada-beta Maine kitni baar kaha ki abhi Sahi samay Nahin aaya hai

Mai-nahin mujhe is bar Janna hi hai Ki main kaun hun
Iske bad Dada ji Ne mujhe ek ek kar sabhi bate batae kaise Didi ke janm ke bad Papa aur maa mere janm ke liye Haridwar Aaye the.
Vah log mujhse Kitna pyar karte the aur uske bad ek baar London ka jahan unhe judva bacche hue.
Dada ji Ne mujhe yah bhi bataya ki vah log Kabhi America Se wapas Nahin Hai. Iske baad dada ji chale gaye


Vahi sacchai pata chalne ke bad mujhe bahut gussa aa raha tha.
Mera Man kah Raha tha ki abhi vahan jakar unse poochho ki unhone aisa kyon Kiya.
Mera gussa is kadar badh Gaya Ki main vahi behosh hokar gir Gaya iis samay sham ke 8:00 baj rahe the.
Jab mujhe hosh aaya to subah ho chuki thi.

Aaj ke liye itna hi
Next update me villain ki entry hogi and Neha Ka bhi jikr Hoga



THANKS
 
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UPDATE 3
Ab tak Apne padha ki---

Papa aur maa London chale gaye hain jahan unhen judva baccha hota Hai.
Sath mein yah bhi Jana ki ab sab log mujhe bhul chuke hain shivay Dada ji ke

Ab aage---
Aashram me mahasant mujhe Apne bacche Ki Taraf pyar karte hai.
Jab papa London gaye the to us waqt mei 1.5 sal Ka tha. Mahine me ek bar dadaji mujhse milane aate hai.
Jab mai 5 sal ka hua tabi mahasant Ne meri shiksha shuru kar diya ab mere dimag ka Vikas bhi hone laga tha.
Mere man me rah-rah kar ek hi prashn aata tha
Jab main 6 sal Ka hua tab main aam bacchon se jyada hoshiyar ho gaya tha


Ek bar dada ji mujhse Milne aaye

Mai-dadaji mere sabhi dost ke mummy papa hai mere mummy papa kahan hai
Dada ji ne jab yah baat suni to vah thode pareshan ho Gaya.

Dada-beta vah log kahin gaye hue isliye milane Nahin aa paate

Mai-lekin unhe mujhse milane aana chahie na

Dada-abhi tum yah sab baat Nahin samjhoge jab tum bade ho jaaoge tab main tumhen khud sab bata dunga
Aur iske baad is bare me koi bhi baat nahin hui.


Chaliye ab thodi apni shiksha per chalte Hain

Jab main 5 saal ka hua tab Se mai mahasant ko Guruji bolna shuru kar diya.
Guru ji Ne 5 sal ki avastha se mujhe dhyan lagana vyayam karna aur bhi bahut si baaton Ki shiksha dena shuru karne lage
Haridwar Ka sabse mashhur vidyalay hamare aashram mein Hi hai.
Yahan per admission lene ke liye bacchon ko exam pass karna padta hai.
Jab mai 6 sal ka hua tab guru ji Ne Mera admission usi vidyalay mein kaarvaya chauki mein aashram mein rahata tha isliye bahut Sare shikshak mujhe jante the.
Main pratidin subah 3 baje uthta hu aur 3:15 se 4:30 tak dhyan karta Hu Uske bad 2 ghante vyayam . FIR taiyar hokar 7:30 main vidyalay jata hu
Vidyalay se sham ko 3 baje chhutti hoti hai Uske bad fresh hokar Guruji ke pass jata hu Jo mujhe vedo aur purano Ki shiksha dete hai.

Guruji ka kahana hai ki adhunik jamane mein jitne bhi aavishkar hue hain yah jitni bhi bhasha bani hai un sabhi ka strot hamare ved aur puran Hain.
Dekhte hi dekhte main 10 sal Ka ho Gaya is bich maine ved aur puran Ki shiksha Puri kar li.

Jab mein 6 sal Ka tha tabhi se mujhe Apne andar bahut sari Shakti mahsus hoti thi
Kabhi Kabhi To aisa lagta tha ki koi mere andar chhupa hai vah bahar aana Chahta Hai lekin mujhe yah samajh Nahin aa raha tha ki yah mere sath kyon ho Raha Hai.

