Update 11 - Losing the V (1)
Aryan ka physical transformation ab sirf dikhawa nahi raha, usmein ab strength hai jo dikhta hai Rohan ke saath fighi scean mein. Rohan wala scene to kamaal ka tha. Wo poora sequence, jahan Aryan pehle shaant rehta hai, phir Naina ke liye trigger hota hai aur phir Rohan ko dhun deta hai, wo emotion itna raw aur santoshjanak tha.
Writing commendable hai, fight scene over exaggerate nahi karti.
Aryan ka wo dialogue “Main ek manhoos hoon” aur phir Naina ko apni zindagi ka sabse keemti rishta batana, usne character ko ek nayi gehraai de di. Wo ab sirf peedit nahi raha, balki ek aisa ladka ban gaya hai jiske andar bahut dino se daba hua gussa aur protectiveness foot pada.
Naina ki possessiveness bhi is baar aur jayada aur samajh aane wali lagi. Wo Myra ko dekhkar uska gussa, class mein Aryan ki jaangh par haath rakhna ye sab itne natural tarike se likha gaya ki uski umar aur feelings bilkul real lag rahi hain.
Wo masoomiyat aur possessiveness ka mishran use bahut complex bana raha hai, achcha laga.
Myra ka character is update mein thoda peeche raha, lekin uski hichkichahat aur Aryan ko dekhte hi blush karna bahut pyara laga. Wo ab sirf perfect rich girl nahi lag rahi, balki ek aisi ladki lag rahi hai jo sach mein pehli baar kisi se pyar kar rahi hai aur nahi jaanti ki aage kya karna hai.
Lekin asli game to Sanya khelti hai. Uska revenge plan itna calculated tha ki LSD jaise chize bilkul unexpected tha, aur jis tarah usne sab kuch plan kiya canteen wale ko paise dena, emergency exit pe car park karna, Aryan ko Naina bankar le jana, yaha tak ki Naina ko fake message bhejna, ye sab itna perfectly executed laga, nicely written.
Cliffhanger bhi accha hai.
Aryan ab LSD ke nashe mein Sanya ke saath hai, Naina akeli ghar ja rahi hai, aur Myra-Meera ko Naina ne tagda sa taana maar kar gaya hai.
Kul mila kar ye update action, suspense, revenge sab aa gaya hai. Lekhan bahut tight tha, aur har scene ka impact pada.