Jab main yah baat guru ji ko bataya tab Guruji ne mujhe bataya ki ya dhyan karne ka asar Hai.

(Kab Tak main bolata rahunga ab thodi writer ki bhi sun lete hain)
Writer-jab vah liquid Raj ke body mein Gaya To Raj iske liye Puri Tarah Se taiyar nahin tha
Jis Karan use liquid dheere dheere apna asar dikhane lagi.
Iske prabhav se Kabhi Kabhi Raj Ko gussa bhi aata jab Raj 10 sal ka hua tab aadhe liquid ko Raj ka sharir absorb (apna liya) kar liya lekin liquid ke Bache hue bhag Ko Nahin apna saka
Jis Karan raj par kabhi kabhi liquid ka asar ho jata tha. Jiske bare mein raj ko bhi pata nahin tha lekin aap bahut jald yah samasya khatm hone Wali hai.
Vahin dusri Taraf villain bhi Apne shaktiyon ko pahchanne wala tha)


Ab wapas meri Taraf aate Hain

Ab mei 10 sal Ka ho gaya hu mujhe ab Har hal mein Apne parivar ke bare mein Janna tha. Is bar jab dada ji aaye tab Maine unse poochh liya

Mai-Dada ji aaj aapko hamare parivar ke bare mein batana Hi padega

Dada-beta Maine kitni baar kaha ki abhi Sahi samay Nahin aaya hai

Mai-nahin mujhe is bar Janna hi hai Ki main kaun hun
Iske bad Dada ji Ne mujhe ek ek kar sabhi bate batae kaise Didi ke janm ke bad Papa aur maa mere janm ke liye Haridwar Aaye the.
Vah log mujhse Kitna pyar karte the aur uske bad ek baar America ka jahan unhe judva bacche hue.
Dada ji Ne mujhe yah bhi bataya ki vah log Kabhi America Se wapas Nahin Hai. Iske baad dada ji chale gaye


Vahi sacchai pata chalne ke bad mujhe bahut gussa aa raha tha.
Mera Man kah Raha tha ki abhi vahan jakar unse poochho ki unhone aisa kyon Kiya.
Mera gussa is kadar badh Gaya Ki main vahi behosh hokar gir Gaya iis samay sham ke 8:00 baj rahe the.
Jab mujhe hosh aaya to subah ho chuki thi.

Aaj ke liye itna hi
Next update me villain ki entry hogi and Neha Ka bhi jikr Hoga



THANKS
Update posted
 

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UPDATE 3
Ab tak Apne padha ki---

Papa aur maa London chale gaye hain jahan unhen judva baccha hota Hai.
Sath mein yah bhi Jana ki ab sab log mujhe bhul chuke hain shivay Dada ji ke

Ab aage---
Aashram me mahasant mujhe Apne bacche Ki Taraf pyar karte hai.
Jab papa London gaye the to us waqt mei 1.5 sal Ka tha. Mahine me ek bar dadaji mujhse milane aate hai.
Jab mai 5 sal ka hua tabi mahasant Ne meri shiksha shuru kar diya ab mere dimag ka Vikas bhi hone laga tha.
Mere man me rah-rah kar ek hi prashn aata tha
Jab main 6 sal Ka hua tab main aam bacchon se jyada hoshiyar ho gaya tha


Ek bar dada ji mujhse Milne aaye

Mai-dadaji mere sabhi dost ke mummy papa hai mere mummy papa kahan hai
Dada ji ne jab yah baat suni to vah thode pareshan ho Gaya.

Dada-beta vah log kahin gaye hue isliye milane Nahin aa paate

Mai-lekin unhe mujhse milane aana chahie na

Dada-abhi tum yah sab baat Nahin samjhoge jab tum bade ho jaaoge tab main tumhen khud sab bata dunga
Aur iske baad is bare me koi bhi baat nahin hui.


Chaliye ab thodi apni shiksha per chalte Hain

Jab main 5 saal ka hua tab Se mai mahasant ko Guruji bolna shuru kar diya.
Guru ji Ne 5 sal ki avastha se mujhe dhyan lagana vyayam karna aur bhi bahut si baaton Ki shiksha dena shuru karne lage
Haridwar Ka sabse mashhur vidyalay hamare aashram mein Hi hai.
Yahan per admission lene ke liye bacchon ko exam pass karna padta hai.
Jab mai 6 sal ka hua tab guru ji Ne Mera admission usi vidyalay mein kaarvaya chauki mein aashram mein rahata tha isliye bahut Sare shikshak mujhe jante the.
Main pratidin subah 3 baje uthta hu aur 3:15 se 4:30 tak dhyan karta Hu Uske bad 2 ghante vyayam . FIR taiyar hokar 7:30 main vidyalay jata hu
Vidyalay se sham ko 3 baje chhutti hoti hai Uske bad fresh hokar Guruji ke pass jata hu Jo mujhe vedo aur purano Ki shiksha dete hai.

Guruji ka kahana hai ki adhunik jamane mein jitne bhi aavishkar hue hain yah jitni bhi bhasha bani hai un sabhi ka strot hamare ved aur puran Hain.
Dekhte hi dekhte main 10 sal Ka ho Gaya is bich maine ved aur puran Ki shiksha Puri kar li.

Jab mein 6 sal Ka tha tabhi se mujhe Apne andar bahut sari Shakti mahsus hoti thi
Kabhi Kabhi To aisa lagta tha ki koi mere andar chhupa hai vah bahar aana Chahta Hai lekin mujhe yah samajh Nahin aa raha tha ki yah mere sath kyon ho Raha Hai.

Jab main yah baat guru ji ko bataya tab Guruji ne mujhe bataya ki ya dhyan karne ka asar Hai.

(Kab Tak main bolata rahunga ab thodi writer ki bhi sun lete hain)
Writer-jab vah liquid Raj ke body mein Gaya To Raj iske liye Puri Tarah Se taiyar nahin tha
Jis Karan use liquid dheere dheere apna asar dikhane lagi.
Iske prabhav se Kabhi Kabhi Raj Ko gussa bhi aata jab Raj 10 sal ka hua tab aadhe liquid ko Raj ka sharir absorb (apna liya) kar liya lekin liquid ke Bache hue bhag Ko Nahin apna saka
Jis Karan raj par kabhi kabhi liquid ka asar ho jata tha. Jiske bare mein raj ko bhi pata nahin tha lekin aap bahut jald yah samasya khatm hone Wali hai.
Vahin dusri Taraf villain bhi Apne shaktiyon ko pahchanne wala tha)


Ab wapas meri Taraf aate Hain

Ab mei 10 sal Ka ho gaya hu mujhe ab Har hal mein Apne parivar ke bare mein Janna tha. Is bar jab dada ji aaye tab Maine unse poochh liya

Mai-Dada ji aaj aapko hamare parivar ke bare mein batana Hi padega

Dada-beta Maine kitni baar kaha ki abhi Sahi samay Nahin aaya hai

Mai-nahin mujhe is bar Janna hi hai Ki main kaun hun
Iske bad Dada ji Ne mujhe ek ek kar sabhi bate batae kaise Didi ke janm ke bad Papa aur maa mere janm ke liye Haridwar Aaye the.
Vah log mujhse Kitna pyar karte the aur uske bad ek baar America ka jahan unhe judva bacche hue.
Dada ji Ne mujhe yah bhi bataya ki vah log Kabhi America Se wapas Nahin Hai. Iske baad dada ji chale gaye


Vahi sacchai pata chalne ke bad mujhe bahut gussa aa raha tha.
Mera Man kah Raha tha ki abhi vahan jakar unse poochho ki unhone aisa kyon Kiya.
Mera gussa is kadar badh Gaya Ki main vahi behosh hokar gir Gaya iis samay sham ke 8:00 baj rahe the.
Jab mujhe hosh aaya to subah ho chuki thi.

Aaj ke liye itna hi
Next update me villain ki entry hogi and Neha Ka bhi jikr Hoga



THANKS
Brilliant update :Dun:
Lekin ek taraf story thoda modern tarike se chal rahi hai matlab liquid america, cars hospitals aur doosri taraf vidyalaya aa raha to wo thoda Awkward lagta hai :D
I hope you understand
 
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